A story of how a daring horse farmhand sends the blue-blooded feline family of a farmstead spiralling into utter sexual indecency.
Italics do not occur in the work pasted above. View the PDF file HERE if you know what's good for you.
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Some time last year, I decided I wanted to dabble in the niche of porn where workers in the field of a farmstead catch the eyes of the innocent nigh-noble girls looking out the windows. It started with this piece:
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From there, I mapped out the whole sequence in my head. It were to end with all barriers broken, a snake having corrupted the entirety of paradise. It was the perfect exercise in crossing the Precipice in a satisfying manner; going from sexual reluctance into surrender. This without cheap tricks such as giving your characters room temperature IQ or making their nipples magic buttons that turn on turbo-slut mode.
My plan was to draw the instalments out of chronological order, as I felt inspiration hit me. It quickly became apparent that I would need to do a LOT of drawings to hit all the plot points. And I don't feel like I draw fast in the grand scheme of things. Inspiration spurred me towards other projects.
Instead I thought "let it be a writing exercise to keep the wordsmithing muscle limber". Keep it short and simple. Just get through the plot points and let the barebone structure bring out the power in the concept of the story, rather than giving it pompous flourish.
Turns out I don't know myself at all. I cannot do something and not make it whole. The descent into corruption is measured by the millimeter. There are no corners cut. There are perhaps a few humorous passages, where your willing suspension of disbelief needs to be at the ready.
I had not planned for the characters to be real enough that I felt bad for putting them through turmoil. I had not planned to be sad that I had to end the story, before it grew to Tolkien levels of detail.
The work has a whopping seventeen sex scenes (counting generously) and lies at a plus 30.000 word count.
If you read my work Black and White, you might recognize the characters, though reinvented. In some ways this is an attempt to redo some of the core concepts, but apply what I have learned about writing in the meantime.
Read it a few scenes at a time, rest, then come back to it. Don't overdose. If it's as fun to read as it was to write, then you will not regret it.