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Please post your comments below ", "description_bbcode_parsed": "There parts left and the killer is closing in. Please post your comments below ", "writing": "\nSaturday Night\n\n8pm\n\nThe outskirts of Saith\n\nMako stopped at the edge of town looking in the rear view mirror at the town sign. Welcome to Saith home of the hedgehog and Mako just sat there staring at it in the mirror wondering what to do for a while. Maria was a sleep in the passenger seat. He got out of the car as he finally came up with an idea and checked the truck to see what was back there. \n\n“Let’s see what in the car” thought Mako hoping he could do something.\n\nHe opened the trunk and saw a tire iron, red spray paint, a book called 50 shades of death and some tools that could take the sign down. Mako grabbed the stuff he need out of the truck and took his anger out on the sign before heading back to the car. \n\nThey headed off away from Saith while hoping to never see it again and the terrible killer after them.\n\nOne year prior\n\nMako and Xerxes were the best of friends as they did everything together until it all changed. Xerxes invited Mako for a sleepover for the evening as it wasn’t a school night. Xerxes mom was well laid back and has custody over her only cub as the dad to be very abusive to Xerxes along with a fifty foot yard ban from them. Xerxes was also raped a lot by his dad for long times at night. His mom eventually found out and divorced him for what he did to their son.\n\nMako had a sleep over at Xerxes place and Xerxes did to Mako what his dad to him many times. Mako broke off his friendship with Xerxes and they haven’t been on good terms ever since. Xerxes still want’s him even if he has to kill Mako to be with him forever.\n\n11 pm Saturday night\n\nMako stops in front of what seems like a banded house that would be a great place to spend the night from the killer that might be following them. The two of them get out of the car and Maria was yawning trying to stay awake long enough to get back inside. Mako opened the door and it began to creak along with a rattle being heard inside.\n\n“What was, that?” asked Maria on edge but quiet tired.\n\n“Not, sure. You wait here while I, check it out” said Mako trying to sound brave. \n\nMako walked in alone and it looked like there was a big battle here with knife marks all over the walls along with lots of dust. Mako swore he heard something and a dark chill began to come over him as if the killer was watching him from the shadows but could not be seen with the naked eye. \n\nHe felt like death was poking him in the back as he made his way to the basement stairs. Mako slowly walked down the stairs and looked at the photos on the wall. Some of them were of him along with deaths of everyone that has died from this killer in Saith. At the very bottom of the stairs Mako saw a photo of a girl he’s never seen before that looked pretty cute. A chipmunk from Pouncefield.\n\n“I’m going to come, find you love. You’ve stolen my heart just from this photo and I will see you one day when this mess is behind me” said Mako staring at the photo.\n\nAs Mako stands there lost in his own thoughts a long sword blade comes rushing through him with blood coming out of his body. He looks down to see what just happen just to notice it was one of his own blades that stabbed him. With a last ditch effort of strength Mako turns around and sees no one there and will find never find out who stabbed him. \n\nAs Mako about to fall asleep for one final time he sees his sister dead at the bottom of the stairs and is sad for what has happened to her. Mako moved closer to his sister and lied beside her.\n\n“I, love you Maria and always have” said Mako before closing his eyes one final time.\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
Saturday Night

8pm

The outskirts of Saith

Mako stopped at the edge of town looking in the rear view mirror at the town sign. Welcome to Saith home of the hedgehog and Mako just sat there staring at it in the mirror wondering what to do for a while. Maria was a sleep in the passenger seat. He got out of the car as he finally came up with an idea and checked the truck to see what was back there.

“Let’s see what in the car” thought Mako hoping he could do something.

He opened the trunk and saw a tire iron, red spray paint, a book called 50 shades of death and some tools that could take the sign down. Mako grabbed the stuff he need out of the truck and took his anger out on the sign before heading back to the car.

They headed off away from Saith while hoping to never see it again and the terrible killer after them.

One year prior

Mako and Xerxes were the best of friends as they did everything together until it all changed. Xerxes invited Mako for a sleepover for the evening as it wasn’t a school night. Xerxes mom was well laid back and has custody over her only cub as the dad to be very abusive to Xerxes along with a fifty foot yard ban from them. Xerxes was also raped a lot by his dad for long times at night. His mom eventually found out and divorced him for what he did to their son.

Mako had a sleep over at Xerxes place and Xerxes did to Mako what his dad to him many times. Mako broke off his friendship with Xerxes and they haven’t been on good terms ever since. Xerxes still want’s him even if he has to kill Mako to be with him forever.

11 pm Saturday night

Mako stops in front of what seems like a banded house that would be a great place to spend the night from the killer that might be following them. The two of them get out of the car and Maria was yawning trying to stay awake long enough to get back inside. Mako opened the door and it began to creak along with a rattle being heard inside.

“What was, that?” asked Maria on edge but quiet tired.

“Not, sure. You wait here while I, check it out” said Mako trying to sound brave.  

Mako walked in alone and it looked like there was a big battle here with knife marks all over the walls along with lots of dust. Mako swore he heard something and a dark chill began to come over him as if the killer was watching him from the shadows but could not be seen with the naked eye.

He felt like death was poking him in the back as he made his way to the basement stairs. Mako slowly walked down the stairs and looked at the photos on the wall. Some of them were of him along with deaths of everyone that has died from this killer in Saith. At the very bottom of the stairs Mako saw a photo of a girl he’s never seen before that looked pretty cute. A chipmunk from Pouncefield.

“I’m going to come, find you love. You’ve stolen my heart just from this photo and I will see you one day when this mess is behind me” said Mako staring at the photo.

As Mako stands there lost in his own thoughts a long sword blade comes rushing through him with blood coming out of his body. He looks down to see what just happen just to notice it was one of his own blades that stabbed him. With a last ditch effort of strength Mako turns around and sees no one there and will find never find out who stabbed him.

As Mako about to fall asleep for one final time he sees his sister dead at the bottom of the stairs and is sad for what has happened to her. Mako moved closer to his sister and lied beside her.

“I, love you Maria and always have” said Mako before closing his eyes one final time.

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