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Max picked the club for two reasons, one the music was right up Zach's alley and two it had a socially friendly atmosphere no matter which way you swung.\n\nZach looked up dead staring and started to smile \"No nothings wrong why you say that...why did you say that.\" Zach said with a smile. Max looked puzzled and said \"Because your drinking it's not like you\" Zach laughed and said \"I just wanted to try it that's all I will admit I didn't expect the addictive properties in alcohol to have that big effect I'm also surprised that a depressant gave me such a high.\"\n\nMax leaned over until he touched noses with Zach. \"Max what are...\" Zach started to say but was interrupted by Max saying. \"You talk too much\" Max then kissed Zach and Zach woke up from his day dream to reveal Ryan kissing him. \"there we go guys he's back.\" Ryan said smiling. Ryan walked away to talk with Jack. Zach and Max were left alone and Zach started to remember where he was.\n\nZach was at a Halloween party hosted at a club well, his fantasy got that right he was not out with just Max in fact it was a pretty big party a costume party. This brought Zach back to reality and he took a look at what he was wearing. \"Oh my god!\" Zach said blushing and then looked around at what his other friends were wearing.\n\nZach was wearing a leather out fit consisting of a leather tank top and crotchless leather pants he was wearing a bikini styled leather underwear Zach was thankful for it too. He was wearing leather boots and leather gloves as well, he even had a biker cap on. \n\nRyan was wearing the exact same thing the only difference Ryan was wearing a collar with a broken chain and Zach soon realized the other half of the chain was on his person. \"Oh..that's...\"\n\nKinky was the word that came to his mind but, he was too embarrassed to say it out load. Max was across from him he was wearing a military officer's uniform,to be more exact a space military officer's uniform. Jack was wearing a gladiator's uniform, Ben was wearing an angel costume and Bev was wearing a devils uniform.\n\nCassie was also there at the other side of the room she was wearing a simple evening gown. Looking at Jack Zach noticed he was staring at Cassie the look on his face was one of heartbreak. The room fell away and Zach made his way over to the only thing that mattered at that moment. Zach finally stood in front of Jack and without saying a word wrapped his arms around the husky. Zach started rocking back and forth and said. \"it's okay Jack\"\n\nRyan caught a look at this and at first thought Zach is a good friend but, that quickly turned into Ryan attacking Jack. \"STOP!\" Zach screamed with tears in his eyes. Bev and Ben left with Cassie who was also crying. Max pulled Zach away by his arms and away from the bloody mess called Ryan and Jack. The sound of sirens resonated along with screams and cries it would be a long night.\n\n***\n\nAt the beginning of the night each Ryan and Jack had plenty of visitors by the end Zach was all that remained. Zach was switching between both their rooms all night worried about both. Zach checked the time 2:00 AM. \"Bye Ryan have to go check on Jack\" Zach said. Zach was turning away when Ryan grabbed his hand. \"Zach why did you hug Jack'\" Ryan asked weakly. Zach looked discouraged not because of the question because he has asked this question all night and each time Zach answered Ryan would stare off and even though he didn't say it Zach knew he thought he was lying.\n\nZach teared up and sobbingly gave the answer he gave all night. \"I was comforting a friend in pain that's all I love you I really do.\" Ryan turned to Zach this time and said \"I think we should break up.\" his stare was cold and unmoving. Zach nodded slowly tearing up some more and left his room.\n\n\"Zach are you there?\" Said a weak voice. Zach turned and went to the room he was sure it was coming from and knew who it was coming from. \"Jack what is it I'm here?\" Zach said by his bed side. Jack looked up his nose had a cut and his muzzle looked sore but he smiled and said.\"Thanks Zach your a good friend, I'll talk to Ryan ,I promise, just take my cellphone and call Cassie please I want to see her.\" Zach calmly nodded found his cell phone called Cassie then called Max to pick him up. Zach said goodbye to Jack and went outside the hospital and waited on a bench.\n\n\"Well I suck\" Zach said. Zach imagined Ben and Bev both wearing their halloween costumes. The costume ben was wearing had the camisole Zach wore that night with Ryan along with the the boy shorts, however Ben had on kneehigh white stockings complete with white high heels. On his back was a pair of sparkling small angel wings he had no halo. He also appeared to have lots of body glitter on.\n\nBev was wearing a simple strapless tight red dress. She had red fish net stocking and gloves and kneehigh gogo boots with what looked like a hair band with horns on it like you would buy from a halloween store. Zach sighed not in the mood for one of his hallucinations. \"Please just go away let me drown in sorrow\" Zach said sadly.\n\n\"Zach come on now just go with it\" ben said placing a hand on his shoulder. \"Yeah Zach just go with it\" Bev said putting hand on his other shoulder. \"I am not in the mood for a a fake conversation.\" said Zach. Bev and Ben looked at each other and laughed. \"Zach were not fake were right here\" bev said suprised. Zach stared for a few minutes apolgized and they all sat down. \n\n\"So Zach why do you think you suck?\" Ben asked softly.\n\nZach sighed and said. \"I just...don't think I'm worth...\" Bev interrupted him and said \"Zach you have to stop this,seriously you have to stop selling your self short your a great guy,great guy really tell him Ben. Ben looked over and smiled at Zach and said. \"Zach you are quite a catch take it from someone who is intrested. You are intelligent a lot more then your lazy behavior lets others believe. You are not only smart but, very sweet,sweeter then most girls even, your also very shy a trait most find endearing.You Zach are not just a catch but, the catch everyone hopes for.\"\n\nZach blushed and hugged both Bev and Ben. \"Thanks guys that means a lot.\" Ben and Bev left and Zach was soon greeted by Max. Max started to drive Zach home and the two started talking about normal things until Zach couldn't take it anymore.\n\n\"Max I want to tell you..nothing\" Zach said sadly. Max's ears perked down and he said \"I know...how you look at me...and...I think...\" \"Me and Ryan broke up...so\"Zach said as his whiskers twitched. Max stopped the car and said \"We're here\" Zach's whiskers and ears dropped down \"oh ok bye...th\" Zach was interrupted by Max grabbing his hand and saying \"Lets not do this your sad I know and honestly I could cry looking at your sadness and I want...you to be happy and honestly I could be happy with you I think.\"\n\nZach started tearing up and said \"I think we could be...but...I don't want to hurt Ryan..but...I want to be happy...I..I..I..\" Zach then started to cry hard tears ran down his face and he started to shake. Max leaned forward and held Zach against him while he shaked Max also leaned to where his convertible opened.\n\n \"Zach don't cry please\" Max said. It started to rain softly Max smiled and said \"Let me make your dreams come true or at least just one\" Max took off Zach's shirt and turned him around and leaned Zach's back against his chest. \"Don't let the rain be your enemy let it wash your troubles away\" Zach stopped crying and smiled. \"You said...\" Zach stopped smiled and said \"Raindrops keep fallin' on my head\" Max then said \"And just like the guy whose feet are too big for his bed\" and they sang for a while. In Zach's mind it wasn't exactly like his dream but, he wouldn't trade this feeling for nothing. He felt happy and best of all the one he daydreamed about was with him and he didn't realize it until now but, it wasn't hormones he was sure he loved this person.\n\n\"I love you\" Zach said touching Max's hands to his own.\n\n***\n\nRyan and Jack had a long talk the morning of their release and when it was over they amended their friendship. Ryan realizing the events of last night started to tear up but, instead of going to Zach he went home got in his room and didn't come out for the rest of the day.\n\n \n\n \n\n \n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "An annoyed German Shepard looked Zach over and said. "OK buddy I think you've had enough to drink." Max came over to slurring Zach and supported him with his side as he pulled him away from the bar and over to a couple of chairs. "Zach are you OK?" Max said worryingly.

 Max had brought Zach to this club to hangout and relax with his friend but, Zach seemed to be more interested in tricking the bartender into thinking he was 21 then dancing like Max thought he would. Max picked the club for two reasons, one the music was right up Zach's alley and two it had a socially friendly atmosphere no matter which way you swung.

Zach looked up dead staring and started to smile "No nothings wrong why you say that...why did you say that." Zach said with a smile. Max looked puzzled and said "Because your drinking it's not like you" Zach laughed and said "I just wanted to try it that's all I will admit I didn't expect the addictive properties in alcohol to have that big effect I'm also surprised that a depressant gave me such a high."

Max leaned over until he touched noses with Zach. "Max what are..." Zach started to say but was interrupted by Max saying. "You talk too much" Max then kissed Zach and Zach woke up from  his day dream to reveal Ryan kissing him. "there we go guys he's back." Ryan said smiling. Ryan walked away to talk with Jack. Zach and Max were left alone and Zach started to remember where he was.

Zach was at a Halloween party hosted at a club well, his fantasy got that right he was not out with just Max in fact it was a pretty big party a costume party. This brought Zach back to reality and he took a look at what he was wearing. "Oh my god!" Zach said blushing and then looked around at what his other friends were wearing.

Zach was wearing a leather out fit consisting of a leather tank top and crotchless leather pants he was wearing a bikini styled leather underwear Zach was thankful for it too. He was wearing leather boots and leather gloves as well, he even had a biker cap on.

Ryan was wearing the exact same thing the only difference Ryan was wearing a collar with a broken chain and Zach soon realized the other half of the chain was on his person. "Oh..that's..."

Kinky was the word that came to his mind but, he was too embarrassed to say it out load. Max was across from him he was wearing a military officer's uniform,to be more exact a space military officer's uniform. Jack was wearing a gladiator's uniform, Ben was wearing an angel costume and Bev was wearing a devils uniform.

Cassie was also there at the other side of the room she was wearing a simple evening gown. Looking at Jack Zach noticed he was staring at Cassie the look on his face was one of heartbreak. The room fell away and Zach made his way over to the only thing that mattered at that moment. Zach finally stood in front of Jack and without saying a word wrapped his arms around the husky. Zach started rocking back and forth and said. "it's okay Jack"

Ryan caught a look at this and at first thought Zach is a good friend but, that quickly turned into Ryan attacking Jack. "STOP!" Zach screamed with tears in his eyes. Bev and Ben left with Cassie who was also crying. Max pulled Zach away by his arms and away from the bloody mess called Ryan and Jack. The sound of sirens resonated along with screams and cries it would be a long night.

***

At the beginning of the night each Ryan and Jack had plenty of visitors by the end Zach was all that remained. Zach was switching between both their rooms all night worried about both. Zach checked the time 2:00 AM. "Bye Ryan have to go check on Jack" Zach said. Zach was turning away when Ryan grabbed his hand. "Zach why did you hug Jack'" Ryan asked weakly. Zach looked discouraged not because of the question because he has asked this question all night and each time Zach answered Ryan would stare off and even though he didn't say it Zach knew he thought he was lying.

Zach teared up and sobbingly gave the answer he gave all night. "I was comforting a friend in pain that's all I love you I really do." Ryan turned to Zach this time and said "I think we should break up." his stare was cold and unmoving. Zach nodded slowly tearing up some more and left his room.

"Zach are you there?" Said a weak voice. Zach turned and went to the room he was sure it was coming from and knew who it was coming from. "Jack what is it I'm here?" Zach said by his bed side. Jack looked up his nose had a cut and his muzzle looked sore but he smiled and said."Thanks Zach your a good friend, I'll talk to Ryan ,I promise, just take my cellphone and call Cassie please I want to see her." Zach calmly nodded found his cell phone called Cassie then called Max to pick him up. Zach said goodbye to Jack and went outside the hospital and waited on a bench.

"Well I suck" Zach said. Zach imagined Ben and Bev both wearing their halloween costumes. The costume ben was wearing had the camisole Zach wore that night with Ryan along with the the boy shorts, however Ben had on kneehigh white stockings complete with white high heels. On his back was a pair of sparkling small angel wings he had no halo. He also appeared to have lots of body glitter on.

Bev was wearing a simple strapless tight red dress. She had red fish net stocking and gloves and kneehigh gogo boots with what looked like a hair band with horns on it like you would buy from a halloween store. Zach sighed not in the mood for one of his hallucinations. "Please just go away let me drown in sorrow" Zach said sadly.

"Zach come on now just go with it" ben said placing a hand on his shoulder. "Yeah Zach just go with it" Bev said putting hand on his other shoulder. "I am not in the mood for a a fake conversation." said Zach. Bev and Ben looked at each other and laughed. "Zach were not fake were right here" bev said suprised. Zach stared for a few minutes apolgized and they all sat down.

"So Zach why do you think you suck?" Ben asked softly.

Zach sighed and said. "I just...don't think I'm worth..." Bev interrupted him and said "Zach you have to stop this,seriously you have to stop selling your self short your a great guy,great guy really tell him Ben. Ben looked over and smiled at Zach and said. "Zach you are quite a catch take it from someone who is intrested. You are intelligent a lot more then your lazy behavior lets others believe. You are not only smart but, very sweet,sweeter then most girls even, your also very shy a trait most find endearing.You Zach are not just a catch but, the catch everyone hopes for."

Zach blushed and hugged both Bev and Ben. "Thanks guys that means a lot." Ben and Bev left and Zach was soon greeted by Max. Max started to drive Zach home and the two started talking about normal things until Zach couldn't take it anymore.

"Max I want to tell you..nothing" Zach said sadly. Max's ears perked down and he said "I know...how you look at me...and...I think..." "Me and Ryan broke up...so"Zach said as his whiskers twitched. Max stopped the car and said "We're here" Zach's whiskers and ears dropped down "oh ok bye...th" Zach was interrupted by Max grabbing his hand and saying "Lets not do this your sad I know and honestly I could cry looking at your sadness and I want...you to be happy and honestly I could be happy with you I think."

Zach started tearing up and said "I think we could be...but...I don't want to hurt Ryan..but...I want to be happy...I..I..I.." Zach then started to cry hard tears ran down his face and he started to shake. Max leaned forward and held Zach against him while he shaked Max also leaned to where his convertible opened.

 "Zach don't cry please" Max said. It started to rain softly Max smiled and said "Let me make your dreams come true or at least just one" Max took off Zach's shirt and turned him around and leaned Zach's back against his chest. "Don't let the rain be your enemy let it wash your troubles away" Zach stopped crying and smiled. "You said..." Zach stopped smiled and said "Raindrops keep fallin' on my head" Max then said "And just like the guy whose feet are too big for his bed" and they sang for a while. In Zach's mind it wasn't exactly like his dream but, he wouldn't trade this feeling for nothing. He felt happy and best of all the one he daydreamed about was with him and he didn't realize it until now but, it wasn't hormones he was sure he loved this person.

"I love you" Zach said touching Max's hands to his own.

***

Ryan and Jack had a long talk the morning of their release and when it was over they amended their friendship. Ryan realizing the events of last night started to tear up but, instead of going to Zach he went home got in his room and didn't come out for the rest of the day.

 

 

 

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