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Just adding another part to an already long one, just seemed most appropriate.","writing":"Fievel and Denny In, Carnival Nights.\nCharacters in story.\n\n\nFievel Mousekewitz.\nDennyMouse.\nMama Mousekewitz.\nPapa Mousekewitz.\n\n\n\n\nMorning after Fievel and I got back, I was waking up, to find Fievel was now longer in my arms. He was sitting at his desk, looking out of the window. Last night had been interesting, as mama still wasn’t really ready to accept me… though I wasn’t willing to give up either, as I really loved Fievel. She left us sleep in the same room together, so that at least was a comfort. Cuddling Fievel like a cat does with a somewhat smaller cat, was something extremely comforting… and not just for having sex, as I enjoy cuddling to just cuddle. After the amount of sex we done yesterday, I was willing to give Fievel a nice break today.\nMy bladder hurt a little, as I got myself up, and then got myself moving. To the bathroom I went, Fievel close behind. I stood with my crouch outside the diapie I had placed on, as I glanced over at mah-buddy’s crouch, as he looked at mine.\n“Can I, just to feel how soft you are this morning?”\nI asked.\n“Well you are too.”\nSaid Fievel, as he reached over and then rubbed at mine slightly, as he done so for mine. We both stood there afterward, hanging our penises over the toilet, not peeing. We stared at each others penises for a few more moments, as I decided to say something.\n“I don’t believe I gotta go much.”\nI said, as I lost only a few drops.\n“Me either.”\nAgreed Fievel, as he too lost just a few drops, as we pulled our diapies back up, and then returned to our room.\n“De-Denny, I wanna go to the carnival tonight, think mama might let me go?”\n\n“Hm. I have a feeling, she will, providing I go with.”\nI said, as we sat side by side at Fievel’s desk, looking at the nice day outside. I hadda pee pretty badly, as for some reason, I suspected Fievel had to go too. But we both were acting like we hadn’t had to go, as we would probably have an interesting day. We would be naughty at the carnival tonight, as long as we could find a place. Finding a place though may not be easy, but crossing that bridge, we would just have to do then.\nSitting looking out of the window, as I danced some.\n“Hm, looks like you did have to pee after all Denny.”\nSaid Fievel.\n“Don’t be silly, “I said, as Fievel danced slightly. “Your doing it some too, you gotta pee mah-buddy?”\nI asked.\n“Nope, I just like rubbing myself from time to time.”\nSaid Fievel, as I was pretty sure he did have to pee.\nMy bladder was pretty full, as I just wanted to hold it till at least later in the day. Fievel’s was too, there was no doubt in my mind about that, him and I were only lying about having to pee.\nLunch time would crept in slowly, as it would probably drag like a knife. I wanted to suggest doing something, but what!?\n“Guys?” I heard mama say. And then she tried the knob, which we hadn’t locked. “You two aren’t going to spend this beautiful day in here, are you?”\nAsked mama. Fievel and I looked at each other.\n“Ahm, I guess you’re correct mama.”\nI said, as I got up. Fievel followed me, as we had a tiny back yard. It wasn’t the greatest, but there’s little you can ask for in New York. We went to the back yard, where the neighbor boys were out playing as well. These two mice were playing in the dirt, as I found a ball in the backyard.\nI threw it toward Fievel, and didn’t even have to say why, as he caught it easily.\n“Catch Denny!?”\n\n“Yeah, what else?”\n\n“Well, I could have to hit the ball.”\nSuggest Fievel.\n“Yeah but to where?”\n\n“Good point Denny.”\nSaid Fievel, as he threw it back toward me, catching it easily.\nI threw it back again.\n“Denny, do you think mama will let us go to the Carnival at around 2-o-clock instead of 6 tonight?”\nAsked Fievel, as he threw the ball back at me. Our softball, actually was like a naked golf ball or something. But with a lot of the outside removed and such, it was kinda like a softball.\n“It’s possible as long as I am still going with, we could go now.”\nI said, as I caught the ball and then threw it back.\nWe threw the ball back and forth several more times, before heading in to ask mama about going early. The other mouse boys were play in the mud so far, that they were brown from waist down. As Fievel and I headed back in, I realized, they were pooping. I wasn’t in the mood to even know about it today, as those kind of moods aren’t as common as you may think. Mama was getting something ready for lunch for us.\nI stood watching for a moment or two, as I wasn’t realizing it, but I was dancing.\n“Must you pee DennyMouse?”\nShe asked. I shook my head.\n“Bull, go to the bathroom this very instant, you after him.”\nShe looked at Fievel, who also was dancing.\n“Yeah okay mama.”\nSaid Fievel.\nFievel stood, waiting for Denny to finish, as he decided to walk to the bathroom. “Wait for Denny to come out, you hear?”\nFievel just nodded.\n\n\n\nI stood there in the bathroom, staring at the toilet water.\n“How am I gonna continue to do this, and not pee?”\nI asked myself aloud.\nIi walked to the bathroom door, and then opened it. Mah-buddy was standing waiting for me.\n“So you done?”\nI winked.\n“Yeah, sure I am.”\nI danced, and then acted out the pee dance.\nI left the bathroom, in hopes Fievel would just fake it as I had.\nI sat at the table, as mama handed me a plate of vegetables and seeds.\n“So what’s up, I thought you two were going to stay outside a little longer.”\nMama half asked.\n“We were getting tired… and besides, I think those boys were playing in their poop as mud.”\nI said.\n“Oh no not again.”\nMama went to the window. “darn boys, poop isn’t a play thing.”\nSaid mama, as she picked up a phone, and then dialed their mama’s number. “Yes Mam, yeah.\nIt’s about your boys.”\nA pause.\n“Right.”\nSaid mama.\n“Playing in each others poopy again.”\nAnother pause.\n“I don’t know, Fievel didn’t have that much desire to play in his.”\nPause.\n“Well I would give you advice, I hope you understand… if I had any advice to give.”\nPause.\n“Well take care then.”\nBy this point, Fievel had made it back from the bathroom, and then sat down aside of me.\n“So, did you pee or fake it.”\nI whispered, barely even loud enough for him to even understand.\n“Faked.”\nHe said, in a single word.\n“So guys, what are you planning to do for the rest of the afternoon?”\nAsked mama. I looked at Fievel, and then back at mama. Him and I asked in unison, “Can we go to the carnival at 2 instead of 6-o-clock?”\n\n“I suppose, since Denny is going to go with.”\nMama winked with a smile, as she said it. Shortly after, she dug into her plate of vegetables as we ate lunch.\nFievel and I headed to our room, soon after lunch, and then sat surfing an Internet which shouldn’t exist for closer to 100 years yet. As I did anyways, I lost droplets of piss… or at least I was pretty sure I did. \nBut I really wanted a full bladder, for what ever it was we were gonna do. Finding a place probably wasn’t going to be too hard, as they always used Central Park for things as such.\n(Naked Mice)\nFewer results then I was hoping for, so I typed, young sexy mice.\nI found mice pulling at the sides of their pussies, as I didn’t really wanna see that. I tried searching nuked mice, and still didn’t get far. I tried just hot and sexy, and found a site featuring babes, another site I didn’t wanna find. I looked over at mah-buddy, and he was doing no better. Neither of us even heard the door.\n“Okay guys, ready to go?”\nMama was standing behind us.\n“Yeah mama.”\nI said.\n“Yeah okay… oh well.”\nFievel had switched his off, as did I soon after.\n“You two can search for porn later, you pervs.\nLucky me, I have a pervert for a son.”\nSaid mama, as we piled in the electric car. Yeah, we actually have a car, but we have to be careful not to get run over by human cars.\nThe carnival didn’t take long to get to, which was a relief. Fievel and I would be searching as quickly as we could for a place to release our bladders. We would also be searching for a naughty place to do it. The carnival rides all looked fun, as we stood just inside the gates. The mouse section wasn’t really there today, as the humans weren’t currently doing anything special.\nTilt A Wheel, a Spinny ride, with a floor which dropped out.\nA Metal Rollercoaster.\nThere was a handful of rides, which looked like humans actually setup, just for us mice. Fievel and I started to roam soon after. \nWe first went on the Tumbler Twister, which in short, is the one I mentioned about the floor dropping out. Fievel near puked, as it really tumbled my buddy’s stomach. We went on the swings next, and then a rollercoaster with a double loop. By this point, we were both thirsty. Of all things to get with already full bladders, I bought us Icies, not small one’s either. To a human, it would be like 32 ounces worth. We sat on a bench, drinking our sugary snacks, both dancing having to pee. A couple of mice our age, in a way, walked by. They were giggling, as they walked by us. They were closer to Fievel’s age. Fievel pointed to the Ferris-wheel, as we both sat dancing having to pee so badly. I was losing droplets, at least it somewhat felt that way. It was beginning to seem obvious in a way, that we just might have to wait for nightfall, before we could get away with misbehaving. \nWe got done with our icy treats, and then headed for the Ferris Wheel. We went on the Miracle Go Round, which seemed bigger then normal, but who’s complaining? Sneaking through the wall in the middle sounded like fun, but things were too busy to pull it off.\nWe soon got off of the Miracle Go Round, and then I headed for the bathroom.\n“Are we really gonna go to the bathroom Denny?”\nAsked Fievel.\n“In a way.”\nI said. Fievel smiled deviously, as we entered. The bathroom was busier then I had hoped though, as I looked at Fievel, shrugged and then smiled. Fievel headed for a toilet.\n“No wait mah-little buddy.”\nI said quickly.\n“Why, we aren’t getting anyplace.”\nSaid Fievel. I bent down only slightly, cause I didn’t have to do it by a lot. “We’ll find someplace, even if we have to hold it until dark.”\nI whispered, as he grunted in agreement. We walked out of the bathroom, Fievel leading. Fievel was barely tall enough for the bigger rides, but little enough for the children’s rides. He rode a train, and then a kid’s coaster. He didn’t like the kids coaster.\nWe went next to the circus tent, as we sat and watched a 30 minute short show. Between, we went and then got another Icey ice treat, drinking even more fluids, on top of already hurting bladders.\nThey hadda magic show on after the circus act, and then 15 minutes, and then a 45 minute act. We stuck around after buying peanuts, and then watched the 45 minute show as well.\nThere was some good news in away. 2-o-clock, quickly became 4-o-clock. And then 4-o-clock, quickly became 6-o-clock. We ate while watching a second 45 minute show. New York in the summer though, it still wouldn’t be dark, till we would only have a few hours left to be here. Of course, that might not be so bad.\nIt doesn’t usually take us that long, and we should have at least an hour, if not near two to misbehave inside of.\n“I’m thirsty, wanna get another Icey Ice Fieve?”\n\n“Bu-but Denny, we’ve had 5 of them already.”\nSaid Fievel.\n“Want one anyways?”\n\n“Why not, make our bladders hurt even worse.”\nSaid Fievel, as we headed for the snack-bar. \n“Two please.”\nI said. The nice lady mouse handed them to me, as I handed one to Fievel. We drank them, as I walked the outside of the tent.\n“Where are we going Denny?”\nAsked Fievel.\n“You’ll see. “I said, as we found out that there was a water fountain on the other side of the circus tent. The thing was dry for some reason. For one reason or another, they had switched it off.\nIt wasn’t fully dark yet though, as I sat down.\n“So now what, it’s not quite dark yet Denny.”\nSaid Fievel.\n“Ahm now… we wait.”\nI said.\nWe worked on eating the rest of out icy treat, as our bladders hurt from having to pee so badly.\n“You want a break from my fingers or penis in you?”\nI asked.\n“Please.”\nFievel said, with a hopeful look on his face.\n“Hey it’s no problem there little-sexy-buddy-dude.”\nIi smiled.\n“Could we do just hand-jobs for today?”\n\n“Ohh Fievel, kiss my lips.”\nI said, as I smiled softly. He pressed his lips to mine, as I kissed him back.\n“So what are we gonna do, piss on our selves, and then watch each other?”\nAsked Fievel.\n“Is that what you would rather do?”\nI asked.\n“Yeah it is, I like peeing on myself.”\n\n“Well then, we watch each other taking turns.”\nI suggested with a smile.\n\n“Mind if I watch, while you do this?”\n\n“AHH, Who are you.”\nI said in fear and surprise.\n“Well I am Yure, but don’t mind me, I won’t eat you.”\n\n“Ahm, I ah-”\n\n“You are not sure how you feel about me watching?”\nAsked Yure.\n“Yeah I guess so.”\nI said.\n“Yeah okay, I’ll just go then.”\n\n“No wait, “I said quickly. “Just if you happen to pee on us, I hope it doesn’t hit us too hard.”\nI said, as I prepared my diaper, just like earlier, so as to press my penis out, and keep it out. Fievel done the same, as this cat actually backed up a little further, and off of the water fountain.\nI bent down slightly, so as to place my crouch a little closer to Fievel’s, as I wanted our balls nearly touching. He seemed to know, as he stood with his back arched back… either that, or he just didn’t mind the stance I took.\n“I am gonna start.”\nSaid Fievel, as he squirted some across his front.\n“Ohh yes Fieve, you know how to start this.”\nI said, as I too squirted some across my own front, trying not to masturbate right away… temptation was particularly strong.\nThe cat’s naughty member was erect, as he watched, and liked what he saw. He peed a little, seeming to struggle with it just a tad.\nFievel squirted slightly more, as did I, my crouch getting hard as I did. Pissing upon myself always made me horny, as I goot too watch mah-buddy doing so too.\nMy bladder hurt, as I let out some piss, not even stopping to think about the wetness of my diaper, or the clothes I was wearing.\nFievel doing the same.\n\n\n\n\nDenny is hard. I wonder if he planned what it is we are gonna do about these wet things when we are done. \nFievel wondered, as he grabbed at Denny’s naughty bits. Denny groaned, as his crouch was already erect from pissing.\n“Eh, oh Denny… I hope it don’t come too soon, I wanna pee before I cum.”\nSaid Fievel, as Denny gently gripped Fievel’s erect member, directing Fievel’s piss.\n“Oh Fievel, peeing with you is fun.”\nSaid Denny, as his bladder was still hurting, as he tried not to release too much at a time.\n“Oh Denny, it is, as we allow this cat to watch.”\n\n“True true.”\nAgreed Denny.\n\n\n\n\nMy bladder hurt me some, as I still really had a lot in it. I held mah-breath, and then let out a further stream then I had in awhile. It dripped down between Fievel and I, as we were tightly pressed together. Soon after, Fievel released one too, equally as large. The feel of the warmth and wetness turning me on a lot. I began masturbating Fievel’s crouch, up and down, as it sent quivers up and down mah-buddy’s back.\n\n“Ohh Denny, you are liking what I am doing in return, I can feel it in my paws.”\nSaid Fievel, as we were masturbating each other’s hard and very erect crouches. I began feeling tingles in my spine, as orgasm was working through my system. I squirted, and then squirted again, as Fievel started doing the same thing. He was squirting streams of piss, over and over, as we began making a puddle in the water fountain, making our own kind of water fountain. Pissing up into the air, like strange yellow water fountains, as we masturbated each other. Tingles got stronger, as I felt like the next piss would be my load instead.\n“Fie-Fievel? I am soon about to spit it I think.”\nI said suddenly.\n“Ohh Denny, I think I am too.”\nSaid Fievel, as the cat was making groaning sounds, pissing streams of piss all over himself,, just watching us.\nI sped up my pace on Fievel, and then he done did it too, turning me on even further, and a little faster. The cat was masturbating even faster too, as his tail was twitching around some.\nMy tail suddenly began twitching around suddenly, as I realized I was about to cum.\n“Ohh Fievel, I am ca-cumming.”\nI said, as I came.\n“Ohhh gawds Denny, I am too.”\nWe both came about three times usual, as it was dripping all over our paws.\n\n\n\n“LADIES AND GENTLEMICE… THE MOMENT YOU’VE BEEN WAITING FOR… THE FIREWORKS SHOW IN THE COMFORT OF THE SEATS YOU’RE ALREADY IN.”\nSuddenly, a part of the tent to the right of me, and to the left of Fievel opened up really wide, and spotlights were suddenly on us.\nOur penises hadn’t completely went down yet, and still dripping.\nOur paws were nearly solid white with our cum, and dripping off the sides. Embarrassment isn’t even saying it, as you could hear quite a lot of picking, laughing, and teasing coming from the crowd. Nearly every mouse in the tent could see us, as we did our best to tiptoe away.\nThey switched on the water as we stepped out of the water fountain, as Yure was gonna step in, and then openly show the crowd of mice his cum filled paws, but didn’t quite get a chance to do so. Fievel and I backed up, until we were outa sight. We both planted our butts onto the ground at first, as we seemed to not think, we did still have to pee, just slightly less as bad.\n“What if we wait for just a moment for the fireworks?”\nI asked/suggested.\n“Why?”\n\n“Just for the hell of it, so we can see each other peeing in the middle of them.”\nI said. Sounding like fun, Fievel started peeing before I could even suggest who’s going first. Inside of brighter fireworks, I could see his piss stream, as relief was about his face. I began peeing soon after, as the feel of emptying mah-bladder soon after that, actually felt good. Fievel placed a paw in it, and the tasted it. I just shook my head, as we were having a good end of a weird day.\nWe sat in the grass, kissing from time to time, watching the fireworks, before getting up, and then heading off to the meeting place. It was near 10:30, the deadline time for us to meet already, as we were walking fast. She was waiting for us, tapping her foot.\nI knew it… she knew what had happened.\n“Come on you two *Naughty* boys!”\nNot saying a word, Fievel and I got into the car, which was a short walk away from the meeting place. Car? Mostly like a toy car, because well, it was a fully functional toy car.\n“So what do you have to say for yourselves!?”\nAsked mama.\n“Ahm, Fievel and I tried to hide.”\nI said.\n“Well you chose a bad place.”\nShe wasn’t calm, but wasn’t pissed. We were quiet the whole way home, not saying a thing. At the house.\n“When you two wanna do something, sneak and do it privately here at home! Got it you two!?”\n\n“Yeah mama.”\nSaid Fievel.\n“Yes Mam, ahh, mama.”\nI said.\nThe three of us entered the house, mama went to her room, and then Fievel and I went to out room. We went in, and then laid down. At first, we just laid there, staring at each others faces in the dark.\n“I guess next time we be more careful.”\nI suggested.\n“Yeah, like also go to something smaller too.”\nSuggested Fievel.\n“Lets kiss on it.”\nI said, as Fievel planted his lips onto mine, and then I kissed back.\nWith that… we fell asleep.\n\n\n\n\n(FIN!)\n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Fievel and Denny In, Carnival Nights.
Characters in story.


Fievel Mousekewitz.
DennyMouse.
Mama Mousekewitz.
Papa Mousekewitz.




Morning after Fievel and I got back, I was waking up, to find Fievel was now longer in my arms. He was sitting at his desk, looking out of the window. Last night had been interesting, as mama still wasn’t really ready to accept me… though I wasn’t willing to give up either, as I really loved Fievel. She left us sleep in the same room together, so that at least was a comfort. Cuddling Fievel like a cat does with a somewhat smaller cat, was something extremely comforting… and not just for having sex, as I enjoy cuddling to just cuddle. After  the amount of sex we done yesterday, I was willing to give Fievel a nice break today.
My bladder hurt a little, as I got myself up, and then got myself moving. To the bathroom I went, Fievel close behind. I stood with my crouch outside the diapie I had placed on, as I glanced over at mah-buddy’s crouch, as he looked at mine.
“Can I, just to feel how soft you are this morning?”
I asked.
“Well you are too.”
Said Fievel, as he reached over and then rubbed at mine slightly, as he done so for mine. We both stood there afterward, hanging our penises over the toilet, not peeing. We stared at each others penises for a few more moments, as I decided to say something.
“I don’t believe I gotta go much.”
I said, as I lost only a few drops.
“Me either.”
Agreed Fievel, as he too lost just a few drops, as we pulled our diapies back up, and then returned to our room.
“De-Denny, I wanna go to the carnival tonight, think mama might let me go?”

“Hm. I have a feeling, she will, providing I go with.”
I said, as we sat side by side at Fievel’s desk, looking at the nice day outside. I hadda pee pretty badly, as for some reason, I suspected Fievel had to go too. But we both were acting like we hadn’t had to go, as we would probably have an interesting day. We would be naughty at the carnival tonight, as long as we could find a place. Finding a place though may not be easy, but crossing that bridge, we would just have to do then.
Sitting looking out of the window, as I danced some.
“Hm, looks like you did have to pee after all Denny.”
Said Fievel.
“Don’t be silly, “I said, as Fievel danced slightly. “Your doing it some too, you gotta pee mah-buddy?”
I asked.
“Nope, I just like rubbing myself from time to time.”
Said Fievel, as I was pretty sure he did have to pee.
My bladder was pretty full, as I just wanted to hold it till at least later in the day. Fievel’s was too, there was no doubt in my mind about that, him and I were only lying about having to pee.
Lunch time would crept in slowly, as it would probably drag like a knife. I wanted to suggest doing something, but what!?
“Guys?” I heard mama say. And then she tried the knob, which we hadn’t locked. “You two aren’t going to spend this beautiful day in here, are you?”
Asked mama. Fievel and I looked at each other.
“Ahm, I guess you’re correct mama.”
I said, as I got up. Fievel followed me, as we had a tiny back yard. It wasn’t the greatest, but there’s little you can ask for in New York. We went to the back yard, where the neighbor boys were out playing as well. These two mice were playing in the dirt, as I found a ball in the backyard.
I threw it toward Fievel, and didn’t even have to say why, as he caught it easily.
“Catch Denny!?”

“Yeah, what else?”

“Well, I could have to hit the ball.”
Suggest Fievel.
“Yeah but to where?”

“Good point Denny.”
Said Fievel, as he threw it back toward me, catching it easily.
I threw it back again.
“Denny, do you think mama will let us go to the Carnival at around 2-o-clock instead of 6 tonight?”
Asked Fievel, as he threw the ball back at me. Our softball, actually was like a naked golf ball or something. But with a lot of the outside removed and such, it was kinda like a softball.
“It’s possible as long as I am still going with, we could go now.”
I said, as I caught the ball and then threw it back.
We threw the ball back and forth several more times, before heading in to ask mama about going early. The other mouse boys were play in the mud so far, that they were brown from waist down. As Fievel and I headed back in, I realized, they were pooping. I wasn’t in the mood to even know about it today, as those kind of moods aren’t as common as you may think. Mama was getting something ready for lunch for us.
I stood watching for a moment or two, as I wasn’t realizing it, but I was dancing.
“Must you pee DennyMouse?”
She asked. I shook my head.
“Bull, go to the bathroom this very instant, you after him.”
She looked at Fievel, who also was dancing.
“Yeah okay mama.”
Said Fievel.
Fievel stood, waiting for Denny to finish, as he decided to walk to the bathroom. “Wait for Denny to come out, you hear?”
Fievel just nodded.



I stood there in the bathroom, staring at the toilet water.
“How am I gonna continue to do this, and not pee?”
I asked myself aloud.
Ii walked to the bathroom door, and then opened it. Mah-buddy was standing waiting for me.
“So you done?”
I winked.
“Yeah, sure I am.”
I danced, and then acted out the pee dance.
I left the bathroom, in hopes Fievel would just fake it as I had.
I sat at the table, as mama handed me a plate of vegetables and seeds.
“So what’s up, I thought you two were going to stay outside a little longer.”
Mama half asked.
“We were getting tired… and besides, I think those boys were playing in their poop as mud.”
I said.
“Oh no not again.”
Mama went to the window. “darn boys, poop isn’t a play thing.”
Said mama, as she picked up a phone, and then dialed their mama’s number. “Yes Mam, yeah.
It’s about your boys.”
A pause.
“Right.”
Said mama.
“Playing in each others poopy again.”
Another pause.
“I don’t know, Fievel didn’t have that much desire to play in his.”
Pause.
“Well I would give you advice, I hope you understand… if I had any advice to give.”
Pause.
“Well take care then.”
By this point, Fievel had made it back from the bathroom, and then sat down aside of me.
“So, did you pee or fake it.”
I whispered, barely even loud enough for him to even understand.
“Faked.”
He said, in a single word.
“So guys, what are you planning to do for the rest of the afternoon?”
Asked mama. I looked at Fievel, and then back at mama. Him and I asked in unison, “Can we go to the carnival at 2 instead of 6-o-clock?”

“I suppose, since Denny is going to go with.”
Mama winked with a smile, as she said it. Shortly after, she dug into her plate of vegetables as we ate lunch.
Fievel and I headed to our room, soon after lunch, and then sat surfing an Internet which shouldn’t exist for closer to 100 years yet. As I did anyways, I lost droplets of piss… or at least I was pretty sure I did.
But I really wanted a full bladder, for what ever it was we were gonna do. Finding a place probably wasn’t going to be too hard, as they always used Central Park for things as such.
(Naked Mice)
Fewer results then I was hoping for, so I typed, young sexy mice.
I found mice pulling at the sides of their pussies, as I didn’t really wanna see that. I tried searching nuked mice, and still didn’t get far. I tried just hot and sexy, and found a site featuring babes, another site I didn’t wanna find. I looked over at mah-buddy, and he was doing no better. Neither of us even heard the door.
“Okay guys, ready to go?”
Mama was standing behind us.
“Yeah mama.”
I said.
“Yeah okay… oh well.”
Fievel had switched his off, as did I soon after.
“You two can search for porn later, you pervs.
Lucky me, I have a pervert for a son.”
Said mama, as we piled in the electric car. Yeah, we actually have a car, but we have to be careful not to get run over by human cars.
The carnival didn’t take long to get to, which was a relief. Fievel and I would be searching as quickly as we could for a place to release our bladders. We would also be searching for a naughty place to do it. The carnival rides all looked fun, as we stood just inside the gates. The mouse section wasn’t really there today, as the humans weren’t currently doing anything special.
Tilt A Wheel, a Spinny ride, with a floor which dropped out.
A Metal Rollercoaster.
There was a handful of rides, which looked like humans actually setup, just for us mice. Fievel and I started to roam soon after.
We first went on the Tumbler Twister, which in short, is the one I mentioned about the floor dropping out. Fievel near puked, as it really tumbled my buddy’s stomach. We went on the swings next, and then a rollercoaster with a double loop. By this point, we were both thirsty. Of all things to get with already full bladders, I bought us Icies, not small one’s either. To a human, it would be like 32 ounces worth. We sat on a bench, drinking our sugary snacks, both dancing having to pee. A couple of mice our age, in a way, walked by. They were giggling, as they walked by us. They were closer to Fievel’s age. Fievel pointed to the Ferris-wheel, as we both sat dancing having to pee so badly. I was losing droplets, at least it somewhat felt that way. It was beginning to seem obvious in a way, that we just might have to wait for nightfall, before we could get away with misbehaving.
We got done with our icy treats, and then headed for the Ferris Wheel. We went on the Miracle Go Round, which seemed bigger then normal, but who’s complaining? Sneaking through the wall in the middle sounded like fun, but things were too busy to pull it off.
We soon got off of the Miracle Go Round, and then I headed for the bathroom.
“Are we really gonna go to the bathroom Denny?”
Asked Fievel.
“In a way.”
I said. Fievel smiled deviously, as we entered. The bathroom was busier then I had hoped though, as I looked at Fievel, shrugged and then smiled. Fievel headed for a toilet.
“No wait mah-little buddy.”
I said quickly.
“Why, we aren’t getting anyplace.”
Said Fievel. I bent down only slightly, cause I didn’t have to do it by a lot. “We’ll find someplace, even if we have to hold it until dark.”
I whispered, as he grunted in agreement. We walked out of the bathroom, Fievel leading. Fievel was barely tall enough for the bigger rides, but little enough for the children’s rides. He rode a train, and then a kid’s coaster. He didn’t like the kids coaster.
We went next to the circus tent, as we sat and watched a 30 minute short show. Between, we went and then got another Icey ice treat, drinking even more fluids, on top of already hurting bladders.
They hadda magic show on after the circus act, and then 15 minutes, and then a 45 minute act. We stuck around after buying peanuts, and then watched the 45 minute show as well.
There was some good news in away. 2-o-clock, quickly became 4-o-clock. And then 4-o-clock, quickly became 6-o-clock. We ate while watching a second 45 minute show. New York in the summer though, it still wouldn’t be dark, till we would only have a few hours left to be here. Of course, that might not be so bad.
It doesn’t usually take us that long, and we should have at least an hour, if not near two to misbehave inside of.
“I’m thirsty, wanna get another Icey Ice Fieve?”

“Bu-but Denny, we’ve had 5 of them already.”
Said Fievel.
“Want one anyways?”

“Why not, make our bladders hurt even worse.”
Said Fievel, as we headed for the snack-bar.
“Two please.”
I said. The nice lady mouse handed them to me, as I handed one to Fievel. We drank them, as I walked the outside of the tent.
“Where are we going Denny?”
Asked Fievel.
“You’ll see. “I said, as we found out that there was a water fountain on the other side of the circus tent. The thing was dry for some reason. For one reason or another, they had switched it off.
It wasn’t fully dark yet though, as I sat down.
“So now what, it’s not quite dark yet Denny.”
Said Fievel.
“Ahm now… we wait.”
I said.
We worked on eating the rest of out icy treat, as our bladders hurt from having to pee so badly.
“You want a break from my fingers or penis in you?”
I asked.
“Please.”
Fievel said, with a hopeful look on his face.
“Hey it’s no problem there little-sexy-buddy-dude.”
Ii smiled.
“Could we do just hand-jobs for today?”

“Ohh Fievel, kiss my lips.”
I said, as I smiled softly. He pressed his lips to mine, as I kissed him back.
“So what are we gonna do, piss on our selves, and then watch each other?”
Asked Fievel.
“Is that what you would rather do?”
I asked.
“Yeah it is, I like peeing on myself.”

“Well then, we watch each other taking turns.”
I suggested with a smile.

“Mind if I watch, while you do this?”

“AHH, Who are you.”
I said in fear and surprise.
“Well I am Yure, but don’t mind me, I won’t eat you.”

“Ahm, I ah-”

“You are not sure how you feel about me watching?”
Asked Yure.
“Yeah I guess so.”
I said.
“Yeah okay, I’ll just go then.”

“No wait, “I said quickly. “Just if you happen to pee on us, I hope it doesn’t hit us too hard.”
I said, as I prepared my diaper, just like earlier, so as to press my penis out, and keep it out. Fievel done the same, as this cat actually backed up a little further, and off of the water fountain.
I bent down slightly, so as to place my crouch a little closer to Fievel’s, as I wanted our balls nearly touching. He seemed to know, as he stood with his back arched back… either that, or he just didn’t mind the stance I took.
“I am gonna start.”
Said Fievel, as he squirted some across his front.
“Ohh yes Fieve, you know how to start this.”
I said, as I too squirted some across my own front, trying not to masturbate right away… temptation was particularly strong.
The cat’s naughty member was erect, as he watched, and liked what he saw. He peed a little, seeming to struggle with it just a tad.
Fievel squirted slightly more, as did I, my crouch getting hard as I did. Pissing upon myself always made me horny, as I goot too watch mah-buddy doing so too.
My bladder hurt, as I let out some piss, not even stopping to think about the wetness of my diaper, or the clothes I was wearing.
Fievel doing the same.




Denny is hard. I wonder if he planned what it is we are gonna do about these wet things when we are done.
Fievel wondered, as he grabbed at Denny’s naughty bits. Denny groaned, as his crouch was already erect from pissing.
“Eh, oh Denny… I hope it don’t come too soon, I wanna pee before I cum.”
Said Fievel, as Denny gently gripped Fievel’s erect member, directing Fievel’s piss.
“Oh Fievel, peeing with you is fun.”
Said Denny, as his bladder was still hurting, as he tried not to release too much at a time.
“Oh Denny, it is, as we allow this cat to watch.”

“True true.”
Agreed Denny.




My bladder hurt me some, as I still really had a lot in it. I held mah-breath, and then let out a further stream then I had in awhile. It dripped down between Fievel and I, as we were tightly pressed together. Soon after, Fievel released one too, equally as large. The feel of the warmth and wetness turning me on a lot. I began masturbating Fievel’s crouch, up and down, as it sent quivers up and down mah-buddy’s back.

“Ohh Denny, you are liking what I am doing in return, I can feel it in my paws.”
Said Fievel, as we were masturbating each other’s hard and very erect crouches. I began feeling tingles in my spine, as orgasm was working through my system. I squirted, and then squirted again, as Fievel started doing the same thing. He was squirting streams of piss, over and over, as we began making a puddle in the water fountain, making our own kind of water fountain. Pissing up into the air, like strange yellow water fountains, as we masturbated each other. Tingles got stronger, as I felt like the next piss would be my load instead.
“Fie-Fievel? I am soon about to spit it I think.”
I said suddenly.
“Ohh Denny, I think I am too.”
Said Fievel, as the cat was making groaning sounds, pissing streams of piss all over himself,, just watching us.
I sped up my pace on Fievel, and then he done did it too, turning me on even further, and a little faster. The cat was masturbating even faster too, as his tail was twitching around some.
My tail suddenly began twitching around suddenly, as I realized I was about to cum.
“Ohh Fievel, I am ca-cumming.”
I said, as I came.
“Ohhh gawds Denny, I am too.”
We both came about three times usual, as it was dripping all over our paws.



“LADIES AND GENTLEMICE… THE MOMENT YOU’VE BEEN WAITING FOR… THE FIREWORKS SHOW IN THE COMFORT OF THE SEATS YOU’RE ALREADY IN.”
Suddenly, a part of the tent to the right of me, and to the left of Fievel opened up really wide, and spotlights were suddenly on us.
Our penises hadn’t completely went down yet, and still dripping.
Our paws were nearly solid white with our cum, and dripping off the sides. Embarrassment isn’t even saying it, as you could hear quite a lot of picking, laughing, and teasing coming from the crowd. Nearly every mouse in the tent could see us, as we did our best to tiptoe away.
They switched on the water as we stepped out of the water fountain, as Yure was gonna step in, and then openly show the crowd of mice his cum filled paws, but didn’t quite get a chance to do so. Fievel and I backed up, until we were outa sight. We both planted our butts onto the ground at first, as we seemed to not think, we did still have to pee, just slightly less as bad.
“What if we wait for just a moment for the fireworks?”
I asked/suggested.
“Why?”

“Just for the hell of it, so we can see each other peeing in the middle of them.”
I said. Sounding like fun, Fievel started peeing before I could even suggest who’s going first. Inside of brighter fireworks, I could see his piss stream, as relief was about his face. I began peeing soon after, as the feel of emptying mah-bladder soon after that, actually felt good. Fievel placed a paw in it, and the tasted it. I just shook my head, as we were having a good end of a weird day.
We sat in the grass, kissing from time to time, watching the fireworks, before getting up, and then heading off to the meeting place. It was near 10:30, the deadline time for us to meet already, as we were walking fast. She was waiting for us, tapping her foot.
I knew it… she knew what had happened.
“Come on you two *Naughty* boys!”
Not saying a word, Fievel and I got into the car, which was a short walk away from the meeting place. Car? Mostly like a toy car, because well, it was a fully functional toy car.
“So what do you have to say for yourselves!?”
Asked mama.
“Ahm, Fievel and I tried to hide.”
I said.
“Well you chose a bad place.”
She wasn’t calm, but wasn’t pissed. We were quiet the whole way home, not saying a thing. At the house.
“When you two wanna do something, sneak and do it privately here at home! Got it you two!?”

“Yeah mama.”
Said Fievel.
“Yes Mam, ahh, mama.”
I said.
The three of us entered the house, mama went to her room, and then Fievel and I went to out room. We went in, and then laid down. At first, we just laid there, staring at each others faces in the dark.
“I guess next time we be more careful.”
I suggested.
“Yeah, like also go to something smaller too.”
Suggested Fievel.
“Lets kiss on it.”
I said, as Fievel planted his lips onto mine, and then I kissed back.
With that… we fell asleep.




(FIN!)
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