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However they disappear from each other when they play on the open dangerous grass field. The brown little mouse becomes desperate and rush out to find his friend again. Unaware that he is being watched.","description_bbcode_parsed":"A little brown mouse playing hide and seek with his best friend. However they disappear from each other when they play on the open dangerous grass field. The brown little mouse becomes desperate and rush out to find his friend again. Unaware that he is being watched.","writing":"The green grass snake part 1: The Hunt. \n\nThe brown forest mouse were waiting hidden under the strong roots of a gnarled old tree.\nHe was waiting for a friend that he had been playing hide and seek with out on the wide grassy plain.\n\nThe brown little mouse had not liked the idea of playing on the plain because there were several hungry predators who could catch and eat them, but his friend had persuaded him.\n\nThe mouse was getting worried about his friend, she had not found him yet. He could no longer sit back and wait for her to find him.\n\nForest Mouse left his hiding place and jumped out into the tall grass to look for his friend, but he was completely unaware that a pair of yellow malicious eyes watching him.\n\nThe brown forest mouse searched frantically in the grass and sniffed with his keen little pink nose, blinked the vigilant small black eyes, but to no avail I could not find a way traces of his friend.\n\nHe was so absorbed in searching for for tracks that he had not noticed the scaly predator that wound closer. Its yellow eyes huh fixed on the little mouse looked upon him as he so anxiously sought. The split tongue flickered out tasting the smell of fear.\n\nThe mouse's ear was lowered disappointed concern. What if a falcon had caught her. He thought, looking up at the clear sky as if he expected that a dark shadow bird would float up there.\n\nPredator saw that the mouse was detacherad, and took it's chance to attack. The forest mouse had no time to react before the green lightning struck him. He had a sudden impression of something green and scaly, and he squeaked in surprised fear.\n\nThe green grass snake wriggled rapidly about the little mouse, and hissed triumphantly. The little mouse squeaked terrified and tried wriggling out of the serpent's coils.\n\nThe snake was too strong and the little mouse knew it was over for him when he looked up at the yellow snake eyes that were filled with the predator´s grinning pleasure.\n\nThe snake bowed its head closer to the mouse, its black split tongue licked the scaly lips as it smelled the mouse. The poor mouse closed his eyes and waited for the upcoming strike.\n\nThe snake nudged the mouse gently on the nose and giggled -\"Tag you're it\" she said cheerfully and released the mouse quickly to avoid being tagd right back.\n\nThe brown forest the mouse gritted teeth that have become so completely fooled. \"I was actually worried about you\" He squeaked irritated as he chased after his friend back into the deep forest, giggling and shouting.\n\n\nThe end of part 1\n\n\n\n\nAuthors' note: So that was fun do not you agree? Maybe not a major surprise at the end but it's the kind of end I like anyway. I got the idea for this story when I thought that there are not so many children stories of snakes. ( I have not seen any.) \n\nSo I thought hay why I do not write one myself, I can not the only one who's crazy about snakes ^ w ^\n I haw to see how I will develop this series in the future I would prefer it is suitable for children and imaginative as possible. Otherwise, I might do something more kinky. But I do not know yet.\n\nDisclaimer: Not to make any excuses but I have dyslexia and I do not speak English. This is my first work so be nice with your feedback.\n\n I want to know if there are any errors in my grammar or spelling or writing style. I am almost sure that I use the comma way too much than what is needed heheh. I know I should have let someone to read this. But seriously I am all too eager to throw it out and see what reaction I get. heheh sorry I promise to be less hurpa durp next time. XD\n\nThank you for reading hope you all liked it best regards: Joppe\n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"The green grass snake part 1: The Hunt.  

The brown forest mouse were waiting hidden under the strong roots of a gnarled old tree.
He was waiting for a friend that he had been playing hide and seek with out on the wide grassy plain.

The brown little mouse had not liked the idea of playing on the plain because there were several hungry predators who could catch and eat them, but his friend had persuaded him.

The mouse was getting worried about his friend, she had not found him yet. He could no longer sit back and wait for her to find him.

Forest Mouse left his hiding place and jumped out into the tall grass to look for his friend, but he was completely unaware that a pair of yellow malicious eyes watching him.

The brown forest mouse searched frantically in the grass and sniffed with his keen little pink nose, blinked the vigilant small black eyes, but to no avail I could not find a way traces of his friend.

He was so absorbed in searching for for tracks that he had not noticed the scaly predator that wound closer. Its yellow eyes huh fixed on the little mouse looked upon him as he so anxiously sought. The split tongue flickered out tasting the smell of fear.

The mouse's ear was lowered disappointed concern. What if a falcon had caught her. He thought, looking up at the clear sky as if he expected that a dark shadow bird would float up there.

Predator saw that the mouse was detacherad, and took it's chance to attack. The forest mouse had no time to react before the green lightning struck him. He had a sudden impression of something green and scaly, and he squeaked in surprised fear.

The green grass snake wriggled rapidly about the little mouse, and hissed triumphantly. The little mouse squeaked terrified and tried wriggling out of the serpent's coils.

The snake was too strong and the little mouse knew it was over for him when he looked up at the yellow snake eyes that were filled with the predator´s grinning pleasure.

The snake bowed its head closer to the mouse, its black split tongue licked the scaly lips as it smelled the mouse. The poor mouse closed his eyes and waited for the upcoming strike.

The snake nudged the mouse gently on the nose and giggled -"Tag you're it" she said cheerfully and released the mouse quickly to avoid being tagd right back.

The brown forest the mouse gritted teeth that have become so completely fooled. "I was actually worried about you" He squeaked irritated as he chased after his friend back into the deep forest, giggling and shouting.


The end of part 1




Authors' note:  So that was fun do not you agree? Maybe not a major surprise at the end but it's the kind of end I like anyway.  I got the idea for this story when I thought that there are not so many children stories of snakes. ( I have not seen any.)

So I thought hay why I do not write one myself, I can not the only one who's crazy about snakes ^ w ^
 I haw to see how I will develop this series in the future I would prefer it is suitable for children and imaginative as possible. Otherwise, I might do something more kinky. But I do not know yet.

Disclaimer: Not to make any excuses but I have dyslexia and I do not speak English. This is my first work so be nice with your feedback.

 I want to know if there are any errors in my grammar or spelling or writing style. I am almost sure that I use the comma way too much than what is needed heheh. I know I should have let someone to read this. But seriously I am all too eager to throw it out and see what reaction I get. heheh sorry I promise to be less hurpa durp next time. XD

Thank you for reading hope you all liked it best regards: Joppe
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