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Zach is sobbing quietly at a lunch table in the back of the outside eating area. Jack, Max, and Ray are just inside looking out through a window. “Seriously does anyone know what’s wrong with him?” said Jack. Ray licked his lips and said with a cat grin “Zach want’s a date for the welcome back dance and on top of being the most hated senior for his little mishap freshmen year and coming out last year the odds are cutie pie won’t get a date real shame waste of a good boy really!” Max furrowed his whiskers but said nothing.\n\n****\n\nZach is at home alone in his room sulking and looking at himself in the mirror. Zach is average height, skinny and weak. He’s is not much to look at as far as he’s concerned. His fur is bright white and shines his hair is brown, short and shaggy. His eyes are a rose pink that matches his nose and his whiskers are primed straight and angled.\n\n “I’m ugly” he said crying throwing a hair brush at the mirror. The brush missed by a lot, Zach was terrible at hand eye coordination a trait he’s convinced will send him to an early grave. “Whatever just as well” Zach said sourly. Zach walked away from the mirror and sat down at the only thing in his room other than the bed a desk. Zach is kind of a neat freak and a little paranoid his walls were bare for the reason of he believes that if there was anything on the walls it only be to conceal a camera or some other kind of recording device. \n\n His floor had nothing on it so no creepy crawlers could hide particularly spiders he had a pathological fear of spiders. Just seeing one would cause him to freeze not faint freeze just stand there motionless. His closet was the messiest thing in his room not because of clothes; his clothes were in a dresser in the hallway outside his room. No the closet was full of old birthday gifts graded papers and whole lot of cleaning supplies. On a plus it was a walk in closet and had plenty of room you could even fit his room in it. A gift from his parents on Christmas but, in reality it was just so they wouldn’t have to look at the dresser in the hallway anymore a gift that didn’t really pan out and just sort of created a breeding ground for junk.\n\nThe desk Zach was sitting at was in good condition. It was wooden like the chair and fairly big enough for two books and his laptop to sit on top of it at the same time. Zach stroked his whiskers and turned on the laptop the after loaded and logged in he checked his messenger the only real reason he got on. The laptop was given to him by Max so they could all talk to each other since Zach didn’t really like using a phone. “Huh I have a message?” Zach’s chat on his instant messenger was blinking it was Max. “I wonder what he wants.” Zach said. Zach looked and there was a single message it gave Zach a funny feeling reading it.\n\nZach I know you’ve been upset and want to make you feel better so I say this out of care and love for my best friend SCREW THE DANCE! I’m going to hang out with you that night and I promise you’ll have a lot a fun. I’ll do the works dinner, movie, and dammit if you really want to we will go dancing and not the slowdown bullshit that you and I find depressing I mean shake your hips dancing! I love and care about you Zach and I promise I’ll make you feel better-Max\n\n“The way it’s written… it sounds like…a date” Zach said. Zach scoffed at this thought knowing Max to well, I mean there was a moment in junior year Zach thought Max was interested but, he quickly shot that down when he vented about not having a girlfriend. Zach’s instant messenger blinked again. “Who can it be now? Who can it be knocking at my door? Make no sound, tip-toe across the floor. If he hears, he'll knock all day, I’ll be trapped, and here I'll have to stay. I've done no harm, I keep to myself; There's nothing wrong with my state of mental health. I like it here with my childhood friend; Here they come, those feelings again!” Zach sang.\n\n Zach laughed he had a thing about music especially 80’s music. If he could say a line in normal conversation he would then finish the next part and to him that meant something was going to happen. Now there was no proof to this theory of Zach’s but, he stuck by it unfortunately Zach wasn’t quick to catch or think of a song lyric to say; moments like this were pure luck and gave Zach a feeling of accomplishment. Zach acted smart and in truth he was very smart he was just lazy extremely lazy like, never do your homework to the last minute lazy.\n\n If he really wanted to he could get straight A’s but, he doesn’t he just wants to get through high school as fast as possible. Of course Zach knows this would all change if he had boyfriend he would slow down and enjoy his high school life but, for now he paints a smile on his face and just wipes away his tears and just acts like he feels better. Zach looked at the messenger and noticed it was from Ryan. \n\nHey Zach cutie pie I was wondering well, actually I’m asking if you would like to go to the dance with me message me later maybe late at night ;)-Ryan\n\n“Uh...” said Zach. Zach closed his computer and walked inside his bathroom complete with a tub that fit two people another gift from his parents installed junior year. “Damn that cheetah” Zach said shutting the bathroom door. Ryan was a flirt and a perv but, worst then that was that he was gorgeous. He had the sweetest green eyes and the shiniest smile like a prince in a fairy tale. He was tall like Zach but, unlike Zach he was built. His muscles were just the right amount of buff to where he was strong looking but, not artificial. His fur was another major attraction it had fluff a fact Zach found out freshman year when they meet at swim tryouts. Zach wasn’t there to audition he was there the same reason guys well, other guys go to cheerleading practice. Zach couldn’t just go though and be a perv so he chooses a person at random and cheered for them to get in; he picked Ryan and by the end of the meeting Ryan came over and this conversation transpired.\n\nRyan: You’re a cute cheerleader thanks for encouraging me or did you cheer for me for a different reason?\n\nZach: I…I’m not…Well…\n\nRyan: I’m Ryan what’s your name and I’m not either.\n\nZach: I’m Zach…n-nice to meet you Ryan.\n\nRyan: you to…\n\nZach: I’m gay (Whispered)\n\nRyan: Me too (Whispered)\n\nZach: I think you’re cute too… (Whispered)\n\nRyan: I know why else would you watch me like that (Whispered)\n\nZach: Um I want…uh…can we…I…\n\n(Ryan pulled Zach close to him and stroked his hair)\n\nRyan: I’d love to be your friend cutie pie. (Whispered)\n\nRyan was the first person he came out to and Ryan’s sweetness at that moment was nice. This was the only moment however, the rest that year and after were spent trying to get in Zach’s pants. In truth Zach didn’t mind if he was in a good mood the trouble was when he was in a bad mood he wouldn’t let up. In fact Ryan found Zach’s depression cute for a reason Zach didn’t know. It irritated him and in Zach’s mind it labeled Ryan as a jerk but, a cute jerk. A jerk through all the teasing and groping Zach knew really did care about him just didn’t really show it. \n\n“You’re driving me crazy Ryan!” Zach said panting. He ripped off his clothes and stepped in the shower. His right hand turned the faucet while his left was preoccupied with his rapidly growing member. As the water rolled down his body his tail twitched from the warm sensation. His body got a fuzzy feeling and his pink nipples became hard and looked red. Zach took both his hands and put them against his face and started to breath hard. The feeling of the air hitting his hands was extremely pleasuring to Zach, he removed his hands and placed them behind his back holding each elbow by the other arms hands and he started to squeeze hard. It made it feel like he was in an embrace. He tilted his head down and breathed so it felt like someone was breathing on him.\n\n His hands started to feel numb so he released his arms. He took his hands and stroked his fingers across his member. He moaned deeply and his rear and tail began to twitch. His nose began to twitch and he sneezed. His head body felt fuzzy after and his toes curled. Zach removed his right hand from his member his member let his left grab hold of his member fully. He moaned again and positioned his right hand in front of his rectum. He lay down on his back and started to slowly finger himself with his right hand while his left hand continued to stroke up and down his tip. He moaned slowly whispering a name; he came shortly after. He moved his hands above his head and breathed heavily. The hot water from the shower turned cold and Zach laid there in a moment of bliss and depression. \n\n****\n\nZach arrived at the dance wearing an old style tuxedo with a red bowtie his hair was combed and his black dress shoes were shined. In less than 5 minutes he was surrounded by girls not because of his looks but because of his ride it was a cherry red corvette. “Hey Zach!” Ryan said waving. The girls dispersed and Ryan came over wearing a black suit with a silk red tie. Zach started to blush “You look…great…Ryan.”\n\n Ryan walked over and grabbed Zach’s left hand and led him inside the gym. They walked over to Jack and his girlfriend Cassie. Jack was tall ripped husky with black and white fur. He was currently wearing the school’s letterman jacket along with black denim jeans and tennis shoes. His girlfriend was a black furred vulpine with neon purple hair. \n\nShe was thin nice looking and wearing a short white dress with sparkling silver high heels. “Hey Zach you feeling better?” asked Jack. Zach looked up blushing and smiling said “yeah I think so.” Ryan listened and noticed the song was slowing down took Zach by the hand and lead him out of the gym. “Where are we going Ryan?” Zach asked.\n\n“To the indoor swimming area” Ryan said. “Wha...”Zach said. “Zach, trust me OK.” Ryan said smiling. Zach blushed deeply nodding. Part of him figured Ryan was leading him into another attempt to have sex with him but, honestly another part of Zach didn’t care anymore that was how far he sank. He was hoping maybe if Ryan finally had him tonight maybe that lust might turn into love. \n\nZach was lead inside the pool and didn’t bother to talk just started to unbutton his shirt knowing the groping was coming. “Uh…Zach something wrong?” Ryan asked concerned. Zach looked up from unbuttoning to see Ryan by a boom box ready to press play. Zach blushing stopped at the fourth button and looked at him and asked “Uh…nothing Ryan what are you doing?” Ryan smiled pressed play and Michael Jackson’s thriller started playing. \n\nLike a reflex Zach started dancing and Ryan got up took him by the hands and danced with him. “Why are you doing this why are we dancing why are you not trying to…?” Zach said but was cut off by Ryan saying this. “Zach, I’m sorry for all of it when I groped you I liked you and still do but, more than that when you were sad I tried to seduce you to make you forget your sadness and just focus on being mad at me.” \n\nRyan pulled Zach close and stroked his hair and said “I didn’t want you to focus on anyone’s hate words and just focus on yourself, I hate when you’re mad but, if it’s at me for something like a flattering move towards you I don’t mind and I think you don’t mind either not as much as you think.” Zach teared up smiling and nuzzled his nose against Ryan's and leaned forward to kiss him. \n\n“Zach come quick!’ Jack yelled barging in. Zach and Ryan pulled away from each other interrupted by Jack . \"it's...,Zach come quick...\" Jack said sadly. Zach and Ryan followed Jack . Halfway there Zach fell to his knees and started to cry and then it started to rain. \"Zach don't let...\" Ryan started but cut him self off. Cassie walked up to Jack and said \"I called the police.\" \"good ,is Zach okay Ryan?\" Jack asked.\n\n Ryan looked around Zach was no where around and the rain was falling hard he took a look to see if his car was still there it was. It was in the same way Zach saw it before falling to his knees. The corvette's windows were broken as well as the lights and the word Fag was key scratched on all sides with a number of other words ,on the hood the phrase Welcome Back Loser was on the hood signed the senior class. \n\n***\n\nZach was walking in the rain crying sluggish in movement . His whiskers were turned downward and his tail was turned downward. \"Why do they hate me?\" Zach said sobbingly. \"Zach!\" said a voice. Zach looked up to see Max walking toward him . Zach looked and noticed he walked to his house.The sky shook with thunder and Zach shivered and fell to the ground. He was afraid of thunder and he was un able to stop shivering.\n\n \"Zach hold on!\" Max said . He walked over got down on the ground and leaned Zach on his back. He then leaned Zach against him and started to rock him back and forth. \"Max...I don't understand...\" Zach started to say but was shushed by Max. \"just rest don't let the rain be your enemy, let the refreshing rain just wash your troubles away.\" \n\nMax stroked the part of Zach's chest that was exposed (Zach never rebuttoned his shirt so the four buttons are still unbuttoned) \"Max that feels nice.\" Zach said somberly. Max continued to stroke and the rain stopped Max smiled and said \"I'm glad.\" Max leaned his head and started to lick Zach's face. Zach blushed and sighed heavily. Max stopped only to receive whimper. \"I'm sorry let make you feel even better\" Max said sweetly. He nuzzled against Zach with his whole body and pressed his lips against his. They both blushed and Zach leaned against him and said \"Thank You for that.\"\n\n***\n\nZach looked around and noticed he was on a couch covered in a cacoon of covers. He looked around and noticed the room he was in this was Max's house. \"Max!\" Zach called. \"be back in a minute!\" Max called back. Zach sighed but started to wait until he felt something. \"Why am I...\" Zach started to ask.\n\n\"Sorry I did that I didn't want you to catch a cold, I didn't take advantage I promise.\" said a voice. \"Ryan...I trust you really I'm just confused what exactly happened.\" Zach was thinking of his activity with Max was it a dream? Zach had an obvious answer when he felt himself under the covers subtlety. Zach sighed getting his answer. \n\n\"I'm pathetic\" Zach whispered. Ryan kissed Zach on the lips got on top of him and pressed his body against him. Ryan stopped kissing him and said \"I don't know why you think your pathetic but ,your not...hard maybe but, not pathetic.\" Zach for the first time in a while laughed. \"Ryan will you be my boyfriend?\"\n\n***\n\nZach was sitting at his desk wearing nothing but his underwear checking messages on his laptop.\n\nHey found the jerks who did this and the school said they would pay for damages.-Jake\n\n\"that's great!\" Zach said.\n\nHey Zach hope you feel better we should hang out when you do-Max\n\n\"Max...It felt so...\" Zach was interrupted by the messenger.\n\nZach What do you think of me since were an item now? ;)-Ryan\n\nZach froze and typed furiously.\n\nI used to think maybe you loved me now baby I'm sure-Zach\n\nZach stood up and smiled grabbed the hair brush he threw earlier and started to sing into it.\n\n\"And I just cant wait till the day when you knock on my door, Now everytime I go for the mailbox , gotta hold myself down,Cos I just wait till you write me your coming around ,I'm walking on sunshine , wooah, I'm walking on sunshine, woooah, I'm walking on sunshine, woooah and don't it feel good!!\" Zach continued to sing the song over and over again smiling and dancing knowing good things are coming and just maybe he won't mind a little more groping from Ryan even in public. \n\n \n\n \n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "“Poor Zach I saw him like this at the other day too, guys we really have to try and cheer him up!” said Jack. Zach is sobbing quietly at a lunch table in the back of the outside eating area. Jack, Max, and Ray are just inside looking out through a window. “Seriously does anyone know what’s wrong with him?” said Jack. Ray licked his lips and said with a cat grin “Zach want’s a date for the welcome back dance and on top of being the most hated senior for his little mishap  freshmen year and coming out last year the odds are cutie pie won’t get a date real shame waste of a good boy really!” Max furrowed his whiskers but said nothing.

****

Zach is at home alone in his room sulking and looking at himself in the mirror. Zach is average height, skinny and weak. He’s is not much to look at as far as he’s concerned. His fur is bright white and shines his hair is brown, short and shaggy. His eyes are a rose pink that matches his nose and his whiskers are primed straight and angled.

  “I’m ugly” he said crying throwing a hair brush at the mirror. The brush missed by a lot, Zach was terrible at hand eye coordination a trait he’s convinced will send him to an early grave. “Whatever just as well” Zach said sourly. Zach walked away from the mirror and sat down at the only thing in his room other than the bed a desk. Zach is kind of a neat freak and a little paranoid his walls were bare for the reason of he believes that if there was anything on the walls it only be to conceal a camera or some other kind of recording device.

 His floor had nothing on it so no creepy crawlers could hide particularly spiders he had a pathological fear of spiders. Just seeing one would cause him to freeze not faint freeze just stand there motionless.  His closet was the messiest thing in his room not because of clothes; his clothes were in a dresser in the hallway outside his room. No the closet was full of old birthday gifts graded papers and whole lot of cleaning supplies. On a plus it was a walk in closet and had plenty of room you could even fit his room in it. A gift from his parents on Christmas but, in reality it was just so they wouldn’t have to look at the dresser in the hallway anymore a gift that didn’t really pan out and just sort of created a breeding ground for junk.

The desk Zach was sitting at was in good condition. It was wooden like the chair and fairly big enough for two books and his laptop to sit on top of it at the same time.  Zach stroked his whiskers and turned on the laptop the after loaded and logged in he checked his messenger the only real reason he got on. The laptop was given to him by Max so they could all talk to each other since Zach didn’t really like using a phone. “Huh I have a message?” Zach’s chat on his instant messenger was blinking it was Max. “I wonder what he wants.” Zach said. Zach looked and there was a single message it gave Zach a funny feeling reading it.

Zach I know you’ve been upset and want to make you feel better so I say this  out of care and love for my best friend SCREW THE DANCE! I’m going to hang out with you that night and I promise you’ll have a lot a fun. I’ll do the works dinner, movie, and dammit if you really want to we will go dancing and not the slowdown bullshit that you and I find depressing I mean shake your hips dancing! I love and care about you Zach and I promise I’ll make you feel better-Max

“The way it’s written… it sounds like…a date” Zach said. Zach scoffed at this thought knowing Max to well, I mean there was a moment in junior year Zach thought Max was interested but, he quickly shot that down when he vented about not having a girlfriend. Zach’s instant messenger blinked again. “Who can it be now? Who can it be knocking at my door? Make no sound, tip-toe across the floor. If he hears, he'll knock all day, I’ll be trapped, and here I'll have to stay. I've done no harm, I keep to myself; There's nothing wrong with my state of mental health. I like it here with my childhood friend; Here they come, those feelings again!” Zach sang.

 Zach laughed he had a thing about music especially 80’s music. If he could say a line in normal conversation he would then finish the next part and to him that meant something was going to happen. Now there was no proof to this theory of Zach’s but, he stuck by it unfortunately Zach wasn’t quick to catch or think of a song lyric to say; moments like this were pure luck and gave Zach a feeling of accomplishment.  Zach acted smart and in truth he was very smart he was just lazy extremely lazy like, never do your homework to the last minute lazy.

 If he really wanted to he could get straight A’s but, he doesn’t he just wants to get through high school as fast as possible. Of course Zach knows this would all change if he had boyfriend he would slow down and enjoy his high school life but, for now he paints a smile on his face and just wipes away his tears and just acts like he feels better. Zach looked at the messenger and noticed it was from Ryan.

Hey Zach cutie pie I was wondering well, actually I’m asking if you would like to go to the dance with me message me later maybe late at night ;)-Ryan

“Uh...” said Zach. Zach closed his computer and walked inside his bathroom complete with a tub that fit two people another gift from his parents installed junior year. “Damn that cheetah” Zach said shutting the bathroom door. Ryan was a flirt and a perv but, worst then that was that he was gorgeous. He had the sweetest green eyes and the shiniest smile like a prince in a fairy tale. He was tall like Zach but, unlike Zach he was built. His muscles were just the right amount of buff to where he was strong looking but, not artificial. His fur was another major attraction it had fluff a fact Zach found out freshman year when they meet at swim tryouts. Zach wasn’t there to audition he was there the same reason guys well, other guys go to cheerleading practice. Zach couldn’t just go though and be a perv so he chooses a person at random and cheered for them to get in; he picked Ryan and by the end of the meeting Ryan came over and this conversation transpired.

Ryan: You’re a cute cheerleader thanks for encouraging me or did you cheer for me for a different reason?

Zach: I…I’m not…Well…

Ryan: I’m Ryan what’s your name and I’m not either.

Zach: I’m Zach…n-nice to meet you Ryan.

Ryan: you to…

Zach: I’m gay (Whispered)

Ryan: Me too (Whispered)

Zach: I think you’re cute too… (Whispered)

Ryan: I know why else would you watch me like that (Whispered)

Zach: Um I want…uh…can we…I…

(Ryan pulled Zach close to him and stroked his hair)

Ryan: I’d love to be your friend cutie pie. (Whispered)

Ryan was the first person he came out to and Ryan’s sweetness at that moment was nice. This was the only moment however, the rest that year and after were spent trying to get in Zach’s pants. In truth Zach didn’t mind if he was in a good mood the trouble was when he was in a bad mood he wouldn’t let up.  In fact Ryan found Zach’s depression cute for a reason Zach didn’t know. It irritated him and in Zach’s mind it labeled Ryan as a jerk but, a cute jerk. A jerk through all the teasing and groping Zach knew really did care about him just didn’t really show it.

“You’re driving me crazy Ryan!” Zach said panting. He ripped off his clothes and stepped in the shower.  His right hand turned the faucet while his left was preoccupied with his rapidly growing member. As the water rolled down his body his tail twitched from the warm sensation.  His body got a fuzzy feeling and his pink nipples became hard and looked red.  Zach took both his hands and put them against his face and started to breath hard. The feeling of the air hitting his hands was extremely pleasuring to Zach, he removed his hands and placed them behind his back holding each elbow by the other arms hands and he started to squeeze hard.  It made it feel like he was in an embrace. He tilted his head down and breathed so it felt like someone was breathing on him.

 His hands started to feel numb so he released his arms. He took his hands and stroked his fingers across his member. He moaned deeply and his rear and tail began to twitch. His nose began to twitch and he sneezed. His head body felt fuzzy after and his toes curled. Zach removed his right hand from his member his member let his left grab hold of his member fully. He moaned again and positioned his right hand in front of his rectum. He lay down on his back and started to slowly finger himself with his right hand while his left hand continued to stroke up and down his tip. He moaned slowly whispering a name; he came shortly after. He moved his hands above his head and breathed heavily. The hot water from the shower turned cold and Zach laid there in a moment of bliss and depression.

****

Zach arrived at the dance wearing an old style tuxedo with a red bowtie his hair was combed and his black dress shoes were shined. In less than 5 minutes he was surrounded by girls not because of his looks but because of his ride it was a cherry red corvette. “Hey Zach!” Ryan said waving. The girls dispersed and Ryan came over wearing a black suit with a silk red tie. Zach started to blush “You look…great…Ryan.”

 Ryan walked over and grabbed Zach’s left hand and led him inside the gym. They walked over to Jack and his girlfriend Cassie. Jack was tall ripped husky with black and white fur. He was currently wearing the school’s letterman jacket along with black denim jeans and tennis shoes. His girlfriend was a black furred vulpine with neon purple hair.

She was thin nice looking and wearing a short white dress with sparkling silver high heels. “Hey Zach you feeling better?” asked Jack. Zach looked up blushing and smiling said “yeah I think so.” Ryan listened and noticed the song was slowing down took Zach by the hand and lead him out of the gym. “Where are we going Ryan?” Zach asked.

“To the indoor swimming area” Ryan said. “Wha...”Zach said. “Zach, trust me OK.” Ryan said smiling. Zach blushed deeply nodding. Part of him figured Ryan was leading him into another attempt to have sex with him but, honestly another part of Zach didn’t care anymore that was how far he sank. He was hoping maybe if Ryan finally had him tonight maybe that lust might turn into love.

Zach was lead inside the pool and didn’t bother to talk just started to unbutton his shirt knowing the groping was coming. “Uh…Zach something wrong?” Ryan asked concerned. Zach looked up from unbuttoning to see Ryan by a boom box ready to press play. Zach blushing stopped at the fourth button and looked at him and asked “Uh…nothing Ryan what are you doing?”  Ryan smiled pressed play and Michael Jackson’s thriller started playing.

Like a reflex Zach started dancing and Ryan got up took him by the hands and danced with him.  “Why are you doing this why are we dancing why are you not trying to…?” Zach said but was cut off by Ryan saying this. “Zach, I’m sorry for all of it when I groped you I liked you and still do but, more than that when you were sad I tried to seduce you to make you forget your sadness and just focus on being mad at me.”  

Ryan pulled Zach close and stroked his hair and said “I didn’t want you to focus on anyone’s hate words and just focus on yourself, I hate when you’re mad but, if it’s at me for something like a flattering move towards you I don’t mind and I think you don’t mind either not as much as you think.” Zach teared up smiling and nuzzled his nose against Ryan's and leaned forward to kiss him.

“Zach come quick!’ Jack yelled barging in. Zach and Ryan pulled away from each other  interrupted by Jack . "it's...,Zach come quick..."  Jack said sadly.  Zach and Ryan followed Jack . Halfway there Zach fell to his knees and started to cry and then it started to rain. "Zach don't let..." Ryan  started but cut him self off. Cassie walked up to Jack  and said "I called the police." "good ,is Zach okay Ryan?" Jack asked.

 Ryan looked around Zach was no where around and the rain was falling hard he took a look to see if his car was still there it was. It was in the same way Zach saw it before falling to his knees. The corvette's windows were broken as well as the lights and the word Fag was key scratched on all sides with a number of other words ,on the hood the phrase Welcome Back Loser was on the hood signed the senior class.

***

Zach was walking in the rain crying sluggish in movement . His whiskers were turned downward and his tail was turned downward. "Why do they hate me?" Zach said sobbingly.  "Zach!" said a voice. Zach looked up to see Max walking toward him . Zach looked and noticed he walked to his house.The sky shook with thunder and Zach shivered and fell to the ground. He was afraid of thunder and he was un able to stop shivering.

 "Zach hold on!" Max said . He walked over got down on the ground and  leaned Zach on his back. He then leaned Zach against him and started to rock him back and forth. "Max...I don't understand..." Zach started to say but was shushed by Max. "just rest don't let the rain be your enemy, let the refreshing rain just wash your troubles away."

Max stroked the part of Zach's chest that was exposed (Zach never rebuttoned his shirt so the four buttons are still unbuttoned)  "Max that feels nice." Zach said somberly.  Max continued to stroke and the rain stopped Max smiled and said "I'm glad."  Max leaned his head and started to lick Zach's face. Zach blushed and sighed heavily. Max stopped only to receive whimper. "I'm sorry let make you feel even better" Max said sweetly. He nuzzled against Zach with his whole body and pressed his lips against his. They both blushed and  Zach leaned against him and said "Thank You for that."

***

Zach looked around and noticed he was on a couch covered in a cacoon of covers. He looked around and noticed the room he was in this was Max's house. "Max!" Zach called.  "be back in a minute!" Max called back. Zach sighed but started to wait until he felt something. "Why am I..." Zach started to ask.

"Sorry I did that I didn't want you to catch a cold, I didn't take advantage I promise." said a voice. "Ryan...I trust you really I'm just confused what exactly happened." Zach was thinking of his activity with Max was it a dream? Zach had an obvious answer when he felt himself under the covers subtlety. Zach sighed getting his answer.

"I'm pathetic" Zach whispered. Ryan kissed Zach on the lips got on top of him and pressed his body against him. Ryan stopped kissing him and said "I don't know why you think your pathetic but ,your not...hard maybe but, not pathetic." Zach for the first time in a while laughed. "Ryan will you be my boyfriend?"

***

Zach was sitting at his desk wearing nothing but his underwear  checking messages on his laptop.

Hey found the jerks who did this and the school said they would pay for damages.-Jake

"that's great!" Zach said.

Hey Zach hope you feel  better  we should hang out when you do-Max

"Max...It felt so..." Zach was interrupted by the messenger.

Zach What do you think of me since were an item now? ;)-Ryan

Zach froze and typed furiously.

I used to think maybe you loved me now baby I'm sure-Zach

Zach stood up  and smiled grabbed the hair brush he threw earlier and started to sing into it.

"And I just cant wait till the day when you knock on my door, Now everytime I go for the mailbox , gotta hold myself down,Cos I just wait till you write me your coming around ,I'm walking on sunshine , wooah, I'm walking on sunshine, woooah, I'm walking on sunshine, woooah and don't it feel good!!" Zach continued to sing the song over and over again  smiling and dancing knowing good things are coming and just maybe he won't mind a little more groping from Ryan even in public.

 

 

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