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is my first fiction I write, so forgive me if there are any mistakes. \nThis story is canonical for my character Mint, where she makes a thoughtless decision that completely changes her life.\nI hope you like it and enjoy the reading ^^", "description_bbcode_parsed": "this is my first fiction I write, so forgive me if there are any mistakes.
This story is canonical for my character Mint, where she makes a thoughtless decision that completely changes her life.
I hope you like it and enjoy the reading ^^", "writing": "_\"I will do it, I will become part of high society\" - Those were the thoughts inside the head of Mint. A 10 years old maned wolf girl with long blonde hair with pink highlights, fluffy ears, and blue eyes. Her left eye was completely blind though. Who dreamed of being a part of the nobility. - \"I want to go to these fancy parties, wear those fancy dresses and meet classy and influential people just like those celebrities I see on TV. I can't even cross into the high class side of my school without being judged because I'm from a humble family \"- she murmured in her thoughts. When she learned that she could become part of high society if she had a contract with a noble, she knew what she needed to do. She couldn't believe it when she found out that a noble lived just five blocks from her school. It was too good to be true. She decided she would make a deal with that noble no matter what. \n_ \"I don't care if I have to work cleaning the whole house as a maid or anything. I just want to be part of their society\". - She was on her way from school to that noble's manor that afternoon and decided to make the deal at any cost. After a few minutes away from her school, she finally arrives at the manor. It was a two story sky blue victorian-esque era manor. It had black and gold accents along the exquisite hand made door with large windows that seemed to face the school route the others might take. It seemed more humble then some of the other usually extra large opulent mansions in the area. Mint could feel not only her legs, but her whole body trembling. It was intimidating to look at a noble's house. She swallows nervously, but finally gains the courage to go to the door; she is a little reluctant, but finally rings the doorbell. Now there was no turning back and she didn't even intend to run away. She wasn't leaving there without a deal, even if she had to humble herself and beg for it. After ringing the bell for a second time, the door finally opens and a large blue adult unicorn with black and navy blue hair like the feathers of a bird answers the door. Mint was stunned looking at him. She had never seen anyone that tall before, even if she sat on her own shoulders she wouldn't be at the same height as that blue unicorn, but she didn't have any doubt when she took a good look at the clothes the unicorn was wearing. It was too fancy for a butler, she knew right away that he was the noble she was looking for. \n_ \"May I help you?\" - The unicorn said firmily. –\n_ \"I....huuummmm....I.....\" - the little maned wolf was speechless.\n _ \"MAY I help you?\" - The unicorn asked again with a stronger and deeper voice that intimated the little maned wolf. Mint took a deep breath and then began to talk – “ I’m....ummm...my name is Mint... please make a deal with me. \n_ “Hmm tell me, Mint, Why do you want a deal with me? – he replies to her with an indifferent look yet he was intrigued someone so young was so willing. \n_ “I’ve heard that if I make a deal with a noble and become his or her servent, I could become part of the high society. So please, make a deal with me. Any deal please, I will be your maid, your cooker, your babysitter if you have kids. \n_ “If I have kids? You are pretty much one yourself.” – he replies making a little fun of the young girl – “Come inside and let’s have a talk. My name is Swift Blade by the way” – He said introducing himself and inviting the little maned wolf girl inside. She could’t believe that a noble such as himself invited her into his house. She was certain that he would take the deal. Inside the manor she could see just how the nobles truly lived. The walls were ornately painted white with intricate designs with hand crafted molding. A long red carpet ran down the hall. She was lead down into a lounge, a cracking fire going in the fire place. He sat down on a chair and points a place on the floor - “stand there.” He said _ “All of those offers you made are not in my interest, as you can see\" – Swift’s horn begins to glow and a cup of red wine comes floating and stopping right in front of him. He gently held the cup and sips the wine. Mint was stunned by what she had just witnessed. – “I’m a unicorn, that means I can use magic. If I need to clean my house, I can simply do that with magic. I can throw a spell on the cleaning tools and make them do the cleaning all by themselves and when they finish the cleanup, the spell falls apart on its own.” \nMint still couldn’t believe what she was hearing about the magic. She had heard before that unicorns could use magic. That’s why most of all unicorns are from the nobility, being the only race able to channel mana and create magic. They sell their magic for high prices for the development of new technologies. She never actually saw it before so she always believed that this magic thing was all talk. \n_“And as for cooking, I like to cook myself, so I don’t need a chef either” – The little maned wolf was starting to lose hope to make a deal with him. _“The only deal I make is for concubines” - The ears of the little maned wolf when they heard that become more erect than a street lamp. \n_“Then please, make me your concubine.” – She said without hesitation.\n_“You do know what a. . .” - Swift tried to speak but he is interrupted by her getting on her knees and bending until her forehead touchs the floor. \n_ “I’ll take the deal! Please, I beg you. I will be your concubine.” – Again she said without any hesitation.\nSwift was very surprised by that. This young girl, Mint, just came out of nowhere, knocked at his door and \"begged\" to be his concubine. Swift really liked to see that she was this eager. Although Mint didn't really knew what a concubine was in fact. The only thing she could think of were fancy parties, huge castles and the other perks of being a high soceity member. \n_ “I got his attention, it seems he liked that idea. I will get the deal, I can’t belive I will get the deal” – Said the little maned wolf to herself when the door to the lounge which Mint and Swift was meeting could be heard opening and a female voice spoke.\n _ “Master Swift, who was at the door? We got tired of waiting.”- Mint looked in the direction of the door where she saw two other girls of the same age as her entering in the lounge. They were Lymle, a ten years old pegasus pony, however she had only one of her wings. She had a macaroon yellow tinge to her fur, big purple eyes, long blue hair and tail and was wearing a light purple collar on her neck. The other girl was Kyu, a nine years old lemurhusky with her fur, hair and tail covered almost entirely with a light purple color with some variations on her ears, arms, legs, muzzle and belly. Due to her heterochromia, she had a light blue left eye and a light green right eye and just like Lymle she was also wearing a collar on her neck, a light blue one \n _ “Oh, it’s you, what are doing here?” – Kyu asked – \n_ “Do you know her?” – Swift asked looking at Kyu –\n_ “Yes I do, she is in the same class as me and Lymle” – she replied.\n\n _ \"Lymle told me that I could gain a higher status if I make a deal to serve a noble. . .Why are you both naked?” - The maned wolf's attention now directed to her classmates naked bodies. -\n _“Well...we...” – Lymle tried to speak but was a bit ashamed to finish the sentence when she got interrupted by Swift. \n– “You don’t have reply that question, Lymle! “ He says to the little pegasu and give her a modest smile as if he was congratulating her for telling Mint about the deals. – “That's true, by having a deal with someone from the nobility you gain a few status, however, those status don't make you part of nobility, by serving a noble, you got status above those what the nobility calls commoners, but you are still below nobility.” – he explain – “our society is divided in three groups. The normal people like you, above them there are the ones you call high society and above the high society are the nobility – It took him a few time but he managed to explain in a way that the little maned wolf girl could understand.\n- “So, what do I have to do to make a deal and become a concubine? – Mint asked with conviction. \n - “All you have to do is sign some documents.” - He says getting up from his chair and walking over to a desk which he opens a drawer and takes some papers, then he calls Mint to go where he was stading. Mint was quite eager when he presented her the documents to sign.\n_”There are few things you must know before you sign that contract. . .” - Swift didn't even have the time to make her fully aware of what rules and expectation all of his concubine must be expected to follow. Mint didn't even read the documents at all, she just took the documents from him and signed in a heartbeat unaware of what was to become of her now. \n- \"Done, that's it? I'm now officially a concubine? - She asks happily \n_ \"Yes, you are. – Swift replies her back.\n_ \"Do you realize what you just did?\" – Lymle asks Mint, unbelieving that the maned wolf just signed the documents without reading it or listening to what Swift had to say. \n_ \"Yes, of course I do. I've just become part of the high society. Gosh, I can't wait to go to those fancy parties and meet classy and important people.” - Mint just couldn’t hide her excitement with her tail wagging frantically \n_ \"She doesn't.\" - Kyu replies sarcastically to Lymle. \nThe little maned wolf leaves the lounge and walks towards the front door humming happily \n_ \"Where do you think you are going?\" – Lymle asks Mint with the same sarcastic tone Kyu had bofore \n_ \"I'm going home. I can't wait to tell my parents that I'm part of the high society now, oh boy! My sisters will never believe me\" \n_ \"You can't!\" – Swift scolded her in a cold and firm tone \n_ \"I can't what?\" – Mint asked him a little bit confused \n_ \"Go back to your old home, this is your home now.\" – Swift scolded her again. \n_ \"What! Why not!? – the confused look on the maned wolf’s face changes to a surprised and concerned look. \n_ \"Because you are his concubine now.\" – Lymle give her the answer. - \"You gave up the right to live with your family when you signed that document.” \n_\"He tried to warn you about what to expect once you become a concubine, but you didn't listen to him.” - Kyu went on speaking in Lymle's place – “You didn't even read the document before signing it. If you had then you would've known”.\n Mint was shocked staring at them, when Kyu suddenly took the document from her hands and started to read it. Mint's eyes started to water as she listen to Kyu reading the documents. She did not believe what she had just done in an impulsive and thoughtless act. Mint now knows what it means to become Swift's concubine. A lifetime as a sex toy whose sole purpose is to please her master. Anytime, anywhere, however he see fit, without complaining or denying any of the orders given by him, 100% submissive. Obeying all the rules she had to follow as a concubine, but now it was too late and there was nothing what she could do. The document was signed, legal and now it was a done deal. There was no turning back now for the maned wolf girl. \n_ \"Don't worry, being a concubine myself, I can say, it’s not that bad as you must be thinking right now\" – Lymle walks to Mint and place one of her hands on the maned wolf’s shoulders. \n_ “I can guarantee it, when you get used to it, you will love it”. – Kyu does the same as Lymle but with a meek smile. The other two concubines tries to cheer the little maned wolf, but the only thing Mint could do now was to give her old family a phone call and tell them that she would never return home ever again. Because now she was about to start her new life as Swift's concubine. To cheer her up a bit Swift promised he'd take her alone to her first high society party and dress her up extra cute. Because he is not a heartless monster, but for now, with one glow of his horn Mint’s clothes were gone and she found herself completely naked which scared her a little bit.\n _ \"what the heck!! My ... my clothes!\". – She exclaimed while trying her best to cover her parts, but she could cover only a couple of her nipples and her pussy, four other nipples were still exposed, which got Swift's attention. \n_ “Move your hands!” – He tells her with an order tone.\n_“WHAT!?” - she exclaims very embarassed looking at him with her face completely red from blushing. \nSeeing the reluctance of his new property, he looks at Lymle and makes a subtle movement with his head, the little pegasus girl then approachs from behind Mint and grabs her wrists. \n_ “Sorry, Mint, but you have no choice, you should get use to it because this is the fashion you're going to use most of the time. It’s one of the rules we have to follow as his concubines. Why do you think Kyu and I are naked?\" – She says moving Mint’s hands away from her nipples and pussy, revealing six cute and small nipples that goes from her flat chest down to the her torso and belly button with a small anatomically correct canine pussy between her legs with a light black color that protrudes from the white fur of the girl's belly and groin. Swift could hardly believe what his eyes were seeing, even though anatomically correct genitals according to the species were common in males. In females it was the complete opposite, it was considered an extremely rare condition, only one out of fifty females was born with this condition. He had won the lottery, contemplating and devouring Mint's body with his eyes, he tried his best not to lost himself and maintain his composure. \n_ “This...this is so embarassing, he is staring at me naked...not even daddy has saw me like this in years” – Mint said in her mind when he approached her and sat down on the floor having his eyes on the same height of the maned wolf girl’s pussy.\n _ “Hold her tight.” – He says and then Mint felt a stronger grip coming from Lymle as the pegasus loli’s chest touchs Mint’s back when he takes one of her legs and rests it on his shoulder. \n_ “Teehee, here comes one of the best parts” – Lymle whispers in Mint's ears. \nWithout previous warning, Mint had her pussy totally under the unicorn's control, Mint squeaks as she feels Swift's lips closing with her pussy inside it, his mouth was pretty big and her pussy could fit entirely in it. His tongue moving up and down licking her slit, getting inside and moving in and out, swirling around inside and outside, soaking the maned wolf’s pussy in saliva. Feeling his lips loosening her pussy from it's grips just to feel them closing around again with a stronger grip putting his tongue inside again followed by a deep suck all the while her clit is strongly pressed against his tongue.\n _ “So....so this is what it feels like when a boy licks you down there.” - she says mentally and lost in her thoughts - “I knew boys liked to do that, but having this happening to me it feels wierd, I feel wierd, my body feels wierd, I feel funny down there”.\n Swift alternates between gentle and eager internal and external licks taking care to not to break the maned wolf’s hymen just yet while he hold tight her leg resting on his shoulder and squeezes her left buttcheek. All of those stimulations on her pussy gives Mint shivers that goes from the tip of her ears, going down her neck, getting through her back ending on the tip of her tail. She lets out low moans similar to a puppy's cries as she places her hands on Swift’s hair and having Lymle's flat chest from behind supporting her back while the small hands of the pegasus loli hold her firmly by the shoulders. With all of those action happening in front of them, Lymle and Kyu couldn't help but get really turned on watching the new concubine getting licked and sucked, the two girl's juices could be noticed dripping through their legs wetting the fur of their thighs. Mint screams as she climax when Swift gave her pussy one last and strong suck before freeing it from his mouth's control as she squirts her juices in his mouth. He gets back on his feet cleaning the girl's juices from around his mouth with his tongue as Lymle let go from Mint's shoulders making her fell to the floor on her butt and hands breathless, with her legs quivering unable to stand. The head of the little maned wolf was completly confused. She had no idea what just happened. She never felt that intense sensation before, but she was sure of one thing, that felt really good. He then warns her that she would have to work hard as a concubine if she wants to earn some privileges. All of his concubines earn a few privileges if they work hard and climax was one of those privileges. If she wanted to have such a climax again, she would have to work hard for it, otherwise she would get stimulated but wouldn’t be allowed to have a climax, resulting in a ruined orgasm. Mint gives him back a meek smile and opens her mouth.\n _ “you learn fast. Lymle, Kyu, you are free from your obligations for now, use the free time as you see fit, you guys have my blessing to do it with each other, but do it in your room”- He says playfully as Lymle and Kyu bow to him in thanks and leave the living room, walking to their shared rooms. Now it was his turn to give Mint a meek smile while unziping his pants as he walked towards the little maned wolf girl with her mouth open ready to give him a bj as her first job as his newest concubine. \n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "_"I will do it, I will become part of high society" - Those were the thoughts inside the head of Mint. A 10 years old maned wolf girl with long blonde hair with pink highlights, fluffy ears, and blue eyes. Her left eye was completely blind though. Who dreamed of being a part of the nobility. - "I want to go to these fancy parties, wear those fancy dresses and meet classy and influential people just like those celebrities I see on TV. I can't even cross into the high class side of my school without being judged because I'm from a humble family "- she murmured in her thoughts. When she learned that she could become part of high society if she had a contract with a noble, she knew what she needed to do. She couldn't believe it when she found out that a noble lived just five blocks from her school. It was too good to be true. She decided she would make a deal with that noble no matter what.
_ "I don't care if I have to work cleaning the whole house as a maid or anything. I just want to be part of their society". - She was on her way from school to that noble's manor that afternoon and decided to make the deal at any cost. After a few minutes away from her school, she finally arrives at the manor. It was a two story sky blue victorian-esque era manor. It had black and gold accents along the exquisite hand made door with large windows that seemed to face the school route the others might take. It seemed more humble then some of the other usually extra large opulent mansions in the area. Mint could feel not only her legs, but her whole body trembling. It was intimidating to look at a noble's house. She swallows nervously, but finally gains the courage to go to the door; she is a little reluctant, but finally rings the doorbell. Now there was no turning back and she didn't even intend to run away. She wasn't leaving there without a deal, even if she had to humble herself and beg for it. After ringing the bell for a second time, the door finally opens and a large blue adult unicorn with black and navy blue hair like the feathers of a bird answers the door. Mint was stunned looking at him. She had never seen anyone that tall before, even if she sat on her own shoulders she wouldn't be at the same height as that blue unicorn, but she didn't have any doubt when she took a good look at the clothes the unicorn was wearing. It was too fancy for a butler, she knew right away that he was the noble she was looking for.
_ "May I help you?" - The unicorn said firmily. –
_ "I....huuummmm....I....." - the little maned wolf was speechless.
 _ "MAY I help you?" - The unicorn asked again with a stronger and deeper voice that intimated the little maned wolf. Mint took a deep breath and then began to talk – “ I’m....ummm...my name is Mint... please make a deal with me.
_ “Hmm tell me, Mint, Why do you want a deal with me? – he replies to her with an indifferent look yet he was intrigued someone so young was so willing.
_ “I’ve heard that if I make a deal with a noble and become his or her servent, I could become part of the high society. So please, make a deal with me. Any deal please, I will be your maid, your cooker, your babysitter if you have kids.
_ “If I have kids? You are pretty much one yourself.” – he replies making a little fun of the young girl – “Come inside and let’s have a talk. My name is Swift Blade by the way” – He said introducing himself and inviting the little maned wolf girl inside. She could’t believe that a noble such as himself invited her into his house. She was certain that he would take the deal. Inside the manor she could see just how the nobles truly lived. The walls were ornately painted white with intricate designs with hand crafted molding. A long red carpet ran down the hall. She was lead down into a lounge, a cracking fire going in the fire place. He sat down on a chair and points a place on the floor - “stand there.” He said _ “All of those offers you made are not in my interest, as you can see" – Swift’s horn begins to glow and a cup of red wine comes floating and stopping right in front of him. He gently held the cup and sips the wine. Mint was stunned by what she had just witnessed. – “I’m a unicorn, that means I can use magic. If I need to clean my house, I can simply do that with magic. I can throw a spell on the cleaning tools and make them do the cleaning all by themselves and when they finish the cleanup, the spell falls apart on its own.”
Mint still couldn’t believe what she was hearing about the magic. She had heard before that unicorns could use magic. That’s why most of all unicorns are from the nobility, being the only race able to channel mana and create magic. They sell their magic for high prices for the development of new technologies. She never actually saw it before so she always believed that this magic thing was all talk.
_“And as for cooking, I like to cook myself, so I don’t need a chef either” – The little maned wolf was starting to lose hope to make a deal with him. _“The only deal I make is for concubines” - The ears of the little maned wolf when they heard that become more erect than a street lamp.
_“Then please, make me your concubine.” – She said without hesitation.
_“You do know what a. . .” - Swift tried to speak but he is interrupted by her getting on her knees and bending until her forehead touchs the floor.
_ “I’ll take the deal! Please, I beg you. I will be your concubine.” – Again she said without any hesitation.
Swift was very surprised by that. This young girl, Mint, just came out of nowhere, knocked at his door and "begged" to be his concubine. Swift really liked to see that she was this eager. Although Mint didn't really knew what a concubine was in fact. The only thing she could think of were fancy parties, huge castles and the other perks of being a high soceity member.
_ “I got his attention, it seems he liked that idea. I will get the deal, I can’t belive I will get the deal” – Said the little maned wolf to herself when the door to the lounge which Mint and Swift was meeting could be heard opening and a female voice spoke.
 _ “Master Swift, who was at the door? We got tired of waiting.”- Mint looked in the direction of the door where she saw two other girls of the same age as her entering in the lounge. They were Lymle, a ten years old pegasus pony, however she had only one of her wings. She had a macaroon yellow tinge to her fur, big purple eyes, long blue hair and tail and was wearing a light purple collar on her neck. The other girl was Kyu, a nine years old lemurhusky with her fur, hair and tail covered almost entirely with a light purple color with some variations on her ears, arms, legs, muzzle and belly. Due to her heterochromia, she had a light blue left eye and a light green right eye and just like Lymle she was also wearing a collar on her neck, a light blue one
 _ “Oh, it’s you, what are doing here?” – Kyu asked –
_ “Do you know her?” – Swift asked looking at Kyu –
_ “Yes I do, she is in the same class as me and Lymle” – she replied.

 _ "Lymle told me that I could gain a higher status if I make a deal to serve a noble. . .Why are you both naked?” - The maned wolf's attention now directed to her classmates naked bodies. -
 _“Well...we...” – Lymle tried to speak but was a bit ashamed to finish the sentence when she got interrupted by Swift.
– “You don’t have reply that question, Lymle! “ He says to the little pegasu and give her a modest smile as if he was congratulating her for telling Mint about the deals. – “That's true, by having a deal with someone from the nobility you gain a few status, however, those status don't make you part of nobility, by serving a noble, you got status above those what the nobility calls commoners, but you are still below nobility.” – he explain – “our society is divided in three groups. The normal people like you, above them there are the ones you call high society and above the high society are the nobility – It took him a few time but he managed to explain in a way that the little maned wolf girl could understand.
- “So, what do I have to do to make a deal and become a concubine? – Mint asked with conviction.
 - “All you have to do is sign some documents.” - He says getting up from his chair and walking over to a desk which he opens a drawer and takes some papers, then he calls Mint to go where he was stading. Mint was quite eager when he presented her the documents to sign.
_”There are few things you must know before you sign that contract. . .” - Swift didn't even have the time to make her fully aware of what rules and expectation all of his concubine must be expected to follow. Mint didn't even read the documents at all, she just took the documents from him and signed in a heartbeat unaware of what was to become of her now.
- "Done, that's it? I'm now officially a concubine?  - She asks happily  
_ "Yes, you are. – Swift replies her back.
_ "Do you realize what you just did?" – Lymle asks Mint, unbelieving that the maned wolf just signed the documents without reading it or listening to what Swift had to say.
_ "Yes, of course I do. I've just become part of the high society. Gosh, I can't wait to go to those fancy parties and meet classy and important people.” - Mint just couldn’t hide her excitement with her tail wagging frantically
_ "She doesn't." - Kyu replies sarcastically to Lymle.
The little maned wolf leaves the lounge and walks towards the front door humming happily
_ "Where do you think you are going?" – Lymle asks Mint with the same sarcastic tone Kyu had bofore
_ "I'm going home. I can't wait to tell my parents that I'm part of the high society now, oh boy! My sisters will never believe me"  
_ "You can't!" – Swift scolded her in a cold and firm tone
_ "I can't what?" – Mint asked him a little bit confused
_ "Go back to your old home, this is your home now." – Swift scolded her again.
_ "What! Why not!? – the confused look on the maned wolf’s face changes to a surprised and concerned look.
_ "Because you are his concubine now." –  Lymle give her the answer. - "You gave up the right to live with your family when you signed that document.”
_"He tried to warn you about what to expect once you become a concubine, but you didn't listen to him.” - Kyu went on speaking in Lymle's place – “You didn't even read the document before signing it. If you had then you would've known”.
 Mint was shocked staring at them, when Kyu suddenly took the document from her hands and started to read it. Mint's eyes started to water as she listen to Kyu reading the documents. She did not believe what she had just done in an impulsive and thoughtless act. Mint now knows what it means to become Swift's concubine. A lifetime as a sex toy whose sole purpose is to please her master. Anytime, anywhere, however he see fit, without complaining or denying any of the orders given by him, 100% submissive. Obeying all the rules she had to follow as a concubine, but now it was too late and there was nothing what she could do. The document was signed, legal and now it was a done deal. There was no turning back now for the maned wolf girl.
_ "Don't worry, being a concubine myself, I can say, it’s not that bad as you must be thinking right now" – Lymle walks to Mint and place one of her hands on the maned wolf’s shoulders.
_ “I can guarantee it, when you get used to it, you will love it”. – Kyu does the same as Lymle but with a meek smile. The other two concubines tries to cheer the little maned wolf, but the only thing Mint could do now was to give her old family a phone call and tell them that she would never return home ever again. Because now she was about to start her new life as Swift's concubine. To cheer her up a bit Swift promised he'd take her alone to her first high society party and dress her up extra cute. Because he is not a heartless monster, but for now, with one glow of his horn Mint’s clothes were gone and she found herself completely naked which scared her a little bit.
 _ "what the heck!! My ... my clothes!". – She exclaimed while trying her best to cover her parts, but she could cover only a couple of her nipples and her pussy, four other nipples were still exposed, which got Swift's attention.
_ “Move your hands!” – He tells her with an order tone.
_“WHAT!?” - she exclaims very embarassed looking at him with her face completely red from blushing.
Seeing the reluctance of his new property, he looks at Lymle and makes a subtle movement with his head, the little pegasus girl then approachs from behind Mint and grabs her wrists.
_ “Sorry, Mint, but you have no choice, you should get use to it because this is the fashion you're going to use most of the time. It’s one of the rules we have to follow as his concubines. Why do you think Kyu and I are naked?" – She says moving Mint’s hands away from her nipples and pussy, revealing six cute and small nipples that goes from her flat chest down to the her torso and belly button with a small anatomically correct canine pussy between her legs with a light black color that protrudes from the white fur of the girl's belly and groin. Swift could hardly believe what his eyes were seeing, even though anatomically correct genitals according to the species were common in males. In females it was the complete opposite, it was considered an extremely rare condition, only one out of fifty females was born with this condition. He had won the lottery, contemplating and devouring Mint's body with his eyes, he tried his best not to lost himself and maintain his composure.
_ “This...this is so embarassing, he is staring at me naked...not even daddy has saw me like this in years” – Mint said in her mind when he approached her and sat down on the floor having his eyes on the same height of the maned wolf girl’s pussy.
 _ “Hold her tight.” – He says and then Mint felt a stronger grip coming from Lymle as the pegasus loli’s chest touchs Mint’s back when he takes one of her legs and rests it on his shoulder.
_ “Teehee, here comes one of the best parts” – Lymle whispers in Mint's ears.
Without previous warning, Mint had her pussy totally under the unicorn's control, Mint squeaks as she feels Swift's lips closing with her pussy inside it, his mouth was pretty big and her pussy could fit entirely in it. His tongue moving up and down licking her slit, getting inside and moving in and out, swirling around inside and outside, soaking the maned wolf’s pussy in saliva. Feeling his lips loosening her pussy from it's grips just to feel them closing around again with a stronger grip putting his tongue inside again followed by a deep suck all the while her clit is strongly pressed against his tongue.
 _ “So....so this is what it feels like when a boy licks you down there.” - she says mentally and lost in her thoughts - “I knew boys liked to do that, but having this happening to me it feels wierd, I feel wierd, my body feels wierd, I feel funny down there”.
 Swift alternates between gentle and eager internal and external licks taking care to not to break the maned wolf’s hymen just yet while he hold tight her leg resting on his shoulder and squeezes her left buttcheek. All of those stimulations on her pussy gives Mint shivers that goes from the tip of her ears, going down her neck, getting through her back ending on the tip of her tail. She lets out low moans similar to a puppy's cries as she places her hands on Swift’s hair and having Lymle's flat chest from behind supporting her back while the small hands of the pegasus loli hold her firmly by the shoulders. With all of those action happening in front of them, Lymle and Kyu couldn't help but get really turned on watching the new concubine getting licked and sucked, the two girl's juices could be noticed dripping through their legs wetting the fur of their thighs. Mint screams as she climax when Swift gave her pussy one last and strong suck before freeing it from his mouth's control as she squirts her juices in his mouth. He gets back on his feet cleaning the girl's juices from around his mouth with his tongue as Lymle let go from Mint's shoulders making her fell to the floor on her butt and hands breathless, with her legs quivering unable to stand. The head of the little maned wolf was completly confused. She had no idea what just happened. She never felt that intense sensation before, but she was sure of one thing, that felt really good. He then warns her that she would have to work hard as a concubine if she wants to earn some privileges. All of his concubines earn a few privileges if they work hard and climax was one of those privileges. If she wanted to have such a climax again, she would have to work hard for it, otherwise she would get stimulated but wouldn’t be allowed to have a climax, resulting in a ruined orgasm.  Mint gives him back a meek smile and opens her mouth.
 _ “you learn fast. Lymle, Kyu, you are free from your obligations for now, use the free time as you see fit, you guys have my blessing to do it with each other, but do it in your room”- He says playfully as Lymle and Kyu bow to him in thanks and leave the living room, walking to their shared rooms. Now it was his turn to give Mint a meek smile while unziping his pants as he walked towards the little maned wolf girl with her mouth open ready to give him a bj as her first job as his newest concubine.

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