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She couldn't believe the Princess didn't believe her! Not only that but in her reply, she thought it was a good time to inexplicably have Twilight leave Canterlot to help oversee the Summer Sun Celebration in Ponyville tomorrow. Why?! Twilight had no idea, she was fairly certain the Princess even had ponies who's sole job it was to organize this kind of event.\n\n'Ugh, we don't have time for this! I need to get some more research done on Nightmare Moon! Maybe once I can get a full-fledged report written on the subject the Princess will take it more seriously...'\n\nUnfortunately, she would likely have very little time at all to get much done. Not only was she to make sure that the entire celebration went off without a hitch but she was also to 'make some new friends'. She knew the Princess saw some great importance in her finding new friends but Twilight could never understand why. The only bright side was that the Princess was having her stay in the town's library during her stay. While this would be nice, the books stored there were probably very old and outdated editions of the books she already had. The fact that it was a public library meant she would probably have frequent visitors, distracting her.\n\n'Other ponies just get in the way or clog up my schedules! I don't see why I should have to waste time dealing with 'befriending' more of them when I could be studying!' She sighs, deciding not to work herself up and think about something else\n\nTwilight takes a break from looking out the window and inspects train car she was seated on. Despite the upcoming celebration in Ponyville, her train car was completely vacant of other ponies. Not that she minded much though. Spike lay across from her, sleeping across a few empty seats, snoring pretty loudly, creating tiny puffs of smoke from his nostrils.\n\n'I sure hope that doesn't set some kind of fire alarm or something'\n\nTwilight was still wearing the same tight uniform from earlier that day but has since changed her soiled panties. She had almost left the house without doing so but thankfully Spike reminded her of her just as she was walking out the door. She had quickly changed into a pair of simple white cotton panties. At that point, she had gotten worried about being late for the train so she didn't wipe as well as she probably should have. She could feel a slight stickiness between her cheeks but the smell wasnt strong enough for her to be worrying about it.\n\nTwilight blushes, imagining a situation where she hadn't been reminded by Spike. She pictured herself stepping into a very crowded train, her heavy load still resting in her obviously pooped panties. Surely some pervy stallion would sneak his way behind her, and slip his hand down her—\n\n*Tooot! Tooot!* The train suddenly whistles, startling Twilight, with a gasp, from her, quickly accelerating fantasy.\n\n'Ah, we're almost there.' She takes a deep breath, recovering from the unexpected scare and trying to ignore the small wet spot between her legs. 'I'd better wake up Spike, I want to make it to that library as soon as possible.'\n\n\n\n\n\n\"Huh, its a lot different than Canterlot that's for sure\" Spike muses, looking around the comparatively tiny train station that sat on the edge Ponyville.\n\nHe was carrying two rather heavy suitcases that Twilight had brought along for the trip. He didn't mind the weight much though. Ever since he turned eighteen, his strength had grown dramatically and he was now more fit than most stallions his age. He had broad shoulders and toned muscles visible underneath his scaley hide. He never even ate all that healthily or exercised at all, so he just chalked it up to his draconic heritage.\n\nNearby Twilight was bent over, inspecting a town map posted on the wall of the station. This gave him quite the view of her panty-clad rear but he did his best to not stare...much.\n\n\"S-so uh, where are we headed?\" Spike asks, putting down the suitcases and scratching the back of his head.\n\n\"To the Golden Oaks Library.\" She says \"According to this map here Its located near the center of the town. Based on my calculations the quickest route is that way,\" She points down one of the four dirt roads leading away from the station.\n\n\n\n\n\nSpike didn't really know how to feel. In Canterlot, most nobles and rich ponies would always treat him like a savage animal, glaring at him from across a room with a disgusted expression on their faces. He just adapted to it over time and learned to ignore their snobbish attitudes. He had been expecting it to be easier for him in Ponyville but he was not expecting the kind of attention was getting now. Most of the stallions that saw him were either in awe or were downright scared of him. The sparse few who did seem angered by his appearance probably did so due how their wifes and marefriends stared at him.\n\nHe had received a number of sly winks and dreamy bedroom eyes from many of the mares they passed on their way through town. He was fairly certain that one orange mare, in particular, had been bending over in a little more than necessary just to pick up a carrot she accidentaly dropped after spotting him. He definitely wasnt complaining about the change, however jarring that it was. Twilight didn't seem to notice any of this though, being far too focused on navigating them towards the town's library as fast as physically possible.\n\nAs they walk through the town's bustling marketplace, Spike takes note of some of the miscellaneous shops and stands scattered around. Most were selling produce or other commonly needed goods but some offered nick nacks or traded for miscellaneous items. One of the seemingly most popular among them was a small tent with a sign over the entrance that read: 'The Tented Tights'. From the size of the line stretching from the entrance, he would definitely have to come by and see what was being sold there when he had some free time.\n\nOnly once had Twilight stopped and it was when they were passing a small shop strangely named 'Quills And Sofas'. She seemed to give it a long, hard look before swiftly marking its location on a map she had been drawing as they searched.\n\n'Something tells me they are gonna get a lot of business while she is here' He chuckles to himself, remembering the last time they had gone shopping for quills in Canterlot and practically ran the city dry of quills.\n\n\n\n\n\nUpon arriving at the tree that was apparently the Ponyville library, Twilight had been visibly disappointed at its size. Spike wasnt feeling very adamant about it either. They were both pleasantly surprised when Twilight opened the locked front door and found it to be much bigger on the inside.\n\n\"Woah, that's pretty trippy,\" Spike says, poking his head back out in the front door.\n\n\"This. Is. Fascinating! I had no idea magically grown tree houses could be enchanted like this!\" Twilight gushes, almost sprinting around the inside of the library, inspecting everything.\n\nSpike set the stack of books he had been carrying down on a small table in the middle of the room. The walls were almost nothing but bookcases, all of which were filled with various books of different shapes and sizes. He decides to take a look around while Twilight analyzed the tree's magic.\n\nIt was surprisingly homey for a small town library. It had a small kitchen attached to the main room through another smaller but equally packed bookshelf-lined room. The upstairs area primarily dominated by a single master bedroom with a connecting bathroom and balcony that overlooked the area in front of the library.\n\nAs he searched around the library something was becoming more and more apparent to him, the lack of another bed. Upon telling Twilight this she looked puzzled by his comment.\n\n\"Well, I was just going to have us share the master bed while we are here but If it bothers you—\"\n\n\"Nope, doesn't bother me at all! Don't worry about it!\" He interrupts abruptly, surprised. They hadn't slept in the same bed together in a very long time, not since she still lived with her parents when he was very young.\n\n\"Of course Spike.\" She says, confused but oblivious to why he Spike was so flustered. \"Just try to tone down the snoring if possible, you are pretty loud and I don't want to suffocate in your smoke.\"\n\n\"Fair enough.\" He shrugs, suddenly looking forward to the night before the celebration.\n\n'That is if I can get any sleep with you snuggled up next to me...'\n\n\"Anyway, let's go, Spike. I want to get this overseers checklist finished as soon as possible so I have time to do some research before the celebration starts.\" With that, they set out on they set out for their first item on the list. The banquet preparations.\n\n\n\n\n\nAs they pass through a different side of town Spike looks over to his left to see a strange looking building that resembled a cake more than a store or a home. Looking down to the front door he notices a very pink mare with a bizarrely poofy mane watching them from the open top half of the door. She excitedly bounces in place with a somewhat unnervingly large smile. Suddenly, she ducks down below the door and doesn't re-appear.\n\n\"Creepy...\" Spike murmurs to himself, still staring at the doorway.\n\n\"Whats creepy?\" A hyper high pitched voice suddenly shouts from his right, nearly giving him an actual heart attack and causing Twilight to yelp and quickly turn around.\n\n\"Opsies didn't mean ta scare ya, sorry about that!\" The same pink mare from the odd building says, now standing next to him.\n\nShe wears a bright white cropped t-shirt with light blue sleeves over her large, likely D-cup breasts. She also wore some probably too small jean shorts that hugged her wide hips and large but shapely butt.\n\n\"Oh, um...hello, my name Twilight Sparkle, is there ah...something you need?\" Twilight asks, unsure about the bubbly mare.\n\n\"Are you two moving into town today?!\" She asks excitedly, a glint in her eye.\n\n\"Well, I don't know about moving in but we will be staying here for—\"\n\nThe mare interrupts her sentence with a sudden gasp, that fills her whole body with air before she vanishes into thin air leaving a trail of pink smoke leading off in another direction. Both Twilight and Spike share a mutual look of pure bewilderment.\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\"Here we are, Sweet Apple Acers,\" Spike reads from the checklist as they walk through the front gate of the farm going by the same name.\n\n\"Hmm, I suppose we should head up the farmhouse, hopefully, we can get this done as quickly as possible,\" Twilight says, as both of them head up the path towards the farmhouse. Twilight had been just about to knock on the door when a heavily country-accented voice calls out from behind them.\n\n\"Y'all lookin for somepony?\"\n\nThey turn around to see an orange mare with a blond mane and tail. Her hands resting on her hips, a trio of apples, likely her cutie mark, on each hip. She had a red shirt tied tightly around her chest just barely covering her large C-cup breasts with her nipples visibly poking through the fabric. This exposed most of her muscular body with only a pair of trimmed and unzipped, daisy dukes, covering her crotch. Spike was having a hard time keeping his eyes under control.\n\n'Come on, hold it together!' Spike thinks to himself\n\n\"Oh, hello there. My name is Twilight Sparkle and-\"\n\n\"Well, howdy do Twilight,\" The mare interrupts, reaching out and shaking Twilight hand forcefully. \"A pleasure making yer acquaintance, the names Applejack. We always here at Sweet Apple Acers are always lookin forward to meetin some new friends!\" Applejack says enthusiastically, finally letting go of Twilights hand which keeps moving up and down until she is able to stop it with her other hand.\n\nShe turns and shakes Spike's limp hand, noticing, but not caring about his obvious staring. In fact, after quickly looking him up and down she seems to jut her chest out slightly.\n\n\"So, what can I do ya for?\" Applejack asks turning back to Twilight who seemed to not notice their brief exchange.\n\n\"Well, we are here to check up on preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration. Is your family going to be providing the food?\"\n\n\"We sure as sugar are! Would you care to sample some of it?\" Applejack offers.\n\n\"Er...well I suppose, as long as it doesn't take too long.\" Twilight replies.\n\n\"Alrighty then! Come follow me, I'll show ya where we have it prepared.\" She says, turning and leading them towards the barn.\n\nAs they follow the country mare Spike can't help but notice the old brown stain on the seat of the mare's shorts, likely evidence of some of her longer work days in the field.\n\n\n\n\n\n\"Ugh, I ate way too much pie.\" A bloated Twilight groans, following Spike through town who now carried the checklist.\n\nJust about the moment, Applejack had got them seated in the barn, she had rung a triangle, calling a number of her family members, all carrying various different apple-related food items, from nowhere. Twilight had tried to turn down the piles of food but eventually gave in.\n\nSpike, by comparison, felt nice and full, he was able to digest solid gemstone so a bunch of apples didn't make much of a dent. He did feel pretty sorry for Twilight though. He looks down at the list for the next pony they were tasked to find.\n\n\"Hmm, apparently a pegasus pony by the name of Rainbow Dash is supposed to be clearing the clouds for the celebration,\" He says, looking up into the still very cloudy sky.\n\n\"Hmph, well she clearly isn't doing a very good job now is she?\" Twilight remarks.\n\n*Slam!* \"Oof!\"\n\nSpike whirls around at the sound to see Twilight and a light blue mare with a rainbow colored mane and tail lying in a heap in what he was fairly certain was a random mud puddle.\n\n'That's probably her then...'\n\nTwilight groans from underneath the mare as she gets up, shaking the mud from her wings. She wears a pair of grey sports shorts and a dark blue sports bra over her relatively flat chest. She was pretty toned and fit but not quite as muscular as Applejack. She lightly chuckles to herself as she notices Twilight getting up from the puddle covered with mud.\n\n\"Heh, um, Here, let me help you.\" She says still chuckling as she takes to the air. She rushes off to one of the nearby grey clouds and grabs it with her wings, bringing directly above Twilight.\n\nAs soon as Twilight realizes what the mare is about to do she moves to object but is cut off as entire clouds worth of rain pours down on her. The pegasus peeks over the cloud and has to try hard to keep herself from having a laughing fit at Twilight's state. While all the mud had been cleanly washed away but her mane and tail now lay flat and her clothes were completely soaked through. Spike blushed hard as Twilight turns away from him, exposing her rear as she looks up to give the rainbow-haired mare an irritated glare.\n\nHer panties had to be thoroughly soaked, making them almost completely transparent in certain areas. He could easily see her marehood through the fabric along with a slightly brown streak following along her crack.\n\n\"Oops, hehe, I guess I overdid it a bit,\" She says, laughing under her breath. \"Here, how about this!\"\n\nShe suddenly swoops down from the cloud towards Twilight who raises her arms to brace for the inevitable impact. She is taken by surprise as the pegasus whips by her and begins flying in tight circles around her, creating a miniature tornado with Twilight at its center. \n\nOnce satisfied she flys out and lands next to Spike, arms crossed and a confident smirk on her face.\n\n\"No, no, don't thank me! You're quite welcome.\" She boasts as the dust settles.\n\nTwilight's mane and are tail look as if they both been inflated like a balloon and then scrambled like an egg.\n\n\"Pft...Ahahaha!\" The pegasus collapses to the ground, holding her stomach with her arms as she laughs at Twilight's ridiculous looking mane.\n\nSpike chuckles for a moment but instantly stops upon receiving a deadly glare from Twilight. \n\n\"Your Rainbow Dash?\" Twilight asks, an icy tone in her voice. Standing up proudly and with a cocky smirk the more nods.\n\n\"The one and only! Why? You heard of me?\" Rainbow asks flying up to Twilight.\n\n\"I heard that you were supposed to be clearing the sky for the celebration.\" Twilight retorts, tired of her games. Calming herself down she lets out a stressed sigh.\n\n\"My name is Twilight Sparkle and the Princess has sent me to check on the weather.\" She calls up to Rainbow Dash who is reclined atop a cloud.\n\n\"Yea, yea, that'll be no problem, I'll do it once I finish practicing,\" Rainbow explains.\n\n\"Practicing? Practicing for what?\" Twilight asks.\n\n\"The Wonderbolts!\" Rainbow exclaims pointing to a nearby poster on the side of a house that depicts a heroicly posed Wonderbolt mare wearing a very tight fitting suit. \"They are going to be having a show tomorrow morning for the celebration so I'm gonna show em my stuff!\" Rainbow excitedly shouts, doing a flip in the air.\n\nTwilight scoffs. \"The wonderbolts?\n\n\"Yup!\"\n\n\"The most talented flyers in all of Equestria?\"\n\n\"Ahuh, that's them!\"\n\n\"Oh please, they would never let in some lazy pegasus who cant keep the sky clear for one measly day.\" \n\n\"Hey! I could clear the whole sky in ten seconds flat!\"\n\n\"Oh really?\" Twilight says doubtfully. \"Prove it.\"\n\nRainbow instantly shoots from her cloud, dashing from cloud to cloud in less, clearing each one in less than a second. As Twilight begins counting down but trails off, her jaw hanging open as entire sections of the sky are cleared almost instantly.\n\nTwilight and Spike both stand there in awe at the now empty sky that had been full of clouds just moments ago.\n\n\"Heh, you should see the looks on your faces. Your a laugh Twilight Sparkle, I can wait to hang out some more!\" Before Twilight can object the speedy pegasus darts off to perform more tricks and stunts high in the air. \n\n\"Wow, she's amazing,\" Spike says. Twilight rolls her eyes.\n\n\"Whatever, come on Spike we need to keep going. Who is next?\" She asks\n\nSpike looks down the checklist.\n\n\"Next up is the mare in charge of decorations, according to this she should be down in the town hall where the celebration will be held. She is a unicorn named Rarity.\"\n\n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "//------------------------------//
// Chapter V: New In Town Part 1
// Story: A Soiled Universe
// by Odlaw
//------------------------------//





Twilight stares angrily out of a train window, watching as green hill after green hill roll by and the beautiful waterfalls of Canterlot grow ever distant. She couldn't believe the Princess didn't believe her! Not only that but in her reply, she thought it was a good time to inexplicably have Twilight leave Canterlot to help oversee the Summer Sun Celebration in Ponyville tomorrow. Why?! Twilight had no idea, she was fairly certain the Princess even had ponies who's sole job it was to organize this kind of event.

'Ugh, we don't have time for this! I need to get some more research done on Nightmare Moon! Maybe once I can get a full-fledged report written on the subject the Princess will take it more seriously...'

Unfortunately, she would likely have very little time at all to get much done. Not only was she to make sure that the entire celebration went off without a hitch but she was also to 'make some new friends'. She knew the Princess saw some great importance in her finding new friends but Twilight could never understand why. The only bright side was that the Princess was having her stay in the town's library during her stay. While this would be nice, the books stored there were probably very old and outdated editions of the books she already had. The fact that it was a public library meant she would probably have frequent visitors, distracting her.

'Other ponies just get in the way or clog up my schedules! I don't see why I should have to waste time dealing with 'befriending' more of them when I could be studying!' She sighs, deciding not to work herself up and think about something else

Twilight takes a break from looking out the window and inspects train car she was seated on. Despite the upcoming celebration in Ponyville, her train car was completely vacant of other ponies. Not that she minded much though. Spike lay across from her, sleeping across a few empty seats, snoring pretty loudly, creating tiny puffs of smoke from his nostrils.

'I sure hope that doesn't set some kind of fire alarm or something'

Twilight was still wearing the same tight uniform from earlier that day but has since changed her soiled panties. She had almost left the house without doing so but thankfully Spike reminded her of her just as she was walking out the door. She had quickly changed into a pair of simple white cotton panties. At that point, she had gotten worried about being late for the train so she didn't wipe as well as she probably should have. She could feel a slight stickiness between her cheeks but the smell wasnt strong enough for her to be worrying about it.

Twilight blushes, imagining a situation where she hadn't been reminded by Spike. She pictured herself stepping into a very crowded train, her heavy load still resting in her obviously pooped panties. Surely some pervy stallion would sneak his way behind her, and slip his hand down her—

*Tooot! Tooot!* The train suddenly whistles, startling Twilight, with a gasp, from her, quickly accelerating fantasy.

'Ah, we're almost there.' She takes a deep breath, recovering from the unexpected scare and trying to ignore the small wet spot between her legs. 'I'd better wake up Spike, I want to make it to that library as soon as possible.'





"Huh, its a lot different than Canterlot that's for sure" Spike muses, looking around the comparatively tiny train station that sat on the edge Ponyville.

He was carrying two rather heavy suitcases that Twilight had brought along for the trip. He didn't mind the weight much though. Ever since he turned eighteen, his strength had grown dramatically and he was now more fit than most stallions his age. He had broad shoulders and toned muscles visible underneath his scaley hide. He never even ate all that healthily or exercised at all, so he just chalked it up to his draconic heritage.

Nearby Twilight was bent over, inspecting a town map posted on the wall of the station. This gave him quite the view of her panty-clad rear but he did his best to not stare...much.

"S-so uh, where are we headed?" Spike asks, putting down the suitcases and scratching the back of his head.

"To the Golden Oaks Library." She says "According to this map here Its located near the center of the town. Based on my calculations the quickest route is that way," She points down one of the four dirt roads leading away from the station.





Spike didn't really know how to feel. In Canterlot, most nobles and rich ponies would always treat him like a savage animal, glaring at him from across a room with a disgusted expression on their faces. He just adapted to it over time and learned to ignore their snobbish attitudes. He had been expecting it to be easier for him in Ponyville but he was not expecting the kind of attention was getting now. Most of the stallions that saw him were either in awe or were downright scared of him. The sparse few who did seem angered by his appearance probably did so due how their wifes and marefriends stared at him.

He had received a number of sly winks and dreamy bedroom eyes from many of the mares they passed on their way through town. He was fairly certain that one orange mare, in particular, had been bending over in a little more than necessary just to pick up a carrot she accidentaly dropped after spotting him. He definitely wasnt complaining about the change, however jarring that it was. Twilight didn't seem to notice any of this though, being far too focused on navigating them towards the town's library as fast as physically possible.

As they walk through the town's bustling marketplace, Spike takes note of some of the miscellaneous shops and stands scattered around. Most were selling produce or other commonly needed goods but some offered nick nacks or traded for miscellaneous items. One of the seemingly most popular among them was a small tent with a sign over the entrance that read: 'The Tented Tights'. From the size of the line stretching from the entrance, he would definitely have to come by and see what was being sold there when he had some free time.

Only once had Twilight stopped and it was when they were passing a small shop strangely named 'Quills And Sofas'. She seemed to give it a long, hard look before swiftly marking its location on a map she had been drawing as they searched.

'Something tells me they are gonna get a lot of business while she is here' He chuckles to himself, remembering the last time they had gone shopping for quills in Canterlot and practically ran the city dry of quills.





Upon arriving at the tree that was apparently the Ponyville library, Twilight had been visibly disappointed at its size. Spike wasnt feeling very adamant about it either. They were both pleasantly surprised when Twilight opened the locked front door and found it to be much bigger on the inside.

"Woah, that's pretty trippy," Spike says, poking his head back out in the front door.

"This. Is. Fascinating! I had no idea magically grown tree houses could be enchanted like this!" Twilight gushes, almost sprinting around the inside of the library, inspecting everything.

Spike set the stack of books he had been carrying down on a small table in the middle of the room. The walls were almost nothing but bookcases, all of which were filled with various books of different shapes and sizes. He decides to take a look around while Twilight analyzed the tree's magic.

It was surprisingly homey for a small town library. It had a small kitchen attached to the main room through another smaller but equally packed bookshelf-lined room. The upstairs area primarily dominated by a single master bedroom with a connecting bathroom and balcony that overlooked the area in front of the library.

As he searched around the library something was becoming more and more apparent to him, the lack of another bed. Upon telling Twilight this she looked puzzled by his comment.

"Well, I was just going to have us share the master bed while we are here but If it bothers you—"

"Nope, doesn't bother me at all! Don't worry about it!" He interrupts abruptly, surprised. They hadn't slept in the same bed together in a very long time, not since she still lived with her parents when he was very young.

"Of course Spike." She says, confused but oblivious to why he Spike was so flustered. "Just try to tone down the snoring if possible, you are pretty loud and I don't want to suffocate in your smoke."

"Fair enough." He shrugs, suddenly looking forward to the night before the celebration.

'That is if I can get any sleep with you snuggled up next to me...'

"Anyway, let's go, Spike. I want to get this overseers checklist finished as soon as possible so I have time to do some research before the celebration starts." With that, they set out on they set out for their first item on the list. The banquet preparations.





As they pass through a different side of town Spike looks over to his left to see a strange looking building that resembled a cake more than a store or a home. Looking down to the front door he notices a very pink mare with a bizarrely poofy mane watching them from the open top half of the door. She excitedly bounces in place with a somewhat unnervingly large smile. Suddenly, she ducks down below the door and doesn't re-appear.

"Creepy..." Spike murmurs to himself, still staring at the doorway.

"Whats creepy?" A hyper high pitched voice suddenly shouts from his right, nearly giving him an actual heart attack and causing Twilight to yelp and quickly turn around.

"Opsies didn't mean ta scare ya, sorry about that!" The same pink mare from the odd building says, now standing next to him.

She wears a bright white cropped t-shirt with light blue sleeves over her large, likely D-cup breasts. She also wore some probably too small jean shorts that hugged her wide hips and large but shapely butt.

"Oh, um...hello, my name Twilight Sparkle, is there ah...something you need?" Twilight asks, unsure about the bubbly mare.

"Are you two moving into town today?!" She asks excitedly, a glint in her eye.

"Well, I don't know about moving in but we will be staying here for—"

The mare interrupts her sentence with a sudden gasp, that fills her whole body with air before she vanishes into thin air leaving a trail of pink smoke leading off in another direction. Both Twilight and Spike share a mutual look of pure bewilderment.






"Here we are, Sweet Apple Acers," Spike reads from the checklist as they walk through the front gate of the farm going by the same name.

"Hmm, I suppose we should head up the farmhouse, hopefully, we can get this done as quickly as possible," Twilight says, as both of them head up the path towards the farmhouse. Twilight had been just about to knock on the door when a heavily country-accented voice calls out from behind them.

"Y'all lookin for somepony?"

They turn around to see an orange mare with a blond mane and tail. Her hands resting on her hips, a trio of apples, likely her cutie mark, on each hip. She had a red shirt tied tightly around her chest just barely covering her large C-cup breasts with her nipples visibly poking through the fabric. This exposed most of her muscular body with only a pair of trimmed and unzipped, daisy dukes, covering her crotch. Spike was having a hard time keeping his eyes under control.

'Come on, hold it together!' Spike thinks to himself

"Oh, hello there.  My name is Twilight Sparkle and-"

"Well, howdy do Twilight," The mare interrupts, reaching out and shaking Twilight hand forcefully. "A pleasure making yer acquaintance, the names Applejack. We always here at Sweet Apple Acers are always lookin forward to meetin some new friends!" Applejack says enthusiastically, finally letting go of Twilights hand which keeps moving up and down until she is able to stop it with her other hand.

She turns and shakes Spike's limp hand, noticing, but not caring about his obvious staring. In fact, after quickly looking him up and down she seems to jut her chest out slightly.

"So, what can I do ya for?" Applejack asks turning back to Twilight who seemed to not notice their brief exchange.

"Well, we are here to check up on preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration. Is your family going to be providing the food?"

"We sure as sugar are! Would you care to sample some of it?" Applejack offers.

"Er...well I suppose, as long as it doesn't take too long." Twilight replies.

"Alrighty then! Come follow me, I'll show ya where we have it prepared." She says, turning and leading them towards the barn.

As they follow the country mare Spike can't help but notice the old brown stain on the seat of the mare's shorts, likely evidence of some of her longer work days in the field.





"Ugh, I ate way too much pie." A bloated Twilight groans, following Spike through town who now carried the checklist.

Just about the moment, Applejack had got them seated in the barn, she had rung a triangle, calling a number of her family members, all carrying various different apple-related food items, from nowhere. Twilight had tried to turn down the piles of food but eventually gave in.

Spike, by comparison, felt nice and full, he was able to digest solid gemstone so a bunch of apples didn't make much of a dent. He did feel pretty sorry for Twilight though. He looks down at the list for the next pony they were tasked to find.

"Hmm, apparently a pegasus pony by the name of Rainbow Dash is supposed to be clearing the clouds for the celebration," He says, looking up into the still very cloudy sky.

"Hmph, well she clearly isn't doing a very good job now is she?" Twilight remarks.

*Slam!* "Oof!"

Spike whirls around at the sound to see Twilight and a light blue mare with a rainbow colored mane and tail lying in a heap in what he was fairly certain was a random mud puddle.

'That's probably her then...'

Twilight groans from underneath the mare as she gets up, shaking the mud from her wings. She wears a pair of grey sports shorts and a dark blue sports bra over her relatively flat chest. She was pretty toned and fit but not quite as muscular as Applejack. She lightly chuckles to herself as she notices Twilight getting up from the puddle covered with mud.

"Heh, um, Here, let me help you." She says still chuckling as she takes to the air. She rushes off to one of the nearby grey clouds and grabs it with her wings, bringing directly above Twilight.

As soon as Twilight realizes what the mare is about to do she moves to object but is cut off as entire clouds worth of rain pours down on her. The pegasus peeks over the cloud and has to try hard to keep herself from having a laughing fit at Twilight's state. While all the mud had been cleanly washed away but her mane and tail now lay flat and her clothes were completely soaked through. Spike blushed hard as Twilight turns away from him, exposing her rear as she looks up to give the rainbow-haired mare an irritated glare.

Her panties had to be thoroughly soaked, making them almost completely transparent in certain areas. He could easily see her marehood through the fabric along with a slightly brown streak following along her crack.

"Oops, hehe, I guess I overdid it a bit," She says, laughing under her breath. "Here, how about this!"

She suddenly swoops down from the cloud towards Twilight who raises her arms to brace for the inevitable impact. She is taken by surprise as the pegasus whips by her and begins flying in tight circles around her, creating a miniature tornado with Twilight at its center.

Once satisfied she flys out and lands next to Spike, arms crossed and a confident smirk on her face.

"No, no, don't thank me! You're quite welcome." She boasts as the dust settles.

Twilight's mane and are tail look as if they both been inflated like a balloon and then scrambled like an egg.

"Pft...Ahahaha!" The pegasus collapses to the ground, holding her stomach with her arms as she laughs at Twilight's ridiculous looking mane.

Spike chuckles for a moment but instantly stops upon receiving a deadly glare from Twilight.

"Your Rainbow Dash?" Twilight asks, an icy tone in her voice. Standing up proudly and with a cocky smirk the more nods.

"The one and only! Why? You heard of me?" Rainbow asks flying up to Twilight.

"I heard that you were supposed to be clearing the sky for the celebration." Twilight retorts, tired of her games. Calming herself down she lets out a stressed sigh.

"My name is Twilight Sparkle and the Princess has sent me to check on the weather." She calls up to Rainbow Dash who is reclined atop a cloud.

"Yea, yea, that'll be no problem, I'll do it once I finish practicing," Rainbow explains.

"Practicing? Practicing for what?" Twilight asks.

"The Wonderbolts!" Rainbow exclaims pointing to a nearby poster on the side of a house that depicts a heroicly posed Wonderbolt mare wearing a very tight fitting suit. "They are going to be having a show tomorrow morning for the celebration so I'm gonna show em my stuff!" Rainbow excitedly shouts, doing a flip in the air.

Twilight scoffs. "The wonderbolts?

"Yup!"

"The most talented flyers in all of Equestria?"

"Ahuh, that's them!"

"Oh please, they would never let in some lazy pegasus who cant keep the sky clear for one measly day."

"Hey! I could clear the whole sky in ten seconds flat!"

"Oh really?" Twilight says doubtfully. "Prove it."

Rainbow instantly shoots from her cloud, dashing from cloud to cloud in less, clearing each one in less than a second. As Twilight begins counting down but trails off, her jaw hanging open as entire sections of the sky are cleared almost instantly.

Twilight and Spike both stand there in awe at the now empty sky that had been full of clouds just moments ago.

"Heh, you should see the looks on your faces. Your a laugh Twilight Sparkle, I can wait to hang out some more!" Before Twilight can object the speedy pegasus darts off to perform more tricks and stunts high in the air.

"Wow, she's amazing,"  Spike says. Twilight rolls her eyes.

"Whatever, come on Spike we need to keep going. Who is next?" She asks

Spike looks down the checklist.

"Next up is the mare in charge of decorations, according to this she should be down in the town hall where the celebration will be held. She is a unicorn named Rarity."



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