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There were now only a few scattered groups of ponies still hanging around, most have already left. All the mares he and Twilight had met today were still there, talking to each other by one of the tables with party snacks. Notably, there was also a small group of stallions, many of which being the few that had whistled or teased Twilight earlier. However, they seemed primarily focused on two other mares standing in the corner of the room, very passionately making out with each other.\n\nOne is green with a lighter green mane and the other is a beige color with a pink and purple mane. Both of them appeared to be very drunk and have torn off most of their clothes, leaving only torn scraps of their shirts and their underwear remaining. Spike did his best to not stare, though them being almost naked wasnt helping.\n\nHe hoped they didn't get too into it in the library. A similar scenario had occurred at one Lemon Heart's parties a few years back. It was not a very fun mess to clean up at the time.\n\nStill standing on the stairs, Spike could see more of the room at once, and thankfully, it looked like it had not been too messy of a party. Though there was a rather telling series of brown splotches on the floor leading from the punch bowl and over to the front door.\n\n'I wonder what happened there...'\n\nTwilight's suitcase, which appeared to have been left untouched, was still sitting on the small table in the middle of the room. Walking over to the table Spike hefts the suitcase up and onto his right shoulder. \n\n'Better hurry this back upstairs, Twilights will want to get started on that report of hers as soon as possible after all these delays.'\n\n\"Hold on a moment darling.\" He hears Rarity call behind him.\n\nTurning around he sees her waltzing towards him with a rather sultry smirk.\n\n\"H-hey.\" Spike greets with a nervous smile.\n\n\"Hello, I feel must apologize for not catching your name earlier today. What was it again?\"\n\n\"It's uh, S-spike! My name is Spike.\"\n\n\"*Giggle* Well, Spike, I have a little proposition for you, should you be interested.\"\n\n\"A proposition?\"\n\n\"Yes, I was wondering if you might be so kind as to swing by my boutique sometime tomorrow. I am in great need of help with some measurements that I will be using for a new line of stallion suits, and you-\" She pauses, looking him up and down. -\"would be perfect.\"\n\n\"Yes!\" He shouts, before blushing at his sudden outburst. \"Oh, I mean, I'd love to but I-\"\n\n\"And don't worry about scheduling, I shall be available at any time tomorrow, so feel free to pop in whenever you are ready. I'm well aware you have another get-together planned and I wouldn't recommend passing that up.\" She explains, giving him a knowing wink.\n\n\"O-okay, um, that sounds great.\"\n\nWith a nod, she turns away, her hips swaying hypnotically as she returns to a bunch of ponies she had previously been talking with.\n\n'First Fluttershy invites me to her home, wanting to learn more about me and now Rarity wants me to come over to take some measurements...what is even going on today. Next thing you know Twilight is gonna try to flirt with me or something.'\n\n\n\n\n\n\"Hey Twilight, I'm back with your suitcase,\" Spike calls up as he opens the door to the upstairs bedroom, the suitcase on his right shoulder blocking his vision of most of the room.\n\n\"Hmm? Oh, thank you, Spike, just set it down on the desk over here.\" He hears Twilight say.\n\nAs Spike turns he blushes as he sees Twilight still sitting down at the desk, with a very prominent brown bulge now resting in the seat of her panties. He does his very best to not stare at it. He would probably be helping Twilight write her report, probably until the celebration in a few hours and It would be easier if he wasnt aroused while they did it. Still, based on the size of her load he was a little curious.\n\n\"Did you, um...have another accident?\" Spike asks as he walks over, Twilight still looking down at a piece of paper as she writes.\n\n\"Yea, but I think it had something to do with that punch. I didn't really feel it coming until it was too late. One second I thought it was a just a fart but before I knew it. I just started filling my panties.\" She explains casually.\n\n'Great, now I'm hard anyway. Damn it Twilight, why must you always say things like that when I'm around? It really doesn't help me get over my whole 'crush on you' problem. I swear if I didn't know you I would think you were doing that on purpose.'\n\nSpike sets the suitcase down on the desk next to her, grabbing the extra chair he had sat in earlier to use as crotch concealment. Using her magic Twilight quickly unzips the suitcase and begins taking out the many books she brought, organizing them into assorted piles on the desk. However, instead of immediately starting up her report, she returns her attention back to the suitcase, lifts two sets of clothes from the ones they had packed.\n\n\"Which one of these do you think looks better on me at the Celebration?\" Twilight asks, hovering both in front of Spike and turning to look up at him.\n\nShe had a strange look in her eyes as if she were trying to analyze every detail on his face.\n\n'What's up with that look Twilight? And since when does she care about what she wears to events?'\n\nNormally Twilight just threw on whatever was available to wear at the moment. Even when meeting with Celestia she usually just throws on some of her casual clothes.\n\nThe first outfit was a fairly standard looking black dress suit and skirt, commonly worn by big CEOs and secretaries. Accompanying it was a black, almost lingerie-like, bra with some matching panties. Images of Twilight working as a busty accountant involuntarily flashed through his mind. Strangely enough, he couldn't quite remember her wearing it before.\n\nThe other outfit, on the other hand, he had seen her wear many times before. It was just a simple light purple T-shirt with some blue jean shorts. The shirt had her cutie mark proudly display over the chest, and while it wasnt very tight fitting, the hem was a bit high, usually enough to see a bit of her waist. No bra was presented to go along with it but there was a pair of simple pink panties. Nothing particularly provocative about it and was likely one of the more modest outfits she owned. He could remember the many bathroom-break free study sessions he had seen that outfit go through over the years.\n\n\"Well...um, I guess that one is pretty nice.\" He says pointing to the t-shirt and jeans.\n\nShe doesn't really respond at first, only studying his expression, before sighing.\n\n\"Thank you, Spike. It's for when we leave for the celebration as I'm pretty sure I can't get away with just wiping a little bit this time.\" She says putting the two outfits back into the suitcase and grabbing a book to start on her report.\n\n\"Yea...\" Spike says, still, a bit unnerved by the way she had seemed to study him when she asked. \n\nShe tended to only look like that at when she was watching for something very specific in an experiment. Still, he had to agree, there was no way she could get away with just wiping this time around. A shower would definitely be needed, the smell was pretty strong.\n\n\n\n\n\nTwilight leans on the bathroom sink, staring back at herself in the mirror. She had just finished taking a shower and is wearing the outfit Spike had picked out for her. She had just barely been able to finish writing her report for the princess and wasn't very proud of it, but hopefully, it would be enough to convince her of the seriousness of the situation. As she was writing it she had hoped to find more information about the legend itself or the Elements Of Harmony used to banish Nightmare Moon but couldn't find anything. At the moment, however, something else was on her mind which had been distracting her since it had popped into her head. Spike.\n\nSince the thought had crossed her mind earlier, she had been unable to get the ludicrous idea of Spike being into her out of her head. Making him choose between the two outfits she had brought along had meant to have been some kind of test, but she wasnt really sure what she was looking for. It wasnt every day she was tasked with figuring out if a stallion was secretly attracted to her much less Spike, a dragon. With an exasperated sigh, she pushes the thoughts away.\n\nCleaning up had been fairly simple thanks to the consistency of her mess. Despite the amount of poop in her panties, most of it had been pretty solid, making it pretty easy to dispose of. Still, the smell would have most likely have lingered regardless of how well she wiped, so a shower had been necessary. While disposing of the smell of urine with a spell was fairly easy, poop tended to be a bit more complicated and often it was much easier to just take a shower. She didn't mind much though, it made her feel refreshed and clean.\n\nHer uniform and soiled panties were left in a pile by the shower. Once the celebration was over and she had convinced the princess, she would have to find out what kind of laundry machine this place had, if any at all. Unlike Canterlot, where every house was built with one pre-installed, rural towns were likely to be less well equipped.\n\nTwilight was about to exit the bathroom when she feels the familiar sensation of a full bladder. With an annoyed sigh, she pulls down her shorts and panties and sits on what was probably the only toilet in the house. She relaxes her bladder muscles, allowing the entire day's worth of urine to begin streaming down, into the toilet bowl below. If she was honest, she kinda wished she had felt the urge before she had changed.\n\n'It would have been nice to wet my old school uniform, it could have brought back some old memories from senior year at Celestia's school...'\n\nThen again, it was probably for the best. It could have been embarrassing if she felt the urge while at the celebration or in front of the princess, she didn't remember seeing any bathrooms in the town hall.\n\n\n\n\n\nExiting from the bathroom, Twilight finds Spike standing by the window, looking puzzled at something outside.\n\n\"What is it, Spike?\" Twilight asks.\n\n\"Huh? Oh, hey, you look pretty good in that.\" He says, turning to look at her briefly before looking back out the window.\n\nShe blushes, \"Oh um...thanks.\"\n\n\"Okay, correct me if I'm wrong, but hasn't the moon always have the outline of a pony on it?\" He asks.\n\n\"As far as I can remember,\" Twilight says, curious what he was getting at.\n\n\"Well, it's not there anymore.\"\n\n\"What?!\" Twilight exclaims, running over to look out the window.\n\nSure enough, the moon was completely barren, no sign of the 'Mare In The Moon' anywhere. Twilight's eyes suddenly widen in realization.\n\n'It's happening already!'\n\nWasting no more time, she dashes to her desk and grabs her report. Celestia wouldn't be at her palace in Canterlot, so she wouldn't receive anything sent by Spike's dragon fire. She would have to find her at town hall!\n\n\"Come on Spike! We have to go, before its too late!\"\n\n\n\n\n\nTwilight rushes through the large doors of Town Hall, with Spike following along right behind her. They arrive just as the celebration is about to begin, with the last of the decorations and food being taken care of. A large crowd of ponies fills most of the hall, but none appear aware of the change to the moon.\n\n'Why doesn't anypony ever look up at the night sky anymore?!' Twilight mentally fumes.\n\nAs she attempts to force her way through the crowd of ponies, a hush washes over the packed room as the town mayor appears behind a pedestal, about to start her celebration speech.\n\n\"Fillies and gentlecolts! As mayor of Ponyville, it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Sun Celebration!\"\n\nCheers fill the room from the many ponies excited to see their beloved princess raising the sun. Twilight just hoped that nothing happened before she could talk to the princess. On the balconies above, she could see Rarity performing a few last-minute checks on the decorations. On her left, Fluttershy appears to be preparing her bird choir to provide the accompanying music for the Princess's appearance. She had put back on her hoodie and was clearly doing her best not to stand out, despite flying above the crowd and conducting the music. The mayor continues her speech\n\n\"In just a few moments, our town will witness the magic of the sunrise, and celebrate this, the longest day of the year! And now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria...\"\n\nOn cue, Fluttershy's bird choir begins singing in harmony, a spotlight turning to shine on the balcony where the princess would be appearing.\n\n\"Princess Celestia!\" The mayor proudly announces.\n\nThe curtains are pulled quickly pulled aside at the height of the music to reveal...nopony standing there.\n\n'Oh no...'\n\nAfter a long silence, murmurs of confused chatter begin cropping up around the crowd, with ponies wondering where the princess was.\n\n\"Ah, please hold on a moment, I'm sure there is some kind of explanation.\"\n\n\"Ooo! I love guessing games! Is she hiding?!\" Pinkie Pie is heard shouting from somewhere in the crowd, clearly not realizing the seriousness of the situation as Twilight does.\n\nAfter a few moments Rarity emerges onto the balcony where Celestia was supposed to be.\n\n\"She's gone!\" She announces, looking worried.\n\nPonies begin sounding uneasy, worry and concern quickly spreading over the crowd as the mayor attempts to control the situation.\n\nA sudden gasp from Rarity draws everypony's attention to a mysterious dark cloud that has just appeared and is spinning above her. The cloud begins rotating faster as it descends next to the fashionista, eventually coalescing together.\n\n'Oh no! Its...Nightmare Moon!'\n\nThe mysterious cloud solidifies, taking the shape of the mare of darkness herself, her long wings outstretched on either side of her back.\n\nNightmare Moon's coat is a dark blue, almost black, color with a flowing star-filled mane and tail. Her mouth is filled with razor-sharp teeth and her light blue eyes resemble those of a reptile. The Nightmare was easily as tall as the princess, with very curvy features while still retaining a muscular figure. She too was an alicorn, with a long pointy horn protruding from a hole in her helmet.\n\nThe armor she wears is metallic and smooth, resembling something Twilight had seen in one of Canterlot's ancient pony museums. Her large breasts, similar in size and shape as the princess were mostly exposed, leaving very little to the imagination of the few stallions not worryingly eying her teeth. Nightmare Moon appears almost amused as she surveys the shocked crowd below her.\n\n\"Oh my beloved subjects, it has been so long since I've been able to see your precious sun-loving faces.\" Nightmare says with a sinister grin, her voice carrying across the dead silent hall, despite not being amplified at all.\n\nA light hissing noise brings Twilight's attention briefly back down where she notices one of the now terrified mares standing in front of her currently wetting herself, a yellow pool rapidly forming around her legs.\n\n\"Hey!\" Rainbow dash suddenly shouts, flying up from the crowd. \"What did you do with our princess!?\" She demands, looking ready to attack the alicorn.\n\n\"*Chuckle* What? Am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?!\"\n\nRainbow growls, about to bolt at her but is held firmly in place by a lasso being tossed from below.\n\n\"Whoa there, Nelly!\" A heavy country accented pony, likely Applejack, says while holding the angry pegasus.\n\n\"Does my crown no longer count now that I have been imprisoned for a thousand years?\" She sneers, leaning down coming face to face with Rarity who had been standing next to her, clearly terrified. \"Did none of you recall the legends? Did you not see the signs?\" She asks mockingly, delivering a smack to Rarity with her mane.\n\n\"Hey, leave her alone!\" Spike suddenly shouts from behind Twilight, clearly angered from Nightmare Moon's treatment of Rarity.\n\nNightmare Moon disregards Rarity, turning to stare down at Spike the crowd around both him and Twilight clearing room around them. The Nightmare's full attention now on him, Spike suddenly seems much less confident as he tries not to shrink under her fierce glare.\n\n\"I did!\" Twilight interjects, drawing Nightmare Moon's attention. \"And I know who you are too! Y-your...Nightmare Moon!\"\n\n\"Well, well, well somepony who actually knows who I am? If that is indeed the case, you should also know why I am here!\" Nightmare says ominously, giving Twilight a look that sent a shiver up her spine.\n\nTwilight knew that look from somewhere...\n\n\"You're here t-to...*gulp*\"\n\n\"*Chuckle* Remember this day ponies, for it was your last! From this moment forth, the night shall last forever!\" She exclaims, bolts of lightning shooting from her mane as she cackles with laughter.\n\nPonies begin to panic, running from the hall, while bolts of lightning narrowly rain down upon them.\n\n\"Seize her! Only she knows where the princess is!\" The mayor shouts to two pegasi royal guards who had been staring in shock. taking to the air and rushing towards Nightmare Moon, their spears at the ready.\n\n\"Stay back you foals!\" Nightmare Moon commands, her eyes glowing brightly as two large bolts of lightning strike each of them, sending them careening to the ground in a heap.\n\nWith another bought of crazed laughter, Nightmare Moon begins to dissipate, turning to her cloud form. With a grunt, Rainbow is finally able to get loose from Applejack's lasso and give chase after the star-filled cloud as it flies from the building, a rainbow trail flashing above Twilight and Spike. Twilight grabs Spike by his arm and drags him outside, b-lining for the library.\n\n\"Come on! We've got to see if we can find out more about the elements! They could be our only hope if something has happened the princess!'\n\n\n\n\n\nBack at the library, Spike sorts through book after book downstairs, searching quickly for any sign of something related to the 'Elements Of Harmony' Twilight had told him about. She was doing the same on the other side of the room but so far they had found nothing.\n\n'I hope we can find something we can use, that Nightmare Moon is seriously bad news! To be honest, I didn't expect Twilight to be right about this Nightmare Moon thing, but when the mare in the moon disappeared...I just hope Celestia is alright...'\n\nWhen he was hatched by Twilight many years ago, she had been the one to raise him most of the time. But whenever Twilight had to go to school, or something else that would prevent her from being around, Celestia took care of him in her absence. She was like a second mother to him.\n\nHe stopped sorting through books to rub his tired eyes. He and Twilight had been awake since very early this morning and while Twilight was used long bouts of sleeplessness, he was not. Still, he was determined to work through it, Equestria was in danger!\n\n*Slam!*\n\nSpike suddenly finds himself pinned to the floor of the library, a very angry rainbow maned pegasus straddling his chest.\n\n\"You were sure quick to leave us back there! What? Is this the doing another one of your dragon magic spells?! Where is our Princess!?\" She demands.\n\n\"Hey! Get off of my dragon!\" He hears Twilight yell from across the room.\n\n\"Your dragon huh? As if! I know you're in on this with him! He used his freaky dragon magic to turn you into his own personal unicorn sex slave!\"\n\n\"S-sex slave!?\" Twilight shouts blushing hard. \"I-i am not his-\"\n\n\"Rainbow Dash!\" Applejack shouts from the forced open doorway of the library, the rest of the mares they had met today filling in behind her. \"Simmer down! He ain't part of this mess, and she certainly ain't his slave!\"\n\n\"Indeed! In fact, he is quite the gentlestallion.\" Rarity adds, stepping up next to Applejack and giving Spike a quick wink.\n\nRainbow Dash looks back to Spike, clearly still suspicious, but finally gets off of him. He gets up from the floor, rubbing back of his aching head.\n\nApplejack then re-directs her attention to Twilight who was still blushing beet red from Rainbow's comment.\n\n\"Now, I'm sure as ah can be that you ain't part of whats goin on, but you do seem ta know a lot about it. Care to fill us all in?\"\n\nTwilight sighs, clearing her head of some of the rather questionable images that had been going through her head. \n\n\"I have been following the legend of Nightmare Moon, but I was too late to warn the princess in time. From what I've read some mysterious artifacts called the Elements of Harmony are the only things that can stop her, but I don't know what they are, where to find them; I don't even know what they do! \"\n\n\"The Elements of Harmony: A reference guide.\" Pinkie Pie reads off from a bookshelf across the room.\n\n\"What?!\" Twilight shouts, teleporting next to her and grabbing the book off the shelf. \"Where did you find that?!\" Twilight\n\n\"It was under 'E'!\" She sings, bouncing happily around the room as Twilight flips open the book.\n\n\"Oh...\"\n\nAfter a couple moments of silent reading, Twilight looks up from the book a determined expression on her face.\n\n\"Okay, so according to this there are six Elements of Harmony, but only five are known: Kindness, Laughter, Generosity, Honesty, and Loyalty. The sixth is a complete mystery, however. The book says the last known location of the five elements was in the ancient castle of the royal pony sisters, which is located in what is now called The Everfree Forest.\n\n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "//------------------------------//
// Chapter VIII: The Nightmare Begins
// Story: A Soiled Universe
// by Odlaw
//------------------------------//





The library was noticeably more empty now than it had been when Spike went upstairs looking for Twilight. There were now only a few scattered groups of ponies still hanging around, most have already left. All the mares he and Twilight had met today were still there, talking to each other by one of the tables with party snacks. Notably, there was also a small group of stallions, many of which being the few that had whistled or teased Twilight earlier. However, they seemed primarily focused on two other mares standing in the corner of the room, very passionately making out with each other.

One is green with a lighter green mane and the other is a beige color with a pink and purple mane. Both of them appeared to be very drunk and have torn off most of their clothes, leaving only torn scraps of their shirts and their underwear remaining. Spike did his best to not stare, though them being almost naked wasnt helping.

He hoped they didn't get too into it in the library. A similar scenario had occurred at one Lemon Heart's parties a few years back. It was not a very fun mess to clean up at the time.

Still standing on the stairs, Spike could see more of the room at once, and thankfully, it looked like it had not been too messy of a party. Though there was a rather telling series of brown splotches on the floor leading from the punch bowl and over to the front door.

'I wonder what happened there...'

Twilight's suitcase, which appeared to have been left untouched, was still sitting on the small table in the middle of the room. Walking over to the table Spike hefts the suitcase up and onto his right shoulder.

'Better hurry this back upstairs, Twilights will want to get started on that report of hers as soon as possible after all these delays.'

"Hold on a moment darling." He hears Rarity call behind him.

Turning around he sees her waltzing towards him with a rather sultry smirk.

"H-hey." Spike greets with a nervous smile.

"Hello, I feel must apologize for not catching your name earlier today. What was it again?"

"It's uh, S-spike! My name is Spike."

"*Giggle* Well, Spike, I have a little proposition for you, should you be interested."

"A proposition?"

"Yes, I was wondering if you might be so kind as to swing by my boutique sometime tomorrow. I am in great need of help with some measurements that I will be using for a new line of stallion suits, and you-" She pauses, looking him up and down. -"would be perfect."

"Yes!" He shouts, before blushing at his sudden outburst. "Oh, I mean, I'd love to but I-"

"And don't worry about scheduling, I shall be available at any time tomorrow, so feel free to pop in whenever you are ready. I'm well aware you have another get-together planned and I wouldn't recommend passing that up." She explains, giving him a knowing wink.

"O-okay, um, that sounds great."

With a nod, she turns away, her hips swaying hypnotically as she returns to a bunch of ponies she had previously been talking with.

'First Fluttershy invites me to her home, wanting to learn more about me and now Rarity wants me to come over to take some measurements...what is even going on today. Next thing you know Twilight is gonna try to flirt with me or something.'





"Hey Twilight, I'm back with your suitcase," Spike calls up as he opens the door to the upstairs bedroom, the suitcase on his right shoulder blocking his vision of most of the room.

"Hmm? Oh, thank you, Spike, just set it down on the desk over here." He hears Twilight say.

As Spike turns he blushes as he sees Twilight still sitting down at the desk, with a very prominent brown bulge now resting in the seat of her panties. He does his very best to not stare at it. He would probably be helping Twilight write her report, probably until the celebration in a few hours and It would be easier if he wasnt aroused while they did it. Still, based on the size of her load he was a little curious.

"Did you, um...have another accident?" Spike asks as he walks over, Twilight still looking down at a piece of paper as she writes.

"Yea, but I think it had something to do with that punch. I didn't really feel it coming until it was too late. One second I thought it was a just a fart but before I knew it. I just started filling my panties." She explains casually.

'Great, now I'm hard anyway. Damn it Twilight, why must you always say things like that when I'm around? It really doesn't help me get over my whole 'crush on you' problem. I swear if I didn't know you I would think you were doing that on purpose.'

Spike sets the suitcase down on the desk next to her, grabbing the extra chair he had sat in earlier to use as crotch concealment. Using her magic Twilight quickly unzips the suitcase and begins taking out the many books she brought, organizing them into assorted piles on the desk. However, instead of immediately starting up her report, she returns her attention back to the suitcase, lifts two sets of clothes from the ones they had packed.

"Which one of these do you think looks better on me at the Celebration?" Twilight asks, hovering both in front of Spike and turning to look up at him.

She had a strange look in her eyes as if she were trying to analyze every detail on his face.

'What's up with that look Twilight? And since when does she care about what she wears to events?'

Normally Twilight just threw on whatever was available to wear at the moment. Even when meeting with Celestia she usually just throws on some of her casual clothes.

The first outfit was a fairly standard looking black dress suit and skirt, commonly worn by big CEOs and secretaries. Accompanying it was a black, almost lingerie-like, bra with some matching panties. Images of Twilight working as a busty accountant involuntarily flashed through his mind. Strangely enough, he couldn't quite remember her wearing it before.

The other outfit, on the other hand, he had seen her wear many times before. It was just a simple light purple T-shirt with some blue jean shorts. The shirt had her cutie mark proudly display over the chest, and while it wasnt very tight fitting, the hem was a bit high, usually enough to see a bit of her waist. No bra was presented to go along with it but there was a pair of simple pink panties. Nothing particularly provocative about it and was likely one of the more modest outfits she owned. He could remember the many bathroom-break free study sessions he had seen that outfit go through over the years.

"Well...um, I guess that one is pretty nice." He says pointing to the t-shirt and jeans.

She doesn't really respond at first, only studying his expression, before sighing.

"Thank you, Spike. It's for when we leave for the celebration as I'm pretty sure I can't get away with just wiping a little bit this time." She says putting the two outfits back into the suitcase and grabbing a book to start on her report.

"Yea..." Spike says, still, a bit unnerved by the way she had seemed to study him when she asked.

She tended to only look like that at when she was watching for something very specific in an experiment. Still, he had to agree, there was no way she could get away with just wiping this time around. A shower would definitely be needed, the smell was pretty strong.





Twilight leans on the bathroom sink, staring back at herself in the mirror. She had just finished taking a shower and is wearing the outfit Spike had picked out for her. She had just barely been able to finish writing her report for the princess and wasn't very proud of it, but hopefully, it would be enough to convince her of the seriousness of the situation. As she was writing it she had hoped to find more information about the legend itself or the Elements Of Harmony used to banish Nightmare Moon but couldn't find anything. At the moment, however, something else was on her mind which had been distracting her since it had popped into her head. Spike.

Since the thought had crossed her mind earlier, she had been unable to get the ludicrous idea of Spike being into her out of her head. Making him choose between the two outfits she had brought along had meant to have been some kind of test, but she wasnt really sure what she was looking for. It wasnt every day she was tasked with figuring out if a stallion was secretly attracted to her much less Spike, a dragon. With an exasperated sigh, she pushes the thoughts away.

Cleaning up had been fairly simple thanks to the consistency of her mess. Despite the amount of poop in her panties, most of it had been pretty solid, making it pretty easy to dispose of. Still, the smell would have most likely have lingered regardless of how well she wiped, so a shower had been necessary. While disposing of the smell of urine with a spell was fairly easy, poop tended to be a bit more complicated and often it was much easier to just take a shower. She didn't mind much though, it made her feel refreshed and clean.

Her uniform and soiled panties were left in a pile by the shower. Once the celebration was over and she had convinced the princess, she would have to find out what kind of laundry machine this place had, if any at all. Unlike Canterlot, where every house was built with one pre-installed, rural towns were likely to be less well equipped.

Twilight was about to exit the bathroom when she feels the familiar sensation of a full bladder. With an annoyed sigh, she pulls down her shorts and panties and sits on what was probably the only toilet in the house. She relaxes her bladder muscles, allowing the entire day's worth of urine to begin streaming down, into the toilet bowl below. If she was honest, she kinda wished she had felt the urge before she had changed.

'It would have been nice to wet my old school uniform, it could have brought back some old memories from senior year at Celestia's school...'

Then again, it was probably for the best. It could have been embarrassing if she felt the urge while at the celebration or in front of the princess, she didn't remember seeing any bathrooms in the town hall.





Exiting from the bathroom, Twilight finds Spike standing by the window, looking puzzled at something outside.

"What is it, Spike?" Twilight asks.

"Huh? Oh, hey, you look pretty good in that." He says, turning to look at her briefly before looking back out the window.

She blushes, "Oh um...thanks."

"Okay, correct me if I'm wrong, but hasn't the moon always have the outline of a pony on it?" He asks.

"As far as I can remember," Twilight says, curious what he was getting at.

"Well, it's not there anymore."

"What?!" Twilight exclaims, running over to look out the window.

Sure enough, the moon was completely barren, no sign of the 'Mare In The Moon' anywhere. Twilight's eyes suddenly widen in realization.

'It's happening already!'

Wasting no more time, she dashes to her desk and grabs her report. Celestia wouldn't be at her palace in Canterlot, so she wouldn't receive anything sent by Spike's dragon fire. She would have to find her at town hall!

"Come on Spike! We have to go, before its too late!"





Twilight rushes through the large doors of Town Hall, with Spike following along right behind her. They arrive just as the celebration is about to begin, with the last of the decorations and food being taken care of. A large crowd of ponies fills most of the hall, but none appear aware of the change to the moon.

'Why doesn't anypony ever look up at the night sky anymore?!' Twilight mentally fumes.

As she attempts to force her way through the crowd of ponies, a hush washes over the packed room as the town mayor appears behind a pedestal, about to start her celebration speech.

"Fillies and gentlecolts! As mayor of Ponyville, it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Sun Celebration!"

Cheers fill the room from the many ponies excited to see their beloved princess raising the sun. Twilight just hoped that nothing happened before she could talk to the princess. On the balconies above, she could see Rarity performing a few last-minute checks on the decorations. On her left, Fluttershy appears to be preparing her bird choir to provide the accompanying music for the Princess's appearance. She had put back on her hoodie and was clearly doing her best not to stand out, despite flying above the crowd and conducting the music. The mayor continues her speech

"In just a few moments, our town will witness the magic of the sunrise, and celebrate this, the longest day of the year! And now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria..."

On cue, Fluttershy's bird choir begins singing in harmony, a spotlight turning to shine on the balcony where the princess would be appearing.

"Princess Celestia!" The mayor proudly announces.

The curtains are pulled quickly pulled aside at the height of the music to reveal...nopony standing there.

'Oh no...'

After a long silence, murmurs of confused chatter begin cropping up around the crowd, with ponies wondering where the princess was.

"Ah, please hold on a moment, I'm sure there is some kind of explanation."

"Ooo! I love guessing games! Is she hiding?!" Pinkie Pie is heard shouting from somewhere in the crowd, clearly not realizing the seriousness of the situation as Twilight does.

After a few moments Rarity emerges onto the balcony where Celestia was supposed to be.

"She's gone!" She announces, looking worried.

Ponies begin sounding uneasy, worry and concern quickly spreading over the crowd as the mayor attempts to control the situation.

A sudden gasp from Rarity draws everypony's attention to a mysterious dark cloud that has just appeared and is spinning above her. The cloud begins rotating faster as it descends next to the fashionista, eventually coalescing together.

'Oh no! Its...Nightmare Moon!'

The mysterious cloud solidifies, taking the shape of the mare of darkness herself, her long wings outstretched on either side of her back.

Nightmare Moon's coat is a dark blue, almost black, color with a flowing star-filled mane and tail. Her mouth is filled with razor-sharp teeth and her light blue eyes resemble those of a reptile. The Nightmare was easily as tall as the princess, with very curvy features while still retaining a muscular figure. She too was an alicorn, with a long pointy horn protruding from a hole in her helmet.

The armor she wears is metallic and smooth, resembling something Twilight had seen in one of Canterlot's ancient pony museums. Her large breasts, similar in size and shape as the princess were mostly exposed, leaving very little to the imagination of the few stallions not worryingly eying her teeth. Nightmare Moon appears almost amused as she surveys the shocked crowd below her.

"Oh my beloved subjects, it has been so long since I've been able to see your precious sun-loving faces." Nightmare says with a sinister grin, her voice carrying across the dead silent hall, despite not being amplified at all.

A light hissing noise brings Twilight's attention briefly back down where she notices one of the now terrified mares standing in front of her currently wetting herself, a yellow pool rapidly forming around her legs.

"Hey!" Rainbow dash suddenly shouts, flying up from the crowd. "What did you do with our princess!?" She demands, looking ready to attack the alicorn.

"*Chuckle* What? Am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?!"

Rainbow growls, about to bolt at her but is held firmly in place by a lasso being tossed from below.

"Whoa there, Nelly!" A heavy country accented pony, likely Applejack, says while holding the angry pegasus.

"Does my crown no longer count now that I have been imprisoned for a thousand years?" She sneers, leaning down coming face to face with Rarity who had been standing next to her, clearly terrified. "Did none of you recall the legends? Did you not see the signs?" She asks mockingly, delivering a smack to Rarity with her mane.

"Hey, leave her alone!" Spike suddenly shouts from behind Twilight, clearly angered from Nightmare Moon's treatment of Rarity.

Nightmare Moon disregards Rarity, turning to stare down at Spike the crowd around both him and Twilight clearing room around them. The Nightmare's full attention now on him, Spike suddenly seems much less confident as he tries not to shrink under her fierce glare.

"I did!" Twilight interjects, drawing Nightmare Moon's attention. "And I know who you are too! Y-your...Nightmare Moon!"

"Well, well, well somepony who actually knows who I am? If that is indeed the case, you should also know why I am here!" Nightmare says ominously, giving Twilight a look that sent a shiver up her spine.

Twilight knew that look from somewhere...

"You're here t-to...*gulp*"

"*Chuckle* Remember this day ponies, for it was your last! From this moment forth, the night shall last forever!" She exclaims, bolts of lightning shooting from her mane as she cackles with laughter.

Ponies begin to panic, running from the hall, while bolts of lightning narrowly rain down upon them.

"Seize her! Only she knows where the princess is!" The mayor shouts to two pegasi royal guards who had been staring in shock. taking to the air and rushing towards Nightmare Moon, their spears at the ready.

"Stay back you foals!" Nightmare Moon commands, her eyes glowing brightly as two large bolts of lightning strike each of them, sending them careening to the ground in a heap.

With another bought of crazed laughter, Nightmare Moon begins to dissipate, turning to her cloud form. With a grunt, Rainbow is finally able to get loose from Applejack's lasso and give chase after the star-filled cloud as it flies from the building, a rainbow trail flashing above Twilight and Spike. Twilight grabs Spike by his arm and drags him outside, b-lining for the library.

"Come on! We've got to see if we can find out more about the elements! They could be our only hope if something has happened the princess!'





Back at the library, Spike sorts through book after book downstairs, searching quickly for any sign of something related to the 'Elements Of Harmony' Twilight had told him about. She was doing the same on the other side of the room but so far they had found nothing.

'I hope we can find something we can use, that Nightmare Moon is seriously bad news! To be honest, I didn't expect Twilight to be right about this Nightmare Moon thing, but when the mare in the moon disappeared...I just hope Celestia is alright...'

When he was hatched by Twilight many years ago, she had been the one to raise him most of the time. But whenever Twilight had to go to school, or something else that would prevent her from being around, Celestia took care of him in her absence. She was like a second mother to him.

He stopped sorting through books to rub his tired eyes. He and Twilight had been awake since very early this morning and while Twilight was used long bouts of sleeplessness, he was not. Still, he was determined to work through it, Equestria was in danger!

*Slam!*

Spike suddenly finds himself pinned to the floor of the library, a very angry rainbow maned pegasus straddling his chest.

"You were sure quick to leave us back there! What? Is this the doing another one of your dragon magic spells?! Where is our Princess!?" She demands.

"Hey! Get off of my dragon!" He hears Twilight yell from across the room.

"Your dragon huh? As if! I know you're in on this with him! He used his freaky dragon magic to turn you into his own personal unicorn sex slave!"

"S-sex slave!?" Twilight shouts blushing hard. "I-i am not his-"

"Rainbow Dash!" Applejack shouts from the forced open doorway of the library, the rest of the mares they had met today filling in behind her. "Simmer down! He ain't part of this mess, and she certainly ain't his slave!"

"Indeed! In fact, he is quite the gentlestallion." Rarity adds, stepping up next to Applejack and giving Spike a quick wink.

Rainbow Dash looks back to Spike, clearly still suspicious, but finally gets off of him. He gets up from the floor, rubbing back of his aching head.

Applejack then re-directs her attention to Twilight who was still blushing beet red from Rainbow's comment.

"Now, I'm sure as ah can be that you ain't part of whats goin on, but you do seem ta know a lot about it. Care to fill us all in?"

Twilight sighs, clearing her head of some of the rather questionable images that had been going through her head.

"I have been following the legend of Nightmare Moon, but I was too late to warn the princess in time. From what I've read some mysterious artifacts called the Elements of Harmony are the only things that can stop her, but I don't know what they are, where to find them; I don't even know what they do! "

"The Elements of Harmony: A reference guide." Pinkie Pie reads off from a bookshelf across the room.

"What?!" Twilight shouts, teleporting next to her and grabbing the book off the shelf. "Where did you find that?!" Twilight

"It was under 'E'!" She sings, bouncing happily around the room as Twilight flips open the book.

"Oh..."

After a couple moments of silent reading, Twilight looks up from the book a determined expression on her face.

"Okay, so according to this there are six Elements of Harmony, but only five are known: Kindness, Laughter, Generosity, Honesty, and Loyalty. The sixth is a complete mystery, however. The book says the last known location of the five elements was in the ancient castle of the royal pony sisters, which is located in what is now called The Everfree Forest.



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