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", "writing": "10:00 am\n\nRand hits Mako multiple times all over his body so he’s bruised and quite bloody from his beating while an anger he never felt before building up inside of him.\n\n“Admit” said Rand with a big smile on his face like he was enjoying this.\n\nMako just sat there trying to get to figure out how to get to his blades on the floor while quite sore from what was happening to him.\n\n“I have an itch I can’t reach, can you help me reach it?” asked Mako hoping the force would knock the chair over. \n\n“I would gladly” said Rand and hit Mako as hard as he could with the rock right in the nuts.\n\nMako sat there and endured the pain while he was imaging he was in his happy place like his dad has taught him a year prior. He was imaging a nice peaceful meadow where there was no one there to bug him at all.\n\n“You missed it, can you try again?” asked Mako hoping this one would do the trick. \n\nRand hit him even harder this time and with the momentum causing the chair to fall over and landing Mako right near his blades. Rand continued to beat on Mako while lying helplessly on the floor and with that Mako finally snapped.\n“My, eyes are open, Sonic as you shall burn in the seven layers of hell with each layer shall last a million years, where things shall be done to you, that can’t, be named” said Mako snapping free from the chair with increased strength all of a sudden from his adrenalin. \n\nMako grabbed his blades and got up really quickly while forgetting about all the pain all of a sudden.\n\n“You want, to see a killer, I’ll show you one to your death Sonic. I’ll kill you, as slow as possible and hopefully last long enough to see yourself reduced to basically nothing” said Mako holding his blades out ready to kill the thing he loved.\n\nRand just realized with a shock of horror what he’s done and tries to figure out a way to escape from this monster.\n\n“I’m not Sonic” said Rand backing away from Mako.\n\nMako eyes looked bloody with rage wanting to take it out on the thing in front of him.\n\n“That all, I hear, Sonic wants to die. I’m glad I can help with this. Why do they call it a Sonic, slice as it might mean to slice your, feet off” said Mako staring to laugh medically.\n\nRand tries to run past Mako in this old run down basement and trips on his own rock that he brought with him. Mako walks slowly up to him and uses his blades to cut both of Rand feet off. \n\n“That a true slice, as you won’t be needing them anymore” said Mako wondering what to do next.\n\nRand just was screaming and saying anything off the top of his head while hoping Mako would stop. Mako bends down to look at Rand right in the face.\n\n“Now Sonic, doesn’t need to talk to keep a secret, moment before he dies” said Mako and cuts out Rand tongue.\n\nMako whispers something into Rand ear and is in more terror than ever before with what Mako said to him.\n\n“Here a funny thought, let’s play a game of baseball. You’ve already provided two balls, but it so much better with three but we’ll improvise shall me” said Mako and pulls down Rand pants in order to play baseball better.\n \nMako set’s up one of his blades right near Rand balls and starts laughing to himself.\n\n“These are much to, small to play baseball in. I might as well practice my golf swing, for a while” said Mako and starts swinging away.\n\nRand tries to scream in terror but no words came out.\n\n“This reminds me of, a little song. There was once a girl, who loved nuts all day, she played, chopped and chewed away. One night, she slept walked right into her brother room. She ate her bother nuts, that night and the brother never woke up from the night” said Mako while swinging away.\n\nMako continued to horrifying things to Rand until the body could no longer be recognized by anyone. Mako cut open Rand chest cavity and stabbed him right in the heart to kill him for good.\n\n“Thanks for all, the fun Sonic. I had a really great time. I’ll kill anyone who mentions you to me but they’ll get it quick unlike you” said Mako looking for someone to clean his blades off and some clothes.\n\nHe found some rags and cleaned off all the blood as best as possible so they wouldn’t stain. He eventually found his clothes stashed in a corner of the room. Mako put his clothes back on and put his blades back away while his face was the only anyone could see. He eventually left the building and thought it was kind of funny it was near the local movie theater.\n\n“I want to see, a movie” thought Mako and checked his pockets to see if he had anyone money but didn’t. \n\nMako was sadden by this as he wanted to see a killer reveled as it was the final part in the killer series where the killer was finally reveled. The other two movies were a case in 1921 and no way out. Mako wondered around town for a bit to try and find a way home so this day could end but instead he ended up right near the parade where his sister was the first one to notice him.\n\n3:00 pm the parade or Mako hell\n\nMaria walked up to him all excited to him and was to over whelm to notice the bruises on Mako face to care.\n\n“Hey bro, remember how you always wanted to be the mascot in the parade?” asked Maria all excited.\n\n“Ya but today not a day, I want anything to do with that” said Mako trying to keep calm while his hands begin to shake.\n\n“You’re wearing it, today and do your best” said Maria all happy for him even though she rigged it this year.\n\n“Listen, sis I really rather not” said Mako as he rather see the parade burn down to the ground.\n\nMaria not paying attention to Mako and grabs him by the paw and drags him to the wardrobe area. She helps him put on the Sonic outfit and it would have been Mako happiest day if it wasn’t what happened earlier. \n\n“You, look adorable in that” said Maria wishing they could be playful right now.\n\n“Thanks, sis” said Mako muttering to himself.\n\nMaria takes Mako by the paw and shows him to the front of the parade. Mako looks around as best as he could while a killer stands near by looking at his pray.\n\n“Enjoy it, while it last” thought the killer knowing tomorrow night is the best time to strike.\n\n“I’m going to make you all, pay for this and make you all regret this day, very soon” thought Mako having a plan in his head.\n\nAfter a few minutes the parade began which lasted one hour. It was the longest hour of Mako life at that moment and while he was walking he was thinking of all the ways to hurt the furs into this town. The mayor a skunk of a women who keeps mentioning she has a half-sister who has a son in Pounce field shakes Mako paw.\n\n“Thanks for the, lovely parade young one” said Amy skunk with a big smile.\n\nMako takes off the head of the outfit and gives her a big smile.\n\n“You’re welcome, I had a blast doing this, Amy” said Mako while trying to keep his calm.\n\n“How’s your cousin Christian Grey doing?” asked Amy out of curiosity.\n\n“Good don’t ask to go see him, as he’s into some weird stuff. Elliot and Mia are doing quite well also as we talk sometimes. Why?” asked Mako as she’s never asked about his cousin any time they talked.\n\n“I’ll have to go see him some time” said Amy licking her lips.\n\nMako walked away while having a felling he knew what she wanted. Mako and Maria eventually went home to relax before going to bed. The two of them approached the front door to see Dexter hanging from a beam in a hall. His body looked like what Mako did to that hedgehog earlier that day. \n\n“Let’s get out of here” said Mako in a haste and saw his farther in the driveway.\n\nThey ran over to the car and realized it was unlocked with the keys still in the ignition. They hoped in the car and drove off as fast as they could with their lives in peril. This is going to one nightmare coming true.\n\nTo be continued \n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "10:00 am

Rand hits Mako multiple times all over his body so he’s bruised and quite bloody from his beating while an anger he never felt before building up inside of him.

“Admit” said Rand with a big smile on his face like he was enjoying this.

Mako just sat there trying to get to figure out how to get to his blades on the floor while quite sore from what was happening to him.

“I have an itch I can’t reach, can you help me reach it?” asked Mako hoping the force would knock the chair over.

“I would gladly” said Rand and hit Mako as hard as he could with the rock right in the nuts.

Mako sat there and endured the pain while he was imaging he was in his happy place like his dad has taught him a year prior. He was imaging a nice peaceful meadow where there was no one there to bug him at all.

“You missed it, can you try again?” asked Mako hoping this one would do the trick.

Rand hit him even harder this time and with the momentum causing the chair to fall over and landing Mako right near his blades. Rand continued to beat on Mako while lying helplessly on the floor and with that Mako finally snapped.
“My, eyes are open, Sonic as you shall burn in the seven layers of hell with each layer shall last a million years, where things shall be done to you, that can’t, be named” said Mako snapping free from the chair with increased strength all of a sudden from his adrenalin.

Mako grabbed his blades and got up really quickly while forgetting about all the pain all of a sudden.

“You want, to see a killer, I’ll show you one to your death Sonic. I’ll kill you, as slow as possible and hopefully last long enough to see yourself reduced to basically nothing” said Mako holding his blades out ready to kill the thing he loved.

Rand just realized with a shock of horror what he’s done and tries to figure out a way to escape from this monster.

“I’m not Sonic” said Rand backing away from Mako.

Mako eyes looked bloody with rage wanting to take it out on the thing in front of him.

“That all, I hear, Sonic wants to die. I’m glad I can help with this. Why do they call it a Sonic, slice as it might mean to slice your, feet off” said Mako staring to laugh medically.

Rand tries to run past Mako in this old run down basement and trips on his own rock that he brought with him. Mako walks slowly up to him and uses his blades to cut both of Rand feet off.

“That a true slice, as you won’t be needing them anymore” said Mako wondering what to do next.

Rand just was screaming and saying anything off the top of his head while hoping Mako would stop. Mako bends down to look at Rand right in the face.

“Now Sonic, doesn’t need to talk to keep a secret, moment before he dies” said Mako and cuts out Rand tongue.

Mako whispers something into Rand ear and is in more terror than ever before with what Mako said to him.

“Here a funny thought, let’s play a game of baseball. You’ve already provided two balls, but it so much better with three but we’ll improvise shall me” said Mako and pulls down Rand pants in order to play baseball better.
 
Mako set’s up one of his blades right near Rand balls and starts laughing to himself.

“These are much to, small to play baseball in.  I might as well practice my golf swing, for a while” said Mako and starts swinging away.

Rand tries to scream in terror but no words came out.

“This reminds me of, a little song. There was once a girl, who loved nuts all day, she played, chopped and chewed away. One night, she slept walked right into her brother room. She ate her bother nuts, that night and the brother never woke up from the night” said Mako while swinging away.

Mako continued to horrifying things to Rand until the body could no longer be recognized by anyone.  Mako cut open Rand chest cavity and stabbed him right in the heart to kill him for good.

“Thanks for all, the fun Sonic. I had a really great time. I’ll kill anyone who mentions you to me but they’ll get it quick unlike you” said Mako looking for someone to clean his blades off and some clothes.

He found some rags and cleaned off all the blood as best as possible so they wouldn’t stain. He eventually found his clothes stashed in a corner of the room. Mako put his clothes back on and put his blades back away while his face was the only anyone could see. He eventually left the building and thought it was kind of funny it was near the local movie theater.

“I want to see, a movie” thought Mako and checked his pockets to see if he had anyone money but didn’t.

Mako was sadden by this as he wanted to see a killer reveled as it was the final part in the killer series where the killer was finally reveled. The other two movies were a case in 1921 and no way out. Mako wondered around town for a bit to try and find a way home so this day could end but instead he ended up right near the parade where his sister was the first one to notice him.

3:00 pm the parade or Mako hell

Maria walked up to him all excited to him and was to over whelm to notice the bruises on Mako face to care.

“Hey bro, remember how you always wanted to be the mascot in the parade?” asked Maria all excited.

“Ya but today not a day, I want anything to do with that” said Mako trying to keep calm while his hands begin to shake.

“You’re wearing it, today and do your best” said Maria all happy for him even though she rigged it this year.

“Listen, sis I really rather not” said Mako as he rather see the parade burn down to the ground.

Maria not paying attention to Mako and grabs him by the paw and drags him to the wardrobe area. She helps him put on the Sonic outfit and it would have been Mako happiest day if it wasn’t what happened earlier.

“You, look adorable in that” said Maria wishing they could be playful right now.

“Thanks, sis” said Mako muttering to himself.

Maria takes Mako by the paw and shows him to the front of the parade. Mako looks around as best as he could while a killer stands near by looking at his pray.

“Enjoy it, while it last” thought the killer knowing tomorrow night is the best time to strike.

“I’m going to make you all, pay for this and make you all regret this day, very soon” thought Mako having a plan in his head.

After a few minutes the parade began which lasted one hour. It was the longest hour of Mako life at that moment and while he was walking he was thinking of all the ways to hurt the furs into this town. The mayor a skunk of a women who keeps mentioning she has a half-sister who has a son in Pounce field shakes Mako paw.

“Thanks for the, lovely parade young one” said Amy skunk with a big smile.

Mako takes off the head of the outfit and gives her a big smile.

“You’re welcome, I had a blast doing this, Amy” said Mako while trying to keep his calm.

“How’s your cousin Christian Grey doing?” asked Amy out of curiosity.

“Good don’t ask to go see him, as he’s into some weird stuff. Elliot and Mia are doing quite well also as we talk sometimes. Why?” asked Mako as she’s never asked about his cousin any time they talked.

“I’ll have to go see him some time” said Amy licking her lips.

Mako walked away while having a felling he knew what she wanted. Mako and Maria eventually went home to relax before going to bed. The two of them approached the front door to see Dexter hanging from a beam in a hall. His body looked like what Mako did to that hedgehog earlier that day.

“Let’s get out of here” said Mako in a haste and saw his farther in the driveway.

They ran over to the car and realized it was unlocked with the keys still in the ignition. They hoped in the car and drove off as fast as they could with their lives in peril. This is going to one nightmare coming true.

To be continued
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