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So what is it that you wanted me to see.\n\nFrame 2: Pearly is look back at Razor, who is now closing his eyes.\n\nPearly: Can't tell you! You just need to trust me and close your eyes.\n\nRazor: Alright, I'm closing them.\n\nFrame 3: Pearly and Razor have risen up to the surface where Razor is now covering his eyes with his arm.\n\nPearly: Here we are! Now you can open them.\n\nRazor: Okay then, but what-\n\nFrame 4: Razor has a surprised look on his face.\n\nRazor: Huh!?\n\nPage 2: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1(big frame): Coral, Echo, Opal, Princess Undina, and Blade are standing in a line outside the Eusebes Shrine and all of them are smiling.\n\nGirls: SURPRISE!!!\n\nFrame 2: Pearly is holding onto Razor's hand and is leading him out of the water. Razor looks confused.\n\nRazor: W-what's all this?\n\nFrame 3: Coral talks with Razor with a smile while Pearly is still holding onto his hand. Razor still looks confused.\n\nCoral: I decided to show some of my appreciation for having you as a friend, so I got all the girls to join us for a picnic!\n\nFrame 4: Razor is rubbing Pearly's head while he talks with Coral.\n\nPearly: And I got to help out, too!\n\nRazor: Thanks, you guys! I don't know what to say.\n\nPage 3: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Echo, Opal, and Blade are going into the Eusebes Shrine while Princess Undina calls out to Coral.\n\nPrincess Undina: Come on! Hurry up, Coral! I can't wait to get into my outfit!\n\nFrame 2: Coral walks off while looking back at Razor, who is showing a confused look again, while her eyes are half-shut. Pearly is catching up with Coral.\n\nRazor: Outfit?\n\nCoral: Just wait here. We'll be back!\n\nFrame 3: Razor is sitting by the picnic on the sand, waiting.\n\nTextbox: Later...\n\nFrame 4: Razor looks surprised.\n\nCoral: Okay, Razor! What do you think?\n\nPage 4: 5 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Coral is wearing a blue, two piece bikini. She is looking at the readers with a sexy smile.\n\nFrame 2: Echo is wearing a revealing one piece swimsuit where her breast are shown through it. She is also looking at the readers with a sexy smile.\n\nFrame 3: Opal is wearing a small bikini that’s only cover her breast and crotch. She is also looking at the readers with a sexy smile.\n\nFrame 4: Blade is wearing a monokini where she is only wearing a thong-like bikini bottom and is topless. She is looking at the viewers with her eyes half-shut and is covering her breast with her arms.\n\nFrame 5: Princess Undina is wearing a thong bikini. She is also looking at the readers with a sexy smile.\n\nPage 5: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Pearly comes up to Razor, wearing a school one-piece swimsuit.\n\nPearly: What do you think of our swimsuits, Razor?\n\nRazor: All of them are very lovely!\n\nFrame 2: Princess Undina is shaking her butt to the readers while Opal is next to her. Opal is lifting up her breasts.\n\nPrincess Undina: But mine is clearly the best, right!\n\nOpal: No way, mine’s the best.\n\nFrame 3: Echo is presenting her one-piece swimsuit while Coral is pulling on the straps of her bikini bottom.\n\nEcho: Hey, I’m the one wearing a tight suit here!\n\nCoral: True. But it’s not a two-piece like mine.\n\nFrame 4: Blade has her hands on her hips, exposing her bare breast.\n\nBlade: Come on, guys! Stop arguing and let’s continue this party! And for the record, mine’s the best because I was daring enough to go topless!\n\nPage 6: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Razor and Coral are playing Volleyball against Princess Undina and Opal.\n\nFrame 2: Pearly and Echo are swimming in the water where Pearly is splashing at Echo.\n\nFrame 3: Coral, Opal, and Blade are in the water. Blade pulls off Coral and Opal’s bras off, revealing their bare bare breast. Coral and Opal blush and look embarrassed while Blade shows a smirk.\n\nFrame 4: Pearly and Razor are building a sand castle while Princess Undina is sun bathing.\n\nPage 7: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Razor, Coral, and Pearly are sitting on blanket on the sand.\n\nRazor: This was a great idea, Coral!\n\nCoral: I’m glad you like it, Razor. This was all meant for you, after all!\n\nFrame 2: Pearly suddenly gets up, looking alarmed. Razor and Coral both look at her.\n\nPearly: Oh, shoot! Look at the time. I have an appointment with Queen Angelica in a few minutes.Sorry, I can’t stay any longer, guys.\n\nFrame 3: Pearly is in the water while Razor calls out to her with a confused look on his face.\n\nRazor: Appointment for what?\n\nPearly: Sorry, Razor! Can’t answer right now. Bye!\n\nFrame 4: Razor looks back at the rest of the girls(who are not in the Frame) with a confused look on his face.\n\nPrincess Undina(off-screen):Finally, I never thought the little girl would leave! Now the real party can start! Strip them off, ladies!\n\nGirls(off-screen): Yes, Princess!\n\nPage 8: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Coral and Opal untie their bikini tops, letting them fall off and reveal their breast.\n\nFrame 2: Princess Undina pulls the two shoulder straps off her thong bikini, revealing her own breast.\n\nFrame 3: Echo takes off her one-piece swimsuit.\n\nEcho: Finally, that outfit was so tight!\n\nFrame 4: Coral, Blade, and Opal are bending down while pull their bikini bottoms down, showing their bare asses to the readers and looking back with sexy smiles.\n\nPage 9: 1 Frame\n\nFrame 1: All the girl’s are standing next to each other, completely naked and looking at the readers with their eye half shut and with sexy smiles.\n\nPage 10: 5 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Razor shows a shocked look with his eyes widened.\n\nRazor: Wha-wha-wha-what are you guys doing!?\n\nFrame 2: Coral goes up to Razor while lifting her breast up and giving him a sexy smile. Razor starts to blush at this.\n\nCoral: That’s for you to decide, Razor! You have 5 sexy ladies here, completely naked and waiting for you to give us orders!\n\nFrame 3: Princess Undina comes up to Razor as well, showing off her bare ass to him.\n\nPrincess Undina: Exactly, Shark-boy! So what do you want us to do? Eat each other’s pussies, suck each other’s tits, have a make-out party?\n\nFrame 4: Blade comes up to Razor from behind, where she rubs her tits on his back.\n\nBlade: Or is there anything you want to do to us? Grope us, spank us, or fuck each of us?\n\nRazor: Um, Blade, aren’t we siblings?\n\nFrame 5: Opal and Echo are by Razor, standing at each side. Both of them are taking arms and rubbing them between their breast.\n\nOpal: Come on, Razor! Don’t be shy!\n\nEcho: Surely, you must have some fantasy that only we can make happen!\n\nPage 11: 5 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Razor is deep in thought while showing a mischievous smile.\n\nRazor: Well, there is one thing that I always wanted to try!\n\nFrame 2", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Title: Ocean Fun
by Kaijufan97

Characters: Razor the Shark, Coral the Beta, Echo the Dolphin, Opal the Jellyfish, Princess Undina, Blade the Shark, Pearly the Manta Ray, and Queen Angelica

Page 1: 4 Frames

Frame 1: In Under water, Pearly is leading Razor up to the surface where Razor is looking confused.

Pearly: Hurry up, Razor!

Razor: I'm coming, Pearly! So what is it that you wanted me to see.

Frame 2: Pearly is look back at Razor, who is now closing his eyes.

Pearly: Can't tell you! You just need to trust me and close your eyes.

Razor: Alright, I'm closing them.

Frame 3: Pearly and Razor have risen up to the surface where Razor is now covering his eyes with his arm.

Pearly: Here we are! Now you can open them.

Razor: Okay then, but what-

Frame 4: Razor has a surprised look on his face.

Razor: Huh!?

Page 2: 4 Frames

Frame 1(big frame): Coral, Echo, Opal, Princess Undina, and Blade are standing in a line outside the Eusebes Shrine and all of them are smiling.

Girls: SURPRISE!!!

Frame 2: Pearly is holding onto Razor's hand and is leading him out of the water. Razor looks confused.

Razor: W-what's all this?

Frame 3: Coral talks with Razor with a smile while Pearly is still holding onto his hand. Razor still looks confused.

Coral: I decided to show some of my appreciation for having you as a friend, so I got all the girls to join us for a picnic!

Frame 4: Razor is rubbing Pearly's head while he talks with Coral.

Pearly: And I got to help out, too!

Razor: Thanks, you guys! I don't know what to say.

Page 3: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Echo, Opal, and Blade are going into the Eusebes Shrine while Princess Undina calls out to Coral.

Princess Undina: Come on! Hurry up, Coral! I can't wait to get into my outfit!

Frame 2: Coral walks off while looking back at Razor, who is showing a confused look again, while her eyes are half-shut. Pearly is catching up with Coral.

Razor: Outfit?

Coral: Just wait here. We'll be back!

Frame 3: Razor is sitting by the picnic on the sand, waiting.

Textbox: Later...

Frame 4: Razor looks surprised.

Coral: Okay, Razor! What do you think?

Page 4: 5 Frames

Frame 1: Coral is wearing a blue, two piece bikini. She is looking at the readers with a sexy smile.

Frame 2: Echo is wearing a revealing one piece swimsuit where her breast are shown through it. She is also looking at the readers with a sexy smile.

Frame 3: Opal is wearing a small bikini that’s only cover her breast and crotch. She is also looking at the readers with a sexy smile.

Frame 4: Blade is wearing a monokini where she is only wearing a thong-like bikini bottom and is topless. She is looking at the viewers with her eyes half-shut and is covering her breast with her arms.

Frame 5: Princess Undina is wearing a thong bikini. She is also looking at the readers with a sexy smile.

Page 5: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Pearly comes up to Razor, wearing a school one-piece swimsuit.

Pearly: What do you think of our swimsuits, Razor?

Razor: All of them are very lovely!

Frame 2: Princess Undina is shaking her butt to the readers while Opal is next to her. Opal is lifting up her breasts.

Princess Undina: But mine is clearly the best, right!

Opal: No way, mine’s the best.

Frame 3: Echo is presenting her one-piece swimsuit while Coral is pulling on the straps of her bikini bottom.

Echo: Hey, I’m the one wearing a tight suit here!

Coral: True. But it’s not a two-piece like mine.

Frame 4: Blade has her hands on her hips, exposing her bare breast.

Blade: Come on, guys! Stop arguing and let’s continue this party! And for the record, mine’s the best because I was daring enough to go topless!

Page 6: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Razor and Coral are playing Volleyball against Princess Undina and Opal.

Frame 2: Pearly and Echo are swimming in the water where Pearly is splashing at Echo.

Frame 3: Coral, Opal, and Blade are in the water. Blade pulls off Coral and Opal’s bras off, revealing their bare bare breast. Coral and Opal blush and look embarrassed while Blade shows a smirk.

Frame 4: Pearly and Razor are building a sand castle while Princess Undina is sun bathing.

Page 7: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Razor, Coral, and Pearly are sitting on blanket on the sand.

Razor: This was a great idea, Coral!

Coral: I’m glad you like it, Razor. This was all meant for you, after all!

Frame 2: Pearly suddenly gets up, looking alarmed. Razor and Coral both look at her.

Pearly: Oh, shoot! Look at the time. I have an appointment with Queen Angelica in a few minutes.Sorry, I can’t stay any longer, guys.

Frame 3: Pearly is in the water while Razor calls out to her with a confused look on his face.

Razor: Appointment for what?

Pearly: Sorry, Razor! Can’t answer right now. Bye!

Frame 4: Razor looks back at the rest of the girls(who are not in the Frame) with a confused look on his face.

Princess Undina(off-screen):Finally, I never thought the little girl would leave! Now the real party can start! Strip them off, ladies!

Girls(off-screen): Yes, Princess!

Page 8: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Coral and Opal untie their bikini tops, letting them fall off and reveal their breast.

Frame 2: Princess Undina pulls the two shoulder straps off her thong bikini, revealing her own breast.

Frame 3: Echo takes off her one-piece swimsuit.

Echo: Finally, that outfit was so tight!

Frame 4: Coral, Blade, and Opal are bending down while pull their bikini bottoms down, showing their bare asses to the readers and looking back with sexy smiles.

Page 9: 1 Frame

Frame 1: All the girl’s are standing next to each other, completely naked and looking at the readers with their eye half shut and with sexy smiles.

Page 10: 5 Frames

Frame 1: Razor shows a shocked look with his eyes widened.

Razor: Wha-wha-wha-what are you guys doing!?

Frame 2: Coral goes up to Razor while lifting her breast up and giving him a sexy smile. Razor starts to blush at this.

Coral: That’s for you to decide, Razor! You have 5 sexy ladies here, completely naked and waiting for you to give us orders!

Frame 3: Princess Undina comes up to Razor as well, showing off her bare ass to him.

Princess Undina: Exactly, Shark-boy! So what do you want us to do? Eat each other’s pussies, suck each other’s tits, have a make-out party?

Frame 4: Blade comes up to Razor from behind, where she rubs her tits on his back.

Blade: Or is there anything you want to do to us? Grope us, spank us, or fuck each of us?

Razor: Um, Blade, aren’t we siblings?

Frame 5: Opal and Echo are by Razor, standing at each side. Both of them are taking arms and rubbing them between their breast.

Opal: Come on, Razor! Don’t be shy!

Echo: Surely, you must have some fantasy that only we can make happen!

Page 11: 5 Frames

Frame 1: Razor is deep in thought while showing a mischievous smile.

Razor: Well, there is one thing that I always wanted to try!

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