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You decide to bite his fingers. “[i]Owww[/i], hey!” You snicker at his exaggerated cries and inform him that [i]no[/i], you don’t need to go.\n\nHe tilts his head, a goofy suspicious grin on his face as if you didn’t just gnaw his fingers off. “You [i]suuuuure[/i] you don't wanna go to the bathroom?” Even as you step from side to side you defiantly shake your head. As a big puppy, it's your job to mark the park with [i]aaaaall [/i]the pee your balls can hold! How else will the other puppies know what places are yours? \n\n“I wonder what your pee-pee thinks…” Big bro fluttered his fingers against the bulge in your sweatpants. [i]Aah! [/i]That tickles! “Oh?” Big bro kneels and starts tugging at your drawstrings, you strain to stand still. “I think he’s trying to tell us something!” Your toes scrunch and your knees grind while he unties the knot. Part of you hopes he tickles your wiener like he does at home, but you're not sure if you'll be able to keep your undies dry.\n\nYou’re fighting to hold back giggles [i]and [/i]your bladder when he finally pulls back your waistband. You both take a giddy peek into the pocket of your underwear. “Hey little guy, gotta pee?” Your little weiner trembles in your briefs like a cocoon bound caterpillar in desperate need of a bathroom. But you proudly answer through your fidgets that he’s just fine. Your tail wags thinking of all the things he could pee on…\n\n“Well…alright buddy.” Big bro reties your strings, defeated. “Just let me know when you’re ready for a bathroom break.” You pout looking at your drawstrings. You really like tying the knot… “Aww I’m sorry buddy. I’ll let you do it next time, promise!” He takes your paw in his and it sets your tail into a wag again. You both start off on an [i]adventure[/i].\n\nThe park walk is really nice, it always is in the Spring. Flowers are blooming, the breeze feels nice in your fur, and there's so much to see like—[i]ooh! [/i]A pond! You pull your brother over, you wanna see the koi fishies! \n\nYou bounce and squirm as you point out the colorful creatures gracefully swooping through the water. [i]Mmfh, [/i]you feel yourself sway with the ripples along the surface…[i]huh?[/i] …[i]No, no, no[/i]. You giggle at your big bro as you shake your head, of course you're not ready to go potty, [i]er[/i], to the [i]bathroom![/i] Your balls are only half way full, [i]at most[/i].\n\nAs you resume your park journey, your feet feel a little more excited than usual. You tug on big bro to walk faster. “Well somebody’s in a rush, heading to the bathroom big guy?” He asks.\n\n[i]Pffffft[/i], no. It's just all your big boy energy. It has your body feeling all [i]jumpy[/i] and your tail [i]waggy[/i] and your weiner all tingly and—[i]ooh[/i], ants! \n\nYou slow down and pull your big bro to the side of the path. You shift your weight from foot to foot as you trace the line of ants across the concrete to a small mound of sand rising out of the grass. You squeeze your crotch as you sink into a squat for a closer look. Oh gosh, it’s [i]super[/i] tight under your tummy! Your tail wags as you knead your bulge through your pants, you bet you have [i]sooooo[/i] much pee inside!\n\nBig bro kneels beside you, an arm lying across your back. “Ants are pretty cool huh buddy?” Uh-huh! But, [i]oh[/i], it’s getting [i]really[/i] tingly in your wiener. “You're squishing your pee-pee a lot…” big bro comments. “Is he all pokey again?” You gasp as he slides his paw under yours and squeezes your bulge. “Hmmmm…nope, still squishy.” You flinch and seize under his touch, it's making your bladder all jumpy. Big bro snickers as he continues. “[i]Squishy, squishy, squishy…[/i]”\n\n[i]Ohhh, [/i]your knees shake, you're about to pee! “Woah!” You pop back up and let the shivers run through your legs. “[i]Heh heh heh[/i], you Ok big guy?” Y-yep! “And your pee-pee didn’t leak, did he?” You let out a mix of a giggle and a whine as he grabs your bulge again, feeling around for any wet spots. You catch his grabby paw and playfully growl that your undies are indeed dry, you’re no baby! You start tugging him back along the path, your feet are more than ready to move.\n\nAnother bit of walking takes you past plenty of big trees and pretty flowers. They all look awfully thirsty and smell so fresh, hmmm…[i]Ooh[/i], there’s a water fountain! You’re feeling pretty thirsty yourself after so much exercise, you'll water the trees later. \n\nYou pull big bro over and take big greedy gulps, you have to pretzel your legs tight to stand [i]somewhat[/i] still. Your impatient hips continue to sway back and forth. \n\nYour brother chuckles as he pats your wiggly rump. “I think somebody’s gotta pee…” He teases. You [i]evilly[/i] chuckle back at him. He thinks he knows what you're capable of. You take more gulps from the fountain to prove him wrong! “[i]Squish![/i]” [i]Ow![/i] He squeezed your butt! You send big bro a series of punches to [i]his[/i] butt! “[i]Ow ow ow[/i], sorry you're just so squishy!”\n\nYou giggle as you conclude that he’s pretty squishy too! [i]Augh[/i], a bladder pang brings your barrage to an end as you grab your crotch. Big bro chuckles smuggly. “You're about to pee your pants huh?” [i]N-nope![/i] You feel the water you just drank swishing away in your tummy as you bounce. Even after all that reaches your balls, you still won't have to go!\n\n“You sure? Think of how good it'll make your pee-pee feel!” You blow him a raspberry as you take twisty steps in a potty dance. A big boy like you can't be swayed that easily! “Hmmm, why don’t we ask what your pee-pee thinks…” You freeze knock-kneed as big bro reaches around from behind to untie your pants. You gleefully titter away, no matter what he does he won’t break this big boy!\n\nBig bro tugs your waistband down, exposing your puppy parts to the world. “Hey little buddy!” He chirps as he wraps his fingers around your member. You flinch, his fingers are so [i]warm[/i] and gentle. “Show us if you gotta pee!” Your hips shimmy as he massages and strokes your wiener. You bite your lip not to whine. “It’s Ok, don’t be shy!” Big bro chuckles as you squirm wildly in his arms. \n\nOh gosh, it’s too tickly![i] Aaaaaaah[/i] you’re gonna pee, you’re gonna pee, you’re gonna[i] peeeeeeee![/i] [i]Aaaaaauuughhh[/i]…a single teasing drop leaks from your tip and falls silently to the ground. You pant out as the sizzles in your bladder start to ebb away and your muscles regain control, that was close! \n\n“That’s it?” Big bro tilts his head inquisitively at your wiener. You nod, a triumphant smile on your face. You [i]told[/i] him you didn’t have to go! “Maybe you don't…[i]for now[/i].” Big bro tucks your length back in your undies, you already miss his touch. You stop his paws just before he ties your pants. [i]You[/i] like to tie the knots! “Oops, that’s right!” You proceed to tie an extra tight super-knot like the ones you’ve practiced on your shoes. You pridefully show it off while pinching the tip of your wiener through the fabric. “Good job buddy!”\n\nYou both continue around the park for what feels like a long time to your bursting bladder. Prancing around the other cool pond with turtles, crossing your legs as you watched a praying mantis climb a tree, asking big bro for a ‘sip’ of his soda that turned out to be more of a gulp…or two…or three, and happily denying every bathroom you passed. The park is so big and exciting, you swear you can keep walking forever! At least, you [i]think[/i] you can, [i]until[/i]…\n\nOoh…[i]ooh![/i] Your limit finally hits. You suddenly stop to jump wildly in place, partially out of excitement. A paw flying to your crotch is the only thing that stopped an ocean from flooding your underwear. Your wiener stings with urgency, your bladder is suffocating under the waistband of your briefs. It's time to go. [i]Now[/i].\n\n“Uh-oh, I think somebuddy’s having an emergency…” A hint of worry stains big bro’s tone watching you bounce around. ‘[i]Emergency?[/i]’ Not at all, a big boy like you’s got everything under control. You grab his paw and [i]yank[/i] him over to a rock off the path. It stuck out of the grass to height just under your waist, with speckles that glistened in the sun. The perfect candidate for a dousing, and you literally can't wait to give it one.\n\nYou jog in place before your designated urinal. [i]Jeez[/i], your balls must be floating down there, you felt tight enough to yelp. In the midst of your calamitous movements, you manage to flash big bro an impish smirk, making sure he’s watching. Oh gosh you’re gonna burst, oh [i]gosh[/i] it’s gonna feel so good! You tuck your eager thumbs into the waistband of your sweatpants, and [i]yank! [/i]…And [i]yank! [/i]…[i]Yank, yank, yank![/i] Oh no…the draw strings are too tight! Dang it, why are you so good at tying knots?!\n\n“You got it buddy!” Big bro chuckles as your desperate hops grow erratic. “Don’t pee your pants!” You’re trying your hardest not to! No matter how hard you tug, the knot is steadfast and your pants are seemingly glued to your waist. You grit your teeth, your paws hesitate but your feet are stuck on hyperdrive. You don’t know what to do…\n\n“It's alright big guy, I got you.” Probably seeing the urgency scrunched on your face, big bro kneels down for a rescue, but you hop out of his reach. You're a [i]big boy[/i], you don't need the ‘potty’ [i]nor[/i] his help…but [i]gosh[/i], it's tempting right now. You put all your puppy brain cells together and try to focus. You tied the knot together, a big boy like you can untie it…[i]aah! [/i]You flinch at a rising pang and the strings slip out of your paws, all that progress gone.\n\nYou shove both paws into your crotch, urgent stings of urine make your privates sear. It’s too risky to release yourself and try the knot again, you’re officially trapped in potty limbo. Your eyes start to well up with tears as you helplessly jump in place, you really are gonna burst! It’s so unfair! You’re so close! You even found a good spot to mark! Please, not in front of big bro! [i]Please![/i]\n\n“It’s Ok, it's Ok.” Big bro kneels behind you, and snakes his arms around your hips. You gasp, your body freezes. A generous squirt [i]splashes[/i] into your underwear. “Let me try.” He grabs hold of your drawstrings and makes an attempt at the knot. You shudder, huffing out in panic as squirt after bigger squirt paints your briefs a drippy yellow. You feel that excruciating tightness in your crotch rapidly grow numb. You whine, it’s too late. “Almost done, I promise.” You close your eyes, tuck your snout under big bro’s chin and wail out as that pressure in your wiener finally surges.\n\nA loud hiss roars away under your pants. “Oh no…” Steaming hot pee flash floods through your underwear, invading all of your intimate spaces and sending multiple streams racing down your thighs. Your accident shows up quite well on the gray fabric of your sweatpants, suddenly your legs are engulfed in a heavy, steamy, darkness. Big bro pulls you closer, pressing his cheek against you. “I’m sorry buddy…”\n\nYou tremble in his arms, your little body is bombarded with so many feelings. An explosion of relief washes over your insides with waves of tingly warmth, it prods a few satisfied wags out of your tail. You can feel just how aggressively your bladder is releasing into your pants, you can feel how badly you needed it, how grateful your twitchy weiner is for it. You’re having an accident…yet you feel so good. You can’t stop and you don’t know if you want to. Confused, frustrated sobs continue to rack you in between breathy moans.\n\n\"It's Ok, don’t cry...\" Big bro gently grabs hold of the raining, hot, darkened crotch of your sweatpants and kneads your bulge underneath. You gasp and tilt your head back. Your bladder continues to drain, the rhythmic squeezes and strokes of his fingers splashes your flow inside and out of your bottomwear. \n\nYour sobs gradually shift into bothered huffs as he teases your wiener to semi-firm. “Hehe, not so squishy anymore…” Even as your bladder reaches a pleasant, comfortable volume, you're too overwhelmed to stop peeing. “Good job buddy, let it all out.” He cooes in your ear, it makes tingles go up your back. [i]Mmfh[/i], your eyes half lid as you let yourself fully relax. \n\nSoon, the stream in your pants comes to an end, and its last few seconds of volume trickles lazily through the fabric in big bro’s grip. You let out a final deep sigh and shudder of relief. Everything below your waist, and even the bottom edges of your shirt are soaking wet and dark with urine. You had an accident, and a bad one at that, yet your bladder glows with a beautiful emptiness, and everything feels all warm. Your wiener flexes with need.\n\n“Are you done buddy?” Big bro asks with a warm smile. It's contagious, a shy smile forms on your maw as you nod back. “Did that feel good?” He strokes your erect bulge and rubs your head. You huff and shudder as you nod again. That felt really[i] [/i]good, [i]more[/i] than good. But you're all wet now… “I’m sorry I couldn’t get the knot fast enough.” He pulls you into a hug. “As soon as we get home, we’ll get you a nice bath, and then mac n’ cheese with cartoons and snuggles. And, we’ll take care of Mr. Pokey here.” He said with a flutter of your stiffy that made you giggle. “How does that sound, buddy?” Your tail wags as you approve of those plans, your big bro’s so nice. Even with wet pants, the rest of the walk through the park felt just as nice while holding his paw.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Ah, the park. Not the kind with mini-swings that big bro used to push you on, that’s for babies! This was the big cub park, filled with long walking paths, big rocks to climb, ponds and rivers to swim in…Ok you’re not allowed to do that, but it’s still cool! And the bestest, best part for a big puppy boy like you? So many places to pee! Ah, it got your canine instincts so excited, you couldn’t help but bounce around!

“Hey buddy,” Big bro lays a paw on your shoulder. You look up, he peers back down on you from the stratosphere with a cuddly, yet inquiring smile. “Does somebody need to go potty?”

‘Potty?!’ Bleugh, you grumble your annoyance at him. What are you, a baby?! “Oops,” he chuckles. “You know I meant bathroom big guy.” He pats your shoulder as consolation…you are not consoled. You decide to bite his fingers. “Owww, hey!” You snicker at his exaggerated cries and inform him that no, you don’t need to go.

He tilts his head, a goofy suspicious grin on his face as if you didn’t just gnaw his fingers off. “You suuuuure you don't wanna go to the bathroom?” Even as you step from side to side you defiantly shake your head. As a big puppy, it's your job to mark the park with aaaaall the pee your balls can hold! How else will the other puppies know what places are yours?

“I wonder what your pee-pee thinks…” Big bro fluttered his fingers against the bulge in your sweatpants. Aah! That tickles! “Oh?” Big bro kneels and starts tugging at your drawstrings, you strain to stand still. “I think he’s trying to tell us something!” Your toes scrunch and your knees grind while he unties the knot. Part of you hopes he tickles your wiener like he does at home, but you're not sure if you'll be able to keep your undies dry.

You’re fighting to hold back giggles and your bladder when he finally pulls back your waistband. You both take a giddy peek into the pocket of your underwear. “Hey little guy, gotta pee?” Your little weiner trembles in your briefs like a cocoon bound caterpillar in desperate need of a bathroom. But you proudly answer through your fidgets that he’s just fine. Your tail wags thinking of all the things he could pee on…

“Well…alright buddy.” Big bro reties your strings, defeated. “Just let me know when you’re ready for a bathroom break.” You pout looking at your drawstrings. You really like tying the knot… “Aww I’m sorry buddy. I’ll let you do it next time, promise!” He takes your paw in his and it sets your tail into a wag again. You both start off on an adventure.

The park walk is really nice, it always is in the Spring. Flowers are blooming, the breeze feels nice in your fur, and there's so much to see like—ooh! A pond! You pull your brother over, you wanna see the koi fishies!

You bounce and squirm as you point out the colorful creatures gracefully swooping through the water. Mmfh, you feel yourself sway with the ripples along the surface…huh? …No, no, no. You giggle at your big bro as you shake your head, of course you're not ready to go potty, er, to the bathroom! Your balls are only half way full, at most.

As you resume your park journey, your feet feel a little more excited than usual. You tug on big bro to walk faster. “Well somebody’s in a rush, heading to the bathroom big guy?” He asks.

Pffffft, no. It's just all your big boy energy. It has your body feeling all jumpy and your tail waggy and your weiner all tingly and—ooh, ants!

You slow down and pull your big bro to the side of the path. You shift your weight from foot to foot as you trace the line of ants across the concrete to a small mound of sand rising out of the grass. You squeeze your crotch as you sink into a squat for a closer look. Oh gosh, it’s super tight under your tummy! Your tail wags as you knead your bulge through your pants, you bet you have sooooo much pee inside!

Big bro kneels beside you, an arm lying across your back. “Ants are pretty cool huh buddy?” Uh-huh! But, oh, it’s getting really tingly in your wiener. “You're squishing your pee-pee a lot…” big bro comments. “Is he all pokey again?” You gasp as he slides his paw under yours and squeezes your bulge. “Hmmmm…nope, still squishy.” You flinch and seize under his touch, it's making your bladder all jumpy. Big bro snickers as he continues. “Squishy, squishy, squishy…”

Ohhh, your knees shake, you're about to pee! “Woah!” You pop back up and let the shivers run through your legs. “Heh heh heh, you Ok big guy?” Y-yep! “And your pee-pee didn’t leak, did he?” You let out a mix of a giggle and a whine as he grabs your bulge again, feeling around for any wet spots. You catch his grabby paw and playfully growl that your undies are indeed dry, you’re no baby! You start tugging him back along the path, your feet are more than ready to move.

Another bit of walking takes you past plenty of big trees and pretty flowers. They all look awfully thirsty and smell so fresh, hmmm…Ooh, there’s a water fountain! You’re feeling pretty thirsty yourself after so much exercise, you'll water the trees later.

You pull big bro over and take big greedy gulps, you have to pretzel your legs tight to stand somewhat still. Your impatient hips continue to sway back and forth.

Your brother chuckles as he pats your wiggly rump. “I think somebody’s gotta pee…” He teases. You evilly chuckle back at him. He thinks he knows what you're capable of. You take more gulps from the fountain to prove him wrong! “Squish!” Ow! He squeezed your butt! You send big bro a series of punches to his butt! “Ow ow ow, sorry you're just so squishy!”

You giggle as you conclude that he’s pretty squishy too! Augh, a bladder pang brings your barrage to an end as you grab your crotch. Big bro chuckles smuggly. “You're about to pee your pants huh?” N-nope! You feel the water you just drank swishing away in your tummy as you bounce. Even after all that reaches your balls, you still won't have to go!

“You sure? Think of how good it'll make your pee-pee feel!” You blow him a raspberry as you take twisty steps in a potty dance. A big boy like you can't be swayed that easily! “Hmmm, why don’t we ask what your pee-pee thinks…” You freeze knock-kneed as big bro reaches around from behind to untie your pants. You gleefully titter away, no matter what he does he won’t break this big boy!

Big bro tugs your waistband down, exposing your puppy parts to the world. “Hey little buddy!” He chirps as he wraps his fingers around your member. You flinch, his fingers are so warm and gentle. “Show us if you gotta pee!” Your hips shimmy as he massages and strokes your wiener. You bite your lip not to whine. “It’s Ok, don’t be shy!” Big bro chuckles as you squirm wildly in his arms.

Oh gosh, it’s too tickly! Aaaaaaah you’re gonna pee, you’re gonna pee, you’re gonna peeeeeeee! Aaaaaauuughhh…a single teasing drop leaks from your tip and falls silently to the ground. You pant out as the sizzles in your bladder start to ebb away and your muscles regain control, that was close!

“That’s it?” Big bro tilts his head inquisitively at your wiener. You nod, a triumphant smile on your face. You told him you didn’t have to go! “Maybe you don't…for now.” Big bro tucks your length back in your undies, you already miss his touch. You stop his paws just before he ties your pants. You like to tie the knots! “Oops, that’s right!” You proceed to tie an extra tight super-knot like the ones you’ve practiced on your shoes. You pridefully show it off while pinching the tip of your wiener through the fabric. “Good job buddy!”

You both continue around the park for what feels like a long time to your bursting bladder. Prancing around the other cool pond with turtles, crossing your legs as you watched a praying mantis climb a tree, asking big bro for a ‘sip’ of his soda that turned out to be more of a gulp…or two…or three, and happily denying every bathroom you passed. The park is so big and exciting, you swear you can keep walking forever! At least, you think you can, until…

Ooh…ooh! Your limit finally hits. You suddenly stop to jump wildly in place, partially out of excitement. A paw flying to your crotch is the only thing that stopped an ocean from flooding your underwear. Your wiener stings with urgency, your bladder is suffocating under the waistband of your briefs. It's time to go. Now.

“Uh-oh, I think somebuddy’s having an emergency…” A hint of worry stains big bro’s tone watching you bounce around. ‘Emergency?’ Not at all, a big boy like you’s got everything under control. You grab his paw and yank him over to a rock off the path. It stuck out of the grass to height just under your waist, with speckles that glistened in the sun. The perfect candidate for a dousing, and you literally can't wait to give it one.

You jog in place before your designated urinal. Jeez, your balls must be floating down there, you felt tight enough to yelp. In the midst of your calamitous movements, you manage to flash big bro an impish smirk, making sure he’s watching. Oh gosh you’re gonna burst, oh gosh it’s gonna feel so good! You tuck your eager thumbs into the waistband of your sweatpants, and yank! …And yank! …Yank, yank, yank! Oh no…the draw strings are too tight! Dang it, why are you so good at tying knots?!

“You got it buddy!” Big bro chuckles as your desperate hops grow erratic. “Don’t pee your pants!” You’re trying your hardest not to! No matter how hard you tug, the knot is steadfast and your pants are seemingly glued to your waist. You grit your teeth, your paws hesitate but your feet are stuck on hyperdrive. You don’t know what to do…

“It's alright big guy, I got you.” Probably seeing the urgency scrunched on your face, big bro kneels down for a rescue, but you hop out of his reach. You're a big boy, you don't need the ‘potty’ nor his help…but gosh, it's tempting right now. You put all your puppy brain cells together and try to focus. You tied the knot together, a big boy like you can untie it…aah! You flinch at a rising pang and the strings slip out of your paws, all that progress gone.

You shove both paws into your crotch, urgent stings of urine make your privates sear. It’s too risky to release yourself and try the knot again, you’re officially trapped in potty limbo. Your eyes start to well up with tears as you helplessly jump in place, you really are gonna burst! It’s so unfair! You’re so close! You even found a good spot to mark! Please, not in front of big bro! Please!

“It’s Ok, it's Ok.” Big bro kneels behind you, and snakes his arms around your hips. You gasp, your body freezes. A generous squirt splashes into your underwear. “Let me try.” He grabs hold of your drawstrings and makes an attempt at the knot. You shudder, huffing out in panic as squirt after bigger squirt paints your briefs a drippy yellow. You feel that excruciating tightness in your crotch rapidly grow numb. You whine, it’s too late. “Almost done, I promise.” You close your eyes, tuck your snout under big bro’s chin and wail out as that pressure in your wiener finally surges.

A loud hiss roars away under your pants. “Oh no…” Steaming hot pee flash floods through your underwear, invading all of your intimate spaces and sending multiple streams racing down your thighs. Your accident shows up quite well on the gray fabric of your sweatpants, suddenly your legs are engulfed in a heavy, steamy, darkness. Big bro pulls you closer, pressing his cheek against you. “I’m sorry buddy…”

You tremble in his arms, your little body is bombarded with so many feelings. An explosion of relief washes over your insides with waves of tingly warmth, it prods a few satisfied wags out of your tail. You can feel just how aggressively your bladder is releasing into your pants, you can feel how badly you needed it, how grateful your twitchy weiner is for it. You’re having an accident…yet you feel so good. You can’t stop and you don’t know if you want to. Confused, frustrated sobs continue to rack you in between breathy moans.

"It's Ok, don’t cry..." Big bro gently grabs hold of the raining, hot, darkened crotch of your sweatpants and kneads your bulge underneath. You gasp and tilt your head back. Your bladder continues to drain, the rhythmic squeezes and strokes of his fingers splashes your flow inside and out of your bottomwear.

Your sobs gradually shift into bothered huffs as he teases your wiener to semi-firm. “Hehe, not so squishy anymore…” Even as your bladder reaches a pleasant, comfortable volume, you're too overwhelmed to stop peeing. “Good job buddy, let it all out.” He cooes in your ear, it makes tingles go up your back. Mmfh, your eyes half lid as you let yourself fully relax.

Soon, the stream in your pants comes to an end, and its last few seconds of volume trickles lazily through the fabric in big bro’s grip. You let out a final deep sigh and shudder of relief. Everything below your waist, and even the bottom edges of your shirt are soaking wet and dark with urine. You had an accident, and a bad one at that, yet your bladder glows with a beautiful emptiness, and everything feels all warm. Your wiener flexes with need.

“Are you done buddy?” Big bro asks with a warm smile. It's contagious, a shy smile forms on your maw as you nod back. “Did that feel good?” He strokes your erect bulge and rubs your head. You huff and shudder as you nod again. That felt really good, more than good. But you're all wet now… “I’m sorry I couldn’t get the knot fast enough.” He pulls you into a hug. “As soon as we get home, we’ll get you a nice bath, and then mac n’ cheese with cartoons and snuggles. And, we’ll take care of Mr. Pokey here.” He said with a flutter of your stiffy that made you giggle. “How does that sound, buddy?” Your tail wags as you approve of those plans, your big bro’s so nice. Even with wet pants, the rest of the walk through the park felt just as nice while holding his paw.", "pools_count": 1, "title": "A Walk Through The Park with Big Bro (Version B)", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "text/rtf", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "2", "rating_name": "Adult", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "4", "name": "Sexual Themes", "description": "Erotic imagery, sexual activity or arousal", "rating_id": "2" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "t", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "2", "views": "729" }