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Fucking finally, after ages, I've finished Ricky's part. My apologies for no actual sex in this one. I don't feel ready at all for sex stories. I'd end up making myself look like a right tube if I tried.

EDIT 23/07/2018: Placed in 'Scraps'.", "writing": "Part 1: Ricky Hamilton vs Mina Mongoose\nWriting songs isn’t as easy as you’d think, a fact that Mina Mongoose was struggling with at that very moment. She scrunched up the sheet of paper she had been trying to write on and hurled it across the trailer in the vague direction of the wastebasket, where it joined about twenty other similarly-discarded pieces of paper in a sort of idea graveyard.\n\nThe mongoose held her head in her hands and cried silently. Ever since Ash had left her, she had been like this. Ever since she had come into the trailer after a gig to find him balls deep in a fan, she had felt betrayed, and as such, her songwriting skills had suffered. Every lyric she wrote was now about betrayal, heartbreak, loss, [i]stabbing cheating pricks with a box cutter…\n[/i]\nThere came three sharp knocks on the trailer door, followed by a male voice. “Um… hullo? Miss Mina?”\n\nMina looked up. Who could be calling her at this time of the night? Wiping her eyes, she got up, made her way over to the door of the trailer and opened it.\n\nShe was greeted with a most unusual sight. Filling up the doorway was what appeared to be a snake… in an orange and green snake outfit.\n\nThere was a minute of echoing silence as the two stared at each other. \n\nThen Ricky struck.\n\nLeaping forward, the Copperhead masquerader speared the helpless mongoose to the ground, holding her limbs down.\n\n“Get off of me, you freak!” she screeched, struggling to throw off the much heavier rattlesnake. As she wriggled and writhed under him, Ricky quickly pulled out the Bimbofication lipstick, prepped it, and drew a hasty evergreen line across her mouth.\n\nAs soon as the evergreen lipstick touched her lips, the mongoose ceased her movements. Her eyes glazed over. Her arms rose up, her hands reaching up to his neck, fully intent on strangling him. Disjointed words came out of her mouth.\n\n“Won’t… let you... so… [i]wrong[/I]… I’m… I’M…”\n\nBut, as her hands found his throat, she paused.\n\n“…[i]so sorry[/I]!” And with that, she removed her hands from his neck and flung herself around him.\n\n“[i]Jumping Jesus, this stuff actually WORKS[/I]!” thought Ricky, as Mina’s arms enclosed around him. He put on a nice, soft voice and spoke to her.\n\n“My dear, that’s quite alright!” he said, wrapping his arms around her and hugging her back. In response, she buried her face into his scaly chest.\n\n“I… I just don’t know what came over me!”\n\n“Again, that’s quite alright,” Ricky said. “You just… weren’t yourself!”\n\n“Could I make it up to you somehow?”\n\n“I’m sure we can work something out.”\n\nAnd then, something fantastically arousing happened: Mina finally got her top off. As it came off, her newly-acquired golden basketballs came free and bounced in place as she pulled the tank top over her head. This entire beautiful scene seemed to happen in slow-motion to Ricky, whose eyes were wide and jaw was slightly open. Mina turned towards the vanity mirror on the wall behind her and began to smush her tits with her hands, admiring their size.\n\n“Look at ‘em bounce! They’re so soft!”\n\nStruck by a sudden idea, Ricky snatched up the Broad Beam, aimed it at the mongoose once more and pulled the trigger.\n\n“Aanh!”\n\nAgain, the beam hit her, again she squealed and again a couple of ridiculously sized orbs grew upon her body. But this time, it was her shorts that were filling out. \n\nHer shorts were now looking uncomfortably tight at the backside. Noticing this, Mina instantly loosened her belt and wrenched them down. Her panties, which were mint green, had all but vanished in-between her monstrous golden buns as they stopped expanding.\n\n“So sweetheart, you ready to break a few of the laws of nature?”\n\n“Jesus, you’re keen!” said Ricky, taken aback by the pop singers sudden change in attitude from “I’m sorry for trying to kill you!” to “Let’s make babies!”\n\n“Well,” said Mina, shifting away from the mirror, her green eyes suddenly half-shut in a sultry way. “I have to find a way to repay you [i]somehow[/I]…”\n\nWithout warning, the half-naked mongoose tackled Ricky, showing incredible speed and strength and sending them both flying backwards. Luckily for the both of them, Mina had speared him towards her bed. They crashed onto Mina’s bed, with Mina straddling him, holding him firmly down.\n\n“[i]I’ve got you now[/I],” Mina’s nose was a nanometre from Ricky’s snout now. Ricky’s heart was thundering now, out of both fear and excitement. The fact that Mina’s new supertits were helping to pin him down was not helping. “Any last requests before we get it on?”\n\n“Yes: Leave some of me left to be identified!”\n\n[i]Four hours later[/I]…\n\nHe heaved his dead legs over the side of the bed, an impressive feat, considering that the other occupant of the bed had reduced his pelvis to dust.\n\nAs he stood up off the bed, he turned to look back and saw a fantastic sight: Mina was hugging her pillow and, with her ridiculous rack, her fat bumcheeks and her massive belly filled with his sperm, she looked utterly content with life.\n\nIf she would stay facing that way for the rest of the night, none of her bandmates would notice the protuberance in her midriff. Her ridiculously quick metabolism would get rid of the behemoth blob of bollock butter before she woke up.\n\nHe went through to the bathroom and chuckled softly at his reflection in the mirror. His face was covered in green lipstick, as was his neck and his chest.\n\nGetting a bit of toilet roll and wetting it in the sink, he went back to his slumbering mongoose and gently, so as not to wake her, wiped the green Bimbo Lipstick off of her mouth. He crossed the room to the desk under the vanity mirror, took up the Broad Beam and reached for the “deflate” button. But before he did, he sat back down beside Mina and tucked her into the bed.\n\n“I hate to love you and leave you, sweet-cheeks, but I’m afraid I [i]have[/I] to.”\n\nClicking the “deflate” button of the Broad Beam, Ricky left the bus as the mongoose’s titanic tits and meaty cheeks deflated to their normal size under the bedclothes.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Part 1: Ricky Hamilton vs Mina Mongoose
Writing songs isn’t as easy as you’d think, a fact that Mina Mongoose was struggling with at that very moment. She scrunched up the sheet of paper she had been trying to write on and hurled it across the trailer in the vague direction of the wastebasket, where it joined about twenty other similarly-discarded pieces of paper in a sort of idea graveyard.

The mongoose held her head in her hands and cried silently. Ever since Ash had left her, she had been like this. Ever since she had come into the trailer after a gig to find him balls deep in a fan, she had felt betrayed, and as such, her songwriting skills had suffered. Every lyric she wrote was now about betrayal, heartbreak, loss, stabbing cheating pricks with a box cutter…

There came three sharp knocks on the trailer door, followed by a male voice. “Um… hullo? Miss Mina?”

Mina looked up. Who could be calling her at this time of the night? Wiping her eyes, she got up, made her way over to the door of the trailer and opened it.

She was greeted with a most unusual sight. Filling up the doorway was what appeared to be a snake… in an orange and green snake outfit.

There was a minute of echoing silence as the two stared at each other.

Then Ricky struck.

Leaping forward, the Copperhead masquerader speared the helpless mongoose to the ground, holding her limbs down.

“Get off of me, you freak!” she screeched, struggling to throw off the much heavier rattlesnake. As she wriggled and writhed under him, Ricky quickly pulled out the Bimbofication lipstick, prepped it, and drew a hasty evergreen line across her mouth.

As soon as the evergreen lipstick touched her lips, the mongoose ceased her movements. Her eyes glazed over. Her arms rose up, her hands reaching up to his neck, fully intent on strangling him. Disjointed words came out of her mouth.

“Won’t… let you... so… wrong… I’m… I’M…”

But, as her hands found his throat, she paused.

“…so sorry!” And with that, she removed her hands from his neck and flung herself around him.

“Jumping Jesus, this stuff actually WORKS!” thought Ricky, as Mina’s arms enclosed around him. He put on a nice, soft voice and spoke to her.

“My dear, that’s quite alright!” he said, wrapping his arms around her and hugging her back. In response, she buried her face into his scaly chest.

“I… I just don’t know what came over me!”

“Again, that’s quite alright,” Ricky said. “You just… weren’t yourself!”

“Could I make it up to you somehow?”

“I’m sure we can work something out.”

And then, something fantastically arousing happened: Mina finally got her top off. As it came off, her newly-acquired golden basketballs came free and bounced in place as she pulled the tank top over her head.  This entire beautiful scene seemed to happen in slow-motion to Ricky, whose eyes were wide and jaw was slightly open. Mina turned towards the vanity mirror on the wall behind her and began to smush her tits with her hands, admiring their size.

“Look at ‘em bounce! They’re so soft!”

Struck by a sudden idea, Ricky snatched up the Broad Beam, aimed it at the mongoose once more and pulled the trigger.

“Aanh!”

Again, the beam hit her, again she squealed and again a couple of ridiculously sized orbs grew upon her body. But this time, it was her shorts that were filling out.

Her shorts were now looking uncomfortably tight at the backside. Noticing this, Mina instantly loosened her belt and wrenched them down. Her panties, which were mint green, had all but vanished in-between her monstrous golden buns as they stopped expanding.

“So sweetheart, you ready to break a few of the laws of nature?”

“Jesus, you’re keen!” said Ricky, taken aback by the pop singers sudden change in attitude from “I’m sorry for trying to kill you!” to “Let’s make babies!”

“Well,” said Mina, shifting away from the mirror, her green eyes suddenly half-shut in a sultry way. “I have to find a way to repay you somehow…”

Without warning, the half-naked mongoose tackled Ricky, showing incredible speed and strength and sending them both flying backwards. Luckily for the both of them, Mina had speared him towards her bed. They crashed onto Mina’s bed, with Mina straddling him, holding him firmly down.

“I’ve got you now,” Mina’s nose was a nanometre from Ricky’s snout now. Ricky’s heart was thundering now, out of both fear and excitement. The fact that Mina’s new supertits were helping to pin him down was not helping. “Any last requests before we get it on?”

“Yes: Leave some of me left to be identified!”

Four hours later…

He heaved his dead legs over the side of the bed, an impressive feat, considering that the other occupant of the bed had reduced his pelvis to dust.

As he stood up off the bed, he turned to look back and saw a fantastic sight: Mina was hugging her pillow and, with her ridiculous rack, her fat bumcheeks and her massive belly filled with his sperm, she looked utterly content with life.

If she would stay facing that way for the rest of the night, none of her bandmates would notice the protuberance in her midriff. Her ridiculously quick metabolism would get rid of the behemoth blob of bollock butter before she woke up.

He went through to the bathroom and chuckled softly at his reflection in the mirror. His face was covered in green lipstick, as was his neck and his chest.

Getting a bit of toilet roll and wetting it in the sink, he went back to his slumbering mongoose and gently, so as not to wake her, wiped the green Bimbo Lipstick off of her mouth. He crossed the room to the desk under the vanity mirror, took up the Broad Beam and reached for the “deflate” button. But before he did, he sat back down beside Mina and tucked her into the bed.

“I hate to love you and leave you, sweet-cheeks, but I’m afraid I have to.”

Clicking the “deflate” button of the Broad Beam, Ricky left the bus as the mongoose’s titanic tits and meaty cheeks deflated to their normal size under the bedclothes.
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