Title: Better Than Candy
Parody: Happy Tree Friends
Characters: Nutty and Lammy
Total Pages: 27 + Cover
Total Panels: 121
Important Note: Despite the source material, there are no violent aspects.
Cover: The entrance to the beach. The title is on the sign above the entrance, and the credits are on a sperate sign off to the right.
[Page 1: Five panels]
1: Above view of Nutty’s car driving through the aforementioned entrance.
2: A shot of the car’s interior where Nutty is seen driving. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: I’ve been addicted to too many sweets as of late.)
3: Side view of Nutty still driving. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: My therapist said this should help with it.)
4: Side view of Nutty parking his car. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: I hope he was right…)
5: Front view of Nutty getting out of his car. It should be noted he is wearing a pair of yellow swim trunks.
(Nutty: At least it’s a nice day!)
[Page 2: Five panels]
1: Side view of Nutty walking down a set of steps to the beach area.
(Nutty: This is just what I needed!)
2: Side view of Nutty spotting a sign.
(Nutty: Hm?)
3: Side view of Nutty walking up the sign. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: That sign wasn’t there before.)
4: Front view of Nutty reading the sign. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: It’s probably the rules, or…)
5: Same view, only Nutty is looking shocked.
(Nutty: What the-?!)
[Page 3: Four panels]
1: A shot of the sign which reads "Nudity and sexual acts beyond this point are permitted! Please be aware of others’ comfort!".
2: Side view of Nutty looking worried and confused. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: Who put this here? Is it some kind of prank?)
3: Front view of Nutty sighing.
(Nutty: Calm down, Nutty… No one’s gonna take this seriously, right?)
4: Side view of Nutty walking away from the sign.
(Nutty: At least, I hope.)
[Page 4: Five panels]
1: Front view of Nutty laying down on a beach towel while being shaded by an umbrella. Text is seen in the upper left-hand corner.
(Text: Some time later…)
2: Side view of Nutty still laying down with his eyes closed. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: Maybe that sign was just a joke.)
3: Same view, only Nutty has woken up.
(Lammy: Hi, Nutty!)
(Nutty: Huh?)
4: Front view of Nutty sitting up and rubbing his eyes.
(Nutty: Who is it?)
5: Same view, only Nutty is looking shocked as Lammy makes her appearance.
(Lammy: It’s just me!)
[Page 5: One panel/Splash Page]
1: Full view of Lammy’s naked body. She is smiling at Nutty.
(Nutty: LAMMY?!)
[Page 6: Six panels]
1: Side view of Lammy talking to Nutty.
(Lammy: How’s it going, Nutty?)
2: Side view of Nutty shaking nervously.
(Nutty: I-I-I’m just fine!)
3: Side view of Lammy looking concerned.
(Lammy: Are you okay? You’re shaking a lot.)
4: Side view of Nutty averting his gaze.
(Nutty: Why are you… Naked?)
5: Side view of Lammy giggling.
(Lammy: Oh, that! I’m just following the new rule.)
6: Side view of Nutty looking confused.
(Nutty: New rule?)
[Page 7: Five panels]
1: Front view of Lammy sitting next to Nutty.
(Lammy: I saw the sign and wanted to make myself more comfortable.)
(Nutty: Uh…)
2: Side view of Lammy talking to Nutty.
(Lammy: Are you sure you’re okay?)
3: Front view of Nutty fidgeting nervously.
(Nutty: Well… I… Um…)
4: Closeup of Lammy’s hand on Nutty’s shoulder.
(Lammy: You’re trying to ween yourself off of sugar, right?)
(Nutty: Oh! Yeah, I was.)
5: Side view of Lammy and Nutty talking.
(Lammy: That takes a lot of courage, Nutty. I’m glad you’re acknowledging that it’s a problem.)
(Nutty: Gee, thanks, Lammy!)
[Page 8: Four panels]
1: Side view of Lammy talking to Nutty.
(Lammy: I mean, we literally had to hold you down until your sugar rush ended!)
2: Side view of Nutty laughing.
(Nutty: Haha! I remember that!)
3: Front view of Lammy standing up.
(Lammy: Anyway, I’d love to stay and chat, but I’ve got some time off, as well.)
4: Same view, only Lammy has turned around and is waving back at Nutty.
(Lammy: See ya!)
[Page 9: Five panels]
1: Above view of Nutty sleeping on the beach towel. Text is seen here.
(Text: Some time later…)
2: Side view of Nutty sleeping. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: Lammy looked so beautiful like that!)
3: Same view, only Nutty now has an erection under his swim trunks. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: I can’t stop thinking about her~)
4: Front view of Nutty sleeping. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: Maybe if I’m lucky, I-)
5: Same view, only Nutty has woken up.
(Lammy: Were you thinking of someone?)
(Nutty: HUH?!)
[Page 10: Six panels]
1: POV of Nutty looking at Lammy who is fondling the bulge in his swim trunks.
(Nutty: What are you doing?!)
(Lammy: Just having a bit of fun~)
2: Side view of Lammy sliding down Nutty’s swim trunks.
(Lammy: Let’s see here…)
3: Same view, only Nutty’s erection is visible. Lammy is looking surprised.
(Lammy: Oh!)
4: Closeup of Lammy reaching for Nutty’s penis.
(Lammy: You’re so big~)
5: Same view, only Lammy’s hand has stopped.
(Nutty: Lammy, wait!)
6: Side view of Lammy and Nutty talking.
(Lammy: What’s the matter, Nutty?)
(Nutty: What is somebody sees us?)
[Page 11: Four panels]
1: Side view of Lammy winking at Nutty.
(Lammy: Don’t worry, Nutty. We’re the only ones here!)
2: Front view of Nutty looking nervous.
(Nutty: Y-Yeah, but…)
3: Same view, only Lammy has pressed her finger up to Nutty’s lips.
(Lammy: But nothing. You knew what you wanted when you first saw me naked.)
4: Side view of Lammy leaning into Nutty.
(Lammy: Besides, I always knew you loved me~)
(Nutty: How did you-?)
[Page 12: One panel/Splash Page]
1: Side view of Lammy kissing Nutty. The latter of which is thinking via thought bubble.
(Thought bubble: Oh my God… She’s kissing me!)
[Page 13: Four panels]
1: Side view of Nutty returning the kiss as he and Lammy hug. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: And it feels so good~)
2: Closeup of Nutty and Lammy breaking the kiss.
3: Side view of Lammy and Nutty talking.
(Lammy: You’re such a good kisser, Nutty~)
(Nutty: Thank you, Lammy~)
4: Closeup of Lammy whispering into Nutty’s ear.
(Lammy: But let’s see if you’re also a good lover~)
[Page 14: Five panels]
1: Closeup of Lammy’s hand grasping Nutty’s penis.
(Lammy: Here we go~)
2: Same view, only Lammy is now jerking Nutty off.
(Nutty: Aaah!)
3: Side view of Nutty moaning.
(Nutty: This feels incredible~!)
4: Side view of Lammy leaning in.
(Lammy: Then this’ll feel even better~)
5: Same view, only Lammy is now sucking Nutty off.
[Page 15: Five panels]
1: Front view of Nutty moaning happily with his tongue out.
(Nutty: Your mouth feels so good, Lammy!)
2: Side view of Lammy bobbing her head up and down Nutty’s penis. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: It sounds like he’s enjoying himself.)
3: Behind view of Lammy fingering herself. Another thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: And to be honest? So am I~)
4: Above view of Lammy sucking Nutty off.
5: Side view of Nutty resting a hand on the back of Lammy’s head.
(Nutty: I’m almost there~)
[Page 16: Four panels]
1: Side view of Lammy deepthroating Nutty’s penis. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: That’s it, Nutty~ Let me taste it all~)
(Nutty: Here it comes…!)
2: Same view, only Nutty is cumming while Lammy’s eyes roll back.
3: Side view of Lammy pulling away and taking some breaths.
(Lammy: Hah… Hah…)
4: Front view of Nutty sighing happily.
(Nutty: That felt so good~!)
[Page 17: Five panels]
1: Side view of Nutty sitting up.
(Nutty: Thank you for that, Lammy!)
2: Same view, only Nutty is looking shocked.
(Lammy: Not so fast, Nutty~)
3: Front view of Lammy spreading her legs. Revealing her privates.
(Lammy: Would you like a turn, as well?)
4: Side view of Nutty leaning in.
(Nutty: Oh, hell yes~)
5: Same view, only Nutty is now licking Lammy’s vagina.
[Page 18: Four panels]
1: Side view of Lammy moaning.
(Lammy: Yes~ Keep licking me, Nutty~)
2: Side view of Nutty still licking.
3: Internal view of Nutty’s tongue inside Lammy’s vagina.
4: POV of Lammy looking at Nutty who is thinking via a thought bubble.
(Thought bubble: This tastes so much better than candy!)
(Lammy: I’m getting close~!)
[Page 19: Six panels]
1: Side view of Lammy spraying her juices as Nutty pulls away.
(Lammy: CUMMING!!)
2: Front view of Nutty sighing happily.
(Nutty: You came so much~)
3: Side view of Lammy sitting up.
(Lammy: I may have been a little pent up as of late.)
4: Side view of Nutty and Lammy making out.
5: Front view of Lammy on her hands and knees.
(Lammy: See something you like?~)
6: Closeup of Nutty’s erection.
(Nutty: I sure do~)
[Page 20: Six panels]
1: Side view of Nutty’s penis poking against Lammy’s anus.
(Nutty: Ready?)
(Lammy: I’m ready.)
2: Same view, only Nutty’s penis has now entered Lammy’s anus.
3: Side view of Lammy biting her lower lip. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Thought bubble: He’s so deep inside of me!)
4: Side view of Nutty thrusting.
5: Side view of Nutty giving Lammy’s ass a spank.
(Lammy: AH!)
6: Side view of Nutty looking concerned.
(Nutty: Sorry, Lammy! I wasn’t thinking clearly!)
[Page 21: Six panels]
1: Side view of Lammy looking back at Nutty.
(Lammy: Don’t be sorry, Nutty! It felt great!)
2: Side view of Nutty spanking Lammy again.
3: Internal view of Nutty’s penis inside Lammy’s ass.
4: Side view of Nutty moaning.
(Nutty: I’m almost there!)
5: Side view of Lammy moaning.
(Lammy: Cum inside me, Nutty!)
6: Internal view of Nutty’s penis cumming inside Lammy’s ass.
[Page 22: Four panels]
1: Side view of Nutty pulling out as cum drips out of Lammy’s anus.
2: Side view of Nutty flopping onto his back.
(Nutty: That was awesome~)
3: Same view, only Lammy is now on top of Nutty.
(Lammy: But are you too tired for one more round?)
(Nutty: Of course not!)
4: Closeup of Lammy rubbing her vagina up against Nutty’s penis.
(Lammy: Good answer~)
[Page 23: Five panels]
1: Above view of Lammy laying down on her back as Nutty preps himself.
(Lammy: Start slow, okay?)
(Nutty: You’ve got it!~)
2: Closeup of Nutty’s penis pressing up against Lammy’s vagina.
3: Same view, only Nutty’s penis has entered Lammy’s vagina.
4: Front view of Lammy moaning. A thought bubble is seen here.
(Lammy: BAAAA!!)
(Thought bubble: He’s so big! It feels wonderful~)
5: Internal view of Lammy’s penis thrusting inside of Lammy’s vagina.
[Page 24: Four panels]
1: Side view of Nutty thrusting.
(Nutty: This is the best day ever!)
2: Side view of Nutty moaning.
(Nutty: I love you, Lammy!!)
3: Side view of Lammy moaning.
(Lammy: I love you too, Nutty!)
4: Side view of Lammy and Nutty kissing.
[Page 25: Five panels]
1: Closeup of Nutty and Lammy breaking the kiss.
2: Side view of Lammy and Nutty moaning.
(Both: I’M CUMMING!!!)
3: Internal view of Nutty cumming inside of Lammy’s vagina.
4: Side view of Nutty pulling out as Lammy sprays her juices.
5: Side view of Lammy and Nutty panting.
[Page 26: Six panels]
1: Above view of Nutty and Lammy laying on their backs.
(Nutty: That was amazing~)
(Lammy: It sure was~)
2: Side view of Nutty Talking to Lammy.
(Nutty: Say, how did you know that I had feelings for you?)
3: Side view of Lammy giggling.
(Lammy: You were never good at keeping secrets.)
4: Front view of Lammy and Nutty sitting up.
(Lammy: When we go back into town, did you want to go for Round 2?)
(Nutty: I’d love that~)
5: Front view of Lammy reaching behind her.
(Lammy: And to seal the deal…)
6: Same view, only Lammy has revealed a lollipop. Text with an arrow pointing to it is seen here.
(Lammy: How about a little treat?~)
(Text: SUGAR FREE)
[27: One panel/Splash Page]
1: Front view of Nutty and Lammy holding hands as Nutty happily licks the lollipop. Text is seen in the lower right-hand corner.
(Text: END)
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