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Just with their own belly button. The big metropolis keeps the huge movement of cars driving, pedestrians hurrying against their own times to do something for the live, typical and boring news about wars, politics, rights, religions and everything that is empty to fill.\nWell, the story isn’t passing in this metropolis.\nIn the middle of the jungle, judging one hundred and twelve kilometers, two men are wandering between trees and giant leaves to visit the abandoned and old temple that served as a palace for their indigenous. Nevish, a black naja of green mane and red eyes, takes the lead cutting every big leaf with his machete to penetrate. His friend, Amerix, a wolf of curious mixed colors, follows him guiding with the map and every obstacle ahead. They crossed by a tribe and, according to Nevish, they allowed them to visit their temple as long as the two don’t touch nor take out an object from there, what it’s dumb for the naja. The weather is very hot, even under the big shadows. The entrance of temple is giant with many stones making incredible walls, floors, pilasters and a lot of moss around, the nature predominating the place.\nIt’s with a smile on the lips that Nevish gives his first steps on the forbidden area and Amerix follows him because he knows he can’t come back with danger of being chased.\n\n“The magnificence of this temple captivates me” Nevish shouts without worrying about traps. “Look at this place! Still raised with their traditions and legends!”\n“How did you know about this temple?” Amerix questioned looking at the walls. Some of them there are figures, possible hieroglyphics.\n“I was searching on the internet and I found a forum talking about that place” he smooths his fingers on some rocks full of moss and fungi. “You know the city is being a suck of boring. I don’t want to stay there working during the week and resting on the weekend in my home.”\n“And your parents?”\n“Nhá! I don’t want to disturb them, mainly with their businesses.”\n\nAmerix tries to comprehend Nevish’s hard head. Here, they aren’t welcome and Amerix has his parents yet. He worries a little.\n\n“The indigenous can come to hunt us” the wolf proceeded trying to read these drawings. “You saw the cacique’s face.”\n“Ah yes, his dick face,” Nevish laughs. “Are you afraid of them?”\n“Of course I am!” shouted anxiously. “This place nor the city allows the presence of tourists.”\n“Like if the city is worried about the preservation of indigenous! They tried to catch this mountain of rocks for them.”\n\nNevish laughed again, staring around and seeing everything that looked interesting to touch. Wall, vine, small rock, stairs and something located in the center as an altar. He gazed with a wish to climb just to see what he would find on top. Amerix ignored talking to him because Nevish’s mood is acid like his poison. The wolf just stood watching these hieroglyphics without worrying fully with his friend.\nThe naja climbs the stone stairs slowly to not slip with the moss and sees a little the interesting artifact that is placed above a horrible table to keep saved by their guardians. The roof has a hole to receive the sun rays above the object, a great signal of reverence of what is more sacred. Nevish could see perfectly after stepping the last floor that it’s a big red jewel fixed in a snake’s maw of beautiful art, enchanting the hardness and how unique is the object saved by these indigenous. These indigenous are panthers and bush dogs, very typical from this Amazon region with inca face. Nevish couldn’t just appreciate the artifact with the eyes. The needy to hold it screamed in his heart. After all, why is he there? Just to visit the place and go out? Without treasure? It’s stupidity!\nWhile the naja appreciates the beauty of jewel, Amerix was sliding his fingers above some figures on the walls, trying to discover the meanings. They aren’t strange; contrariwise, they are similar to natural creatures they live lately and many of them specific one familiar species.\n\n“Nevish. Did you read anything about this temple when you found this topic?” Amerix questioned in doubt, but without turning his face back. Nevish was with the artifact on his hand, smoothing the brilliant material with bright on the eyes.\n“No. Why would I?”\n“Many of these hieroglyphics speak about snakes as entities and gods. Not only that, but some of them show these gods as giants, receiving sacrifices of subjects. Did you read nothing about that?”\n“No. Why would I?”\n“Because you should have a notion of the shit we are running” Amerix turned back, exact time to see Nevish holding an artifact on his scaly hand. “What is this thing?”\n“Oh! This one?” Nevish raised to show as conquered. “Just a jewel. Nothing so special or important to value.”\n“Are you serious?” Amerix bulged his eyes staring at the gate where they entered, hoping these indigenous don’t come now. “Leave it here! Do you know what it is?”\n“Just a piece of stones and ruby? I don’t know” he shrugs going down the stairs. “As said before, it’s just a piece of nothing. An amulet that will do nothing with us.”\n\nAmerix couldn’t keep his position forever. He walked to Nevish to observe closer the artifact, beautiful, but smelling curse. The wolf feels his soul ruffled with fear and that isn’t a good signal according to his instincts.\nThe wolf asked immediately to deliver the object to the due place, as soon as the indigenous appeared at the gate, counting seven or eight, with the panther cacique in front. They are handling spears in the advantage because the two adventurers are carrying nothing of weapon. Just Nevish’s strong mood and Amerix’ fear standing behind the snake. The indigenous approach slowly and keep on the medium distance.\n\n“Surrender to us” shouted the cacique spotting the spear to them. All of them use thongs, adorns as collars and bracelets. Their bodies are painted in yellow and red.\n“Why? We were just visiting.”\n\nNevish speaking is the same as asking ‘kill me baby’. Cacique saw the artifact on his hand and growled. If there is something that he wins from them is size and strength.\n\n“The amulet! Return it!”\n\nThey heard it from the panther. Amerix, behind his friend, was watching the spear with fear of being impaled. Nevish laughed as he could convince them that it’s all alright.\n\n“This one?” he raised. “It’s just nothing, but it’s such value for you, I give back if you leave us alive “he smoothes the finger above the jewel. “You don’t want this object falling into the wrong hands…”\n\nThen he felt a little shock coming from where he doesn’t know, but that jewel shined suddenly. Cacique hasn’t patience to wait and advances with his warriors to arrest these unfortunate. The two steps back, Amerix scared and Nevish with the confidence until his fangs, this one feeling a strong nausea hitting him. The jewel shined stronger, which made the indigenous stop immediately, watching the dizzy snake. Amerix tries to lift Nevish to escape until he sees the artifact earning a strong color, stepping back then.\nThe snake is in the center of palace with eyes gazed at him. He isn’t feeling pain, but it’s leaving him in bad mood. The body is reacting very differently and the mind is a storm of noisy things, then kneeling without strengths to stand up. Everyone was watching amazed, without reaction from one of them. Just broken by Amerix who tried to lift him again, which isn’t good. The more he screams to him, the more it speaks inside to change. Which type of change?\nNevish’s muscles are reacting differently. They are with more mass and flesh, stretching and earning a strong color of his black scale, a new bright as if removing the old body. Nevish moans a lot, panting and sweating horrors. His clothes are getting tight, not taking long to be torn with such pressure happening in one body. Not only his clothes, but until his boots are getting tight with the leather stretching at his limit that Nevish’s claws tear apart the material, opening until it becomes useless. Amerix stood back, scared of what’s happening. He until thought to join with indigenous, but they were frozen too, watching the snake in moans while the artifact was shining on his hand.\nNevish moans too much. He earns body, strength, resistance, pain, suffering, headache and more than a miracle. His body is reacting to a new reality. Amerix noticed clearly: Nevish is growing.\nAre they raving? Is it a possibility?", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "People now-a-day isn’t worried about what happens in the world. Just with their own belly button. The big metropolis keeps the huge movement of cars driving, pedestrians hurrying against their own times to do something for the live, typical and boring news about wars, politics, rights, religions and everything that is empty to fill.
Well, the story isn’t passing in this metropolis.
In the middle of the jungle, judging one hundred and twelve kilometers, two men are wandering between trees and giant leaves to visit the abandoned and old temple that served as a palace for their indigenous. Nevish, a black naja of green mane and red eyes, takes the lead cutting every big leaf with his machete to penetrate. His friend, Amerix, a wolf of curious mixed colors, follows him guiding with the map and every obstacle ahead. They crossed by a tribe and, according to Nevish, they allowed them to visit their temple as long as the two don’t touch nor take out an object from there, what it’s dumb for the naja. The weather is very hot, even under the big shadows. The entrance of temple is giant with many stones making incredible walls, floors, pilasters and a lot of moss around, the nature predominating the place.
It’s with a smile on the lips that Nevish gives his first steps on the forbidden area and Amerix follows him because he knows he can’t come back with danger of being chased.

“The magnificence of this temple captivates me” Nevish shouts without worrying about traps. “Look at this place! Still raised with their traditions and legends!”
“How did you know about this temple?” Amerix questioned looking at the walls. Some of them there are figures, possible hieroglyphics.
“I was searching on the internet and I found a forum talking about that place” he smooths his fingers on some rocks full of moss and fungi. “You know the city is being a suck of boring. I don’t want to stay there working during the week and resting on the weekend in my home.”
“And your parents?”
“Nhá! I don’t want to disturb them, mainly with their businesses.”

Amerix tries to comprehend Nevish’s hard head. Here, they aren’t welcome and Amerix has his parents yet. He worries a little.

“The indigenous can come to hunt us” the wolf proceeded trying to read these drawings. “You saw the cacique’s face.”
“Ah yes, his dick face,” Nevish laughs. “Are you afraid of them?”
“Of course I am!” shouted anxiously. “This place nor the city allows the presence of tourists.”
“Like if the city is worried about the preservation of indigenous! They tried to catch this mountain of rocks for them.”

Nevish laughed again, staring around and seeing everything that looked interesting to touch. Wall, vine, small rock, stairs and something located in the center as an altar. He gazed with a wish to climb just to see what he would find on top. Amerix ignored talking to him because Nevish’s mood is acid like his poison. The wolf just stood watching these hieroglyphics without worrying fully with his friend.
The naja climbs the stone stairs slowly to not slip with the moss and sees a little the interesting artifact that is placed above a horrible table to keep saved by their guardians. The roof has a hole to receive the sun rays above the object, a great signal of reverence of what is more sacred. Nevish could see perfectly after stepping the last floor that it’s a big red jewel fixed in a snake’s maw of beautiful art, enchanting the hardness and how unique is the object saved by these indigenous. These indigenous are panthers and bush dogs, very typical from this Amazon region with inca face. Nevish couldn’t just appreciate the artifact with the eyes. The needy to hold it screamed in his heart. After all, why is he there? Just to visit the place and go out? Without treasure? It’s stupidity!
While the naja appreciates the beauty of jewel, Amerix was sliding his fingers above some figures on the walls, trying to discover the meanings. They aren’t strange; contrariwise, they are similar to natural creatures they live lately and many of them specific one familiar species.

“Nevish. Did you read anything about this temple when you found this topic?” Amerix questioned in doubt, but without turning his face back. Nevish was with the artifact on his hand, smoothing the brilliant material with bright on the eyes.
“No. Why would I?”
“Many of these hieroglyphics speak about snakes as entities and gods. Not only that, but some of them show these gods as giants, receiving sacrifices of subjects. Did you read nothing about that?”
“No. Why would I?”
“Because you should have a notion of the shit we are running” Amerix turned back, exact time to see Nevish holding an artifact on his scaly hand. “What is this thing?”
“Oh! This one?” Nevish raised to show as conquered. “Just a jewel. Nothing so special or important to value.”
“Are you serious?” Amerix bulged his eyes staring at the gate where they entered, hoping these indigenous don’t come now. “Leave it here! Do you know what it is?”
“Just a piece of stones and ruby? I don’t know” he shrugs going down the stairs. “As said before, it’s just a piece of nothing. An amulet that will do nothing with us.”

Amerix couldn’t keep his position forever. He walked to Nevish to observe closer the artifact, beautiful, but smelling curse. The wolf feels his soul ruffled with fear and that isn’t a good signal according to his instincts.
The wolf asked immediately to deliver the object to the due place, as soon as the indigenous appeared at the gate, counting seven or eight, with the panther cacique in front. They are handling spears in the advantage because the two adventurers are carrying nothing of weapon. Just Nevish’s strong mood and Amerix’ fear standing behind the snake. The indigenous approach slowly and keep on the medium distance.

“Surrender to us” shouted the cacique spotting the spear to them. All of them use thongs, adorns as collars and bracelets. Their bodies are painted in yellow and red.
“Why? We were just visiting.”

Nevish speaking is the same as asking ‘kill me baby’. Cacique saw the artifact on his hand and growled. If there is something that he wins from them is size and strength.

“The amulet! Return it!”

They heard it from the panther. Amerix, behind his friend, was watching the spear with fear of being impaled. Nevish laughed as he could convince them that it’s all alright.

“This one?” he raised. “It’s just nothing, but it’s such value for you, I give back if you leave us alive “he smoothes the finger above the jewel. “You don’t want this object falling into the wrong hands…”

Then he felt a little shock coming from where he doesn’t know, but that jewel shined suddenly. Cacique hasn’t patience to wait and advances with his warriors to arrest these unfortunate. The two steps back, Amerix scared and Nevish with the confidence until his fangs, this one feeling a strong nausea hitting him. The jewel shined stronger, which made the indigenous stop immediately, watching the dizzy snake. Amerix tries to lift Nevish to escape until he sees the artifact earning a strong color, stepping back then.
The snake is in the center of palace with eyes gazed at him. He isn’t feeling pain, but it’s leaving him in bad mood. The body is reacting very differently and the mind is a storm of noisy things, then kneeling without strengths to stand up. Everyone was watching amazed, without reaction from one of them. Just broken by Amerix who tried to lift him again, which isn’t good. The more he screams to him, the more it speaks inside to change. Which type of change?
Nevish’s muscles are reacting differently. They are with more mass and flesh, stretching and earning a strong color of his black scale, a new bright as if removing the old body. Nevish moans a lot, panting and sweating horrors. His clothes are getting tight, not taking long to be torn with such pressure happening in one body. Not only his clothes, but until his boots are getting tight with the leather stretching at his limit that Nevish’s claws tear apart the material, opening until it becomes useless. Amerix stood back, scared of what’s happening. He until thought to join with indigenous, but they were frozen too, watching the snake in moans while the artifact was shining on his hand.
Nevish moans too much. He earns body, strength, resistance, pain, suffering, headache and more than a miracle. His body is reacting to a new reality. Amerix noticed clearly: Nevish is growing.
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