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You're welcome to share your thoughts about this chapter as well.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "These are my thoughts and more for the second bonus chapter. You're welcome to share your thoughts about this chapter as well.", "writing": "Welcome back. Today, I’ll be talking about my thoughts and more on the second Bonus Chapter of Spike’s CYOSA.\n\n[b]Making this:[/b]\nI had thoughts about Thorax and Spike going at it while making this series. I also decided on adding Pharynx as well, since he didn’t get much screen time in the show after the events of Season 7.\n\nThere was no map that looked similar to the hive, so I had to make one from scratch. I used a variety of props to make the map, but most of them are from here (https://ponysfm.com/sweet-apple-acres-release-page). \n\nFor Thorax’s backstory, I just recolored some models to make new characters. There was no model for Pharynx, so I had to use a blue changeling for him.\n\n[b]Problems:[/b]\nWhat really baffled me was how Flurry Heart seemed to be the top choice for who Ocellus should turn into. I assumed bots were involved, so I temporary had to switch polling sites. Honestly, I expected the majority to vote Ocellus being herself. I knew someone would pick Flurry Heart, but not that many. There was an adult Flurry Heart model available, so I used that. I bet that’s why the majority pick Flurry Heart. Adult Flurry link:(https://www.deviantart.com/fauna-joy/art/Adult-Flurry-Heart-Request-DL-674184440)\n\n[b]Alternate endings:[/b]\nIf Ocellus was not chosen in Chapter 2, then a random changeling would replace her. The choices and story would still play out the same.\n\n[b]Love hurts[/b]\nIf Spike rejects Ocellus’s offer to have sex, then she’ll get angry, turn into her black form, and attack Spike. Spike would be given a bunch of choices during this fight. If Spike loses, Pharynx will come and knock Ocellus out. Thorax and Pharynx will then tend to Spike’s wounds. Spike then says that he should’ve had sex with Ocellus. The chapter ends here.\n\n[b]I’m going to head out [/b]\nAfter Spike beats Ocellus or has sex with her, Thorax would start to have an interest in sex. Spike can either ask Thorax about it or stay silent. If he stays silent about it, Spike will say that it’s time for him to leave. Thorax, Pharynx, and Spike will say their goodbyes as Spike leaves the hive.\n\n[b]Sex with a King[/b]\nIf Spike asks Thorax about sex, he will learn that Thorax lost his virginity a while back before the events of the Canterlot wedding. Spike then decides to have sex with Thorax. Spike would then be given the choice to have Pharynx join. If he rejects, Pharynx will walk away, but later it would be relieved that he was still watching Spike and Thorax have sex. Thorax will comment that some things never change.\n\n[b]Royal threesome[/b]\nIf Spike accepts Pharynx, then a threesome will occur. Pharynx would find the anal experience really weird at first, but then warms up to it.\n\n[b]Other stuff[/b]\nI made some dialogue ahead of time in case the majority picks something different. Here they are.\n\n[i][If Spike decides to talk about himself][/i]\nThorax: I'm surprised to see how much you've grown. I guess this is your big surprise, huh?\nSpike: Yep. I'm glad that you still recognize me.\nThorax: You're the only dragon who's purple and green. Who wouldn't recognize you? \nPharynx: Uh....\nThorax: Really, Pharynx?\nPharynx: Purple and green are really popular colors, okay? Besides, remember before we attack Canterlot, there was that giant dragon who attacked Ponyville? He was also purple and green.\nSpike: That...was actually me, Pharynx. I was in my greed form.\nPharynx: How many forms do you have? Are you sure you're not part changeling?\n[i]\n[If Spike rejects Ocellus][/i]\nSpike: *sighs* I need you to stop this at once!\nOcellus: What?!\nSpike: You heard me. This love obsession of yours is getting out of control.\nOcellus: But...but I NEED love!\nSpike: No, Ocellus. I need you to stop. You can't go around and have sex with everycreature you see. You have to let go of this lust.\nOcellus: Fine...If you don't want me to make love, then...then...[b]I'LL FORCE IT OUT OF YOU!![/b] [transforms into her black form]\n\n[i][If Spike chooses Rarity][/i]\nOcellus: (as Rarity) Come on, darling. Fuck me hard!\nSpike: Rarity doesn’t swear like that.\nOcellus: Oops, sorry.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Welcome back. Today, I’ll be talking about my thoughts and more on the second Bonus Chapter of Spike’s CYOSA.

Making this:
I had thoughts about Thorax and Spike going at it while making this series. I also decided on adding Pharynx as well, since he didn’t get much screen time in the show after the events of Season 7.

There was no map that looked similar to the hive, so I had to make one from scratch. I used a variety of props to make the map, but most of them are from here (https://ponysfm.com/sweet-apple-acres-release-page).

For Thorax’s backstory, I just recolored some models to make new characters. There was no model for Pharynx, so I had to use a blue changeling for him.

Problems:
What really baffled me was how Flurry Heart seemed to be the top choice for who Ocellus should turn into. I assumed bots were involved, so I temporary had to switch polling sites. Honestly, I expected the majority to vote Ocellus being herself. I knew someone would pick Flurry Heart, but not that many. There was an adult Flurry Heart model available, so I used that. I bet that’s why the majority pick Flurry Heart. Adult Flurry link:(https://www.deviantart.com/fauna-joy/art/Adult-Flurry-H...)

Alternate endings:
If Ocellus was not chosen in Chapter 2, then a random changeling would replace her. The choices and story would still play out the same.

Love hurts
If Spike rejects Ocellus’s offer to have sex, then she’ll get angry, turn into her black form, and attack Spike. Spike would be given a bunch of choices during this fight. If Spike loses, Pharynx will come and knock Ocellus out. Thorax and Pharynx will then tend to Spike’s wounds. Spike then says that he should’ve had sex with Ocellus. The chapter ends here.

I’m going to head out
After Spike beats Ocellus or has sex with her, Thorax would start to have an interest in sex. Spike can either ask Thorax about it or stay silent. If he stays silent about it, Spike will say that it’s time for him to leave. Thorax, Pharynx, and Spike will say their goodbyes as Spike leaves the hive.

Sex with a King
If Spike asks Thorax about sex, he will learn that Thorax lost his virginity a while back before the events of the Canterlot wedding. Spike then decides to have sex with Thorax. Spike would then be given the choice to have Pharynx join. If he rejects, Pharynx will walk away, but later it would be relieved that he was still watching Spike and Thorax have sex. Thorax will comment that some things never change.

Royal threesome
If Spike accepts Pharynx, then a threesome will occur. Pharynx would find the anal experience really weird at first, but then warms up to it.

Other stuff
I made some dialogue ahead of time in case the majority picks something different. Here they are.

[If Spike decides to talk about himself]
Thorax: I'm surprised to see how much you've grown. I guess this is your big surprise, huh?
Spike: Yep. I'm glad that you still recognize me.
Thorax: You're the only dragon who's purple and green. Who wouldn't recognize you?
Pharynx: Uh....
Thorax: Really, Pharynx?
Pharynx: Purple and green are really popular colors, okay? Besides, remember before we attack Canterlot, there was that giant dragon who attacked Ponyville? He was also purple and green.
Spike: That...was actually me, Pharynx. I was in my greed form.
Pharynx: How many forms do you have? Are you sure you're not part changeling?

[If Spike rejects Ocellus]
Spike: *sighs* I need you to stop this at once!
Ocellus: What?!
Spike: You heard me. This love obsession of yours is getting out of control.
Ocellus: But...but I NEED love!
Spike: No, Ocellus. I need you to stop. You can't go around and have sex with everycreature you see. You have to let go of this lust.
Ocellus: Fine...If you don't want me to make love, then...then...I'LL FORCE IT OUT OF YOU!! [transforms into her black form]

[If Spike chooses Rarity]
Ocellus: (as Rarity) Come on, darling. Fuck me hard!
Spike: Rarity doesn’t swear like that.
Ocellus: Oops, sorry.
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