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I must have sketched this page a dozen times (two complete versions of which are in the additional images connected to this submission, if you'd like to see them). I had a really difficult time imagining the sequence of events that would move Devon's face from kissing Keri to, well, kissing her somewhere else.\n\nAnother thing I was struggling with was trying to keep Keri from looking like she's just laying there, lifeless. When someone's pleasuring you, you squirm and move around, you know? But conveying that in a comic with limited space for each panel was difficult. I didn't want to have a panned out shot showing their entire bodies from a side view for every single panel; that would be boring in its own right. Close-ups help to (hopefully) make the viewer feel more intimately involved with the character's actions. I hope this came across a little.\n\nI also don't really know how to draw a decent vagina. Any critique on that would be especially welcome :/\n\nThank you all once more for your extreme amount of patience. I am proud to say I have page 15 rough sketched out already, in an effort to get it done in two weeks max, rather than four. We'll see how I do, but I have a better feeling about the next page *determined face*\n\n[b][color=blue]\n<< [url=https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=201325]PREV[/url] | [url=https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=129416]FIRST[/url] | [url=https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=218620]NEXT[/url] >>\n[/color][/b]\n~~~~~~~~~~~~\nStory and characters (c) [fa]nikora_angeli[/fa]\nT:BR (c) spix", "description_bbcode_parsed": "If you like the comic, feel free to show it with a donation (but don't mention it's for porn!) - spixish[at]gmail.com

This page does not please me, but after taking my maximum amount of time I'll let myself have for a single page (one month), I decided to just push out what I've got. I must have sketched this page a dozen times (two complete versions of which are in the additional images connected to this submission, if you'd like to see them). I had a really difficult time imagining the sequence of events that would move Devon's face from kissing Keri to, well, kissing her somewhere else.

Another thing I was struggling with was trying to keep Keri from looking like she's just laying there, lifeless. When someone's pleasuring you, you squirm and move around, you know? But conveying that in a comic with limited space for each panel was difficult. I didn't want to have a panned out shot showing their entire bodies from a side view for every single panel; that would be boring in its own right. Close-ups help to (hopefully) make the viewer feel more intimately involved with the character's actions. I hope this came across a little.

I also don't really know how to draw a decent vagina. Any critique on that would be especially welcome :/

Thank you all once more for your extreme amount of patience. I am proud to say I have page 15 rough sketched out already, in an effort to get it done in two weeks max, rather than four. We'll see how I do, but I have a better feeling about the next page *determined face*


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