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Here is the next installment of the Junior Leagues - Compilation of short stories detailing the adventures and demise of some young heroes or villains.

In this PART 1 installment, we follow 2 bank robbers on a short heist. Only to come across a strange colt who wants to wart their plans.

Stay tuned for part 2 and HOPEFULLY it wont take as long to do >_< ", "writing": "The Rise and Fall of the Junior Leagues - Entrapment of the Elasta-Colt PART 1\n\n\nBRRRT BRRRT BRRRT BRRRT \n\nMid afternoon. Peak of daily trading. Alarms from a bank sound as cops quickly surround the front entrance within minutes. Quick to respond as two large rhinos casually stroll out. Both buff, both holding bags of money, and both not even fazed as they casually walk towards the cop cars. \n\n“Freeze! Stop right there or we will open fire!” - says a small meerkat officer over a loud speaker, making the rhinos laugh at how this small creature is trying to appear intimidating. \n\n“Ready, brother?!” - one rhino says in a deep grumble to the other who replies with a huffing grunt and nod. \n\n“FIRE!” - yells the meerkat officer in to the loud speaker as he sees the rhinos charge towards the cars. \n\nBoth running at full speed as almost a dozen officers fire various sized guns at the large charging brutes. Shotguns, rifles, pistols, even tazers. All of them hitting both rhinos yet all the bullets have no affect. All of the rounds practically bounce off as they hit the thieves skin. Both are trying their best to not let the money in the bags get hit as they charge at full speed. \nThey both charge through two separate patrol cars in their paths. It was like watching a freight train hit a bicycle. They ripped through both cars like knives to butter. Not a scratch, no halt in their speed, they charged through and kept on running. \n\n“HALT, CROOKS!” - a voice says as a figure jumps down from the rooftops. A massive Stallion with equally bulging muscles stands before the rhinos. A big cannon for a left arm and an axe in his right hand - “I will not let you pass!” \n\nA civilian is heard calling from across the street - “IT’S THE HERO, DRAFT RAGE!” - called that due to being a draft horse breed, one of the strongest breed of equine, and has been known to have a short temper. \n\n“You both face Draft Rage! Now prepare to be taken down!” \n\n“Challenge Accepted!” - both rhinos say in unison as they both charge faster. \n\nThe hero raises his cannon arm and fires at one of the rhinos square in the face then grips and swings his axe in a deadly form to try and cleave the other’s head clear. The exploding cannon causes smoke as some screams can be heard from civilians as part of a building was destroyed as well as a random car was sent flying due to the shockwave of the blast. \nSmoke covers the battling area only for a short while yet both rhino’s run out of the opposite end unscathed. Both laughing with their mouths full as their horns are covered in blood. \nOne rhino has the stallion’s cannon arm in his mouth, torn from the shoulder, while the other has one of the colts legs in his, ripped from the stallion’s waist. \n\nThe smoke quickly clears and a couple civilians run over. Screams are instantly heard as it is revealed the stallion was practically ripped to shreds with big foot prints imbedded in his half crushed face and his crushed chest. Limbs torn from him as the rhinos ripped through and keep on running. \n\nCop cars give chase as other heroes join as well. \nGrizzly Slammer - a male brown bear that’s skinny as a twig yet can easily knock down a building with a single punch. \nWing Commander - a female eagle with razor sharp feathers and even sharper talons. \nStriped Vengeance - a male tiger wearing a self-made jetpack who has no super powers but has many gadgets and tactile armaments. \n\nThe three heroes give aid as they chase down the rhinos along side the police. Yet even they, with their strength, their speed, and their gadgets ... They can’t seem to catch up. \n\n“The more they run the faster they get?! How is this possible?!” - remarks Striped Vengeance as he boosts his jetpack to full speed knowing full well he wont have much manoeuvring control, yet he has to catch up. \n\nHis jetpack bursts and he flies at MK-1. Aiming straight at one rhino only even he, a great tactician, wasn’t expecting the rhino to turn around and start running backward at the exact same speed. The big beast smiled at the hero who was gaining quickly only the rhino stopped, only for a brief second with his horn up. But it was enough time to catch his prey off-guard. \nStriped Vengeance screams as he tries to pull up but he’s going too fast as the horn connects with the tiger’s throat and slices straight through the hero’s body. Tearing through him with his insanely strong sharp horn. Ripping through from neck to groin. \n\nThe last thing the hero saw was a smile of pure hatred right before feeling his guts spilling out. He managed to pull up but it was too late. Out of shock he pressed the acceleration on his controls and went straight to MK-3 for 2 seconds before ripping through 3 buildings and exploding. \n\nThe rhino resumed the run with his counter part who slowed up slightly to allow his partner to catch up. But then they went back to the run. Very quickly, Grizzly Slammer had no choice but to stop as he had no way of keeping up the chance. The rhino’s left him in the dust. \nWing Commander still tried. Flapping her wings as hard as she could and was gaining on them. \n\nBut even her attempts seemed futile as she threw razor feathers at them yet they did nothing but bounce off - “Impossible! My feathers can cut through diamond! How can this be?!” \n\nSoon came the end of the street but both rhino’s didn’t stop. There was a massive building in front of them and all they did was effortlessly charge through. Taring through walls and steel beams like they weren’t even there only to come out of the other side in seconds. \n\n“There’s no way?! Even a building didn’t slow them! Just what are they?!” - angrily snarks the winged heroin as she still tries to follow. Keeping her distance as she felt useless yet could still try to tail them. \nShe loses sight of them under a bridge as she is up high so she zooms as fast as she can to the other side. Only ... “What?! Where’s they go?!” \nShe dived down fast under the bridge yet both rhinos had disappeared. There were no doors. No other exits. She knew there were cars, trucks, vans, all passing by at that moment yet the rhinos were going too fast to just stop. \n\n“There’s no way?! How?! Where’d they go?! WHERE ARE YOU?!” - she ends up shouting in to an empty void. The duo were simply gone. \n\nOn television that afternoon, a quick memorial is held for Draft Rage and Striped Vengeance. Both of their deaths were caught on camera from random phones. Capturing the stallion being lost in smoke only to be found torn apart, another from someone capturing the moment Striped Vengeance tore through their building and exploding right after. \n\nOne such viewer of all of this was watching as there were reports that the two assailants could not be stopped. How they made off with millions of dollars without so much as a scratch. \nThis viewer, hiding in the shadows as light hurts his eyes. Yet even he saw something no one else did. \n\nSitting at his computer he managed to hack private files from the hero-forums relating to the chase. \n\n“The heroin Winged Justice chased the pair until she lost them under a bridge. Camera reports in the area are unclear as the two seem to just vanish. Hmmm. Interesting. I doubt these two have invisibility as well as their endurance. But let’s see” \n\nThe figure hacks in to the street cameras on both the way the rhino’s entered, and from the other side of the bridge. \nBut he didn’t stop there. He looked at other cameras from surrounding streets - “Nothing there” - he turned his attention to a few block radius - “still nothing”. \nHe went back to the bridge, knowing there would have to be some secrets there whilst also trying to read the report some more. \n\n“The two were running at over 150kmh so they wouldn’t have been able to just stop and catch a ride. They would have had to keep running. Reports say there was nothing under the bridge to signify a short range teleportation nor any tachyons to indicate teleportation or invisibility”. \n\nThe figure sitting in his chair gulps down mouthfuls of battery acid like it was water as he continues to look through the files and footage. \nYet, as he relaxes his eyes. As he leans back to ponder. He notices something. Something faint. Something quick. Something so small in detail in gets his attention. \n“Hmmm? What’s that?” - he says as he zooms in on the street camera as the duo rhinos run under.\n\nHe notices there is a strange flash. Easily mistaken as a reflection of car light from the underpass. Yet, no cars had their lights on as they exited. \n“What is that?!” - he says as he looks closer as he zooms in more. And more. Closer. And closer. Right as the light hits he sees something that looks like rocks hit the ground. \n“Rocks? From one of the trucks maybe?” - He zooms in as much as he can. Something so small in detail yet a big break in the case. As his eyes widen as he pauses just a micro-second after the light. \n\n“Gotcha!” - the rhino’s didn’t disappear - “You changed your mass! You both didn’t vanish, you simply just shrank in size!” \nHe quickly goes over all the other reports. \n“Bullets did nothing. Wing Commander’s feathers didn’t do anything. Striped Vengeance’s armour was made to withstand friction, temperature, and earth’s own atmosphere yet it was easily cut through! The cop cars! Said to have been hit with a brutish force yet the rhinos hadn’t built up speed then, merely started their sprint! So how could they have ripped through so easily?” \n\nThe surprised hero gulped down the battery-acid drink as he pondered and pondered until the solution hit him - “They not only shrink but they can change their mass! Their own body shape! Their size! Their centripetal force! That’s how they got away!” \n\nHe brings up a diagram of the bridge from the online city schematics and the planning for the sewer system. \n“There’s a grate that is only fifteen centimetres wide yet it leads to the sewers! Easy enough for them to go down in to at their size!” \nHe follows the sewer line, yet with hundreds of exits, there would be too many to look for. \n\n“Wait! Their size! They couldn’t be able to sustain that size for long. So one assumes they may not be able to do it again soon after either. So based on their size I just have to find an exit that could be ... GOT YAS!” \n\nHours later the sun has set. The street lamps come on all around the city and even at the docks. \nAt the docks is a large meat processing plant which has a tunnel system that leads to the Sewage Treatment Plant further down. It is the only place that has doors leading from the sewer line that are big enough to accommodate 2 exhausted rhinos. \nThe two smile as they’ve packed the money in to a large black truck. They’ve changed their clothes from the black attire in to casual clothes that you can say resemble a typical farmer’s. Plaid shirts, very tight fitting blue jeans, and both chewing on a thistle each. \n\n“We did it, brother! No cop, no hero, no worries!” - says one rhino in the driver seat as his brother just looks at him and grunts again. \n\nThe roller doors go up as both rhino’s look outward, turning on the truck lights, only to see a small figure standing about twenty meters away on the other side of the roller door. \nA young stallion. In a sleeveless blue hoodie wearing massive dark tinted glasses and very short black shorts. Standing there as the rhinos rev the truck - “Out the way punk or we’ll run your ass over!” - shouts the driver-side rhino with his head out the window as the other sticks his head out and lets out a huffing grunt. \n\nThe stallion just stands there smiling as he pulls out his phone and takes a snapshot of the truck, the rhinos, and even the license plate. \n“You little cunt! That’s it!” - the driver revs the engine, acceleration to the floor, the rear wheels screeching and smoking right before he releases the hand-break and yells at the kid angrily - “Fuck you!” \n\nThe car exits the door in a hurry, speedily racing towards the young boy but it is instantly stopped with a loud CRASH. Airbags go off. The horn constantly sounds from the damage The rhinos are grunting as they rip the airbags apart to get a view of what just happened. \n \nIn moments they are both in shock as this young stallion was still standing where he was. He hadn’t budged yet the truck had no affect. \nThe men look on in shock as they see the boy lift his right hand only their eyes shoot open wide as his hand grows to a size larger than the car. \n“Whaaaaat theeeeEEE FUUUUUCK?! OUT!” - yells the driving rhino as both brothers escape from the car just before the boy’s hand smashes down on the car and crumples the front half of it like a soda can. \nBoth men just look at the boy as his hand returns to normal with a sly smile on his face. \n\n“Gotta hand it to yas. You both had the cops fooled. You even had the heroes fooled. Thy simply could not grasp the idea of how you both simply vanished. There aren’t too many who can change their mass like you both can. Yet, you both are amateurs. Such power and you use it to rob a bank? Able to shift your own mass at will yet you can’t seem to do it often. I went out on a whim and only hypothesised you both wouldn’t be able to use your abilities for long. Thank you both for confirming it” \n\nThe young stallion’s arm stretches to the back of the half crushed vehicle. Ripping the doors off with ease before reaching in to grab more than half of the bags of money - “I want you both to know, I’m not completely robbing you. I’ve left you with some, for your troubles” \n\nBefore his arm is retracted one of the men jumps on the boy’s arm and grunts while trying to grip it to death. Trying to rip it like he had done to the hero stallion earlier. Only he finds he can’t even squeeze the boy’s limb at all. \n\n“What are you trying to do? That wont work on me. I may look small and helpless to you both. I mean, look at you. You’re both so jacked. You both look like you’ve hit the gym too many times. But let me show you what it really means to control one’s mass!” \n\nIn an instant the boy simply lets his arm drop as the rhino is slammed hard through the ground. Exploding and cracking the cement driveway with ease. Making it raise and break all around the now-made crater. \nThe other rhino looks on as the boy retracts his arm. Letting the dust and dirt settle to see that his friend is laying half covered in dirt and almost 4 feet from the surface. \n\n“How... How did you... MARCUS?!” - shouts the angrily upset rhino as he looks on at his friend in shock. \n\n“Marcus, was it? I believe he’s just taking a somewhat dirt nap. Get in my way and I’ll make sure the same happens to you!” \n\nThe boy starts to walk away with a stretched hand full of money. He doesn’t realise the rhino behind him is getting angry. Leaning down and getting ready to charge. Changing his own mass like he did before except putting it all in to force more than speed. His foot digs in to the cement, shredding his shoes as he charges towards the boy in an enraged state - “Fuck you! I wont forgive you! You hurt my brother! Now! IT’S YOUR TURN!” - he shouts as he slams in to the boy’s back with all of his changed mass, with his ability to make himself weigh more than a few tonne. \n\n“Huh. Pathetic!” \n\nThe rhino opens his eyes, thinking he may have at least hurt the boy. But he didn’t even make him budge. A look of shock overwhelms him as the young stallion casually turns around to see the rhino had let him go and was almost cowering on the ground. \n\n“You rhinos. You think its always about strength. You don’t ever see the real potential of your power. So, a demonstration from one who has mastered this ability” \n\nThe rhino freaks out as he sees the boy drop the money. The boy’s form doesn’t change yet the rhino can sense it. Something dark. Something evil. The raw power inside the boy as his small figure produces such change to his own mass. \n\n“Cowering already? So weak. You don’t even deserve this power! YOU DON’T DESERVE ANYTHING!” - shouts the boy in a scream that makes the rhino piss himself as the boy lunges a fist right at his face. \n\nThe man trembles, feeling the force yet knows there is nothing he can do - “How?! How is this runt so strong?! I can’t ... I can’t stop it. I’m not that strong, nowhere near! I can’t run. I cant block. I’m shaking so much I can’t even stand. This is it. All I can do is...” \n\nJust as the stallion’s punch draws near, the other rhino steps in front and takes the full bore of the punch. Stepping in front of his brother with arms out as he managed to stop the boy’s punch just in time. \nHaving focussed so much energy in to one spot so quickly, all he could do was stop the punch reaching his brother who could only watch as his face is covered in blood as the stallion’s hand ripped through the rhino’s stomach, through his body and out of his back. \n\n“No. Why... Why did you...” - says the man on the ground covered in blood as he starts to cry. \nThe other looks back and just grunts. Giving his brother a wink and a smile before collapsing on to the boy’s arm. \nThe stallion pulls out his arm. Shaking off the blood like it was water as the large figure in front of him fell to the ground. \n\n“Why... Brother... why”\n\nThe surviving rhino kneels at his brother’s body as memories fill his head. \nLots of fights when they were kids. One always protecting the other. Even when they got in to fights on the school yard and one bully got a blade and sliced one of the rhino’s across the throat. \n“I tried to protect you. I tried to look out for you” - the crying man says as he runs his fingers across the scar on the dead rhino’s throat. \nAnother fight when they were teenagers when a bunch of drunk hyenas tried to take them on, hurting one as the other again stepped in to fight them off. \nAs they both grew older one was always protecting the other. They joined a gym to try and get fit so they could be strong together, forming a much stronger brotherly bond. \n\n“I always tried to look out for you. I was always there when you needed me. Even when we both got our powers, we were always there. Family was all we had. Even when I found out you were sick and in need of money. You refused to give up. All I wanted to do was save you. You were against this whole thing but I pushed you in to it. We needed the money. I needed you . I was always meant to look after you. But in the end you ended up looking after me. I love you, Marcus. And for you....” \n\nHis whole mood changes from sad to enraged. His heart fills with raw emotion as his head grows with both guild and bloodlust. His blood boils. The air quickly grows cold. The stallion looks behind him to see what is happening but he couldn’t foresee nor react as the rhino’s fist collided with the boy’s face and kept on pummelling. Colliding with shockwaves of force as the rhino punched harder and faster. Slamming his fists in to the boy. Putting in so much changed mass energy behind each blow as he let out cries of painful rage - “I’LL FUCKING KILL YOU! I WILL END YOUR FUCKING LIFE! TAKE IT! TAKE ALL I HAVE! FEEL THE LOVE I HAVE FOR MY BROTHER RETURNED TO YOU! 10 FOLD!” \n\nThe stallion slowly bent backwards as he was pummelled in to the ground. Slammed through the concrete. Through the dirt. Each punch made the ground lift and explode with dirt and dust and shards of stone with concrete blocks. The man repeatedly yelling - “FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOOOOUUUUU!” \n\nAfter minutes of pummelling the rhino finally stops. Blood on his massive hands. Unsure if it was his or the boy’s as he could not see the boy as he was buried underneath all that dirt. \n\nThe man cries as he gets out of the whole he’s made and walks back over to his brother slowly as rivers of tears make trails behind him. Falling to his knees as he holds his brother’s hand. Extending one of his own to caress his brother’s cheek. Getting in close as he whispers - “I’ve always loved you, Marcus. I always will” - planting one kiss to his brother’s lips as a final farewell. \n\n“PATHETIC!” - a voice echoes from beneath the dirt. \n\n“HUH?!” - shocked tone escapes the rhino’s mouth as he turns around to catch the stallion explode out of the hole in a large flipping jump only to land on his feet a meter away from the two men. Covered in dirt yet completely unharmed. \n\nThough the rhino notices something. The goggles the boy is wearing have cracked and fallen away. The rhino stares as the boy’s eyes. The goggles fall to the ground as the boy stares with overly large eyes. Bigger than they should be. Two orbs that are half the size larger and make the boy immediately wince. \n\n“Wait ... What the fuck happened to your eyes?! THEY’RE HUGE!” asks the confused rhino as he stands with a pained yet confused look on his face. His curiosity getting the better of him during the fight. \n\n“Making fun of my eyes now? That’s pretty low! You should keep your mind focussed on the fight! And besides, my eyes maybe larger but it helps me see more clearly! My focus is unflawed! I see all things that others may miss. Like an eagle stalking their prey! Like a vulture who can track from miles away! I see all! And what I see are two dead guys who should have just walked away!” \n\nThe stallion takes a step closer as his own face is a foot from the rhino’s own face as he continues his monologue. \n\n“All you two had to do was give me the money. All you had to do was surrender. Now you, and your friend here, will be found here with no money in tow and no one will have any idea what happened to you or the cash you stole. So all you can do is wallow in your own self pity as the last thing you ask yourself is—why didn’t I just give him the cash—instead of just dying in front of a fish facto....”\n\nBefore the cult could finish his long speech, he gets hit by a surprise attack no one saw coming. The stallion is punched so hard it sends him hurling in to the brick wall of the factory with an immense force. An aftershock of both a gust of force and the sound of a hard hit comes moments after. The injured rhino stares stunned as his opponent is in front of him in one second, then quickly knocked off his feet through the building. A hard look of shock as blood drips from his nose. \n\n“What just ... What... I ... Who ...” - the rhino repeatedly looking down at where the stallion was standing to look up to where he is now laying unconscious on the floor in the factory. Un sure of what just happened. \nSuddenly his heart skips a beat. His eyes widen with surprise and overwhelming feeling as a hand reaches up from the ground behind him and grabs his hand. All other sounds around fade quickly. No wind through the trees, no sound of the ocean or cars from a highway in the distance. All of his senses are focussed on a subtle sound of heavy breathing. The sound of wheezing. Subtle sounds of rocks and dirt moving. \n\n“I thought he would never shut up!”\n\nThe man quickly spins to look at his brother trying to get himself up off the ground. Noticing that his brother’s body, though covered in blood around where he was punched, the wound was shrinking before his heavily tearing eyes. \nAs he saw the stallion’s hand move to punch him, the rhino acted out of instinct. He had shifted his organs around, making them smaller and out of the way. Making the gap in between his most vital spots an empty void. Just in time to receive a critical hit that exploded right through him.\n\n“Wait... So ... You let him punch you?! Then you were merely waiting for the right moment? Waiting until his guard was down! Right?!” \n\nThe brother now on his feet just smiles with a thumbs up as he huffs as his brother cries. His brother is his hysterical with the remaining thoughts of losing his brother yet grateful he is alive. Crying as he carries on- “You were dead! But you’re alive! I thought you were gone! I tried to fight back! I am so helpless and useless! I thought I lost you! But I didn’t lose you! You were here, then you were gone, now you’re here again! And I’m crying like an idiot! I love my brother and I thought I’d never be able to tell you! But here you are and...” \n\nThe hysterical brother is interrupted when the other rather quickly puts his hands on the other’s shoulders and brings him in for a deep surprise kiss. Making out while staring in to his brother’s wide open crying eyes as if to say - ‘I love you too, bro’. \nBoth blush as they both pull back and smile as they both look towards the wound shrinking in to nothing more than a pimple sized hole before disappearing completely. \n“Nothing to worry about, bro. I would never leave you” \n \nThey both hold hands as they stare at each other. Holding hands as they both know their bond has never been stronger. That their own strengths will always be their love for one another and will reflect that forever.\nBoth of them quickly turn straight faced as they look at the unconscious hero’s leg poking out of the wall. \n\n“So like, just how hard did you hit him? Because we both him hard and neither of us could knock him out like that!” asks the younger brother. \n“Oh, it’s not a matter of how hard, bro, but rather where he was hit!”\n\nThe brother explains - “ While laying there, pretending to be dead, I focussed all of my strength and energy in to my hand. He was preoccupied with his own arrogance that I merely took my shot. He may have had freakishly big eyes but everyone has a blind spot. His just so happened to be right under his nose...literately. So I did what he did in a way. I made my hand small and I made it stretch. I saw he could stretch and make his hand huge so I did the opposite. Stretching it out between your legs and simply aiming my hand in between his. But the moment he stepped closer, I thought he was going to kill you then and there. So not only had I channelled every ounce of strength I could muster, but all of my fear and anger as well. Right before giving the stallion’s family jewels the hardest flick I could. Only I wasn’t expecting to send him flying. I was hoping to just knock the wind out of him enough for you to deliver the final blow. Goes to show bro, we both are stronger than we think we are when we act out of desperation... That and I was afraid I was going to lose you” \n\nThe brothers share another quick sweet kiss before the younger one gets his brother in a headlock and playfully rubs his knuckles in to his head, making both laugh before walking over to the hole in the wall. \n\nThe two step through the hole and stand either side of the unconscious brats body. Blood had spilled from the colt’s mouth. They checked his pulse as the other got down low to see if he was breathing - “Little cunt is still alive! What the hell are we to do with him now?!” \n\nThey both look at each other before they look up at the electric sign flickering on the wall near them - “Caution - Liquid Nitrogen Storage Area” - making them both look at each other with a massive grin before giving each other a brotherly fist bump. The older rhino picks up the colt over his shoulder as the other closes the roller door. Both step through the door to the storage area as the younger brother turns to shut and lock the door smiling menacingly. \n\nAs there is a crack left before the door shuts completely, from the other side all you could hear beneath the brother’s excitement is him say .....\n\n“Oh this is going to be fun!” \n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "The Rise and Fall of the Junior Leagues - Entrapment of the Elasta-Colt PART 1


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Mid afternoon. Peak of daily trading. Alarms from a bank sound as cops quickly surround the front entrance within minutes. Quick to respond as two large rhinos casually stroll out. Both buff, both holding bags of money, and both not even fazed as they casually walk towards the cop cars.

“Freeze! Stop right there or we will open fire!” - says a small meerkat officer over a loud speaker, making the rhinos laugh at how this small creature is trying to appear intimidating.

“Ready, brother?!” - one rhino says in a deep grumble to the other who replies with a huffing grunt and nod.

“FIRE!” - yells the meerkat officer in to the loud speaker as he sees the rhinos charge towards the cars.

Both running at full speed as almost a dozen officers fire various sized guns at the large charging brutes. Shotguns, rifles, pistols, even tazers. All of them hitting both rhinos yet all the bullets have no affect. All of the rounds practically bounce off as they hit the thieves skin. Both are trying their best to not let the money in the bags get hit as they charge at full speed.
They both charge through two separate patrol cars in their paths. It was like watching a freight train hit a bicycle. They ripped through both cars like knives to butter. Not a scratch, no halt in their speed, they charged through and kept on running.

“HALT, CROOKS!” - a voice says as a figure jumps down from the rooftops. A massive Stallion with equally bulging muscles stands before the rhinos. A big cannon for a left arm and an axe in his right hand - “I will not let you pass!”

A civilian is heard calling from across the street - “IT’S THE HERO, DRAFT RAGE!” - called that due to being a draft horse breed, one of the strongest breed of equine, and has been known to have a short temper.

“You both face Draft Rage! Now prepare to be taken down!”

“Challenge Accepted!” - both rhinos say in unison as they both charge faster.

The hero raises his cannon arm and fires at one of the rhinos square in the face then grips and swings his axe in a deadly form to try and cleave the other’s head clear. The exploding cannon causes smoke as some screams can be heard from civilians as part of a building was destroyed as well as a random car was sent flying due to the shockwave of the blast.
Smoke covers the battling area only for a short while yet both rhino’s run out of the opposite end unscathed. Both laughing with their mouths full as their horns are covered in blood.
One rhino has the stallion’s cannon arm in his mouth, torn from the shoulder, while the other has one of the colts legs in his, ripped from the stallion’s waist.

The smoke quickly clears and a couple civilians run over. Screams are instantly heard as it is revealed the stallion was practically ripped to shreds with big foot prints imbedded in his half crushed face and his crushed chest. Limbs torn from him as the rhinos ripped through and keep on running.

Cop cars give chase as other heroes join as well.
Grizzly Slammer - a male brown bear that’s skinny as a twig yet can easily knock down a building with a single punch.
Wing Commander - a female eagle with razor sharp feathers and even sharper talons.
Striped Vengeance - a male tiger wearing a self-made jetpack who has no super powers but has many gadgets and tactile armaments.

The three heroes give aid as they chase down the rhinos along side the police. Yet even they, with their strength, their speed, and their gadgets ... They can’t seem to catch up.

“The more they run the faster they get?! How is this possible?!” - remarks Striped Vengeance as he boosts his jetpack to full speed knowing full well he wont have much manoeuvring control, yet he has to catch up.

His jetpack bursts and he flies at MK-1. Aiming straight at one rhino only even he, a great tactician, wasn’t expecting the rhino to turn around and start running backward at the exact same speed. The big beast smiled at the hero who was gaining quickly only the rhino stopped, only for a brief second with his horn up. But it was enough time to catch his prey off-guard.
Striped Vengeance screams as he tries to pull up but he’s going too fast as the horn connects with the tiger’s throat and slices straight through the hero’s body. Tearing through him with his insanely strong sharp horn. Ripping through from neck to groin.

The last thing the hero saw was a smile of pure hatred right before feeling his guts spilling out. He managed to pull up but it was too late. Out of shock he pressed the acceleration on his controls and went straight to MK-3 for 2 seconds before ripping through 3 buildings and exploding.

The rhino resumed the run with his counter part who slowed up slightly to allow his partner to catch up. But then they went back to the run. Very quickly, Grizzly Slammer had no choice but to stop as he had no way of keeping up the chance. The rhino’s left him in the dust.
Wing Commander still tried. Flapping her wings as hard as she could and was gaining on them.

But even her attempts seemed futile as she threw razor feathers at them yet they did nothing but bounce off - “Impossible! My feathers can cut through diamond! How can this be?!”

Soon came the end of the street but both rhino’s didn’t stop. There was a massive building in front of them and all they did was effortlessly charge through. Taring through walls and steel beams like they weren’t even there only to come out of the other side in seconds.

“There’s no way?! Even a building didn’t slow them! Just what are they?!” - angrily snarks the winged heroin as she still tries to follow. Keeping her distance as she felt useless yet could still try to tail them.
She loses sight of them under a bridge as she is up high so she zooms as fast as she can to the other side. Only ... “What?! Where’s they go?!”
She dived down fast under the bridge yet both rhinos had disappeared. There were no doors. No other exits. She knew there were cars, trucks, vans, all passing by at that moment yet the rhinos were going too fast to just stop.

“There’s no way?! How?! Where’d they go?! WHERE ARE YOU?!” - she ends up shouting in to an empty void. The duo were simply gone.

On television that afternoon, a quick memorial is held for Draft Rage and Striped Vengeance. Both of their deaths were caught on camera from random phones. Capturing the stallion being lost in smoke only to be found torn apart, another from someone capturing the moment Striped Vengeance tore through their building and exploding right after.

One such viewer of all of this was watching as there were reports that the two assailants could not be stopped. How they made off with millions of dollars without so much as a scratch.
This viewer, hiding in the shadows as light hurts his eyes. Yet even he saw something no one else did.

Sitting at his computer he managed to hack private files from the hero-forums relating to the chase.

“The heroin Winged Justice chased the pair until she lost them under a bridge. Camera reports in the area are unclear as the two seem to just vanish. Hmmm. Interesting. I doubt these two have invisibility as well as their endurance. But let’s see”

The figure hacks in to the street cameras on both the way the rhino’s entered, and from the other side of the bridge.
But he didn’t stop there. He looked at other cameras from surrounding streets - “Nothing there” - he turned his attention to a few block radius - “still nothing”.
He went back to the bridge, knowing there would have to be some secrets there whilst also trying to read the report some more.

“The two were running at over 150kmh so they wouldn’t have been able to just stop and catch a ride. They would have had to keep running. Reports say there was nothing under the bridge to signify a short range teleportation nor any tachyons to indicate teleportation or invisibility”.  

The figure sitting in his chair gulps down mouthfuls of battery acid like it was water as he continues to look through the files and footage.
Yet, as he relaxes his eyes. As he leans back to ponder. He notices something. Something faint. Something quick. Something so small in detail in gets his attention.
“Hmmm? What’s that?” - he says as he zooms in on the street camera as the duo rhinos run under.

He notices there is a strange flash. Easily mistaken as a reflection of car light from the underpass. Yet, no cars had their lights on as they exited.
“What is that?!” - he says as he looks closer as he zooms in more. And more. Closer. And closer. Right as the light hits he sees something that looks like rocks hit the ground.
“Rocks? From one of the trucks maybe?” - He zooms in as much as he can. Something so small in detail yet a big break in the case. As his eyes widen as he pauses just a micro-second after the light.

“Gotcha!” - the rhino’s didn’t disappear - “You changed your mass! You both didn’t vanish, you simply just shrank in size!”
He quickly goes over all the other reports.
“Bullets did nothing. Wing Commander’s feathers didn’t do anything. Striped Vengeance’s armour was made to withstand friction, temperature, and earth’s own atmosphere yet it was easily cut through! The cop cars! Said to have been hit with a brutish force yet the rhinos hadn’t built up speed then, merely started their sprint! So how could they have ripped through so easily?”

The surprised hero gulped down the battery-acid drink as he pondered and pondered until the solution hit him - “They not only shrink but they can change their mass! Their own body shape! Their size! Their centripetal force! That’s how they got away!”

He brings up a diagram of the bridge from the online city schematics and the planning for the sewer system.
“There’s a grate that is only fifteen centimetres wide yet it leads to the sewers! Easy enough for them to go down in to at their size!”
He follows the sewer line, yet with hundreds of exits, there would be too many to look for.

“Wait! Their size! They couldn’t be able to sustain that size for long. So one assumes they may not be able to do it again soon after either. So based on their size I just have to find an exit that could be ... GOT YAS!”

Hours later the sun has set. The street lamps come on all around the city and even at the docks.
At the docks is a large meat processing plant which has a tunnel system that leads to the Sewage Treatment Plant further down. It is the only place that has doors leading from the sewer line that are big enough to accommodate 2 exhausted rhinos.
The two smile as they’ve packed the money in to a large black truck. They’ve changed their clothes from the black attire in to casual clothes that you can say resemble a typical farmer’s. Plaid shirts, very tight fitting blue jeans, and both chewing on a thistle each.

“We did it, brother! No cop, no hero, no worries!” - says one rhino in the driver seat as his brother just looks at him and grunts again.

The roller doors go up as both rhino’s look outward, turning on the truck lights, only to see a small figure standing about twenty meters away on the other side of the roller door.
A young stallion. In a sleeveless blue hoodie wearing massive dark tinted glasses and very short black shorts. Standing there as the rhinos rev the truck - “Out the way punk or we’ll run your ass over!” - shouts the driver-side rhino with his head out the window as the other sticks his head out and lets out a huffing grunt.

The stallion just stands there smiling as he pulls out his phone and takes a snapshot of the truck, the rhinos, and even the license plate.
“You little cunt! That’s it!” - the driver revs the engine, acceleration to the floor, the rear wheels screeching and smoking right before he releases the hand-break and yells at the kid angrily - “Fuck you!”

The car exits the door in a hurry, speedily racing towards the young boy but it is instantly stopped with a loud CRASH. Airbags go off. The horn constantly sounds from the damage The rhinos are grunting as they rip the airbags apart to get a view of what just happened.
 
In moments they are both in shock as this young stallion was still standing where he was. He hadn’t budged yet the truck had no affect.
The men look on in shock as they see the boy lift his right hand only their eyes shoot open wide as his hand grows to a size larger than the car.
“Whaaaaat theeeeEEE FUUUUUCK?! OUT!” - yells the driving rhino as both brothers escape from the car just before the boy’s hand smashes down on the car and crumples the front half of it like a soda can.
Both men just look at the boy as his hand returns to normal with a sly smile on his face.

“Gotta hand it to yas. You both had the cops fooled. You even had the heroes fooled. Thy simply could not grasp the idea of how you both simply vanished. There aren’t too many who can change their mass like you both can. Yet, you both are amateurs. Such power and you use it to rob a bank? Able to shift your own mass at will yet you can’t seem to do it often. I went out on a whim and only hypothesised you both wouldn’t be able to use your abilities for long. Thank you both for confirming it”

The young stallion’s arm stretches to the back of the half crushed vehicle. Ripping the doors off with ease before reaching in to grab more than half of the bags of money - “I want you both to know, I’m not completely robbing you. I’ve left you with some, for your troubles”

Before his arm is retracted one of the men jumps on the boy’s arm and grunts while trying to grip it to death. Trying to rip it like he had done to the hero stallion earlier. Only he finds he can’t even squeeze the boy’s limb at all.

“What are you trying to do? That wont work on me. I may look small and helpless to you both. I mean, look at you. You’re both so jacked. You both look like you’ve hit the gym too many times. But let me show you what it really means to control one’s mass!”

In an instant the boy simply lets his arm drop as the rhino is slammed hard through the ground. Exploding and cracking the cement driveway with ease. Making it raise and break all around the now-made crater.
The other rhino looks on as the boy retracts his arm. Letting the dust and dirt settle to see that his friend is laying half covered in dirt and almost 4 feet from the surface.

“How... How did you... MARCUS?!” - shouts the angrily upset rhino as he looks on at his friend in shock.

“Marcus, was it? I believe he’s just taking a somewhat dirt nap. Get in my way and I’ll make sure the same happens to you!”

The boy starts to walk away with a stretched hand full of money. He doesn’t realise the rhino behind him is getting angry. Leaning down and getting ready to charge. Changing his own mass like he did before except putting it all in to force more than speed. His foot digs in to the cement, shredding his shoes as he charges towards the boy in an enraged state - “Fuck you! I wont forgive you! You hurt my brother! Now! IT’S YOUR TURN!” - he shouts as he slams in to the boy’s back with all of his changed mass, with his ability to make himself weigh more than a few tonne.

“Huh. Pathetic!”

The rhino opens his eyes, thinking he may have at least hurt the boy. But he didn’t even make him budge. A look of shock overwhelms him as the young stallion casually turns around to see the rhino had let him go and was almost cowering on the ground.

“You rhinos. You think its always about strength. You don’t ever see the real potential of your power. So, a demonstration from one who has mastered this ability”

The rhino freaks out as he sees the boy drop the money. The boy’s form doesn’t change yet the rhino can sense it. Something dark. Something evil. The raw power inside the boy as his small figure produces such change to his own mass.

“Cowering already? So weak. You don’t even deserve this power! YOU DON’T DESERVE ANYTHING!” - shouts the boy in a scream that makes the rhino piss himself as the boy lunges a fist right at his face.

The man trembles, feeling the force yet knows there is nothing he can do - “How?! How is this runt so strong?! I can’t ... I can’t stop it. I’m not that strong, nowhere near! I can’t run. I cant block. I’m shaking so much I can’t even stand. This is it. All I can do is...”

Just as the stallion’s punch draws near, the other rhino steps in front and takes the full bore of the punch. Stepping in front of his brother with arms out as he managed to stop the boy’s punch just in time.
Having focussed so much energy in to one spot so quickly, all he could do was stop the punch reaching his brother who could only watch as his face is covered in blood as the stallion’s hand ripped through the rhino’s stomach, through his body and out of his back.

“No. Why... Why did you...” - says the man on the ground covered in blood as he starts to cry.
The other looks back and just grunts. Giving his brother a wink and a smile before collapsing on to the boy’s arm.
The stallion pulls out his arm. Shaking off the blood like it was water as the large figure in front of him fell to the ground.

“Why... Brother... why”

The surviving rhino kneels at his brother’s body as memories fill his head.
Lots of fights when they were kids. One always protecting the other. Even when they got in to fights on the school yard and one bully got a blade and sliced one of the rhino’s across the throat.
“I tried to protect you. I tried to look out for you” - the crying man says as he runs his fingers across the scar on the dead rhino’s throat.
Another fight when they were teenagers when a bunch of drunk hyenas tried to take them on, hurting one as the other again stepped in to fight them off.
As they both grew older one was always protecting the other. They joined a gym to try and get fit so they could be strong together, forming a much stronger brotherly bond.

“I always tried to look out for you. I was always there when you needed me. Even when we both got our powers, we were always there. Family was all we had. Even when I found out you were sick and in need of money. You refused to give up. All I wanted to do was save you. You were against this whole thing but I pushed you in to it. We needed the money. I needed you . I was always meant to look after you. But in the end you ended up looking after me. I love you, Marcus. And for you....”

His whole mood changes from sad to enraged. His heart fills with raw emotion as his head grows with both guild and bloodlust. His blood boils. The air quickly grows cold. The stallion looks behind him to see what is happening but he couldn’t foresee nor react as the rhino’s fist collided with the boy’s face and kept on pummelling. Colliding with shockwaves of force as the rhino punched harder and faster. Slamming his fists in to the boy. Putting in so much changed mass energy behind each blow as he let out cries of painful rage - “I’LL FUCKING KILL YOU! I WILL END YOUR FUCKING LIFE! TAKE IT! TAKE ALL I HAVE! FEEL THE LOVE I HAVE FOR MY BROTHER RETURNED TO YOU! 10 FOLD!”

The stallion slowly bent backwards as he was pummelled in to the ground. Slammed through the concrete. Through the dirt. Each punch made the ground lift and explode with dirt and dust and shards of stone with concrete blocks. The man repeatedly yelling - “FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOOOOUUUUU!”

After minutes of pummelling the rhino finally stops. Blood on his massive hands. Unsure if it was his or the boy’s as he could not see the boy as he was buried underneath all that dirt.

The man cries as he gets out of the whole he’s made and walks back over to his brother slowly as rivers of tears make trails behind him. Falling to his knees as he holds his brother’s hand. Extending one of his own to caress his brother’s cheek. Getting in close as he whispers - “I’ve always loved you, Marcus. I always will” - planting one kiss to his brother’s lips as a final farewell.

“PATHETIC!” - a voice echoes from beneath the dirt.

“HUH?!” - shocked tone escapes the rhino’s mouth as he turns around to catch the stallion explode out of the hole in a large flipping jump only to land on his feet a meter away from the two men. Covered in dirt yet completely unharmed.

Though the rhino notices something. The goggles the boy is wearing have cracked and fallen away. The rhino stares as the boy’s eyes. The goggles fall to the ground as the boy stares with overly large eyes. Bigger than they should be. Two orbs that are half the size larger and make the boy immediately wince.

“Wait ... What the fuck happened to your eyes?! THEY’RE HUGE!” asks the confused rhino as he stands with a pained yet confused look on his face. His curiosity getting the better of him during the fight.  

“Making fun of my eyes now? That’s pretty low! You should keep your mind focussed on the fight! And besides, my eyes maybe larger but it helps me see more clearly! My focus is unflawed! I see all things that others may miss. Like an eagle stalking their prey! Like a vulture who can track from miles away! I see all! And what I see are two dead guys who should have just walked away!”

The stallion takes a step closer as his own face is a foot from the rhino’s own face as he continues his monologue.

“All you two had to do was give me the money. All you had to do was surrender. Now you, and your friend here, will be found here with no money in tow and no one will have any idea what happened to you or the cash you stole. So all you can do is wallow in your own self pity as the last thing you ask yourself is—why didn’t I just give him the cash—instead of just dying in front of a fish facto....”

Before the cult could finish his long speech, he gets hit by a surprise attack no one saw coming. The stallion is punched so hard it sends him hurling in to the brick wall of the factory with an immense force. An aftershock of both a gust of force and the sound of a hard hit comes moments after. The injured rhino stares stunned as his opponent is in front of him in one second, then quickly knocked off his feet through the building. A hard look of shock as blood drips from his nose.  

“What just ... What... I ... Who ...” - the rhino repeatedly looking down at where the stallion was standing to look up to where he is now laying unconscious on the floor in the factory. Un sure of what just happened.
Suddenly his heart skips a beat. His eyes widen with surprise and overwhelming feeling as a hand reaches up from the ground behind him and grabs his hand. All other sounds around fade quickly. No wind through the trees, no sound of the ocean or cars from a highway in the distance. All of his senses are focussed on a subtle sound of heavy breathing. The sound of wheezing. Subtle sounds of rocks and dirt moving.

“I thought he would never shut up!”

The man quickly spins to look at his brother trying to get himself up off the ground. Noticing that his brother’s body, though covered in blood around where he was punched, the wound was shrinking before his heavily tearing eyes.
As he saw the stallion’s hand move to punch him, the rhino acted out of instinct. He had shifted his organs around, making them smaller and out of the way. Making the gap in between his most vital spots an empty void. Just in time to receive a critical hit that exploded right through him.

“Wait... So ... You let him punch you?! Then you were merely waiting for the right moment? Waiting until his guard was down! Right?!”

The brother now on his feet just smiles with a thumbs up as he huffs as his brother cries. His brother is his hysterical with the remaining thoughts of losing his brother yet grateful he is alive. Crying as he carries on- “You were dead! But you’re alive! I thought you were gone! I tried to fight back! I am so helpless and useless! I thought I lost you! But I didn’t lose you! You were here, then you were gone, now you’re here again! And I’m crying like an idiot! I love my brother and I thought I’d never be able to tell you! But here you are and...”

The hysterical brother is interrupted when the other rather quickly puts his hands on the other’s shoulders and brings him in for a deep surprise kiss. Making out while staring in to his brother’s wide open crying eyes as if to say - ‘I love you too, bro’.
Both blush as they both pull back and smile as they both look towards the wound shrinking in to nothing more than a pimple sized hole before disappearing completely.
“Nothing to worry about, bro. I would never leave you”
 
They both hold hands as they stare at each other. Holding hands as they both know their bond has never been stronger. That their own strengths will always be their love for one another and will reflect that forever.
Both of them quickly turn straight faced as they look at the unconscious hero’s leg poking out of the wall.

“So like, just how hard did you hit him? Because we both him hard and neither of us could knock him out like that!” asks the younger brother.
“Oh, it’s not a matter of how hard, bro, but rather where he was hit!”

The brother explains - “ While laying there, pretending to be dead, I focussed all of my strength and energy in to my hand. He was preoccupied with his own arrogance that I merely took my shot. He may have had freakishly big eyes but everyone has a blind spot. His just so happened to be right under his nose...literately. So I did what he did in a way. I made my hand small and I made it stretch. I saw he could stretch and make his hand huge so I did the opposite. Stretching it out between your legs and simply aiming my hand in between his. But the moment he stepped closer, I thought he was going to kill you then and there. So not only had I channelled every ounce of strength I could muster, but all of my fear and anger as well. Right before giving the stallion’s family jewels the hardest flick I could. Only I wasn’t expecting to send him flying. I was hoping to just knock the wind out of him enough for you to deliver the final blow. Goes to show bro, we both are stronger than we think we are when we act out of desperation... That and I was afraid I was going to lose you”

The brothers share another quick sweet kiss before the younger one gets his brother in a headlock and playfully rubs his knuckles in to his head, making both laugh before walking over to the hole in the wall.

The two step through the hole and stand either side of the unconscious brats body. Blood had spilled from the colt’s mouth. They checked his pulse as the other got down low to see if he was breathing - “Little cunt is still alive! What the hell are we to do with him now?!”

They both look at each other before they look up at the electric sign flickering on the wall near them - “Caution - Liquid Nitrogen Storage Area” - making them both look at each other with a massive grin before giving each other a brotherly fist bump. The older rhino picks up the colt over his shoulder as the other closes the roller door. Both step through the door to the storage area as the younger brother turns to shut and lock the door smiling menacingly.

As there is a crack left before the door shuts completely, from the other side all you could hear beneath the brother’s excitement is him say .....

“Oh this is going to be fun!”  
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