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This kind of comic would take over a year to make.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "A short story, which was originally a comic idea. This kind of comic would take over a year to make.", "writing": "Tikal the Echidna walks down the side walk of a city park. The day is calm with a slight breeze. The park is fairly empty for such a nice day out.\nRouge the Bat spots Tikal, and yells to her.\nHey Tikal, wait up!\nOh, hello Rouge!\n\nTikal has reached a plastic bin labeled the \"Fighting Blindness Foundation: donate your old eyeglasses here.\" She drops a pair of glasses inside.\nRouge says \nTikal, you're something else, you know that?\nWhat do you mean?\nSo, Shadow and I were just hanging out, and your name got brought up. We were talking about how you always are there, to care for others who are in need.\nWell, I try.\nAnd then I find you here, donating to this eyeglass drive.\nWell, I just got new contacts, so I suppose I don't need them anymore!\n\nHave you ever done anything bad in your life Tikal?\nI try not to act on anything I would regret later, if that's what you mean.\nWell, let me put it this way. Have you ever had bad thoughts about, say, Shadow?\n\nShadow? Well no, I rather like Shadow. He's always been nice to me.\nHe's nice to you, because you're nice to him Tikal. He likes you a lot. We both do.\nAw, that's sweet. I like you both a lot too! You're good friends!\n\nTikal, you're just so nice. Wouldn't it be fun, if you would be bad for one night? Like in the bedroom. Just unexpectedly be this nasty dominatrix to Shadow, while I watched the whole thing?\n\nUm, whoa, now. Ha ha. That escalated quickly, wouldn't you say?\nOh, Tikal. You may be nice, but I'm a bad girl, and I can totally talk this way if I want. I can say, that that would be amazing, and it's something Shadow and I have wanted to do with you. You're a cutie, and I bet you would have a lot of fun. Think about it.\n\nListen, I may be 'nice' like you keep saying, but don't patronize me. I think that's a pretty gross thing to ask, actually.\nI bet you'd be great in charge!\nFine, I'll be in charge then. I'm 'in charge' when I say no to your request. Goodbye Rouge.\n\n_____\n\nShadow and Rouge are in a bedroom, sitting next to each other on the bed. Shadow's naughty bits are tucked in and not visible. Rouge is wearing a light blue bra and panties.\nShadow says\nSo, the suspense is killing me. Did she say yes?\nNo, she's playing hard to get. But I'll get her to come around.\nThere is a knock on the door.\nShadow gets up and answers, and standing there is Tikal, wearing her traditional mesoamerican attire.\n\nHi Shadow, Tikal says.\nTikal! Great to see you.\nTikal immediately walks inside.\nListen, guys, I'm glad you're both here. I've given some thought about what you asked me earlier, Rouge. About me joining in and being the one 'in charge.' And I figure, if you want me to be the dominatrix, then I really do need to be the one in charge. \nTik...\nJust, let me finish. I'm, well. I try to be a very good girl, a good person. But I have found you very cute, Shadow, well, in the past. I guess what I mean to say is, well, I suppose we can give it a try. But you need to understand, I am the one in charge.\n\nI wouldn't have it any other way! This is the best thing about the bedroom. I'm no weak person, day to day. And you're so nice and always helping others, day to day. But here in the bedroom, I can be your total slave, and you can be such a ruthless bitch! Pardon my language, of course.\nTikal: Rouge, I do want you to watch this too. I'll be back, whenever we want to do this. I'll throw some outfit together, and when I come in to do this, this won't be the same Tikal. It's very exciting. I hope this will go well for all of us. \nRouge replies,\nThis sound fantastic! Be nice and mean to him!\nI'll do my best to be a dom. The idea is thrilling, and makes me nervous. But in a good way.\n\nThe next day, Shadow and Rouge get ready for a long night of Shadow being a total submissive to Tikal. The agreed upon time finally comes with a knock on the door.\n\nTikal enters, and has removed her headband and quill wrappings. She wears a black bra and panties, and brown leather boots. She carries a briefcase.\nI'm sorry guys, I don't have any fancy outfits, all I have is underwear and some boots. They don't even match.\nShadow says\nYou look great, Tikal!\n\nTikal replies,\nYou. Be quiet. I'm speaking, bud.\nRouge: Aw, how cute. My little dom!\nTikal: Watch only, please. I'm in charge. I'm the talker. Now, I do have some stuff in this briefcase, and I'm going to use it on you Shadow. Now walk over to that bed post and face your butt at me.\nYes maam!\nI said, no talking, bud. Now, I'm handcuffing you to this post, see. Now you're mine.\nTikal handcuffs Shadow to the bed post.\n\nNow, I said I was in charge, and you will learn to be my boy toy. And I'm in a mean mode. So, I'm going to have total control over your body before I ride your cock at my will.\nShadow is now turned on enough that he has developed an erection.\n\nTikal: Wait up, hold on. What is that? Is that your penis? \nShe cups his penis in her hand.\nHold on, time out. Wow, Shadow, I'm disappointed. Your penis is really small.\nRouge: Ha, ha!\nShadow: Give me a break, I have a very average sized penis.\nTikal: No, Shadow, that's very small, and I'm disappointed actually. I thought you were the ultimate life form. Rouge, have you ever seen a penis this small before?\n\nRouge: Eh, I've seen smaller, I've seen bigger.\nTikal: Well, I've never seen one any smaller than this. And it kind of pisses me off, actually. I was excited about coming here and dominating you, but you aren't even a man, hardly.\nShadow: Ok, I get it. Okay, Tikal, I'm a little boy for you, what are you going to do to me?\n\nTikal: Shut up. Listen, I have a strap on dildo I brought. And, frankly, I can't fuck that little thing you call your dick. God, DAMN IT Shadow! I guess you're gonna be the bitch, and I'll be the nigga.\nRouge snickers \"You're stupid, Tikal!\"\n\nTikal spits on the strap on, and presses it to Shadow's anus.\nRelax your cunt hole, slave. This is gonna hurt, cause I didn't bring any lube. And I hope it hurts you.\nShe forces the dildo up Shadow's ass, to his grunts and moans.\nAs she begins thrusting, Shadow continues to moan.\nYeah, you like that, Shadow?\nShadow: Yes, mistress, I like it!\nWhat do you mean you like it? You're kind of a faggot, aren't you Shadow?\n\nRouge: Tikal! Hold on a second...\nTikal: Well, I mean, think about it. Why does he want two girls over, just be take it in the butt? Why not just have guys over?\nShadow: I'm a faggot for you mistress!\nTikal replies, with disgust in her voice,\nThat's not what I mean. I mean, in real life, you're a faggot with a small dick, and, well. You think you deserve me? I'm a good looking girl. So is Rouge. And you can't even pleasure us? Why should I have to be the dude, right now? I was hoping to get fucked by a big black cock tonight. Instead I get you, the \"ultimate life form.\" It's not even pathetic. It's just pitiful. And it really does piss me off.\n\nRouge: Tikal, are you acting?\nThe more I fuck this fag's ass... I don't like you anymore, Shadow. I'm gonna kick you in the balls.\nShadow and Rouge: What?!\nI'm just gonna kick you in the balls, and I hope it hurts really bad.\nShadow: Hold on, whoa. Wait up. Did I have a safety word? Let's do a time out.\n\nTikal squarely kicks Shadow right between his two testicles with her right boot.\nAHHHHH! NOOO, STOOOPPPP!\nRouge: TIKAL! STOP IT! YOU'VE TAKEN THIS TOO FAR, OKAY?\nTikal: Fuck you, Shadow! You got a little dick!\nShe kicks him hard right in the nuts again.\n\nRouge grabs Tikal and pulls her a few feet back\nTikal, are you crazy!? You're gonna cause him long term damage!\nFuck you Shadow! You're a fag with a small dick!\nTikal! Get ahold of yourself!\nI don't want him to have any kids! I want to destroy his body right here, tonight!\nRouge: Jesus Christ!\n\nTikal: Listen, you clearly don't understand what 'in charge' means.\nRouge: It doesn't mean to cause long term damage to somebody! That's called being a psychopath, not a dom!\nTikal: Shadow, hey. Little slut boy. If you want to be with a girl who really knows how to control her toy, you can come to my place tomorrow. But leave Rouge here.\nTikal then gathers her stuff and leaves.\n\nRouge unlocks Shadow's handcuffs.\nRouge: Shadow, I'm sorry I even mentioned this idea! She's a psychopath! And your dick isn't nearly as small as she says.\n\nShadow stares off into space, before replying,\n\"This has been the best night of my life.\"\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Tikal the Echidna walks down the side walk of a city park. The day is calm with a slight breeze. The park is fairly empty for such a nice day out.
Rouge the Bat spots Tikal, and yells to her.
Hey Tikal, wait up!
Oh, hello Rouge!

Tikal has reached a plastic bin labeled the "Fighting Blindness Foundation: donate your old eyeglasses here." She drops a pair of glasses inside.
Rouge says
Tikal, you're something else, you know that?
What do you mean?
So, Shadow and I were just hanging out, and your name got brought up. We were talking about how you always are there, to care for others who are in need.
Well, I try.
And then I find you here, donating to this eyeglass drive.
Well, I just got new contacts, so I suppose I don't need them anymore!

Have you ever done anything bad in your life Tikal?
I try not to act on anything I would regret later, if that's what you mean.
Well, let me put it this way. Have you ever had bad thoughts about, say, Shadow?

Shadow? Well no, I rather like Shadow. He's always been nice to me.
He's nice to you, because you're nice to him Tikal. He likes you a lot. We both do.
Aw, that's sweet. I like you both a lot too! You're good friends!

Tikal, you're just so nice. Wouldn't it be fun, if you would be bad for one night? Like in the bedroom. Just unexpectedly be this nasty dominatrix to Shadow, while I watched the whole thing?

Um, whoa, now. Ha ha. That escalated quickly, wouldn't you say?
Oh, Tikal. You may be nice, but I'm a bad girl, and I can totally talk this way if I want. I can say, that that would be amazing, and it's something Shadow and I have wanted to do with you. You're a cutie, and I bet you would have a lot of fun. Think about it.

Listen, I may be 'nice' like you keep saying, but don't patronize me. I think that's a pretty gross thing to ask, actually.
I bet you'd be great in charge!
Fine, I'll be in charge then. I'm 'in charge' when I say no to your request. Goodbye Rouge.

_____

Shadow and Rouge are in a bedroom, sitting next to each other on the bed. Shadow's naughty bits are tucked in and not visible. Rouge is wearing a light blue bra and panties.
Shadow says
So, the suspense is killing me. Did she say yes?
No, she's playing hard to get. But I'll get her to come around.
There is a knock on the door.
Shadow gets up and answers, and standing there is Tikal, wearing her traditional mesoamerican attire.

Hi Shadow, Tikal says.
Tikal! Great to see you.
Tikal immediately walks inside.
Listen, guys, I'm glad you're both here. I've given some thought about what you asked me earlier, Rouge. About me joining in and being the one 'in charge.' And I figure, if you want me to be the dominatrix, then I really do need to be the one in charge.
Tik...
Just, let me finish. I'm, well. I try to be a very good girl, a good person. But I have found you very cute, Shadow, well, in the past. I guess what I mean to say is, well, I suppose we can give it a try. But you need to understand, I am the one in charge.

I wouldn't have it any other way! This is the best thing about the bedroom. I'm no weak person, day to day. And you're so nice and always helping others, day to day. But here in the bedroom, I can be your total slave, and you can be such a ruthless bitch! Pardon my language, of course.
Tikal: Rouge, I do want you to watch this too. I'll be back, whenever we want to do this. I'll throw some outfit together, and when I come in to do this, this won't be the same Tikal. It's very exciting. I hope this will go well for all of us.
Rouge replies,
This sound fantastic! Be nice and mean to him!
I'll do my best to be a dom. The idea is thrilling, and makes me nervous. But in a good way.

The next day, Shadow and Rouge get ready for a long night of Shadow being a total submissive to Tikal. The agreed upon time finally comes with a knock on the door.

Tikal enters, and has removed her headband and quill wrappings. She wears a black bra and panties, and brown leather boots. She carries a briefcase.
I'm sorry guys, I don't have any fancy outfits, all I have is underwear and some boots. They don't even match.
Shadow says
You look great, Tikal!

Tikal replies,
You. Be quiet. I'm speaking, bud.
Rouge: Aw, how cute. My little dom!
Tikal: Watch only, please. I'm in charge. I'm the talker. Now, I do have some stuff in this briefcase, and I'm going to use it on you Shadow. Now walk over to that bed post and face your butt at me.
Yes maam!
I said, no talking, bud. Now, I'm handcuffing you to this post, see. Now you're mine.
Tikal handcuffs Shadow to the bed post.

Now, I said I was in charge, and you will learn to be my boy toy. And I'm in a mean mode. So, I'm going to have total control over your body before I ride your cock at my will.
Shadow is now turned on enough that he has developed an erection.

Tikal: Wait up, hold on. What is that? Is that your penis?
She cups his penis in her hand.
Hold on, time out. Wow, Shadow, I'm disappointed. Your penis is really small.
Rouge: Ha, ha!
Shadow: Give me a break, I have a very average sized penis.
Tikal: No, Shadow, that's very small, and I'm disappointed actually. I thought you were the ultimate life form. Rouge, have you ever seen a penis this small before?

Rouge: Eh, I've seen smaller, I've seen bigger.
Tikal: Well, I've never seen one any smaller than this. And it kind of pisses me off, actually. I was excited about coming here and dominating you, but you aren't even a man, hardly.
Shadow: Ok, I get it. Okay, Tikal, I'm a little boy for you, what are you going to do to me?

Tikal: Shut up. Listen, I have a strap on dildo I brought. And, frankly, I can't fuck that little thing you call your dick. God, DAMN IT Shadow! I guess you're gonna be the bitch, and I'll be the nigga.
Rouge snickers "You're stupid, Tikal!"

Tikal spits on the strap on, and presses it to Shadow's anus.
Relax your cunt hole, slave. This is gonna hurt, cause I didn't bring any lube. And I hope it hurts you.
She forces the dildo up Shadow's ass, to his grunts and moans.
As she begins thrusting, Shadow continues to moan.
Yeah, you like that, Shadow?
Shadow: Yes, mistress, I like it!
What do you mean you like it? You're kind of a faggot, aren't you Shadow?

Rouge: Tikal! Hold on a second...
Tikal: Well, I mean, think about it. Why does he want two girls over, just be take it in the butt? Why not just have guys over?
Shadow: I'm a faggot for you mistress!
Tikal replies, with disgust in her voice,
That's not what I mean. I mean, in real life, you're a faggot with a small dick, and, well. You think you deserve me? I'm a good looking girl. So is Rouge. And you can't even pleasure us? Why should I have to be the dude, right now? I was hoping to get fucked by a big black cock tonight. Instead I get you, the "ultimate life form." It's not even pathetic. It's just pitiful. And it really does piss me off.

Rouge: Tikal, are you acting?
The more I fuck this fag's ass... I don't like you anymore, Shadow. I'm gonna kick you in the balls.
Shadow and Rouge: What?!
I'm just gonna kick you in the balls, and I hope it hurts really bad.
Shadow: Hold on, whoa. Wait up. Did I have a safety word? Let's do a time out.

Tikal squarely kicks Shadow right between his two testicles with her right boot.
AHHHHH! NOOO, STOOOPPPP!
Rouge: TIKAL! STOP IT! YOU'VE TAKEN THIS TOO FAR, OKAY?
Tikal: Fuck you, Shadow! You got a little dick!
She kicks him hard right in the nuts again.

Rouge grabs Tikal and pulls her a few feet back
Tikal, are you crazy!? You're gonna cause him long term damage!
Fuck you Shadow! You're a fag with a small dick!
Tikal! Get ahold of yourself!
I don't want him to have any kids! I want to destroy his body right here, tonight!
Rouge: Jesus Christ!

Tikal: Listen, you clearly don't understand what 'in charge' means.
Rouge: It doesn't mean to cause long term damage to somebody! That's called being a psychopath, not a dom!
Tikal: Shadow, hey. Little slut boy. If you want to be with a girl who really knows how to control her toy, you can come to my place tomorrow. But leave Rouge here.
Tikal then gathers her stuff and leaves.

Rouge unlocks Shadow's handcuffs.
Rouge: Shadow, I'm sorry I even mentioned this idea! She's a psychopath! And your dick isn't nearly as small as she says.

Shadow stares off into space, before replying,
"This has been the best night of my life."

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