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Though you have currently the power of your wolf form and are making sure that the darkness that has taken your land is banished from existence with all of your power.\n\nIn the last quest, you finally arrived in the desert. It was quite dangerous, especially with all of the avian foes that you had to vanquish along the way. You were able to take on the greatest of skyward foes and in the end, the books will surely recall your efforts as the hero of the Triforce as you did end it all... happily ever after...\n\nBut... one thing seems to be troubling you as you go into slumber. That one last thing that lingers in you still...[/i]\n\n[b][center][t]Closure: The Real You[/t][/center][/b]\n\n[i]You are waking up but it's clear that you are alone... deep in a forest arena. The number of Wolfos is unceasing as you hear the chants of battle. There's at least four thousand, seven hundred, thirty-two of them in the crowd as they seem to be howling and cheering as the moon shines high over you.\n\nYou felt that shiver going through your spine as you felt the power of the Darkness appear behind you. You knew it was one that was ALL too familiar to you and you draw your weapon. um... Claws?! You're still a wolf! Dang! This is weirder than normal, especially seeing a black and gray furred version of yourself. Eyes glowing red as the ruby that you grabbed from earlier in the desert.\n\nYour copy congratulates you for doing so much... for him. You call him out on what he means. He tells you why as you see he is looking like you now as you and even has...your amulet and bow! But the Amulet is bound in black energy....both yours and HIS! He explains now why he does look like you: it’s to take over what you have. Thanks to the power of the great one, Demise, he can now take over and alter history how he sees it.\n\nThough you growl out as you know what it means... He wants to take you out to be sure the darkness wins and you are forever lost in a dream. You know you got nine hearts to protect. All of them bonded to you. They know you... and you won’t let this thing take you down if you can help it![/i]\n\n\n\n[b][t][center]=VS. Your Darkness=[/center][/t][/b]\n\n\n\n[i]You shot a blue Rupee your darker self as you got a clean hit in on him. The light attack clearly pissed him off as he rushed right at you and started to hit you with a string of strikes. Dealing more damage to you than you to him. Though the problem is this: who is the real you. Is it the one that was harmed more or is the real hero winning?\n\nThe crowd is cheering as it seems they do have a champion...but can you make it out who they want?\n\nThe two of you thought of the same move but you pull it off first as you send your paws into the opposing self.\n\nThe two of you hammering and hitting each other was a clear spectacle with you getting the stronger winning hits. The growls and boos heard as it seems like they hated what happened though you can hear the cheers to get more intense.\n\nYou can tell this audience wanted blood and yet you knew you can only do so much with only yourself. Then again, your partners could only help in the world that is of the mind.\n\nFor their future... for your future... you need to fight on!\n\nYou attack and take the chance to strike in a combination of attacks. Your swings can stun the opposition as you can watch the other get pushed back and sent against the trees.\n\nYou take the chance to attack and hit hard. The battle was quite intense as the two of you attacked each other.\n\nThis time he DIDN'T get pushed away as you you struck some key points and was able to withstand his fury of blows as you take down and both of you are taking the same amount of damage. It's going to be getting more intense as the crowd is cheering and booing.\n\nYou don't know who will win at this pace as you two clearly equal but you want to win...you won't give up…\n\nYou managed to hit the other you hard enough... taking the opposition into a more dangerous position. The Crowd watched as one of your other self lets out a feral war cry. The power within the arena was getting tenser as you watched the arena darken.\n\nYou don't know what will happen but you know that now things get dire for someone and will use certain moves as the crowd cheers for their champion that they want to win. No matter what happens in this arena... one of you will fall!\n\nYou managed to get a solid hit in as the crowd boos and you can hear them stomp and slam the ground as if in protest to what you have done but it is when you were trying to get back that the other you grips you by an arm as he lets out a powerful howl before the area glows and erupts into an explosion of energy! The pain. This pain was so real as you were swallowed up within the intensity of the blast.\n\nYou were caught in a massive explosion and felt yourself bleeding from several locations thanks to that unpleasing version of yourself using the powerful move deep within him but now you saw your opponent coughing blood out of his mouth as he bent over. Clearly using such a power had to have hurt. Then again, you can tell how much that hurt considering he nearly turned himself into a bomb to blow you away and take over. The crowd is cheering as something clearly made them positively come to life, likely your near defeat.\n\nYou manage to stop your target by sliding under the opponent to attack the target, making him fumble and fall as he tried to attack you with him falling onto his face after you gave some… assistance.\n\nSure that was a single strike to the foe but it wasn't lost as you managed to get the other lower only by a little bit.\nAnd now it's clear things will get heated if you aren't careful…\n\nYou take a risk by using the Treas-Sure Shot as you managed to hit aim your weapon at him as he goes to attack, trying to take a swing at you as you take the shot that was kind of off since he was coming in so fast. As you saw the shot show it was a purple rupee you ask yourself: was it worth it to spend a fifty rupee round on your other self?[/i]\n\n\"GGAAAWWAAAAHHHHH\"\n\n[i]With a painful whimper you might have gotten your answer as a weird bit of luck had you hit the floor below and then a little bit of a rebound shot somehow sent that rupee into his personal wallet. You reflexively whence as you knew even if you were against the forces of darkest you normally would never hit them in such a location, at least on purpose. Though it was clear you managed to do something. And now you knew you had to at least put him out of his misery.\n\nYou take the chance as he was still stunned as you hope that you are not shooting a green rupee as you focused your shot and had your hopes go for a sharp shot and pull the trigger.\n\nYou hear the wail as you saw what has happened.\n\nYou sent a RED rupee into his skull.[/i]\n\n[b]“GAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH”[/b]\n\n\"I… curse ...you… I Curse you... I CURSE YOU! ONE DAY I SHALL BE THE VICTOR! I SHALL TAKE OVER YOUR KINGDOM! I SHALL DESTROY YOU AND ALL THAT YOU HOLD DEAR!!\"\n\n[i]You watch as you saw a black Triforce piece fall upon the ground, shattering as you hear the boos of the audience. Knowing that you have done well for yourself. Howling to the now glowing golden moon your dream ends…as well as your adventure.[/i]\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n[center][b]{[Several Years Later]}[/b][/center]\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n[i]Several villages have sprung forth as you can visit one of them as your true self. The new kingdom of the Masked Scale has you feeling there are many Geru, Dodongo, Deadrock, Aeralfos, Kodongo Lizalfos, Terropin, and even a Zazak or two as the place was as bustling as ever.\n\nYou heard the Brothers were here too and that was a great thing as you knew it was about time that you had a reunion.\n\nIn the elder's hut, you find the Gemesaur King, now named Takaramono looks over to you with his mate, Kakushi (the Helmasaur Queen), as they tell you about how their children (both yours and Takaramono's) have been helping with protecting the city, even if the younger ones are a bit over their heads at times but they are as brave as their dads.\n\nIt's at the same time you find out about the brothers (Hono N. Okami in red and Kori Okami in Blue) who have been busy being not only their leaders but also the law as they showed their strength with a bit of a display of battle and sword swinging. They might be brothers but they are quite the swordsmen and you know who to visit if your skills with the blade ever seem to have gotten dulled by time itself.\n\nAs for yourself and the harem of Darlina, Topaz, Ruby, Karen, and Mysti...well it's hard to keep five mates in line but then again that road was NEVER going to be easy by any means as the kids that you gained from them have all been trying to be on top of their skills, some by a blade, some by a wand, and other through the shield. They all were making you a proud champion of the past as you hear the congratulations given by the four leaders.\n\nA loud growl is heard as you look outside.[/i]\n\nTakaramono: Grrrr... that Aquamentus! He wants to call us out again for betraying our 'true leader' again.\n\nHono: Is the guy always THIS loud?\n\nKakushi: With him being this worked up... yes.\n\nYou look to the lot of them and suggest that it's time to show him what he's dealing with... as you show your Royal Broadsword is ready as ever along with your Hylian Shield, the brothers showing their Great Flameblade and Great Frost Blades respectively.\n\nDarlina: You two boys always were into bigger weapons.\n\n[i]You can't help but laugh as she gets her Braced Shield and Moonlight Scimitar. Topaz and Ruby smirk a bit as they get their shields out. Their Radiant Shield and Daybreaker shields are shown with a smile and laugh. You look to the other two as you knew what they might do.[/i]\n\nKaren: Caw. It'd be evil if we let the beast stay...and I finally get to use what you showed me.\n\n[i]She shows off the Falcon Bow as you can tell she has several magic arrows on her.[/i]\n\nMysti: I'm ready too.\n\n[i]As Mysti declared as you see her holding a Guardian's Scepter and was chuckling a bit. You tell Ruby and Topaz to be ready to defend the others as they spoke up.[/i]\n\nTopaz: No problem love.\n\nRuby: Bet this dragon is going to be a cakewalk.\n\n[i]You chuckle to their banter as you look to your special partner Kakushi and her partner as they nod.[/i]\n\nKakushi: GO forth, my heroes. And battle strong.\n\n[i]With a smile, you bow to the two before calling for your allies to join you into battle.[/i]\n\n[b]|}A hero's work may never be done, but your legacy shall live for at least Twenty-three thousand, Six hundred and Sixty years.{|[/b]\n\n\n\n\n[t][center][b]The End[/b][/center][/t]", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "You are the hero of the Triforce of Courage.  Though you have currently the power of your wolf form and are making sure that the darkness that has taken your land is banished from existence with all of your power.

In the last quest, you finally arrived in the desert.  It was quite dangerous, especially with all of the avian foes that you had to vanquish along the way.  You were able to take on the greatest of skyward foes and in the end, the books will surely recall your efforts as the hero of the Triforce as you did end it all... happily ever after...

But... one thing seems to be troubling you as you go into slumber.  That one last thing that lingers in you still...

Closure:  The Real You


You are waking up but it's clear that you are alone... deep in a forest arena. The number of Wolfos is unceasing as you hear the chants of battle. There's at least four thousand, seven hundred, thirty-two of them in the crowd as they seem to be howling and cheering as the moon shines high over you.

You felt that shiver going through your spine as you felt the power of the Darkness appear behind you.  You knew it was one that was ALL too familiar to you and you draw your weapon.  um... Claws?!  You're still a wolf! Dang!  This is weirder than normal, especially seeing a black and gray furred version of yourself. Eyes glowing red as the ruby that you grabbed from earlier in the desert.

Your copy congratulates you for doing so much... for him.  You call him out on what he means.  He tells you why as you see he is looking like you now as you and even has...your amulet and bow!  But the Amulet is bound in black energy....both yours and HIS!  He explains now why he does look like you: it’s to take over what you have.  Thanks to the power of the great one, Demise, he can now take over and alter history how he sees it.

Though you growl out as you know what it means... He wants to take you out to be sure the darkness wins and you are forever lost in a dream.  You know you got nine hearts to protect.  All of them bonded to you. They know you... and you won’t let this thing take you down if you can help it!



=VS. Your Darkness=




You shot a blue Rupee your darker self as you got a clean hit in on him.  The light attack clearly pissed him off as he rushed right at you and started to hit you with a string of strikes.  Dealing more damage to you than you to him.  Though the problem is this: who is the real you.  Is it the one that was harmed more or is the real hero winning?

The crowd is cheering as it seems they do have a champion...but can you make it out who they want?

The two of you thought of the same move but you pull it off first as you send your paws into the opposing self.

The two of you hammering and hitting each other was a clear spectacle with you getting the stronger winning hits.  The growls and boos heard as it seems like they hated what happened though you can hear the cheers to get more intense.

You can tell this audience wanted blood and yet you knew you can only do so much with only yourself.  Then again, your partners could only help in the world that is of the mind.

For their future... for your future... you need to fight on!

You attack and take the chance to strike in a combination of attacks.  Your swings can stun the opposition as you can watch the other get pushed back and sent against the trees.

You take the chance to attack and hit hard.  The battle was quite intense as the two of you attacked each other.

This time he DIDN'T get pushed away as you you struck some key points and was able to withstand his fury of blows as you take down and both of you are taking the same amount of damage.  It's going to be getting more intense as the crowd is cheering and booing.

You don't know who will win at this pace as you two clearly equal but you want to win...you won't give up…

You managed to hit the other you hard enough... taking the opposition into a more dangerous position.  The Crowd watched as one of your other self lets out a feral war cry.  The power within the arena was getting tenser as you watched the arena darken.

You don't know what will happen but you know that now things get dire for someone and will use certain moves as the crowd cheers for their champion that they want to win.  No matter what happens in this arena... one of you will fall!

You managed to get a solid hit in as the crowd boos and you can hear them stomp and slam the ground as if in protest to what you have done but it is when you were trying to get back that the other you grips you by an arm as he lets out a powerful howl before the area glows and erupts into an explosion of energy!  The pain.  This pain was so real as you were swallowed up within the intensity of the blast.

You were caught in a massive explosion and felt yourself bleeding from several locations thanks to that unpleasing version of yourself using the powerful move deep within him but now you saw your opponent coughing blood out of his mouth as he bent over.  Clearly using such a power had to have hurt.  Then again, you can tell how much that hurt considering he nearly turned himself into a bomb to blow you away and take over.  The crowd is cheering as something clearly made them positively come to life, likely your near defeat.

You manage to stop your target by sliding under the opponent to attack the target, making him fumble and fall as he tried to attack you with him falling onto his face after you gave some… assistance.

Sure that was a single strike to the foe but it wasn't lost as you managed to get the other lower only by a little bit.
And now it's clear things will get heated if you aren't careful…

You take a risk by using the Treas-Sure Shot as you managed to hit aim your weapon at him as he goes to attack, trying to take a swing at you as you take the shot that was kind of off since he was coming in so fast.  As you saw the shot show it was a purple rupee you ask yourself: was it worth it to spend a fifty rupee round on your other self?

"GGAAAWWAAAAHHHHH"

With a painful whimper you might have gotten your answer as a weird bit of luck had you hit the floor below and then a little bit of a rebound shot somehow sent that rupee into his personal wallet.  You reflexively whence as you knew even if you were against the forces of darkest you normally would never hit them in such a location, at least on purpose.  Though it was clear you managed to do something.  And now you knew you had to at least put him out of his misery.

You take the chance as he was still stunned as you hope that you are not shooting a green rupee as you focused your shot and had your hopes go for a sharp shot and pull the trigger.

You hear the wail as you saw what has happened.

You sent a RED rupee into his skull.

“GAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH”

"I… curse ...you… I Curse you... I CURSE YOU!  ONE DAY I SHALL BE THE VICTOR!  I SHALL TAKE OVER YOUR KINGDOM!  I SHALL DESTROY YOU AND ALL THAT YOU HOLD DEAR!!"

You watch as you saw a black Triforce piece fall upon the ground, shattering as you hear the boos of the audience. Knowing that you have done well for yourself. Howling to the now glowing golden moon your dream ends…as well as your adventure.









{[Several Years Later]}











Several villages have sprung forth as you can visit one of them as your true self.  The new kingdom of the Masked Scale has you feeling there are many Geru, Dodongo, Deadrock, Aeralfos, Kodongo Lizalfos, Terropin, and even a Zazak or two as the place was as bustling as ever.

You heard the Brothers were here too and that was a great thing as you knew it was about time that you had a reunion.

In the elder's hut, you find the Gemesaur King, now named Takaramono looks over to you with his mate, Kakushi (the Helmasaur Queen), as they tell you about how their children (both yours and Takaramono's) have been helping with protecting the city, even if the younger ones are a bit over their heads at times but they are as brave as their dads.

It's at the same time you find out about the brothers (Hono N. Okami in red and Kori Okami in Blue) who have been busy being not only their leaders but also the law as they showed their strength with a bit of a display of battle and sword swinging.  They might be brothers but they are quite the swordsmen and you know who to visit if your skills with the blade ever seem to have gotten dulled by time itself.

As for yourself and the harem of Darlina, Topaz, Ruby, Karen, and Mysti...well it's hard to keep five mates in line but then again that road was NEVER going to be easy by any means as the kids that you gained from them have all been trying to be on top of their skills, some by a blade, some by a wand, and other through the shield. They all were making you a proud champion of the past as you hear the congratulations given by the four leaders.

A loud growl is heard as you look outside.

Takaramono: Grrrr... that Aquamentus! He wants to call us out again for betraying our 'true leader' again.

Hono: Is the guy always THIS loud?

Kakushi: With him being this worked up... yes.

You look to the lot of them and suggest that it's time to show him what he's dealing with... as you show your Royal Broadsword is ready as ever along with your Hylian Shield, the brothers showing their Great Flameblade and Great Frost Blades respectively.

Darlina: You two boys always were into bigger weapons.

You can't help but laugh as she gets her Braced Shield and Moonlight Scimitar. Topaz and Ruby smirk a bit as they get their shields out.  Their Radiant Shield and Daybreaker shields are shown with a smile and laugh. You look to the other two as you knew what they might do.

Karen: Caw. It'd be evil if we let the beast stay...and I finally get to use what you showed me.

She shows off the Falcon Bow as you can tell she has several magic arrows on her.

Mysti: I'm ready too.

As Mysti declared as you see her holding a Guardian's Scepter and was chuckling a bit. You tell Ruby and Topaz to be ready to defend the others as they spoke up.

Topaz: No problem love.

Ruby: Bet this dragon is going to be a cakewalk.

You chuckle to their banter as you look to your special partner Kakushi and her partner as they nod.

Kakushi: GO forth, my heroes.  And battle strong.

With a smile, you bow to the two before calling for your allies to join you into battle.

|}A hero's work may never be done, but your legacy shall live for at least Twenty-three thousand, Six hundred and Sixty years.{|




The End
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