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! I hope you guys like it, and I know it's... maybe not where you thought it would be leading. It's a little longer than I'm used to, too - it took a bit longer, and it reached just over 4500 words, but I think it's worth the extra effort.

New icons, too! One will doubtless be added for this addition to my story collection, but if ya'll wanna make some icons, I won't say no! ;3","writing":"[center][t]New Deal: Game Changer[/t]\n\nFt. Jackal, Nathan and Dizzi Morhlis[/center]\n\n\n\n\n\"It was on the [i]ENTIRE TIME[/i]?!\" Nathan exclaimed, no longer letting the pain emanating from his sore buttocks stopping him from standing up in panic. With a little wincing, he sped over to his still rather sticky computer and stared into the monitor. \n\nThe webcam hosting message was clear; it had most certainly been transmitting. Worse than that, somebody had definitely been watching, because somebody had cancelled the transmission from another computer. \n\n\"J-Jack, uh... this may mean trouble.\" \n\n\"Well trouble or not,\" Jackal said as he threw a cloth over the young bear's head. \"You need to clean up.\" \n\n\nThe two friends stayed in that room for a while, switching between speculating as to who would have known about Nathan's webcam, if they saw anything and sitting in silence grinning at one another. It had been Nathan's first time, and while Jack certainly hadn't planned on the rough sex they'd had not an hour ago, it was true that it was as exhilarating as any he'd had before. \n\nEventually, Jackal sat up and began to stretch. \"I should probably head off now.\" he said softly, scruffing up the hair of his young friend. \"It's getting late.\" \n\n\"W-wait!\" Nathan cried, reaching out and grabbing the bunny's paw. \"Can't you just... stay a little longer?\" He asked, casting his eyes upward and putting on his best puppy dog eyes. He truthfully didn't want his first time lover to simply leave, especially with the lingering fear of the unknown voyeur still burning brightly inside his mind. \n\n\"Well... I guess I could call home and stay over this once. That's if your parents would go for it, anyway.\" Jackal muttered, scratching the back of his head and looking away to avoid showing his gentle blush. \n\n\"Deal!\" The bear said happily before running to the door, opening it and fleeing down stairs. Jackal looked out of the window and considered the 'faster' way out, but dismissed it. His friend needed him to figure out this webcam issue, that's all. And that, he reassured himself as he whipped out his mobile phone, is what friends do. \n\n\n\"Hey mom, can my friend stay over tonight? His parents found out he was straight and kicked him out.\" Nathan said, almost entirely in one word and without hesitation as he rounded the kitchen's door. His mother, a broader short bear who was currently busy cleaning a plate in the sink, looked nonplussed until he finished. \n\n\"They kicked him out for.. being straight?\" She asked quizzically, setting down her sponge and beginning to dry her paws. Nathan stared up into her eyes with practiced innocence and span another golden lie out of nothing.\n\n\"They're hardcore gay pride rally supporters.\" \n\n\"Oh. Then... well, if it's okay with his parents, I suppos-- Hey!\" His mother exclaimed as he sped off before she'd even finished, giggling softly to himself. Turning back to her cleaned up plate, the short bear smiled and muttered to herself \"Well, at least I know there won't be any ‘swordfighting’...\" \n\n\n\"H-hey, mom. No, I'm fine. Nothing's wrong. Really! Why can't you jus-- Okay, look, I'm just calling to-- no, I'm... ugh. How are you?\" Jackal put his free paw to his face and rubbed his temples. \n\n\"I'm fine, thank you. Could I stay out tonight? A friend of mine is having a mental breakdown and-- no, not Christian. He's not really a friend, more a... No, mom, can you please just... yes, it's non-violent. No, no drugs. Really? I just wanna hel-- Look, I'm staying out tonight. I'll be home tomorrow, bye.\"\n\nFinally able to hang up, the tall bunny collapsed onto the young bear's bed with a frustrated sigh. This was probably in vain; there was no way that Nathan could get his parents to accept a gay guy his age having a slumber party. \n\n\n\"But he has nowhere else to go!\" Nathan whined to a shadowed figure in a comfortable looking chair. \"His family moved to croatia and left him in the garage by mistake!\"\n\n\"I said no, Nathan. I don't trust that boy, and I don't trust he wants to be hanging out with a kid half his age anyway.\" said the gruff voice of a taller, rotund bear. He still hadn't turned to look at his son, and was instead engrossed in something on his desktop.\n\n\"But-but-but... He WANTS to stay!\" Nathan tried, his mind racing. He knew that it'd be a bit of a struggle to get his wish, but he didn't understand why his father was the one being difficult. \n\n\"Pleeaaase, daddy?\" \n\nJust then, there was a subtle change in the atmosphere. A kind of texture to the silence suddenly pulled taut. With a loud creak from the chair and a pronounced sigh, the larger bear sat up straight and turned the swivel chair around to face his son. He pulled down his thin, rimless glasses and smiled down at the little bear with his emerald eyes studying the boy up and down. \n\nFor a few tense seconds, Nathan felt... studied. His father often did this, though; looking up and down his body as if some part of him could give something away as to his ulterior motive. After carefully and delicately cleaning his glasses, the large bear gave off another heavy sigh. \n\n\"Do you like this boy, Nathan?\" He asked, not with a tone of concern, but more one of light curiosity. He grinned, watching as his son ignored the blatant blush that spread across his young cheeks. \n\n\"N-no, he's just a friend, Dad. Jeez, he's like twice my age...\" \n\n\"Well, if that's the truth, he can stay for tonight. You aren't to stay up too late, though, and I want to talk to him about that right now.\" \n\nNathan exclaimed happily and ran up to his father's chair, happily jumping up to his lap and hugging around his round belly. \"Thanks daddy!\" \n\nThey each hugged one another tightly before the young bear jumped down and scampered out of the doorway, a slightly wet patch on his tail glistening as he did so. With a knowing grin, the big fatherly bear turned back to his desk. \n\n\"You're most welcome.\" he muttered to himself as he wiped his paw made sticky from hugging the young bear on a nearby handy cloth. His glasses gleamed from the light of his open laptop, and the image of his son and his 'friend' reflected from them as he closed the movie player window. \n\n\"It's time to teach someone a lesson...\" \n\n\nWith an excited grin, Nathan finally reached the top of the stairs once more. Taking a few moments to catch his breath just outside his closed bedroom door, he thought over his action plan. As long as Jackal's talk with his father didn't take too long, he could easily have him back in his bedroom and stripped off ready for all kinds of new and exciting 'computer' related games! \n\nThe idea of it made his belly tingle slightly, and without another moment's hesitation he opened his bedroom door and strolled in. He saw Jackal laid out on his bed and cleared his throat as adorably as he could manage. \n\nJackal looked up at him and smiled weakly. \"I'm really not sure what I can do about the webcam thing.\" He said quickly, sitting up and shrugging. Nathan blinked again, remembering the reason he'd told his friend to stay. \"I mean, I guess I could probably check your activity logs for any kind of IP address, but there's no guarantee that it'd have a record--\" \n\n\"Forget that for now.\" Nathan said, scratching the back of his neck. \"My parents said you could stay, but my dad wants to talk with you first.\" \n\n\"Your uh... your father?\" Jackal asked, his eyes widening slightly. \"W-why does he wanna talk to me?\" \n\n\"Who cares?\" Replied the young boy, hopping up onto the bed with his lupin friend. \"Just go see him and talk about bedtimes 'n stuff, then hurry back! I've got a lot more games we can play.\" \n\nJackal was both frustrated by the young bear's lack of attention span and slightly wary of his father's intentions, but he stood up and slowly made his way out of the boy's room. \"Uh... where is he?\" \n\n\"Daddy's in his study.\" Nathan said, rummaging in his closet for future activities. \"It's downstairs. Big thick doors, you can't miss it.\" \n\nJackal nodded and carefully made his way down the stairs. He'd met Mr. Morhlis a few times before, but what he was really thinking about was the rumours. There were plenty, and he heard them at least often enough to learn that his 'talks' with older boys who got friendly with his son on any level rarely involved talking.\n\nWith those tall tales still echoing in his mind, he approached the big, thick doors leading into the older man's domain. He held up one shaky paw to knock, but just before he made contact the doors swung open. Jackal flinched slightly, but managed to keep his general demeanor intact. \"Uh... y-you must be Mr. Morhlis?\" He asked to the tall figure now standing over him. \n\nJackal wasn't that tall - but considering his age that was to be expected. While Nathan joked about being 'half his age', he was only about four years older in the first place. The tall, strong-looking bear standing over him, however, was easily older than that, and had the stature to prove it. \n\n\"Come on in.\" Said the gruff voice of Morhlis as he stepped to one side, his green eyes fixed on the bunny's reaction. He was smiling, but that didn't help relax the bunny at all as he scampered through the open doors and stood awkwardly in the centre of the room. \n\nIt wasn't the biggest room of the house, but it did have a few interesting qualities. The walls were either lined with books or intricate and abstract paintings, and there were two seats - both big, over-stuffed leather chairs. There was a desk with an open laptop on it, but as he peered over to see what was on it he heard the thick doors close... and lock shut. \n\n\"S-so... Nathan told me that you wanted to speak with me?\" He asked nervously. The bear was silent as he passed the bunny and sat down on his desk chair. He cracked his neck to one side and invited the boy to sit in the other seat with one large, extended paw. \n\nJackal sat down so quickly that he got headrush. The mist covering his eyes settled and then he was alone in this silent room with the large bear studying him. Those eyes made unnerved him. The way they skimmed over parts of his body and occasionally glanced into his eyes made him feel like he was being sized up by a shark, ready to devour it's prey. \n\nFinally, Morhlis spoke. \"So tell me, why do you speak every line as if it were a question?\" \n\n\"I don't?\" Jackal said without thinking before blushing and coughing delicately. \"I uh... sorry. Force of habit I guess.\" \n\n\"My son seems fond of you.\" Said Morhlis, turning to his desk and doing something on his laptop, out of the bunny's vision. \n\n\"I... uh... y-yeah, we're friends I guess.\" Jackal said, nervously scratching his arm and looking around.\n\n\"You guess?\" The large bear asked, once more turning around to face the boy. He had the laptop in his lap with the lid slightly pushed down, and a grin on his face slightly wider than that Jackal had seen before. \n\n\"Uh... Yes? I-I mean, yes. We're friends.\" \n\n\"Then would you mind telling me about [i]this?[/i]\"\n\nMorhlis turned the laptop around as if it were on a pivot and opened the screen up. On it, Jackal could see a blurry still frame. The bear tapped the spacebar, and after a couple of seconds the bunny's eyes widened with a mixture of surprise and fear. \n\n\"It... You... but... I never meant...\" \n\n\"It would seem to me,\" The tall bear said, resting the laptop on the desk once more and revealing his bulging zipper. \"That any boy who would do that with MY son, especially in the manner in which you did, boy... well, let's just say that in this family, we take special care of those we hold dear.\" \n\nJackal stared down, unable to tear his eyes away from the bulging fabric. After a few long, mouth-watering moments he glanced away to the door, imagining possibly escape routes as well as the chance of being caught mid-act by his younger friend. \n\n\"Oh don't worry,\" Morhlis said in a comforting tone, a large paw suddenly resting on Jack's shoulder. \"We won't be disturbed. This room is soundproofed.\" \n\n\"L-look, Mr. Mohrlis--\" \n\n\"Please...\" The large bear said, standing up and looking down at the boy whose face was now level and inches away from his gently throbbing package. \"...Call me Daddy.\" \n\n\"I just... I'll go home, and I won't hang around with Nathan anymore, please. I just wanna go.\" Jack pleaded, trying his best to ignore his curiosity and budding arousal. \n\n\"Would you do that? Would you just up and leave your friend [i]without him knowing why[/i] you're suddenly not wanting to hang around with him anymore?\" \n\nJack considered this. He knew deep down that he did like Nathan as a friend, and he'd never do anything to hurt him. Just leaving and ignoring him from then onward suddenly sounded like a very stupid, selfish plan. \n\nHe gulped softly and looked directly at the bear's bulge before looking up and past his belly. \"What... what should I do?\" \n\nMorhlis winked, reminding Jack of what he'd forgotten. \n\n\"W-what should I do... [i]Daddy?[/i]\" Jack tried, much to the broad man's elation. \n\n\"In situations where a boy such as yourself wishes to be a part of our tightly knit family, it's tradition to try and appease the father.\" The bear said, pushing his hips forward just enough to make his bulge press up against the bunny's nose. \n\nJack looked up reluctantly, but the spark of desire in his eyes wasn't lost on the emeralds that met his look. He took a soft breath, and raised one paw. He gently began to stroke up against the bulge, squeezing it with his fingers as he thought about what to do next. \n\n\"Mmh... that's good. Jack, was it? You're a good boy, Jack, but these-\" At this point Morhlis tugged gently at the front of his trousers, making his bulge throb gently against the boy's gentle groping. \"Are awfully restricting. Why don't you help your daddy out of them?\" \n\nA heavy blush washed over Jack's face. He felt tongue tied, though oddly his tongue seemed to be twitching slightly. Taking another breath in and not bothering to answer the big bear in his rhetorical questions, he brought his other paw up and easily unbuttoned the tight, binding trousers. \n\n\"There's a good boy... H-hey~! Easy!\" Morhlis said with a chuckle. As soon as the trousers had been yanked down, Jack had done the same to the tenting briefs without being asked. Both of his paws had wrapped around the thick, protruding member presented to him, and with closed eyes he'd begun gently licking the under shaft. \n\nIn Jack's mind, there were two goals. Either he'd finish this guy off as quickly as possible and get back to his friend to tell him why he wouldn't be staying over anymore, or to find a way of escaping... but the more he tasted the heavy, throbbing cock on his tongue, the more the latter goal faded. \n\nAfter a few rounds of slowly squeezing the shaft from the base to the tip, he gave in to his alternate desire and wrapped his lips around the head, sealing them at the shaft and suckling gently. The delicious, musky scent of the bear filled his nostrils, only making his desire to please even stronger. He heard a couple of soft, encouraging moans from above, pushing him to employ his secret weapon. \n\n\"O-Ohh, good boy... work that tongue~\" \n\nJackal had learned from his previous endeavors, either through his own shy desires or through being in the right place at the right time that his tongue's skills were unmatched when it came to fellatio. \n\n\"Mmmf... you're almost as good as that boy Sans... [i]Hey![/i]\"\nThe exclamation was from Jackal suddenly pulling off of Morhil's ample cock and standing up.\n\n\"What the fuck do you mean, '[i]almost as good[/i]'?! Who the hell is Sans?\" He asked, staring up into the bear's green eyes with defiance and angrily wiping his maw with the palm of his paw. \n\n\"Hey, kid, I'm just paying you a compliment. Now you might wanna get back to wor--\" \n\n\"A compliment? Fuck you and your compliment!\" Jack said, turning around and heading for the door, only to forget it was locked. Instead of opening it as he had intended, he angrily pulled the handle and accidentally slammed his face against the door. \n\nThe impact didn't hurt as much as the soft chuckling from behind him. He felt his face burning from the blush that'd spread across his entire face, and knew he couldn't take it anymore. \n\n\"[i]Dammit, Just tell me what I have to do to please you, daddy![/i]\" He yelled, pointing a finger at the bear in anger. His tone didn't match his words, but he was too angry and aroused to care at this point. His mind was racing, at least the part of his mind that wasn't still running over the memory of the big bear's heavy musk.\n\nThe adult bear didn't seem to find his current attitude and flux of emotions odd. Walking slowly over to him, taking care to remove his own trousers and briefs from around his ankles, he placed a comforting paw upon the bunny's thin shoulder. \n\n\"If you'd like to see some[i] real [/i]tonguemanship, boy, turn around.\" He said, his emerald eyes gleaming over a perfectly predatory grin. \n\nObeying through a frustrated demeanour, Jack span around and slammed his paws down against the heavy doors. He felt his tight jeans being yanked down, and he winced as the tip of his erection caught on the cotton for a moment. Feeling his cloth bindings around his legs finally, he prepared for anything. \n\nOddly, he wasn't prepared for a soft, wet tongue pressing between his cheeks. Catching him entirely off-guard, he had to stop himself falling to the floor there and then from the overwhelming amount of pleasure rushing through his body. \n\nThe expert tonguing his hind-quarters was experiencing began to make his entire body throb with lust. Almost immediately being reduced to deep panting, Jackal felt the tip of his cock press swiftly against the sealed doors he was leaning against. His cheeks were spread and he felt the subtle wetness of the bear's nose melting away all anger and frustration.\n\nWith his mind racing and his body tingling with pleasure, he slowly began to sink down the door, pushing his hind-quarters against the bear's supporting paws and encouraging the thick tongue further into his tight entrance. \n\n\"O-ooh, D-daddy...\" he found himself crying out without even thinking about it. The sound of himself saying such a thing so taboo yet so strangely appealing gave his flaming lust a breath of fueling air. \n\nJust as he thought he'd unwillingly pass the line of orgasm, there was a heavy knocking on the other side of the door. Almost immediately he tensed up, and he felt the talented bear's tongue pull out of him as Morhlis stood up. He felt the wet, leaking cock against his backside as he was pushed aside, falling to his weak knees as the heavy door was swiftly unlocked and hefted open a crack, just enough for the bear to peek his head out. \n\n\"Dad, is Jack still in there?\" He heard from the floor. It was Nathan - but as soon as his eyes met the thick package of bear meat in front of him, he decided to ignore that small detail. He pulled the bear's hips silently toward him, engulfing the shaft with his maw and sucking the cock with all the desire that had been built up already. \n\n\"H-He... uh...\" The large bear faltered as his legs wobbled slightly under the pressure of the bunny's paws on his hips just out of sight of the young cub. He cleared his throat and tried again.\n\n\"He went home. He wasn't feeling great, but he didn't want to let you down, son.\" \n\nJackal could feel the disappointment from the other side of the door as he felt the throbbing cock hit the back of his throat. The feeling of more and more precum dribbling out of the shaft of manmeat and into his tight maw was enough for him to ignore it, though, and he felt the bear beginning to tense up. \n\n\"Really? Awuh... Well, can I come in and play with you instead, Daddy?\" \n\nJack felt the big bear buck against his suckling maw, his nose being pressed hard up against the pubic mound in front of him. The bear's scent rocked his mind, his mouth and tongue working automatically to squeeze every delicious drop of juice from his Daddy though he still had to stop himself from gagging by pulling back slightly.\n\n\"N-not now, Nathan. Go upstairs, and get ready to bed. I-I'll be up later on.\" Morhlis said, sweating noticeably. He closed the door as soon as the boy had scampered up the stairs and turned fully to the adoring, gagging bunny. \n\nAs he grinned down and finally let out some heavy pants, Jack reached up with a delicate paw and began gently squeezing his hairy balls, rolling them between his fingers with expertise while ramming his maw down to the base of the cock again and again. \n\n\"Mmmf, good... but you don't suck your daddy's cock [i]without permission[/i], boy.\" He heard, just before being yanked off of the delicious cock by a heavy, strong hand. Instead of sitting, he was thrown backward onto the carpeted floor and onto his back, where a pressure kept his head down. \n\nWhen he opened his eyes, all he could see was the bear's large belly coming closer. As he opened his mouth to speak it was filled abruptly with a heaping serving of throbbing hot cock. He felt it push past his objecting tongue, which only ended up pressing it against the roof of his mouth before making it's way deep into his throat. \n\nBefore he knew what was happening, he was laying on the floor being face-fucked by the heavy bear, each of his arms held down by legs stronger and bigger than himself. He wouldn't have objected to pleasuring the bear - but he had no choice either way. He felt the bear's heavy sack slap against his chin as his throat was stretched to accommodate the thick shaft. \n\n\"[i]Mmm[/i], that's more like it, boy! You take it nice 'n deep!\" He heard, all sound almost have been drowned out by the copious amounts of fast gasping and wet slurping he himself was performing. \n\nAll he could do was open his legs and let his own still exposed erection bounce gently against his belly, leaking it's excited juices over his soft white fur as it edged ever closer to orgasm. He caught breaths between each deep, fast thrust, swallowing and gagging around the cock as it forcefully filled his feminine face. \n\nShortly after his lower arms had gone numb and all he could think about was guzzling in more of the hot, musk-heavy air into his aching lungs, he felt the intruding slick cock dive deep into his throat and stay there. There was a loud, animalistic moan from above, and he felt a strong paw on the top of his head as if urging him to swallow more of the already totally enveloped meat.\n\nHe felt the cock throbbing hard and gagged once more as it shot its thick, heavy load down his throat, and he was forced to swallow ribbon after ribbon of the big bear's salty juice. Even Jack couldn’t help himself - he felt his belly and chest being painted with his own seed as he came, his legs convulsing slightly under the force of his orgasm. Eventually, when his cock was all but drained, the large bear pulled up and sat on the bunny's chest as Jack heaved and gasped for breath. \n\n\"G-God damn, boy... you're pretty good at that, y'know… But you got some of your [i]milk [/i]on my tail.\" Morhlis said through bated breaths. When eventually Jack had stopped gasping for his own, he looked up at the emerald-eyed bear and spoke, even though his throat was sore from the rampant forced face-fucking. \n\n\"D-did... I do well, daddy?\" He asked, totally lost in the bear's eyes. In return, he received a soft smile and a small kiss, but he still wasn't let up. \n\n\"So far, 'lil one... but now you gotta milk the rest outta me like a good boy to make up for swearing earlier.\" \n\nWith eagerness that made Morhlis gasp, the bunny pushed his face forward and began suckling the excess droplets of cum from his still throbbing, still stiff cock. \n\nThe big bear let his tongue roll out with a satisfied sigh, moving his legs so the young boy could incorporate his soft paws into his performance. Maybe Nathan could do with a friend like Jack, he thought to himself as he felt those exhausted lips squeeze around and milk his spent cock. After All, maybe the boy could learn a few things... \n\n\n\nA while later, after many talks about bedtimes, terminology used around other people (Jack learned to call Morhlis Daddy only when others are not around) and times when the bunny could come over not only for Nathan, but for his father, the large fatherly bear was escorting the young boy to the front door. \n\n\"So remember, as long as you're a good boy, I'll let you hang out with my son. No more 'playing' with him though, you hear? You're my little bitch now.\" Morhlis said, patting the boy on his back as they walked into the dark night. \n\n\"I know, Daddy, I won't.\" Jack replied, a smile still cemented on his blushing face. \n\n\"Good. Come back tomorrow evening and we'll... [i]play [/i]some more.\" The bear said, treating the bunny to a soft chuckle before stepping back inside and closing the front door. \n\nJack took a breath of the fresh air into his lungs and smiled up at the sky. What had happened between Nathan was fun, but nothing compared to what his father had treated him to. What he had planned, though, would hopefully prove better than both. \n\nHe flipped up his hood and began his walk back home, a new found spring in his slightly sore step. \n\nAll he knew for sure was that forbidden loving, the kind that was taboo and never meant to be... would always be the most fun to have, no matter how sore it left him or dangerous it may be if he were caught. \n\nWith that clear in his mind and with his long, slender ears up-turned, he happily bounced his way back home, content in the way things were in his life.\n\n[color=#eeeeec][s]Then he was hit by a bus and died. [/s][/color]\n\n[center][b]THE END[/b][/center]\n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"
New Deal: Game Changer

Ft. Jackal, Nathan and Dizzi Morhlis





"It was on the ENTIRE TIME?!" Nathan exclaimed, no longer letting the pain emanating from his sore buttocks stopping him from standing up in panic. With a little wincing, he sped over to his still rather sticky computer and stared into the monitor.

The webcam hosting message was clear; it had most certainly been transmitting. Worse than that, somebody had definitely been watching, because somebody had cancelled the transmission from another computer.

"J-Jack, uh... this may mean trouble."

"Well trouble or not," Jackal said as he threw a cloth over the young bear's head. "You need to clean up."


The two friends stayed in that room for a while, switching between speculating as to who would have known about Nathan's webcam, if they saw anything and sitting in silence grinning at one another. It had been Nathan's first time, and while Jack certainly hadn't planned on the rough sex they'd had not an hour ago, it was true that it was as exhilarating as any he'd had before.

Eventually, Jackal sat up and began to stretch. "I should probably head off now." he said softly, scruffing up the hair of his young friend. "It's getting late."

"W-wait!" Nathan cried, reaching out and grabbing the bunny's paw. "Can't you just... stay a little longer?" He asked, casting his eyes upward and putting on his best puppy dog eyes. He truthfully didn't want his first time lover to simply leave, especially with the lingering fear of the unknown voyeur still burning brightly inside his mind.

"Well... I guess I could call home and stay over this once. That's if your parents would go for it, anyway." Jackal muttered, scratching the back of his head and looking away to avoid showing his gentle blush.

"Deal!" The bear said happily before running to the door, opening it and fleeing down stairs. Jackal looked out of the window and considered the 'faster' way out, but dismissed it. His friend needed him to figure out this webcam issue, that's all. And that, he reassured himself as he whipped out his mobile phone, is what friends do.


"Hey mom, can my friend stay over tonight? His parents found out he was straight and kicked him out." Nathan said, almost entirely in one word and without hesitation as he rounded the kitchen's door. His mother, a broader short bear who was currently busy cleaning a plate in the sink, looked nonplussed until he finished.

"They kicked him out for.. being straight?" She asked quizzically, setting down her sponge and beginning to dry her paws. Nathan stared up into her eyes with practiced innocence and span another golden lie out of nothing.

"They're hardcore gay pride rally supporters."

"Oh. Then... well, if it's okay with his parents, I suppos-- Hey!" His mother exclaimed as he sped off before she'd even finished, giggling softly to himself. Turning back to her cleaned up plate, the short bear smiled and muttered to herself "Well, at least I know there won't be any ‘swordfighting’..."


"H-hey, mom. No, I'm fine. Nothing's wrong. Really! Why can't you jus-- Okay, look, I'm just calling to-- no, I'm... ugh. How are you?" Jackal put his free paw to his face and rubbed his temples.

"I'm fine, thank you. Could I stay out tonight? A friend of mine is having a mental breakdown and-- no, not Christian. He's not really a friend, more a... No, mom, can you please just... yes, it's non-violent. No, no drugs. Really? I just wanna hel-- Look, I'm staying out tonight. I'll be home tomorrow, bye."

Finally able to hang up, the tall bunny collapsed onto the young bear's bed with a frustrated sigh. This was probably in vain; there was no way that Nathan could get his parents to accept a gay guy his age having a slumber party.


"But he has nowhere else to go!" Nathan whined to a shadowed figure in a comfortable looking chair. "His family moved to croatia and left him in the garage by mistake!"

"I said no, Nathan. I don't trust that boy, and I don't trust he wants to be hanging out with a kid half his age anyway." said the gruff voice of a taller, rotund bear. He still hadn't turned to look at his son, and was instead engrossed in something on his desktop.

"But-but-but... He WANTS to stay!" Nathan tried, his mind racing. He knew that it'd be a bit of a struggle to get his wish, but he didn't understand why his father was the one being difficult.

"Pleeaaase, daddy?"

Just then, there was a subtle change in the atmosphere. A kind of texture to the silence suddenly pulled taut. With a loud creak from the chair and a pronounced sigh, the larger bear sat up straight and turned the swivel chair around to face his son. He pulled down his thin, rimless glasses and smiled down at the little bear with his emerald eyes studying the boy up and down.

For a few tense seconds, Nathan felt... studied. His father often did this, though; looking up and down his body as if some part of him could give something away as to his ulterior motive. After carefully and delicately cleaning his glasses, the large bear gave off another heavy sigh.

"Do you like this boy, Nathan?" He asked, not with a tone of concern, but more one of light curiosity. He grinned, watching as his son ignored the blatant blush that spread across his young cheeks.

"N-no, he's just a friend, Dad. Jeez, he's like twice my age..."

"Well, if that's the truth, he can stay for tonight. You aren't to stay up too late, though, and I want to talk to him about that right now."

Nathan exclaimed happily and ran up to his father's chair, happily jumping up to his lap and hugging around his round belly. "Thanks daddy!"

They each hugged one another tightly before the young bear jumped down and scampered out of the doorway, a slightly wet patch on his tail glistening as he did so. With a knowing grin, the big fatherly bear turned back to his desk.

"You're most welcome." he muttered to himself as he wiped his paw made sticky from hugging the young bear on a nearby handy cloth. His glasses gleamed from the light of his open laptop, and the image of his son and his 'friend' reflected from them as he closed the movie player window.

"It's time to teach someone a lesson..."


With an excited grin, Nathan finally reached the top of the stairs once more. Taking a few moments to catch his breath just outside his closed bedroom door, he thought over his action plan. As long as Jackal's talk with his father didn't take too long, he could easily have him back in his bedroom and stripped off ready for all kinds of new and exciting 'computer' related games!

The idea of it made his belly tingle slightly, and without another moment's hesitation he opened his bedroom door and strolled in. He saw Jackal laid out on his bed and cleared his throat as adorably as he could manage.

Jackal looked up at him and smiled weakly. "I'm really not sure what I can do about the webcam thing." He said quickly, sitting up and shrugging. Nathan blinked again, remembering the reason he'd told his friend to stay. "I mean, I guess I could probably check your activity logs for any kind of IP address, but there's no guarantee that it'd have a record--"

"Forget that for now." Nathan said, scratching the back of his neck. "My parents said you could stay, but my dad wants to talk with you first."

"Your uh... your father?" Jackal asked, his eyes widening slightly. "W-why does he wanna talk to me?"

"Who cares?" Replied the young boy, hopping up onto the bed with his lupin friend. "Just go see him and talk about bedtimes 'n stuff, then hurry back! I've got a lot more games we can play."

Jackal was both frustrated by the young bear's lack of attention span and slightly wary of his father's intentions, but he stood up and slowly made his way out of the boy's room. "Uh... where is he?"

"Daddy's in his study." Nathan said, rummaging in his closet for future activities. "It's downstairs. Big thick doors, you can't miss it."

Jackal nodded and carefully made his way down the stairs. He'd met Mr. Morhlis a few times before, but what he was really thinking about was the rumours. There were plenty, and he heard them at least often enough to learn that his 'talks' with older boys who got friendly with his son on any level rarely involved talking.

With those tall tales still echoing in his mind, he approached the big, thick doors leading into the older man's domain. He held up one shaky paw to knock, but just before he made contact the doors swung open. Jackal flinched slightly, but managed to keep his general demeanor intact. "Uh... y-you must be Mr. Morhlis?" He asked to the tall figure now standing over him.

Jackal wasn't that tall - but considering his age that was to be expected. While Nathan joked about being 'half his age', he was only about four years older in the first place. The tall, strong-looking bear standing over him, however, was easily older than that, and had the stature to prove it.

"Come on in." Said the gruff voice of Morhlis as he stepped to one side, his green eyes fixed on the bunny's reaction. He was smiling, but that didn't help relax the bunny at all as he scampered through the open doors and stood awkwardly in the centre of the room.

It wasn't the biggest room of the house, but it did have a few interesting qualities. The walls were either lined with books or intricate and abstract paintings, and there were two seats - both big, over-stuffed leather chairs. There was a desk with an open laptop on it, but as he peered over to see what was on it he heard the thick doors close... and lock shut.

"S-so... Nathan told me that you wanted to speak with me?" He asked nervously. The bear was silent as he passed the bunny and sat down on his desk chair. He cracked his neck to one side and invited the boy to sit in the other seat with one large, extended paw.

Jackal sat down so quickly that he got headrush. The mist covering his eyes settled and then he was alone in this silent room with the large bear studying him. Those eyes made unnerved him. The way they skimmed over parts of his body and occasionally glanced into his eyes made him feel like he was being sized up by a shark, ready to devour it's prey.

Finally, Morhlis spoke. "So tell me, why do you speak every line as if it were a question?"

"I don't?" Jackal said without thinking before blushing and coughing delicately. "I uh... sorry. Force of habit I guess."

"My son seems fond of you." Said Morhlis, turning to his desk and doing something on his laptop, out of the bunny's vision.

"I... uh... y-yeah, we're friends I guess." Jackal said, nervously scratching his arm and looking around.

"You guess?" The large bear asked, once more turning around to face the boy. He had the laptop in his lap with the lid slightly pushed down, and a grin on his face slightly wider than that Jackal had seen before.

"Uh... Yes? I-I mean, yes. We're friends."

"Then would you mind telling me about this?"

Morhlis turned the laptop around as if it were on a pivot and opened the screen up. On it, Jackal could see a blurry still frame. The bear tapped the spacebar, and after a couple of seconds the bunny's eyes widened with a mixture of surprise and fear.

"It... You... but... I never meant..."

"It would seem to me," The tall bear said, resting the laptop on the desk once more and revealing his bulging zipper. "That any boy who would do that with MY son, especially in the manner in which you did, boy... well, let's just say that in this family, we take special care of those we hold dear."

Jackal stared down, unable to tear his eyes away from the bulging fabric. After a few long, mouth-watering moments he glanced away to the door, imagining possibly escape routes as well as the chance of being caught mid-act by his younger friend.

"Oh don't worry," Morhlis said in a comforting tone, a large paw suddenly resting on Jack's shoulder. "We won't be disturbed. This room is soundproofed."

"L-look, Mr. Mohrlis--"

"Please..." The large bear said, standing up and looking down at the boy whose face was now level and inches away from his gently throbbing package. "...Call me Daddy."

"I just... I'll go home, and I won't hang around with Nathan anymore, please. I just wanna go." Jack pleaded, trying his best to ignore his curiosity and budding arousal.

"Would you do that? Would you just up and leave your friend without him knowing why you're suddenly not wanting to hang around with him anymore?"

Jack considered this. He knew deep down that he did like Nathan as a friend, and he'd never do anything to hurt him. Just leaving and ignoring him from then onward suddenly sounded like a very stupid, selfish plan.

He gulped softly and looked directly at the bear's bulge before looking up and past his belly. "What... what should I do?"

Morhlis winked, reminding Jack of what he'd forgotten.

"W-what should I do... Daddy?" Jack tried, much to the broad man's elation.

"In situations where a boy such as yourself wishes to be a part of our tightly knit family, it's tradition to try and appease the father." The bear said, pushing his hips forward just enough to make his bulge press up against the bunny's nose.

Jack looked up reluctantly, but the spark of desire in his eyes wasn't lost on the emeralds that met his look. He took a soft breath, and raised one paw. He gently began to stroke up against the bulge, squeezing it with his fingers as he thought about what to do next.

"Mmh... that's good. Jack, was it? You're a good boy, Jack, but these-" At this point Morhlis tugged gently at the front of his trousers, making his bulge throb gently against the boy's gentle groping. "Are awfully restricting. Why don't you help your daddy out of them?"

A heavy blush washed over Jack's face. He felt tongue tied, though oddly his tongue seemed to be twitching slightly. Taking another breath in and not bothering to answer the big bear in his rhetorical questions, he brought his other paw up and easily unbuttoned the tight, binding trousers.

"There's a good boy... H-hey~! Easy!" Morhlis said with a chuckle. As soon as the trousers had been yanked down, Jack had done the same to the tenting briefs without being asked. Both of his paws had wrapped around the thick, protruding member presented to him, and with closed eyes he'd begun gently licking the under shaft.  

In Jack's mind, there were two goals. Either he'd finish this guy off as quickly as possible and get back to his friend to tell him why he wouldn't be staying over anymore, or to find a way of escaping... but the more he tasted the heavy, throbbing cock on his tongue, the more the latter goal faded.

After a few rounds of slowly squeezing the shaft from the base to the tip, he gave in to his alternate desire and wrapped his lips around the head, sealing them at the shaft and suckling gently. The delicious, musky scent of the bear filled his nostrils, only making his desire to please even stronger. He heard a couple of soft, encouraging moans from above, pushing him to employ his secret weapon.

"O-Ohh, good boy... work that tongue~"

Jackal had learned from his previous endeavors, either through his own shy desires or through being in the right place at the right time that his tongue's skills were unmatched when it came to fellatio.

"Mmmf... you're almost as good as that boy Sans... Hey!"
The exclamation was from Jackal suddenly pulling off of Morhil's ample cock and standing up.

"What the fuck do you mean, 'almost as good'?! Who the hell is Sans?" He asked, staring up into the bear's green eyes with defiance and angrily wiping his maw with the palm of his paw.

"Hey, kid, I'm just paying you a compliment. Now you might wanna get back to wor--"

"A compliment? Fuck you and your compliment!" Jack said, turning around and heading for the door, only to forget it was locked. Instead of opening it as he had intended, he angrily pulled the handle and accidentally slammed his face against the door.

The impact didn't hurt as much as the soft chuckling from behind him. He felt his face burning from the blush that'd spread across his entire face, and knew he couldn't take it anymore.

"Dammit, Just tell me what I have to do to please you, daddy!" He yelled, pointing a finger at the bear in anger. His tone didn't match his words, but he was too angry and aroused to care at this point. His mind was racing, at least the part of his mind that wasn't still running over the memory of the big bear's heavy musk.

The adult bear didn't seem to find his current attitude and flux of emotions odd. Walking slowly over to him, taking care to remove his own trousers and briefs from around his ankles, he placed a comforting paw upon the bunny's thin shoulder.

"If you'd like to see some real tonguemanship, boy, turn around." He said, his emerald eyes gleaming over a perfectly predatory grin.

Obeying through a frustrated demeanour, Jack span around and slammed his paws down against the heavy doors. He felt his tight jeans being yanked down, and he winced as the tip of his erection caught on the cotton for a moment. Feeling his cloth bindings around his legs finally, he prepared for anything.

Oddly, he wasn't prepared for a soft, wet tongue pressing between his cheeks. Catching him entirely off-guard, he had to stop himself falling to the floor there and then from the overwhelming amount of pleasure rushing through his body.

The expert tonguing his hind-quarters was experiencing began to make his entire body throb with lust. Almost immediately being reduced to deep panting, Jackal felt the tip of his cock press swiftly against the sealed doors he was leaning against. His cheeks were spread and he felt the subtle wetness of the bear's nose melting away all anger and frustration.

With his mind racing and his body tingling with pleasure, he slowly began to sink down the door, pushing his hind-quarters against the bear's supporting paws and encouraging the thick tongue further into his tight entrance.

"O-ooh, D-daddy..." he found himself crying out without even thinking about it. The sound of himself saying such a thing so taboo yet so strangely appealing gave his flaming lust a breath of fueling air.

Just as he thought he'd unwillingly pass the line of orgasm, there was a heavy knocking on the other side of the door. Almost immediately he tensed up, and he felt the talented bear's tongue pull out of him as Morhlis stood up. He felt the wet, leaking cock against his backside as he was pushed aside, falling to his weak knees as the heavy door was swiftly unlocked and hefted open a crack, just enough for the bear to peek his head out.

"Dad, is Jack still in there?" He heard from the floor. It was Nathan - but as soon as his eyes met the thick package of bear meat in front of him, he decided to ignore that small detail. He pulled the bear's hips silently toward him, engulfing the shaft with his maw and sucking the cock with all the desire that had been built up already.

"H-He... uh..." The large bear faltered as his legs wobbled slightly under the pressure of the bunny's paws on his hips just out of sight of the young cub. He cleared his throat and tried again.

"He went home. He wasn't feeling great, but he didn't want to let you down, son."

Jackal could feel the disappointment from the other side of the door as he felt the throbbing cock hit the back of his throat. The feeling of more and more precum dribbling out of the shaft of manmeat and into his tight maw was enough for him to ignore it, though, and he felt the bear beginning to tense up.

"Really? Awuh... Well, can I come in and play with you instead, Daddy?"

Jack felt the big bear buck against his suckling maw, his nose being pressed hard up against the pubic mound in front of him. The bear's scent rocked his mind, his mouth and tongue working automatically to squeeze every delicious drop of juice from his Daddy though he still had to stop himself from gagging by pulling back slightly.

"N-not now, Nathan. Go upstairs, and get ready to bed. I-I'll be up later on." Morhlis said, sweating noticeably. He closed the door as soon as the boy had scampered up the stairs and turned fully to the adoring, gagging bunny.

As he grinned down and finally let out some heavy pants, Jack reached up with a delicate paw and began gently squeezing his hairy balls, rolling them between his fingers with expertise while ramming his maw down to the base of the cock again and again.

"Mmmf, good... but you don't suck your daddy's cock without permission, boy." He heard, just before being yanked off of the delicious cock by a heavy, strong hand. Instead of sitting, he was thrown backward onto the carpeted floor and onto his back, where a pressure kept his head down.

When he opened his eyes, all he could see was the bear's large belly coming closer. As he opened his mouth to speak it was filled abruptly with a heaping serving of throbbing hot cock. He felt it push past his objecting tongue, which only ended up pressing it against the roof of his mouth before making it's way deep into his throat.

Before he knew what was happening, he was laying on the floor being face-fucked by the heavy bear, each of his arms held down by legs stronger and bigger than himself. He wouldn't have objected to pleasuring the bear - but he had no choice either way. He felt the bear's heavy sack slap against his chin as his throat was stretched to accommodate the thick shaft.

"Mmm, that's more like it, boy! You take it nice 'n deep!" He heard, all sound almost have been drowned out by the copious amounts of fast gasping and wet slurping he himself was performing.

All he could do was open his legs and let his own still exposed erection bounce gently against his belly, leaking it's excited juices over his soft white fur as it edged ever closer to orgasm. He caught breaths between each deep, fast thrust, swallowing and gagging around the cock as it forcefully filled his feminine face.

Shortly after his lower arms had gone numb and all he could think about was guzzling in more of the hot, musk-heavy air into his aching lungs, he felt the intruding slick cock dive deep into his throat and stay there. There was a loud, animalistic moan from above, and he felt a strong paw on the top of his head as if urging him to swallow more of the already totally enveloped meat.

He felt the cock throbbing hard and gagged once more as it shot its thick, heavy load down his throat, and he was forced to swallow ribbon after ribbon of the big bear's salty juice. Even Jack couldn’t help himself - he felt his belly and chest being painted with his own seed as he came, his legs convulsing slightly under the force of his orgasm. Eventually, when his cock was all but drained, the large bear pulled up and sat on the bunny's chest as Jack heaved and gasped for breath.

"G-God damn, boy... you're pretty good at that, y'know… But you got some of your milk on my tail." Morhlis said through bated breaths. When eventually Jack had stopped gasping for his own, he looked up at the emerald-eyed bear and spoke, even though his throat was sore from the rampant forced face-fucking.

"D-did... I do well, daddy?" He asked, totally lost in the bear's eyes. In return, he received a soft smile and a small kiss, but he still wasn't let up.

"So far, 'lil one... but now you gotta milk the rest outta me like a good boy to make up for swearing earlier."

With eagerness that made Morhlis gasp, the bunny pushed his face forward and began suckling the excess droplets of cum from his still throbbing, still stiff cock.

The big bear let his tongue roll out with a satisfied sigh, moving his legs so the young boy could incorporate his soft paws into his performance. Maybe Nathan could do with a friend like Jack, he thought to himself as he felt those exhausted lips squeeze around and milk his spent cock. After All, maybe the boy could learn a few things...



A while later, after many talks about bedtimes, terminology used around other people (Jack learned to call Morhlis Daddy only when others are not around) and times when the bunny could come over not only for Nathan, but for his father, the large fatherly bear was escorting the young boy to the front door.

"So remember, as long as you're a good boy, I'll let you hang out with my son. No more 'playing' with him though, you hear? You're my little bitch now." Morhlis said, patting the boy on his back as they walked into the dark night.

"I know, Daddy, I won't." Jack replied, a smile still cemented on his blushing face.

"Good. Come back tomorrow evening and we'll... play some more." The bear said, treating the bunny to a soft chuckle before stepping back inside and closing the front door.

Jack took a breath of the fresh air into his lungs and smiled up at the sky. What had happened between Nathan was fun, but nothing compared to what his father had treated him to. What he had planned, though, would hopefully prove better than both.

He flipped up his hood and began his walk back home, a new found spring in his slightly sore step.

All he knew for sure was that forbidden loving, the kind that was taboo and never meant to be... would always be the most fun to have, no matter how sore it left him or dangerous it may be if he were caught.

With that clear in his mind and with his long, slender ears up-turned, he happily bounced his way back home, content in the way things were in his life.

Then he was hit by a bus and died.

THE END

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