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But little does he know that it becomes a boon for his so-called friend.\n\n----------------\n\nA very fun commish from @extralife that was [url=https://inkbunny.net/s/2540368]inspired by this lovely commish that I got from him![/url] I'm having a lot of fun with brainfucking stories, but never done a coma story before so this was great! Hope you all enjoy it too~", "description_bbcode_parsed": "A terrible accident results in a lost wife just out of reach from her beloved.  But little does he know that it becomes a boon for his so-called friend.

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that was inspired by this lovely commish that I got from him!  I'm having a lot of fun with brainfucking stories, but never done a coma story before so this was great!  Hope you all enjoy it too~", "writing": "The last moments of Twi became a pastiche of fear in her eyes. The rain-slick windscreen, the hard turn on the road, the lights shining from a truck. It wasn't her fault, she thought before the darkness came. She pounded her foot on the brakes but nothing came from them, five stomps before the end. She was only lucky to black out after the third time her car rolled down the hill.\nFrom that point on she was trapped in dreams, vague recollections, pieces of her youth, joys and sorrows dancing in the breeze as from beyond came the vague sound of a steady beep. Somewhere, beyond her reach, was the exit back to life, but a long twisting path kept turning with every step. Voices called out to her, warped and fractured like hearing a call from another dimension.\n [i]\"We'll keep her under surveillance. But that's the best we can do.\"\n \"So...you don't know how to wake her up?\"\n \"It comes down to her. She can come back in a week, a month, or a year. I'm sorry.\"[/i]\nIn the real world, Bob stood over her, a pale wolf with sharp cyan hair curling down the back of his shoulders, dressed in an old jacket with jeans as he gazed upon his beloved wife. The dragon had soft blue fur and a yellow-buttered belly, swaddled in a gown with a peaceful look on her face.\nBrown hair rippled down beneath her golden horns as the wolf tried to put on a brave face, staring at the bandage wrappings around her forehead beneath her hair. Wires attached to her wrist and her neck connected to the EKG, a constant companion watching over her with a soft gentle beeping.\nBob walked out of the room, the doctor still keeping watch as the wolf met a raptor out in the hall. His brown scales and purple stripes stood out under a t-shirt and slacks.\n \"What'd they say?\" he asked.\n \"She uh...they don't know,\" Bob rubbed his arm, \"I-i dunno what to do man.\"\n \"I'm sorry,\" the raptor sighed, \"I wish I coulda been there to help.\"\n \"It...it's fine. Thanks for being here James.\"\n \"You want me to hang here and keep you posted?\" James patted him. \"You had a long day with the doctors, I can stick around a few hours.\"\n \"Nah dude you done enough-\"\n \"I'm good.\" He grabbed Bob's hands. \"Go home, chill yourself out, do whatever keeps you going, I'll call you if anything changes.\"\n \"Alright...thanks.\"\nBob didn't fight this, the wind sucked out of his sails and his mind stulted with the shock as he looked back towards his peaceful wife. Soft breathing from her lungs made her cleavage lift slightly, the wolf clenching his teeth to hold himself as he left the hospital. Once he was out of view, James entered the hospital room and gave a grin to the doctor, a crocodile attending.\n \"You fixed the schedule?\" James asked.\n \"You have the money?\"\nThe doctor offered his hand as the raptor slapped down a good stack of bills.\n \"Come back in four hours, this ward'll be vacant by then.\"\n \"Nice. Real glad she's in a coma, that makes this part a lot easier.\"\n \"I'll leave a camera,\" the croc grinned, \"for both of us to...enjoy.\"\n\nFour hours later, Twi still remained in her coma. No eye movement was detected, her heartbeats stable and no attending staff were nearby to check on her. Her chest kept breathing steady, the door opening to her room as a raptor snuck inside.\n \"Hey baby.\" James grinned slipping through. \"Glad that we're finally alone. Shoulda seen the look on your hubby's face.\"\nHe closed the door and stepped over to the comatose dragon. With a lick of his lips he opened up her robe to stare upon her luscious golden breasts, with soft rosy nipples that he plucked and squeezed to feel their ripeness. Then there was her pussy, a soft fresh pair of lips between her blue thighs.\n \"Fuck you're a sexy bitch. I'm real glad you got in a coma, honestly thought you'd get killed but this is way better. Oh, right before I forget.\"\nWalking over to the dresser on the side, the raptor pulled out a small video camera that he set on the table and set record to get a full view of his scene. Twi still laid bare and openly naked, the bandages round her forehead slightly redder than before from the gentle bleeding.\n \"Be a real shame if Bob found out I was the one that cut your brakes. Don't worry, I won't tell if you won't.\"\nSlipping down his jeans, the raptor swept off his shirt and put his clothes aside with a throbbing erection already out in force, a pair of smooth scaly balls dangling underneath. The light from the corridor outside glinted on his purple stripes, his green glimmering eyes as sharp as his teeth as he climbed on top of the patient, and grinded his cock against her pussy.\n \"Wonder if this works.\"\nJames kissed Twi on the lips. A soft tender kiss to taste her breath, suckling her mouth before he pressed his tongue deep inside. There was a natural resistance from her living body, a brief fidgeting of her tongue as her inner discomfort made her muscles stiffen in the slightest ways. Nothing that James detected of course as he wrapped his hands around her head, and pulled her to a deeper kiss.\n \"Mmmmhhhh...ohhh...guess I wasn't your true prince Twi. You made such a good wife didn't you? Shame you were a dumb fucking cunt as well.\"\nWith gasping breaths he plunged deeper in her throat, suckling swirl of his tongue along her teeth joined by one of his hands sliding down to squeeze her supple breast. He thumbed along the nipple, squeezing it harder with a tight pluck that would sting if she were awake as his tongue molested her own in a sucking groan.\nHis drool trickled out of her lips, grinding his fingers down her belly to feel her still breathing. He was surprised she wasn't more antagonised, but then James had never had someone in a coma before. It was like a body that kept warm, at least, for the night he would have her. He pulled away from her lips, a hot web of saliva between them as he chuckled.\n \"You're already wet aren't you?\" James grinded his meat on her pussy. \"God you are such a fucking whore, what would Bob think of you like this huh? Letting his friend use you like the filthy bitch you are.\"\nHe picked up her legs to prop them over his shoulders, heavy without resistance as her body bounced slightly on the bed when he aimed his shaft towards her cunt. Looming over her still body, the raptor pushed inside feeling the briefest resistance from her muscles. A twitch of pain as her nerves tried to activate when he slammed himself deep.\n \"MMMMPH! Fuuuuck! Fucking hell that feels good. I was thinking you'd be in the morgue but this is so much hotter.\"\nWithout further restraint he began to rape her, Twi's head lolling to one side in the thrusting pump of the raptor's shaft, his balls slapping against her yellow pussy as her legs dangled over his shoulders. Gasping with bliss, James grinned with a snorting lust, tail lashing behind him as he hammered the dragon's walls and scraped into her pussy's folds.\nHer body reacted subliminally, a sense of rising trouble from the deep violation as her heartrate increased. The beeping of the machine went faster, climbing upwards with the heat of her body as it tried to cope against her rape, a thickening red sliver trickling out on the raptor's meat with every slap. Fresh lubricant from her tearing walls as James pummelled her ruthless, her bed creaking and the machine beeping louder.\n \"I know you wanted this,\" he snarled, \"flashing your ass at me all the time, being cute with me and groping Bob in front of me. You're a filthy slut Twi, you shouldn't lead guys on like that.\"\nJames bent forwards in his savage rape, panting on her face as her mouth fell open from the constant thrusts to look like she was panting.\n \"Bob'll move on without you anyway...mmmph...he'll find a better girl than you, you're just a stupid bitch in the end who crashed her own car. Maybe I might just...mmmph, just ''happen'' to find a suicide note you left...just to help him move on from you. No one's going to miss you Twi...not your husband, or me.\"\nKissing her once more with a beastly tongue, he slurped and sucked on her lips with a festering greed and a deeper slam into her womb, brutally tearing her walls to open up wider and bleed faster on his dick. Her body was panicking, her mind too far gone to react as her heart beat even faster, the EKG almost screaming with a dangerous pulse.\nStill he kept fucking, pounding her hips until his own would hurt to leave a reddish taint on her cheeks. Her cunt was gaping wide, and the river of crimson flowed across her sheets to smear James' balls, a stickying web of blood and pre turning thicker as he moaned in using her.\n \"Mmmmph! Ohhhh fuck, what, you gonna die on me?! Fucking worthless bitch can't even come out of her coma, go on then. Do it, fucking kill yourself on my fat dick, only good thing you ever done in your life is make me cum Twi. I was gonna put a pillow on you but if you're such a weak bitch, then DO IT!\"\nWith a rapturous cackle at his conquest of the poor victim, James felt his climax fast approaching as the EKG rose higher from his abuse. Her heart was screaming unchecked, her body at a loss what to do and without her mind to pull it back, it was on a collision course with destiny.\nStabbing into her womb, the raptor's cock broke her most sacred walls, and defiled them with scraping tears and punching grinds that a puddle of red formed underneath. It wasn't enough to kill her, but the pain was severe enough her heartrate kept climbing to a vile scream, almost tingling the raptor's teeth in its cadence.\nBut it was enough to make him cum, when he fucked her to the hilt and pumped his seed deep inside her. Gasping on her face, James flooded her depths and filled up her womb, pulling back only with a shudder to feel his cum drench on her walls and slosh down towards her ovaries.\n \"HAAH! F-FUUUUCK! Ohhhh you fucking bitch...ohhhh god yes...huh, look at that.\"\nHe opened one of her eyes to make her look down.\n \"Forgot to put on a condom. Whoops.\"\nHis smile widened as Twi stared back at him.\n \"Hope you were wanting a family sometime soon cuz...well, you shoulda said before.\"\nThe raptor pulled out of her with a dripping river, her unresisting pussy showing spots of red trickling out from her savage rape. James smiled at his cruel length slaked in her crimson, looking over her body for other holes to violate as he rolled her onto her side.\n \"Gotta make sure you don't get bedsores,\" he teased, \"otherwise you'll make a fucking uglier bitch than usual.\"\nHer tail was pushed out to hang over the side of the bed, the raptor hiking one of her legs up and aiming towards her gorgeous blue cheeks. A fresh pink pucker awaited him, softly twitching from her heartbeat scaling back down to a gentler beep. That steady rhythm of her body returning to its peaceful state.\nIt would disappear once again when James shoved himself forth in her ass, gasping at her tightness before gripping her leg tighter to push. Her heartrate went up again, frantic beeps of distress for the second rape of her short life. The sound of her anal walls tearing apart made the raptor shoot a wad of pre before he was halfway in, flexing his shaft just to break into her hole.\n \"MMMMPH! AWWW, FFFFUCK! Ohhh Twi are you a virgin back there?! Hah, you didn't even let Bob fuck your ass, god what a fucking garbage wife you are!\"\nThe sound of her ass ripping open was barely heard about the screaming beeps, James panting faster as he violated Twi deep with a stabbing hilt. It took a few minutes to wedge himself in, grunting with a twist of his hips and a spearing plunge as her tail twitched with spasms. Every time James scraped against her walls, a scarlet trail thickened on the raptor's balls to stain her bed.\nOnce he managed to gape her rear enough, James found his pace and started thrusting proper, wrecking her ass with a stronger force than he had given her pussy as the bed shook even harder. The sounds of the EKG rose sharply, not enough to go into arrest but enough to startle as her rapist grinned with monstrous bliss.\n \"Ohhhh god Twi...fuck, did you save your ass just for me? Such a good whore you make...but a terrible wife.\"\nHe bent over her face with a lustful grin, licking across her cheek as her breathing turned faster.\n \"Damn, you getting that fucking wet?\" James whispered. \"Maybe you always wanted this Twi...getting raped like a fucking skank, while you're sleeping...maybe one day Bob'll know what I did to you...until then, you're my fucking braindead cunt...well.\"\nThe raptor stroked her hair.\n \"Not yet you are.\"\nA fiendish cackle crept from his lips as he kissed her again, suckling her lips and still tasting his drool from before as her mouth hung open. One of her eyes was barely open from when he lifted its lid, looking more dead than alive as he kept fucking her ass with heavy slaps from his balls against her cheeks. The sound of a slick wettening filled his ears from the growing blood lubricating him, mixing with his pre.\nHis tongue slid down her neck, tasting the wire connecting to the EKG as Twi rocked against her side from his constant thrusting. The others wires connecting her wrist to the EKG slightly tangled underneath, the raptor leaning over to bite one of her nipples in a hard suck, pulling open her hospital gown to savour her sweet breast.\nMoaning through his teeth, James sucked on her tit with a desperate grunt, as if trying to draw milk whilst his tongue swirled around the areola with snarling grunts clouding over her skin. Every plunging hilt turned his pre thicker inside her bleeding rump, the raptor's balls forming a web of crimson-pale until he came once again.\nSavage moans rumbled through her ribcage as James pulled on her teat, biting down firm to stretch it a little further as Twi's heart beat faster, fast enough that her rapist could hear it thumping in her chest. Sputtering shots of raptor jizz smothered around her folds, stickying up her anal walls now full of little gashes and rips.\n \"M-mmmmph...holy fuck,\" James sighed pulling back, \"that felt so much better than your cunt.\"\nHe smiled at his work seeing the red blistering hole dripping of his cum, stains of ruby forming ropes tethered to his cock like the film of saliva from his teeth to her breast. He watched her heartrate go back down, the EKG returning to its pre-rape status of a gentle dithering. Her mind was oblivious to the trauma enacted on her body, her consciousness still drifting in the beyond.\nThe raptor smiled as he rolled her on her back again, watching her face still serene as ever as her eyelid had slipped fully back down once more. His shaft was still aching, his greatest crime yet to come as he stepped up towards her head and stroked her hair above the bandage.\n \"You really do look a lot better like this,\" James murmured, \"all quiet and sexy, with your tits out, and your holes all full of my cum. I felt a lot better than Bob ever did, right Twi?\"\nHe pulled the bandage up to expose her ear, a furry knife that felt smooth on his fingers.\n \"I always hoped that when you died, I'd be the last one you ever meet. You got no idea how many times I jerked off to just stabbing you, gutting you...strangling you so hard. But now you're mine. Just as you were always meant to be. A worthless, brainless fuckdoll for men.\"\nHis smile grew wider as he took aim with his meat, the hard lance pushing against Twi's ear and gently twisting its way inside like a thick blunt sword. The first few inches pushed up against her eardrum, a very quiet breeze drifting past as the raptor grabbed her head.\nA shudder of excitement filled him as he pushed, cracking through the eardrum with a solid punch as he felt her earbones separate around his dick, small and sharp as her heartbeat skyrocketed with a violent shriek. The intensity of her pain was palpable, her body clenching beneath her skin and a tightening of her teeth.\nHer skull, damaged as it was, stood no chance against James' onslaught as he drilled his way inside, the soft crackling of her bone separating further from his shaft's thickening length. He breached into her brain as he smiled from the gentle squish of her matter, feeling the spongy matter kiss against his cock.\n \"Hhhhhh...ohhhhh fucking christ this is it. I can't believe I get to do this to you. Watching you sleep, hoping you wake up...but you never will Twi. And let's face it, nobody fucking cares about you anyway.\"\nA slow grinding thrust began the death of Twi, his cock scraping along the outer hemisphere of her brain and pushing inside the scalp. Her heartrate was unending, a violent seizure trembling through her body from the instinctive fear of someone, something creeping into her brain and severing it bit by bit.\nJames took his time, experimenting with little jabs and thrusts here or there to see what would happen. Sometimes her face twitched, other times a hand would spasm, or her leg shuddered. But she was never truly alive, all he was doing was pulling at the strings. His lust grew as his precum smeared across her brain, salting the hemispheres with a gooey matter that felt warm and frightening in her depths.\nThen it would happen. He pulled back from the broken ear, blood pouring down her side and onto his balls now ruby-red, before he thrust deep into her skull. Then she flatlined. That shrill beep, beep, until it never stopped becoming one long single note that was the death knell of her body.\nIt was the hottest sound James ever heard as he groaned and bent over her, mounting her head as the bed shook once again. His vile lust with slapping balls against her cheek were deafened by the flatline that made him more hard than ever before.\n \"AAAAH! F-FUUUCK! Ohhh Twi, FUCK, god you fucking BITCH, I'm so glad I fucking killed you you WHORE, I wish I'd fucking raped you in a coma on your wedding night, AAAAH!\"\nHer brain was soon mangled, mushed into porridge that dripped out on his cock every time he pulled out with thickening clumps that smeared over his shaft. All that was left of Twi, and all that ever would be her, was lost in the salty swill of his pre that sloshed against the grey matter of her skull, dripping out her eyes, her ears and her nose in thin bloody streams.\nIt was the softest fleshlight he ever felt, and one that was oddly colder than he expected. The only consolation Twi would have, was that this was the least painful part of her death, when she would finally slip away. Her heart stopped beating after the third thrust in her brain, when James fucked through her cerebrum and raped her vitals to shreds.\nHer mouth remained open, a last breath unheard by her rapist whom every thrust turned wetter and thicker in her head. Her memories were nothing but meaty slop, her love for Bob, her dreams of anniversary, now decorated the length of James' shaft. Then he would cum, his strongest orgasm yet, blasting his hot seed into the mushy soup that had once been Twi.\nFlooding her depths, James never stopped fucking throughout the flatline, her body spasming in throes of vicious. He almost imagined she was pleasuring him, knowingly, in her final steps from this world just to truly serve a purpose in her last hour. He drenched the walls of her skull, mixing the red with grey, hot and sticky rivers oozing out of her head.\n \"Mmmmhhh...fuck. Fuuuck yes.\"\nHe sighed with a deep bliss, patting her face as he pulled out with a thick POP that brought forth a slurry of brain on his dick.\n \"Fuck...you really did kill yourself on my dick you stupid bitch.\"\nThe raptor chuckled with another kiss to her lips, pulling out a thick runny drool of cum from his red-painted shaft. He watched upon his work, her bloodied cunt, ass, and ear well-used as her legs slumped either side to spread open.\n \"You know what the best part is?\" He walked over to the camera with dick swinging out. \"No one's gonna know at the funeral when they bury you with my jizz inside you. Not even Bob.\"\nSaving the vid, he took the camera with him and put on his clothes, wiping himself up as the doctor came slinking round a few minutes later, dragging a body bag behind him.\n \"Had fun?\" he asked.\n \"You bet.\" James handed the camera. \"You'll make sure she's disposed of right?\"\n \"Oh yeah,\" the gator grinned, \"might have a few friends in the morgue who'd like her.\"\n \"Hope they like sloppy seconds. Tell Bob whatever you want, thanks for the fuck.\"\n \"Thanks for the money.\"\nThey waved each other off, the doctor putting her inside a body bag and taking her off to the morgue. The raptor strolled out the hospital, whistling to himself with a sigh of relief.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "The last moments of Twi became a pastiche of fear in her eyes.  The rain-slick windscreen, the hard turn on the road, the lights shining from a truck.  It wasn't her fault, she thought before the darkness came.  She pounded her foot on the brakes but nothing came from them, five stomps before the end.  She was only lucky to black out after the third time her car rolled down the hill.
From that point on she was trapped in dreams, vague recollections, pieces of her youth, joys and sorrows dancing in the breeze as from beyond came the vague sound of a steady beep.  Somewhere, beyond her reach, was the exit back to life, but a long twisting path kept turning with every step.  Voices called out to her, warped and fractured like hearing a call from another dimension.
        "We'll keep her under surveillance.  But that's the best we can do."
        "So...you don't know how to wake her up?"
        "It comes down to her.  She can come back in a week, a month, or a year.  I'm sorry."
In the real world, Bob stood over her, a pale wolf with sharp cyan hair curling down the back of his shoulders, dressed in an old jacket with jeans as he gazed upon his beloved wife.  The dragon had soft blue fur and a yellow-buttered belly, swaddled in a gown with a peaceful look on her face.
Brown hair rippled down beneath her golden horns as the wolf tried to put on a brave face, staring at the bandage wrappings around her forehead beneath her hair.  Wires attached to her wrist and her neck connected to the EKG, a constant companion watching over her with a soft gentle beeping.
Bob walked out of the room, the doctor still keeping watch as the wolf met a raptor out in the hall.  His brown scales and purple stripes stood out under a t-shirt and slacks.
        "What'd they say?" he asked.
        "She uh...they don't know," Bob rubbed his arm, "I-i dunno what to do man."
        "I'm sorry," the raptor sighed, "I wish I coulda been there to help."
        "It...it's fine.  Thanks for being here James."
        "You want me to hang here and keep you posted?" James patted him.  "You had a long day with the doctors, I can stick around a few hours."
        "Nah dude you done enough-"
        "I'm good."  He grabbed Bob's hands.  "Go home, chill yourself out, do whatever keeps you going, I'll call you if anything changes."
        "Alright...thanks."
Bob didn't fight this, the wind sucked out of his sails and his mind stulted with the shock as he looked back towards his peaceful wife.  Soft breathing from her lungs made her cleavage lift slightly, the wolf clenching his teeth to hold himself as he left the hospital.  Once he was out of view, James entered the hospital room and gave a grin to the doctor, a crocodile attending.
        "You fixed the schedule?" James asked.
        "You have the money?"
The doctor offered his hand as the raptor slapped down a good stack of bills.
        "Come back in four hours, this ward'll be vacant by then."
        "Nice.  Real glad she's in a coma, that makes this part a lot easier."
        "I'll leave a camera," the croc grinned, "for both of us to...enjoy."

Four hours later, Twi still remained in her coma.  No eye movement was detected, her heartbeats stable and no attending staff were nearby to check on her.  Her chest kept breathing steady, the door opening to her room as a raptor snuck inside.
        "Hey baby."  James grinned slipping through.  "Glad that we're finally alone.  Shoulda seen the look on your hubby's face."
He closed the door and stepped over to the comatose dragon.  With a lick of his lips he opened up her robe to stare upon her luscious golden breasts, with soft rosy nipples that he plucked and squeezed to feel their ripeness.  Then there was her pussy, a soft fresh pair of lips between her blue thighs.
        "Fuck you're a sexy bitch.  I'm real glad you got in a coma, honestly thought you'd get killed but this is way better.  Oh, right before I forget."
Walking over to the dresser on the side, the raptor pulled out a small video camera that he set on the table and set record to get a full view of his scene.  Twi still laid bare and openly naked, the bandages round her forehead slightly redder than before from the gentle bleeding.
        "Be a real shame if Bob found out I was the one that cut your brakes.  Don't worry, I won't tell if you won't."
Slipping down his jeans, the raptor swept off his shirt and put his clothes aside with a throbbing erection already out in force, a pair of smooth scaly balls dangling underneath.  The light from the corridor outside glinted on his purple stripes, his green glimmering eyes as sharp as his teeth as he climbed on top of the patient, and grinded his cock against her pussy.
        "Wonder if this works."
James kissed Twi on the lips.  A soft tender kiss to taste her breath, suckling her mouth before he pressed his tongue deep inside.  There was a natural resistance from her living body, a brief fidgeting of her tongue as her inner discomfort made her muscles stiffen in the slightest ways.  Nothing that James detected of course as he wrapped his hands around her head, and pulled her to a deeper kiss.
        "Mmmmhhhh...ohhh...guess I wasn't your true prince Twi.  You made such a good wife didn't you?  Shame you were a dumb fucking cunt as well."
With gasping breaths he plunged deeper in her throat, suckling swirl of his tongue along her teeth joined by one of his hands sliding down to squeeze her supple breast.  He thumbed along the nipple, squeezing it harder with a tight pluck that would sting if she were awake as his tongue molested her own in a sucking groan.
His drool trickled out of her lips, grinding his fingers down her belly to feel her still breathing.  He was surprised she wasn't more antagonised, but then James had never had someone in a coma before.  It was like a body that kept warm, at least, for the night he would have her.  He pulled away from her lips, a hot web of saliva between them as he chuckled.
        "You're already wet aren't you?"  James grinded his meat on her pussy.  "God you are such a fucking whore, what would Bob think of you like this huh?  Letting his friend use you like the filthy bitch you are."
He picked up her legs to prop them over his shoulders, heavy without resistance as her body bounced slightly on the bed when he aimed his shaft towards her cunt.  Looming over her still body, the raptor pushed inside feeling the briefest resistance from her muscles.  A twitch of pain as her nerves tried to activate when he slammed himself deep.
        "MMMMPH!  Fuuuuck!  Fucking hell that feels good.  I was thinking you'd be in the morgue but this is so much hotter."
Without further restraint he began to rape her, Twi's head lolling to one side in the thrusting pump of the raptor's shaft, his balls slapping against her yellow pussy as her legs dangled over his shoulders.  Gasping with bliss, James grinned with a snorting lust, tail lashing behind him as he hammered the dragon's walls and scraped into her pussy's folds.
Her body reacted subliminally, a sense of rising trouble from the deep violation as her heartrate increased.  The beeping of the machine went faster, climbing upwards with the heat of her body as it tried to cope against her rape, a thickening red sliver trickling out on the raptor's meat with every slap.  Fresh lubricant from her tearing walls as James pummelled her ruthless, her bed creaking and the machine beeping louder.
        "I know you wanted this," he snarled, "flashing your ass at me all the time, being cute with me and groping Bob in front of me.  You're a filthy slut Twi, you shouldn't lead guys on like that."
James bent forwards in his savage rape, panting on her face as her mouth fell open from the constant thrusts to look like she was panting.
        "Bob'll move on without you anyway...mmmph...he'll find a better girl than you, you're just a stupid bitch in the end who crashed her own car.  Maybe I might just...mmmph, just ''happen'' to find a suicide note you left...just to help him move on from you.  No one's going to miss you Twi...not your husband, or me."
Kissing her once more with a beastly tongue, he slurped and sucked on her lips with a festering greed and a deeper slam into her womb, brutally tearing her walls to open up wider and bleed faster on his dick.  Her body was panicking, her mind too far gone to react as her heart beat even faster, the EKG almost screaming with a dangerous pulse.
Still he kept fucking, pounding her hips until his own would hurt to leave a reddish taint on her cheeks.  Her cunt was gaping wide, and the river of crimson flowed across her sheets to smear James' balls, a stickying web of blood and pre turning thicker as he moaned in using her.
        "Mmmmph!  Ohhhh fuck, what, you gonna die on me?!  Fucking worthless bitch can't even come out of her coma, go on then.  Do it, fucking kill yourself on my fat dick, only good thing you ever done in your life is make me cum Twi.  I was gonna put a pillow on you but if you're such a weak bitch, then DO IT!"
With a rapturous cackle at his conquest of the poor victim, James felt his climax fast approaching as the EKG rose higher from his abuse.  Her heart was screaming unchecked, her body at a loss what to do and without her mind to pull it back, it was on a collision course with destiny.
Stabbing into her womb, the raptor's cock broke her most sacred walls, and defiled them with scraping tears and punching grinds that a puddle of red formed underneath.  It wasn't enough to kill her, but the pain was severe enough her heartrate kept climbing to a vile scream, almost tingling the raptor's teeth in its cadence.
But it was enough to make him cum, when he fucked her to the hilt and pumped his seed deep inside her.  Gasping on her face, James flooded her depths and filled up her womb, pulling back only with a shudder to feel his cum drench on her walls and slosh down towards her ovaries.
        "HAAH!  F-FUUUUCK!  Ohhhh you fucking bitch...ohhhh god yes...huh, look at that."
He opened one of her eyes to make her look down.
        "Forgot to put on a condom.  Whoops."
His smile widened as Twi stared back at him.
        "Hope you were wanting a family sometime soon cuz...well, you shoulda said before."
The raptor pulled out of her with a dripping river, her unresisting pussy showing spots of red trickling out from her savage rape.  James smiled at his cruel length slaked in her crimson, looking over her body for other holes to violate as he rolled her onto her side.
        "Gotta make sure you don't get bedsores," he teased, "otherwise you'll make a fucking uglier bitch than usual."
Her tail was pushed out to hang over the side of the bed, the raptor hiking one of her legs up and aiming towards her gorgeous blue cheeks.  A fresh pink pucker awaited him, softly twitching from her heartbeat scaling back down to a gentler beep.  That steady rhythm of her body returning to its peaceful state.
It would disappear once again when James shoved himself forth in her ass, gasping at her tightness before gripping her leg tighter to push.  Her heartrate went up again, frantic beeps of distress for the second rape of her short life.  The sound of her anal walls tearing apart made the raptor shoot a wad of pre before he was halfway in, flexing his shaft just to break into her hole.
        "MMMMPH!  AWWW, FFFFUCK!  Ohhh Twi are you a virgin back there?!  Hah, you didn't even let Bob fuck your ass, god what a fucking garbage wife you are!"
The sound of her ass ripping open was barely heard about the screaming beeps, James panting faster as he violated Twi deep with a stabbing hilt.  It took a few minutes to wedge himself in, grunting with a twist of his hips and a spearing plunge as her tail twitched with spasms.  Every time James scraped against her walls, a scarlet trail thickened on the raptor's balls to stain her bed.
Once he managed to gape her rear enough, James found his pace and started thrusting proper, wrecking her ass with a stronger force than he had given her pussy as the bed shook even harder.  The sounds of the EKG rose sharply, not enough to go into arrest but enough to startle as her rapist grinned with monstrous bliss.
        "Ohhhh god Twi...fuck, did you save your ass just for me?  Such a good whore you make...but a terrible wife."
He bent over her face with a lustful grin, licking across her cheek as her breathing turned faster.
        "Damn, you getting that fucking wet?" James whispered.  "Maybe you always wanted this Twi...getting raped like a fucking skank, while you're sleeping...maybe one day Bob'll know what I did to you...until then, you're my fucking braindead cunt...well."
The raptor stroked her hair.
        "Not yet you are."
A fiendish cackle crept from his lips as he kissed her again, suckling her lips and still tasting his drool from before as her mouth hung open.  One of her eyes was barely open from when he lifted its lid, looking more dead than alive as he kept fucking her ass with heavy slaps from his balls against her cheeks.  The sound of a slick wettening filled his ears from the growing blood lubricating him, mixing with his pre.
His tongue slid down her neck, tasting the wire connecting to the EKG as Twi rocked against her side from his constant thrusting.  The others wires connecting her wrist to the EKG slightly tangled underneath, the raptor leaning over to bite one of her nipples in a hard suck, pulling open her hospital gown to savour her sweet breast.
Moaning through his teeth, James sucked on her tit with a desperate grunt, as if trying to draw milk whilst his tongue swirled around the areola with snarling grunts clouding over her skin.  Every plunging hilt turned his pre thicker inside her bleeding rump, the raptor's balls forming a web of crimson-pale until he came once again.
Savage moans rumbled through her ribcage as James pulled on her teat, biting down firm to stretch it a little further as Twi's heart beat faster, fast enough that her rapist could hear it thumping in her chest.  Sputtering shots of raptor jizz smothered around her folds, stickying up her anal walls now full of little gashes and rips.
        "M-mmmmph...holy fuck," James sighed pulling back, "that felt so much better than your cunt."
He smiled at his work seeing the red blistering hole dripping of his cum, stains of ruby forming ropes tethered to his cock like the film of saliva from his teeth to her breast.  He watched her heartrate go back down, the EKG returning to its pre-rape status of a gentle dithering.  Her mind was oblivious to the trauma enacted on her body, her consciousness still drifting in the beyond.
The raptor smiled as he rolled her on her back again, watching her face still serene as ever as her eyelid had slipped fully back down once more.  His shaft was still aching, his greatest crime yet to come as he stepped up towards her head and stroked her hair above the bandage.
        "You really do look a lot better like this," James murmured, "all quiet and sexy, with your tits out, and your holes all full of my cum.  I felt a lot better than Bob ever did, right Twi?"
He pulled the bandage up to expose her ear, a furry knife that felt smooth on his fingers.
        "I always hoped that when you died, I'd be the last one you ever meet.  You got no idea how many times I jerked off to just stabbing you, gutting you...strangling you so hard.  But now you're mine.  Just as you were always meant to be.  A worthless, brainless fuckdoll for men."
His smile grew wider as he took aim with his meat, the hard lance pushing against Twi's ear and gently twisting its way inside like a thick blunt sword.  The first few inches pushed up against her eardrum, a very quiet breeze drifting past as the raptor grabbed her head.
A shudder of excitement filled him as he pushed, cracking through the eardrum with a solid punch as he felt her earbones separate around his dick, small and sharp as her heartbeat skyrocketed with a violent shriek.  The intensity of her pain was palpable, her body clenching beneath her skin and a tightening of her teeth.
Her skull, damaged as it was, stood no chance against James' onslaught as he drilled his way inside, the soft crackling of her bone separating further from his shaft's thickening length.  He breached into her brain as he smiled from the gentle squish of her matter, feeling the spongy matter kiss against his cock.
        "Hhhhhh...ohhhhh fucking christ this is it.  I can't believe I get to do this to you.  Watching you sleep, hoping you wake up...but you never will Twi.  And let's face it, nobody fucking cares about you anyway."
A slow grinding thrust began the death of Twi, his cock scraping along the outer hemisphere of her brain and pushing inside the scalp.  Her heartrate was unending, a violent seizure trembling through her body from the instinctive fear of someone, something creeping into her brain and severing it bit by bit.
James took his time, experimenting with little jabs and thrusts here or there to see what would happen.  Sometimes her face twitched, other times a hand would spasm, or her leg shuddered.  But she was never truly alive, all he was doing was pulling at the strings.  His lust grew as his precum smeared across her brain, salting the hemispheres with a gooey matter that felt warm and frightening in her depths.
Then it would happen.  He pulled back from the broken ear, blood pouring down her side and onto his balls now ruby-red, before he thrust deep into her skull.  Then she flatlined.  That shrill beep, beep, until it never stopped becoming one long single note that was the death knell of her body.
It was the hottest sound James ever heard as he groaned and bent over her, mounting her head as the bed shook once again.  His vile lust with slapping balls against her cheek were deafened by the flatline that made him more hard than ever before.
        "AAAAH!  F-FUUUCK!  Ohhh Twi, FUCK, god you fucking BITCH, I'm so glad I fucking killed you you WHORE, I wish I'd fucking raped you in a coma on your wedding night, AAAAH!"
Her brain was soon mangled, mushed into porridge that dripped out on his cock every time he pulled out with thickening clumps that smeared over his shaft.  All that was left of Twi, and all that ever would be her, was lost in the salty swill of his pre that sloshed against the grey matter of her skull, dripping out her eyes, her ears and her nose in thin bloody streams.
It was the softest fleshlight he ever felt, and one that was oddly colder than he expected.  The only consolation Twi would have, was that this was the least painful part of her death, when she would finally slip away.  Her heart stopped beating after the third thrust in her brain, when James fucked through her cerebrum and raped her vitals to shreds.
Her mouth remained open, a last breath unheard by her rapist whom every thrust turned wetter and thicker in her head.  Her memories were nothing but meaty slop, her love for Bob, her dreams of anniversary, now decorated the length of James' shaft.  Then he would cum, his strongest orgasm yet, blasting his hot seed into the mushy soup that had once been Twi.
Flooding her depths, James never stopped fucking throughout the flatline, her body spasming in throes of vicious.  He almost imagined she was pleasuring him, knowingly, in her final steps from this world just to truly serve a purpose in her last hour.  He drenched the walls of her skull, mixing the red with grey, hot and sticky rivers oozing out of her head.
        "Mmmmhhh...fuck.  Fuuuck yes."
He sighed with a deep bliss, patting her face as he pulled out with a thick POP that brought forth a slurry of brain on his dick.
        "Fuck...you really did kill yourself on my dick you stupid bitch."
The raptor chuckled with another kiss to her lips, pulling out a thick runny drool of cum from his red-painted shaft.  He watched upon his work, her bloodied cunt, ass, and ear well-used as her legs slumped either side to spread open.
        "You know what the best part is?"  He walked over to the camera with dick swinging out.  "No one's gonna know at the funeral when they bury you with my jizz inside you.  Not even Bob."
Saving the vid, he took the camera with him and put on his clothes, wiping himself up as the doctor came slinking round a few minutes later, dragging a body bag behind him.
        "Had fun?" he asked.
        "You bet."  James handed the camera.  "You'll make sure she's disposed of right?"
        "Oh yeah," the gator grinned, "might have a few friends in the morgue who'd like her."
        "Hope they like sloppy seconds.  Tell Bob whatever you want, thanks for the fuck."
        "Thanks for the money."
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