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", "writing": "Zootopia Short: Disciplinary action\n----------------------------\n\n\nBogo enters the police building from a side door, and finds Clawhauser in the break room.\n\nClawhauser looks frightened. \"Uh... sir... there's a problem waiting in your office.\"\n\"I got the message about Rookie Gray, Ben. Thanks.\" He turns an ear to something, then reconsiders his next move and starts making a fresh pot of coffee. Clawhauser quietly leaves.\n\nBogo notices a new, untouched box of donuts next to the coffee pot. \"Hmmm...\" And he can still hear something going on in another part of the building.\n\nMug of coffee in hoof, he walks at a leisurely pace past a number of startled or frightened officers, and a couple of more scared criminals. Everyone is looking toward Bogo's office, but not at the buffalo as he walked by. They're listening to the Yelling. \n\nLots of furious yelling.\n\nThe Cape Buffalo can't make out the words, but he knows the tone and recognizes the voice. He smirks to himself.\n\nWhen he enters his office, Bogo finds David Gray, a squirrel that was a recent addition to the force, likely to soon be a subtraction; and Judy Hopps, the star rabbit. \n\nBogo opens the office door right when Hopps reaches a pause, and the rabbit looks ready to rip the squirrel's tail off and strangle him with it. The squirrel stands at a rigid, quivering attention, likely trying not to soil his pants.\n\n\"Hopps... Gray... Is this the issue I was told about a few minutes ago?\"\nHopps stands to attention, ears pointed rigidly up. \"Sir, yes sir.\" Her voice sounds a bit rough, but her manner suggests that she still has a full head of steam.\n\n\"I'm already aware of the problem,\" Bogo speaks with a calm, even tone. \"Thank you, Sergeant Hopps. I'll take it from here.\"\nThe rabbit stomps once to acknowledge the order, then does a sharp about-face and marches out of Bogo's office, pausing long enough to pull the door closed behind her.\n\nDavid Gray, the squirrel, seems to be barely breathing. He whimpers in a tiny voice, \"Is she gone?\"\nBogo answers, \"Yes.. now I'm...\" but doesn't even get to sit down before the squirrel faints and collapses into a gray-furred puddle.\n\nCut to the break room. Judy's boiling rage has cooled down, and she needs to soothe her raw throat.\nJudy gets a large cone-cup from the water cooler, fills and swills it down twice, and finally takes her third cup and sips more slowly.\n\nThen her ears droop and she bows her head *clunk* into the wall.\n\n\"Carrots?\" Wilde pokes his head around the break room door. He is a bit more dressed up, in full uniform. \nWithout looking up, Hopps rasps, \"Hey Nick.\"\n\"Judy? I heard you from all the way down at the courtroom, what happened?\"\n\"David Gray. Again.\"\n\"Oh.\" Wilde rolls his eyes. He walks over to Hopps and gives her a one-armed hug. \"I told Bogo THAT squirrel was a bad idea.\"\n\"And...\" Hopps looks and sounds on the edge of tears. \"Chief... called me... Sergeant.\"\n\"Well! ...oh. OH.\" Wilde almost gets emotional whiplash at this revelation. \nHopps turns, and the two mammals share a hug. \"I am Not ready for that!\" she sobs, and coughs.\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Zootopia Short: Disciplinary action
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Bogo enters the police building from a side door, and finds Clawhauser in the break room.

Clawhauser looks frightened. "Uh... sir... there's a problem waiting in your office."
"I got the message about Rookie Gray, Ben. Thanks." He turns an ear to something, then reconsiders his next move and starts making a fresh pot of coffee. Clawhauser quietly leaves.

Bogo notices a new, untouched box of donuts next to the coffee pot. "Hmmm..." And he can still hear something going on in another part of the building.

Mug of coffee in hoof, he walks at a leisurely pace past a number of startled or frightened officers, and a couple of more scared criminals. Everyone is looking toward Bogo's office, but not at the buffalo as he walked by. They're listening to the Yelling.

Lots of furious yelling.

The Cape Buffalo can't make out the words, but he knows the tone and recognizes the voice. He smirks to himself.

When he enters his office, Bogo finds David Gray, a squirrel that was a recent addition to the force, likely to soon be a subtraction; and Judy Hopps, the star rabbit.

Bogo opens the office door right when Hopps reaches a pause, and the rabbit looks ready to rip the squirrel's tail off and strangle him with it. The squirrel stands at a rigid, quivering attention, likely trying not to soil his pants.

"Hopps... Gray... Is this the issue I was told about a few minutes ago?"
Hopps stands to attention, ears pointed rigidly up. "Sir, yes sir." Her voice sounds a bit rough, but her manner suggests that she still has a full head of steam.

"I'm already aware of the problem," Bogo speaks with a calm, even tone. "Thank you, Sergeant Hopps. I'll take it from here."
The rabbit stomps once to acknowledge the order, then does a sharp about-face and marches out of Bogo's office, pausing long enough to pull the door closed behind her.

David Gray, the squirrel, seems to be barely breathing. He whimpers in a tiny voice, "Is she gone?"
Bogo answers, "Yes.. now I'm..." but doesn't even get to sit down before the squirrel faints and collapses into a gray-furred puddle.

Cut to the break room. Judy's boiling rage has cooled down, and she needs to soothe her raw throat.
Judy gets a large cone-cup from the water cooler, fills and swills it down twice, and finally takes her third cup and sips more slowly.

Then her ears droop and she bows her head *clunk* into the wall.

"Carrots?" Wilde pokes his head around the break room door. He is a bit more dressed up, in full uniform.
Without looking up, Hopps rasps, "Hey Nick."
"Judy? I heard you from all the way down at the courtroom, what happened?"
"David Gray. Again."
"Oh." Wilde rolls his eyes. He walks over to Hopps and gives her a one-armed hug. "I told Bogo THAT squirrel was a bad idea."
"And..." Hopps looks and sounds on the edge of tears. "Chief... called me... Sergeant."
"Well! ...oh. OH." Wilde almost gets emotional whiplash at this revelation.
Hopps turns, and the two mammals share a hug. "I am Not ready for that!" she sobs, and coughs.

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