BOJACK'S RED SCENE written by ImnotBrian Based on the Netflix Original, BOJACK HORSEMAN Fan Drafted FADE IN: EXT. BOJACK'S BOAT'S BEDROOM - NIGHT BOJACK HORSEMAN, 51, horse, stallion, climbs up the ladder to his dock and finds PENNY CARSON, 17, deer, doe, waiting for him on his left, still wearing his Tuxedo coat. BOJACK What are you doing here? PENNY I know what I want, Bojack. He walks up to her and she smiles like she's waiting for him to change his mind. Instead, he doesn't say anything, looks away, inhales through his teeth and turns back to enter his bedroom without closing the sliding door behind him. She drops her smile and looks inside to see what he's doing. He sits on the bed taking off his right shoe. PENNY (CONT'D) Is... this a yes? BOJACK I'm going to bed naked. You wanna come, that's fine. You wanna go... it's up to you. She widens her eyes as he takes off one shoe to unlace the other. She turns around and looks below the dock to check who could be around. She finds no one and goes back inside to find Bojack taking off his white top with his pants still on. Everything slowly turns red. Bojack puts his top next to his shoes and unbuckles his pants in front of Penny. After he unzips, she breathes deep and closes the sliding door. INT. BOJACK'S BOAT'S BEDROOM - BOJACK AND PENNY HAVE SEX - MONTAGE Everything is red with only disturbing music heard. -- Penny lies on her back in his bed and Bojack gets on top to make out with her. Both of them are naked. -- Penny's hands are on Bojack's back trying to grope his butt. He's slowly thrusting. -- Penny bounces on top of Bojack as his hands grope her boobs. She grits her teeth and silently gasps. -- A shadow is seen of a man with a horse's head using doggy style on a girl with a deer's head. -- They both lie on their side as Bojack's gropes her right boob, his long face overlaps her shoulder and his elbow is used as Penny's pillow while he thrusts from behind. -- Another shadow is seen of the man with the horse's head carrying the woman with the deer's head by her butt, quickly thrusting as he's on his knees and her arms around his neck. -- They're in missionary position as Bojack thrusts faster and faster. Both of them close their eyes. -- Penny hugs Bojack close as he thrusts a few more times and gives a huge thrust which makes her moan and widen her eyes. -- Bojack breathes in and out as he gives a few light thrusts. Penny lets go and he gets on his hands to look at her. END OF MONTAGE INT. CARSON HOUSE - NIGHT CHARLOTTE CARSON, 48, deer, doe, walks to Penny's door, knocks a few times and opens it. CHARLOTTE Penny, are you asleep? She finds her daughter not in there. She looks around the house to figure out where she is. No where to be found, she opens the front door to look towards Bojack's boat in the driveway. She immediately gasps. EXT. BOJACK'S BOAT'S BEDROOM - NIGHT Charlotte climbs up the ladder saying "no" over and over. She quickly opens the sliding door and discovers Penny making out with Bojack in bed as they're both naked. They stop kissing to see her entering with shock and gasp together. CHARLOTTE (Makes one tear.) No! Bojack and Penny struggle to get out of bed. Penny takes the blanket to cover herself and Bojack uses a pillow to cover his groin. Charlotte steps forward in rage. CHARLOTTE (CONT'D) To your room now! PENNY It wasn't his fault! CHARLOTTE (Points out the door.) I said now! Penny and Bojack look to each other with regret. She starts to cry and grabs her prom dress before exiting with the blanket. Charlotte covers her face to hide her own tears. BOJACK I didn't mean to- CHARLOTTE No! Don't you... She shivers, grits her teeth and takes off a shoe to throw at him. It gets him right in the eye and makes him drop his pillow. He steps back, yells "ow" and covers the eye. CHARLOTTE (CONT'D) (Walks towards him.) You have 30 minutes to get your boat out of my driveway, or I'm calling the police. And if you ever contact me or my family, especially Penny, I will fucking hunt you down! She grabs his shoulders and knees him in the groin, making him drop to his side as she picks up her shoe, exits and slams the door behind her. He covers his groin as he tries not to yell in pain. FADE OUT.