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It's fairly clean but only marked mature due to violence and a few mild sexual encounters. Sorry this has been taking so long to update, the role-play site has been down. I'll update as soon as the issue gets fixed. ", "description_bbcode_parsed": "This is a story based on a long dragon roleplay I have been working on. It's fairly clean but only marked mature due to violence and a few mild sexual encounters. Sorry this has been taking so long to update, the role-play site has been down. I'll update as soon as the issue gets fixed. ", "writing": " My name is Lymra, I have two hatchlings Zailen and Agnes, and my mate Oxyrth. Me and Oxyrth are fairly young, and our hatchlings are small children. I am Orange with yellow wings, green spikes, scales and trimmings. I have a sharp orange tail as well. I have a pointed snout and am rather tall for a dragon. But these are not my most stunning attributes. My piercing green eyes, which can't help but mesmerize, are what gave me all that I do have. \n\n I inherited strong hypnosis abilities from my parents. My parents live in a huge castle among the mountains, which was just where I happened to be going. I do not wish to see my parents, but Oxyrth has inquired that we should do so. While my parents did take care of me, they were rather cruel and evil. One of the games that I do remember playing with my father Warin, he would test my hypnosis powers by making eye contact with me and we would use our hypnosis abilities at the same time. I never did win this game, as my father's hypnosis has always been stronger than mine. As a result, I always submissively gave into my parents wishes and obeyed them without question. My parents even went so far as to attempt to turn me evil, but I resisted just enough that it only causes recurring bouts of insanity. \n\n Oxyrth, my mate has been a great subject to my hypnosis. He had always had a crush on me but was the shyest, weakest, most pathetic dragon I had ever met. And, out of pity perhaps, I took a liking to him as well. I made it my goal to transform him into a real dragon, one that could fight and would have the courage to speak to me and share his opinions and experiences. I do not wish to take away his free will, just to take away his glaring personality flaws. While I have not fixed everything, Oxyrth is incredibly weak-willed and can be put into hypnosis quicker than anyone I have ever met. Sometimes because of this, it is tempting when we have a disagreement in something to hypnotize him to accept my wishes, but I wouldn't do that. He is always entitled to his own opinion and can willfully disagree with me if he so desires.\n\n Zailen and Agnes are just beginning to grow from hatchlings into small children. Zailen is intelligent, mischievous and gets himself in to trouble often. He always wants to fight and be entertained. Zailen needs to understand that everyone on this planet doesn't exist just to entertain him. Agnes is my pride and joy. She doesn't speak as much as Zailen and acts slightly younger than her age. Agnes is rather extremely shy and sensitive. Zailen makes it his duty to repeatedly tease and torture her, and tell her about things she has no business learning about and that I'm surprised Zailen even knows at his age. \n\n While walking towards the mountains with my children I realized that I needed to warn Oxyrth of my parents, just in case they try to hypnotize him. \n\n\"Oxyrth honey, there's something I need to tell you.\" I said to Oxyrth. \n\n\"Yeah, where are we exactly?\" Oxyrth responded, having not been in the mountains before \n\n\"You know my abilities right?\" \n\n\"Yes.\" Oxyrth said rolling his eyes\n\n\"Well my parents, and others in this land are far more skilled at them then I am.\" \n\n\"So your parents are evil, and they can control others. I know I'm an easy subject.\" Oxyrth said annoyed\n\n\"Don't worry, they won't do anything to you if I am around.\" I said, although unsure this answer is true. \n\n\"Why did we bring the kids then? Couldn't they could get hypnotized as well?\" asked Oxyrth concerned.\n\n\"I was raised here, I know how to counterract their abilities. Zailen and Agnes won't lose their senses as long as I am around.\" I lied, hoping Oxyrth wouldn't notice. \n\n\"So when are we going to see grandma?\" Agnes chimed in.\n\n\"When are we going to eat...\" Zailen groaned, bored and hungry as usual. \n\n\"We're almost there we we'll have a big feast when we get there. Now be quiet!\" Oxyrth said raising his voice\n\n\"Be alert! I hear something!\" I said standing guard. There are other dragons in the land that know hypnosis as well. I always have to be alert as to what could happen. \n\n\"What are you so scared of?\" My friend Fury laughed as he and his brother Black-knight appeared, apparently I didn't notice they were following us the entire time. \n\nMe, Fury, and Black-knight have been friends since childhood. Whenever I would go out and stray away from my parents, I would hang out with them. They were both orphans and never even met their parents. \n\n\"Oh, it's just you fury.\" I said anxiously.\n\n\"Wow! He's so cool!\" said Zailen, referring to Fury's jagged and rough appearance, apparently what kids are into these days. \n\n\"Yep... everyone's cool but me.\" mumbled Oxyrth\n\n\"You'll help us protect our kids right?\" I asked Fury, hoping it wouldn't be too much trouble. \n\n\"I'll protect you, but the dragons here in the wilderness don't mess around. They will often attempt to enslave any dragon that comes around here.\" Fury explained. \n\n\"Is there something you're not telling me Lymra?\" Oxyrth said, wanting to be more aware of the dangers. \n\n\"The dragons here, they're not very strong or skilled at fighting, all they do is try and play mind games with you. Don't let them try and reason with you, don't talk to them and don't listen to them. If we can make it up to the mountains, where the trees disappear, we'll make it to dinner with our minds intact.\" I explained to Oxyrth. \n\n\"Understood.\" Oxyrth said as he started walking ahead.\n\n\"Stay with me! You're the most pathetically weak-willed dragon I know, if you leave my side for just a second one of these dragons is sure to have you as his slave.\" I said, noticing Oxyrth was trying to go off alone. \n\n\"Weak willed? I'm offended by that. Well, unless you don't want me to be. Do you want me to be offended?\" said Oxyrth as he slowed down and walked by my side again. \n\nAs I slowly walked further ahead, and looked to see that we were almost to the mountains, and we were going to make it out of the woods unscathed, I realized Oxyrth was nowhere to be found.\n\nOxyrth was lured away by a strange light. He turned around and realized that he had strayed away from his wife and kids. \"Lymra? Zailen? Agnes?\" Oxyrth called but no one answered. Although he could feel that someone was near.\n\nAs I was starting to get nervous and fearing the worst, Black-knight and Fury both noticed that I was upset.\n\n\"We will look for him.\" Black-knight said.\n\nOxyrth began to walk back. Although he wasn't sure which way he was supposed to go. He knew he was lost. \"This is hopeless.\" he said moaning.\n\n\"Are you lost.\" said a strange looking dragon he hasn't seen before. The dragon was dark green with golden scales and his eyes were black.\n\n\"Yeah.\" Oxyrth replied. \n\n\"Everything will we good, you should just relax. I will show you the way to go.\" said the dragon, using his own hypnosis powers, making his eyes emanate bright flashes of green and gold from the center of his eyes. \n\nOxyrth felt visibly relaxed as he continued to stare into the dragons eyes. He knew that the kind dragon would show him the way to go. \"Okay.\" Oxyrth mumbled.\n\nFury appeared and slapped the dragon with his tail then slammed him to the ground. He then used his strength to restrain him. \n\n\"You're wasting your strength. You're already losing.\" said the dragon. \"Instead of wasting your energy you need to just sit and relax.\" said the dragon while getting his face as close to fury's face as he could and looking him straight in the eye, using his hypnosis\n\nFury blew smoke in the dragon's face in an attempt to not fall under his control and then used his claws to cut his throat, killing him instantly. Fury then saw Oxyrth was still in a trance and hit him with his tail, knocking him unconscious. \n\nFury flew to Lymra with Oxyrth on his back, who was slightly injured from the blow to the head but slowly regaining consciousness.\n\nLymra was shocked to see what Oxyrth had a head injury. Knowing that he had strayed away was irritating enough. \"That was close, it could've been worse. Good thing you were there Fury.\" \n\n\"Daddy are you okay?\" said Agnes slightly nuzzling Oxyrth's chest.\n\n\"I think so. Lymra honey, we should go back. I've been hypnotized once already, what if your parents do the same?\" said Oxyrth concerned.\n\n\"Okay, for your safety. But how do we tell the kids that they can't see their grandparents?\" I said. \n\n\"Let's just tell them the truth. My parents are abusive, and yours are evil hypnotizing psychopaths\" said Oxyrth \n\n\"Fine I'll tell them.\" I said as I made sure the kids were nearby. \"Daddy's parents hurt him as a kid and don't want to see him. My parents are evil and I'm concerned for our safety.\"\n\n*Evil. So what? I'm their grandson, what could they possibly do to me? If they turned on me I could kill them myself.* Thought Zailen\n\n\"Zailen! Stop thinking to yourself. We are not seeing our grandparents and you are certainly not capable of killing them.\" I said to Zailen angrily. As I had an ability to read thoughts as well. \n\nZailen got angry and used his powers to create a fake image of himself walking alongside Oxyrth. He knew his dad wasn't smart and wouldn't figure that out for a while. \n\nI walked away thinking Zailen was walking with Oxyrth. After all Zailen usually hides with his dad when I'm mad at him.\n\n\"Well, if you're not going to see your parents, where are we going to go that's safe?\" Fury said. \n\n\"We can fly to the caves and rest, and fly down to the valley in the morning.\" I said. I shouldn't have agreed to the dinner anyway, it would likely be a trap so my parents could hypnotize us into staying. \n\n\"What about grandma?\" said Agnes tugging Lymra's wing.\n\n\"Be quiet.\" I said to Agnes. \"That's a rule.\" \n\n\"I thought the rule was to not stare at anyone's privates.\" Agnes said.\n\n\"Not that rule...\" said Lymra embarassed. \"Fury, would you like to carry Agnes while we fly?\"\n \n\"Sure, hop on my back.\" Fury said, motioning Agnes to get on. \n\nAgnes just sit and stared at fury.\n\n\"You can talk to him Agnes.\" I said, remembering that Agnes was shy around dragons she doesn't know. \n\n\"Okay. Just don't go lightspeed or anything, furry. It makes me sick.\" said Agnes to fury.\n\n\"And his name is fury not furry.\" I said as I waited for fury and agnes to fly away and then took off myself. \n\n I eventually made it to the edge of the mountain. About halfway to its peak. I scanned around to make sure nothing dangerous was nearby.\n\nOxyrth had thought he was walking alongside Zailen for awhile. But as he tried to start a conversation with him he didn't say a word. He put his wing through him and realized that it was a fake image. \"Not again! You've got to be fricking kidding me!\" Oxyrth had fell for this trick before and knew that Zailen had this power. \n\nZailen had already walked by himself to the area on the mountain where Lymra's parents lived, completely unaware of the danger. \n\nSoon enough one of my friends Krin was flying by the area and saw me and fury, Krin flew over to us, \"Hey Lymra what you guys doing here?\" Krin asked. \n\n I knew Krin from a few years ago, and while I haven't known him as long as Fury and Black-knight, I grew more attached to him as a friend and confidant. I had issues with my insanity a few years ago, and Krin helped me with them. He is also the most powerful dragon that I knew. He has control over the elements of fire, electricity, water, and shadow. He is a powerful assassin and is incredible in combat. He also has skills of mind control as well and he himself is incredibly resistant to hypnosis. \n\n*Where's Oxyrth?* Fury communicated to me telepathically.\n\nOxyrth was quite a bit nervous as he realized he was many miles away from the mountain. He darted towards the mountain almost immediately looking for Zailen.\n\nZailen actually managed to find his grandparents. He remembered a while back that Lymra said that they lived in a castle. \"Anyone home?\" Zailen asked as he walked in.\n\n\"Now what might this weak helpless kid be doing in our home?\" Lymra's mother Myrtle asked Lymra's father Warin \n\n\"I-I am Lymra's son Zailen.\" said Zailen a bit nervous.\n\n\"Now, don't be afraid just stay and relax. We'll take good care of you.\" Myrtle said, using her strong hypnosis to put Zailen under her control.\n\nZailen stood there, looking into Myrtle's eyes with all of his muscles relaxed and limp. \"Yes, I'll stay and relax and you'll take care of me.\" Zailen said monotonously as Myrtle directed him into their living area. \n\n\"Something isn't right.\" Krin said zooming away and soon finding Myrtle and Warin's castle. Krin phazed through the door and walked calmly, the guards didn't dare to move or attack for some reason. Examining the castle, he quickly stumbled upon Myrtle as she quietly commanded Zailen to stay back as she approached Krin. \"Excuse me miss, but your daughter Lymra sent me to find her son Zailen.\"\n\n\"Yes, my grandson is a fine young dragon.\" said Myrtle. \"Would you like to stay and talk about him?\"\n\n\"No thank you.\" Krin said, knowing this was a wise choice.\n\n\"You have plenty of time...\" Myrtle said looking up at Krin trying to put him under her spell.\n\nKrin closed his eyes tightly to prevent her from controlling him. \n\nMyrtle gave a light chuckle. \"You are a smart dragon.\" she said intimidatingly. \"I'll bring Zailen to you. Zailen, come here.\" \n\nZailen obeyed and walked up to Myrtle.\n\n\"As you can plainly see, Zailen is under my control.\" said Myrtle \"My daughter Lymra, I have done many things to her. She is afraid of me. Tell her that if she comes here with her husband and her other hatchling then she can have Zailen back. Right now Zailen doesn't want to come back. He only wants to serve me. Is that right Zailen?\" \n\n\"Yes, mistress.\" Zailen replied blankly. \n\nKrin knew his own mind control powers were not near strong enough to get to Myrtle's will and decided to try to appease her. \"She also told me not to come back without Zailen. How about a deal?\" Krin said. \n\n\"A deal? If you insist.\" said Myrtle. \n\n\"I am fourteen times stronger than Zailen ever could be, I am stronger than even your daughter. If you let Zailen go and let me take him back to Lymra, I will come back and let you take control of me. Deal?\" Krin said. \n\n\"You are the strongest looking dragon that I have seen here in awhile.\" said Myrtle smirking. \"And you would give up your free will for a child? It's a deal. Zailen you're free.\" \n\nAs Zailen heard the last of Myrtle's words his spell was broken and he turned to face Krin. \"Krin? What happened here?\" Zailen turned to Myrtle. \"And where are my presents Myrtle?\" \n\n\"How you live with turning such a charming personality into your own mindless pet is beyond me. And to your own grandson.\" Krin said to Myrtle. \n\nFury comes flying in with Zailen's sister Agnes on his back as he entered the castle. \"What's going on here.\" \n\n\"I'll explain later.\" Zailen replied. \"I'm not sure I know the half of it though. Can you just get me out of here.\" \n\nKrin flicked his ear up. \"Agnes, Zailen, I think I heard your mother calling you back.\" Krin said teleporting Zailen, Agnes, and Fury to Lymra. \"Okay the hatchlings are with your daughter Lymra.\"\n\nAs Lymra, Agnes, and Fury we're teleported in front of Lymra was glad to see them. \"Thank goodness my hatchlings are safe. What happened to you two?\" \n\n\"I don't remember a thing.\" Zailen said. \n\n\"I rode on Fury's back, he's not very soft.\" Agnes said. \n\n\"Well, dragons don't pride themselves on being... soft.\" Fury added. \n\nAs Myrtle and Krin were still at the castle, Myrtle began to talk to Krin about her demands. \"You will certainly be of high rank. You are stronger than all of my slaves.\" Myrtle said. \"There are many way I can put you under Krin, which way would be more relaxing for you?\" Myrtle asked. \n\n\"Whatever you choose.\" Krin replied *Lymra, I sacrificed my own free will for Zailen's freedom. Goodbye for awhile.* Krin said to Lymra telepathically. \n\n*I know you will get out of this.* Lymra thought back to Krin. \n\n\"Already letting me make decisions for you. You're quite the flatterer.\" Said Myrtle quickly locking eyes with Krin and using her hypnosis at full strength. \n\nKrin sat there dazed and confused for a few seconds but since he was not resisting and looking directly into Myrtle's eyes swirling a bright green and gold, it didn't take long for a magical power exchange to take place. Krin's mind ceased all rational thought and he quickly fell under Lymra's control. \n\n\"Protect my castle, send the weak to me and kill all who resist.\" Myrtle said. \"Then at the end of the day report back to me for more orders.\"\n\n\"Yes, mistress.\" Krin said, Myrtle's words sinking directly into his mind as he followed Myrtle's direction standing guard at the castle for any trespassers or any of Myrtle and Warin's many enemies. Krin returned to Myrtle at the end of the day bringing her 20 dead dragons, with his teeth and claws covered with blood. He sat patiently waiting instructions as Myrtle was busy talking to her mate Warin. \n\n\"Krin is very impressive.\" Myrtle said to Warin. \"He needs to be rewarded.\" \n\n\"I agree.\" said Warin with a stern tone. \"If he keeps this up he shall receive rewards at our discretion. But we will not yet free him.\"\n\n\"Should we let him dine with us?\" Myrtle asked Warin. \"We can't let our best slave fight hungry.\" \n\n\"I will allow it.\" Warin said. *Come to the dining hall.* Myrtle telepathically commanded Krin.\n\n\n\n\n\n---TO BE CONTINUED---", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "       My name is Lymra, I have two hatchlings Zailen and Agnes, and my mate Oxyrth. Me and Oxyrth are fairly young, and our hatchlings are small children. I am Orange with yellow wings, green spikes, scales and trimmings. I have a sharp orange tail as well. I have a pointed snout and am rather tall for a dragon. But these are not my most stunning attributes. My piercing green eyes, which can't help but mesmerize, are what gave me all that I do have.

       I inherited strong hypnosis abilities from my parents. My parents live in a huge castle among the mountains, which was just where I happened to be going. I do not wish to see my parents, but Oxyrth has inquired that we should do so. While my parents did take care of me, they were rather cruel and evil. One of the games that I do remember playing with my father Warin, he would test my hypnosis powers by making eye contact with me and we would use our hypnosis abilities at the same time. I never did win this game, as my father's hypnosis has always been stronger than mine. As a result, I always submissively gave into my parents wishes and obeyed them without question. My parents even went so far as to attempt to turn me evil, but I resisted just enough that it only causes recurring bouts of insanity.

       Oxyrth, my mate has been a great subject to my hypnosis. He had always had a crush on me but was the shyest, weakest, most pathetic dragon I had ever met. And, out of pity perhaps, I took a liking to him as well. I made it my goal to transform him into a real dragon, one that could fight and would have the courage to speak to me and share his opinions and experiences. I do not wish to take away his free will, just to take away his glaring personality flaws. While I have not fixed everything, Oxyrth is incredibly weak-willed and can be put into hypnosis quicker than anyone I have ever met. Sometimes because of this, it is tempting when we have a disagreement in something to hypnotize him to accept my wishes, but I wouldn't do that. He is always entitled to his own opinion and can willfully disagree with me if he so desires.

     Zailen and Agnes are just beginning to grow from hatchlings into small children. Zailen is intelligent, mischievous and gets himself in to trouble often. He always wants to fight and be entertained. Zailen needs to understand that everyone on this planet doesn't exist just to entertain him.  Agnes is my pride and joy. She doesn't speak as much as Zailen and acts slightly younger than her age. Agnes is rather extremely shy and sensitive. Zailen makes it his duty to repeatedly tease and torture her, and tell her about things she has no business learning about and that I'm surprised Zailen even knows at his age.

       While walking towards the mountains with my children I realized that I needed to warn Oxyrth of my parents, just in case they try to hypnotize him.

"Oxyrth honey, there's something I need to tell you." I said to Oxyrth.

"Yeah, where are we exactly?" Oxyrth responded, having not been in the mountains before

"You know my abilities right?"

"Yes." Oxyrth said rolling his eyes

"Well my parents, and others in this land are far more skilled at them then I am."

"So your parents are evil, and they can control others. I know I'm an easy subject." Oxyrth said annoyed

"Don't worry, they won't do anything to you if I am around." I said, although unsure this answer is true.

"Why did we bring the kids then? Couldn't they could get hypnotized as well?" asked Oxyrth concerned.

"I was raised here, I know how to counterract their abilities. Zailen and Agnes won't lose their senses as long as I am around." I lied, hoping Oxyrth wouldn't notice.

"So when are we going to see grandma?" Agnes chimed in.

"When are we going to eat..." Zailen groaned, bored and hungry as usual.

"We're almost there we we'll have a big feast when we get there. Now be quiet!" Oxyrth said raising his voice

"Be alert! I hear something!" I said standing guard. There are other dragons in the land that know hypnosis as well. I always have to be alert as to what could happen.

"What are you so scared of?" My friend Fury laughed as he and his brother Black-knight appeared, apparently I didn't notice they were following us the entire time.

Me, Fury, and Black-knight have been friends since childhood. Whenever I would go out and stray away from my parents, I would hang out with them. They were both orphans and never even met their parents.

"Oh, it's just you fury." I said anxiously.

"Wow! He's so cool!" said Zailen, referring to Fury's jagged and rough appearance, apparently what kids are into these days.

"Yep... everyone's cool but me." mumbled Oxyrth

"You'll help us protect our kids right?" I asked Fury, hoping it wouldn't be too much trouble.

"I'll protect you, but the dragons here in the wilderness don't mess around. They will often attempt to enslave any dragon that comes around here." Fury explained.

"Is there something you're not telling me Lymra?" Oxyrth said, wanting to be more aware of the dangers.

"The dragons here, they're not very strong or skilled at fighting, all they do is try and play mind games with you. Don't let them try and reason with you, don't talk to them and don't listen to them. If we can make it up to the mountains, where the trees disappear, we'll make it to dinner with our minds intact." I explained to Oxyrth.

"Understood." Oxyrth said as he started walking ahead.

"Stay with me! You're the most pathetically weak-willed dragon I know, if you leave my side for just a second one of these dragons is sure to have you as his slave." I said, noticing Oxyrth was trying to go off alone.

"Weak willed? I'm offended by that. Well, unless you don't want me to be. Do you want me to be offended?" said Oxyrth as he slowed down and walked by my side again.

As I slowly walked further ahead, and looked to see that we were almost to the mountains, and we were going to make it out of the woods unscathed, I realized Oxyrth was nowhere to be found.

Oxyrth was lured away by a strange light. He turned around and realized that he had strayed away from his wife and kids. "Lymra? Zailen? Agnes?" Oxyrth called but no one answered. Although he could feel that someone was near.

As I was starting to get nervous and fearing the worst, Black-knight and Fury both noticed that I was upset.

"We will look for him." Black-knight said.

Oxyrth began to walk back. Although he wasn't sure which way he was supposed to go. He knew he was lost. "This is hopeless." he said moaning.

"Are you lost." said a strange looking dragon he hasn't seen before. The dragon was dark green with golden scales and his eyes were black.

"Yeah." Oxyrth replied.

"Everything will we good, you should just relax. I will show you the way to go." said the dragon, using his own hypnosis powers, making his eyes emanate bright flashes of green and gold from the center of his eyes.

Oxyrth felt visibly relaxed as he continued to stare into the dragons eyes. He knew that the kind dragon would show him the way to go. "Okay." Oxyrth mumbled.

Fury appeared and slapped the dragon with his tail then slammed him to the ground. He then used his strength to restrain him.

"You're wasting your strength. You're already losing." said the dragon. "Instead of wasting your energy you need to just sit and relax." said the dragon while getting his face as close to fury's face as he could and looking him straight in the eye, using his hypnosis

Fury blew smoke in the dragon's face in an attempt to not fall under his control and then used his claws to cut his throat, killing him instantly. Fury then saw Oxyrth was still in a trance and hit him with his tail, knocking him unconscious.

Fury flew to Lymra with Oxyrth on his back, who was slightly injured from the blow to the head but slowly regaining consciousness.

Lymra was shocked to see what Oxyrth had a head injury. Knowing that he had strayed away was irritating enough. "That was close, it could've been worse. Good thing you were there Fury."

"Daddy are you okay?" said Agnes slightly nuzzling Oxyrth's chest.

"I think so. Lymra honey, we should go back. I've been hypnotized once already, what if your parents do the same?" said Oxyrth concerned.

"Okay, for your safety. But how do we tell the kids that they can't see their grandparents?" I said.

"Let's just tell them the truth. My parents are abusive, and yours are evil hypnotizing psychopaths" said Oxyrth

"Fine I'll tell them." I said as I made sure the kids were nearby. "Daddy's parents hurt him as a kid and don't want to see him. My parents are evil and I'm concerned for our safety."

*Evil. So what? I'm their grandson, what could they possibly do to me? If they turned on me I could kill them myself.* Thought Zailen

"Zailen! Stop thinking to yourself. We are not seeing our grandparents and you are certainly not capable of killing them." I said to Zailen angrily. As I had an ability to read thoughts as well.

Zailen got angry and used his powers to create a fake image of himself walking alongside Oxyrth. He knew his dad wasn't smart and wouldn't figure that out for a while.

I walked away thinking Zailen was walking with Oxyrth. After all Zailen usually hides with his dad when I'm mad at him.

"Well, if you're not going to see your parents, where are we going to go that's safe?" Fury said.

"We can fly to the caves and rest, and fly down to the valley in the morning." I said. I shouldn't have agreed to the dinner anyway, it would likely be a trap so my parents could hypnotize us into staying.

"What about grandma?" said Agnes tugging Lymra's wing.

"Be quiet." I said to Agnes. "That's a rule."

"I thought the rule was to not stare at anyone's privates." Agnes said.

"Not that rule..." said Lymra embarassed. "Fury, would you like to carry Agnes while we fly?"
 
"Sure, hop on my back." Fury said, motioning Agnes to get on.

Agnes just sit and stared at fury.

"You can talk to him Agnes." I said, remembering that Agnes was shy around dragons she doesn't know.

"Okay. Just don't go lightspeed or anything, furry. It makes me sick." said Agnes to fury.

"And his name is fury not furry." I said as I waited for fury and agnes to fly away and then took off myself.

 I eventually made it to the edge of the mountain. About halfway to its peak. I scanned around to make sure nothing dangerous was nearby.

Oxyrth had thought he was walking alongside Zailen for awhile. But as he tried to start a conversation with him he didn't say a word. He put his wing through him and realized that it was a fake image. "Not again! You've got to be fricking kidding me!" Oxyrth had fell for this trick before and knew that Zailen had this power.

Zailen had already walked by himself to the area on the mountain where Lymra's parents lived, completely unaware of the danger.

Soon enough one of my friends Krin was flying by the area and saw me and fury, Krin flew over to us, "Hey Lymra what you guys doing here?" Krin asked.

     I knew Krin from a few years ago, and while I haven't known him as long as Fury and Black-knight, I grew more attached to him as a friend and confidant. I had issues with my insanity a few years ago, and Krin helped me with them. He is also the most powerful dragon that I knew. He has control over the elements of fire, electricity, water, and shadow. He is a powerful assassin and is incredible in combat. He also has skills of mind control as well and he himself is incredibly resistant to hypnosis.  

*Where's Oxyrth?* Fury communicated to me telepathically.

Oxyrth was quite a bit nervous as he realized he was many miles away from the mountain. He darted towards the mountain almost immediately looking for Zailen.

Zailen actually managed to find his grandparents. He remembered a while back that Lymra said that they lived in a castle. "Anyone home?" Zailen asked as he walked in.

"Now what might this weak helpless kid be doing in our home?" Lymra's mother Myrtle asked Lymra's father Warin

"I-I am Lymra's son Zailen." said Zailen a bit nervous.

"Now, don't be afraid just stay and relax. We'll take good care of you." Myrtle said, using her strong hypnosis to put Zailen under her control.

Zailen stood there, looking into Myrtle's eyes with all of his muscles relaxed and limp. "Yes, I'll stay and relax and you'll take care of me." Zailen said monotonously as Myrtle directed him into their living area.

"Something isn't right." Krin said zooming away and soon finding Myrtle and Warin's castle. Krin phazed through the door and walked calmly, the guards didn't dare to move or attack for some reason. Examining the castle, he quickly stumbled upon Myrtle as she quietly commanded Zailen to stay back as she approached Krin. "Excuse me miss, but your daughter Lymra sent me to find her son Zailen."

"Yes, my grandson is a fine young dragon." said Myrtle. "Would you like to stay and talk about him?"

"No thank you." Krin said, knowing this was a wise choice.

"You have plenty of time..." Myrtle said looking up at Krin trying to put him under her spell.

Krin closed his eyes tightly to prevent her from controlling him.

Myrtle gave a light chuckle. "You are a smart dragon." she said intimidatingly. "I'll bring Zailen to you. Zailen, come here."

Zailen obeyed and walked up to Myrtle.

"As you can plainly see, Zailen is under my control." said Myrtle "My daughter Lymra, I have done many things to her. She is afraid of me. Tell her that if she comes here with her husband and her other hatchling then she can have Zailen back. Right now Zailen doesn't want to come back. He only wants to serve me. Is that right Zailen?"

"Yes, mistress." Zailen replied blankly.

Krin knew his own mind control powers were not near strong enough to get to Myrtle's will and decided to try to appease her. "She also told me not to come back without Zailen. How about a deal?" Krin said.

"A deal? If you insist." said Myrtle.

"I am fourteen times stronger than Zailen ever could be, I am stronger than even your daughter. If you let Zailen go and let me take him back to Lymra, I will come back and let you take control of me. Deal?" Krin said.

"You are the strongest looking dragon that I have seen here in awhile." said Myrtle smirking. "And you would give up your free will for a child? It's a deal. Zailen you're free."

As Zailen heard the last of Myrtle's words his spell was broken and he turned to face Krin. "Krin? What happened here?" Zailen turned to Myrtle. "And where are my presents Myrtle?"

"How you live with turning such a charming personality into your own mindless pet is beyond me. And to your own grandson." Krin said to Myrtle.

Fury comes flying in with Zailen's sister Agnes on his back as he entered the castle. "What's going on here."

"I'll explain later." Zailen replied. "I'm not sure I know the half of it though. Can you just get me out of here."

Krin flicked his ear up. "Agnes, Zailen, I think I heard your mother calling you back." Krin said teleporting Zailen, Agnes, and Fury to Lymra. "Okay the hatchlings are with your daughter Lymra."

As Lymra, Agnes, and Fury we're teleported in front of Lymra was glad to see them. "Thank goodness my hatchlings are safe. What happened to you two?"

"I don't remember a thing." Zailen said.

"I rode on Fury's back, he's not very soft." Agnes said.

"Well, dragons don't pride themselves on being... soft." Fury added.

As Myrtle and Krin were still at the castle, Myrtle began to talk to Krin about her demands. "You will certainly be of high rank. You are stronger than all of my slaves." Myrtle said. "There are many way I can put you under Krin, which way would be more relaxing for you?" Myrtle asked.

"Whatever you choose." Krin replied  *Lymra, I sacrificed my own free will for Zailen's freedom. Goodbye for awhile.* Krin said to Lymra telepathically.

*I know you will get out of this.* Lymra thought back to Krin.

"Already letting me make decisions for you. You're quite the flatterer." Said Myrtle quickly locking eyes with Krin and using her hypnosis at full strength.

Krin sat there dazed and confused for a few seconds but since he was not resisting and looking directly into Myrtle's eyes swirling a bright green and gold, it didn't take long for a magical power exchange to take place. Krin's mind ceased all rational thought and he quickly fell under Lymra's control.

"Protect my castle, send the weak to me and kill all who resist." Myrtle said. "Then at the end of the day report back to me for more orders."

"Yes, mistress." Krin said, Myrtle's words sinking directly into his mind as he followed Myrtle's direction standing guard at the castle for any trespassers or any of Myrtle and Warin's many enemies. Krin returned to Myrtle at the end of the day bringing her 20 dead dragons, with his teeth and claws covered with blood. He sat patiently waiting instructions as Myrtle was busy talking to her mate Warin.

"Krin is very impressive." Myrtle said to Warin. "He needs to be rewarded."

"I agree." said Warin with a stern tone. "If he keeps this up he shall receive rewards at our discretion. But we will not yet free him."

"Should we let him dine with us?" Myrtle asked Warin. "We can't let our best slave fight hungry."

"I will allow it." Warin said. *Come to the dining hall.* Myrtle telepathically commanded Krin.





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