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It's a sequel to Balto FanFiction Jonathan The Son of Steele. ","description_bbcode_parsed":"Re-do a Balto FanFiction made me. It's a sequel to Balto FanFiction Jonathan The Son of Steele. ","writing":"The First version of this Balto FanFiction called Jonathan Meets Kodi was my first-time writing a FanFiction in Balto FanBase. Since making a prequel to this Story how about an updated version of it. I maybe delete the other version of this Story. This FanFiction is about Kodi, Kirby, Ralph, Dusty from Balto 3 Wings of Change meeting my Fan Character called Jonathan. Kodi, Dusty, Ralph, Kirby have an adventure and Jonathan saves the day. The original version of Jonathan was 80% German Shepherd, 20% Wolf but since writing a prequel to this FanFiction. Jonathan is in-fact 50% German Shepherd and 20% Alaskan Malamute and 30% Wolf. Jonathan does not have an owner he is a freelancer who lives in the woods.\n\nHere is the backstory for it: Kodi and his friends were very bored with Beautiful weather-day. Kodi and his friends were very bored. Had no work from there job being mail-team for there local town. Kodi Hear Stories about this place called Lockout Mine. Kodi and his friends want to exploder the place for the fun of it. There was a story about the place had the power to trick your mind into believing in anything it wants. Just like Vault 106 from Fallout 3. It's was a sunny-day in Nome, Alaska. Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph were very bored. \n\nKodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph enjoyed exploring the woods. Hear stories about this place called lookout Mine. No-one dear goes into the location. The side-effects were not the best in the world for anyone.\n\nKodi got his friends and started walking toward the location of Lockdown Mine. Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph walk was very hard and challenging because got lost a number of times. But loved the ideas of exploring.\n\nKodi: Come-on Dusty, Kirby, Ralph we can found this location together. It's not that hard.\n\nKodi, Dusty, Ralph heard a Bear.\n\nThe Bear was charging at him and pulled him to the ground.\n\nKirby, Ralph, Dusty: Kodi !!! \n\nKirby, Ralph, Dusty felt helpless Kodi was in danger and every-time trying something Bear push them away. \n\nKodi wants to fight back but the Bear was strong for him. Kodi was losing hope unit Kodi saw a Tan and Black German Shepherd on the rocks near his location. \n\nGerman Shepherd: Bring-out on Bear. I'm ready for a fight. I can put up a real fight.\n\nGerman Shepherd hurting the Bear. The bear stopped focusing on Kodi and started focusing on German Shepherd hurt him. German Shepherd and Bear were fighting unit German Shepherd had a ideas forcing the Bear into a Nearby River away from Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph.\n\nRalph, Kirby, Dusty we're helping Kodi up from the ground.\n\nDusty: Kodi are you o.k.\n\nKodi: Mom I don't want to go to School today\n\nKirby, Ralph, Dusty were clueless over Kodi\n\nDusty: I'm guessing the bear attack hurt Kodi too much. \n\nKodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph knows the German Shepherd and the Bear were still fighting but this time near a River. \n\nThe German Shepherd was on the rocks near a River with the Bear. German Shepherd was the rocks and The Bear saw the River but Shepherd went under him and got behind. Shepherd push him into the water. \n\nGerman Shepherd: Hope you can swim that where you go right now. \n\nThe bear fell into the water and unit the other side of the river. \n\nThe Bear was being washed away from being in the river. \n\nGerman Shepherd: Yea you better run \n\nKodi recovered from his injuries and Dusty, Ralph, Kirby Ralph was looking at \nGerman Shepherd. \n\nGerman Shepherd: What are you looking at anyway \n\nRalph, Kodi, Kirby, Dusty: Thank you for saving our lives. \n\nDusty: If you did not come back and help Kodi. Kodi would die today by the Bear. Maybe all of us. \n\nGerman Shepherd: No Problem like help-out my species and call me Jonathan. \n\nJonathan: Why are in the woods it's very rare to see other dogs in the woods. \n\nKodi: Before the Bear attack we're trying to found a place called Lockdown Mine. We hear stories about that place. \n\nJonathan: That is a very interesting story but at the same time it's not good ideas go into the woods those bears hate dogs. \n\nDusty: You are warning us but you are in-fact the woods. \n\nJonathan: It's a long story but the short story when was a Puppy in Canada. My parents told me never to go into the woods without then but I was very curious and went into the woods anyway. I never found my way out or my parents since then I have been living in those woods. \n\nKodi: What about going into Town. Trying to found your parents maybe are still looking for you. \n\nJonathan: The reason why I never went into the nearby town. Because I'm secretly half-wolf. I know for a fact humans hate wolves. \n\nKodi: You look more German Shepherd than a wolf. \n\nJonathan: I have tried making friends but feels like everyone runs away from me. Go into the nearby town would be the same way. \n\nKodi: You can come long on our adventure for this afternoon. Do you know where the Lockdown\nIs mine? \n\nJonathan: I have a good feeling about you guys would accept me as being a half-wolf. \n\nJonathan showed the location of the Mine \n\nJonathan: His the location of Lockdown Mine it's behind a large rock on the mountain. \n\nJonathan maybe an Enter for Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph. \n\nJonathan, Kodi, Kirby, Ralph, Dusty walk into the Mountain. \n\nIn the Mountain, we're candle lamps everywhere for the light \n\nJonathan: Let hope no more Bear attack. \n\nKodi, Kirby, Ralph, Dusty said: We fully agreed with that 100% \n\nJonathan showed the Mine toward everyone. \n\nJonathan: Lockdown Mine is abandoned. It's very dark and nobody lives there. Are you sure about this?. Because one-time I try sleeping in Lockdown. I was sleeping in the Workers barracks on one of their beds. I open my eye to realize myself as a full wolf. The Workers came into the room use there shoves on me. I felt the pain but when closed my eyes because of too much damage. Re-open my eyes saw final blow from shove. I was a knock-out. Once I wake up by being a knock-out. I saw only their Shoves on the Floor and the Doors were all lock up again. Hear the voice of human for some reason hear perfect. You get what deserved Wolf. The next morning has never gone into there since.\n\nKodi, Ralph, Dusty, Ralph: Jon It's only a bad nightmare \n\nJonathan: But I'm telling the truth \n\nKodi: We are stilling having an adventure without or without you. It's better then hang-out around town that no mail to deliver today. Its very boring\n\nJonathan: I advise you not go into there. The place is a bad thing it's very dark and nightmare felt so real. I thought I lost my mind in theirs. \n\nKodi, Ralph, Dusty, Ralph walk into the mine \n\nJonathan: Oh will didn't take my advice you will be sorry and Jonathan walk-away. \n\nMean-While Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Ralph. Got down to mine by the elevator that was still working.\n\nKodi, Dusty, Ralph, Kirby got down a ground level: \n\nKirby: I have a second thought about it mean \n\nBut when Kirby try the up button. Nothing happens at all. \n\nKirby: That is not a good sign at all. \n\nOutside nearby: Jonathan walking around the woods. Why did Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph take my story serious mean really it happens? \n\nJonathan thought to himself must do the right thing and save those dogs from Mine. \n\nJonathan all-ready knows the elevator went down. I have to use the stairs walk down slow. Jonathan walks slow but by accident lose his footing and went down the stairs. \n\nJonathan land some-where got knock on ground level. \n\nMean-While Kodi and Ralph, Kirby, Dusty\n\nKodi: Let sprit up and maybe we have a high change of places get out here and also should have listened to Jonathan. \n\nAll then agreed with that in the first-place and also found stairs of the place. \n\nSome also \n\nJonathan wake-up from his accident. \n\nJonathan was not badly hurt but Jonathan's head hurt \n\nJonathan saw someone \n\nJonathan thought he did hit his head on that no people were there.\n\nJonathan think was all his mind play trick on him. \n\nJonathan found-out he was in mining place. \n\nJonathan thinks himself that Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Kirby are not the same part he was. \n\nJonathan found a mine-kart and use the mine-kart travel to the same place where Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph in the mine. \n\nMean-while \n\nKodi went into one of the rooms \n\nKodi saw Balto \n\nKodi: Dad didn`t be in this room\n\nBut Balto didn`t speak at all. Its almost Kodi has seen a ghost his father. \n\nKodi: Dad why are not speak to me \n\nThen Kodi realize Balto disappoint \n\nKodi: What in the world just happen. \n\nKodi thought to him myself that is in all his mind \n\nKodi went to bed knew were his Dad was. \n\nKodi wake-up in the same room. Kodi wake-up Aleu was there \n\nAleu: Kodi have a present for you \n\nKodi: What is the present Aleu \n\nAleu start punching Kodi \nKodi: Stop It Aleu are trying to kill me \n\nAleu continued to punch Kodi \n\nThen Kodi observed Aleu disappear \n\nKodi: What is heck going on him. Mean see a ghost of my dad and my sister in this place. \n\nKodi realize Jonathan came into the room \n\nJonathan: I can`t believe you didn`t take my warning. \n\nKodi: I have some type of weird things happening to me on that my sister came here start punching me and disappear after punching me a number of times. Seeing a ghost of my father. I should have believed your story, Jon. \n\nJonathan: I know the history of this place that was a drug in this place. You see ghosts or ghosts try to hurt you. You got both of them seeing a ghost of your dad and seeing your sister beat you up. \n\nThe reason why is a place abandoned because people could take it anymore and just leave. This toxic never leave this place it almost liked over time become this place.\n\nKodi: Did you use the stairs, Jonathan \n\nJonathan: The stairs no go on that almost killed \n\nKodi: That is bad too the elevator is not working anymore. \n\nKodi: Jonathan, why does this place, has weird toxic in the first-place. \n\nJonathan: Kodi is because this place was using a special toxic that make weird happen over time everyone escapes the place but some reason the toxic stay in Mine. Its almost liked tree and will not apart from this Mine anyway or another way.\n\nThat is why told you my story this place is not cool place explode because of the toxic gas. \n\nKodi: How do you know all about the special toxic gas in the first-place. \n\nJonathan: Before leaving this place because of my nightmare look over notes, books about this place history. \n\nMean-While Ralph, Kirby, Dusty walk the hall-room\n\nAll hear the weird noise of people. \n\nDusty, Ralph, Kirby thought to this-self: This place is weird \n\nDusty, Ralph, Kirby went into overseers office. Everything was new and as well observed Overseers Chair was looking over the place. But the chair was not facing them. \n\nRalph: Saying Hi \n\nThe chair turned around was Kodi: \n\nDusty, Ralph, Kirby: Kodi you, not the boss this place\n\nKodi walks into the overseer's office. Kodi walks toward all of his friends and saying nothing and disappear 5 secs later. \n\nRalph, Kirby, Dusty observed the hole place went back to normal old and abandoned. Ralph, Kirby, Dusty walk away from Overseer's Office and walk into Jonathan and Kodi. \n\nJonathan: I come back this place has weird thing happens on his gas in this place. I want to save all of you from this place. That saying cursor kills the cat comes to mind about this place. \n\nKodi, Ralph, Dusty, Kirby fully agreed with that in the first-place. \n\nJonathan told Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Kirby about the new plan get out the place. \n\nJonathan leader Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph out the areas of Mine were in. But Jonathan didn't know the minecart depot was home to Crazy and Bad Humans. \n\nCrazy Bad Humans: It looks like we have dinner, my friends \n\nJonathan and Everyone got into the near Mine-Kart \n\nCrazy Bad Humans we're the ones former Staff members of the Mine. Never got outside. Went Insane and looking for anyone or anything goes into the Mine.\n\nInsane Miners, we're shooting there Firearms and yelling: You all must die\n\nJonathan: Just are luck humans with Rifle and everyone duck down of the bullet the minecart\nis bullet-proof in the first-place.\n\nEveryone duck and one of the Insane Miners fell a dynamite in the minecart we're all in. \n\nKodi knows the dynamite and threw back toward the one of Crazy Bad Humans. \n\nKodi: You got mail \n\nDynamite land and the humans run away. \n\nEveryone got out the Mine but the Minecart land into Large Lake. \n\nDusty, Ralph, Kirby got out the Large Lake but Jonathan was drowning\n\nJonathan: Help can't swim very good and need help. \n\nKodi went into the water and try saving Jonathan Life from drowning. \n\nJonathan black-out and Jonathan last saw him going down. \n\nKodi grabs Jonathan and Jonathan, and Kodi was on the shore. \n\nJonathan opens his eyes and Jonathan realizes he on the shore and not in the water under its anymore. \n\nJonathan: Kodi you save me from drowning a good job. \n\nKodi: You save my life from almost getting killed by the bear \n\nJonathan was very happy someone care to save his life from dying from drowning. \n\nJonathan walk-away from Kodi and his friends\n\nKodi: Why are you walking away we count you as a friend for saving our lives from that place, all from the bear. \n\nDusty, Kirby, Ralph agreed with Kodi. Jonathan was very helpful during the whole afternoon. Without him all four of them we're going die from Bear Attack.\n.\nJonathan: You didn't deserve a friend liked me. I'm if told you about the weird gas in the first-place. I just focus on my story but not about the weird gas. You would have listened to me and would not have thought up going into the mine. \n\nI only cause trouble you guys mean those Miners are the same ones who attack me in my nightmare. Its almost liked when has had my nightmare all then were having their dream come true at the same time. \n\nIts weird but was real. Will think I`m crazy. \n\nJonathan walks away to be very sad. \n\nKodi went after Jonathan \n\nKodi: Jonathan me, the others can agree you save us from Bear and Mine. We deserve you as friends. \n\nSo Jonathan meets 4 new friends that today. The End !!! ","writing_bbcode_parsed":"The First version of this Balto FanFiction called Jonathan Meets Kodi was my first-time writing a FanFiction in Balto FanBase. Since making a prequel to this Story how about an updated version of it. I maybe delete the other version of this Story. This FanFiction is about Kodi, Kirby, Ralph, Dusty from Balto 3 Wings of Change meeting my Fan Character called Jonathan. Kodi, Dusty, Ralph, Kirby have an adventure and Jonathan saves the day. The original version of Jonathan was 80% German Shepherd, 20% Wolf but since writing a prequel to this FanFiction. Jonathan is in-fact 50% German Shepherd and 20% Alaskan Malamute and 30% Wolf. Jonathan does not have an owner he is a freelancer who lives in the woods.
Here is the backstory for it: Kodi and his friends were very bored with Beautiful weather-day. Kodi and his friends were very bored. Had no work from there job being mail-team for there local town. Kodi Hear Stories about this place called Lockout Mine. Kodi and his friends want to exploder the place for the fun of it. There was a story about the place had the power to trick your mind into believing in anything it wants. Just like Vault 106 from Fallout 3. It's was a sunny-day in Nome, Alaska. Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph were very bored.
Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph enjoyed exploring the woods. Hear stories about this place called lookout Mine. No-one dear goes into the location. The side-effects were not the best in the world for anyone.
Kodi got his friends and started walking toward the location of Lockdown Mine. Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph walk was very hard and challenging because got lost a number of times. But loved the ideas of exploring.
Kodi: Come-on Dusty, Kirby, Ralph we can found this location together. It's not that hard.
Kodi, Dusty, Ralph heard a Bear.
The Bear was charging at him and pulled him to the ground.
Kirby, Ralph, Dusty: Kodi !!!
Kirby, Ralph, Dusty felt helpless Kodi was in danger and every-time trying something Bear push them away.
Kodi wants to fight back but the Bear was strong for him. Kodi was losing hope unit Kodi saw a Tan and Black German Shepherd on the rocks near his location.
German Shepherd: Bring-out on Bear. I'm ready for a fight. I can put up a real fight.
German Shepherd hurting the Bear. The bear stopped focusing on Kodi and started focusing on German Shepherd hurt him. German Shepherd and Bear were fighting unit German Shepherd had a ideas forcing the Bear into a Nearby River away from Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph.
Ralph, Kirby, Dusty we're helping Kodi up from the ground.
Dusty: Kodi are you o.k.
Kodi: Mom I don't want to go to School today
Kirby, Ralph, Dusty were clueless over Kodi
Dusty: I'm guessing the bear attack hurt Kodi too much.
Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph knows the German Shepherd and the Bear were still fighting but this time near a River.
The German Shepherd was on the rocks near a River with the Bear. German Shepherd was the rocks and The Bear saw the River but Shepherd went under him and got behind. Shepherd push him into the water.
German Shepherd: Hope you can swim that where you go right now.
The bear fell into the water and unit the other side of the river.
The Bear was being washed away from being in the river.
German Shepherd: Yea you better run
Kodi recovered from his injuries and Dusty, Ralph, Kirby Ralph was looking at
German Shepherd.
German Shepherd: What are you looking at anyway
Ralph, Kodi, Kirby, Dusty: Thank you for saving our lives.
Dusty: If you did not come back and help Kodi. Kodi would die today by the Bear. Maybe all of us.
German Shepherd: No Problem like help-out my species and call me Jonathan.
Jonathan: Why are in the woods it's very rare to see other dogs in the woods.
Kodi: Before the Bear attack we're trying to found a place called Lockdown Mine. We hear stories about that place.
Jonathan: That is a very interesting story but at the same time it's not good ideas go into the woods those bears hate dogs.
Dusty: You are warning us but you are in-fact the woods.
Jonathan: It's a long story but the short story when was a Puppy in Canada. My parents told me never to go into the woods without then but I was very curious and went into the woods anyway. I never found my way out or my parents since then I have been living in those woods.
Kodi: What about going into Town. Trying to found your parents maybe are still looking for you.
Jonathan: The reason why I never went into the nearby town. Because I'm secretly half-wolf. I know for a fact humans hate wolves.
Kodi: You look more German Shepherd than a wolf.
Jonathan: I have tried making friends but feels like everyone runs away from me. Go into the nearby town would be the same way.
Kodi: You can come long on our adventure for this afternoon. Do you know where the Lockdown
Is mine?
Jonathan: I have a good feeling about you guys would accept me as being a half-wolf.
Jonathan showed the location of the Mine
Jonathan: His the location of Lockdown Mine it's behind a large rock on the mountain.
Jonathan maybe an Enter for Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph.
Jonathan, Kodi, Kirby, Ralph, Dusty walk into the Mountain.
In the Mountain, we're candle lamps everywhere for the light
Jonathan: Let hope no more Bear attack.
Kodi, Kirby, Ralph, Dusty said: We fully agreed with that 100%
Jonathan showed the Mine toward everyone.
Jonathan: Lockdown Mine is abandoned. It's very dark and nobody lives there. Are you sure about this?. Because one-time I try sleeping in Lockdown. I was sleeping in the Workers barracks on one of their beds. I open my eye to realize myself as a full wolf. The Workers came into the room use there shoves on me. I felt the pain but when closed my eyes because of too much damage. Re-open my eyes saw final blow from shove. I was a knock-out. Once I wake up by being a knock-out. I saw only their Shoves on the Floor and the Doors were all lock up again. Hear the voice of human for some reason hear perfect. You get what deserved Wolf. The next morning has never gone into there since.
Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Ralph: Jon It's only a bad nightmare
Jonathan: But I'm telling the truth
Kodi: We are stilling having an adventure without or without you. It's better then hang-out around town that no mail to deliver today. Its very boring
Jonathan: I advise you not go into there. The place is a bad thing it's very dark and nightmare felt so real. I thought I lost my mind in theirs.
Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Ralph walk into the mine
Jonathan: Oh will didn't take my advice you will be sorry and Jonathan walk-away.
Mean-While Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Ralph. Got down to mine by the elevator that was still working.
Kodi, Dusty, Ralph, Kirby got down a ground level:
Kirby: I have a second thought about it mean
But when Kirby try the up button. Nothing happens at all.
Kirby: That is not a good sign at all.
Outside nearby: Jonathan walking around the woods. Why did Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph take my story serious mean really it happens?
Jonathan thought to himself must do the right thing and save those dogs from Mine.
Jonathan all-ready knows the elevator went down. I have to use the stairs walk down slow. Jonathan walks slow but by accident lose his footing and went down the stairs.
Jonathan land some-where got knock on ground level.
Mean-While Kodi and Ralph, Kirby, Dusty
Kodi: Let sprit up and maybe we have a high change of places get out here and also should have listened to Jonathan.
All then agreed with that in the first-place and also found stairs of the place.
Some also
Jonathan wake-up from his accident.
Jonathan was not badly hurt but Jonathan's head hurt
Jonathan saw someone
Jonathan thought he did hit his head on that no people were there.
Jonathan think was all his mind play trick on him.
Jonathan found-out he was in mining place.
Jonathan thinks himself that Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Kirby are not the same part he was.
Jonathan found a mine-kart and use the mine-kart travel to the same place where Kodi, Dusty, Kirby, Ralph in the mine.
Mean-while
Kodi went into one of the rooms
Kodi saw Balto
Kodi: Dad didn`t be in this room
But Balto didn`t speak at all. Its almost Kodi has seen a ghost his father.
Kodi: Dad why are not speak to me
Then Kodi realize Balto disappoint
Kodi: What in the world just happen.
Kodi thought to him myself that is in all his mind
Kodi went to bed knew were his Dad was.
Kodi wake-up in the same room. Kodi wake-up Aleu was there
Aleu: Kodi have a present for you
Kodi: What is the present Aleu
Aleu start punching Kodi
Kodi: Stop It Aleu are trying to kill me
Aleu continued to punch Kodi
Then Kodi observed Aleu disappear
Kodi: What is heck going on him. Mean see a ghost of my dad and my sister in this place.
Kodi realize Jonathan came into the room
Jonathan: I can`t believe you didn`t take my warning.
Kodi: I have some type of weird things happening to me on that my sister came here start punching me and disappear after punching me a number of times. Seeing a ghost of my father. I should have believed your story, Jon.
Jonathan: I know the history of this place that was a drug in this place. You see ghosts or ghosts try to hurt you. You got both of them seeing a ghost of your dad and seeing your sister beat you up.
The reason why is a place abandoned because people could take it anymore and just leave. This toxic never leave this place it almost liked over time become this place.
Kodi: Did you use the stairs, Jonathan
Jonathan: The stairs no go on that almost killed
Kodi: That is bad too the elevator is not working anymore.
Kodi: Jonathan, why does this place, has weird toxic in the first-place.
Jonathan: Kodi is because this place was using a special toxic that make weird happen over time everyone escapes the place but some reason the toxic stay in Mine. Its almost liked tree and will not apart from this Mine anyway or another way.
That is why told you my story this place is not cool place explode because of the toxic gas.
Kodi: How do you know all about the special toxic gas in the first-place.
Jonathan: Before leaving this place because of my nightmare look over notes, books about this place history.
Mean-While Ralph, Kirby, Dusty walk the hall-room
All hear the weird noise of people.
Dusty, Ralph, Kirby thought to this-self: This place is weird
Dusty, Ralph, Kirby went into overseers office. Everything was new and as well observed Overseers Chair was looking over the place. But the chair was not facing them.
Ralph: Saying Hi
The chair turned around was Kodi:
Dusty, Ralph, Kirby: Kodi you, not the boss this place
Kodi walks into the overseer's office. Kodi walks toward all of his friends and saying nothing and disappear 5 secs later.
Ralph, Kirby, Dusty observed the hole place went back to normal old and abandoned. Ralph, Kirby, Dusty walk away from Overseer's Office and walk into Jonathan and Kodi.
Jonathan: I come back this place has weird thing happens on his gas in this place. I want to save all of you from this place. That saying cursor kills the cat comes to mind about this place.
Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Kirby fully agreed with that in the first-place.
Jonathan told Kodi, Ralph, Dusty, Kirby about the new plan get out the place.
Jonathan leader Kodi, Kirby, Dusty, Ralph out the areas of Mine were in. But Jonathan didn't know the minecart depot was home to Crazy and Bad Humans.
Crazy Bad Humans: It looks like we have dinner, my friends
Jonathan and Everyone got into the near Mine-Kart
Crazy Bad Humans we're the ones former Staff members of the Mine. Never got outside. Went Insane and looking for anyone or anything goes into the Mine.
Insane Miners, we're shooting there Firearms and yelling: You all must die
Jonathan: Just are luck humans with Rifle and everyone duck down of the bullet the minecart
is bullet-proof in the first-place.
Everyone duck and one of the Insane Miners fell a dynamite in the minecart we're all in.
Kodi knows the dynamite and threw back toward the one of Crazy Bad Humans.
Kodi: You got mail
Dynamite land and the humans run away.
Everyone got out the Mine but the Minecart land into Large Lake.
Dusty, Ralph, Kirby got out the Large Lake but Jonathan was drowning
Jonathan: Help can't swim very good and need help.
Kodi went into the water and try saving Jonathan Life from drowning.
Jonathan black-out and Jonathan last saw him going down.
Kodi grabs Jonathan and Jonathan, and Kodi was on the shore.
Jonathan opens his eyes and Jonathan realizes he on the shore and not in the water under its anymore.
Jonathan: Kodi you save me from drowning a good job.
Kodi: You save my life from almost getting killed by the bear
Jonathan was very happy someone care to save his life from dying from drowning.
Jonathan walk-away from Kodi and his friends
Kodi: Why are you walking away we count you as a friend for saving our lives from that place, all from the bear.
Dusty, Kirby, Ralph agreed with Kodi. Jonathan was very helpful during the whole afternoon. Without him all four of them we're going die from Bear Attack.
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Jonathan: You didn't deserve a friend liked me. I'm if told you about the weird gas in the first-place. I just focus on my story but not about the weird gas. You would have listened to me and would not have thought up going into the mine.
I only cause trouble you guys mean those Miners are the same ones who attack me in my nightmare. Its almost liked when has had my nightmare all then were having their dream come true at the same time.
Its weird but was real. Will think I`m crazy.
Jonathan walks away to be very sad.
Kodi went after Jonathan
Kodi: Jonathan me, the others can agree you save us from Bear and Mine. We deserve you as friends.
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