

Title: A Night With Rivet
By
Kaijufan97 


Characters: Ratchet and Rivet


Page 1: 4 Frames

Frame 1: An outside view of Rivet’s house at night time.

Rivet(off-screen): I’m sure glad you decided to come over, Ratchet. I’ve been wanting us to hang out for while.

Frame 2: Ratchet and Rivet enter into Rivet’s room. Ratchet is looking around while Rivet is bending over to pick something up while look back at Ratchet.

Ratchet: So what is it you want to do tonight, Rivet?

Rivet: Well, there’s something I actually wanted us to do together, if you’re really up for it that is.


Frame 3: Rivet holds up a big book titled “How To Do BDSM”. She is showing a happy smile on her face.

Rivet: Have you ever heard of bdsm, Ratchet?

Frame 4: Ratchet is looking at Rivet with a smirk on his face while Rivet is looking away and is blushing while showing an embarrassed smile on her face.

Ratchet: And you just happen to have a book about bdsm laying around in your room?

Rivet: Well, I might secretly have a bdsm fetish, but I never actually got the chance to perform any of it. I was kind of hoping… well, you know.

Ratchet: Alright, Rivet, let’s give it a try.


Page 2: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Ratchet and Rivet start changing out of their clothes where Ratchet is taking his shirt off and Rivet is pulling her pants down, revealing her bare ass to the screen.

Rivet: In order for this work, one of us has to be the dominant one. So how about we takes turns?

Ratchet: Why don’t you go first, this was your idea after all?

Rivet: Alright, if you insist.

Frame 2: Ratchet is laying in the bed, completely naked, where his wrists are cuffed to the bed posts. He is also blindfolded and is showing a smile on his face.

Rivet: You ready, Ratchet?

Ratchet: Ready for anything, Rivet.

Frame 2: Rivet, who is now wearing a dominatrix outfit, swings the whip behind her where she shows a serious look on her face.

Rivet: That’s Mistress Rivet to you, slave! I’m going to have to punish-

Frame 3: Rivet accidentally whips her own ass upon swinging back the Whip she’s holding behind her. She is showing a comedically painful look on her face. 

Rivet: AAAGGGHHH!!!

Frame 4: Rivet drops the whip and is now rubbing her own ass. Ratchet looks at her with a concern look on his face while still blindfolded. Rivet is showing painful look on hers while still rubbing her ass.

Ratchet: Are you okay, Rivet? That sounded like you accidentally whipped yourself.

Rivet: I’m fine! I just never used a whip before. Maybe I shouldn’t have started with that.

Page 3: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Rivet slides her panties off, exposing her bare pussy, while she’s still wearing a dominatrix outfit.

Rivet: You know what, forget the toys! Let’s just get this started right away.

Frame 2: Rivet is above Ratchet with her ass right above his face. She is about to sit on his face. Ratchet is still blindfolded while his wrists are still cuffed to the bed posts. 

Rivet: Have you ever gotten your face sat on by a girl, Ratchet?

Ratchet: Well, no actually.

Rivet: Good! 

Frame 3: Rivet’s ass fully sits on Ratchet’s face. The rest of her body is not shown in the frame.

Rivet(off-screen): Then this will be a brand new experience for you. Now start licking, Slave!

Frame 4: Ratchet starts eating out of Rivet’s pussy while she’s still sitting on his face.

Page 4: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Rivet is moaning out while blushing as Ratchet is eating out of her pussy while she’s still sitting on his face. Ratchet is still blindfolded.

Rivet: Oh my! So this is what cunnilingus feels like! 

Frame 2: A close-up view on Rivet’s pussy where Ratchet continues licking her pussy. Her pussy is now wet.

Frame 3: Rivet is now laying on top of Ratchet in a 69 Position where she is gripping his member with both of her hands.

Rivet: While you enjoy your Mistress’ pussy, I’m going to enjoy your big friend here.

Frame 4: Rivet starts licking Ratchet’s member like a popsicle while she looks back.

Rivet: And no cumming until I say you do.

Page 5: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Ratchet continues eating out of Rivet’s pussy in a 69 Position while he’s still blindfolded.

Frame 2: Rivet is sucking on Ratchet’s member in a 69 Position.

Frame 3: A full-view of Rivet and Ratchet in a 69 Position on the bed with Rivet on top where she’s sucking on his erected member and Ratchet is eating out of her pussy. Ratchet is still blindfolded and his wrists are still cuffed to the bed posts.

Frame 4: Rivet is now squatting over Ratchet’s pelvis where she’s aligning his erected member to her anus.

Rivet: Since you were such a good boy for not cumming, I’m going to allow you to enjoy your mistress’ ass!

Ratchet: Yes! Thank you, Mistress Rivet!

Page 6: 4 Frames

Frame 1: A close-up on Ratchet’s erected member where Rivet is lowering her pelvis on to penetrate his member in her anus. The rest of their bodies are not shown in the frame.

Frame 2: A view of Rivet’s face where she is showing a confident smile on her face.

Frame 3: A close-up on Rivet anally penetrating herself on the tip of Ratchet’s erected member.

Frame 4: Another view on Rivet’s face where her confident look has now changed to a shocked/painful look while blushing. Her eyes are also widened with her pupils shrunken down.

Page 7: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Ratchet is showing a happy look on his face while still blindfolded and his wrists are stilled cuffed to the bedposts while Rivet is showing a painful look on her face while she’s still penetrating herself anally on the tip of Ratchet’s member.

Ratchet: Oh, Rivet, that feels so good. But why did you stop on just the tip?

Rivet: That’s just the tip!?

Frame 2: Rivet anally penetrates herself deeper onto Ratchet’s member. She is looking back with one of her eyes shut tight and is forcing a smile on her face. She is also blushing.

Ratchet: Is everything okay, Rivet. It sounds like you’re an anal virgin.

Rivet: I’m okay! I’m just, um, torturing you by going really slow.

Frame 3: Ratchet is now fucking Rivet anally while he’s still blindfolded and his wrists are cuffed to the bedposts. Rivet is still showing a painful look while forcing a smile on her face and her eyes start tearing up.

Ratchet: Oh, Mistress Rivet, this is so awesome!

Rivet: Th-that’s right, y-you better enjoy it!

Rivet’s Thoughts: Ow! Ow! Ow! This hurts so much! Why does he have to be this big!

Frame 4: Rivet is suddenly showing an alarmed look on her face with her eyes widened and her pupils shrunken down. She and Ratchet are still fucking anally.

Ratchet: Oh, forgive me, Mistress Rivet! But I can’t hold it in much longer! I’m going…

Rivet: What! No, wait! Not in my-

Page 8: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Ratchet cums inside of Rivet’s anus while he’s stilled blindfolded and his wrists are cuffed to the bedposts. They’re both moaning out loud.

Rivet & Ratchet: Aaaaaaahhhhhhh!

Frame 2: Rivet is now unlocking Rachet’s cuffs while she is blushing. Ratchet is showing a happy smile on his face.

Ratchet: Sorry for cumming without your permission, Mistress Rivet! Am I going to be punished now?

Rivet: Um, you know what, Ratchet, why don’t we switch turns already.

Frame 3: Ratchet, who is no longer blindfolded, is sitting up and rubbing his wrists from the handcuffs as he talks to Rivet, who is showing sheepish smile at him.

Ratchet: Already? Are you sure?

Rivet: Well, it’s just that since you were such a good submissive slave, I decided to let you be the dominant one for the rest of the night.

Ratchet: Well, alright then. If that’s really what you want.

Frame 4: Ratchet suddenly grabs Rivet’s arm and shows a mischievous smile on his face at her. Rivet is looking back at him with a scared look on her face.

Rivet: Great! Let me just take this outfit off-

Ratchet: Don’t! I actually love the idea of dominating a dominatrix.

Rivet’s Thought: Uh-oh. Now I’m starting to regret tonight.

Page 9:

Frame 1: Rivet is now tied up in a rope harness with her arms tied behind her back while laying on the bed. She is still wearing her dominatrix outfit but is also still bottomless. She is showing a sheepish smile on her face while also looking a little worried.

Rivet: So, um, just what are you planning to do to me, Ratchet?

Frame 2: Ratchet is now sitting on the edge of the bed and has Rivet laid across his lap while she’s still tied in a rope harness with her arms tied up behind her back. Rivet is showing a surprised look on her face. Ratchet has his hand high up in the air.

Ratchet: First, I intend to punish the dominatrix!

Frame 3: A close-up on Rivet’s bare ass where Ratchet’s hand spanks one of her butt cheeks.(Sound Effect: SLAP)

Frame 4: Rivet is biting on her lower lip as she reacts to the butt slap. She is also blushing.

Rivet: Eep!

Frame 10:

Frame 1: Ratchet raises his hand up again while he’s still sitting on the edge of the bed with Rivet is still laid across his lap. She has a red hand print on one of her butt cheeks. Rivet is looking back with a painful look on her face and with her eyes half closed.

Rivet: I had no idea you were into spanking.

Ratchet: Well, let’s just say I love seeing a girl’s exposed butt turning red from a nice, hard, spanking.

Frame 2: Ratchet spanks Rivet’s bare ass again, slapping her other butt cheek, where she yells out in pain with her eyes widened. Her bare ass is shown to the frame as it starts turning red.(Sound Effect: SLAP)

Rivet: Ah!

Frame 3: A close-up on Rivet’s bare ass where Ratchet’s hand slaps her butt cheek again. Her butt cheeks are turning red from the spanking. (Sound Effect: SLAP)

Frame 4: Rivet has her eyes shut tightly as she yells out again in pain.

Rivet: Ow!

Page 11: 4 Frames

Frame 1: A view of Rivet’s bare reddened ass while she’s still laying across Ratchet’s lap. Ratchet is lifting his hand up from Rivet’s reddened ass. Ratchet’s head is not shown in the frame. Rivet is looking away from the screen.

Ratchet(off-screen): Your ass is turning into a nice shade of red, Rivet.


Frame 2: Ratchet continues spanking Rivet’s ass as her butt cheeks are turning red now. Rivet has her eyes shut tightly and is also biting on her lower lip. Her bare reddened ass is facing the screen. (Sound Effect: SLAP)

Rivet: Nngh!

Frame 3: Rivet is now in a Face Down Ass Up Position on the bed where she’s laying on her chest and knees while still tied up in a rope harness with her arms tied behind her back. She also has her bare ass sticking up in the air. Ratchet is sitting on his knees behind her where he’s crossing his arms in front of his chest. He is looking down at Rivet with a sinister smile while Rivet is looking back with a worried look on her face.

Rivet: What are you doing now?

Ratchet: Something I always wanted to do…

Frame 4: Ratchet starts using both of his hand to drum Rivet’s butt cheeks like a bongo drum, spanking her in the process. Ratchet is showing a playful smile on his face as he continues drumming Rivet’s reddened butt cheeks like a bongo drum. Rivet’s upper body half is not shown in the frame while Ratchet’s lower body half is not shown in the frame either. (Sound Effect: SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP)

Ratchet: Butt bongos!

Page 12: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Rivet is still laying on the bed on her chest and knees with her bare ass sticking up in the air. Ratchet is drumming her reddened butt cheeks as if he’s playing a bongo drum, spanking her in the process. Rivet is showing a painful look on her face with her eyes widened and is yelling out in pain. Ratchet is showing a playful look on his face. Ratchet’s lower body is not shown in the frame. (Sound Effect: SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP)

Rivet: Aaaaaaahhhhhh! Ratchet! Ratchet! Stop! Aaaawwww! Please! Ratchet!

Frame 2: A close-up on Rivet’s reddened butt cheeks where Ratchet’s right hand smacks her right butt cheek. The rest of their bodies are not shown in the frame.(Sound Effects: Slap)

Frame 3: Still a close-up on Rivet’s reddened butt cheeks only now Ratchet’s left hand smacks her left butt cheek. The rest of their bodies are not shown in the frame.(Sound Effect: Slap)

Frame 4: Ratchet continues drumming Rivet’s reddened butt cheeks like a bongo drum while her bare ass is sticking up in the air in front of him, still spanking her in the process. Rivet’s upper body half is not shown in the frame while Ratchet’s lower body half is not shown in the frame either. (Sound Effect: SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP, SLAP)

Ratchet: Your butt makes a great bongo drum, Rivet. It makes the best sounds with each slap!

Page 13: 4 Frames

Frame 1: A view of Rivet’s bare ass while she’s still in a Face Down Ass Up Position with her ass sticking up in the air. She is still wearing a rope harness with her hands tied behind her back. Her butt cheeks are all red and are covered with several red hand prints all over.

Rivet: Ow! Ow! Ow! You really did a number on my ass!

Ratchet(off-screen): Well, this is just the beginning.

Frame 2: Rivet is now tied up in a Frogtie Position where Ratchet is undressing her out of her dominatrix outfit.

Frame 3: Ratchet is now groping Rivet’s bare breasts and fingering her pussy while she’s still tied up in a Frogtie Position.

Frame 4: Rivet is now suspended to the ceiling by chains cuffed to her wrists and she is ballgaged. Ratchet is using the whip to whip her naked body. Rivet is showing a painful look on her face.(Sound Effect: Snap, Crack)

Ratchet: This is how you use whip, Slave!

Page 14: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Rivet is still suspended to the ceiling where Ratchet whips her back with the whip. She is still wearing the ballgag in her mouth. (Sound Effect: Snap)

Frame 2: A close-up on Rivet’s reddened ass getting whipped. (Sound Effect: Crack)

Frame 3: Ratchet spanks River’s ass with a paddle while she’s still suspended to the cieling. Rivet shows a painful look on her face again.

Frame 4: Rivet is now tied up in a Ball Tie Position where she’s still Ballgagged but is now also blindfolded. She is laying on the bed.


Page 15: 4 Frames

Frame 1: Ratchet starts fucking Rivet’s pussy while she’s still tied up in a Ball Tie Position while also ballgagged and blindfolded. Rivet is laying on the bed on her back while Ratchet is fucking her pussy.

Frame 2: Ratchet is now sitting down on the mattress where he’s now fucking Rivet’s pussy in a Sitting Position where he’s grabbing her hips. Rivet is facing away from Ratchet while he’s using her like a sex toy.

Ratchet: Are you enjoying being my living sex toy, Rivet?

Frame 3: Rivet is now tied up in a Leapfrog Position on the bed where Ratchet is still fucking her pussy. Rivet is still blindfolded and ballgagged.

Frame 4: Ratchet is now fucking Rivet’s pussy in a Missionary Position on the mattress where her wrists are tied over head head. She is still blindfolded and ballgagged.

Page 16:

Frame 1: Ratchet continues fucking Rivet’s pussy in a Missionary Position on the bed while she’s still ballgagged and blindfolded and her wrists are still tied over her head.

Ratchet: Oh, Rivet! I’m going to cum again.

Frame 2: Ratchet cums inside of Rivet’s pussy as he makes one last thrust into her. Ratchet is moaning out loud while Rivet is moaning out through her ballgag and is also blushing.

Frame 3: A view of Rivet’s pussy where Ratchet’s cum is leaking out of her. She is still ballgagged and blindfolded with her wrists tied over her head.

Ratchet(off-screen): Mmm, that was awesome, Rivet! I hope you enjoyed that as much as I did.

Frame 4: In the morning, Ratchet, who is now fully clothed, is sitting on a chair in Rivet’s house where he’s holding a plate of pancakes and is eating them. Only his upper body half is shown in the frame.

Textbox: The next morning…

Ratchet: Mmm, these are some great pancakes you made, Rivet.

Page 17:

Frame 1: A full view of the last frame where it’s revealed Rivet is still fully naked and is on all four in front of Ratchet while facing his right side, presenting her bare ass to the screen. Ratchet is still sitting on the chair and eating the plate of pancakes. Ratchet is laying his feet on Rivet’s back while Rivet is looking back over her left shoulder at him.

Rivet: I’m glad you enjoyed them, Ratchet, but how much longer are you going to keep me as your slave?

Ratchet: We can stop this if you want. Or maybe I could take you to my house and you can continue being my sex slave for the whole day.

Rivet: Well…

Frame 2: Ratchet is now exiting out of Rivet’s door where he’s carrying Rivet, who is still fully nude. Rivet is tied up in a Hogtie Position and is facing the opposite direction of Ratchet. Ratchet is carrying her like luggage where he’s carrying her by the rope she’s tied up in over his shoulder. Ratchet is showing a happy smile while Rivet is looking embarrassed while also blushing.

Rivet: Ratchet, wait! When I said yes, I don’t mean out in public! You can’t take me to your house like this! Not in broad daylight! Ratchet!!!

The End.
















