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This is going to one long weekend for the grey family ", "writing": "Saturday\nThe day of the parade\nOr\nThe day Mako hated begins\n\n8:00 am\nSomewhere on the other side of town\n\nMako woke up dazed and confused at his surroundings. He was in a building that looked a banded and hasn’t been used in quite some time. It looks like his favorite thing in the world was coming to rescue him from this nightmare but it only stood off in the distance. Mako also noticed he was completely nude strapped to a chair with no bottom.\n\n“Thanks, for bring are friend here, Will and Carmelita. Now go while I talk to my biggest fan and the one that been giving us so much trouble” said the hedgehog cracking his knuckles.\n\nThe two of them left and Mako never got a look at them to see what they truly look like. He did notice his blades on the ground and a rock attached to a rope.\n\n“I don’t want to know what those, are used for” thought Mako while realizing he was quite chilly at the moment.\n\nThe hedgehog began to walk closer to him while looking all menacing. Mako swore this hedgehog was Sonic only in disguise and was going to let him go right now.\n\n“We are going to have a chat, killer or I’m going to have to get rough any way I know how” said the hedgehog.\n\nMako nodded but had no idea who this killer is but decided to play along till he could somehow break free.\n\nMeanwhile at the Grey house\n\nMaria and her mom woke up from a restless sleep they had not knowing Mako was missing at the moment. The two of them headed downstairs for something to eat and figured Mako was off somewhere as today is his favorite day of the year as it was the annual hedgehog parade. \n\nThe mom decided to turn on the radio and listen to the news to see what was going on about last night. A women came on and started talking about a folklore that seem to become true at the moment. \n\n“Saith history foretold that many years ago a group of hedgehogs settled here as a small tribe. Eventually the hedgehog group grew quite large and became what we know today as a small community. The town name came from the original six member’s first letter of the maiden names. Some believe that Saith was short for a warning for the future generations. An innocent being will be born into this town but is a dark evil presence that will kill many innocents until its blood thrust is achieved while other believe he will lead us into harmony.\n\nDuring since the time Saith was founded there has been many crimes that have happened like this, all over the place but nothing to the extent of what has happened as of yesterday” said the lady on the radio.\n\nAfter they ate the phone began to ring and the mom picked up the phone to see who it was.\n\n“Hello” said the mom wondering who it was.\n\nNo one said anything on the other side and all that you could hear was a taping on the other line.\n\n“This isn’t funny, as we’ve been through a lot” said the mom.\n\n“You’re, all going to die” said the voice that sounded muffled that couldn’t be made out who it was.\n\nThe caller hung up and left the mom not sure what to say to Maria at that moment.\n\n“Who was that?” asked Maria wondering who was on the phone.\n\n“Wrong number, dear” said the mom thinking that was best as not wanting to have Maria worrying about something else.\n\n“Ok mom and I think Mako already, at the parade. You know how he always wants to dress up as the town mascot. I think this year, he’s going to get it” said Maria knowing she rigged it this year so Mako is going to do it.\n\nMaria didn’t know she’s going to put her brother though torture this afternoon. Maria and there Mom eventually headed out to the parade to see Mako having the best time in the world. Neither of them knowing Mako was being put through torture at the moment and hating everything he ever loved.\n\n9:00 am \nBack where Mako was and six hours till parade\n\nMako was still in shock what has transpired since this weekend has begun and was looking at the face of his hero but this one had dark ride eyes that looked like he could get away with anything.\n\n“You can call, me Rand, but that not my actual name killer. You know who I really am and not some dragon reborn” said Rand with a smile.\n\n“What do, you want?” asked Mako.\n\n“To make you suffer and to admit to, all that killing. I believe it was over fifty dead students along with some adults you have killed so far. Admit to it or else it will be a long and painful torment” said Rand picking up the rope attached to the rock.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Saturday
The day of the parade
Or
The day Mako hated begins

8:00 am
Somewhere on the other side of town

Mako woke up dazed and confused at his surroundings. He was in a building that looked a banded and hasn’t been used in quite some time. It looks like his favorite thing in the world was coming to rescue him from this nightmare but it only stood off in the distance. Mako also noticed he was completely nude strapped to a chair with no bottom.

“Thanks, for bring are friend here, Will and Carmelita. Now go while I talk to my biggest fan and the one that been giving us so much trouble” said the hedgehog cracking his knuckles.

The two of them left and Mako never got a look at them to see what they truly look like. He did notice his blades on the ground and a rock attached to a rope.

“I don’t want to know what those, are used for” thought Mako while realizing he was quite chilly at the moment.

The hedgehog began to walk closer to him while looking all menacing. Mako swore this hedgehog was Sonic only in disguise and was going to let him go right now.

“We are going to have a chat, killer or I’m going to have to get rough any way I know how” said the hedgehog.

Mako nodded but had no idea who this killer is but decided to play along till he could somehow break free.

Meanwhile at the Grey house

Maria and her mom woke up from a restless sleep they had not knowing Mako was missing at the moment. The two of them headed downstairs for something to eat and figured Mako was off somewhere as today is his favorite day of the year as it was the annual hedgehog parade.

The mom decided to turn on the radio and listen to the news to see what was going on about last night. A women came on and started talking about a folklore that seem to become true at the moment.

“Saith history foretold that many years ago a group of hedgehogs settled here as a small tribe. Eventually the hedgehog group grew quite large and became what we know today as a small community. The town name came from the original six member’s first letter of the maiden names. Some believe that Saith was short for a warning for the future generations. An innocent being will be born into this town but is a dark evil presence that will kill many innocents until its blood thrust is achieved while other believe he will lead us into harmony.

During since the time Saith was founded there has been many crimes that have happened like this, all over the place but nothing to the extent of what has happened as of yesterday” said the lady on the radio.

After they ate the phone began to ring and the mom picked up the phone to see who it was.

“Hello” said the mom wondering who it was.

No one said anything on the other side and all that you could hear was a taping on the other line.

“This isn’t funny, as we’ve been through a lot” said the mom.

“You’re, all going to die” said the voice that sounded muffled that couldn’t be made out who it was.

The caller hung up and left the mom not sure what to say to Maria at that moment.

“Who was that?” asked Maria wondering who was on the phone.

“Wrong number, dear” said the mom thinking that was best as not wanting to have Maria worrying about something else.

“Ok mom and I think Mako already, at the parade. You know how he always wants to dress up as the town mascot. I think this year, he’s going to get it” said Maria knowing she rigged it this year so Mako is going to do it.

Maria didn’t know she’s going to put her brother though torture this afternoon. Maria and there Mom eventually headed out to the parade to see Mako having the best time in the world. Neither of them knowing Mako was being put through torture at the moment and hating everything he ever loved.

9:00 am
Back where Mako was and six hours till parade

Mako was still in shock what has transpired since this weekend has begun and was looking at the face of his hero but this one had dark ride eyes that looked like he could get away with anything.

“You can call, me Rand, but that not my actual name killer. You know who I really am and not some dragon reborn” said Rand with a smile.

“What do, you want?” asked Mako.

“To make you suffer and to admit to, all that killing. I believe it was over fifty dead students along with some adults you have killed so far. Admit to it or else it will be a long and painful torment” said Rand picking up the rope attached to the rock.
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