Louis and Bill star in…
“Louis’ Fall” featuring Legoshi
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Sequel to the previous story featuring Bill and Louis. Louis still thinks he’s hypnotized to follow Bill’s orders, even though Bill broke the spell after only a few minutes. Is Louis really fooled, or is he just pretending because he actually likes the way he’s being treated? 
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        “You’ve gotta be kidding me,” Louis sighed, twisting and turning as he checked out his reflection in the mirror. His formerly warm, reddish-brown fur had been ruined. His figure was patterned with a complicated web of deep black lines and shapes, just as Bill had instructed.


        “What do you mean, babe? It’s perfect!” Bill chuckled, looking back and forth between the porno mag he was holding and the deer, checking to see if the patterns matched up. “You look just like her!” He circled around Louis, scanning the deer’s naked form up and down. 


        “You actually look halfway attractive now,” he teased, before pulling Louis in for a quick, sloppy kiss. “All the other tigers are gonna be jealous of me.” He held up his phone and took a selfie, making sure to capture his own smirking face and the deer’s perfectly-patterned rump. 


        “It’s just a shame that I’m not supposed to mess up your fur until you’ve showered the dye out tonight.” Louis let out a sigh of relief, looking forward to the first few waking hours since Friday where the tiger wasn’t plowing him in the ass. He dressed in loose-fitting clothing while Bill used his credit card to pay for the expensive makeover, and the odd couple quickly made their way back to Louis’ room.


        He’d made it through all of Saturday and most of Sunday without running into anyone who immediately recognized him, a huge shock to the deer seeing as the impromptu sex tape Bill had released of them was continuing to draw massive numbers. School tomorrow, on the other hand, would be an entirely different story. 


        The evening passed in relative peace. While he desperately wanted to break in the deer’s new and improved ass, Bill kept his hands off of Louis until the deer stepped out of the shower after dinner.


        “This isn’t as horrible, I guess, but I still wish you hadn’t done it,” Louis grumbled. As he dried off his fur, it was clear to both himself and the tiger that the tiger stripes had softened a bit once the excess dye was rinsed out, though they weren’t any less noticeable.


        “It’s pretty basic math,” Bill started to explain, getting up off the bed and walking over to the deer.


        “As if you’re smart enough to do math, you dumbass,” Louis grumbled, still unable to believe that this obnoxious tiger had taken control of him like this.


        “Shut up and listen,” Bill said, giving the deer a firm spank before starting to grope his ass. “When I first hypnotized you, your ass was barely worth fucking. Boring to look at, but at least it was decently tight. After letting me fuck you all night-”


        “Let you? As if,” Louis scoffed, rolling his eyes as he turned away from the tiger. “And it was tight because I was a virgin, you idiot. What do you expect?” Bill had to refrain from laughing. He wasn’t sure how, but the deer apparently still hadn’t realized that he’d broken the hypnotic spell almost immediately. Soon enough he was sure Louis would catch on and kick him out, but he was excited to see how far he could push it. 


        “Anyways,” Bill continued. “After letting me fuck you all night, your ass was basically ruined. Much too loose, pretty much what I expected from a little herbivore slut like you. That’s why you needed the dye job. Now that your ass looks like a porn star’s, that pushes you just slightly back into the positive.”


        Louis simply glared in response, completely at a loss for how to respond to the incredibly rude tiger. If he wasn’t still under Bill’s control, the obnoxious feline would have been kicked out of the dorm building in an instant. The expression only served to amuse the muscular carnivore, who lost no time in picking Louis up and carrying him to bed. 


        “I’ve got another idea that should help improve your performance, but that can wait for tomorrow,” Bill grunted, pushing the deer onto all fours and clambering up on top of him. “Your ass is begging for some carnivore cock, and I’m much too polite to keep it waiting.”


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Monday morning, in the halls of Cherryton…
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        “Everyone’s staring at me,” Louis muttered under his breath, glancing around the crowded hallway. Of course, even before this weekend the deer had often found himself the center of attention due to his popularity among the students, but today was different.


        There were any number of reasons for his fellow students to gawk at him on this particular morning. His uniform trousers were covered with rips and tears, exposing patches of his new brown-and-black fur. His antlers, dull and unpolished, sporting a wide array of bite marks. And, of course, the underclassmen tiger with a hand around his waist, just to name a few.


        “Good,” Bill chuckled, slapping Louis’ ass before sliding his hand down the back of the deer’s pants. “That means they all know you’re mine now.” Louis started to respond, but was instead forced to cover his mouth to keep from moaning as Bill started to finger his ass.


        Bill gave the deer a quick kiss before heading off to class, leaving Louis alone for the first time in a few days. He simply stood there in the middle of the hall for a moment, the blood rushing to his face, with no idea how to act. After a while, he decided to rush off to his first class early, immediately wishing that he wasn’t assigned to a front row seat. 


        “Hey,” a random tiger in the desk next to him called, tapping the deer on the shoulder. Once he was sure that Louis was paying attention, the cheeky stranger leaned back and propped his feet up on the deer’s desk. He wasn’t as tall as Bill, or as muscular, but he was clearly just as cocky. “Now that you’ve got a taste for tiger cock, how about hooking up before class?”


        Louis rolled his eyes before he remembered Bill’s instructions and sighed, giving the bottom of the tiger’s feet a good sniff before nodding. “No one is allowed to use my ass without Bill’s permission, but I’ve got time to suck your cock.” The larger feline grinned, hopping out of his desk and following the deer to the nearest bathroom. 


        “Drop your pants, herbivore,” he smirked, whipping out his cock. “Just because I can’t use it doesn’t mean you’re allowed to hide it from me. Louis nodded once more, unbuttoning his trousers and letting them fall to the bathroom floor. 


        “Hah!” the tiger roared happily, taking a nice look at the deer’s ass. “I recognize those stripes, Bill you old perv. But what’s this?” He spun Louis around, reaching down to grab the deer’s cock. Or, where his cock would have been. 


        “It’s a gift from Bill, to make sure I’m a good deer,” Louis flushed, gasping as the tiger’s warm hands made contact with the cold, shiny metal of the cage that was locked securely around his shaft. 


        “That’s hilarious,” the tiger chuckled, before pushing the deer down onto his knees. “Now get sucking.”


        That encounter pretty much set the tone for the day, with at least one member of each of Louis’ classes approaching him with some kind of lewd request. It happened so regularly, in fact, that the deer could have sworn it was planned. And indeed, if he had bothered to check his own social media feeds, he would have seen the invitation of sorts that Bill had posted to his profile the previous evening.


        So, by the time Louis walked into the drama club that day, the poor deer’s stomach was filled with the seed of at least a dozen different species, with sticky patches drying in the fur around his mouth. He was ten minutes late after dealing with the short line that had formed in the stall after his last class, and the other members of the club were gathered around in anticipation.


        “Sorry to keep you all waiting,” he said, walking up to the front of the crowd. “I was busy doing-”


        “We know what you were doing,” Bill grinned, pushing through the other club members to stand next to the deer. “The last guy was live streaming.” Louis’ face flushed, and most of the other students were awkwardly avoiding eye contact.






        “Anyway,” Louis continued, shaking his head. “I don’t intend to take up much of your time today. Effective immediately, I’m stepping down from my position in favor of Bill. He’s much stronger and smarter than I am, so he’ll do a better job.” The statement was followed by a wave of gasps. 


        “A-are you sure, Louis-senpai?” Ellen asked, looking at him curiously. “With hardly any time until our next performance, is it really a good idea to do this?” The zebra had, of course, seen the pictures and videos just like everyone else, but seeing the deer’s personality shift in person was still jarring. 


        “I’m all for it!” Tao grinned, giving Bill a thumbs up before winking at the deer. The panther was younger than Louis, so they didn’t share any classes, but that hadn’t stopped him from joining a group of his fellow carnivores with Louis in the bathroom during lunch. Bill nodded in response, before clearing his throat and starting to speak. 


“For my first act as the new head of the drama club, I’m recasting myself as the role of Adler,” Bill chuckled, absentmindedly groping the deer. “You don’t mind, right babe?”


“Of course not,” Louis replied with a frown. “It’s not like I was born to play the role, and my performance has been the highlight of every show. You know best, as always. What should I be doing then?” 


“For now, you can be my understudy. I know how much you enjoy spending time beneath me.” Bill chuckled as he smacked the deer’s ass, and after a brief pause, a few of the other carnivores in the club laughed as well.


From that point on, the meeting proceeded somewhat normally, naturally progressing to rehearsals. Bill performed adequately in the role, seeing as he had already done so during Louis’ injury earlier in the year, with the deer sitting off on the sidelines. 


Most of the club members ignored Louis for much of the evening, looking the other way when he worshiped the tiger’s paws in between scenes. Legoshi, on the other hand, kept his eyes trained on the deer. Once things were winding down for the night, he pulled Bill aside for a conversation backstage. 


“Are you sure this is okay?” he asked, looking down at his shoes. “Everyone at Cherryton basically thinks of Louis as a slut now.” Bill chuckled, throwing an arm around the wolf’s shoulders and messing up his fur. 


“That’s because he is, Legoshi. I told you, he was only hypnotized for a few minutes. He might not realize it, but everything that’s happened since then has been 100 percent Louis. He’s happier this way.” He gestured across the stage to another secluded corner, where Aoba was currently balls-deep in the deer’s mouth.


“Sure he’s happy now, but how about a week from now? What happens once you get bored of this?” Legoshi’s forehead creased with concern, even as the sight of the deer’s public depravity caused a stirring in his crotch.


“That’s not my problem,” Bill replied with a grin. “I know you were only gonna borrow him for the weekend, but I think you can just keep him after that.” Legoshi’s face flushed, and despite his concerns, his tail started wagging. 


“Are you bored with him already?” the wolf asked, his ears standing straight up, struggling to read the tiger’s motivations.


“Yeah,” Bill smirked, shrugging casually. “I was mostly doing this to make my ex jealous, so maybe she’d be a bit less of a drag when we got back together. I’m not really that into guys. Or herbivores, for that matter.” At that moment, his phone vibrated in his pocket, and the tiger quickly checked his notifications. 


“Oh, speak of the devil. Looks like she wants me back already,” he grinned, patting the dumbfounded wolf on the back. “Quicker than I thought. Guess her watching me rail our former club president got her missing my cock. You can just take him today, then.”


“Wait, what?” Legoshi asked incredulously, eyeing the wolf with confusion. “You never actually wanted Louis-senpai to yourself?”


“Nah, I only even hypnotized him in the first place to get some blackmail. My girl just texted and pissed me off at a convenient time. But based on the pic she just sent me, looks like she’s over it. At least I got a lot of expensive stuff out of the deal.” Bill started to walk away, but he suddenly stopped and started fishing something out of his pockets.


“This is yours, now,” he said, tossing Louis’ wallet in the wolf’s direction. “To be honest, this brought me way more pleasure than his ass.” Legoshi caught it, and proceeded to stare at the tiger, a complicated series of emotions churning inside him.


“So you ruined Louis’ reputation, turning him from the most respected student at Cherryton into a public use slut, taking his place in the club, only to toss him aside in less than a week? Just to use his money to buy yourself some new stuff while you waited for your girlfriend to calm down?”


“Bingo,” Bill winked, before turning to face Louis, who was busy cleaning eagle cum off of his face, waving in order to catch his attention. “You’re Legoshi’s now, alright?” Louis sighed, frowning even as he nodded his head. Without another word, Bill walked out of the building, on his way to hook up with his formerly-ex girlfriend as Legoshi was left to stare after him in shock.


“Should we head to my room?” Louis asked, startling the wolf who hadn’t even heard him walk across the stage. His surprise was compounded as the deer nonchalantly started stroking the outline of the wolf’s bulge in his pants. 


“What?” the wolf replied, looking down at the cum-stained deer in confusion, his anger at Bill suddenly fading away as his arousal grew..


“You’re my owner now, my room comes along with me. I saw Bill give you my wallet, the keys should be in there.” 


“Keys?” Legoshi muttered, too distracted by his swirling thoughts to formulate an actual question. Louis rolled his eyes in response, unbuttoning his pants and stepping out of them, revealing his nude form to the wolf.


“One’s for the room, the other is for this,” he replied, pointing to the shiny new chastity cage securely hugging his cock. “Now, it’s getting late. We can establish the new rules once we get back.” Without paying any attention to the lingering club members who followed his naked body with their eyes as he dragged Legoshi out of the building, Louis started leading Legoshi across campus.


They had nearly made it to the deer’s dorm building when they were stopped by the tiger from Louis’ first class, who had ditched his school uniform for a pair of loose-fitting sweatpants and a tank top. 


“Nice to see you again,” the feline smirked, putting his arm around the deer’s waist and squeezing his ass. “You up for round two?”


“I’m under new ownership,” Louis casually replied, gesturing towards Legoshi. “You’ll have to take it up with this idiot.” Even more confused than before, Legoshi shook his head, quickly leading the deer away from the disappointed feline and into the herbivore dorm. 


“You really don’t mind people talking to you like that?” he asked, finally working up the nerve to say something as he followed the deer up the stairs, averting his eyes from the deer’s naked ass.


“Of course I mind it, you moron,” Louis groaned as he pulled open the door to his room. “It’s humiliating, but I don’t have any choice in the matter. It’s who I am now.” Legoshi followed the deer through the door, setting his bag down on the floor before sitting next to Louis on the bed. 


“Because you’re hypnotized?” Legoshi probed, trying to figure out if the deer had realized that the spell had ended.


“Because herbivores are supposed to be good sluts for carnivores,” Louis replied, an odd expression on his face. 
 
“And are you happy?” Legoshi replied, leaning over and putting his arm around the deer’s waist, his mind fighting the urge to pull the deer’s body tight against his own.


“No, I hate it,” Louis replied, making direct eye contact with Legoshi before his eyelid twitched in a manner that almost looked like a wink. “This stupid hypnotic spell is ruining my life. Speaking of which, it would be a good idea for you to decide my role moving forwards. Obviously, Bill had certain preferences, but if there’s anything you want me to change just-,” the deer stopped mid-sentence as Legoshi pulled him into a kiss, wrapping his arms around the smaller herbivore before pushing him down onto the bed. 


“Shut up,” Legoshi growled softly, unbuttoning his pants and tossing them to the side. “I’ll reprogram you later. We’ve got something more important to do.” Freed from its fabric confinement, the wolf’s throbbing erection jutted out right in Louis’ face, bouncing up and down as the wolf pulled off his shirt.


“Whatever you say, Legoshi,” Louis mumbled, his hands reaching up to grab the wolf’s cock almost automatically, one hand gently stroking the underside of the shaft while the other continued on to caress the wolf’s balls. 


“Hey, Louis?” Legoshi asked as he pulled out his phone and opened the camera, pointing the device towards the eager deer. Louis looked up, and upon noticing the camera, he immediately rolled his eyes. As soon as he saw the flash, he knew he was moments away from going viral for the second time that week. 


“What?” he replied, leaning in and gently pressing his nose against the tip of Legoshi’s cock. The wolf took a moment to sigh, before reaching down and stroking the deer’s fur.


“Call me sir,” he said with a smirk, though the expression contained much more genuine humor than the more cruel expressions of the tiger, as he started grinding his shaft against the deer’s face. Louis just sighed once more, staring up at the wolf before muttering one word under his breath.


“Carnivores,” he grumbled, as he took a deep breath and opened his mouth to receive the wolf’s cock. The overwhelming sensation caused Legoshi to moan, tilting his head back and closing his eyes as the pleasure started to fill his inexperienced mind. 


If he had continued to look closely at the deer, he might have noticed the deer’s aggravated mask slip away to reveal a brief expression of pure joy. By the time he opened his eyes again, however, Louis had regained his composure, sucking the wolf’s cock with an expression that completely concealed just how much he was enjoying the prospect of life with his new “owner.”


“So,” Legoshi broke the silence after a few minutes filled only with the occasional soft moan. “Are you ready for the main event?” Without waiting for a response, he flipped the deer over onto his stomach, grabbing him by the tail in order to get his ass into a convenient position. 


“I guess so, sir,” Louis replied, repositioning his elbows and preparing to brace himself. The wolf just smiled, already pressing his shaft against the deer’s hole. Now that he was sure that he and Louis were on the same page, even if the deer preferred not to admit it, most of his previous worries had melted away. If this truly did make Louis happy, then…


“I assume you don’t mind if I livestream it?”


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