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Improved the Grammar and Spelling, give-out a new name. ","description_bbcode_parsed":"I'm redoing this FanFiction that I called Balto FanFiction: My version of Balto 4. Improved the Grammar and Spelling, give-out a new name. ","writing":"I'm redoing this FanFiction with better grammar/spelling, etc. The First version got very good feedback with this comment: This is good. I can remember the part with Steele and the others. There isn't much about Aleu is there? I like this a lot and it's good to bring back Niju and Nava/Would be a short film but likewise, good job\n\nAleu walking toward home at the same-time Niju come-out \n\nNiju: I Lost everything I want my revenge \n\nAleu: Bring-up \n\nAleu doing her adventures with the wolf-pack Aleu learn to fight better against bears, wolfs, dogs, other things. \n\nAleu and Niju were fighting \n\nUnit Nava come-out \n\nNava: Stop what you doing Niju \n\nNiju: Just stop me old wolf \n\nNava: Try to stop Niju but Nava was on the ground \n\nAleu: Hurt Niju on his back \n\nNiju: run-away\n\nNava: Thanks Aleu for saving me from Niju \n\nAleu: Will got very good training on fighting with the wolf-pack \n\nNava: What doing thought were going to stay with the wolf-pack \n\nAleu: I want to see my papa, others very home-sick.\n\nNava: Still missing your life with your parents \n\nAleu: Yes but feel more belong with the wolf-pack \n\nNava: Have made that choice on your own \n\nAleu: Sometimes thought Nava was her grandfather. She knew her grandmom look like but her grandfather. \n\nNava: Will based on your skills Niju is one should not run into you at all. \n\nAleu went on her way to see her parents, others. \n\nAleu found Balto, Jenna with Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph talking about things. \n\nBalto, Jenna saw Aleu \n\nAleu: Hi Papa, mama \n\nBalto, Jenna: Hugged Aleu \n\nKodi: Aleu is that you are my sister. I have not seen you me, you were puppies. \n\nRalph: I thought the reason Kodi knew her name because both used be mates. \n\nKodi: Those are my best-friends, co-workers Kirby, Dusty, Ralph \n\nAleu: Papa that wolf called Niju want get his revenge on me maybe you. \n\nBalto: Everyone didn't think told you about a dog called Steele. \n\nKodi: No have not told me or any of my friends.\n\nBalto: Before all were born there was a dog called Steele was Jerk to me. Had the hots for Jenna. When the town kids were sick Steele, Nikki, Kaltag, Star the sled-dog team went on getting meds but the weather was bad. I went after then want help Steele but Steele went crazy off a cliff was not killed. \n\nJenna: Steele went back to town told the big lie about being a hero, Balto, others were killed. When Balto, former sled-dogs members return to town. Steele leave town was never saw again at all. \n\nBalto & Jenna: Both we had kids including you Aleu, Kodi, other brothers, sisters. Both us only love each, only doing it with each. Death to us apart. \n\nKirby: Great story Balto, Jenna but about Steele \n\nBalto: I thinking Steele is returning to get his revenge on me. \n\nMean-While the same-time Steele was in the woods think his plains hurt or killed Balto. \n\nSteele went into town saw Kaltag, Nikki, Star, Dixie:\n\nDixie: Steele \n\nSteele: Dixie good to see you again \n\nDixie: Me, Kaltag, Nikki, Star thought were killed. Their gravestone in the nearby graveyard. \n\nSteele: Want to join me on getting my revenge on Balto. \n\nKaltag, Nikki, Star, Dixie: No\n\nSteele: With or without your help I'd get my revenge on Balto. \n\nSteele saw Balto \n\nSteele: Balto I have turn over a new-leaf come with me into the woods. \n\nBalto: Why the woods Steele \n\nSteele: I just want to be said my sorry without no-one around hear it \n\nSteele, Balto went in the woods \n\n50 minutes later \n\nJenna: I want Aleu, Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph check on Balto, Steele. \n\nKirby: Great ideas \n\nKodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph, Aleu went into the woods found Balto \n\nIn the woods Steele, Balto was talking \n\nSteele: I'm going hurt you or kill you \n\nSteele fighting Balto \n\nBalto and Steele were fighting then Kirby, Dusty, Ralph, Kodi, Aleu were helping Balto.\n \nThen Niju come-out as well \n\nNiju: Time for my revenge as well \n\nAt the same-time: Dixie, Kaltag, Nikki, Star warned Jenna about Steele plain. \n\nSteele was losing the fight and Niju as well \n\nBalto: Niju, Steele both need to stop with this whole revenge. \n\nNiju and Steele: Revenge was pointless over-thing without anyone with common-sense would think good-ideas for those actions. Niju and Steele both said they're sorry the way were attacking. Niju walks away from everyone. Steele was happy he could have his frame back being a good dog rather being a bad-dog. \n\nAleu stays with her parents Balto, Jenna with brother Kodi and Kodi best-friends. \n\nThe End. ","writing_bbcode_parsed":"I'm redoing this FanFiction with better grammar/spelling, etc. The First version got very good feedback with this comment: This is good. I can remember the part with Steele and the others. There isn't much about Aleu is there? I like this a lot and it's good to bring back Niju and Nava/Would be a short film but likewise, good job
Aleu walking toward home at the same-time Niju come-out
Niju: I Lost everything I want my revenge
Aleu: Bring-up
Aleu doing her adventures with the wolf-pack Aleu learn to fight better against bears, wolfs, dogs, other things.
Aleu and Niju were fighting
Unit Nava come-out
Nava: Stop what you doing Niju
Niju: Just stop me old wolf
Nava: Try to stop Niju but Nava was on the ground
Aleu: Hurt Niju on his back
Niju: run-away
Nava: Thanks Aleu for saving me from Niju
Aleu: Will got very good training on fighting with the wolf-pack
Nava: What doing thought were going to stay with the wolf-pack
Aleu: I want to see my papa, others very home-sick.
Nava: Still missing your life with your parents
Aleu: Yes but feel more belong with the wolf-pack
Nava: Have made that choice on your own
Aleu: Sometimes thought Nava was her grandfather. She knew her grandmom look like but her grandfather.
Nava: Will based on your skills Niju is one should not run into you at all.
Aleu went on her way to see her parents, others.
Aleu found Balto, Jenna with Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph talking about things.
Balto, Jenna saw Aleu
Aleu: Hi Papa, mama
Balto, Jenna: Hugged Aleu
Kodi: Aleu is that you are my sister. I have not seen you me, you were puppies.
Ralph: I thought the reason Kodi knew her name because both used be mates.
Kodi: Those are my best-friends, co-workers Kirby, Dusty, Ralph
Aleu: Papa that wolf called Niju want get his revenge on me maybe you.
Balto: Everyone didn't think told you about a dog called Steele.
Kodi: No have not told me or any of my friends.
Balto: Before all were born there was a dog called Steele was Jerk to me. Had the hots for Jenna. When the town kids were sick Steele, Nikki, Kaltag, Star the sled-dog team went on getting meds but the weather was bad. I went after then want help Steele but Steele went crazy off a cliff was not killed.
Jenna: Steele went back to town told the big lie about being a hero, Balto, others were killed. When Balto, former sled-dogs members return to town. Steele leave town was never saw again at all.
Balto & Jenna: Both we had kids including you Aleu, Kodi, other brothers, sisters. Both us only love each, only doing it with each. Death to us apart.
Kirby: Great story Balto, Jenna but about Steele
Balto: I thinking Steele is returning to get his revenge on me.
Mean-While the same-time Steele was in the woods think his plains hurt or killed Balto.
Steele went into town saw Kaltag, Nikki, Star, Dixie:
Dixie: Steele
Steele: Dixie good to see you again
Dixie: Me, Kaltag, Nikki, Star thought were killed. Their gravestone in the nearby graveyard.
Steele: Want to join me on getting my revenge on Balto.
Kaltag, Nikki, Star, Dixie: No
Steele: With or without your help I'd get my revenge on Balto.
Steele saw Balto
Steele: Balto I have turn over a new-leaf come with me into the woods.
Balto: Why the woods Steele
Steele: I just want to be said my sorry without no-one around hear it
Steele, Balto went in the woods
50 minutes later
Jenna: I want Aleu, Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph check on Balto, Steele.
Kirby: Great ideas
Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph, Aleu went into the woods found Balto
In the woods Steele, Balto was talking
Steele: I'm going hurt you or kill you
Steele fighting Balto
Balto and Steele were fighting then Kirby, Dusty, Ralph, Kodi, Aleu were helping Balto.
Then Niju come-out as well
Niju: Time for my revenge as well
At the same-time: Dixie, Kaltag, Nikki, Star warned Jenna about Steele plain.
Steele was losing the fight and Niju as well
Balto: Niju, Steele both need to stop with this whole revenge.
Niju and Steele: Revenge was pointless over-thing without anyone with common-sense would think good-ideas for those actions. Niju and Steele both said they're sorry the way were attacking. Niju walks away from everyone. Steele was happy he could have his frame back being a good dog rather being a bad-dog.
Aleu stays with her parents Balto, Jenna with brother Kodi and Kodi best-friends.
The End. ","pools_count":0,"title":"Balto FanFiction My Version Balto 4 Return of Aleu/Niju","deleted":"f","public":"t","mimetype":"text/rtf","pagecount":"1","rating_id":"1","rating_name":"Mature","ratings":[{"content_tag_id":"3","name":"Violence","description":"Mild violence","rating_id":"1"}],"submission_type_id":"12","type_name":"Writing - Document","guest_block":"f","friends_only":"f","comments_count":"0","views":"12","sales_description":null,"forsale":"f","digitalsales":"f","printsales":"f","digital_price":""}