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the group, Saluki Ratzu.\r\n\r\nSaluki is a girl who sounds like she had a horrid backstory, but to her, it doesn't seem all that bad considering what she ended up becoming, though...there's two sides to the coin.\r\n\r\nSaluki was born in a rough neighborhood (Remember, this world isn't Starmaninja, it's a \"what if\" half Starmaninja half Earth kind of world.), pretty much like any really rugged city where the guy with the biggest guns and biggest gang ruled the city. When she was very young, she found herself constantly in situations where guys would try to take advantage of her because of her gender and physique, but she usually managed to escape until one fateful day where a few guys all circled her at once. They told her that if she doesn't be good and do what they say, they'll do some \"really horrible things\" to her. Saluki having witnessed before what kind of guys these types were finally decided to submit to their demand, but with a catch that she wouldn't immediately reveal. The thing was, she knew exactly what these guys wanted, and because they had guns and were a group while she was alone, they could easily have gotten what they wanted, but Saluki knew that there was a way out of having to sit through the horrid scenario. As one of the thugs got closer to her and started to disrobe, she started to submissively bow down right before him (keep in mind, she's submitting because if she resists, they'll just try to forcefully subdue her), and then she opened her mouth (yes...that's what they wanted), and CHOMP! The bite was so forceful, it took her a day to clean the blood off her teeth, but she claims the scream of pain was \"music to her ears\". The shock of the bite caused the men to start firing like crazy and they ended up killing the guy who got bitten cause he was standing up while she was on the ground. She then jumped up and in the confusion, managed to grab the main guy's gun and immediately shot both of the other two in the head.\r\n\r\nStaring at their bodies all on the ground and wiping the blood from her mouth, the police shortly showed up to the scene. They immediately arrested Saluki on charges of murder, but she just said, \"Take me, go ahead, your system's so corrupt you'll allow thugs like that to rape people like me, but when I do them justice, I'M the one who goes behind bars...\" The police didn't really know how to respond to her assertion, but her extreme lack of resistance made it apparent that she wasn't just being political. \"Put me behind bars then. I'll be safer there than I would out here.\" Was the last thing she said.\r\n\r\nWhile in prison, she spent a lot of her time training herself. She lifted weights, went boxing, and ate heartfully every scrap of food she could get. She managed to be released early when the judge decided that she was indeed acting in self defense (and several feminist groups wanted to bail her out after hearing her story), but she certainly left a deep mark in the prison system that made the police fear to step in her way again. As she left the doors, the police saying \"You're free to go\", she said, \"Free. Hmph, your laws say murder is illegal. But I swear if any creep tries that again, I'm putting them 6 feet under. You decide if you want your laws to protect innocents or not.\" And with a flick of her wrist, she immediately socked an inmate in the nose, knocking them through the wall nearby, then screaming, \"That's for that guy you wanted to \"Borrow\" money from the other day. You take a life for money...you don't deserve to live...\" before storming off back to the city.\r\n\r\nAt the age of 22, she got a job as a bartender at a rather reputiable tavern. It was known for being a place where guys tend to hit on women a lot, and she kind of serves as an undercover to protect anyone who's putting anyone else in uncomfortable situations. Despite being an innocent enough looking waitress, she secretly finds people who are being overly assertive, takes them to the back room, and ensures they will learn a lesson, or never see daylight again. Morally, she just doesn't see killing as a bad thing because of her past.\r\n\r\nIt was finally when she saw Sprite, the leader of the Spiritual Ratzus, being harassed by a few guys that Saluki finally decided that enough was enough. She took down the guys in public this time, killing them with a heavy punch and even ripping one of thier intestines out and strangling them with it. She screamed, \"If I hear ONE more person act a fool by MY terms...\" but by then, everyone was so afraid to go near her, she seemed almost super natural. The only one who would approach her was Sprite, who wanted to thank her for saving her life. Saluki muttered, \"That's it...I can't keep doing this...I have too many names on my list, I gotta get out of this city.\" Sprite offers to have her travel and see if they can find a \"goal\" that will alievate Saluki of her pain. Saluki agrees to go, claiming she can't keep doing what she does, but the people of the city are borderline making her a mass murder.\r\n\r\nAfter Saluki leaves the city and really enjoys the company of Sprite, she is finally able to relax herself and show her REAL personality, which ironically is that of an ultra dominatrix. She claims, \"You learn to become what you hate so much. It's an ironic part of life, but for some reason, when I do it, there's kind of a thrill to it....well, at least I have the respect to make sure MY mate is okay with it...instead of forcing people...\" Her super strength and fearless will does come in handy countless times. She also becomes a rather hardcore lesbian because \"She doesn't trust men\", but when she comes across a shy and submissive male who IS really respectful, she changes her mantra to, \"Oh I like men, just not men who think they're better than me.\"\r\n\r\nPersonality: Despite the trauma, Saluki has had the same basic personality type for her whole life. She's a powerful and tough girl who doesn't fear anything, not even death because deep down inside, she has a complex where she feels there's no real point to living in a world where people strive to end your life for selfish fortune. She has a bitter hate for selfish people and cruel people who do anything against others, especially for their own enjoyment, but unlike most people, she's far less passive about how she would deal with anyone who stepped on her toes and didn't say \"Excuse me.\"\r\n\r\nPower: Like Skyla, her powers are all based on fantasy. She has incredible strength and an extremely iron will. Though not nearly as strong as a true Starmaninjian, due to the Earth like setting of her home planet, she is strong enough to dent one's skull with one hand and shatter it with the other and not cry when she gets a paper cut (which EVERYONE knows is among the GREATEST of pains you can suffer from a cut.).\r\n\r\nSaluki Ratzu is copyright to Kao Ninjaratzu\r\n\r\nNotes: Saluki is rather obviously based on Kao's daughter, \"Kiara\". The concept came from the moment he saw Kiara jump up to attack the humans who were going to shoot Siberia in the head and end up sacrificing her own life because of the attack. In a sense, Saluki is kind of like a \"revenge\" character he made to sooth the pains that he feels knowing that while he and his daughters managed to find peace in the Starmaninjian realm, they won't be the last ones to suffer from the cruel hands of evil humans who belittle the lives of others (animals or people, or even ideas). He wanted to protray her as realistic on Earth standards to really emphasize the message that he felt when he saw Kiara's sacrifice, but in his story, he wants the essence of Kiara to actually win, but also acknowledge that even in winning, she still doesn't feel victorious.\r\n\r\nSaluki is also extremely flirty, but then again, so is Kiara. Kao figured that making her really take control over the one thing that men tend to have a leg up on (sex) was one of the key things that was needed to make Saluki give the impression that no one could dominate her.\r\n\r\nIRL, Saluki was inspired ironically by a troll. He used a Rita avatar from Oliver and company in order to trick me into feeling like I met a really attractive girl that liked everything I liked and then revealed that I was talking to a fake for several months to get me to explode and threaten to block him and all that jazz. In the end though, I thought the whole thing was hilarious and ended up making Saluki as a memento cause thanks to him, I fell in love with Rita and remembered how hot and strong she was in Oliver and Company! Initially, she was planned to just be an overly flirty type who had to be kept in check a lot by Suna (kind of a ...gosh...there are millions of examples but I can't think of one. Those stories where you have the self loving protagonist and his \"Stay on track!\" best friend?), but her backstory was inspired from my increasing depression on how even today, there's still so much trash going on in this world and it's even being glorified in several mediums. I know she seems overkill (literally), but the emphasis is literally what I think is necessary to cure the planet of evil. Literally to purge it. Since her world is fantasy though, I'm not going to mellow her down.", "description_bbcode_parsed": "This is another Spiritual Ratzu, the second member of the group, Saluki Ratzu.

Saluki is a girl who sounds like she had a horrid backstory, but to her, it doesn't seem all that bad considering what she ended up becoming, though...there's two sides to the coin.

Saluki was born in a rough neighborhood (Remember, this world isn't Starmaninja, it's a "what if" half Starmaninja half Earth kind of world.), pretty much like any really rugged city where the guy with the biggest guns and biggest gang ruled the city. When she was very young, she found herself constantly in situations where guys would try to take advantage of her because of her gender and physique, but she usually managed to escape until one fateful day where a few guys all circled her at once. They told her that if she doesn't be good and do what they say, they'll do some "really horrible things" to her. Saluki having witnessed before what kind of guys these types were finally decided to submit to their demand, but with a catch that she wouldn't immediately reveal. The thing was, she knew exactly what these guys wanted, and because they had guns and were a group while she was alone, they could easily have gotten what they wanted, but Saluki knew that there was a way out of having to sit through the horrid scenario. As one of the thugs got closer to her and started to disrobe, she started to submissively bow down right before him (keep in mind, she's submitting because if she resists, they'll just try to forcefully subdue her), and then she opened her mouth (yes...that's what they wanted), and CHOMP! The bite was so forceful, it took her a day to clean the blood off her teeth, but she claims the scream of pain was "music to her ears". The shock of the bite caused the men to start firing like crazy and they ended up killing the guy who got bitten cause he was standing up while she was on the ground. She then jumped up and in the confusion, managed to grab the main guy's gun and immediately shot both of the other two in the head.

Staring at their bodies all on the ground and wiping the blood from her mouth, the police shortly showed up to the scene. They immediately arrested Saluki on charges of murder, but she just said, "Take me, go ahead, your system's so corrupt you'll allow thugs like that to rape people like me, but when I do them justice, I'M the one who goes behind bars..." The police didn't really know how to respond to her assertion, but her extreme lack of resistance made it apparent that she wasn't just being political. "Put me behind bars then. I'll be safer there than I would out here." Was the last thing she said.

While in prison, she spent a lot of her time training herself. She lifted weights, went boxing, and ate heartfully every scrap of food she could get. She managed to be released early when the judge decided that she was indeed acting in self defense (and several feminist groups wanted to bail her out after hearing her story), but she certainly left a deep mark in the prison system that made the police fear to step in her way again. As she left the doors, the police saying "You're free to go", she said, "Free. Hmph, your laws say murder is illegal. But I swear if any creep tries that again, I'm putting them 6 feet under. You decide if you want your laws to protect innocents or not." And with a flick of her wrist, she immediately socked an inmate in the nose, knocking them through the wall nearby, then screaming, "That's for that guy you wanted to "Borrow" money from the other day. You take a life for money...you don't deserve to live..." before storming off back to the city.

At the age of 22, she got a job as a bartender at a rather reputiable tavern. It was known for being a place where guys tend to hit on women a lot, and she kind of serves as an undercover to protect anyone who's putting anyone else in uncomfortable situations. Despite being an innocent enough looking waitress, she secretly finds people who are being overly assertive, takes them to the back room, and ensures they will learn a lesson, or never see daylight again. Morally, she just doesn't see killing as a bad thing because of her past.

It was finally when she saw Sprite, the leader of the Spiritual Ratzus, being harassed by a few guys that Saluki finally decided that enough was enough. She took down  the guys in public this time, killing them with a heavy punch and even ripping one of thier intestines out and strangling them with it. She screamed, "If I hear ONE more person act a fool by MY terms..." but by then, everyone was so afraid to go near her, she seemed almost super natural. The only one who would approach her was Sprite, who wanted to thank her for saving her life. Saluki muttered, "That's it...I can't keep doing this...I have too many names on my list, I gotta get out of this city." Sprite offers to have her travel and see if they can find a "goal" that will alievate Saluki of her pain. Saluki agrees to go, claiming she can't keep doing what she does, but the people of the city are borderline making her a mass murder.

After Saluki leaves the city and really enjoys the company of Sprite, she is finally able to relax herself and show her REAL personality, which ironically is that of an ultra dominatrix. She claims, "You learn to become what you hate so much. It's an ironic part of life, but for some reason, when I do it, there's kind of a thrill to it....well, at least I have the respect to make sure MY mate is okay with it...instead of forcing people..." Her super strength and fearless will does come in handy countless times. She also becomes a rather hardcore lesbian because "She doesn't trust men", but when she comes across a shy and submissive male who IS really respectful, she changes her mantra to, "Oh I like men, just not men who think they're better than me."

Personality: Despite the trauma, Saluki has had the same basic personality type for her whole life. She's a powerful and tough girl who doesn't fear anything, not even death because deep down inside, she has a complex where she feels there's no real point to living in a world where people strive to end your life for selfish fortune. She has a bitter hate for selfish people and cruel people who do anything against others, especially for their own enjoyment, but unlike most people, she's far less passive about how she would deal with anyone who stepped on her toes and didn't say "Excuse me."

Power: Like Skyla, her powers are all based on fantasy. She has incredible strength and an extremely iron will. Though not nearly as strong as a true Starmaninjian, due to the Earth like setting of her home planet, she is strong enough to dent one's skull with one hand and shatter it with the other and not cry when she gets a paper cut (which EVERYONE knows is among the GREATEST of pains you can suffer from a cut.).

Saluki Ratzu is copyright to Kao Ninjaratzu

Notes: Saluki is rather obviously based on Kao's daughter, "Kiara". The concept came from the moment he saw Kiara jump up to attack the humans who were going to shoot Siberia in the head and end up sacrificing her own life because of the attack. In a sense, Saluki is kind of like a "revenge" character he made to sooth the pains that he feels knowing that while he and his daughters managed to find peace in the Starmaninjian realm, they won't be the last ones to suffer from the cruel hands of evil humans who belittle the lives of others (animals or people, or even ideas). He wanted to protray her as realistic on Earth standards to really emphasize the message that he felt when he saw Kiara's sacrifice, but in his story, he wants the essence of Kiara to actually win, but also acknowledge that even in winning, she still doesn't feel victorious.

Saluki is also extremely flirty, but then again, so is Kiara. Kao figured that making her really take control over the one thing that men tend to have a leg up on (sex) was one of the key things that was needed to make Saluki give the impression that no one could dominate her.

IRL, Saluki was inspired ironically by a troll. He used a Rita avatar from Oliver and company in order to trick me into feeling like I met a really attractive girl that liked everything I liked and then revealed that I was talking to a fake for several months to get me to explode and threaten to block him and all that jazz. In the end though, I thought the whole thing was hilarious and ended up making Saluki as a memento cause thanks to him, I fell in love with Rita and remembered how hot and strong she was in Oliver and Company! Initially, she was planned to just be an overly flirty type who had to be kept in check a lot by Suna (kind of a ...gosh...there are millions of examples but I can't think of one. Those stories where you have the self loving protagonist and his "Stay on track!" best friend?), but her backstory was inspired from my increasing depression on how even today, there's still so much trash going on in this world and it's even being glorified in several mediums. I know she seems overkill (literally), but the emphasis is literally what I think is necessary to cure the planet of evil. Literally to purge it. Since her world is fantasy though, I'm not going to mellow her down.", "writing": "", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "", "pools_count": 0, "title": "Spiritual Ratzus: Raised to be on top", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "image/jpeg", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "0", "rating_name": "General", "ratings": [], "submission_type_id": "1", "type_name": "Picture/Pinup", "guest_block": "f", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "0", "views": "4" }