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You can send through Private Message or type in the Descriptions bellow (Only send your info ones, remember if you OC doesn’t get to one Chapter, I might add it to next one but don’t get your hopes up)\nAnd if you want to catch my interests, Add something that you want to happened in between your and my OC or one of the other OCs (It can be sex involved, But!! Don’t expect my OC just to bang your OC just like that, He has feelings you know, so he is not a bloody blow up sex doll)\n\nAnd Four: No gore. No Death. No Super weird Fetishes. I might allow Cubs, Foals and golden shower, But no scat….. oh.. and No rape… I might add blood just a bit and maybe some broken bones but not to much of it.\n\nThat is all and hope you guys follow the rules. If not then I am going to ignore you. Simple as that.\n\nNow sit back and enjoy the story. Oh and my Spelling might be a bit bad because English is not my first language. But I try to make this story as Error clean as possible.\n—————————————————————————————————\n\nChapter one. A new life\n\nI am riding on a train ones again, to visit another Town, This stop is now Ponyville. My life has been a living hell for the past few years…. Well almost my whole life to be honest….. And it kind of sucks…. you want to know who I am? Then let me tell a short version about my life\n\nI was born in a Apple Family as a unicorn purple Stallion with black hoofs and green eyes. My mane color is yellowish green. My birth home is the land of Sweeties (That Wolds word for Sweden… could not came up on a better name so laugh all you want) and yes, the Apple Family are all over the World.\n\nAround that time then I was born, the Unicorns usually got taken away to the orphan house because some Apple ponies did think that magic would damage the apples and business so that is why there are almost no Unicorns in the Family at that time. It is more common now though that they keep there Unicorn foals because studies have showed that Magic did not have effect on the apples as long as you only use telekinesis. It is good for them.. but sucks for me because the info got out a little to late… at least I think so… Wish I was born sooner.\n\nOh how rude of me, I haven’t told my name yet. My name is Applemac, Well that is the name I want to go for, My birth name that my father gave me was Malum 'Meaning evil or wrong doing’ \n\nAs I got into the orphan house as a foal I almost instantly got pushed around, all called me all kind of different names so I was almost always got kicked, It was a living hell but I tried to keep my distance. The ponies that worked there did not care for shit what happened, they just almost let the ponies had there fun. Bucking lazy basters.\n\nAround age of 11 I got my Cutimark, It was an Apple with a kiss mark on it… guess i loved apples to much, because they tasted so bucking good.~ every time I saw an Apple I instantly wanted to eat it because it was like candy to me…. btw I hate real candy so yeah… guess it is in my genes, Hard to say really.\n\nBut anyway, around the age of 13 everything change. I had enough being pushed around and my sadness became my first rage, The last time those ponies pushed me around was there last time so I used the magic I had learned and Strike back at them. ’Think I used telekinesis and thrower them around like rag dolls.’ But I made them end up in broken bones and I damage the house to, a bit to much actually because they had to pay a lot to repair it again. \n\nSo I got kicked out from the Orphan house so I could not do any more damage. 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After used my Telekinesis to take the shotgun from his hoofs before he could wonder ’What the buck happened’ and I hit him many times with it a with it until he feel in the floor unconscious.\n\nAfter that I felt fear came over me and wonder what I have become. I could not see myself like this and it felt like I was becoming a monster. I was hunted by the guards in this land, so all I could was running, Then I had my chance I left the country, just to start over and make my life better. Renamed my name to Applemac so no pony would think looking for me in another Country.\n\nNow I am at my 20s and I have travel to a lot of places. learn to speak the Language Equarian (English, as the bronies want it to be) because I was in the Magical land of Equestria…. ’did not understand what was so magical about it because it is just another country to me.’ But I heard many greats stories about Ponyville and The Great Alicorn Princesses lived in Canterlot, and that is close to Ponyville so maybe I will see them in real one day, And the new Princess Twilight usually is in that Town. Hope I don’t manage to piss her of if I ever manage to meet her. \n\nOnly 20 min until the Train stops in Ponyville. Maybe this time….… I will find my place there.. make some friends, Find a new job…. and maybe.. find my love… I can only hope for the best, Because… that is what my foal hood friend usually told me.\n\nEnd of Chapter one.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Note to all: This story will be about My character going through his new life in Ponyville and I want to add other OCs into this story. So if you guys are interested to be added then here is some simple rules.

One: Your OC has to be a Normal Creature. (You can be a Pony, Dragon, Griffon and Zebra

Two.No OP Alicorns allowed ’Well if your Alicorn is not OP then maybe, But just maybe I will have your character' and no OP OCs.. We are not trying to be supermans here)

Three: To be able to be in the story you have to give good info about your OC. So after every Chapter I will choose the ponies that have catches my interests. You can send through Private Message or type in the Descriptions bellow (Only send your info ones, remember if you OC doesn’t get to one Chapter, I might add it to next one but don’t get your hopes up)
And if you want to catch my interests, Add something that you want to happened in between your and my OC or one of the other OCs (It can be sex involved, But!! Don’t expect my OC just to bang your OC just like that, He has feelings you know, so he is not a bloody blow up sex doll)

And Four: No gore. No Death. No Super weird Fetishes. I might allow Cubs, Foals and golden shower, But no scat….. oh.. and No rape… I might add blood just a bit and maybe some broken bones but not to much of it.

That is all and hope you guys follow the rules. If not then I am going to ignore you. Simple as that.

Now sit back and enjoy the story. Oh and my Spelling might be a bit bad because English is not my first language. But I try to make this story as Error clean as possible.
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Chapter one. A new life

I am riding on a train ones again, to visit another Town, This stop is now Ponyville. My life has been a living hell for the past few years…. Well almost my whole life to be honest….. And it kind of sucks…. you want to know who I am? Then let me tell a short version about my life

I was born in a Apple Family as a unicorn purple Stallion with black hoofs and green eyes. My mane color is yellowish green. My birth home is the land of Sweeties (That Wolds word for Sweden… could not came up on a better name so laugh all you want) and yes, the Apple Family are all over the World.

Around that time then I was born, the Unicorns usually got taken away to the orphan house because some Apple ponies did think that magic would damage the apples and business so that is why there are almost no Unicorns in the Family at that time. It is more common now though that they keep there Unicorn foals because studies have showed that Magic did not have effect on the apples as long as you only use telekinesis. It is good for them.. but sucks for me because the info got out a little to late… at least I think so… Wish I was born sooner.

Oh how rude of me, I haven’t told my name yet. My name is Applemac, Well that is the name I want to go for, My birth name that my father gave me was Malum 'Meaning evil or wrong doing’ 

As I got into the orphan house as a foal I almost instantly got pushed around, all called me all kind of different names so I was almost always got kicked, It was a living hell but I tried to keep my distance. The ponies that worked there did not care for shit what happened, they just almost let the ponies had there fun. Bucking lazy basters.

Around age of 11 I got my Cutimark, It was an Apple with a kiss mark on it… guess i loved apples to much, because they tasted so bucking good.~ every time I saw an Apple I instantly wanted to eat it because it was like candy to me…. btw I hate real candy so yeah… guess it is in my genes, Hard to say really.

But anyway, around the age of 13 everything change. I had enough being pushed around and my sadness became my first rage, The last time those ponies pushed me around was there last time so I used the magic I had learned and Strike back at them. ’Think I used telekinesis and thrower them around like rag dolls.’ But I made them end up in broken bones and I damage the house to, a bit to much actually because they had to pay a lot to repair it again.

So I got kicked out from the Orphan house so I could not do any more damage. The others that picked on me also got kicked out after they got fully healed, because that had there last chance of being mean to everypony, or that is what I last heard After a few months after.

Around the Age of 17, Like 2 years after the news proved that magic could not damages the Apples, I founded out who my father was. he was a middle class farmer that lived in the center of the land of Sweeties. Name the Big Apple. He was an mean bucker because I told him that I was his son. All he did was taking the Shotgun out and pointed it at me and said ’I have no flithy unicorn son. Begone before I shoot you. I was chocked but at the same time not. Because I heard that he left me at the orphan house without regrets. That is what my second rage came and it felt like I went berserk. I use my magic to make the bullet explode in the pipe so it broke. After used my Telekinesis to take the shotgun from his hoofs before he could wonder ’What the buck happened’ and I hit him many times with it a with it until he feel in the floor unconscious.

After that I felt fear came over me and wonder what I have become. I could not see myself like this and it felt like I was becoming a monster. I was hunted by the guards in this land, so all I could was running, Then I had my chance I left the country, just to start over and make my life better. Renamed my name to Applemac so no pony would think looking for me in another Country.

Now I am at my 20s and I have travel to a lot of places. learn to speak the Language Equarian (English, as the bronies want it to be) because I was in the Magical land of Equestria…. ’did not understand what was so magical about it because it is just another country to me.’ But I heard many greats stories about Ponyville and The Great Alicorn Princesses lived in Canterlot, and that is close to Ponyville so maybe I will see them in real one day, And the new Princess Twilight usually is in that Town. Hope I don’t manage to piss her of if I ever manage to meet her.

Only 20 min until the Train stops in Ponyville. Maybe this time….… I will find my place there.. make some friends, Find a new job…. and maybe.. find my love… I can only hope for the best, Because… that is what my foal hood friend usually told me.

End of Chapter one.
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