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The walls were spotless, the floor was a red carpet, and he was laying down on a queen-sized bed. Next to it was a small table with a piece of paper on top.\n\nAsriel got up and looked around. “Hello?” He called. “Mom? Dad? Anyone?” No response. He began to think. The last thing he remembered was playing a video game, and then it was all a big blur at that point. Asriel took the paper. Hopefully, it would have some answers and he could get out of here! Wherever this place was. He began to read it.\n\nWelcome, Asriel Dreemurr, to Desperation Dungeon! The longer you are here, the more you need relief. If you wish to leave, you must explore all the rooms and do all the tasks. It will be a challenge, though~\n\nAnd that’s where it left off. It wasn’t signed or anything. Lots of questions soared through Asriel’s mind. Who brought him here? What secrets did this place hold? What kind of tasks did this note mean? And most importantly…\n\nWhat did it mean by \"Relief\"? He felt fine! For now, at least…\n\n“Well, first things first: Let’s get out of this room!” Asriel said aloud. Obviously, there wasn’t any answer. He turned around and saw a door with the word \"START\" above it. Aha! A way out! He eagerly opened it and stepped into the next room.\n\nThe room in question had a lot of doors labelled one through five lined in a row across from him. In front of them all was a rolled-up piece of paper dangling on a string that was attached to the ceiling. Asriel took it, unrolled it, and began to read.\n\nIn order to escape Desperation Dungeon, you must perform five tasks. Each harder than the last. But be careful! Every wrong decision will add a little bit more to your bladder. When you are ready, enter door number one. Good luck!\n\nGulping nervously, Asriel opened door number one. Inside were a bunch of washing machines, dryers, and a laundry chute was in the wall across from him. Another note was hanging on the handle. As he walked towards it, Asriel looked around some more. Each washer and dryer seemed to be in use as if it he was in a busy laundromat. Asriel reached the note on the chute and got a good look at what it read.\n\nTask 1: Take off your clothes and throw them in the chute\n\nAsriel did a double take. His clothes?? Why? Who would make him do this? “N-No way!” Asriel yelled at nothing. “My mom made this shirt for me, and-!”\n\nAsriel was cut off by a sudden feeling. As if he drank something and it entered his bladder. It was a slight feeling, but still noticeable. And even though it was nothing to worry about yet, Asriel was worried that if he continued to refuse, the pressure could build up more and more.\n\nHaving no other choice, he began stripping down. Starting with his shirt, then his shorts, and, after hesitating, his underwear. Now fully nude, he crumbled up the discarded clothing and tossed them into the chute. As he did, an unlocking sound was heard somewhere. 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The table was affixed to the floor and had a push-button safe and another note on it. Asriel picked up the note and read it.\n\nTask 3: Open the safe with the right code\n\nAsriel took a closer look at the safe. There were 12 buttons in total, and they each had symbol on them; zero through nine, a green checkmark, and the word \"CLEAR\" in red. Judging by the screen above the buttons, it was a four-digit code. Asriel tried a few codes he knew from a few movies he watched, but they were all wrong. And each wrong input added more liquid to his bladder. Ugh! Blindly guessing isn’t going to get him anywhere unless his goal was to pee himself!\n\nUpon taking another look at the note, Asriel could just barely make out a few small dents. As if a message was hidden from the naked eye. Remembering the pencil stub from earlier, Asriel scribbled all over the dents. Revealing the message: 1-8-0-2 Aha! A code! It was just like in those detective movies!\n\nHe input the code and pressed the checkmark button. He waited a few seconds. Nothing else is being added to his bladder so Asriel assumed he got the code correct. Upon opening the safe, he found a red button. After pressing it, he heard another unlocking sound. Sweet! Door number four is open!\n\nInside the fourth door were lots and lots of cabinets on all four walls. On the floor was another note.\n\nTask 4: Find the button\n\nAsriel looked at each cabinet. Each one looked identical and absolutely nothing was out of the ordinary. He assumed that each wrong one would add more pressure to his bladder. He opened one of them to test his theory, only to have a small bit of urine escape his body. Asriel held his crotch and gyrated his hips. This was gonna suck… So, without a second option, he began opening the cabinets one after another. Wrong, wrong, wrong… It was only a matter of time!\n\nBut as if a miracle had taken place, Asriel opened the correct cabinet. He hastily pressed the button and heard one last unlocking sound. Thank goodness! Just one more task and he’d be free from this place!\n\nHowever, after he opened the last door, Asriel finally learned why it was called Desperation Dungeon; the other rooms were all normal, but this was a long hallway the resembled an actual dungeon. Stone brick walls, lit by torches, the works! On the wall to his left, he found the final note.\n\nYou are almost done! Your final task is to walk to the end of this hallway. Farewell!\n\nAnd it would be an easy task if it wasn’t for Asriel’s bursting bladder! “Hhng… I don’t know how much longer I can hold it…!” He said to himself.\n\nAsriel thought about making a run for it, but the pressure was too much! So he took it slow. However, each step was making it worse. The floor was damp and small puddles formed whenever he took a step. And the feeling of water on his feet was almost too much!\n\nHe was honestly impressed on how far he got before he started leaking again; about halfway, at that. But Asriel was in a losing battle against his bladder. Just then, a thought struck him. One that he was surprised hadn’t crossed him sooner.\n\nWhy couldn’t he just, y’know, let it out? No one else was here besides him, right?\n\nHe looked around to confirm his theory. Yep! He was alone! Asriel uncovered his privates, crouched down, and gave his body what it wanted all this time: Relief.\n\n“Aaaaaah~!” Asriel groaned as urine poured out of him. “Sweet relief~”\n\nAsriel continued to pee. The puddle growing bigger ever so slowly. Mid-stream, Asriel’s dick slowly hardened into an erection. Getting into it, he reached down and started beating off. “Ah! Oooh… Holy shit…!” He groaned. It was okay to swear, right? His parents weren’t here, after all.\n\n“Mmf! This feels- ah! So fucking good!” Asriel gritted his teeth as the stream of urine stopped abruptly before white ropes of cum stained the dungeon floor. Afterwards, more urine poured out of the goat’s body. Eventually, his bladder emptied completely.\n\n“Whoa… That was intense!” Asriel sighed as he stood back up and walked towards the exit. Upon opening the door, however, a bright light shined in his eyes. Upon opening them again, he found himself…\n\nBack in his bedroom?\n\n“Huh? Was it all… Just a dream?” He asked aloud. He looked around to find that everything was how he left it. The only things that were different was that he was naked, and there was a note on his desk. Asriel walked over to the note and read it.\n\nCongratulations! You have escaped Desperation Dungeon! If ever wish to return for a slightly harder challenge, simply go to sleep while thinking about the dungeon. See you soon~\n\nSo… It wasn’t a dream? What could’ve caused it to happen? Either way, even if he didn’t want to admit it out loud, Asriel might want to come back to this place again~", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "“Nngh… Huh?”

Asriel Dreemurr awoke in a room he’d never been in before. The walls were spotless, the floor was a red carpet, and he was laying down on a queen-sized bed. Next to it was a small table with a piece of paper on top.

Asriel got up and looked around. “Hello?” He called. “Mom? Dad? Anyone?” No response. He began to think. The last thing he remembered was playing a video game, and then it was all a big blur at that point. Asriel took the paper. Hopefully, it would have some answers and he could get out of here! Wherever this place was. He began to read it.

Welcome, Asriel Dreemurr, to Desperation Dungeon! The longer you are here, the more you need relief. If you wish to leave, you must explore all the rooms and do all the tasks. It will be a challenge, though~

And that’s where it left off. It wasn’t signed or anything. Lots of questions soared through Asriel’s mind. Who brought him here? What secrets did this place hold? What kind of tasks did this note mean? And most importantly…

What did it mean by "Relief"? He felt fine! For now, at least…

“Well, first things first: Let’s get out of this room!” Asriel said aloud. Obviously, there wasn’t any answer. He turned around and saw a door with the word "START" above it. Aha! A way out! He eagerly opened it and stepped into the next room.

The room in question had a lot of doors labelled one through five lined in a row across from him. In front of them all was a rolled-up piece of paper dangling on a string that was attached to the ceiling. Asriel took it, unrolled it, and began to read.

In order to escape Desperation Dungeon, you must perform five tasks. Each harder than the last. But be careful! Every wrong decision will add a little bit more to your bladder. When you are ready, enter door number one. Good luck!

Gulping nervously, Asriel opened door number one. Inside were a bunch of washing machines, dryers, and a laundry chute was in the wall across from him. Another note was hanging on the handle. As he walked towards it, Asriel looked around some more. Each washer and dryer seemed to be in use as if it he was in a busy laundromat. Asriel reached the note on the chute and got a good look at what it read.

Task 1: Take off your clothes and throw them in the chute

Asriel did a double take. His clothes?? Why? Who would make him do this? “N-No way!” Asriel yelled at nothing. “My mom made this shirt for me, and-!”

Asriel was cut off by a sudden feeling. As if he drank something and it entered his bladder. It was a slight feeling, but still noticeable. And even though it was nothing to worry about yet, Asriel was worried that if he continued to refuse, the pressure could build up more and more.

Having no other choice, he began stripping down. Starting with his shirt, then his shorts, and, after hesitating, his underwear. Now fully nude, he crumbled up the discarded clothing and tossed them into the chute. As he did, an unlocking sound was heard somewhere. Was the second door open? Hopefully.

‘I hope I get my clothes back at the end of this…’ Asriel thought as he made his way back. He tried the handle of door number two, and sure enough, it was unlocked. Asriel walked inside.

The room was full of drawers labelled with various titles such as "Paper", "Pencils", and other art supplies. “Huh? Is this… A craft room?” Asriel asked himself as he approached a table with a note on it.

Task 2: Draw a self-portrait in pencil (Keep the latter for later!)

That’s all? Huh. Seems simple enough! All he needed was a pencil and paper! Getting the paper was an easy task. However, upon opening the drawer labelled "Pencils", Asriel found only one within it. A stub, no less!

‘Better make it count…’ He thought as he began drawing. Once he finished, he heard another unlocking sound. Asriel smirked. Well, that wasn’t so hard, wasn’t it?

Behind door number three was just a plain room with one table in the middle of it. The table was affixed to the floor and had a push-button safe and another note on it. Asriel picked up the note and read it.

Task 3: Open the safe with the right code

Asriel took a closer look at the safe. There were 12 buttons in total, and they each had symbol on them; zero through nine, a green checkmark, and the word "CLEAR" in red. Judging by the screen above the buttons, it was a four-digit code. Asriel tried a few codes he knew from a few movies he watched, but they were all wrong. And each wrong input added more liquid to his bladder. Ugh! Blindly guessing isn’t going to get him anywhere unless his goal was to pee himself!

Upon taking another look at the note, Asriel could just barely make out a few small dents. As if a message was hidden from the naked eye. Remembering the pencil stub from earlier, Asriel scribbled all over the dents. Revealing the message: 1-8-0-2 Aha! A code! It was just like in those detective movies!

He input the code and pressed the checkmark button. He waited a few seconds. Nothing else is being added to his bladder so Asriel assumed he got the code correct. Upon opening the safe, he found a red button. After pressing it, he heard another unlocking sound. Sweet! Door number four is open!

Inside the fourth door were lots and lots of cabinets on all four walls. On the floor was another note.

Task 4: Find the button

Asriel looked at each cabinet. Each one looked identical and absolutely nothing was out of the ordinary. He assumed that each wrong one would add more pressure to his bladder. He opened one of them to test his theory, only to have a small bit of urine escape his body. Asriel held his crotch and gyrated his hips. This was gonna suck… So, without a second option, he began opening the cabinets one after another. Wrong, wrong, wrong… It was only a matter of time!

But as if a miracle had taken place, Asriel opened the correct cabinet. He hastily pressed the button and heard one last unlocking sound. Thank goodness! Just one more task and he’d be free from this place!

However, after he opened the last door, Asriel finally learned why it was called Desperation Dungeon; the other rooms were all normal, but this was a long hallway the resembled an actual dungeon. Stone brick walls, lit by torches, the works! On the wall to his left, he found the final note.

You are almost done! Your final task is to walk to the end of this hallway. Farewell!

And it would be an easy task if it wasn’t for Asriel’s bursting bladder! “Hhng… I don’t know how much longer I can hold it…!” He said to himself.

Asriel thought about making a run for it, but the pressure was too much! So he took it slow. However, each step was making it worse. The floor was damp and small puddles formed whenever he took a step. And the feeling of water on his feet was almost too much!

He was honestly impressed on how far he got before he started leaking again; about halfway, at that. But Asriel was in a losing battle against his bladder. Just then, a thought struck him. One that he was surprised hadn’t crossed him sooner.

Why couldn’t he just, y’know, let it out? No one else was here besides him, right?

He looked around to confirm his theory. Yep! He was alone! Asriel uncovered his privates, crouched down, and gave his body what it wanted all this time: Relief.

“Aaaaaah~!” Asriel groaned as urine poured out of him. “Sweet relief~”

Asriel continued to pee. The puddle growing bigger ever so slowly. Mid-stream, Asriel’s dick slowly hardened into an erection. Getting into it, he reached down and started beating off. “Ah! Oooh… Holy shit…!” He groaned. It was okay to swear, right? His parents weren’t here, after all.

“Mmf! This feels- ah! So fucking good!” Asriel gritted his teeth as the stream of urine stopped abruptly before white ropes of cum stained the dungeon floor. Afterwards, more urine poured out of the goat’s body. Eventually, his bladder emptied completely.

“Whoa… That was intense!” Asriel sighed as he stood back up and walked towards the exit. Upon opening the door, however, a bright light shined in his eyes. Upon opening them again, he found himself…

Back in his bedroom?

“Huh? Was it all… Just a dream?” He asked aloud. He looked around to find that everything was how he left it. The only things that were different was that he was naked, and there was a note on his desk. Asriel walked over to the note and read it.

Congratulations! You have escaped Desperation Dungeon! If ever wish to return for a slightly harder challenge, simply go to sleep while thinking about the dungeon. See you soon~

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