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There’s hardly anybone here and I’m losing money for it. I need something to draw customers in.\n\nBaloo: Well, Louie, if you’re really needing customers that bad, about you add some form of sex appeal here?\n\nFrame 2: Louie holds up a pendant while talking with Baloo.\n\nLouie: Sex appeal, you say? I was just going to use this hypnotizing pendant that I found out back to turn people into mindless servan- I mean customers of mine. But keep on talking.\n\nBaloo: I was thinking that maybe you could feature a show with half-naked ladies that could stuff that men will go bonkers over!\n\nLouie: Yeah, such as what?\n\nBaloo: I don’t know, like if a guy spanks all their asses like a set of bongo drums maybe?\n\nFrame 3: Louie is deep in thought while Baloo looks at him.\n\nLouie: Butt bongos, eh? I love it! But I can’t think of any girls who have the best asses for such an event. How about you, Baloo? Know any girls?\n\nBaloo: Well, there’s Rebecca, and some other girls I met in the past. But they’ll never agree to do that!\n\nFrame 4: Louie gives Baloo the pendant.\n\nLouie: Here, try using this on them.\n\nBaloo: You mean, I shoul hypnotize them? I don’t know, if they find out about this I could be in serious-\n\nLouie: If you do it, I’ll let you be the drummer/spanker!\n\nBaloo: I’m in!\n\nPage 2: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Baloo enters into Rebecca’s office. Rebecca shows an annoyed look on her face.\n\nBaloo: Hello, Rebecca!\n\nRebecca: Baloo, what are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be making deliveries?\n\nFrame 2: Baloo takes out the pendant and shows it in front of Rebecca’s face.\n\nBaloo: In due time, but first, take a look of this?\n\nRebecca: What is that?\n\nBaloo: Just listen to my voice, Rebecca! You will be my servant! You will allow me to use your bare ass as a bongo drum! You will pull down your pants and panties to expose your naked rump! You will allow me to spank each ass cheek as a bongo drum. No matter how hard I spank you, and how agonizing the pain is, you will accept it!\n\nFrame 3: Rebecca shows a swirls in her eyes as she is now hypnotized.\n\nRebecca: I will be your servant! I will allow you to use my bare ass a bongo drum! I will pull down my pants and panties to expose my naked rump! I will allow you to spank each ass cheek as a bongo drum. No matter how hard you spank me, and how agonizing the pain is, I will accept it!\n\n\nFrame 4: Baloo looks at the pendant while Rebecca is staring out with swirls in her eyes.\n\nBaloo: Wow, this thing really does work! And good thing too, because that is something that you should not say to your boss! Now for the other girls...\n\nPage 3: 4 Frames\n\nFrame 1: At an excavation area, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Katie Dodd‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.\n\nTextbox: Katie Dodd\n\nKatie Dodd: I will be your servant! I will allow you to use my bare ass a bongo drum!\n\nFrame 2: Outside a pyramid, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Myra Foxworthy‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.\n\nMyra Foxworthy: I will pull down my pants and panties to expose my naked rump!\n\nFrame 3: Outside a mansion, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Muffy Vanderschmere‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.\n\nMuffy Vanderschmere: I will allow you to spank each ass cheek as a bongo drum.\n\nFrame 4: Outside of Macadamia, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Lotta Lamour‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.\n\nLotta Lamour: No matter how hard you spank me, and how agonizing the pain is, I will accept it!\n\nPage 4: 3 Frames\n\nFrame 1: In Rebecca’s office, all the girls are lined up and Baloo is standing in front of them. The girls have blank expressions on their faces.\n\nBaloo: Okay, ladies, the performance is tomorrow night so we should start practicing. Pull your pants and panties down with your hands on the wall. And stick your bare asses out!\n\nFrame 2: The girls have their hands on the wall where their pants and panties are pulled down, exposing their bare asses. They are all looking back with their eyes half-shut.\n\nBaloo(off-screen): Perfect!\n\nFrame 3: Baloo cracks his fingers while showing a mischievous look in his face.\n\nBaloo: Now, let’s begin!\n\nPage 5: 1 Frame\n\nFrame 1(Entire Page): Baloo starts spanking the girls’ bare asses like a set of bongos, making each of their bare asses red and leaving behind spank marks. Each of the girls are showing painful expressions while yelling out.\n\nPage 6: 5 Frames\n\nFrame 1: Baloo’s hands are spanking Rebecca’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.\n\nFrame 2: Baloo’s hands are spanking Katie’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.\n\nFrame 3: Baloo’s hands are spanking Myra’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.\n\nFrame 4: Baloo’s hands are spanking Muffy’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.\n\nFrame 5: Baloo’s hands are spanking Lotta’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.\n\nPage 7:", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Title: Bongos
by
Kaijufan97



Characters: Baloo, Rebecca, Katie Dodd, Myra Foxworthy, Muffy Vanderschmere, Lotta Lamour

Page 1: 4 Frames

Frame 1: At Louie’s Place, Baloo and Louie are sitting at the bar.

Louie: Man, my business ain’t doing too good tonight. There’s hardly anybone here and I’m losing money for it. I need something to draw customers in.

Baloo: Well, Louie, if you’re really needing customers that bad, about you add some form of sex appeal here?

Frame 2: Louie holds up a pendant while talking with Baloo.

Louie: Sex appeal, you say? I was just going to use this hypnotizing pendant that I found out back to turn people into mindless servan- I mean customers of mine. But keep on talking.

Baloo: I was thinking that maybe you could feature a show with half-naked ladies that could stuff that men will go bonkers over!

Louie: Yeah, such as what?

Baloo: I don’t know, like if a guy spanks all their asses like a set of bongo drums maybe?

Frame 3: Louie is deep in thought while Baloo looks at him.

Louie: Butt bongos, eh? I love it! But I can’t think of any girls who have the best asses for such an event. How about you, Baloo? Know any girls?

Baloo: Well, there’s Rebecca, and some other girls I met in the past. But they’ll never agree to do that!

Frame 4: Louie gives Baloo the pendant.

Louie: Here, try using this on them.

Baloo: You mean, I shoul hypnotize them? I don’t know, if they find out about this I could be in serious-

Louie: If you do it, I’ll let you be the drummer/spanker!

Baloo: I’m in!

Page 2: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Baloo enters into Rebecca’s office. Rebecca shows an annoyed look on her face.

Baloo: Hello, Rebecca!

Rebecca: Baloo, what are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be making deliveries?

Frame 2: Baloo takes out the pendant and shows it in front of Rebecca’s face.

Baloo: In due time, but first, take a look of this?

Rebecca: What is that?

Baloo: Just listen to my voice, Rebecca! You will be my servant! You will allow me to use your bare ass as a bongo drum! You will pull down your pants and panties to expose your naked rump! You will allow me to spank each ass cheek as a bongo drum. No matter how hard I spank you, and how agonizing the pain is, you will accept it!

Frame 3: Rebecca shows a swirls in her eyes as she is now hypnotized.

Rebecca: I will be your servant! I will allow you to use my bare ass a bongo drum! I will pull down my pants and panties to expose my naked rump! I will allow you to spank each ass cheek as a bongo drum. No matter how hard you spank me, and how agonizing the pain is, I will accept it!


Frame 4: Baloo looks at the pendant while Rebecca is staring out with swirls in her eyes.

Baloo: Wow, this thing really does work! And good thing too, because that is something that you should not say to your boss! Now for the other girls...

Page 3: 4 Frames

Frame 1: At an excavation area, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Katie Dodd‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.

Textbox: Katie Dodd

Katie Dodd: I will be your servant! I will allow you to use my bare ass a bongo drum!

Frame 2: Outside a pyramid, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Myra Foxworthy‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.

Myra Foxworthy: I will pull down my pants and panties to expose my naked rump!

Frame 3: Outside a mansion, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Muffy Vanderschmere‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.

Muffy Vanderschmere: I will allow you to spank each ass cheek as a bongo drum.

Frame 4: Outside of Macadamia, Baloo’s arm is holding the pendant in front of Lotta Lamour‘s face, where her eyes have swirls in them.

Lotta Lamour: No matter how hard you spank me, and how agonizing the pain is, I will accept it!

Page 4: 3 Frames

Frame 1: In Rebecca’s office, all the girls are lined up and Baloo is standing in front of them. The girls have blank expressions on their faces.

Baloo: Okay, ladies, the performance is tomorrow night so we should start practicing. Pull your pants and panties down with your hands on the wall. And stick your bare asses out!

Frame 2: The girls have their hands on the wall where their pants and panties are pulled down, exposing their bare asses. They are all looking back with their eyes half-shut.

Baloo(off-screen): Perfect!

Frame 3: Baloo cracks his fingers while showing a mischievous look in his face.

Baloo: Now, let’s begin!

Page 5: 1 Frame

Frame 1(Entire Page): Baloo starts spanking the girls’ bare asses like a set of bongos, making each of their bare asses red and leaving behind spank marks. Each of the girls are showing painful expressions while yelling out.

Page 6: 5 Frames

Frame 1: Baloo’s hands are spanking Rebecca’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.

Frame 2: Baloo’s hands are spanking Katie’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.

Frame 3: Baloo’s hands are spanking Myra’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.

Frame 4: Baloo’s hands are spanking Muffy’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.

Frame 5: Baloo’s hands are spanking Lotta’s bare reddened butt cheeks like a bongos drum.

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