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Out side birds chirped songs, warm air rose in the field, and the day was generally jolly. It was annoying the bear something fierce. Consciousness took root like a weed and assaulted his sleep. Ok he thought time to get up. A few blinks and a deep breath finished the process, now Jake pulled back the blanket and swung his legs off the side with almost theatrical effort. He leaned over the edge of the mattress groping inside the suitcase for the pajama shorts he had avoided the night prior. The groggy brown bear looked over to see the deer boy still fast asleep. He pulled the shorts on and adjusted himself, morning wood was no excuse for poor manners. He grabbed the shirt and was now set to leave the camper, after all he didn't want to wake his friend when he was the one with the day off to nap as he pleased.\n\nAt this point the rest of his body had begun reporting in to his brain once more and he was becoming aware of three urgent matters. First, his mouth was dry making him thirsty. Second, his bladder was full and he needed to take a piss. Third, his head ached from last nights drinking so any thought going into which he should do first, either get a drink or take a piss, was gonna be painful. Instead he thought `I'll figure that out when I get there' Not bladder, mouth, nor head were pleased with this decision and all three protested. On his way out the door he grabbed a mug from the counter top. \n\nOutside he slipped on the sandals that had been discarded by the welcome mat before shuffling over to the spigot. The mouth won. He filled the cup and shivered as the refreshing crisp water filled his mouth and rejuvenated his throat. This sparked an out right rebellion from his bladder leaving little choice. With one paw gripping the mug the other hastily tugged one side at a time on the black cotton shorts lowering the front enough to clear the way. Now both mouth and bladder were appeased as liquids flowed in one end and out the other, it was pretty awesome to have this privacy and freedom in one package he thought. The peace and relief of the moment was broken when the door opened behind him. \n\n``You know from here it looks like your peeing in two directions at once'' came the deer's joking and yet also groggy words. The bear froze, of course this did nothing to stop what was already happening. The water, having been again refilled, flowed into his parched mouth all the while the urine, despite his attempt to halt the stream, piddled out. The deer was now by his side and was unzipping his jeans to join him. Jake assumed he'd also be drinking if the bear was not lewdly blocking access to the spigot. \n\n``A split stream isn't terrifying when you don't have to aim for the bowl'' Jake's brain decided it was time to start working again. \n\n``Too true'' was Oliver's response. His own stream was picking up speed and at the same time the bear's came to a halt. The deer stared straight out into the trees as was protocol, but it was clear from his squinted eyes that he just waking up and probably wasn't seeing much anyways. Jake grasped the front of his Pjs pulling them up and over, filled his cup again, and went to sit on the chair he had occupied the night prior. With out properly putting his tail through the hole in the back of his Pjs the stubby appendage prevented them from going up to his waist. This coupled with the hastily pulled up front left him the very image of a lazy morning. `But was it morning?' the bulky youth wondered. Oliver had finished now and was drinking from the spout directly. The deer swished some and spat before heading back to the camper. \n\n``Hey you want some coffee?'' he questioned. This got the bears attention. His head still ached and he figured the caffeine might help with that. \n\n``Oh yeah great idea. I'll come with so I can do it all by myself like a big bear!'' he stood to follow his friend who was laughing but seemed to have no retort. Jake liked the idea of knowing how to run something as vital as the coffee pot for himself. A sudden thought of being able to put the pot on for Oliver to wake up to made him grin. Hell maybe he'd have the deer's slippers waiting for him when he got home as well like some 50?s house wife . \n\nSoon the pot was on and hot rich liquid was produced and emptied into their mugs. It was a simple machine and the drink though bitter was quick to kill off any lingering haze of sleep. It was ten when thy woke and now that the coffee had been drunk and morning chat exchanged it was approaching eleven. Oliver decided it was time to get himself ready for work or rather to make it possible to do so.\n\n``Hey wanna help me set up the camper shower? I kinda want to let it warm up a bit before I use it'' Oliver asked. The bear stood and grabbed the box, which had been left out over night. \n\n``Sure lets get to it'' he excitedly answered. The deer and bear walked to the back to figure out how best to set the simple device up. Claws made quick work of the packaging and once out it was pretty clear how it worked. A five gallon heavy duty bag with a loop at the top and a flexible hose out the bottom. The top was marked with `Jumbo Camp Shower' and below it was translated into french. Both boys bit their lips as this phrase would clearly be a big joke for the rest of their lives, they could just sense it. Oliver piped up first.\n\n``Looks like I bought us a douche'' silence again but not for long.\n\n``And a jumbo douche at that'' this was it, both laughed until tears welled up in their eyes. The bear groaned at the pain in his sides and Oliver had to sit back on the ground to keep from falling over. \n\n``Ok! Ok yes. Well ...oh fuck that's perfect.'' With much effort and time to regain self control they eventually got the jumbo douche hung by a rope from a tree branch that extended over the small cleared path behind the trailer. This was about as private as it got when it cam to showering outside and best of all the box included a rubber mat to stand on. Off the windows the young men sorted out hangers for towels, a small shelf for soap and even dug a shallow trench leading on the slightly angled slope away from the camper and into the tall grass and reeds that grew near the stream. It wasn't much but they were proud of it. The bag was full and easy to lower and raise for refills. They stood back to admire the effort.\n\n``I think we have a shower'' came the deer's comment\n\n``No Olly better than that, we have a Jumbo Douche'' they laughed silently. Oliver turned and headed into the camper to grab his toiletries, since he would be testing it out first. In private Jake looked over the make-shift shower and found the idea of trying to scrub up out here somewhat arousing, but his thoughts were interrupted. His stomach grumbled a bit. Not hungrily but as a reminder that he had eaten and would need to take care of business eventually. Jake was not ready for that yet. `Yeah that's gonna have to wait till he's off at work so calm down' he mentally chided his body. Before it could retort however Oliver came back around the corner supplies in hand. \n\nJake noted that once you were by the edge of the structure, even if you were just heading down the side trail into the woods, the shower was completely exposed. There were other trails to take if you needed to go while someone was showering but not much to stop you from wandering in accidentally. Oliver had begun place his things on the various surfaces they had put together when Jake was struck with inspiration. By the opening to the site there was a small post box. It was for show obviously but the bear had plans. He moved it easily, despite the base being a small cement filled bucket, to the intersection of the shower trail and the trail into the deeper woods. \n\n``Hey boyo you expecting a delivery?'' the white tail had taken notice.\n\n``Ah I had a thought'' the brown bear hefted it into place until he was satisfied with how it faced out. ``If we don't have a door at least-`` he raised the barn red flag on the side of the black metal box ``we can have an occupied sign.'' Oliver looked at the simple solution grin tugging at his maw.\n\n``Oh Sweet idea! Here I was thinking we'd just have to sing to make it obvious we were out here.'' Jake gave the deer a look like his suggestion would have been out right insane and Oliver would not take that lying down. In a howling screechy exaggeration of a country song he belted out `` Clettus take the reEeel take it from ma haaaaand cause aye cant do this on my OWN!'' Jake matched the squeaky pitch ``I'mma lettin GOOoooo I need yur help man and if you don't ma fish is goooone!'' they finished together. ``OH CLEETUS take the REEEeeeEEEEl!''\n\n``Yeah now we wont need to wake up to that, thank cletus'' Jake said walking back to the seating area he picked up his mug now aware of the rising temperature. Westlake had been cool that night but this was Summer after all, he was just glad the humidity hadn't set in yet. As the bear grabbed a drink the deer joined him in one of the loungers. It was past noon and he surely wanted to give the chilled spring water a chance to warm up a little. ``So about your place ...what is it again?''\n\n``A Tavern in the Wall. Kinda straightforward pub food.'' Oliver was clearly excited for it he had after all gotten a line position in a kitchen for his first job, Jake was a little jealous of that fact. ``Its pretty cool they built it into the structure of an old bridge. Kinda small but still awesome, your at the Italian place right? um Nona's?'' the deer had the advantage of knowing the local area having grown up out here.\n\n``That's me. Prepcook nine to five off Thursday and Saturday. Guess I'll be working with the owner's mom so just hoping I don't get chased around with a rolling pin'' he grinned back. \n\n``You som-a-no bech!'' Oliver shouted with a faux Italian accent while shaking his hand over his head with an imaginary rolling pin. They chatted a bit longer but the deer eventually looked down at the time on his phone and decided he could wait no longer. He headed out back stopping at the mailbox to raise the flag. They shared a gaze for a moment before the bear wished him luck\n\n``Have a good douche''\n\n``Oh you know I will''\n\nJacob was now alone, though not really since the deer was just around back but he still felt the quiet peace of being alone. He stood to get another drink and could see one of the rope clothes lines they had strung bounce a bit as Oliver stripped down and put them up for safe keeping. His still teenaged mind once more turned to the arousal of being nude out in the woods. He felt his insides clench as the phrase `this one time in band camp' crossed his thoughts. He was a virgin and was also pretty unsure of a lot. He found that both men and women ultimately got him hard. Maybe it was just that he was easily aroused, maybe he was gay. Honestly he didn't know this was a line of internal thought that often left him hard and confused, fortunately hard he could deal with. \n\nHe had to piss again this time he dropped his shorts completely letting loose with reckless abandon much to the dismay of the bushes. It was fun. His stomach rumbled again and he promised it soon. He pulled the cloth back up and figured he should get dressed too. The bulky bear headed into the shelter and turned to look for his suitcase. He stopped abruptly when he caught a glimpse out of the small window over the sink. A stray paw the fur of which was darkened and wet. \n\nA shadow by the window just above Oliver's pillow made it clear the shower was gonna be visible from inside. This thought raised the somewhat bedfurred bear's heart rate. He was sure that and accidental glance of either of them showering would yield little more than a shirtless view. However he also knew sneaking a peak would be so temptingly easy. Instead he turned away and once more dropped his Pjs. His boxers currently took the shape of a roomy tent and more shadows on the window only reenforced it. `You got plenty of time for this later' he reminded himself. Aside from a couple idol tugs Jake let the erection alone. He pulled on the faded blue denim shorts he wore the day prior this time he snapped the overtail bit and found his sneakers. As he left the building to sit outside again he realized that at some point he likely wouldn't resist temptation so well. It wasn't long before the lanky male came back around the trailer with a towel wrapped around his waist and his discarded clothes under one arm. Jake couldn't help but notice that the shower did not seem to be as refreshing as one might hope a shower to be. In fact with his soaked ruffled fur the boy appeared to be more drowned rat than deer. \n\n``Soooo how was it?'' the bear bit his lips to stifle his laugh at the sight of his somewhat unhappy looking friend. \n\n``Still a little cold....on the bright side I was getting warm out here and this shower well I'm numb now so not hot... there's still some water in there if you'd like to find out'' his tone was not overly amused. He turned to head back into the camper. The bear's heart skipped a beat when he saw the very top of his friend's cheeks over the towel which in the back had to be wrapped low enough to not squish his now wet luffa looking tail. \n\n``I'll give it a try tomorrow, just be glad you get to let it warm up in the sun I'll be showering around eight in the morning that should be a wake up call'' the deer boy laughed as he shut the screen door behind him. As his shadowed outline turned in the small room the towel was abandoned. \n\nIt was nearly one and the bear spoke to the empty lot. ``Well at least I'll be alone soon'' he could feel his pants still pretty tight. Before long the deer was dressed and brushed to look presentable. They chatted a little and then he loaded into his car and headed off leaving the bear in the tranquil peace. He sighed in relief and then the silence was broken. A low trumpeting noise escaped the bear. Jake realized eventually he would have to fart around his friend but guessed today was not that day. \n\nWhat to do now he thought, the air was getting hotter now and tomorrow was predicted to be humid to boot. For the moment the only commitment that came to mind was filling the douche. \n\nThe bag was lowered and quickly filled he had it back in the tree post hast, as if that would some how make tomorrow's shower better. ``And that killed three minutes not much more to do now'' He looked around and it struck him he was gonna streak. \n\nJacob's limbs tingled at the thought, sure he would go exploring but this was something he had to get out of his system now. The brown bear's heart pounded harder as he convinced himself it was fine. He was alone out here, Oliver wouldn't be back till ten that night, and he was just sooooo ready to do something naughty. Most of his days the bear spent his time worrying about what was right and doing what was expected of him but not here not now. He was free!\n\nHis shirt came off and landed on the chair, next came shoes. A button was popped on his shorts and they too fell, this time he did not stop. He yanked down the light blue cotton boxers to pool at his feet. One paw slipped out of them then the other and both went back into his sneakers after all he wanted to run. The bear stood there in just his currently scruffy looking fur and a pair of blue shoes. Well it was definitely more comfortable, he was cooling down in the shade. Subconsciously he sucked in his gut a bit and looked down at his own bits. He wasn't big but his balls hung low and loose and at the moment he was stiff with anticipation. He blushed and decided it was time. He ran for the clearing.\n\nAs soon as he hit the sunlight Jake felt that unique warmth of the sunlight on parts normally denied this pleasure. It was amazing, so much so that he stopped for a moment to bask. A breeze tickled his fur as he took a deep breath. A weight lifted and he felt the desire to run and jump and scream and all the other wild impulses he avoided on a daily basis. That was when a loud clank rang out over the field. It was the sound of another car coming down the winding trail from the road. The brown naked bear froze for an instant. He was quite sure that his heart had stopped beating all together but thankfully good sense soon returned. He turned back and ran full tilt to the sight. He bent over and grabbed the shirt he had tossed then the shorts and huffed his way into the camper. As the door shut he could see a car pulling next to his own. Desperately he tried to pull his shorts on over his shoes which with some force actually did it. \n\nA car door clicked open, then slammed shut he brought the shirt over his head, he checked then pulled his arms back and twisted it front ways. Dear god he hoped who ever it was hadn't seen him- wait! ``Underwear'' he mouthed. In a desperate attempt to get to his boxers and conceal them the bulky male more or less fell out the door rolling head first into the seating area till he was flat on his back and looking up at an unexpected sight. A doe dressed in a dress that had to be from the colonial period. That was when it struck him, this was Olly's mom.\n\n``Are you ...alright down there'' she looked down on him as if she were concerned that at any moment he may simply catch fire. He had failed there was no way to collect his overlooked piece of clothing now. He stared up and sheepishly smiled.\n\n``Oh hi yeah I'm good....well now I am... a bee followed me into the camper'' he finished sounding as if he was asking `Would you believe it was a bee?' ``I really don't handle hem well'' he began to roll onto his side to get up and for her part the older doe seemed to take that as a reasonable answer. \n\n``If I have to tell your mother you died falling out of a camper because of bees there is no way she wont be calling the cops on me'' she stopped assessing him and ginned cheekily. \n\n``Oh no if you told her it was a bee she'd just be glad that I didn't try to burn down the whole field to get rid of it'' The woman chuckled and bent to help Jake to his feet. That was when it happened. As he settled into being upright she tsk tsked and walked over to the lost garment. Adept hands reached down and retrieved them, folding the pair of boxers as only a mother with years of experience can. ``Ten minutes and his laundry is already wandering about. Sorry you have to deal with this. Personally I blame his father, I don't know why but its his fault.'' she placed the folded cloth down on the table in the camp's seating area. \n\n``Oh I think I'll manage he's still better than my roommates from this year at least he showers'' on the inside the boy felt his limbs going limp as his fears retreated. \n\n \n\n``Oh I'd keep and eye on that too'' she turned and motioned for the bear to follow her to the car. ``I figured Oliver wouldn't stock you with any food you can actually cook out here. So I did some shopping. Its basic but you can cook it all over a fire or in a cast iron pot.'' she popped the trunk open to reveal some basic dried food stuffs. Simple things to make soups with along with a couple small fresh vegetables. ``I know there's a small refrigerator to keep these in so go ahead and pack em in''\n\n``Wow thanks I really didn't expect this'' the bear grabbed as many bags as he could after all politeness demanded that he carry the majority. The oddly dressed doe picked up the one bag he had missed and shut the door.\n\n``Like I said thought I'd make sure you had a chance at survival.'' they placed the bags down and the bear set about unpacking them. He made quick work of the supplies which ended with a pack of toilet paper. ``Well as you can see im not dressed for company just thought I'd drop this all off before heading home'' she turned back to Jake and embraced him. ``Hope you aren't too lonely out here.''\n\n``After a year of living in a room with three other guys this is heaven'' It was true he had hated the cramped room and the furs he shared it with but for the rest of the time college had been great so he managed. ``Besides im an only child this is my natural element.'' \n\n``Well then as my new and favorite son I leave you in charge. Best of luck'' she was a kind woman but the heat in that dress was clearly getting to her Jake couldn't blame her for wanting to change out of it. She was gone and he looked down once more at the boxers he had nearly died trying to get to. Reluctantly the bulky bear set about undressing and redressing. Once all was in its proper place he made for the door of the camper to take down the trowel. He stomach made another low rumble to which he answered. \n\n``Ok ok lets go do this'' he headed down the path he had walked with Oliver the day before but this time turned down the path he had pointed out was for just such an occasion. The cleared way through the dense pines suddenly came out to an open earthen patch. It was as if it was meant to be another field but so deep in the thick forest that no grass would grow. He couldn't quite put a paw on it but this place seemed even more private than the rest of the sight. He guessed it was because there was no direction that he could see clearly back to the open field or even the main path. \n\nStill he headed to the back edge of the small enclosure, Jacob had no knowledge of the etiquette involved with taking a crap in the woods but he imagined that this was the right way. He picked a spot jammed the spade into the ground and opened a small hole. Next he sat the trowel down and undid his pants. First he peed off onto a thin branchless pine. Then lowered his shorts to knee height while straddling the fresh hole. Any lower and his lower garments might get in the way and any higher would keep him from crouching. Jake lowered himself down and after making sure that his dick would also have an open shot should his bladder decide to empty itself some more began to push. The mechanics seemed simple after all he did this often enough on a toilet. Nothing ``oh come on you've been waiting all day for this just GO!'' \n\nFor all the enjoyment he had felt from his short lived exposure earlier at this moment the bear just felt exposed. He tried again and no luck. With his legs getting sore he stood up stretching a little before making one more go of it. At first all that happened was a quick dribble from up front that he had not checked for clearance this round and splattered onto his shorts. Well it wasn't like any one was around to see it. He sighed but then another rumble and a gentler push got things moving. He was suddenly aware of how firm the poop was and was glad. Prior to this moment he had not considered the trouble of a loose stool out here or worse outright diarrhea. With a sense of relief the last of it fell away into the almost too shallow hole. This was also the point that he remembered the toilet paper sitting on the table all the way back at camp. He hung his head in shame. \n\nA few leaves and a covered hole later Jake was back at the camp. Emptied out he felt a little hungry but first he opened the package of toilet paper rolls and slid it over the handle of the digging tool before returning it to the door. Now he thought lets go see what's around. \n\nThe rest of the day was spent looking about the camp sight and checking out the amenities. When the heat became uncomfortable he dangled his paws into the cool pond, it was warmer than he had expected but no less refreshing. The bear greedily gulped down more of the fresh water wholly enamored by the taste. He walked the paths and took in the beauty of the land. Briefly he sat by the brook and with legs crossed tried to meditate. As he emptied his mind Jake's bladder demanded to be emptied as well. Eventually he ended back at the camper. He felt tired even though it was at the latest five o'clock but, the bear decided, a nap wouldn't hurt. On his tummy the bear boy stretched out over the mattress and fell into the kind of sleep that only a day of fresh air can bring about. \n\nWhen he awoke it was starting to get dark out. He rolled over and promptly fell out of the bed. Jake was use to his larger bed at home and was glad that falling out of a bed had happened here on this fairly low bed and not at college where he was certain that a fall would be far enough to kill him. He was tall after all and still had a hard time getting into those damned bunks. He grumbled and recovered for a moment on the floor while his heart slowed down again. As he shook off the sleep Jake happened to notice something that he hadn't at first when he had come in to lay down. It was a pair of boxers discarded on the floor by the deer's bed along with yesterday's shirt. He chuckled to himself Oliver's mom hadn't been wrong.\n\nHe got up off the floor and toddled over to the cabinet to look through the supplies, both those brought in by Oliver's mom and the ones already there when he had arrived. A few canned vegetables a couple canned beans and plenty of ramen noodles. He would make a go at the ramen he figured. Strong paws gently took two packs of the hard noodles and headed out to the fire pit.\n\nBefore long he had built a fire, filled the pot and boiled water. The noodles softened and were strained out easily. In a plastic bowl he found the bear mixed the flavoring packets in and took a deep breath of the steaming instant dish. Jacob loved the smell of ramen, he had been eating it since he was a kid and it just seemed to take him back. The meal was heavy and warm in his belly and was a pleasant contrast to the night time chill that was settling in. He guessed this was nice because soon enough the days would be hot and the nights would be more of the same. \n\nAfter the food was finished and the pot scrubbed out he sat reading by the fire. It was late Oliver would be home soon good thing too as this was his third time reading the same sentence. It was a great book but even good books have the occasional slow chapter so the bear would pardon the transgression this time. Lights shined in the field catching his attention. Jake packed the book up and tossed another log into the flames. Oliver's tall skinny form approached and soon he could see that the deer was quite tired looking. Oliver slumped down into the chair opposite Jake and saying nothing. The bear tilted his head and raised an eyebrow. To this Olly's maw pulled back into a deep grin. \n\n``That was awesome'' was his answer. Jake rolled a paw in the air hoping he'd get the hint to elaborate. He did. ``Dude it's a small place but the foods real good. They do a beef stew year round and all of the fried food is made in house. It's a small crew and most of the staff are bartenders but I get to fry food all night long like crazy. I didn't realize they got so much business'' \n\n``Sweet it sounds great I'll have to stop in and make you make me dinner'' Jake jabbed at him.\n\n``Ho yeah I'm gonna bring some home tomorrow'' the deer boy ran a hand through his fur and grimaced. ``The only down side is frying all night I can feel the oil coating me like a chicken wing''\n\nthey both laughed and continued to chatter on about the boy's adventure till the fire died down and both agreed sleep was a thing that needed to happen. And it did.\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "  SEQ CHAPTER \\h \\r 1 Ch 2

Dry Mouth and Wet Fur

The sunlight angrily invaded the camp sight, piercing the windows of the shelter like an unwelcome guest that you have to go greet or they wont leave anytime soon. Out side birds chirped songs, warm air rose in the field, and the day was generally jolly. It was annoying the bear something fierce. Consciousness took root like a weed and assaulted his sleep. Ok he thought time to get up. A few blinks and a deep breath finished the process, now Jake pulled back the blanket and swung his legs off the side with almost theatrical effort. He leaned over the edge of the mattress groping inside the suitcase for the pajama shorts he had avoided the night prior. The groggy brown bear looked over to see the deer boy still fast asleep. He pulled the shorts on and adjusted himself, morning wood was no excuse for poor manners. He grabbed the shirt and was now set to leave the camper, after all he didn't want to wake his friend when he was the one with the day off to nap as he pleased.

At this point the rest of his body had begun reporting in to his brain once more and he was becoming aware of three urgent matters. First, his mouth was dry making him thirsty. Second, his bladder was full and he needed to take a piss. Third, his head ached from last nights drinking so any thought going into which he should do first, either get a drink or take a piss, was gonna be painful. Instead he thought `I'll figure that out when I get there' Not bladder, mouth, nor head were pleased with this decision and all three protested. On his way out the door he grabbed a mug from the counter top.

Outside he slipped on the sandals that had been discarded by the welcome mat before shuffling over to the spigot.  The mouth won. He filled the cup and shivered as the refreshing crisp water filled his mouth and rejuvenated his throat. This sparked an out right rebellion from his bladder leaving little choice. With one paw gripping the mug the other hastily tugged one side at a time on the black cotton shorts lowering the front enough to clear the way. Now both mouth and bladder were appeased as liquids flowed in one end and out the other, it was pretty awesome to have this privacy and freedom in one package he thought. The peace and relief of the moment was broken when the door opened behind him.

``You know from here it looks like your peeing in two directions at once'' came the deer's joking and yet also groggy words. The bear froze, of course this did nothing to stop what was already happening. The water, having been again refilled, flowed into his parched mouth all the while the urine, despite his attempt to halt the stream, piddled out. The deer was now by his side and was unzipping his jeans to join him. Jake assumed he'd also be drinking if the bear was not lewdly blocking access to the spigot.

``A split stream isn't terrifying when you don't have to aim for the bowl'' Jake's brain decided it was time to start working again.

``Too true'' was Oliver's response. His own stream was picking up speed and at the same time the bear's came to a halt. The deer stared straight out into the trees as was protocol, but it was clear from his squinted eyes that he just waking up and probably wasn't seeing much anyways. Jake grasped the front of his Pjs pulling them up and over, filled his cup again, and went to sit on the chair he had occupied the night prior. With out properly putting his tail through the hole in the back of his Pjs the stubby appendage prevented them from going up to his waist. This coupled with the hastily pulled up front left him the very image of a lazy morning. `But was it morning?' the bulky youth wondered. Oliver had finished now and was drinking from the spout directly. The deer swished some and spat before heading back to the camper.

``Hey you want some coffee?'' he questioned. This got the bears attention. His head still ached and he figured the caffeine might help with that.

``Oh yeah great idea. I'll come with so I can do it all by myself like a big bear!'' he stood to follow his friend who was laughing but seemed to have no retort. Jake liked the idea of knowing how to run something as vital as the coffee pot for himself. A sudden thought of being able to put the pot on for Oliver to wake up to made him grin. Hell maybe he'd have the deer's slippers waiting for him when he got home as well like some 50?s house wife .

Soon the pot was on and hot rich liquid was produced and emptied into their mugs. It was a simple machine and the drink though bitter was quick to kill off any lingering haze of sleep. It was ten when thy woke and now that the coffee had been drunk and morning chat exchanged it was approaching eleven. Oliver decided it was time to get himself ready for work or rather to make it possible to do so.

``Hey wanna help me set up the camper shower? I kinda want to let it warm up a bit before I use it'' Oliver asked. The bear stood and grabbed the box, which had been left out over night.

``Sure lets get to it'' he excitedly answered. The deer and bear walked to the back to figure out how best to set the simple device up. Claws made quick work of the packaging and once out it was pretty clear how it worked. A five gallon heavy duty bag with a loop at the top and a flexible hose out the bottom. The top was marked with `Jumbo Camp Shower' and below it was translated into french. Both boys bit their lips as this phrase would clearly be a big joke for the rest of their lives, they could just sense it. Oliver piped up first.

``Looks like I bought us a douche'' silence again but not for long.

``And a jumbo douche at that'' this was it, both laughed until tears welled up in their eyes. The bear groaned at the pain in his sides and Oliver had to sit back on the ground to keep from falling over.

``Ok! Ok yes. Well ...oh fuck that's perfect.'' With much effort and time to regain self control they eventually got the jumbo douche hung by a rope from a tree branch that extended over the small cleared path behind the trailer. This was about as private as it got when it cam to showering outside and best of all the box included a rubber mat to stand on. Off the windows the young men sorted out hangers for towels, a small shelf for soap and even dug a shallow trench leading on the slightly angled slope away from the camper and into the tall grass and reeds that grew near the stream. It wasn't much but they were proud of it. The bag was full and easy to lower and raise for refills. They stood back to admire the effort.

``I think we have a shower'' came the deer's comment

``No Olly better than that, we have a Jumbo Douche'' they laughed silently. Oliver turned and headed into the camper to grab his toiletries, since he would be testing it out first. In private Jake looked over the make-shift shower and found the idea of trying to scrub up out here somewhat arousing, but his thoughts were interrupted. His stomach grumbled a bit. Not hungrily but as a reminder that he had eaten and would need to take care of business eventually. Jake was not ready for that yet. `Yeah that's gonna have to wait till he's off at work so calm down' he mentally chided his body. Before it could retort however Oliver came back around the corner supplies in hand.

Jake noted that once you were by the edge of the structure, even if you were just heading down the side trail into the woods, the shower was completely exposed. There were other trails to take if you needed to go while someone was showering but not much to stop you from wandering in accidentally. Oliver had begun place his things on the various surfaces they had put together when Jake was struck with inspiration. By the opening to the site there was a small post box. It was for show obviously but the bear had plans. He moved it easily, despite the base being a small cement filled bucket, to the intersection of the shower trail and the trail into the deeper woods.

``Hey boyo you expecting a delivery?'' the white tail had taken notice.

``Ah I had a thought'' the brown bear hefted it into place until he was satisfied with how it faced out. ``If we don't have a door at least-`` he raised the barn red flag on the side of the black metal box ``we can have an occupied sign.'' Oliver looked at the simple solution grin tugging at his maw.

``Oh Sweet idea! Here I was thinking we'd just have to sing to make it obvious we were out here.'' Jake gave the deer a look like his suggestion would have been out right insane and Oliver would not take that lying down. In a howling screechy exaggeration of a country song he belted out `` Clettus take the reEeel take it from ma haaaaand cause aye cant do this on my OWN!'' Jake matched the squeaky pitch ``I'mma lettin GOOoooo I need yur help man and if you don't ma fish is goooone!'' they finished together. ``OH CLEETUS take the REEEeeeEEEEl!''

``Yeah now we wont need to wake up to that, thank cletus'' Jake said walking back to the seating area he picked up his mug now aware of the rising temperature. Westlake had been cool that night but this was Summer after all, he was just glad the humidity hadn't set in yet. As the bear grabbed a drink the deer joined him in one of the loungers. It was past noon and he surely wanted to give the chilled spring water a chance to warm up a little. ``So about your place ...what is it again?''

``A Tavern in the Wall. Kinda straightforward pub food.'' Oliver was clearly excited for it he had after all gotten a line position in a kitchen for his first job, Jake was a little jealous of that fact. ``Its pretty cool they built it into the structure of an old bridge. Kinda small but still awesome, your at the Italian place right? um Nona's?'' the deer had the advantage of knowing the local area having grown up out here.

``That's me. Prepcook nine to five off Thursday and Saturday. Guess I'll be working with the owner's mom so just hoping I don't get chased around with a rolling pin'' he grinned back.

``You som-a-no bech!'' Oliver shouted with a faux Italian accent while shaking his hand over his head with an imaginary rolling pin. They chatted a bit longer but the deer eventually looked down at the time on his phone and decided he could wait no longer. He headed out back stopping at the mailbox to raise the flag. They shared a gaze for a moment before the bear wished him luck

``Have a good douche''

``Oh you know I will''

Jacob was now alone, though not really since the deer was just around back but he still felt the quiet peace of being alone. He stood to get another drink and could see one of the rope clothes lines they had strung bounce a bit as Oliver stripped down and put them up for safe keeping. His still teenaged mind once more turned to the arousal of being nude out in the woods. He felt his insides clench as the phrase `this one time in band camp' crossed his thoughts. He was a virgin and was also pretty unsure of a lot. He found that both men and women ultimately got him hard. Maybe it was just that he was easily aroused, maybe he was gay. Honestly he didn't know this was a line of internal thought that often left him hard and confused, fortunately hard he could deal with.

He had to piss again this time he dropped his shorts completely letting loose with reckless abandon much to the dismay of the bushes. It was fun. His stomach rumbled again and he promised it soon. He pulled the cloth back up and figured he should get dressed too. The bulky bear headed into the shelter and turned to look for his suitcase. He stopped abruptly when he caught a glimpse out of the small window over the sink. A stray paw the fur of which was darkened and wet.

A shadow by the window just above Oliver's pillow made it clear the shower was gonna be visible from inside. This thought raised the somewhat bedfurred bear's heart rate. He was sure that and accidental glance of either of them showering would yield little more than a shirtless view. However he also knew sneaking a peak would be so temptingly easy. Instead he turned away and once more dropped his Pjs. His boxers currently took the shape of a roomy tent and more shadows on the window only reenforced it. `You got plenty of time for this later' he reminded himself. Aside from a couple idol tugs Jake let the erection alone. He pulled on the faded blue denim shorts he wore the day prior this time he snapped the overtail bit and found his sneakers. As he left the building to sit outside again he realized that at some point he likely wouldn't resist temptation so well. It wasn't long before the lanky male came back around the trailer with a towel wrapped around his waist and his discarded clothes under one arm. Jake couldn't help but notice that the shower did not seem to be as refreshing as one might hope a shower to be. In fact with his soaked ruffled fur the boy appeared to be more drowned rat than deer.

``Soooo how was it?'' the bear bit his lips to stifle his laugh at the sight of his somewhat unhappy looking friend.

``Still a little cold....on the bright side I was getting warm out here and this shower well I'm numb now so not hot... there's still some water in there if you'd like to find out'' his tone was not overly amused. He turned to head back into the camper. The bear's heart skipped a beat when he saw the very top of his friend's cheeks over the towel which in the back had to be wrapped low enough to not squish his now wet luffa looking tail.

``I'll give it a try tomorrow, just be glad you get to let it warm up in the sun I'll be showering around eight in the morning that should be a wake up call'' the deer boy laughed as he shut the screen door behind him. As his shadowed outline turned in the small room the towel was abandoned.

It was nearly one and the bear spoke to the empty lot. ``Well at least I'll be alone soon'' he could feel his pants still pretty tight. Before long the deer was dressed and brushed to look presentable. They chatted a little and then he loaded into his car and headed off leaving the bear in the tranquil peace. He sighed in relief and then the silence was broken. A low trumpeting noise escaped the bear. Jake realized eventually he would have to fart around his friend but guessed today was not that day.

What to do now he thought, the air was getting hotter now and tomorrow was predicted to be humid to boot. For the moment the only commitment that came to mind was filling the douche.

The bag was lowered and quickly filled he had it back in the tree post hast, as if that would some how make tomorrow's shower better. ``And that killed three minutes not much more to do now'' He looked around and it struck him he was gonna streak.

Jacob's limbs tingled at the thought, sure he would go exploring but this was something he had to get out of his system now. The brown bear's heart pounded harder as he convinced himself it was fine. He was alone out here, Oliver wouldn't be back till ten that night, and he was just sooooo ready to do something naughty. Most of his days the bear spent his time worrying about what was right and doing what was expected of him but not here not now. He was free!

His shirt came off and landed on the chair, next came shoes. A button was popped on his shorts and they too fell, this time he did not stop. He yanked down the light blue cotton boxers to pool at his feet. One paw slipped out of them then the other and both went back into his sneakers after all he wanted to run. The bear stood there in just his currently scruffy looking fur and a pair of blue shoes. Well it was definitely more comfortable, he was cooling down in the shade. Subconsciously he sucked in his gut a bit and looked down at his own bits. He wasn't big but his balls hung low and loose and at the moment he was stiff with anticipation. He blushed and decided it was time. He ran for the clearing.

As soon as he hit the sunlight Jake felt that unique warmth of the sunlight on parts normally denied this pleasure. It was amazing, so much so that he stopped for a moment to bask. A breeze tickled his fur as he took a deep breath. A weight lifted and he felt the desire to run and jump and scream and all the other wild impulses he avoided on a daily basis. That was when a loud clank rang out over the field. It was the sound of another car coming down the winding trail from the road. The brown naked bear froze for an instant. He was quite sure that his heart had stopped beating all together but thankfully good sense soon returned. He turned back and ran full tilt to the sight. He bent over and grabbed the shirt he had tossed then the shorts and huffed his way into the camper. As the door shut he could see a car pulling next to his own. Desperately he tried to pull his shorts on over his shoes which with some force actually did it.

A car door clicked open, then slammed shut he brought the shirt over his head, he checked then pulled his arms back and twisted it front ways. Dear god he hoped who ever it was hadn't seen him- wait! ``Underwear'' he mouthed. In a desperate attempt to get to his boxers and conceal them the bulky male more or less fell out the door rolling head first into the seating area till he was flat on his back and looking up at an unexpected sight. A doe dressed in a dress that had to be from the colonial period. That was when it struck him, this was Olly's mom.

``Are you ...alright down there'' she looked down on him as if she were concerned that at any moment he may simply catch fire. He had failed there was no way to collect his overlooked piece of clothing now. He stared up and sheepishly smiled.

``Oh hi yeah I'm good....well now I am... a bee followed me into the camper'' he finished sounding as if he was asking `Would you believe it was a bee?' ``I really don't handle hem well'' he began to roll onto his side to get up and for her part the older doe seemed to take that as a reasonable answer.

``If I have to tell your mother you died falling out of a camper because of bees there is no way she wont be calling the cops on me'' she stopped assessing him and ginned cheekily.

``Oh no if you told her it was a bee she'd just be glad that I didn't try to burn down the whole field to get rid of it'' The woman chuckled and bent to help Jake to his feet. That was when it happened. As he settled into being upright she tsk tsked and walked over to the lost garment. Adept hands reached down and retrieved them, folding the pair of boxers as only a mother with years of experience can. ``Ten minutes and his laundry is already wandering about. Sorry you have to deal with this. Personally I blame his father, I don't know why but its his fault.'' she placed the folded cloth down on the table in the camp's seating area.

``Oh I think I'll manage he's still better than my roommates from this year at least he showers'' on the inside the boy felt his limbs going limp as his fears retreated.

 

``Oh I'd keep and eye on that too'' she turned and motioned for the bear to follow her to the car. ``I figured Oliver wouldn't stock you with any food you can actually cook out here. So I did some shopping. Its basic but you can cook it all over a fire or in a cast iron pot.'' she popped the trunk open to reveal some basic dried food stuffs. Simple things to make soups with along with a couple small fresh vegetables. ``I know there's a small refrigerator to keep these in so go ahead and pack em in''

``Wow thanks I really didn't expect this'' the bear grabbed as many bags as he could after all politeness demanded that he carry the majority. The oddly dressed doe picked up the one bag he had missed and shut the door.

``Like I said thought I'd make sure you had a chance at survival.'' they placed the bags down and the bear set about unpacking them. He made quick work of the supplies which ended with a pack of toilet paper. ``Well as you can see im not dressed for company just thought I'd drop this all off before heading home'' she turned back to Jake and embraced him. ``Hope you aren't too lonely out here.''

``After a year of living in a room with three other guys this is heaven'' It was true he had hated the cramped room and the furs he shared it with but for the rest of the time college had been great so he managed. ``Besides im an only child this is my natural element.''

``Well then as my new and favorite son I leave you in charge. Best of luck'' she was a kind woman but the heat in that dress was clearly getting to her Jake couldn't blame her for wanting to change out of it. She was gone and he looked down once more at the boxers he had nearly died trying to get to. Reluctantly the bulky bear set about undressing and redressing. Once all was in its proper place he made for the door of the camper to take down the trowel. He stomach made another low rumble to which he answered.

``Ok ok lets go do this'' he headed down the path he had walked with Oliver the day before but this time turned down the path he had pointed out was for just such an occasion. The cleared way through the dense pines suddenly came out to an open earthen patch. It was as if it was meant to be another field but so deep in the thick forest that no grass would grow. He couldn't quite put a paw on it but this place seemed even more private than the rest of the sight. He guessed it was because there was no direction that he could see clearly back to the open field or even the main path.

Still he headed to the back edge of the small enclosure, Jacob had no knowledge of the etiquette involved with taking a crap in the woods but he imagined that this was the right way. He picked a spot jammed the spade into the ground and opened a small hole. Next he sat the trowel down and undid his pants. First he peed off onto a thin branchless pine. Then lowered his shorts to knee height while straddling the fresh hole. Any lower and his lower garments might get in the way and any higher would keep him from crouching. Jake lowered himself down and after making sure that his dick would also have an open shot should his bladder decide to empty itself some more began to push. The mechanics seemed simple after all he did this often enough on a toilet. Nothing ``oh come on you've been waiting all day for this just GO!''

For all the enjoyment he had felt from his short lived exposure earlier at this moment the bear just felt exposed. He tried again and no luck. With his legs getting sore he stood up stretching a little before making one more go of it. At first all that happened was a quick dribble from up front that he had not checked for clearance this round and splattered onto his shorts. Well it wasn't like any one was around to see it. He sighed but then another rumble and a gentler push got things moving. He was suddenly aware of how firm the poop was and was glad. Prior to this moment he had not considered the trouble of a loose stool out here or worse outright diarrhea. With a sense of relief the last of it fell away into the almost too shallow hole. This was also the point that he remembered the toilet paper sitting on the table all the way back at camp. He hung his head in shame.

A few leaves and a covered hole later Jake was back at the camp. Emptied out he felt a little hungry but first he opened the package of toilet paper rolls and slid it over the handle of the digging tool before returning it to the door. Now he thought lets go see what's around.

The rest of the day was spent looking about the camp sight and checking out the amenities. When the heat became uncomfortable he dangled his paws into the cool pond, it was warmer than he had expected but no less refreshing. The bear greedily gulped down more of the fresh water wholly enamored by the taste. He walked the paths and took in the beauty of the land. Briefly he sat by the brook and with legs crossed tried to meditate. As he emptied his mind Jake's bladder demanded to be emptied as well. Eventually he ended back at the camper. He felt tired even though it was at the latest five o'clock but, the bear decided, a nap wouldn't hurt. On his tummy the bear boy stretched out over the mattress and fell into the kind of sleep that only a day of fresh air can bring about.

When he awoke it was starting to get dark out. He rolled over and promptly fell out of the bed. Jake was use to his larger bed at home and was glad that falling out of a bed had happened here on this fairly low bed and not at college where he was certain that a fall would be far enough to kill him. He was tall after all and still had a hard time getting into those damned bunks. He grumbled and recovered for a moment on the floor while his heart slowed down again. As he shook off the sleep Jake happened to notice something that he hadn't at first when he had come in to lay down. It was a pair of boxers discarded on the floor by the deer's bed along with yesterday's shirt. He chuckled to himself Oliver's mom hadn't been wrong.

He got up off the floor and toddled over to the cabinet to look through the supplies, both those brought in by Oliver's mom and the ones already there when he had arrived. A few canned vegetables a couple canned beans and plenty of ramen noodles. He would make a go at the ramen he figured. Strong paws gently took two packs of the hard noodles and headed out to the fire pit.

Before long he had built a fire, filled the pot and boiled water. The noodles softened and were strained out easily. In a plastic bowl he found the bear mixed the flavoring packets in and took a deep breath of the steaming instant dish. Jacob loved the smell of ramen, he had been eating it since he was a kid and it just seemed to take him back. The meal was heavy and warm in his belly and was a pleasant contrast to the night time chill that was settling in. He guessed this was nice because soon enough the days would be hot and the nights would be more of the same.

After the food was finished and the pot scrubbed out he sat reading by the fire. It was late Oliver would be home soon good thing too as this was his third time reading the same sentence. It was a great book but even good books have the occasional slow chapter so the bear would pardon the transgression this time. Lights shined in the field catching his attention. Jake packed the book up and tossed another log into the flames. Oliver's tall skinny form approached and soon he could see that the deer was quite tired looking. Oliver slumped down into the chair opposite Jake and saying nothing. The bear tilted his head and raised an eyebrow. To this Olly's maw pulled back into a deep grin.

``That was awesome'' was his answer. Jake rolled a paw in the air hoping he'd get the hint to elaborate. He did. ``Dude it's a small place but the foods real good. They do a beef stew year round and all of the fried food is made in house. It's a small crew and most of the staff are bartenders but I get to fry food all night long like crazy. I didn't realize they got so much business''

``Sweet it sounds great I'll have to stop in and make you make me dinner'' Jake jabbed at him.

``Ho yeah I'm gonna bring some home tomorrow'' the deer boy ran a hand through his fur and grimaced. ``The only down side is frying all night I can feel the oil coating me like a chicken wing''

they both laughed and continued to chatter on about the boy's adventure till the fire died down and both agreed sleep was a thing that needed to happen. And it did.\t\t\t\t\t\t

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