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Sonic the Hedgehog is copyrighted by Sega

The manga is copyrighted by Shogakukan Inc.", "writing": "The Growing Pleasures by NooneSpeshul21\n\nParody of: Sonic the Hedgehog\n\nPages: 24+cover\n\nMajor Characters: Nicky the Hedgehog & Amy Rose\n\nMinor Characters: Dr. Eggman, Omelettes, Anton Veruca, Tania the Hedgehog, Paulie the Hedgehog & Brenda the Hedgehog\n\nContains: Vanilla\n\nCover:\nNicky and Amy are looking at each other awkwardly, both are blushing. Amy's clothing (a yellow shirt with an E on it, green frilly skirt & red and white sneakers) is tight on her body, like they're too small to fit.\n\nPage 1:\nPanel 1:\nThe setting is a laboratory hidden in a volcano. Eggman is laughing while Amy is held in a cage. Anton is also present.\n\nText box: Resort Island\n\nAmy: Help! Someone get me out!\n\nEggman: Ha! Ha! Ha! Yes! Scream to your heart's content! And then once that hedgehog comes to rescue you, I will finally have him!\n\nPanel 2:\nAnton talks to Eggman.\n\nAnton: Hey! I thought I was going to fight the showoffy hedgehog!\n\nEggman: Oh, you will, Anton, you will. And once you've finished roughhousing him, you give him to me and as per the agreement, you can have the girl.\n\nPanel 3:\nAnton flirts with Amy, making her uncomfortable.\n\nAnton: Fine by me. Imagine the future we'll have once that blue footed neusence is gone.\n\nPanel 4:\nOmellettes talks to Eggman, who turns to address him.\n\nOmellettes: Master Eggman, sir, I would like to inform you that Sonic the Hedgehog is approaching your secret base. He'll be here any second now.\n\nEggman: Perfect! The plan is about to unfold.\n\nPage 2:\nPanel 1:\nSonic spindashes through the rock wall.\n\nPanel 2:\nSonic lands and confronts Eggman, Anton & Omelettes.\n\nSonic: Return the girl, you vile fiends!\n\nEggman: Ah! Sonic. You're right on time for my master plan. Anton! Take care of this runt!\n\nAnton: With pleasure, boss.\n\nPanel 3:\nAnton uses his FuriFuri Attack (a tail whip attack) but Sonic jumps over him.\n\nPanel 4:\nAnton grabs Sonic's leg.\n\nAnton: Oh no you don't!\n\nPage 3:\nPanel 1:\nAnton slams Sonic on the ground.\n\nPanel 2:\nEggman is sitting on a chair eating popcorn that Omelettes is holding in a bowl.\n\nEggman: Ooh! This is entertaining!\n\nPanel 3:\nSonic curls up into a ball to escape Anton's grip and jumps up high.\n\nPanel 4:\nAnton smirks, looking up at Sonic.\n\nAnton: Oh, don't think I haven't prepared for that.\n\nPage 4:\nPanel 1:\nAnton jumps high to catch up to Sonic.\n\nPanel 2:\nAnton smacks Sonic's ball form down.\n\nPanel 3:\nSonic hits the ground in front of Eggman and Omelettes, seemingly knocked out and defeated.\n\nEggman: Ho ho ho! Finally! Sonic is mine!\n\nPanel 4:\nEggman commands Omelettes, who salutes him in response.\n\nEggman: Omelettes, let the brat out of her cage!\n\nOmelettes: Yes sir.\n\nPage 5:\nPanel 1:\nEggman picks Sonic up by the arm while in the background, Omelettes is opening Amy's cage.\n\nEggman: Well, well, well. Looks like I finally win. And once I've taken your powers, I will grind you into a spice for my Eggs Benedict Ala Sonic and then I will rule the world!\n\nPanel 2:\nSonic wakes up, smiling, much to Eggman's confusion.\n\nSonic: Not if I have anything to say about it.\n\nPanel 3:\nSonic revs up into his ball form, causing Eggman to lose his grip on Sonic's arm.\n\nEggman: Hey!\n\nPanel 4:\nSonic launches himself into Omelettes, destroying him.\n\nPage 6:\nPanel 1:\nAnton tries to punch Sonic, but misses, Sonic rolling past him.\n\nPanel 2:\nSonic rolls up the side of a big metal container, leaving a visible scratch mark.\n\nPanel 3: \nSonic jumps off the side of the container toward Anton.\n\nPanel 4:\nSonic knocks Anton down, pinning him to the floor.\n\nSonic: Gotcha! Looks like I win again.\n\nPage 7:\nPanel 1:\nAnton and Sonic hear a creaking noise and look over.\n\n(Sound effect: Creeeeak!)\n\nPanel 2:\nCracks start forming around the scratch.\n\nPanel 3:\nThe metal container breaks open, spilling a green liquid.\n\nPanel 4:\nThe liquid starts flooding the area, washing away Sonic and Anton.\n\nPage 8:\nPanel 1:\nThe lair is now halfway filled with the liquid. Eggman is above in his eggmobile.\n\nEggman: Well, guess that's it for the hedgehog. At least now I can conquer the world in peace.\n\nPanel 2:\nSonic jumps out of the liquid with Amy in his arms, both soaked from the stuff.\n\nPanel 3:\nSonic wall jumps out the hole at the top of the volcano.\n\nPanel 4:\nSonic runs away from the island, on the water, with Amy clinging onto him.\n\nPage 9:\nPanel 1:\nEggman pulls a lever which drains the liquid from the lair.\n\nPanel 2:\nEggman lands his eggmobile, mad that his plan failed.\n\nEggman: Drat! Another failed plan. Mark my words, hedgehog. You will be mine!\n\nAnton (off panel): Eggman?\n\nEggman: Oh, what is it now, you dumb brute?\n\nPanel 3:\nEggman sees Anton and is surprised. Anton looks different. His baseball cap is now off his head, which now has a full head of blonde hair, he has a blonde beard, his mouth is filled with sharp teeth, and his body has become bulkier.\n\nAnton: What did you do to me?\n\nEggman: Oh dear. Looks like you all got exposed to my experimental growth hormones. It's supposed to rapidly age any organic material. This could pose a problem. \n\nPage 10:\nPanel 1:\nIt's nightime in Hedgehog Town, Sonic is with Amy, in front of her home.\n\nText box: Hedgehog Town\n\nAmy: Thanks for saving me, Sonic.\n\nSonic: No problem, young lady! Well, I gotta dash. Even heroes need their beauty sleep.\n\nPanel 2:\nSonic speeds away, Amy waving goodbye.\n\nPanel 3:\nAmy is in her room, looking at a picture of Sonic and admiring it.\n\nAmy: You are my hero. If I didn't already have Nicky, I would want you as my boyfriend.\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy sleeps in her bed.\n\nPage 11:\nPanel 1:\nIt's morning and a house is shown.\n\nText box: Next day\n\nPanel 2:\nTania is entering Nicky's room, calling to her brother.\n\nTania: Brother! Rise and shine, it's time to get up!\n\nPanel 3:\nTania sees her brother in bed. Nicky's whole body is under the covers.\n\nNicky: Not now, Tania. I had a long day yesterday.\n\nPanel 4:\nTania is pulling the covers.\n\nTania: Come on, Nicky! You have to get up!\n\nPage 12:\nPanel 1:\nShown from Nicky's point of view. Tania is reacting in shock.\n\nTania: *Gasp*\n\nNicky (off panel): What? What's wrong?\n\nPanel 2:\nWe are in the kitchen, Paulie and Brenda at the table, Paulie reading a newspaper. They hear Tania's scream.\n\nAaaaaahhhhh!\n\nBrenda: That sounds like Tania. She must be in trouble.\n\nPaulie: Nah! Probably just another joke.\n\nPanel 3:\nThey hear a knock at the door.\n\n(sound effect: Knock! Knock! Knock!)\n\nPaulie: Oh! We have a visitor.\n\nBrenda: Must be one of Nicky's friends.\n\nPanel 4: \nBrenda approaches the door to open it. Paulie tags along.\n\nBrenda: We're coming!\n\nPage 13: \nPanel 1:\nShown from the visitor's point of view. The door is open and Paulie and Brenda react in shock.\n\nPaulie: *Gasp*\n\nBrenda: Amy?\n\nAmy (off panel): Please! Can you help me?\n\nPanel 2:\nTania runs to Paulie and Brenda.\n\nTania: Mommy! Daddy!\n\nPanel 3:\nTania runs into Brenda's arms.\n\nBrenda: Tania, sweetheart, what's wrong?\n\nTania: It's big brother! Something's happened to him!\n\nBrenda: What happened?\n\nNicky (off panel): Yeah, Tania. What? Why are you freaking out?\n\nPanel 4:\nSplit in half. The first half shows a close up of Nicky's eye. Second half shows a close up of Amy's eye. Both eyes show a reaction of shock.\n\nPage 14:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky are facing each other in shock, as they are now teenagers. Paulie, Brenda & Tania are also in the kitchen, equally in shock. Amy's clothes are tight on her body.\n\nNicky: Amy?\n\nAmy: Nicky?\n\nPanel 2:\nBrenda is with Nicky and Amy in the kitchen. Amy is now wearing a red headband, a light brown shirt, a sky blue frilly skirt, white gloves and sneakers.\n\nAmy: Thank you for the new outfit ma'am.\n\nBrenda: No problem. Consider it a gift from me to to you. Now do you have any idea what happened?\n\nPanel 3:\nNicky shrugs while Amy is pondering.\n\nNicky: No. I don't even remember anything that could connect to this.\n\nAmy: Actually, I think I can name what caused this.\n\nNicky: What do you mean?\n\nPage 15:\nPanel 1:\nAmy explains it to a confused Nicky.\n\nAmy: Well you see, yesterday, when I was kidnapped by Eggman, Sonic arrived and saved me. But we ended up getting covered in this green goop. I bet that's what's accelerated my age. But what I don't get is why you got older too. You weren't anywhere near the island.\n\nNicky: Huh. I don't know. The last thing I remember was celebrating my birthday in Hedgehog Forest with my friends and then the next thing I know, I was in front of my house, tired.\n\nPanel 2:\nBrenda talks to Nicky and Amy.\n\nBrenda: Well, it doesn't matter now. My boy is all grown up. I'd say a celebration is in order for both of you.\n\nPanel 3:\nAmy and Nicky look at each other happy.\n\nNicky: Yeah, she's right. This could be the best date we could have. We can do whatever we want.\n\nAmy: You're right. This day is gonna be fun.\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy and Nicky are leaving the house, Nicky wearing a red polo shirt and holding a bag of rings. Brenda and Paulie are there to say goodbye.\n\nBrenda: Goodbye, sweetie! Have fun on your date!\n\nNicky: I will! See ya soon, Mom!\n\nPage 16:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky are at a pizza restaraunt, where they're having pizza.\n\nPanel 2:\nAmy and Nicky are skateboarding together.\n\nPanel 3:\nAmy and Nicky are at a mall where Amy is trying out clothes.\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy and Nicky go to the movies.\n\nPage 17:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky see a movie poster rated \"R\"\n\nPanel 2:\nAmy and Nicky buy popcorn and soda.\n\nPanel 3:\nAmy and Nicky are enjoying the movie.\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy and Nicky blush, indicating that something sexual is happening on the screen.\n\nPage 18:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky are leaving the movie theater, still flustered from the movie they saw.\n\nNicky: Well, that's the first time I've seen something like that.\n\nAmy: Yeah, same here.\n\nPanel 2:\nNicky talks to Amy while holding up his bag of rings.\n\nNicky: Hey, I have enough rings for one more special event to conclude our date, if you're interested.\n\nAmy: Oh! Well, sure Nicky. I'd love to.\n\nPanel 3:\nThey are now in a hotel room.\n\nNicky: Now this is the life. This is the perfect way to end a date.\n\nAmy: I agree. But...\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy and Sonic flirt with each other.\n\nAmy: How about we take this a step further? Like that couple from the movie we saw.\n\nNicky: That is an excellent idea, Amy.\n\nPage 19:\nPanel 1:\nAmy is giving a blowjob to Nicky.\n\nPanel 2:\nClose up of Amy sucking Nicky's cock.\n\nPanel 3:\nNicky moans, his climax approaching.\n\nNicky: Oh, Amy! I'm close! Keep going!\n\nPanel 4:\nNicky orgasms all over Amy.\n\nPage 20:\nPanel 1:\nAmy wipes the cum off her face. Nicky looks embarrassed.\n\nNicky: Oh, um... Sorry. Didn't mean to do that.\n\nPanel 2:\nAmy licks her hand.\n\nAmy: Don't be. Just return the favor.\n\nPanel 3:\nAmy is now in her underwear, sitting on the edge of the bed as Nicky licks Amy's pussy while she rubs her breasts.\n\nPanel 4:\nClose up of Nicky licking Amy's pussy.\n\nPage 21:\nPanel 1:\nAmy is moaning, her climax approaching.\n\nAmy: Oh, Nicky! Here it comes. I'm gonna...\n\nPanel 2: \nAmy climaxes on Nicky's face.\n\nAmy: Aaaahhhh!\n\nPanel 3:\nNicky takes off his glasses and wipes his face.\n\nPanel 4:\nNicky talks to Amy.\n\nNicky: That was amazing. How about we finish this off?\n\nPage 22:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky are both nude and in the missionary position.\n\nPanel 2:\nAmy and Nicky in the spooning position.\n\nPage 3:\nAmy and Nicky are doing it doggy style.\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy and Nicky are in the cowgirl position.\n\nPage 23:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky continue to have sex while they talk to each other.\n\nNicky: Amy! I'm getting close again. I'm gonna-\n\nAmy: Go ahead! Do it inside me!\n\nPanel 2:\nAmy and Nicky cum together.\n\nBoth: Aaaaaahhhh!\n\nPanel 3:\nAmy and Nicky lie in bed, panting.\n\nPanel 4:\nAmy and Nicky kiss.\n\nPage 24:\nPanel 1:\nAmy and Nicky look at each other.\n\nNicky: This has been a wonderful date, Amy. I love you.\n\nAmy: Me too. You know, you look handsome without your glasses. Why if I didn't know any better, I would think you were...\n\nPanel 2:\nAmy comes to a realization, talking to a surprised Nicky.\n\nAmy: Wait a minute! That's why you got older like I did. You're Sonic the Hedgehog!\n\nNicky: Me?\n\nThe End...", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "The Growing Pleasures by NooneSpeshul21

Parody of: Sonic the Hedgehog

Pages: 24+cover

Major Characters: Nicky the Hedgehog & Amy Rose

Minor Characters: Dr. Eggman, Omelettes, Anton Veruca, Tania the Hedgehog, Paulie the Hedgehog & Brenda the Hedgehog

Contains: Vanilla

Cover:
Nicky and Amy are looking at each other awkwardly, both are blushing. Amy's clothing (a yellow shirt with an E on it, green frilly skirt & red and white sneakers) is tight on her body, like they're too small to fit.

Page 1:
Panel 1:
The setting is a laboratory hidden in a volcano. Eggman is laughing while Amy is held in a cage. Anton is also present.

Text box: Resort Island

Amy: Help! Someone get me out!

Eggman: Ha! Ha! Ha! Yes! Scream to your heart's content! And then once that hedgehog comes to rescue you, I will finally have him!

Panel 2:
Anton talks to Eggman.

Anton: Hey! I thought I was going to fight the showoffy hedgehog!

Eggman: Oh, you will, Anton, you will. And once you've finished roughhousing him, you give him to me and as per the agreement, you can have the girl.

Panel 3:
Anton flirts with Amy, making her uncomfortable.

Anton: Fine by me. Imagine the future we'll have once that blue footed neusence is gone.

Panel 4:
Omellettes talks to Eggman, who turns to address him.

Omellettes: Master Eggman, sir, I would like to inform you that Sonic the Hedgehog is approaching your secret base. He'll be here any second now.

Eggman: Perfect! The plan is about to unfold.

Page 2:
Panel 1:
Sonic spindashes through the rock wall.

Panel 2:
Sonic lands and confronts Eggman, Anton & Omelettes.

Sonic: Return the girl, you vile fiends!

Eggman: Ah! Sonic. You're right on time for my master plan. Anton! Take care of this runt!

Anton: With pleasure, boss.

Panel 3:
Anton uses his FuriFuri Attack (a tail whip attack) but Sonic jumps over him.

Panel 4:
Anton grabs Sonic's leg.

Anton: Oh no you don't!

Page 3:
Panel 1:
Anton slams Sonic on the ground.

Panel 2:
Eggman is sitting on a chair eating popcorn that Omelettes is holding in a bowl.

Eggman: Ooh! This is entertaining!

Panel 3:
Sonic curls up into a ball to escape Anton's grip and jumps up high.

Panel 4:
Anton smirks, looking up at Sonic.

Anton: Oh, don't think I haven't prepared for that.

Page 4:
Panel 1:
Anton jumps high to catch up to Sonic.

Panel 2:
Anton smacks Sonic's ball form down.

Panel 3:
Sonic hits the ground in front of Eggman and Omelettes, seemingly knocked out and defeated.

Eggman: Ho ho ho! Finally! Sonic is mine!

Panel 4:
Eggman commands Omelettes, who salutes him in response.

Eggman: Omelettes, let the brat out of her cage!

Omelettes: Yes sir.

Page 5:
Panel 1:
Eggman picks Sonic up by the arm while in the background, Omelettes is opening Amy's cage.

Eggman: Well, well, well. Looks like I finally win. And once I've taken your powers, I will grind you into a spice for my Eggs Benedict Ala Sonic and then I will rule the world!

Panel 2:
Sonic wakes up, smiling, much to Eggman's confusion.

Sonic: Not if I have anything to say about it.

Panel 3:
Sonic revs up into his ball form, causing Eggman to lose his grip on Sonic's arm.

Eggman: Hey!

Panel 4:
Sonic launches himself into Omelettes, destroying him.

Page 6:
Panel 1:
Anton tries to punch Sonic, but misses, Sonic rolling past him.

Panel 2:
Sonic rolls up the side of a big metal container, leaving a visible scratch mark.

Panel 3:
Sonic jumps off the side of the container toward Anton.

Panel 4:
Sonic knocks Anton down, pinning him to the floor.

Sonic: Gotcha! Looks like I win again.

Page 7:
Panel 1:
Anton and Sonic hear a creaking noise and look over.

(Sound effect: Creeeeak!)

Panel 2:
Cracks start forming around the scratch.

Panel 3:
The metal container breaks open, spilling a green liquid.

Panel 4:
The liquid starts flooding the area, washing away Sonic and Anton.

Page 8:
Panel 1:
The lair is now halfway filled with the liquid. Eggman is above in his eggmobile.

Eggman: Well, guess that's it for the hedgehog. At least now I can conquer the world in peace.

Panel 2:
Sonic jumps out of the liquid with Amy in his arms, both soaked from the stuff.

Panel 3:
Sonic wall jumps out the hole at the top of the volcano.

Panel 4:
Sonic runs away from the island, on the water, with Amy clinging onto him.

Page 9:
Panel 1:
Eggman pulls a lever which drains the liquid from the lair.

Panel 2:
Eggman lands his eggmobile, mad that his plan failed.

Eggman: Drat! Another failed plan. Mark my words, hedgehog. You will be mine!

Anton (off panel): Eggman?

Eggman: Oh, what is it now, you dumb brute?

Panel 3:
Eggman sees Anton and is surprised. Anton looks different. His baseball cap is now off his head, which now has a full head of blonde hair, he has a blonde beard, his mouth is filled with sharp teeth, and his body has become bulkier.

Anton: What did you do to me?

Eggman: Oh dear. Looks like you all got exposed to my experimental growth hormones. It's supposed to rapidly age any organic material. This could pose a problem.

Page 10:
Panel 1:
It's nightime in Hedgehog Town, Sonic is with Amy, in front of her home.

Text box: Hedgehog Town

Amy: Thanks for saving me, Sonic.

Sonic: No problem, young lady! Well, I gotta dash. Even heroes need their beauty sleep.

Panel 2:
Sonic speeds away, Amy waving goodbye.

Panel 3:
Amy is in her room, looking at a picture of Sonic and admiring it.

Amy: You are my hero. If I didn't already have Nicky, I would want you as my boyfriend.

Panel 4:
Amy sleeps in her bed.

Page 11:
Panel 1:
It's morning and a house is shown.

Text box: Next day

Panel 2:
Tania is entering Nicky's room, calling to her brother.

Tania: Brother! Rise and shine, it's time to get up!

Panel 3:
Tania sees her brother in bed. Nicky's whole body is under the covers.

Nicky: Not now, Tania. I had a long day yesterday.

Panel 4:
Tania is pulling the covers.

Tania: Come on, Nicky! You have to get up!

Page 12:
Panel 1:
Shown from Nicky's point of view. Tania is reacting in shock.

Tania: *Gasp*

Nicky (off panel): What? What's wrong?

Panel 2:
We are in the kitchen, Paulie and Brenda at the table, Paulie reading a newspaper. They hear Tania's scream.

Aaaaaahhhhh!

Brenda: That sounds like Tania. She must be in trouble.

Paulie: Nah! Probably just another joke.

Panel 3:
They hear a knock at the door.

(sound effect: Knock! Knock! Knock!)

Paulie: Oh! We have a visitor.

Brenda: Must be one of Nicky's friends.

Panel 4:
Brenda approaches the door to open it. Paulie tags along.

Brenda: We're coming!

Page 13:
Panel 1:
Shown from the visitor's point of view. The door is open and Paulie and Brenda react in shock.

Paulie: *Gasp*

Brenda: Amy?

Amy (off panel): Please! Can you help me?

Panel 2:
Tania runs to Paulie and Brenda.

Tania: Mommy! Daddy!

Panel 3:
Tania runs into Brenda's arms.

Brenda: Tania, sweetheart, what's wrong?

Tania: It's big brother! Something's happened to him!

Brenda: What happened?

Nicky (off panel): Yeah, Tania. What? Why are you freaking out?

Panel 4:
Split in half. The first half shows a close up of Nicky's eye. Second half shows a close up of Amy's eye. Both eyes show a reaction of shock.

Page 14:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky are facing each other in shock, as they are now teenagers. Paulie, Brenda & Tania are also in the kitchen, equally in shock. Amy's clothes are tight on her body.

Nicky: Amy?

Amy: Nicky?

Panel 2:
Brenda is with Nicky and Amy in the kitchen. Amy is now wearing a red headband, a light brown shirt, a sky blue frilly skirt, white gloves and sneakers.

Amy: Thank you for the new outfit ma'am.

Brenda: No problem. Consider it a gift from me to to you. Now do you have any idea what happened?

Panel 3:
Nicky shrugs while Amy is pondering.

Nicky: No. I don't even remember anything that could connect to this.

Amy: Actually, I think I can name what caused this.

Nicky: What do you mean?

Page 15:
Panel 1:
Amy explains it to a confused Nicky.

Amy: Well you see, yesterday, when I was kidnapped by Eggman, Sonic arrived and saved me. But we ended up getting covered in this green goop. I bet that's what's accelerated my age. But what I don't get is why you got older too. You weren't anywhere near the island.

Nicky: Huh. I don't know. The last thing I remember was celebrating my birthday in Hedgehog Forest with my friends and then the next thing I know, I was in front of my house, tired.

Panel 2:
Brenda talks to Nicky and Amy.

Brenda: Well, it doesn't matter now. My boy is all grown up. I'd say a celebration is in order for both of you.

Panel 3:
Amy and Nicky look at each other happy.

Nicky: Yeah, she's right. This could be the best date we could have. We can do whatever we want.

Amy: You're right. This day is gonna be fun.

Panel 4:
Amy and Nicky are leaving the house, Nicky wearing a red polo shirt and holding a bag of rings. Brenda and Paulie are there to say goodbye.

Brenda: Goodbye, sweetie! Have fun on your date!

Nicky: I will! See ya soon, Mom!

Page 16:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky are at a pizza restaraunt, where they're having pizza.

Panel 2:
Amy and Nicky are skateboarding together.

Panel 3:
Amy and Nicky are at a mall where Amy is trying out clothes.

Panel 4:
Amy and Nicky go to the movies.

Page 17:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky see a movie poster rated "R"

Panel 2:
Amy and Nicky buy popcorn and soda.

Panel 3:
Amy and Nicky are enjoying the movie.

Panel 4:
Amy and Nicky blush, indicating that something sexual is happening on the screen.

Page 18:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky are leaving the movie theater, still flustered from the movie they saw.

Nicky: Well, that's the first time I've seen something like that.

Amy: Yeah, same here.

Panel 2:
Nicky talks to Amy while holding up his bag of rings.

Nicky: Hey, I have enough rings for one more special event to conclude our date, if you're interested.

Amy: Oh! Well, sure Nicky. I'd love to.

Panel 3:
They are now in a hotel room.

Nicky: Now this is the life. This is the perfect way to end a date.

Amy: I agree. But...

Panel 4:
Amy and Sonic flirt with each other.

Amy: How about we take this a step further? Like that couple from the movie we saw.

Nicky: That is an excellent idea, Amy.

Page 19:
Panel 1:
Amy is giving a blowjob to Nicky.

Panel 2:
Close up of Amy sucking Nicky's cock.

Panel 3:
Nicky moans, his climax approaching.

Nicky: Oh, Amy! I'm close! Keep going!

Panel 4:
Nicky orgasms all over Amy.

Page 20:
Panel 1:
Amy wipes the cum off her face. Nicky looks embarrassed.

Nicky: Oh, um... Sorry. Didn't mean to do that.

Panel 2:
Amy licks her hand.

Amy: Don't be. Just return the favor.

Panel 3:
Amy is now in her underwear, sitting on the edge of the bed as Nicky licks Amy's pussy while she rubs her breasts.

Panel 4:
Close up of Nicky licking Amy's pussy.

Page 21:
Panel 1:
Amy is moaning, her climax approaching.

Amy: Oh, Nicky! Here it comes. I'm gonna...

Panel 2:
Amy climaxes on Nicky's face.

Amy: Aaaahhhh!

Panel 3:
Nicky takes off his glasses and wipes his face.

Panel 4:
Nicky talks to Amy.

Nicky: That was amazing. How about we finish this off?

Page 22:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky are both nude and in the missionary position.

Panel 2:
Amy and Nicky in the spooning position.

Page 3:
Amy and Nicky are doing it doggy style.

Panel 4:
Amy and Nicky are in the cowgirl position.

Page 23:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky continue to have sex while they talk to each other.

Nicky: Amy! I'm getting close again. I'm gonna-

Amy: Go ahead! Do it inside me!

Panel 2:
Amy and Nicky cum together.

Both: Aaaaaahhhh!

Panel 3:
Amy and Nicky lie in bed, panting.

Panel 4:
Amy and Nicky kiss.

Page 24:
Panel 1:
Amy and Nicky look at each other.

Nicky: This has been a wonderful date, Amy. I love you.

Amy: Me too. You know, you look handsome without your glasses. Why if I didn't know any better, I would think you were...

Panel 2:
Amy comes to a realization, talking to a surprised Nicky.

Amy: Wait a minute! That's why you got older like I did. You're Sonic the Hedgehog!

Nicky: Me?

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