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Lui couldn’t help but stare at her plump round ass, it jiggling slightly as she dried her head. He loins began tingling again and he could feel himself getting hard in his sheath. [i]‘No, this is not the time. There are more important things right now than busting a nut.’[/i] Doing a breathing exercise for a few moments, Lui reined in his desire, for the time being. Both toweled off quickly, playfully nudging one another. Leaving the bathroom giggling, Lui looked around and groaned, realizing there was no fresh clothes. Seeing the dilemma as well, Jessi laughed and plopped down in front of the TV, flipping the channel to cartoons. Shrugging, Lui walked out of the room in his towel to retrieve his luggage finally.\n\nHalf way across the lot, Lui heard laughter and jeering whistling. Without stopping, he did a little turn, looking for the culprits.\n\n“Up here sexy!” he heard. Looking up, a hyena and a rhino were stand on the roof. How he had not seen them before he wasn’t sure, and that disturbed him a little. Walking backwards, he waved once to the guys and turned back, swaying his hips just to get a rise out of them. It worked, both men howling like hungry wolves at him. Giggling to himself, he got his stuff and walked back to the room without incident. Getting inside, he was greeted with a curious look from a very naked Jessi.\n\n“I saw that…. You like boys!” she said, almost too cheerful for the subject. With a cool smirk, Lui dropped the bag and lifted Jessi from under her arms, swinging her in a few circles.\n\n“And sweet little girls!” he chuckled, turning one last time before tossing her toward the bed. With a squee of delight, she flew through the air, landing on the bed safely. So busy was he at tossing her, he hadn’t realized that his towel had fallen. Jessi noticed first and blushed, pointing at his crotch.\n\n“I can see your testicles!” she said loudly, looking at Lui with a childish grin. Lui on the other hand just stood there blinking. Hearing this little husky say ‘testicles’ just felt weird to him for some reason; and the more he thought about it, the more self-conscious he became, very quickly covering himself with his paws. This caused Jessi to laugh at his sudden modesty. “You’re bluuusshhiiiiiing! Hahaha!” True to the statement, Lui’s face was almost red enough to make an apple jealous. Before she could say anything else, Lui pounced on, her and began to tickle her with a vengeance. Pinned on her back under the much larger Fur, it was all she could do to not pee herself. Lui had jumped on her in such a way that both her legs were pinned at the knees, and both arms held above her head at the wrist in one of Lui’s huge paws. Jessi frantically fought back, kicking her feet up and down and bucking her hips, trying to do anything she could to get Lui off. But with his size and strength due to age, Jessi was powerless to stop him.\n\n“You give up?!” Lui said playfully, still tickling her sides.\n\n“Ye- haha! Yes! Yes! Ahhhh!” she squealed, unable to get a moments of rest from Lui’s onslaught. With a triumphant “Ah ha” Lui released her all at once and straightened up, placing his hand on his hips.\n\n“And I, the Grand Tickling Champion, am victorious.” He said stoically, his head tilted up like a ruling kings head might. Jessi on the other paw lay there like a bump on a log, too tired to even move. Looking down at Jessi, Lui lay down beside her and gently scratched her belly as she recovered. Every now and then she would groan in pleasure from being scratched so perfectly. After they had rested for a bit, Lui got up and grabbed his luggage, setting it down properly on the foot of the bed.\n\nOpening his luggage, he pulled out one of his tighter shirts and a pair of running shorts, handing both to Jessi with a smile. Glad to have clothes again she let out an excited yip, not waiting a second to start dressing. Lui smiled thoughtfully, imagining how good this must feel for her after being trapped here so long; this line of thought though bringing him back to the important part of the morning. Taking a deep breath and exhaling slowly, he began to dress.\nWith both Furs dressed, fed, and showered, Lui took a seat at the table and motioned for her to join him. Sensing the seriousness of Lui’s expression, Jessi sat quickly, paying attention without a sound.\n\n“So, as you know, I was just passing through. And the plan was to just get up in the morning and go. But with you being here as you are and the circumstances surrounding this place; I can’t, in good conscience, leave you here to whatever fate may befall you.” Jessi nodded happily. “In lieu of this, I’m going to do everything I can to free you and your mother. I don’t think I can do this in the 2 and a half hours we have left before I have to leave though.” As this, Jessi’s eyes grew wide, realizing that he was going to leave her. Tears began to well up in her eyes, fearing who she knew would come once Lui left. Before she could say anything though, Lui reached across the table and took her paws in his. “I’m not leaving without you, but that’s what makes this hard. That disgusting Rat is willing to part with you I think, but he never mentioned your Mother. I have a plan, but I won’t do it unless I have your permission.”\n\n“Permission? Wh-why would you need m-my permission?” she asked, not understanding what he was saying.\n\n“My plan is to try to buy you, take you with me to Cliffcrest to my Brothers’ house, come back by myself and get her out as well.”\n\n“But, I wanna help get my Mommy out too!” Jessi cried out, trying to be brave.\n\n“I knew you would say that; but think about it for a moment. As brave and courageous as you are little one, there are a lot of really big Furs here. I would hate for you to be overwhelmed and taken again.” Jessi looked off into space, seeing that exact thing happen in her head. She sighed, defeated, and nodded in silent agreement.\n\n“Now, as I said, I’m not doing this without your permission. If I take you today, I’ll come back for her and you’ll just have to trust me. The down side is that your mother will be here alone for half a day without either of us near. Or, I can try to get both of you out tonight. It would be more dangerous for all of us and I don’t know if I can protect both of you; but I know you don’t want to leave your Moms side. So, it’s your choice.” His point explained, Lui watched Jessi’s face as she contemplated both options. “You don’t have to choose immediately, think it over and choose what you think is best. But I need to know your answer in 2 hours, ok?” Jessi nodded once again and stared out the small crack in the blinds, watching the leaves blow by in the wind. With that, Lui stepped outside and lit up a cigarette, deciding what his plan of action would be for both scenarios.\n\n[[Attention Audience!!!]] >> Closed <<\n\nHere is your chance to step in and be part of my story! Through comments and PM’s help Jessi decide what is the best course of action! It’s simple enough, just write in your comment/pm something to let me know which you want to happen. In 2 days I will tally all the votes and write out the entire chapter based on the winning side! I look forward to writing out their fate!\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "A Long Trip
Chapter 3: Hunters Moon: Deciding Moment

Time drifted by, the slow drip of water constant and calming. Lui breathed easy, gently scratching the back of the adorable canines head. Jessi on the other hand lay with her head on his chest listening to Lui’s steady heart beat, humming the song Lui sang to her.  As they both began to drift off, Lui’s watch went off for his 11am alarm, both of them jumping unexpectedly.

“Right, business. C’mon Jessi, we have a few things to discuss.” Lui said, stern coldness creeping into his voice. Jessi groaned, not wanting to move, and lifted herself out of the tub, grabbing two towels and handing one to the adult. “Thanks darling.” Lui said with a smile, purposely laying his paw on hers before taking the towel. Jessi’s cheeks burned red at the small but loving gesture, turning around to hide her embarrassment. Lui couldn’t help but stare at her plump round ass, it jiggling slightly as she dried her head. He loins began tingling again and he could feel himself getting hard in his sheath. ‘No, this is not the time. There are more important things right now than busting a nut.’ Doing a breathing exercise for a few moments, Lui reined in his desire, for the time being. Both toweled off quickly, playfully nudging one another. Leaving the bathroom giggling, Lui looked around and groaned, realizing there was no fresh clothes. Seeing the dilemma as well, Jessi laughed and plopped down in front of the TV, flipping the channel to cartoons. Shrugging, Lui walked out of the room in his towel to retrieve his luggage finally.

Half way across the lot, Lui heard laughter and jeering whistling. Without stopping, he did a little turn, looking for the culprits.

“Up here sexy!” he heard. Looking up, a hyena and a rhino were stand on the roof. How he had not seen them before he wasn’t sure, and that disturbed him a little. Walking backwards, he waved once to the guys and turned back, swaying his hips just to get a rise out of them. It worked, both men howling like hungry wolves at him. Giggling to himself, he got his stuff and walked back to the room without incident. Getting inside, he was greeted with a curious look from a very naked Jessi.

“I saw that…. You like boys!” she said, almost too cheerful for the subject. With a cool smirk, Lui dropped the bag and lifted Jessi from under her arms, swinging her in a few circles.

“And sweet little girls!” he chuckled, turning one last time before tossing her toward the bed. With a squee of delight, she flew through the air, landing on the bed safely. So busy was he at tossing her, he hadn’t realized that his towel had fallen. Jessi noticed first and blushed, pointing at his crotch.

“I can see your testicles!” she said loudly, looking at Lui with a childish grin. Lui on the other hand just stood there blinking. Hearing this little husky say ‘testicles’ just felt weird to him for some reason; and the more he thought about it, the more self-conscious he became, very quickly covering himself with his paws. This caused Jessi to laugh at his sudden modesty. “You’re bluuusshhiiiiiing! Hahaha!” True to the statement, Lui’s face was almost red enough to make an apple jealous. Before she could say anything else, Lui pounced on, her and began to tickle her with a vengeance. Pinned on her back under the much larger Fur, it was all she could do to not pee herself. Lui had jumped on her in such a way that both her legs were pinned at the knees, and both arms held above her head at the wrist in one of Lui’s huge paws. Jessi frantically fought back, kicking her feet up and down and bucking her hips, trying to do anything she could to get Lui off. But with his size and strength due to age, Jessi was powerless to stop him.

“You give up?!” Lui said playfully, still tickling her sides.

“Ye- haha! Yes! Yes! Ahhhh!” she squealed, unable to get a moments of rest from Lui’s onslaught. With a triumphant “Ah ha” Lui released her all at once and straightened up, placing his hand on his hips.

“And I, the Grand Tickling Champion, am victorious.” He said stoically, his head tilted up like a ruling kings head might. Jessi on the other paw lay there like a bump on a log, too tired to even move. Looking down at Jessi, Lui lay down beside her and gently scratched her belly as she recovered. Every now and then she would groan in pleasure from being scratched so perfectly. After they had rested for a bit, Lui got up and grabbed his luggage, setting it down properly on the foot of the bed.

Opening his luggage, he pulled out one of his tighter shirts and a pair of running shorts, handing both to Jessi with a smile. Glad to have clothes again she let out an excited yip, not waiting a second to start dressing. Lui smiled thoughtfully, imagining how good this must feel for her after being trapped here so long; this line of thought though bringing him back to the important part of the morning. Taking a deep breath and exhaling slowly, he began to dress.
With both Furs dressed, fed, and showered, Lui took a seat at the table and motioned for her to join him. Sensing the seriousness of Lui’s expression, Jessi sat quickly, paying attention without a sound.

“So, as you know, I was just passing through. And the plan was to just get up in the morning and go. But with you being here as you are and the circumstances surrounding this place; I can’t, in good conscience, leave you here to whatever fate may befall you.” Jessi nodded happily. “In lieu of this, I’m going to do everything I can to free you and your mother. I don’t think I can do this in the 2 and a half hours we have left before I have to leave though.” As this, Jessi’s eyes grew wide, realizing that he was going to leave her. Tears began to well up in her eyes, fearing who she knew would come once Lui left. Before she could say anything though, Lui reached across the table and took her paws in his. “I’m not leaving without you, but that’s what makes this hard. That disgusting Rat is willing to part with you I think, but he never mentioned your Mother. I have a plan, but I won’t do it unless I have your permission.”

“Permission? Wh-why would you need m-my permission?” she asked, not understanding what he was saying.

“My plan is to try to buy you, take you with me to Cliffcrest to my Brothers’ house, come back by myself and get her out as well.”

“But, I wanna help get my Mommy out too!” Jessi cried out, trying to be brave.

“I knew you would say that; but think about it for a moment. As brave and courageous as you are little one, there are a lot of really big Furs here. I would hate for you to be overwhelmed and taken again.” Jessi looked off into space, seeing that exact thing happen in her head. She sighed, defeated, and nodded in silent agreement.

“Now, as I said, I’m not doing this without your permission. If I take you today, I’ll come back for her and you’ll just have to trust me. The down side is that your mother will be here alone for half a day without either of us near. Or, I can try to get both of you out tonight. It would be more dangerous for all of us and I don’t know if I can protect both of you; but I know you don’t want to leave your Moms side. So, it’s your choice.” His point explained, Lui watched Jessi’s face as she contemplated both options. “You don’t have to choose immediately, think it over and choose what you think is best. But I need to know your answer in 2 hours, ok?” Jessi nodded once again and stared out the small crack in the blinds, watching the leaves blow by in the wind. With that, Lui stepped outside and lit up a cigarette, deciding what his plan of action would be for both scenarios.

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