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This is a test for the quick, short kind of stories I intend to upload on a somewhat frequent basis when my damn substar finally gets approved. In the mean time, got a huge backlog of more major stuff I'm working through that I hope to start uploading in due time.

If you like what I do, tips on Ko-fi are greatly appreciated!", "writing": "Ah, the park. Not the kind with mini-swings that big bro used to push you on, that’s for babies! This was the [i]big[/i] cub park, filled with long walking paths, big rocks to climb, ponds and rivers to swim in…Ok you’re not allowed to do that, but it’s still cool! And the bestest, best part for a big puppy boy like you? So many places to [i]pee! [/i]Ah, it got your canine instincts so excited, you couldn’t help but bounce around!\n\n“Hey buddy,” Big bro lays a paw on your shoulder. You look up, he peers back down on you from the stratosphere with a cuddly, yet inquiring smile. “Do you need to go potty?”\n\n‘[i]Potty[/i]?!’ [i]Bleugh[/i], you grumble your annoyance at him. What are you, a baby?! “Oopsie, you know I meant bathroom big guy.” He pats your shoulder as consolation…you are not consoled. You decide to bite his fingers. “[i]Owww[/i], hey!” You snicker at his exaggerated cries, and inform him that [i]no[/i], you don’t need to go.\n\nHe tilts his head, a goofy suspicious grin on his face as if you didn’t just gnaw his fingers off. “You [i]suuuuure[/i] you don't wanna go to the bathroom?” Your poor innocent big bro, when will he learn? Even as you step from side to side you defiantly shake your head. As a big puppy, it's your job to mark the park with [i]aaaaall [/i]the pee your balls can hold! How else will the other puppies know what places are yours? Maybe when big bro sees how much pee you’ll make, he’ll finally understand how much of a big boy you are.\n\n“Well…alright buddy.” He pets your head, defeated. “Just let me know when you’re ready for a bathroom break.” He takes your paw in his, and you’re both off on an adventure.\n\nThe park walk is really nice, it always is in the Spring. Flowers are blooming, the breeze feels nice in your fur, and there's so much to see like—[i]ooh! [/i]A pond! You pull your brother over, you wanna see the koi fishies! \n\nYou bounce and squirm as you point out the colorful creatures gracefully swooping through the water. [i]Mmfh, [/i]you feel yourself sway with the ripples along the surface…[i]huh?[/i] …[i]No, no, no[/i]. You giggle at your big bro as you shake your head, of course you're not ready to go potty, [i]er[/i], to the [i]bathroom![/i] Your balls are only half way full, [i]at most[/i].\n\nAs you resume your park journey, your foot paws feel a little more excited than usual. You tug on big bro to walk faster. “Well someone’s in a rush, heading to the bathroom big guy?” He asks.\n\n[i]Pffffft[/i], no. It's just all your big boy energy. It has your body feeling all [i]jumpy[/i] and your tail [i]waggy[/i] and—[i]ooh[/i], ants! \n\nYou slow down and pull your big bro to the side of the path. You shift your weight from foot to foot as you trace the line of ants across the concrete to a small mound of sand rising out of the grass. You squeeze your crotch as you sink into a squat for a closer look. Oh gosh, it’s [i]super[/i] tight under your tummy! Your tail wags as you knead your bulge through the fabric of your sweatpants, you bet there’s [i]sooo[/i] much pee inside you!\n\nBig bro kneels beside you, an arm wrapped your back. “Ants are pretty cool huh buddy?” Uh-huh! But, [i]oh[/i], it’s getting [i]really[/i] tingly in your weiner. [i]Mmfh, [/i]it’s making your knees shake. “You Ok big guy?” Y-yep! You pop back up and let the shivers run through your legs. You grab big bro's paw, you’re ready to move again!\n\nAnother bit of walking takes you past plenty of big trees and pretty flowers. They all look awfully thirsty and smell so fresh, [i]hmmm[/i]…[i]ooh[/i], there’s a water fountain! You’re feeling pretty thirsty yourself after so much exercise, you'll water the trees later. \n\nYou pull big bro over and take big greedy gulps, you have to pretzel your legs tight to stand [i]somewhat[/i] still. Your impatient hips continue to sway back and forth. \n\nYour brother chuckles as he pats the side of your wiggly butt. “I think somebody’s gotta pee…” He teases. You [i]evilly[/i] chuckle back at him. He thinks he knows what you're capable of. You take a few more gulps from the fountain before leaning up. You feel the weight of all that water in your tummy, even after it reaches your balls, you still won't have to go pot—[i]pee![/i]\n\n“You sure? Think of how good it'll feel to go now…” You blow him a raspberry as you take twisty steps in a potty dance. A big boy like you can't be swayed that easily! “Nuh-uh! Pee sounds like-[i]psssssshhh…[/i]” [i]Ooh[/i], you feel all that pee [i]tingling [/i]in your crotch. You send a paw between your thighs, and use the other to jab your big meanie bro in the side. “[i]Ow, ow, ow, I’m sorry! I’m sorryyyyyy[/i]!” He cowers in fear, you chuff at a butt well [i]kicked[/i]. “...You [i]sure [/i]you don’t have to go?” All it takes is for you to raise a fist. “Alright, alright, let’s keep going buddy.”\n\nYou both continue around the park for what feels like a long time to your bursting bladder. Prancing around the other cool pond with turtles, crossing your legs as you watched a praying mantis climb a tree, asking big bro for a ‘sip’ of his soda that turned out to be more of a gulp…or two…or three, and happily denying every bathroom you passed. The park is so big and exciting, you swear you can keep walking forever! At least, you [i]think[/i] you can, [i]until[/i]…\n\nOoh…[i]ooh![/i] Your limit finally hits. You suddenly stop to jump wildly in place, partially out of excitement. A paw flying to your crotch is the only thing that stopped an ocean from flooding your underwear. Your wiener stings with urgency, your bladder is suffocating under the waistband of your briefs. It's time to go. [i]Now[/i].\n\n“Uh-oh, I think somebody’s having an emergency…” A hint of worry stains big bro’s tone watching you bounce around. ‘[i]Emergency?[/i]’ Not at all, a big boy like you’s got everything under control. You grab his paw and [i]yank[/i] him over to a rock off the path. It stuck out of the grass to height just under your waist, with speckles that glistened in the sun. The perfect candidate for a dousing, and you literally can't wait to give it one.\n\nYou jog in place before your designated urinal. [i]Jeez[/i], your balls must be floating down there, you felt tight enough to yelp. In the midst of your calamitous movements, you manage to flash big bro an impish smirk, making sure he’s watching. [i]Ugh, [/i]oh gosh you’re gonna burst. Oh [i]gosh[/i], it’s gonna feel so good! You tuck your eager thumbs into the waistband of your sweatpants, and [i]yank! [/i]…And [i]yank! [/i]…[i]Yank, yank, yank![/i] Oh no…the draw strings are too tight! Dang it, why are you so good at tying knots?!\n\n“You got it buddy!” Big bro chuckles as your desperate hops grow erratic. “Don’t pee your pants!” You’re trying your hardest not to! No matter how hard you tug, the knot is steadfast and your pants are seemingly glued to your waist. Your eyes start to well up with tears, your crotch [i]burns[/i] with urgency and your dances aren’t relieving it anymore. You really are gonna burst! No, no, [i]no, [/i]you’re so close! You even found a good spot to mark! Not in front of big bro! [i]Please![/i]\n\n“Hold on big guy, I got you.” As if he heard your mental cries, big bro kneels down for a rescue, his arms wrapping around your hips as he attacks your drawstrings. [i]Mmph[/i], his firm hold restricts your movements. You're helpless but to writhe and grind against him while the urgency in your crotch intensifies into a throb. You wail, the only thing you can do at the moment, begging him to hurry.\n\n\"I know buddy, I know, I’m almost done! You can do it!\" You can’t see his progress on the knot through the tears clouding your vision. You clench your eyes shut and just bare through the searing bladder contractions. Big bro believes in you, but you think you feel a droplet go down your thigh...\n\n“Got it!” [i]Ooh[/i], big bro got the knot undone! A quick tug of your two waistbands and his paw slips in your underwear. You gasp and whine as he grabs your weiner. At his touch, all your muscles turn to jelly. Your control disappears with a shiver, the floodgates open, and the dam starts to spill. You tilt your head back, it’s over…Half a second later, big bro pulls your penis to freedom. “Go, go, go!” He says, but you’re already peeing.\n\nYour steamy golden jet of puppy juice explodes onto the rock, turning its dusty gray surface a wet, runny dark. Your eyes roll to the sky and you pant out like you just ran a marathon, soft whines on every exhale. Your angry stream sounds deafening, it sends waves of pleasure coursing through your privates and up your spine. You can’t bring yourself to look down at the unbelievable amount you're voiding, just a millisecond too late and it all would’ve been in your pants. The thought has your knees on the verge of giving out.\n\n“There you go…” Big bro coos in your ear. You can hear his gentle smile through his voice, it makes you shudder even more. “Doesn't that feel good? Isn't that better than holding it in?” Oh[i] gosh[/i], yes it does. You nod meekly, your big boy ego softened. You're just grateful big bro helped you out in time…and his paw feels so soft and warm around your weiner. You lean your head back in his embrace, a dreamy smile spreading on your maw as you ride out the remainder of your bladder’s volume.\n\nYour brother chuckles, affectionately brushing his cheek against yours. You can feel his eyes watching your stream gradually wane, it makes your weiner twitch on the final trickles. “You finished buddy?” He asks. You look down at your length, still wrapped in his grip with a lazy dribble. [i]Yes[/i], you answer, you’re fin—oh wait. You give a soft grunt, a 5 second squirt of urine sprinkles from your tip, ending in that same lazy dribble. You sigh contently…Ok [i]now[/i] you’re finished.\n\n“You silly puppy…good job.” He gently squeezes your weiner and shakes off the final droplets, making you shudder once more. He tucks your penis back in your briefs and straightens out the waistband. \n\n[i]Ooh[/i], your undies are damp. So much to the point where your privates immediately grow clammy and warm. But it also kinda tickles…you kinda like it. You stay silent as big bro reties the strings on your sweatpants. He’ll never know.\n\n“Feel better now?” Big bro asks with a warm smile. It's contagious, you smile back and gleefully nod before pulling him into a hug. That felt super [i]duper [/i]good, and now all the other puppies will know that's [i]your[/i] rock! You thank him for saving the day.\n\n“Awww, you're welcome buddy.” He hugs back and licks your cheek. “You're gonna go potty right away from now on right?” ‘[i]Potty?![/i]’ You pull out of the hug and valiantly shake your head. “U-uh, I meant bathroom!” You snicker as you shake your head again. It's too late, he made his mistake and your mind is set. After all, there’s still so much park left to pee in! No problem for a big puppy like you of course…where’s the next water fountain?\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Ah, the park. Not the kind with mini-swings that big bro used to push you on, that’s for babies! This was the big cub park, filled with long walking paths, big rocks to climb, ponds and rivers to swim in…Ok you’re not allowed to do that, but it’s still cool! And the bestest, best part for a big puppy boy like you? So many places to pee! Ah, it got your canine instincts so excited, you couldn’t help but bounce around!

“Hey buddy,” Big bro lays a paw on your shoulder. You look up, he peers back down on you from the stratosphere with a cuddly, yet inquiring smile. “Do you need to go potty?”

‘Potty?!’ Bleugh, you grumble your annoyance at him. What are you, a baby?! “Oopsie, you know I meant bathroom big guy.” He pats your shoulder as consolation…you are not consoled. You decide to bite his fingers. “Owww, hey!” You snicker at his exaggerated cries, and inform him that no, you don’t need to go.

He tilts his head, a goofy suspicious grin on his face as if you didn’t just gnaw his fingers off. “You suuuuure you don't wanna go to the bathroom?” Your poor innocent big bro, when will he learn? Even as you step from side to side you defiantly shake your head. As a big puppy, it's your job to mark the park with aaaaall the pee your balls can hold! How else will the other puppies know what places are yours? Maybe when big bro sees how much pee you’ll make, he’ll finally understand how much of a big boy you are.

“Well…alright buddy.” He pets your head, defeated. “Just let me know when you’re ready for a bathroom break.” He takes your paw in his, and you’re both off on an adventure.

The park walk is really nice, it always is in the Spring. Flowers are blooming, the breeze feels nice in your fur, and there's so much to see like—ooh! A pond! You pull your brother over, you wanna see the koi fishies!

You bounce and squirm as you point out the colorful creatures gracefully swooping through the water. Mmfh, you feel yourself sway with the ripples along the surface…huh? …No, no, no. You giggle at your big bro as you shake your head, of course you're not ready to go potty, er, to the bathroom! Your balls are only half way full, at most.

As you resume your park journey, your foot paws feel a little more excited than usual. You tug on big bro to walk faster. “Well someone’s in a rush, heading to the bathroom big guy?” He asks.

Pffffft, no. It's just all your big boy energy. It has your body feeling all jumpy and your tail waggy and—ooh, ants!

You slow down and pull your big bro to the side of the path. You shift your weight from foot to foot as you trace the line of ants across the concrete to a small mound of sand rising out of the grass. You squeeze your crotch as you sink into a squat for a closer look. Oh gosh, it’s super tight under your tummy! Your tail wags as you knead your bulge through the fabric of your sweatpants, you bet there’s sooo much pee inside you!

Big bro kneels beside you, an arm wrapped your back. “Ants are pretty cool huh buddy?” Uh-huh! But, oh, it’s getting really tingly in your weiner. Mmfh, it’s making your knees shake. “You Ok big guy?” Y-yep! You pop back up and let the shivers run through your legs. You grab big bro's paw, you’re ready to move again!

Another bit of walking takes you past plenty of big trees and pretty flowers. They all look awfully thirsty and smell so fresh, hmmm…ooh, there’s a water fountain! You’re feeling pretty thirsty yourself after so much exercise, you'll water the trees later.

You pull big bro over and take big greedy gulps, you have to pretzel your legs tight to stand somewhat still. Your impatient hips continue to sway back and forth.

Your brother chuckles as he pats the side of your wiggly butt. “I think somebody’s gotta pee…” He teases. You evilly chuckle back at him. He thinks he knows what you're capable of. You take a few more gulps from the fountain before leaning up. You feel the weight of all that water in your tummy, even after it reaches your balls, you still won't have to go pot—pee!

“You sure? Think of how good it'll feel to go now…” You blow him a raspberry as you take twisty steps in a potty dance. A big boy like you can't be swayed that easily! “Nuh-uh! Pee sounds like-psssssshhh…” Ooh, you feel all that pee tingling in your crotch. You send a paw between your thighs, and use the other to jab your big meanie bro in the side. “Ow, ow, ow, I’m sorry! I’m sorryyyyyy!” He cowers in fear, you chuff at a butt well kicked. “...You sure you don’t have to go?” All it takes is for you to raise a fist. “Alright, alright, let’s keep going buddy.”

You both continue around the park for what feels like a long time to your bursting bladder. Prancing around the other cool pond with turtles, crossing your legs as you watched a praying mantis climb a tree, asking big bro for a ‘sip’ of his soda that turned out to be more of a gulp…or two…or three, and happily denying every bathroom you passed. The park is so big and exciting, you swear you can keep walking forever! At least, you think you can, until…

Ooh…ooh! Your limit finally hits. You suddenly stop to jump wildly in place, partially out of excitement. A paw flying to your crotch is the only thing that stopped an ocean from flooding your underwear. Your wiener stings with urgency, your bladder is suffocating under the waistband of your briefs. It's time to go. Now.

“Uh-oh, I think somebody’s having an emergency…” A hint of worry stains big bro’s tone watching you bounce around. ‘Emergency?’ Not at all, a big boy like you’s got everything under control. You grab his paw and yank him over to a rock off the path. It stuck out of the grass to height just under your waist, with speckles that glistened in the sun. The perfect candidate for a dousing, and you literally can't wait to give it one.

You jog in place before your designated urinal. Jeez, your balls must be floating down there, you felt tight enough to yelp. In the midst of your calamitous movements, you manage to flash big bro an impish smirk, making sure he’s watching. Ugh, oh gosh you’re gonna burst. Oh gosh, it’s gonna feel so good! You tuck your eager thumbs into the waistband of your sweatpants, and yank! …And yank! …Yank, yank, yank! Oh no…the draw strings are too tight! Dang it, why are you so good at tying knots?!

“You got it buddy!” Big bro chuckles as your desperate hops grow erratic. “Don’t pee your pants!” You’re trying your hardest not to! No matter how hard you tug, the knot is steadfast and your pants are seemingly glued to your waist. Your eyes start to well up with tears, your crotch burns with urgency and your dances aren’t relieving it anymore. You really are gonna burst! No, no, no, you’re so close! You even found a good spot to mark! Not in front of big bro! Please!

“Hold on big guy, I got you.” As if he heard your mental cries, big bro kneels down for a rescue, his arms wrapping around your hips as he attacks your drawstrings. Mmph, his firm hold restricts your movements. You're helpless but to writhe and grind against him while the urgency in your crotch intensifies into a throb. You wail, the only thing you can do at the moment, begging him to hurry.

"I know buddy, I know, I’m almost done! You can do it!" You can’t see his progress on the knot through the tears clouding your vision. You clench your eyes shut and just bare through the searing bladder contractions. Big bro believes in you, but you think you feel a droplet go down your thigh...

“Got it!” Ooh, big bro got the knot undone! A quick tug of your two waistbands and his paw slips in your underwear. You gasp and whine as he grabs your weiner. At his touch, all your muscles turn to jelly. Your control disappears with a shiver, the floodgates open, and the dam starts to spill. You tilt your head back, it’s over…Half a second later, big bro pulls your penis to freedom. “Go, go, go!” He says, but you’re already peeing.

Your steamy golden jet of puppy juice explodes onto the rock, turning its dusty gray surface a wet, runny dark. Your eyes roll to the sky and you pant out like you just ran a marathon, soft whines on every exhale. Your angry stream sounds deafening, it sends waves of pleasure coursing through your privates and up your spine. You can’t bring yourself to look down at the unbelievable amount you're voiding, just a millisecond too late and it all would’ve been in your pants. The thought has your knees on the verge of giving out.

“There you go…” Big bro coos in your ear. You can hear his gentle smile through his voice, it makes you shudder even more. “Doesn't that feel good? Isn't that better than holding it in?” Oh gosh, yes it does. You nod meekly, your big boy ego softened. You're just grateful big bro helped you out in time…and his paw feels so soft and warm around your weiner. You lean your head back in his embrace, a dreamy smile spreading on your maw as you ride out the remainder of your bladder’s volume.

Your brother chuckles, affectionately brushing his cheek against yours. You can feel his eyes watching your stream gradually wane, it makes your weiner twitch on the final trickles. “You finished buddy?” He asks. You look down at your length, still wrapped in his grip with a lazy dribble. Yes, you answer, you’re fin—oh wait. You give a soft grunt, a 5 second squirt of urine sprinkles from your tip, ending in that same lazy dribble. You sigh contently…Ok now you’re finished.

“You silly puppy…good job.” He gently squeezes your weiner and shakes off the final droplets, making you shudder once more. He tucks your penis back in your briefs and straightens out the waistband.

Ooh, your undies are damp. So much to the point where your privates immediately grow clammy and warm. But it also kinda tickles…you kinda like it. You stay silent as big bro reties the strings on your sweatpants. He’ll never know.

“Feel better now?” Big bro asks with a warm smile. It's contagious, you smile back and gleefully nod before pulling him into a hug. That felt super duper good, and now all the other puppies will know that's your rock! You thank him for saving the day.

“Awww, you're welcome buddy.” He hugs back and licks your cheek. “You're gonna go potty right away from now on right?” ‘Potty?!’ You pull out of the hug and valiantly shake your head. “U-uh, I meant bathroom!” You snicker as you shake your head again. It's too late, he made his mistake and your mind is set. After all, there’s still so much park left to pee in! No problem for a big puppy like you of course…where’s the next water fountain?
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