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The first chapter contains a rather big amount of violence, but the later ones stay mostly tame.\n\nTwilight Sparkle's life is about to change drastically. I won't tell more ;P You'll have to read that yourselves xD", "description_bbcode_parsed": "First chapter of Chrimson Life. The first chapter contains a rather big amount of violence, but the later ones stay mostly tame.

Twilight Sparkle's life is about to change drastically. I won't tell more ;P You'll have to read that yourselves xD", "writing": "[b][center]Crimson Life\nby Luminous Shot\n\n\nI don't own any aspect of the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. All rights belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.\n\nThis work of fiction contains violence. If you feel uncomfortable about this, I suggest that you don't read past this point.\nHave fun![/center][/b]\n\n\nTwilight stared absently at her untouched teacup.\n\n\"Is something wrong, dear?\" the pony sitting across from her asked. Twilight knew her— she remembered how she'd greeted her on the street, but right now, her mind wouldn't let her think a single decent thought. Well, there was one...\n\n\"Twilight, you don't look so good. Do you want me to bring you back to the library?\" The dazed unicorn didn't notice it, but her hosts voice was filled with concern. \n\nShe just mumbled a quiet \"Sorry.\" A tear rolled down her cheek, and she stared with wide open eyes at the mulberry-coated mare in front of her.\n\nA few crimson drops stained the formerly white tablecloth.\n\n#########\n\nTwilight stared absently at her untouched teacup.\n\n\"Is something wrong, dear?\" the pony sitting across from her asked. Twilight knew her— it was Rarity. Twilight shook her head to clear her mind. She looked out of the window. It was already late, and she was probably just tired.\n\n\"Dear? Are you sure that everything is alright?\" Rarity asked with concern in her voice.\n\nLooking at her guest, the lavender-coated unicorn remembered everything. Rarity had come over to chat and tell her about her newest creation. It was a... a... Twilight couldn't even remember what they had talked about.\n\nWhen she noticed the worried expression on her friends face, Twilight replied quickly, \"No, everything is alright. I'm probably just a little tired. I think I dozed off for a moment. What were we talking about?\" Twilight showed an apologizing, yet tired smile.\n\n\"You really do look tired, darling. Why don't you go to bed early tonight. Your studies won't run away. Also, I suppose that I already stole enough of your time. We can continue our little get together tomorrow, when you're well rested,\" Rarity proposed.\n\nTwilight emptied her tea cup in one gulp. \"You're probably right.\"\n\nThe fashionista cringed at this unladylike way to drink tea, but ignored it and said, \"Not only probably, darling. Sleep will do you good.\" She rose from the couch she was sitting on and hugged her host. \"Sleep well, dear, I'll take my leave.\"\n\n\"Goodnight, Rarity. I'm sorry for throwing you out so early.\" She returned the hug and went to the door to open it.\n\n\"Early? Darling, don't be ridiculous. It's been dark outside for a couple of hours. I'm the one who shows up so late, but my work just keeps me too busy to come earlier.\" Rarity went out and turned on the doorstep. \"Next week, the same time?\"\n\n\"As always, Rarity,\" the tired unicorn replied with a smile. \"I'm looking forward to it.\"\n\nNodding, and smiling herself, Rarity turned again and left.\n\nTwilight wanted to clean the dishes and then go to sleep. However, the true rebel inside her struck, and she decided, despite her friends advice, to study all night. \"Rest is for the dead,\" she mumbled and walked down into her laboratory.\n\n#########\n\nAn hour later, Twilight noticed that she lacked an herb that was necessary for her studies. Every store had closed until now, where should she get it? She couldn't wake anypony either— It was already well past midnight.\n\nHowever, she knew that Zecora had much of the herb in her garden on the backside of her hut. Would the zebra be mad if Twilight took some of it just like that? Zecora always shared— Twilight knew that it wasn't a problem, still she would feel bad for taking something without asking. \n\nYou can't make an omelet without breaking eggs. Twilight put on her warm boots and marched out of the library. For science!\n\nWhen Twilight reached the edge of the Everfree Forest, she heard faint screaming in the distance. Was somepony in trouble? It clearly came from somewhere deep inside the woods. Throwing all caution to the winds, Twilight galloped after the voice.\n\nThe unicorn noticed that it was Pinkie Pie screaming in the distance. It sounded like she was being ponynapped. \n\nEven though, Twilight wasn't the most athletic pony, her opponent had to carry a sugar charged Pinkie Pie, and she slowly, but steadily came closer.\n\nAfter a minute Twilight stumbled over a tree root, but quickly rose back onto her hooves. She noticed that she'd lost a boot, but it wasn't important— saving Pinkie was absolute priority.\n\nSoon the screams died down, and Twilight feared that she'd lost Pinkie. However, the trees became fewer, and the ground rocky. In the distance Twilight could see a blotch of pink disturbing the darkness.\n\nTwilight came to a sliding stop. Pinkie was lying close to the edge of a cliff. She looked pale, but apart from that, unharmed. \"Pinkie! Wake up!\" She turned her friend onto her back and laid her head onto Pinkie's chest. Nothing, no heartbeat, no heaving of her chest when air filled her lungs.\n\nShe couldn't understand it. Pinkie looked perfectly fine on the outside, but she was dead. If there was one thing that was capable of truly frightening Twilight Sparkle, the mare who had faced Nightmare Moon, a manticore, a hydra, an ursa, and Discord, it was the sudden and almost impossible death of a friend.\n\n\"What's going on here?\" The shocked and scared unicorn began to cry. \"Who did this to you, Pinkie?\" she managed to say between sobs. \"Who!?\" she screamed, leaning over Pinkie and locking her tightly in her fore-legs.\n\n\"Hehe, I did.\"\n\nUpon hearing the haughty voice, Twilight's true power awakened. The power to ignore everything that clouded her mind and work with absolute precision and fast, rational logic.\n\nMale. Hundred-thirty degree turn counterclockwise. Thirty-eight degrees up. Approximately fourteen meters. Probably sitting on a branch. Twilight whirled around, channeling magic to roast whomever her eyes would lock on.\n\nDespite Twilight's unnatural quick reaction time, it was already too late. He stood right in front of her, wearing a greasy smile on his lips. Oh, how much she hated his smile. Before the magic could discharge, he had already landed a hit on her cheek, and Twilight collapsed on top of Pinkie.\n\nHowever, the ash-grey earth pony didn't stop. He continued pummeling her, all the while, aiming for her face. Twilight arrived in a new world of pain, unable to cast a single spell. By the time he stopped his onslaught, Twilight had lost and broken a few teeth, fractured cheekbones, and one of her eyes was maimed beyond all hope of healing.\n\n\"Okay, done.\" The stallion let out a sigh and smirked at his work. \"You unicorns can be dangerous, even for me. You'd already turned around before I was completely there. Certainly impressive, but that could've gone horribly wrong, don't you think?\"\n\nTwilight was too weak to say anything.\n\n\"Oh, where are my manners. Here I am, talking while you lie on the ground and stain your friend's coat with your wonderful red blood. My name's Azazel, or at least that's the name I tell my victims. What's yours?\" He kicked her in the side. Twilight felt and heard one of her ribs break and groaned, causing her even more pain.\n\n\"Nice to make your acquaintance, URGH. Or, should I rather say Twilight Sparkle? I've been observing your nice little town for quite a while now. The little cotton candy pony here was the first one I could catch, but I'm really lucky that you volunteered in the same night. Isn't that wonderful?\"\n\nEven if that bucker hadn't killed Pinkie and beaten her half dead, Twilight would hate him more than enough for his way of talking. Hate was the only thing that allowed her to ignore the horrible pain. \n\nHowever, she noticed something else— she was lying with her head on Pinkie's chest, from which, just a split second ago a weak beat had been sent out. Twilight waited for what felt like an eternity, and there it was again, another beat. Pinkie was alive. Twilight couldn't understand how, but this time she wasn't scared of the impossible, no, she smiled inwardly. Even if he killed Twilight, at least Pinkie would live.\n\n\"Ah well, I'm talking and talking, all night. Let's get this finished.\" He bit her mane and dragged her off Pinkie. \"You know, originally I wanted to keep her as slave, but I think you're by far more qualified for that job. I mean, unicorn magic is so practical. \"He dropped Twilight so that she faced Pinkie. \"Good riddance!\" With a swift kick, Pinkie rolled over the edge.\n\nTwilight's eyes widened in terror as she disappeared into the darkness. In her mind it felt like her friend waited just below the edge and was going to jump up. Soon. Any moment. Now... . Nothing. She closed her one sound eye. Not only had she seen her friend die once today, but twice.\n\n\"Woohoo, did you see that? Nice flight. I'd say she scored a nine out of ten.\" He looked down at the trashed unicorn. \"Hey you're still there, aren't you?\" He kicked her in the rips again, causing another cracking sound. She opened her eye. It was filled with hatred... and blood. \"Wonderful! As I said, you're going to be my slave, for the rest of your life, and believe me, that'll be longer than you might think.\"\n\n\"Unfortunately, I can't let you stay conscious the whole time, can I? You could fire a nasty spell at me when I'm not looking. So...\" He turned her on her back and reared up, ready to stomp on her face with all his might.\n\nThis time Twilight didn't close her eye. All fear was gone— she only felt hate for him. To her surprise, he didn't come down again. Instead, a sharp, blue glowing horn grew out of his chest.\n\nWith a last pained scream, he burst in flames and slid off the horn. She turned her head slowly to the side to watch him burn some more. Eventually, satisfaction and strain caused her to fall asleep. The last words she heard were, \"You're safe, Twilight Sparkle.\"\n\n#########\n\nAgainst all odds, Twilight opened her eyes again. They were greeted with darkness. It was far too dark to see anything, and the pain was too severe for her to move. She only noticed that she was lying on something soft.\n\nThe unicorn heard a silent voice somewhere to her left, probably behind a wall or door, \"I'll do it now, and you can't change my mind.\" ... ... ... It seemed like somepony else was speaking, but Twilight couldn't make a single word out. She wasn't sure if there even was another voice.\n\nThe first one spoke again, \"If you don't let me do it, I'll just ask for the favor. You said whatever I wished for, remember?\"... ... ...\"Thank you, I'm glad to have you as friend, and I'm glad that you trust me. Do you have the situation here under control?\" ... ... ... \"Good. I'm going in. I hope that she's awake now.\" ... ... ... \"Of course I want her to see. You know how she is. How can I make her understand other than showing her.\" ... ... ...\n\nA door opened and light fell into the room. \"The great Twilight Sparkle, lying at my mercy.\" It was the voice of a mare, a unicorn mare, who suddenly leaned over Twilight's face, a mare whom Twilight knew as the Great and Powerful Trixie.\n\nShe showed a haughty smirk and said, \"First, let me make something clear— I didn't lie when I said that you were safe. However, you need to understand that Twilight Sparkle is no longer. She died on a cliff in the Everfree Forest tonight. From now on, you'll be mine, my possession, and to seal the deal, I'll give you my special kiss.\"\n\nTrixie leaned further down, her muzzle brushing Twilight's neck. \"You don't know how long I've waited for this moment to come. I'll enjoy making you mine. Every. Single. Drop.\"\n\nWith these words, Twilight felt a sharp pain in her neck. Something had pierced her skin. It burned and stung. She felt her pulse speed up. After a few seconds of pain, Trixie let go of her. Everything faded to black, and Twilight heard her say, \"Rest Twilight Sparkle. Cause rest is for the dead. And... dead is what you are now.\"\n\n\n\nTO BE CONTINUED\n\n\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
Crimson Life
by Luminous Shot


I don't own any aspect of the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. All rights belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.

This work of fiction contains violence. If you feel uncomfortable about this, I suggest that you don't read past this point.
Have fun!



Twilight stared absently at her untouched teacup.

"Is something wrong, dear?" the pony sitting across from her asked. Twilight knew her— she remembered how she'd greeted her on the street, but right now, her mind wouldn't let her think a single decent thought. Well, there was one...

"Twilight, you don't look so good. Do you want me to bring you back to the library?" The dazed unicorn didn't notice it, but her hosts voice was filled with concern.

She just mumbled a quiet "Sorry." A tear rolled down her cheek, and she stared with wide open eyes at the mulberry-coated mare in front of her.

A few crimson drops stained the formerly white tablecloth.

#########

Twilight stared absently at her untouched teacup.

"Is something wrong, dear?" the pony sitting across from her asked. Twilight knew her— it was Rarity. Twilight shook her head to clear her mind. She looked out of the window. It was already late, and she was probably just tired.

"Dear? Are you sure that everything is alright?" Rarity asked with concern in her voice.

Looking at her guest, the lavender-coated unicorn remembered everything. Rarity had come over to chat and tell her about her newest creation. It was a... a... Twilight couldn't even remember what they had talked about.

When she noticed the worried expression on her friends face, Twilight replied quickly, "No, everything is alright. I'm probably just a little tired. I think I dozed off for a moment. What were we talking about?" Twilight showed an apologizing, yet tired smile.

"You really do look tired, darling. Why don't you go to bed early tonight. Your studies won't run away. Also, I suppose that I already stole enough of your time. We can continue our little get together tomorrow, when you're well rested," Rarity proposed.

Twilight emptied her tea cup in one gulp. "You're probably right."

The fashionista cringed at this unladylike way to drink tea, but ignored it and said, "Not only probably, darling. Sleep will do you good." She rose from the couch she was sitting on and hugged her host. "Sleep well, dear, I'll take my leave."

"Goodnight, Rarity. I'm sorry for throwing you out so early." She returned the hug and went to the door to open it.

"Early? Darling, don't be ridiculous. It's been dark outside for a couple of hours. I'm the one who shows up so late, but my work just keeps me too busy to come earlier." Rarity went out and turned on the doorstep. "Next week, the same time?"

"As always, Rarity," the tired unicorn replied with a smile. "I'm looking forward to it."

Nodding, and smiling herself, Rarity turned again and left.

Twilight wanted to clean the dishes and then go to sleep. However, the true rebel inside her struck, and she decided, despite her friends advice, to study all night. "Rest is for the dead," she mumbled and walked down into her laboratory.

#########

An hour later, Twilight noticed that she lacked an herb that was necessary for her studies. Every store had closed until now, where should she get it? She couldn't wake anypony either— It was already well past midnight.

However, she knew that Zecora had much of the herb in her garden on the backside of her hut. Would the zebra be mad if Twilight took some of it just like that? Zecora always shared— Twilight knew that it wasn't a problem, still she would feel bad for taking something without asking.

You can't make an omelet without breaking eggs. Twilight put on her warm boots and marched out of the library. For science!

When Twilight reached the edge of the Everfree Forest, she heard faint screaming in the distance. Was somepony in trouble? It clearly came from somewhere deep inside the woods. Throwing all caution to the winds, Twilight galloped after the voice.

The unicorn noticed that it was Pinkie Pie screaming in the distance. It sounded like she was being ponynapped.

Even though, Twilight wasn't the most athletic pony, her opponent had to carry a sugar charged Pinkie Pie, and she slowly, but steadily came closer.

After a minute Twilight stumbled over a tree root, but quickly rose back onto her hooves. She noticed that she'd lost a boot, but it wasn't important— saving Pinkie was absolute priority.

Soon the screams died down, and Twilight feared that she'd lost Pinkie. However, the trees became fewer, and the ground rocky. In the distance Twilight could see a blotch of pink disturbing the darkness.

Twilight came to a sliding stop. Pinkie was lying close to the edge of a cliff. She looked pale, but apart from that, unharmed. "Pinkie! Wake up!" She turned her friend onto her back and laid her head onto Pinkie's chest. Nothing, no heartbeat, no heaving of her chest when air filled her lungs.

She couldn't understand it. Pinkie looked perfectly fine on the outside, but she was dead. If there was one thing that was capable of truly frightening Twilight Sparkle, the mare who had faced Nightmare Moon, a manticore, a hydra, an ursa, and Discord, it was the sudden and almost impossible death of a friend.

"What's going on here?" The shocked and scared unicorn began to cry. "Who did this to you, Pinkie?" she managed to say between sobs. "Who!?" she screamed, leaning over Pinkie and locking her tightly in her fore-legs.

"Hehe, I did."

Upon hearing the haughty voice, Twilight's true power awakened. The power to ignore everything that clouded her mind and work with absolute precision and fast, rational logic.

Male. Hundred-thirty degree turn counterclockwise. Thirty-eight degrees up. Approximately fourteen meters. Probably sitting on a branch. Twilight whirled around, channeling magic to roast whomever her eyes would lock on.

Despite Twilight's unnatural quick reaction time, it was already too late. He stood right in front of her, wearing a greasy smile on his lips. Oh, how much she hated his smile. Before the magic could discharge, he had already landed a hit on her cheek, and Twilight collapsed on top of Pinkie.

However, the ash-grey earth pony didn't stop. He continued pummeling her, all the while, aiming for her face. Twilight arrived in a new world of pain, unable to cast a single spell. By the time he stopped his onslaught, Twilight had lost and broken a few teeth, fractured cheekbones, and one of her eyes was maimed beyond all hope of healing.

"Okay, done." The stallion let out a sigh and smirked at his work. "You unicorns can be dangerous, even for me. You'd already turned around before I was completely there. Certainly impressive, but that could've gone horribly wrong, don't you think?"

Twilight was too weak to say anything.

"Oh, where are my manners. Here I am, talking while you lie on the ground and stain your friend's coat with your wonderful red blood. My name's Azazel, or at least that's the name I tell my victims. What's yours?" He kicked her in the side. Twilight felt and heard one of her ribs break and groaned, causing her even more pain.

"Nice to make your acquaintance, URGH. Or, should I rather say Twilight Sparkle? I've been observing your nice little town for quite a while now. The little cotton candy pony here was the first one I could catch, but I'm really lucky that you volunteered in the same night. Isn't that wonderful?"

Even if that bucker hadn't killed Pinkie and beaten her half dead, Twilight would hate him more than enough for his way of talking. Hate was the only thing that allowed her to ignore the horrible pain.

However, she noticed something else— she was lying with her head on Pinkie's chest, from which, just a split second ago a weak beat had been sent out. Twilight waited for what felt like an eternity, and there it was again, another beat. Pinkie was alive. Twilight couldn't understand how, but this time she wasn't scared of the impossible, no, she smiled inwardly. Even if he killed Twilight, at least Pinkie would live.

"Ah well, I'm talking and talking, all night. Let's get this finished." He bit her mane and dragged her off Pinkie. "You know, originally I wanted to keep her as slave, but I think you're by far more qualified for that job. I mean, unicorn magic is so practical. "He dropped Twilight so that she faced Pinkie. "Good riddance!" With a swift kick, Pinkie rolled over the edge.

Twilight's eyes widened in terror as she disappeared into the darkness. In her mind it felt like her friend waited just below the edge and was going to jump up. Soon. Any moment. Now... . Nothing. She closed her one sound eye. Not only had she seen her friend die once today, but twice.

"Woohoo, did you see that? Nice flight. I'd say she scored a nine out of ten." He looked down at the trashed unicorn. "Hey you're still there, aren't you?" He kicked her in the rips again, causing another cracking sound. She opened her eye. It was filled with hatred... and blood. "Wonderful! As I said, you're going to be my slave, for the rest of your life, and believe me, that'll be longer than you might think."

"Unfortunately, I can't let you stay conscious the whole time, can I? You could fire a nasty spell at me when I'm not looking. So..." He turned her on her back and reared up, ready to stomp on her face with all his might.

This time Twilight didn't close her eye. All fear was gone— she only felt hate for him. To her surprise, he didn't come down again. Instead, a sharp, blue glowing horn grew out of his chest.

With a last pained scream, he burst in flames and slid off the horn. She turned her head slowly to the side to watch him burn some more. Eventually, satisfaction and strain caused her to fall asleep. The last words she heard were, "You're safe, Twilight Sparkle."

#########

Against all odds, Twilight opened her eyes again. They were greeted with darkness. It was far too dark to see anything, and the pain was too severe for her to move. She only noticed that she was lying on something soft.

The unicorn heard a silent voice somewhere to her left, probably behind a wall or door, "I'll do it now, and you can't change my mind." ... ... ... It seemed like somepony else was speaking, but Twilight couldn't make a single word out. She wasn't sure if there even was another voice.

The first one spoke again, "If you don't let me do it, I'll just ask for the favor. You said whatever I wished for, remember?"... ... ..."Thank you, I'm glad to have you as friend, and I'm glad that you trust me. Do you have the situation here under control?" ... ... ... "Good. I'm going in. I hope that she's awake now." ... ... ... "Of course I want her to see. You know how she is. How can I make her understand other than showing her." ... ... ...

A door opened and light fell into the room. "The great Twilight Sparkle, lying at my mercy." It was the voice of a mare, a unicorn mare, who suddenly leaned over Twilight's face, a mare whom Twilight knew as the Great and Powerful Trixie.

She showed a haughty smirk and said, "First, let me make something clear— I didn't lie when I said that you were safe. However, you need to understand that Twilight Sparkle is no longer. She died on a cliff in the Everfree Forest tonight. From now on, you'll be mine, my possession, and to seal the deal, I'll give you my special kiss."

Trixie leaned further down, her muzzle brushing Twilight's neck. "You don't know how long I've waited for this moment to come. I'll enjoy making you mine. Every. Single. Drop."

With these words, Twilight felt a sharp pain in her neck. Something had pierced her skin. It burned and stung. She felt her pulse speed up. After a few seconds of pain, Trixie let go of her. Everything faded to black, and Twilight heard her say, "Rest Twilight Sparkle. Cause rest is for the dead. And... dead is what you are now."



TO BE CONTINUED



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