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dead, well at least I want to think so, he told me he's in Afghanistan.\n\nIzzi: Now I remember, mom and dad talked to a Shiba in the city and he claimed to have seen you but he didn't know where you went.\n\nTay: Yes that's him.\n\nHe gets up and turns towards the house.\n\nTay: I feel like going to the bathroom, I'll be right back.\n\nBecky: Tay wait a minute.\n\nBecky: I just want to tell you that I still can't believe that someone as clueless and ignorant as you could be alone in a city and nothing would happen to him.\n\nTay: You know I'm not as dumb as I used to be right?\n\nBecky: Yes, but it's still dangerous, someone could have kidnapped you or done something to you.\n\nBecky: How did you manage to be okay all day?\n\nTay looked at Becky forgetting for a moment the urge to pee and with a mischievous smile started to sing to her.\n\nTay: soobreviviendooooo, soobreviviendoooo.\n\nThen he ran into the house, Becky and Izzi looked at him with a WTF face, Katherine and David laughed, Jules and Scooter just raised their shoulders and continued sorting the cards on the board.\n\nWhen it was 6:47 p.m. everyone started eating, laughing at some jokes and tricks they did with coins and handkerchiefs until nightfall, Scooter and Jules went home and moments later Becky left because her mom was calling her.\n\nAt 9:35 pm they finished cleaning up, Carmen helped Brenda put away some of the leftover barbecue and Gonzalo helped Jason disassemble the grills, one was stored in Jason's garage and the other was put in Gonzalo's pickup truck.\n\nWhen they finished they all said their goodbyes, the Morales family got in their pickup and returned home. The McIntosh family gathered in the living room to watch some old family videos and then they all went to sleep, the night passed and it started to get light, it was Monday, Tay was the first one to be awake, he had gotten used to sleeping at 10:00 at night and getting up at 6:00 in the morning just like his other family, he went to take a bath and when he finished he went back to his room and put on his school uniform but when he met his mom in the hallway she told him that they would both miss school that day.\n\nTay: Why mom?\n\nBrenda: Yesterday Carmen and Gonzalo advised me to take you to the pediatrician for a check up.\n\nTay: But I'm not sick mom.\n\nBrenda: It's not because of that, honey, it's because of what you and your sister did.\n\nBrenda paused for a moment and continued with a heavy sigh.\n\nBrenda: You had sex and that can lead to something risky for your sister's age (her voice cracked a little).\n\nBrenda: They are too young to have puppies love (she said feeling confident in her words).\n\nTay: I understand mom, you're right and I'm willing to do whatever you ask me to do.\n\nTay: But how are you going to tell Izzi?\n\nBrenda: Your dad and I will talk to your sister.\n\nBrenda: She's smart and I know she'll understand too.\n\nBrenda bends down and hugs her son.\n\nBrenda: I'm glad to know that you understand me.\n\nTay: I made you a promise mom.\n\nBrenda: I know, love, and I know you won't break it.\n\nTay: But, now I'm scared mom, I never thought about it before.\n\nTay: To think that I could have gotten my sister pregnant.\n\nTears started to come to his eyes but Brenda comforted him.\n\nBrenda: You just have to have faith, I hope everything works out and you're not too \"mature\" to impregnate someone.\n\nBrenda: You are only 9 years old after all.\n\nTay calmed down when he heard his mom and hugged her, then he went into his room to take off his uniform and change into something more casual.\n\nThen he went downstairs to join his mom in the kitchen, an hour later the whole family was eating, Brenda and Jason were explaining to Izzi what they were going to do today.\n\nIzzi was very surprised and at the same time very confused, her thoughts turned into a tornado and she ate on autopilot while thinking.\n\nIzzi: \"I never considered this.\"\n\nIzzi: \"I knew a little bit about the consequences but I didn't care.\"\n\nIzzi: \"What if I'm pregnant with Tay?\"\n\nIzzi: \"It would be our puppy\" (She feels a slight tingle).\n\nIzzi: \"But would mom and dad accept it?\"\n\nShe looked at her brother and felt some frustration at seeing him so unconcerned.\n\nIzzi: \"Even though he has changed in his personality he still doesn't give much importance to the things that happen in front of his nose.\"\n\nIzzi's thoughts were getting more and more confused and he was starting to get a headache, so he just let out a sigh deciding to trust his luck and face the consequences.\n\nIzzi: \"I've suffered enough, maybe I can take one more hit\" (She said to herself as she finished eating).\n\nWhen they finished breakfast, Brenda and Jason went upstairs to change clothes and Izzi followed them, Tay stayed in the living room to wait for them, he sat on the couch and started tapping his foot on the floor because he was so nervous and started to worry about the things he had overlooked since he had sex with his sister a month ago.\n\nA couple of hours later the whole family was in the car, Jason drove through the busy city streets until they arrived at the hospital that Carmen and Gonzalo recommended, Jason parked and they all got out of the car.\n\nBrenda made an appointment with Dr. Vanessa Delgado (this pediatrician also treats David and Katherine so Carmen recommended her to Brenda). After half an hour they were called into the doctor's office.\n\nIzzi was lying on the gurney with her belly exposed, without her skirt and panties, the doctor who is an arctic fox was checking her. Vanessa checked Izzi with her warm paw covered by the latex glove then changed position removing the glove so she could feel Izzi's belly.\n\nVanessa: Well I have good news (She looks at Izzi and Brenda).\n\nVanessa: You're not pregnant honey (she adjusts her bright red glasses that stand out against her white fur).\n\nVanessa: You can put your clothes back on sweetheart.\n\nIzzi sat down and with her mother's help she put on her panties and skirt, Vanessa opened the door to her office.\n\nVanessa: You can come in now.\n\nJason and Tay walked in behind the arctic fox and sat down in front of her desk next to Brenda and Izzi.\n\nJason: And how is my daughter, was she pregnant or not? (He said impatiently).\n\nVanessa: As I already told your wife, your daughter is not pregnant.\n\nJason and Tay breathed a sigh of relief at the same time.\n\nBrenda: Are you sure? you don't need to do an ultrasound or a test.\n\nVanessa: I don't think that's necessary, but if you want to be sure you can take a test in the bathroom down the hall (she took a pregnancy test out of the drawer and handed it to Brenda).\n\nBrenda takes the test and accompanied Izzi to the bathroom.\n\nJason: And with just a simple check you're sure about that?\n\nVanessa: (looks at Tay) How long ago did you have sex, love?\n\nTay: (blushes and almost unable to speak he answers) More than a month ago.\n\nVanessa: (looks at Jason) Even though your kind are not that common in America, I know for sure that their gestation period is two months.\n\nVanessa: If your daughter were pregnant she would be at a very advanced stage by now.\n\nJason: I understand and I feel silly for not remembering that.\n\nVanessa: Don't worry most parents almost always forget those details.\n\nJason looked at the nice snow white doctor and laughed nervously then Brenda and Izzi came into the office and Brenda handed the pregnancy test to the doctor.\n\nVanessa: Okay this proves it (she said pointing the pregnancy test at the couple).\n\nVanessa: It's negative.\n\nBrenda: I am so relieved, I was worried that my son would be old enough to get her pregnant.\n\nVanessa: It's unlikely, but it didn't happen this time.\n\nIzzi: And if we had been older it would have happened? (She said with intrigue).\n\nVanessa: No doubt about it.\n\nVanessa: Besides your brother told me that his \"incident\" happened over a month ago, if you were pregnant you would have a big belly by now.\n\nBrenda: That's true, I was so shocked when I found out what they did that I didn't remember that.\n\nVanessa: (Smiles and adjusts her glasses) You know, you reminded me of a very similar case that a friend of mine had.\n\nVanessa: She is also a fox but of the fennec subspecies, her name is Valerie Shoemarker and she also specializes in pediatrics.\n\nBrenda: Actually she also had a case similar to ours? (She looked the arctic fox in the eyes).\n\nVanessa: Yes, and from what she told me, the other family did have more difficulties than you.\n\nBrenda: I know this shouldn't interest us, but can you tell us more please.\n\nVanessa: Oh sure, it shouldn't be a problem.\n\nVanessa checks her agenda to make sure she doesn't have any more appointments scheduled, after a quick review she smiles with satisfaction and starts to tell them the story of her friend Valerie.\n\nVanessa: Ok, Valerie would tell them after she met them so it's not a problem.\n\nVanessa: Well, she told me that a few months ago she had to take care of the daughter of a family of leopards, the Fleck family if I remember correctly.\n\nVanessa: They also have twins just like you and these siblings also had sex.\n\nBrenda: God, I can imagine the bad time they had.\n\nVanessa: Yeah and that wasn't the worst of it, Katie did get pregnant by her brother Tommy.\n\nBrenda: Really?\n\nVanessa: It's just that these siblings were about to turn 12 and they are already mature in a way.\n\nVanessa looked at the two twins who were listening to her story very attentively and with their ears perked up.\n\nVanessa: You are only 9 years old and it is unlikely to happen but by saying this I am not encouraging you to keep doing it, if you get your sister knotted you could get her pregnant.\n\nTay: (blushing) No doctor, I will never do it again.\n\nBrenda: If I were to tie her up?\n\nVanessa: Well, when I checked Isabelle I could see that her hymen is almost intact and that makes me think that there wasn't complete penetration.\n\nBrenda: Looks like the universe didn't allow that to happen after all (she settled back in the chair feeling more relieved).\n\nVanessa looked at the twins, they looked like tomatoes from how flushed they were.\n\nVanessa: (holds back a giggle and adjusts her glasses) Well, I'll continue with what I was telling you before it gets too late.\n\nVanessa settled back in her chair and continued with her story.\n\nVanessa: Where did I leave off?, yes, little Katie was already very advanced in her pregnancy and when her parents realized it was too late and Alison the mother of the leopard twins wanted to have her daughter aborted, she did not approve of the product of the incestuous union of her children.\n\nJason looked at Brenda and she seemed to understand what he was trying to tell her with his look, they would never hurt their children no matter what.\n\nJason: And aborting a child is risky?\n\nVanessa: Of course, it has its risks when it's a little girl and it's even more so when it's done in clandestine places.\n\nJason: And what happened next?\n\nVanessa: Well Valerie told me that after a few days both children ran away from home because they didn't want their baby to be hurt, but luckily they found them in a forest not far from where they lived.\n\nVanessa: My poor friend had kind of a bad night that time, when the leopard twins called her very distressed she felt she had to warn Julian the father of the cubs, she thought she was doing the right thing.\n\nVanessa: But she didn't expect Julian's reaction, she told me he sounded very upset on the phone, he later arrived at the hospital where he works in a very violent manner, breaking the front door window with his hands and entering his office very upset.\n\nVanessa: Just imagine her being a little fennec and having to calm down a big cat.\n\nBrenda: She must have been very scared.\n\nVanessa: Nothing serious happened thank God, Julian was overcome by his anguish and just cried without being able to do anything, Valerie helped him with a wound he got when he broke the glass of the door and they went to the forest to look for Katie and Tommy.\n\nJason: But they are ok now, aren't they?\n\nVanessa: Yes, the two puppies are now at home with their father and their aunt Caroline.\n\nBrenda: What happened to the baby the girl was expecting?\n\nVanessa: The baby was already at an advanced stage, legally Valerie can't perform the abortion.\n\nJason: What about Alison?\n\nVanessa: (she lets out a sigh) She abandoned them, Julian took their children's side and defended them, Alison when she saw that her husband would not allow the abortion she abandoned them.\n\nJason: That's what a good father would do for his children, defend them no matter what (he looks at his children with a loving smile).\n\nTay and Izzi look at their dad and get up to hug him.\n\nBrenda: You know that I would defend them with my own life too, don't you love? (she looks at him seriously).\n\nJason: Yes, I know love, don't misunderstand me.\n\nTay and Izzi separate from their dad and hug their mom.\n\nTay, Izzi: We love you too, mom.\n\nVanessa smiles at the sight of them, they were a beautiful family, very close and happy.\n\nVanessa: Well, time is flying by, I have some unfinished business to take care of right now.\n\nJason: Okay, before we go I just want to ask you one more thing.\n\nVanessa: Sure.\n\nJason: The girl did have the baby, did her mom come back or what happened?\n\nVanessa: Unfortunately I don't know, it's been a long time since I last talked to Valerie.\n\nJason: Well, at least now we know that we weren't the only ones and that we were very lucky that the same thing didn't happen to us.\n\nVanessa: No doubt about it.\n\nAfter Vanessa gave them her business card they said goodbye to her and the family left the hospital, after eating something at a restaurant they returned home.\n\nAnd so time went by, the McIntosh's life returned to normal and little by little they were forgetting that nightmare, Tay was always in contact with Katherine and they spent time together when their families agreed to meet to go for a walk on their days off, Izzi felt a little jealous to see them together because deep down she was still in love with her brother.\n\nTay and Corey struck up a great friendship, and the fox boy proved to be very sociable and friendly, Tay also became best friends with Corey's little brother, Devon.\n\nAnd to make their friendship even better, he noticed that Corey was still being so sweet and gentlemanly to his sister without him needing to intervene, maybe they were destined to be together after all and Tay was happy about that.\n\nOne day Brenda and Jason had to go out and left the twins alone at night, Izzi had arranged with Becky to have a sleepover together at Becky's house and Tay had no problem staying alone, he took advantage of the occasion to practice with the guitar that Gonzalo gave 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too if you don't think of something smarter.\n\nIzzi ignored Becky and started to slowly walk up the stairs trying not to make any noise, Becky followed her and grabbed her paw.\n\nBecky: Wait Izzi, at least let me call the police before I try to help Tay.\n\nThe scared raccoon took out her cell phone but before dialing the emergency number the voice they heard suddenly disappeared and silence reigned for a few long seconds, before they could think of anything the girls heard the sound of a guitar and then the unmistakable voice of Tay.\n\nThe song Tay was singing and playing on her guitar was [b][u]Boulevard of broken dreams by Green Days.\n[/u][/b]\nThe two girls were very confused and looked at each other's faces, then they went upstairs with a lot of intrigue until they reached the hallway and walked very carefully they approached the door of Tay's room, there he was, sitting on the edge of the bed playing his guitar and singing, his voice was a little out of tune but it was still something nice to hear, Becky leaned on the floor and Izzi leaned on her, both were delighted with the song that Tay was playing. \n\nTay was so focused on what he was doing that he didn't notice them looking at him in front of the door.\n\nBecky: I didn't know Tay played the guitar so beautifully.\n\nIzzi: Neither did I.\n\nIzzi: And where did he get that guitar?\n\nTay finished interpreting the song with great satisfaction, he was getting better and better but he still had to work on his voice, he planned to surprise Katherine on her birthday and he wanted to surprise her by dedicating a song to her no matter if his sister and parents were hearing it for the first time.\n\nWhile he was putting his guitar in the case Tay had the feeling that someone was watching him and he started to look around until he saw the two girls lying on the floor looking as if they were in love, Tay screamed when he saw them and fell backwards to the floor with a start, the two girls quickly got up to help him.\n\nTay: What the heck, how long were they here for?\n\nBecky: (blushes) Long enough to be able to hear you.\n\nTay blushes and looks away as he gets up with the help of his sister.\n\nIzzi: You play the guitar so beautifully, why didn't you tell us?\n\nTay: Well I... I was embarrassed (Tay looks at the floor blushing).\n\nBecky: Why are you embarrassed if you do it so well.\n\nTay: Do you really think so?\n\nBecky: YES.\n\nTay: Thanks, I guess (he scratches his head).\n\nBecky: Can you play one more song?\n\nTay: I don't know, I'm embarrassed (he blushes looking to the side).\n\nIzzi: Come on, please (she makes tender eyes).\n\nTay: Ok\n\nTay: And what song do you want me to play?\n\nBacky: I don't know, some song that you like, we could also help you to sing better, without being out of tune.\n\nTay: Ok, thank you.\n\nTay took his guitar and got ready to play it, the girls sat on the bed next to Tay and looked at the guitar for a moment.\n\nIzzi: Where did you get it Tay?\n\nTay: Gonzalo gave it to me.\n\nIzzi: Really? \n\nIzzi: And why?\n\nTay: He was the one who taught me how to play the guitar and he bought me one as a gift.\n\nTay: He told me that I have talent and it would be a shame to waste it.\n\nIzzi: Well, it's very pretty, I like its color and shape.\n\nTay: Gonzalo told me it's personalized, so no one else has one like it.\n\nIzzi: That's great.\n\nBecky: And why do you have this hole and these buttons here?\n\nBecky: My mom's friend has a guitar but it doesn't have these buttons.\n\nTay: Because it's an electro-acoustic guitar.\n\nBecky: Electro what?\n\nTay: Acoustic, I didn't know what those buttons were for so I asked Gonzalo.\n\nTay: And he told me that they were used to connect it to an amplifier and make it sound louder and cleaner.\n\nBecky: Cool.\n\nTay looks at the girls and smiles, puts his guitar on his lap and gets ready to pluck its strings.\n\nTay: So, what do you want to sing? (This time he felt more confident).\n\nThe three of them searched some videos on the internet until they found one that they liked, after practicing it for a while Tay started to interpret that melody and sing along with the girls choir, for them it was the best sleepover they could have had, it was so much fun that they started to sing more songs together and Tay was already singing much better with the help of Becky and his sister, several hours passed until Jason and Brenda came back and found this nice surprise, when they saw them they also accompanied them in two more songs before they all went to sleep.\n\nTay was very happy to get that weight off his shoulders and to be able to be completely honest with his family and friends, he will always remember the look of pride on his mom and dad's faces when they saw him playing the guitar.\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
UNEXPECTTRACTION

Chapter 10

A doctor's appointment

Written by James Rex

As they prepared the second round, Becky asked Tay about the things he did when he ran away.

Becky: Were you scared about being alone in the city?

Tay: Yes, a little, but I felt more scared when it got dark.

Becky: And were you hungry or did you eat anything?

Tay: A nice gentleman gave me two hot dogs.

Becky: Really?

Tay: Yep, he told me I looked like his son.

Becky: Oh poor thing he must have been in a lot of pain when he died.

Tay: He's not dead, well at least I want to think so, he told me he's in Afghanistan.

Izzi: Now I remember, mom and dad talked to a Shiba in the city and he claimed to have seen you but he didn't know where you went.

Tay: Yes that's him.

He gets up and turns towards the house.

Tay: I feel like going to the bathroom, I'll be right back.

Becky: Tay wait a minute.

Becky: I just want to tell you that I still can't believe that someone as clueless and ignorant as you could be alone in a city and nothing would happen to him.

Tay: You know I'm not as dumb as I used to be right?

Becky: Yes, but it's still dangerous, someone could have kidnapped you or done something to you.

Becky: How did you manage to be okay all day?

Tay looked at Becky forgetting for a moment the urge to pee and with a mischievous smile started to sing to her.

Tay: soobreviviendooooo, soobreviviendoooo.

Then he ran into the house, Becky and Izzi looked at him with a WTF face, Katherine and David laughed, Jules and Scooter just raised their shoulders and continued sorting the cards on the board.

When it was 6:47 p.m. everyone started eating, laughing at some jokes and tricks they did with coins and handkerchiefs until nightfall, Scooter and Jules went home and moments later Becky left because her mom was calling her.

At 9:35 pm they finished cleaning up, Carmen helped Brenda put away some of the leftover barbecue and Gonzalo helped Jason disassemble the grills, one was stored in Jason's garage and the other was put in Gonzalo's pickup truck.

When they finished they all said their goodbyes, the Morales family got in their pickup and returned home. The McIntosh family gathered in the living room to watch some old family videos and then they all went to sleep, the night passed and it started to get light, it was Monday, Tay was the first one to be awake, he had gotten used to sleeping at 10:00 at night and getting up at 6:00 in the morning just like his other family, he went to take a bath and when he finished he went back to his room and put on his school uniform but when he met his mom in the hallway she told him that they would both miss school that day.

Tay: Why mom?

Brenda: Yesterday Carmen and Gonzalo advised me to take you to the pediatrician for a check up.

Tay: But I'm not sick mom.

Brenda: It's not because of that, honey, it's because of what you and your sister did.

Brenda paused for a moment and continued with a heavy sigh.

Brenda: You had sex and that can lead to something risky for your sister's age (her voice cracked a little).

Brenda: They are too young to have puppies love (she said feeling confident in her words).

Tay: I understand mom, you're right and I'm willing to do whatever you ask me to do.

Tay: But how are you going to tell Izzi?

Brenda: Your dad and I will talk to your sister.

Brenda: She's smart and I know she'll understand too.

Brenda bends down and hugs her son.

Brenda: I'm glad to know that you understand me.

Tay: I made you a promise mom.

Brenda: I know, love, and I know you won't break it.

Tay: But, now I'm scared mom, I never thought about it before.

Tay: To think that I could have gotten my sister pregnant.

Tears started to come to his eyes but Brenda comforted him.

Brenda: You just have to have faith, I hope everything works out and you're not too "mature" to impregnate someone.

Brenda: You are only 9 years old after all.

Tay calmed down when he heard his mom and hugged her, then he went into his room to take off his uniform and change into something more casual.

Then he went downstairs to join his mom in the kitchen, an hour later the whole family was eating, Brenda and Jason were explaining to Izzi what they were going to do today.

Izzi was very surprised and at the same time very confused, her thoughts turned into a tornado and she ate on autopilot while thinking.

Izzi: "I never considered this."

Izzi: "I knew a little bit about the consequences but I didn't care."

Izzi: "What if I'm pregnant with Tay?"

Izzi: "It would be our puppy" (She feels a slight tingle).

Izzi: "But would mom and dad accept it?"

She looked at her brother and felt some frustration at seeing him so unconcerned.

Izzi: "Even though he has changed in his personality he still doesn't give much importance to the things that happen in front of his nose."

Izzi's thoughts were getting more and more confused and he was starting to get a headache, so he just let out a sigh deciding to trust his luck and face the consequences.

Izzi: "I've suffered enough, maybe I can take one more hit" (She said to herself as she finished eating).

When they finished breakfast, Brenda and Jason went upstairs to change clothes and Izzi followed them, Tay stayed in the living room to wait for them, he sat on the couch and started tapping his foot on the floor because he was so nervous and started to worry about the things he had overlooked since he had sex with his sister a month ago.

A couple of hours later the whole family was in the car, Jason drove through the busy city streets until they arrived at the hospital that Carmen and Gonzalo recommended, Jason parked and they all got out of the car.

Brenda made an appointment with Dr. Vanessa Delgado (this pediatrician also treats David and Katherine so Carmen recommended her to Brenda). After half an hour they were called into the doctor's office.

Izzi was lying on the gurney with her belly exposed, without her skirt and panties, the doctor who is an arctic fox was checking her. Vanessa checked Izzi with her warm paw covered by the latex glove then changed position removing the glove so she could feel Izzi's belly.

Vanessa: Well I have good news (She looks at Izzi and Brenda).

Vanessa: You're not pregnant honey (she adjusts her bright red glasses that stand out against her white fur).

Vanessa: You can put your clothes back on sweetheart.

Izzi sat down and with her mother's help she put on her panties and skirt, Vanessa opened the door to her office.

Vanessa: You can come in now.

Jason and Tay walked in behind the arctic fox and sat down in front of her desk next to Brenda and Izzi.

Jason: And how is my daughter, was she pregnant or not? (He said impatiently).

Vanessa: As I already told your wife, your daughter is not pregnant.

Jason and Tay breathed a sigh of relief at the same time.

Brenda: Are you sure? you don't need to do an ultrasound or a test.

Vanessa: I don't think that's necessary, but if you want to be sure you can take a test in the bathroom down the hall (she took a pregnancy test out of the drawer and handed it to Brenda).

Brenda takes the test and accompanied Izzi to the bathroom.

Jason: And with just a simple check you're sure about that?

Vanessa: (looks at Tay) How long ago did you have sex, love?

Tay: (blushes and almost unable to speak he answers) More than a month ago.

Vanessa: (looks at Jason) Even though your kind are not that common in America, I know for sure that their gestation period is two months.

Vanessa: If your daughter were pregnant she would be at a very advanced stage by now.

Jason: I understand and I feel silly for not remembering that.

Vanessa: Don't worry most parents almost always forget those details.

Jason looked at the nice snow white doctor and laughed nervously then Brenda and Izzi came into the office and Brenda handed the pregnancy test to the doctor.

Vanessa: Okay this proves it (she said pointing the pregnancy test at the couple).

Vanessa: It's negative.

Brenda: I am so relieved, I was worried that my son would be old enough to get her pregnant.

Vanessa: It's unlikely, but it didn't happen this time.

Izzi: And if we had been older it would have happened? (She said with intrigue).

Vanessa: No doubt about it.

Vanessa: Besides your brother told me that his "incident" happened over a month ago, if you were pregnant you would have a big belly by now.

Brenda: That's true, I was so shocked when I found out what they did that I didn't remember that.

Vanessa: (Smiles and adjusts her glasses) You know, you reminded me of a very similar case that a friend of mine had.

Vanessa: She is also a fox but of the fennec subspecies, her name is Valerie Shoemarker and she also specializes in pediatrics.

Brenda: Actually she also had a case similar to ours? (She looked the arctic fox in the eyes).

Vanessa: Yes, and from what she told me, the other family did have more difficulties than you.

Brenda: I know this shouldn't interest us, but can you tell us more please.

Vanessa: Oh sure, it shouldn't be a problem.

Vanessa checks her agenda to make sure she doesn't have any more appointments scheduled, after a quick review she smiles with satisfaction and starts to tell them the story of her friend Valerie.

Vanessa: Ok, Valerie would tell them after she met them so it's not a problem.

Vanessa: Well, she told me that a few months ago she had to take care of the daughter of a family of leopards, the Fleck family if I remember correctly.

Vanessa: They also have twins just like you and these siblings also had sex.

Brenda: God, I can imagine the bad time they had.

Vanessa: Yeah and that wasn't the worst of it, Katie did get pregnant by her brother Tommy.

Brenda: Really?

Vanessa: It's just that these siblings were about to turn 12 and they are already mature in a way.

Vanessa looked at the two twins who were listening to her story very attentively and with their ears perked up.

Vanessa: You are only 9 years old and it is unlikely to happen but by saying this I am not encouraging you to keep doing it, if you get your sister knotted you could get her pregnant.

Tay: (blushing) No doctor, I will never do it again.

Brenda: If I were to tie her up?

Vanessa: Well, when I checked Isabelle I could see that her hymen is almost intact and that makes me think that there wasn't complete penetration.

Brenda: Looks like the universe didn't allow that to happen after all (she settled back in the chair feeling more relieved).

Vanessa looked at the twins, they looked like tomatoes from how flushed they were.

Vanessa: (holds back a giggle and adjusts her glasses) Well, I'll continue with what I was telling you before it gets too late.

Vanessa settled back in her chair and continued with her story.

Vanessa: Where did I leave off?, yes, little Katie was already very advanced in her pregnancy and when her parents realized it was too late and Alison the mother of the leopard twins wanted to have her daughter aborted, she did not approve of the product of the incestuous union of her children.

Jason looked at Brenda and she seemed to understand what he was trying to tell her with his look, they would never hurt their children no matter what.

Jason: And aborting a child is risky?

Vanessa: Of course, it has its risks when it's a little girl and it's even more so when it's done in clandestine places.

Jason: And what happened next?

Vanessa: Well Valerie told me that after a few days both children ran away from home because they didn't want their baby to be hurt, but luckily they found them in a forest not far from where they lived.

Vanessa: My poor friend had kind of a bad night that time, when the leopard twins called her very distressed she felt she had to warn Julian the father of the cubs, she thought she was doing the right thing.

Vanessa: But she didn't expect Julian's reaction, she told me he sounded very upset on the phone, he later arrived at the hospital where he works in a very violent manner, breaking the front door window with his hands and entering his office very upset.

Vanessa: Just imagine her being a little fennec and having to calm down a big cat.

Brenda: She must have been very scared.

Vanessa: Nothing serious happened thank God, Julian was overcome by his anguish and just cried without being able to do anything, Valerie helped him with a wound he got when he broke the glass of the door and they went to the forest to look for Katie and Tommy.

Jason: But they are ok now, aren't they?

Vanessa: Yes, the two puppies are now at home with their father and their aunt Caroline.

Brenda: What happened to the baby the girl was expecting?

Vanessa: The baby was already at an advanced stage, legally Valerie can't perform the abortion.

Jason: What about Alison?

Vanessa: (she lets out a sigh) She abandoned them, Julian took their children's side and defended them, Alison when she saw that her husband would not allow the abortion she abandoned them.

Jason: That's what a good father would do for his children, defend them no matter what (he looks at his children with a loving smile).

Tay and Izzi look at their dad and get up to hug him.

Brenda: You know that I would defend them with my own life too, don't you love? (she looks at him seriously).

Jason: Yes, I know love, don't misunderstand me.

Tay and Izzi separate from their dad and hug their mom.

Tay, Izzi: We love you too, mom.

Vanessa smiles at the sight of them, they were a beautiful family, very close and happy.

Vanessa: Well, time is flying by, I have some unfinished business to take care of right now.

Jason: Okay, before we go I just want to ask you one more thing.

Vanessa: Sure.

Jason: The girl did have the baby, did her mom come back or what happened?

Vanessa: Unfortunately I don't know, it's been a long time since I last talked to Valerie.

Jason: Well, at least now we know that we weren't the only ones and that we were very lucky that the same thing didn't happen to us.

Vanessa: No doubt about it.

After Vanessa gave them her business card they said goodbye to her and the family left the hospital, after eating something at a restaurant they returned home.

And so time went by, the McIntosh's life returned to normal and little by little they were forgetting that nightmare, Tay was always in contact with Katherine and they spent time together when their families agreed to meet to go for a walk on their days off, Izzi felt a little jealous to see them together because deep down she was still in love with her brother.

Tay and Corey struck up a great friendship, and the fox boy proved to be very sociable and friendly, Tay also became best friends with Corey's little brother, Devon.

And to make their friendship even better, he noticed that Corey was still being so sweet and gentlemanly to his sister without him needing to intervene, maybe they were destined to be together after all and Tay was happy about that.

One day Brenda and Jason had to go out and left the twins alone at night, Izzi had arranged with Becky to have a sleepover together at Becky's house and Tay had no problem staying alone, he took advantage of the occasion to practice with the guitar that Gonzalo gave him, after the girls left Tay took his guitar out of the closet and looked for some videos of songs with his tutorial until he found one he liked.

Tay felt a nice tingle run through her body as he touches the strings of his guitar and started to sing the chords she saw in the video, after practicing the chords of the song several times Tay played the video from the beginning at full volume on her phone and watched the video to make sure she got everything right.

Meanwhile the two girls finally decided to accompany Tay, after entering the house the girls walked to the stairs and froze in fear as they heard the voice of an adult in the house.

The two girls started whispering in fear.

Becky: Someone is here, did you hear it Izzi?

Izzi: Yes and I'm scared, where is Tay?

Becky: What do we do now?

Izzi: I'm going upstairs.

Becky: Are you crazy?

Izzi: My brother must be in there with that person and what if he is doing something to him.

Becky: And he'll get you too if you don't think of something smarter.

Izzi ignored Becky and started to slowly walk up the stairs trying not to make any noise, Becky followed her and grabbed her paw.

Becky: Wait Izzi, at least let me call the police before I try to help Tay.

The scared raccoon took out her cell phone but before dialing the emergency number the voice they heard suddenly disappeared and silence reigned for a few long seconds, before they could think of anything the girls heard the sound of a guitar and then the unmistakable voice of Tay.

The song Tay was singing and playing on her guitar was Boulevard of broken dreams by Green Days.

The two girls were very confused and looked at each other's faces, then they went upstairs with a lot of intrigue until they reached the hallway and walked very carefully they approached the door of Tay's room, there he was, sitting on the edge of the bed playing his guitar and singing, his voice was a little out of tune but it was still something nice to hear, Becky leaned on the floor and Izzi leaned on her, both were delighted with the song that Tay was playing.

Tay was so focused on what he was doing that he didn't notice them looking at him in front of the door.

Becky: I didn't know Tay played the guitar so beautifully.

Izzi: Neither did I.

Izzi: And where did he get that guitar?

Tay finished interpreting the song with great satisfaction, he was getting better and better but he still had to work on his voice, he planned to surprise Katherine on her birthday and he wanted to surprise her by dedicating a song to her no matter if his sister and parents were hearing it for the first time.

While he was putting his guitar in the case Tay had the feeling that someone was watching him and he started to look around until he saw the two girls lying on the floor looking as if they were in love, Tay screamed when he saw them and fell backwards to the floor with a start, the two girls quickly got up to help him.

Tay: What the heck, how long were they here for?

Becky: (blushes) Long enough to be able to hear you.

Tay blushes and looks away as he gets up with the help of his sister.

Izzi: You play the guitar so beautifully, why didn't you tell us?

Tay: Well I... I was embarrassed (Tay looks at the floor blushing).

Becky: Why are you embarrassed if you do it so well.

Tay: Do you really think so?

Becky: YES.

Tay: Thanks, I guess (he scratches his head).

Becky: Can you play one more song?

Tay: I don't know, I'm embarrassed (he blushes looking to the side).

Izzi: Come on, please (she makes tender eyes).

Tay: Ok

Tay: And what song do you want me to play?

Backy: I don't know, some song that you like, we could also help you to sing better, without being out of tune.

Tay: Ok, thank you.

Tay took his guitar and got ready to play it, the girls sat on the bed next to Tay and looked at the guitar for a moment.

Izzi: Where did you get it Tay?

Tay: Gonzalo gave it to me.

Izzi: Really?

Izzi: And why?

Tay: He was the one who taught me how to play the guitar and he bought me one as a gift.

Tay: He told me that I have talent and it would be a shame to waste it.

Izzi: Well, it's very pretty, I like its color and shape.

Tay: Gonzalo told me it's personalized, so no one else has one like it.

Izzi: That's great.

Becky: And why do you have this hole and these buttons here?

Becky: My mom's friend has a guitar but it doesn't have these buttons.

Tay: Because it's an electro-acoustic guitar.

Becky: Electro what?

Tay: Acoustic, I didn't know what those buttons were for so I asked Gonzalo.

Tay: And he told me that they were used to connect it to an amplifier and make it sound louder and cleaner.

Becky: Cool.

Tay looks at the girls and smiles, puts his guitar on his lap and gets ready to pluck its strings.

Tay: So, what do you want to sing? (This time he felt more confident).

The three of them searched some videos on the internet until they found one that they liked, after practicing it for a while Tay started to interpret that melody and sing along with the girls choir, for them it was the best sleepover they could have had, it was so much fun that they started to sing more songs together and Tay was already singing much better with the help of Becky and his sister, several hours passed until Jason and Brenda came back and found this nice surprise, when they saw them they also accompanied them in two more songs before they all went to sleep.

Tay was very happy to get that weight off his shoulders and to be able to be completely honest with his family and friends, he will always remember the look of pride on his mom and dad's faces when they saw him playing the guitar.

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