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So far, it is raw, despite the fact that my character has turned 12 years old (since its creation). I changed it many times, but in the end I more or less came to some kind of logical conclusion. I hope to get your opinion about him, but please be constructive and adequate. And yes, this character, according to my idea, turns out to be in the world of ninja turtles in headcanon. If anything, I will try to improve the biography, and yes, there was an attempt to make fan fiction for my character, but it is now frozen, and so far I do not know how to implement it.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "A brief biography of my character. So far, it is raw, despite the fact that my character has turned 12 years old (since its creation). I changed it many times, but in the end I more or less came to some kind of logical conclusion. I hope to get your opinion about him, but please be constructive and adequate. And yes, this character, according to my idea, turns out to be in the world of ninja turtles in headcanon. If anything, I will try to improve the biography, and yes, there was an attempt to make fan fiction for my character, but it is now frozen, and so far I do not know how to implement it.", "writing": "His ancestor (grandfather), in his younger years, gained immortality by making a deal with an analogue of the devil. But the devil did not know how cunning and headstrong Leon's ancestor was, and eventually killed the devil, seizing a piece of power. Thus, the Cult of the Master (this is the nickname of Leon's ancestor) was formed, who wanted to take over the world and change it to suit his views. However, the Order of the Lotus (the latter name) was formed against this cult. And somewhere in the early 20th century, the Master fell in love with a woman who was a member of the Japanese department of the Order, and at the same time was already married and even pregnant. But this did not stop the Master, and he took possession of her. And so much so that he even changed the embryo to fit his genes. This woman was Leon's grandmother, and her child was his father. As a result, grandma had to hide from the Master, at the cost of her husband's life (it turns out James's second father, that was the name of Leon's father). My grandmother moved to America and gave birth to her son there. James was not born with a Japanese appearance, due to the intervention of the Master, and therefore settled in the United States better than his mother. So he began to join society, and after a while he was drafted into the army (World War II). He served in a detachment that fought with Japanese soldiers, who were then allies of Germany. And he stayed there until the end of the war, because he knew Japanese well and had Japanese roots. However, during the war with the Japanese, his squad was helped by Soviet soldiers (this is a real historical fact), and during the joint struggle with the Japanese, he met a girl (Leon's future wife and mother). They fell in love with each other, and continued to love even after the war and the beginning of the Cold War. In order not to be separated, they decided to escape from their countries and live on neutral territory. James's mother had already died due to illness by this time, but at the same time she managed to bequeath something to him. However, he didn't care about it yet. After the birth of Leon, and it was 1951, their life became even more dangerous, since the Master wanted to possess his descendant, because the son turned out to be defective (the curse of the Master did not transfer to him, only changed his appearance, but it passed to Leon, although it was not active for a while). As a result, despite the efforts of the parents and their new friends (and a few old ones), the Master managed to steal their son. Leon's father decided to personally find both his father and son, simultaneously visiting the secret place that was indicated in his mother's will. There, James found the necessary information on how to defeat the Master. An important item was the sword of James' mother's husband, as it was magical (although there were actually more such swords). James, with complete determination and perseverance, finds the Master's place of residence and gives him a fight. Unfortunately, James is seriously injured, but at the same time the Master is wounded by the sword, which makes the latter worry because no one could hurt him for a long time. Before his death, James incurs a verbal curse that sooner or later the Master will fall, and it is from his descendant. The Magister wasn't exactly superstitious, but he didn't ignore the words. And so I decided to change Leon both mentally and physically. Leon's mother repeatedly tried to find her son and avenge her husband, but all in vain. So the years pass, and Leon became a faithful student of the Master. The master even created a school specifically for his grandson, on a separate island. True, a military organization of mercenaries was later established on this island, but they were subordinate to the Master. The Master liked to use people, especially against each other. Therefore, a small group of soldiers did not harm him. As the years passed, Leon became an increasingly successful warrior who, without a sense of fear and conscience, carried out all the assignments and instructions of his teacher (he did not know at that time that the Master was his grandfather). By his 15th birthday, Leon was already ready for more serious tasks, including murder. However, the Master did not expect his grandson to fall in love. A student, Karen, appeared at the Master's school, and it was she who became Leon's first love. Their love was the strongest to the point that by Leon's 18th birthday, Karen was already pregnant with his child. The magister had already begun to suspect something was wrong with his grandson, and he decided to start cheating on Leon earlier than expected. Namely, to awaken his genes in him. By giving Leon increasingly cruel tasks, which Leon performed without problems for morality, the Master's genes did not want to awaken in any way. As a result, the Master came to an ultimatum, and ordered Leon to complete the last task. Kill Karen. The master tried to convince Leon that a love relationship should be alien to him, besides, Karen was clearly not honest with Leon (this was true, but in a different way). Leon flatly refused to do this, and the Magister imprisoned Leon. There he was brutally tortured, while Karen was not touched and she was kept in the best conditions. Leon is not broken by the torture, and he manages to escape, simultaneously freeing Karen. Karen was 7-8 months pregnant at that time. And when it would seem that freedom was so brilliant, Leon is mortally wounded by the Magister. He could no longer do anything with his grandson, because the genes did not want to wake up. Karen was also not spared by the Master, however, before taking her life, he magically extracted the embryos (Karen was pregnant with twins), and decided that something useful would come out of them. After that, he gave the bodies of Karen and Leon to the military laboratory, and he disappeared into his lair. Leon was on the verge of life and death, but he continued to fight. Karen could no longer be saved. Without hesitation, scientists decided to preserve Leon so that the body would remain alive. Leon fell into a coma. During the coma, a certain being appeared to him, who called himself Azrael (death according to the Jewish canons). He decided to give Leon the opportunity to take revenge and punish the Master. He will give him his power, but Leon must feed this power with the souls of sinners. He also gave Leon the expiration date of the force, otherwise he would simply die, and his soul would live forever in purgatory, and faithfully serve Azrael. Leon agrees. He overcomes the forces of death itself, and gets out of his cell, and then out of the laboratory, killing everyone and everyone in his path. Leon could no longer be stopped. The thirst for blood was already beating into his head, making it clear that the Master's genes had been awakened, but not in the way he wanted. Taking all the weapons that the military had, he staged a real massacre at the Master's school. He killed everyone, from elementary school students to teachers. The whole school was engulfed in flames, and sprinkled with blood. The only surviving body that Leon left behind was Karen's body. He cremated her so that no one would dare to desecrate her body anymore. He gave his word that he would find his children and conquer the Master, along with all those who were associated with him. So begins his bloody adventure. There were various scum and scoundrels on his way, including various kinds of dishonesty. But he also met a lot of good people. These were both members of the Order and a new security organization (such as the CIA, MI6). Leon has visited and even participated in wallpaper organizations on their behalf. Until 2011. During this time, he was able to find his children, not without the help of Leon's found mother. However, Leon's children were at the mercy of the Master, but he managed to restore their humanity. However, fate was cruel again. Leon managed to save only his daughter Diana, while his son sacrificed himself in order to save his father and sister. Leon's mother also gave a sacrifice in salvation. Leon was already completely heartbroken over the loss of loved ones, and only his daughter gave him any hope of happiness. He tried to hold on to that. At least for a while. A year before the finale of the story, he was assigned the last task was to find a descendant of one of the main members of the Japanese department of the Order. It was a teenager named Rion. At first, Leon perceived Rion as an unnecessary burden, but gradually he got into the guy. At first they had a relationship as a teacher and a student, and then Leon fell in love with Rion, and it was mutual. At least until Rion became disillusioned with Leon, due to the fact that the latter was no longer human. Leon could no longer become a normal person. He has long since crossed the line of a man who is the real embodiment of death. Rion refused to join the Order, disagreed with his views on fighting the threat of demons and the Master, and because of Leon. But Rion also had other relatives on his mother's side. All this time, besides the Order of the Lotus, there was another order that protected the world from evil. The Order of the Alchemists. Its leader was Rion's maternal grandfather, and it was to the Alchemists that Rion decided to join, believing that they were much more correct in terms of fighting evil and protecting the world. However, Rion was disappointed in them, realizing that both Orders had similar views, namely, to organize the world according to their own views (well, like they both have their own ideology of the world, which is too good to be true). As a result, Rion overcame himself, and decided to return to Leon. And just in time, because the finale of the story begins soon. The Magister finally decided to prove himself, and sent his entire army and all his followers to the world. The world was in complete chaos. Demons were in all cities and countries, and they were driven only by quenching thirst and their dark desires. Leon and Rion were able to raise the morale and spirit of all their friends and the remaining people to fight, and they gave battle. The battle was hard, bringing with it many deaths. Killed comrades and friends, as well as sending complete despair, Leon and Rion were able to get enough of the Master. However, the price was too high. The only way to kill the Master was not only to destroy him with special weapons, but also to give away the most precious thing they had. My life. There are two endings for Leon and Rion. Or Leon gives up his life, and he finally dies (before that, no one could kill him in any way, even if he was divided into several pieces, because he is immortal because of his connection with Azrael and the genes of his ancestors). Or Rion gives his life, but at the same time taking most of Leon's strength, giving him the opportunity to live like a normal person. In the second finale, Leon could not find a place for himself, while others were already more or less used to the new world, and began to rebuild it. Moreover, Rion's death was more than good, because he united everyone. The Lotus Order and the Alchemists stopped fighting with each other, and adopted a single ideology and organized a lifelong alliance. As for Leon, he considered himself an outcast, since he did not bring much good in life, but only many deaths at his own hands. He disappeared. I decided to leave my old life, becoming a tramp. At least his life wouldn't have changed if he hadn't found a strange artifact. Touching which, his body began to disappear, and thus, he moved to another world (and any one, breaking the 4th wall, so to speak), where the artifact pointed. And he pointed to the world that, as an artifact, Leon believed he needed most.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "His ancestor (grandfather), in his younger years, gained immortality by making a deal with an analogue of the devil. But the devil did not know how cunning and headstrong Leon's ancestor was, and eventually killed the devil, seizing a piece of power. Thus, the Cult of the Master (this is the nickname of Leon's ancestor) was formed, who wanted to take over the world and change it to suit his views. However, the Order of the Lotus (the latter name) was formed against this cult. And somewhere in the early 20th century, the Master fell in love with a woman who was a member of the Japanese department of the Order, and at the same time was already married and even pregnant. But this did not stop the Master, and he took possession of her. And so much so that he even changed the embryo to fit his genes. This woman was Leon's grandmother, and her child was his father. As a result, grandma had to hide from the Master, at the cost of her husband's life (it turns out James's second father, that was the name of Leon's father). My grandmother moved to America and gave birth to her son there. James was not born with a Japanese appearance, due to the intervention of the Master, and therefore settled in the United States better than his mother. So he began to join society, and after a while he was drafted into the army (World War II). He served in a detachment that fought with Japanese soldiers, who were then allies of Germany. And he stayed there until the end of the war, because he knew Japanese well and had Japanese roots. However, during the war with the Japanese, his squad was helped by Soviet soldiers (this is a real historical fact), and during the joint struggle with the Japanese, he met a girl (Leon's future wife and mother). They fell in love with each other, and continued to love even after the war and the beginning of the Cold War. In order not to be separated, they decided to escape from their countries and live on neutral territory. James's mother had already died due to illness by this time, but at the same time she managed to bequeath something to him. However, he didn't care about it yet. After the birth of Leon, and it was 1951, their life became even more dangerous, since the Master wanted to possess his descendant, because the son turned out to be defective (the curse of the Master did not transfer to him, only changed his appearance, but it passed to Leon, although it was not active for a while). As a result, despite the efforts of the parents and their new friends (and a few old ones), the Master managed to steal their son. Leon's father decided to personally find both his father and son, simultaneously visiting the secret place that was indicated in his mother's will. There, James found the necessary information on how to defeat the Master. An important item was the sword of James' mother's husband, as it was magical (although there were actually more such swords). James, with complete determination and perseverance, finds the Master's place of residence and gives him a fight. Unfortunately, James is seriously injured, but at the same time the Master is wounded by the sword, which makes the latter worry because no one could hurt him for a long time. Before his death, James incurs a verbal curse that sooner or later the Master will fall, and it is from his descendant. The Magister wasn't exactly superstitious, but he didn't ignore the words. And so I decided to change Leon both mentally and physically. Leon's mother repeatedly tried to find her son and avenge her husband, but all in vain. So the years pass, and Leon became a faithful student of the Master. The master even created a school specifically for his grandson, on a separate island. True, a military organization of mercenaries was later established on this island, but they were subordinate to the Master. The Master liked to use people, especially against each other. Therefore, a small group of soldiers did not harm him. As the years passed, Leon became an increasingly successful warrior who, without a sense of fear and conscience, carried out all the assignments and instructions of his teacher (he did not know at that time that the Master was his grandfather). By his 15th birthday, Leon was already ready for more serious tasks, including murder. However, the Master did not expect his grandson to fall in love. A student, Karen, appeared at the Master's school, and it was she who became Leon's first love. Their love was the strongest to the point that by Leon's 18th birthday, Karen was already pregnant with his child. The magister had already begun to suspect something was wrong with his grandson, and he decided to start cheating on Leon earlier than expected. Namely, to awaken his genes in him. By giving Leon increasingly cruel tasks, which Leon performed without problems for morality, the Master's genes did not want to awaken in any way. As a result, the Master came to an ultimatum, and ordered Leon to complete the last task. Kill Karen. The master tried to convince Leon that a love relationship should be alien to him, besides, Karen was clearly not honest with Leon (this was true, but in a different way). Leon flatly refused to do this, and the Magister imprisoned Leon. There he was brutally tortured, while Karen was not touched and she was kept in the best conditions. Leon is not broken by the torture, and he manages to escape, simultaneously freeing Karen. Karen was 7-8 months pregnant at that time. And when it would seem that freedom was so brilliant, Leon is mortally wounded by the Magister. He could no longer do anything with his grandson, because the genes did not want to wake up. Karen was also not spared by the Master, however, before taking her life, he magically extracted the embryos (Karen was pregnant with twins), and decided that something useful would come out of them. After that, he gave the bodies of Karen and Leon to the military laboratory, and he disappeared into his lair. Leon was on the verge of life and death, but he continued to fight. Karen could no longer be saved. Without hesitation, scientists decided to preserve Leon so that the body would remain alive. Leon fell into a coma. During the coma, a certain being appeared to him, who called himself Azrael (death according to the Jewish canons). He decided to give Leon the opportunity to take revenge and punish the Master. He will give him his power, but Leon must feed this power with the souls of sinners. He also gave Leon the expiration date of the force, otherwise he would simply die, and his soul would live forever in purgatory, and faithfully serve Azrael. Leon agrees. He overcomes the forces of death itself, and gets out of his cell, and then out of the laboratory, killing everyone and everyone in his path. Leon could no longer be stopped. The thirst for blood was already beating into his head, making it clear that the Master's genes had been awakened, but not in the way he wanted. Taking all the weapons that the military had, he staged a real massacre at the Master's school. He killed everyone, from elementary school students to teachers. The whole school was engulfed in flames, and sprinkled with blood. The only surviving body that Leon left behind was Karen's body. He cremated her so that no one would dare to desecrate her body anymore. He gave his word that he would find his children and conquer the Master, along with all those who were associated with him. So begins his bloody adventure. There were various scum and scoundrels on his way, including various kinds of dishonesty. But he also met a lot of good people. These were both members of the Order and a new security organization (such as the CIA, MI6). Leon has visited and even participated in wallpaper organizations on their behalf. Until 2011. During this time, he was able to find his children, not without the help of Leon's found mother. However, Leon's children were at the mercy of the Master, but he managed to restore their humanity. However, fate was cruel again. Leon managed to save only his daughter Diana, while his son sacrificed himself in order to save his father and sister. Leon's mother also gave a sacrifice in salvation. Leon was already completely heartbroken over the loss of loved ones, and only his daughter gave him any hope of happiness. He tried to hold on to that. At least for a while. A year before the finale of the story, he was assigned the last task was to find a descendant of one of the main members of the Japanese department of the Order. It was a teenager named Rion. At first, Leon perceived Rion as an unnecessary burden, but gradually he got into the guy. At first they had a relationship as a teacher and a student, and then Leon fell in love with Rion, and it was mutual. At least until Rion became disillusioned with Leon, due to the fact that the latter was no longer human. Leon could no longer become a normal person. He has long since crossed the line of a man who is the real embodiment of death. Rion refused to join the Order, disagreed with his views on fighting the threat of demons and the Master, and because of Leon. But Rion also had other relatives on his mother's side. All this time, besides the Order of the Lotus, there was another order that protected the world from evil. The Order of the Alchemists. Its leader was Rion's maternal grandfather, and it was to the Alchemists that Rion decided to join, believing that they were much more correct in terms of fighting evil and protecting the world. However, Rion was disappointed in them, realizing that both Orders had similar views, namely, to organize the world according to their own views (well, like they both have their own ideology of the world, which is too good to be true). As a result, Rion overcame himself, and decided to return to Leon. And just in time, because the finale of the story begins soon. The Magister finally decided to prove himself, and sent his entire army and all his followers to the world. The world was in complete chaos. Demons were in all cities and countries, and they were driven only by quenching thirst and their dark desires. Leon and Rion were able to raise the morale and spirit of all their friends and the remaining people to fight, and they gave battle. The battle was hard, bringing with it many deaths. Killed comrades and friends, as well as sending complete despair, Leon and Rion were able to get enough of the Master. However, the price was too high. The only way to kill the Master was not only to destroy him with special weapons, but also to give away the most precious thing they had. My life. There are two endings for Leon and Rion. Or Leon gives up his life, and he finally dies (before that, no one could kill him in any way, even if he was divided into several pieces, because he is immortal because of his connection with Azrael and the genes of his ancestors). Or Rion gives his life, but at the same time taking most of Leon's strength, giving him the opportunity to live like a normal person. In the second finale, Leon could not find a place for himself, while others were already more or less used to the new world, and began to rebuild it. Moreover, Rion's death was more than good, because he united everyone. The Lotus Order and the Alchemists stopped fighting with each other, and adopted a single ideology and organized a lifelong alliance. As for Leon, he considered himself an outcast, since he did not bring much good in life, but only many deaths at his own hands. He disappeared. I decided to leave my old life, becoming a tramp. At least his life wouldn't have changed if he hadn't found a strange artifact. Touching which, his body began to disappear, and thus, he moved to another world (and any one, breaking the 4th wall, so to speak), where the artifact pointed. 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