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His two roommates are on a week-long school trip and his brother has been at a festival for two days.\n\nSilence.\n\nThe 27-year-old stallion hasn?t had this much peace and quiet in a year, usually there is chaos in his house. He yawns again on the sofa. The TV is on, but only so that the silence is not too much for him.\n\nJust before he falls asleep, his front doorbell rings.\n\n\"Wait a minute!\" he shouts and quickly puts on a pair of pants and slips into a T shirt that is much too big.\n\nThe doorbell rings again.\n\n\"Yaaaaa I?m coming!\" the second ringing has annoyed him and he slowly walks to the door.\n\nA third ring as he arrives at the door.\n\nHe opens his front door annoyed by the constant ringing and harshly says \"Yes?\"\n\nSurprised, he looks left and right, no one to be seen, then looks down.\n\nThe girl in front of the door holds on to the door frame and gasps, startled she looks up as the door opens.\n\nIn front of him is a fox girl, she has blonde hair, blue eyes and a summer dress on. She is not even half his height. \n\n\"Good morning...\" she barely gets out before her knees buckle and she topples over in Dylan?s direction.\n\nHe catches her and asks, startled, \"Are you okay?\" She was completely soaked through with sweat.\n\nThe girl says nothing her eyes half open, breathing heavily. Dylan lifts her up and carries her into the house, lays her on the couch and disappears into the kitchen to get some water.\n\nThe air conditioner blows cool air toward the couch and with it onto the sweaty girl.\n\nAs Dylan walks back to the couch with a bottle of water in his hand he sees her still lying there, but she wasn?t breathing as hard. He supported her head and back with his big hand and put the bottle to her lips. She gratefully drank half the bottle. Then she put Dylan back on the pillow and looked with a worried look at his little visitor.\n\n\"Well, I hope she gets better soon,\" he thought and sat down at the other end of the couch and continued watching TV. Of course he kept checking to see if the girl was okay, she was apparently asleep. After a while one of her legs slipped off the huge couch.\n\nDylan turned his head to check on her and immediately turned it away again.\n\nHer dress had slid up and he could see that she was not wearing any underwear and the white summer dress showed him even more. In his head it suddenly went haywire, he almost couldn?t concentrate on the TV anymore.\n\nAgain, and again his eyes flitted to her. Her face was cute she had a striking fur pattern, and the blonde hair framed it perfectly. The dress had become almost saggy at the rib cage and the cold air from the air conditioner had formed two-pointed protruding nipples. His gaze slid further down, and he could see her slit well between her legs. He breathed deeply and felt the pants tighten.\n\n\"Whew!\" he thought and got up and went to the kitchen to get rid of the thoughts. \n\nAfter a while something stirred on the couch and he looked out of the kitchen into the living room, there appeared the vixen?s ears.\n\n\"Good morning.\" he said warmly, glad that she was awake again.\n\n\"Gu...\" she asked, \"Where am I?\" she was close to panic.\n\nDylan went into the living room and stopped in the doorway to tell her what had happened.\n\nShe still looked at him in shock, it was the first time she had seen a horse up close and such a huge one at that.\n\nTo calm her down he said, \"My name is Dylan and yours?\"\n\n\"Lisa,\" she brought out shyly.\n\n\"Hi, nice to meet you.\" he said and smiled.\n\nShe looked at him sceptically and mumbled \"Hi.\"\n\nSuddenly, there was a thumping at the door and a dark male voice called out \"Hello, anyone home?\" \n\nPanicked, Lisa jumped off the couch and hid behind it. Dylan went to the door, and she looked at him shaking her head and pleading. \n\nHe opened it and in front of him stood an unkempt, foul-smelling, scowling big Doberman with a cigar in his snout, who tried to push his way into the house when the door opened.\n\nBut he bounced off Dylan and looked confusedly at his chest and then up.\n\n\"Can I help you?\" said the stallion indignantly, his muscles quivering with withheld anger.\n\n\"Um yeah.\" the Doberman now said in his rumbling tone again \"have you seen a fox girl?\"\n\nDylan looked at him playfully confused \"there?s a few running around here.\" And pointed into the settlement. \"My neighbours daughter is one and he pointed in the direction of Crossroad \"And there?s a fox family living at the crossroads too.\"\n\n\"No.\" he said barking \"No girl that lives here.\"\n\n\"Okay... What does it look like?\" he asked innocently.\n\n\"What a fox just looks like, with blond hair!\" the male growled annoyed.\n\nDylan was irritated by his manner, and he said \"And how exactly? How big, what is she wearing, are there any abnormalities?\" his tone told the Doberman not to get the hang of it.\n\nHe showed the approximate size \"What she?s wearing no idea, that brat took off.\"\n\n\"Aha understandable\" said Dylan looking at the now boiling male.\n\n\"What do you mean?\" he replied heatedly.\n\n\"Nothing! How can I reach her when I see her?\" said Dylan coolly\n\n\"My name is Louis, and this is my number.\" He handed Dylan a dirty piece of paper.\n\n\"Alright I?ll be in touch\" In one fluid motion he turned and crashed the door shut and grinned.\n\nLouis jerked back missing the door by a hair.\n\nDylan walked back to the couch and said, \"I think you need to explain something to me.\" and carelessly tossing the note into the wastebasket, walked past the couch into the kitchen.\n\nWhen he returned with two bowls Lisa stood in front of the couch uncertainty in her eyes.\n\nDylan put a bowl in her hand and said, \"Come sit down and eat.\"\n\nLisa looked at him confused, then at the bowl, then back at him. The bowl was full of ice cream with a spoon in it.\n\nHe grinned \"What?s wrong?\" put her legs on the ottoman and started eating the ice cream.\n\nShe sat down unsteadily in the far corner of the sofa and carefully tested the ice cream. \"Yum!\" she gasped, embarrassed.\n\nDylan laughed, \"I?m glad. It?s from my store, I make new ice cream every day.\" he said proudly.\n\nThen they both fell silent. Lisa enjoyed the cool ice cream and lounged on the sofa.\n\nAfter they were both done Dylan looked over at her a little more seriously \"Okay now it?s your turn to explain to me why you?re running around outside in this heat and why this guy is looking for you!\"\n\nLisa cringed and looked to the ground \"Well he?s my stepdad and I ran away.\"\n\n\"And why did you run away?\" asked Dylan thoughtfully.\n\n\"Because he?s an asshole.\" she said.\n\nDylan laughed \"Yeah I noticed that\".\n\nThey both laughed.\n\n\"But why did you run away now?\" he probed further.\n\n\"Well we are here visiting, so a little further away. With his family and he?s a drunk. He beat me up yesterday because I wouldn?t get him a beer. It wasn?t the first time,\" she sobbed through her tears, showing him several bruises.\n\nDylan felt sorry and took her in his arms.\n\nWhen she stopped sobbing, he let go of her.\n\n\"Okay you can stay here for now.\" he said. \n\nShe beamed briefly and then looked at him uncertainly.\n\n\"And we?ll figure out together what to do next.\" he continued. She nodded.\n\n\"But for now.\" he pinched his nose.\n\n\"You go to the bathroom! You smell\" he said laughing and continued \"Upstairs are the rooms of my roommates, you?ll find something to wear, and I?ll put your dress in the washing machine\" he said. \n\nShe nodded again and went out the stairs.\n\nDylan groaned \"Oh man what have I gotten myself into again.\"\n\nLisa rummaged through the closets and found that the \"roommates\" were about her age, some things were too big for her, and some were too small. And some things were very.... provocative... She picked up a few things and looked for the bathroom. It was huge, but at the same time pretty and you could tell that two girls were using the bathroom. She jumped in the shower and smelled soaps, shampoos and enjoyed this luxury. There was even a Fur dryer which blew her dry with pleasant warmth. Then still fur care and in no time she was again down the stairs.\n\nIn her thoughts.\n\nDylan heard the steps and looked out of the kitchen.\n\n\"Well also again there? In the two hours I made dinner\" he grinned and mustered her.\n\nShe was wearing Jovita?s long T-shirt that reached to her knees.\n\n\"Sorry\" she said, looking sadly at the floor.\n\n\"Hey! It?s all right, it?s nice when you feel good.\" he said smiling in a warm friendly voice.\n\n\"Shall we eat?\" he continued, pointing to the chairs at the table.\n\nLisa nodded; it had been a long time since anyone had been this nice to her.\n\nWhen she was seated Dylan set a plate out for her and sat down across from her.\n\nHer eyes grew wide, and she looked at him questioningly.\n\n\"My roommate likes meat.\" he said explanatorily, pointing to a picture of a Citra and a rabbit with him.\n\nShe nodded and they both began to eat.\n\nAfter the first bite she was on cloud nine. Delicious a still bloody piece of meat, tasty vegetables and a hot potato.\n\nAfter the first bite she was on cloud nine. Delicious a still bloody piece of meat, tasty vegetables and a hot potato.\n\nShe licked the plate and Dylan couldn?t help but grin. When the plates disappeared into the dishwasher, Lea wandered around and explored the house. When she had also inspected the garden with the pool, she came excitedly into the living room.\n\n\"Can I go in the pool?\" she asked excitedly and stopped again disappointed she looked down when she realized she had nothing to wear.\n\n\"Yes, but not for two hours!\" was his answer \"You?ll find swimming clothes at Amy?s or Jovita?s\" he added.\n\nShe happily sat down next to him, and they both watched an anime.\n\n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Lisa enters the world

Disclaimer:

I wrote these visions in my natural language and had them translated.
I hope that the story is still readable and that you enjoy it.
If it?s readable, please leave a comment also if it's not!

Chapter 1 A runaway in Trouble

It was weekend outside are 40 degrees and Dylan sits at home with running air conditioning on the couch and yawns heartily, he is bored. His two roommates are on a week-long school trip and his brother has been at a festival for two days.

Silence.

The 27-year-old stallion hasn?t had this much peace and quiet in a year, usually there is chaos in his house. He yawns again on the sofa. The TV is on, but only so that the silence is not too much for him.

Just before he falls asleep, his front doorbell rings.

"Wait a minute!" he shouts and quickly puts on a pair of pants and slips into a T shirt that is much too big.

The doorbell rings again.

"Yaaaaa I?m coming!" the second ringing has annoyed him and he slowly walks to the door.

A third ring as he arrives at the door.

He opens his front door annoyed by the constant ringing and harshly says "Yes?"

Surprised, he looks left and right, no one to be seen, then looks down.

The girl in front of the door holds on to the door frame and gasps, startled she looks up as the door opens.

In front of him is a fox girl, she has blonde hair, blue eyes and a summer dress on. She is not even half his height.

"Good morning..." she barely gets out before her knees buckle and she topples over in Dylan?s direction.

He catches her and asks, startled, "Are you okay?" She was completely soaked through with sweat.

The girl says nothing her eyes half open, breathing heavily. Dylan lifts her up and carries her into the house, lays her on the couch and disappears into the kitchen to get some water.

The air conditioner blows cool air toward the couch and with it onto the sweaty girl.

As Dylan walks back to the couch with a bottle of water in his hand he sees her still lying there, but she wasn?t breathing as hard. He supported her head and back with his big hand and put the bottle to her lips. She gratefully drank half the bottle. Then she put Dylan back on the pillow and looked with a worried look at his little visitor.

"Well, I hope she gets better soon," he thought and sat down at the other end of the couch and continued watching TV. Of course he kept checking to see if the girl was okay, she was apparently asleep. After a while one of her legs slipped off the huge couch.

Dylan turned his head to check on her and immediately turned it away again.

Her dress had slid up and he could see that she was not wearing any underwear and the white summer dress showed him even more. In his head it suddenly went haywire, he almost couldn?t concentrate on the TV anymore.

Again, and again his eyes flitted to her. Her face was cute she had a striking fur pattern, and the blonde hair framed it perfectly. The dress had become almost saggy at the rib cage and the cold air from the air conditioner had formed two-pointed protruding nipples. His gaze slid further down, and he could see her slit well between her legs. He breathed deeply and felt the pants tighten.

"Whew!" he thought and got up and went to the kitchen to get rid of the thoughts.

After a while something stirred on the couch and he looked out of the kitchen into the living room, there appeared the vixen?s ears.

"Good morning." he said warmly, glad that she was awake again.

"Gu..." she asked, "Where am I?" she was close to panic.

Dylan went into the living room and stopped in the doorway to tell her what had happened.

She still looked at him in shock, it was the first time she had seen a horse up close and such a huge one at that.

To calm her down he said, "My name is Dylan and yours?"

"Lisa," she brought out shyly.

"Hi, nice to meet you." he said and smiled.

She looked at him sceptically and mumbled "Hi."

Suddenly, there was a thumping at the door and a dark male voice called out "Hello, anyone home?"

Panicked, Lisa jumped off the couch and hid behind it. Dylan went to the door, and she looked at him shaking her head and pleading.

He opened it and in front of him stood an unkempt, foul-smelling, scowling big Doberman with a cigar in his snout, who tried to push his way into the house when the door opened.

But he bounced off Dylan and looked confusedly at his chest and then up.

"Can I help you?" said the stallion indignantly, his muscles quivering with withheld anger.

"Um yeah." the Doberman now said in his rumbling tone again "have you seen a fox girl?"

Dylan looked at him playfully confused "there?s a few running around here." And pointed into the settlement. "My neighbours daughter is one and he pointed in the direction of Crossroad "And there?s a fox family living at the crossroads too."

"No." he said barking "No girl that lives here."

"Okay... What does it look like?" he asked innocently.

"What a fox just looks like, with blond hair!" the male growled annoyed.

Dylan was irritated by his manner, and he said "And how exactly? How big, what is she wearing, are there any abnormalities?" his tone told the Doberman not to get the hang of it.

He showed the approximate size "What she?s wearing no idea, that brat took off."

"Aha understandable" said Dylan looking at the now boiling male.

"What do you mean?" he replied heatedly.

"Nothing! How can I reach her when I see her?" said Dylan coolly

"My name is Louis, and this is my number." He handed Dylan a dirty piece of paper.

"Alright I?ll be in touch" In one fluid motion he turned and crashed the door shut and grinned.

Louis jerked back missing the door by a hair.

Dylan walked back to the couch and said, "I think you need to explain something to me." and carelessly tossing the note into the wastebasket, walked past the couch into the kitchen.

When he returned with two bowls Lisa stood in front of the couch uncertainty in her eyes.

Dylan put a bowl in her hand and said, "Come sit down and eat."

Lisa looked at him confused, then at the bowl, then back at him. The bowl was full of ice cream with a spoon in it.

He grinned "What?s wrong?" put her legs on the ottoman and started eating the ice cream.

She sat down unsteadily in the far corner of the sofa and carefully tested the ice cream. "Yum!" she gasped, embarrassed.

Dylan laughed, "I?m glad. It?s from my store, I make new ice cream every day." he said proudly.

Then they both fell silent. Lisa enjoyed the cool ice cream and lounged on the sofa.

After they were both done Dylan looked over at her a little more seriously "Okay now it?s your turn to explain to me why you?re running around outside in this heat and why this guy is looking for you!"

Lisa cringed and looked to the ground "Well he?s my stepdad and I ran away."

"And why did you run away?" asked Dylan thoughtfully.

"Because he?s an asshole." she said.

Dylan laughed "Yeah I noticed that".

They both laughed.

"But why did you run away now?" he probed further.

"Well we are here visiting, so a little further away. With his family and he?s a drunk. He beat me up yesterday because I wouldn?t get him a beer. It wasn?t the first time," she sobbed through her tears, showing him several bruises.

Dylan felt sorry and took her in his arms.

When she stopped sobbing, he let go of her.

"Okay you can stay here for now." he said.

She beamed briefly and then looked at him uncertainly.

"And we?ll figure out together what to do next." he continued. She nodded.

"But for now." he pinched his nose.

"You go to the bathroom! You smell" he said laughing and continued "Upstairs are the rooms of my roommates, you?ll find something to wear, and I?ll put your dress in the washing machine" he said.

She nodded again and went out the stairs.

Dylan groaned "Oh man what have I gotten myself into again."

Lisa rummaged through the closets and found that the "roommates" were about her age, some things were too big for her, and some were too small. And some things were very.... provocative... She picked up a few things and looked for the bathroom. It was huge, but at the same time pretty and you could tell that two girls were using the bathroom. She jumped in the shower and smelled soaps, shampoos and enjoyed this luxury. There was even a Fur dryer which blew her dry with pleasant warmth. Then still fur care and in no time she was again down the stairs.

In her thoughts.

Dylan heard the steps and looked out of the kitchen.

"Well also again there? In the two hours I made dinner" he grinned and mustered her.

She was wearing Jovita?s long T-shirt that reached to her knees.

"Sorry" she said, looking sadly at the floor.

"Hey! It?s all right, it?s nice when you feel good." he said smiling in a warm friendly voice.

"Shall we eat?" he continued, pointing to the chairs at the table.

Lisa nodded; it had been a long time since anyone had been this nice to her.

When she was seated Dylan set a plate out for her and sat down across from her.

Her eyes grew wide, and she looked at him questioningly.

"My roommate likes meat." he said explanatorily, pointing to a picture of a Citra and a rabbit with him.

She nodded and they both began to eat.

After the first bite she was on cloud nine. Delicious a still bloody piece of meat, tasty vegetables and a hot potato.

After the first bite she was on cloud nine. Delicious a still bloody piece of meat, tasty vegetables and a hot potato.

She licked the plate and Dylan couldn?t help but grin. When the plates disappeared into the dishwasher, Lea wandered around and explored the house. When she had also inspected the garden with the pool, she came excitedly into the living room.

"Can I go in the pool?" she asked excitedly and stopped again disappointed she looked down when she realized she had nothing to wear.

"Yes, but not for two hours!" was his answer "You?ll find swimming clothes at Amy?s or Jovita?s" he added.

She happily sat down next to him, and they both watched an anime.

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