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"writing": "Sir Isaac Ray Pelham Westcott brings in a radio and his DEM army to the location at the school. Westscott then calls to Dustin, Tohka, Shido and the others to obtain their attention. \nThe gang are discussing plans to clear out the army that's been going after them when Kotori and Shido approach, begging for Dustin to help their group. Finally, Dustin insists that they stick to their together, and they must stay in cell contact. \nDustin instructs Shido and Korori to patrol the south end of the school to prevent them from being ambushed. Tohka tries to ingratiate herself with Dustin by offering to watch over his girlfriend Kurumi and there daughter Kurumine, Dustin agrees and thanks her. Meanwhile, Kurumi and Kurumine leave the safety of the classroom. \nAs Dustin and the others clear the yard of the army, Kurumi, Kurumine, and Tohka walk outside. The group notices as they are victorious at there job of clearing out the army, and Dustin and Kurumi share warm looks from a distance, causing Kurumi to blush a bit. However, the warm moment is interrupted as a group of Westscott's army suddenly flood the school with Westscott himself leading it. Violence erupts as Dustin, Shido, and Origami race to join the fight. Kotori and Yoshino lock themselves in the janitors closet while Tohka, Kurumi, and Kurumine flee into the classrooms. While resealing the army Kaguya and Yuzuru is attacked before they escaped and managed to flee to safety inside the school. \nIn the school yard, Shido reports that someone had let them in. When Ai Yamabuki, Mai Hazakura and Mii Fujibakama approach, Dustin accuses them. Just then, the school's fire alarm sounds, attracting the remaining army groups to there location. the three girls explains the alarms must be powering it — proving that someone else is messing with things from inside the school — and they all follow Dustin inside to disable them. \nWandering the school hallways, Kaguya and Yuzuru offers to \"do whatever's necessary\" to help to help the others, but they insists on guiding her back to the classroom before they are caught. Kurumi, Kurumine, and Tohka are also wandering when the stress of the situation causes Kurumi to get into a fight with Westscott. Kurumine tries to lead them into the gym. \nBack at the center of the school, Dustin, Origami, Shido, Ai, Mai and Mii separate into teams to look for the others and shut down the fire alarms. In the gym, Tohka assists Kurumi to leaving him alone and not to fight so she can come back to her love. Kurumine stares at them in confusion and horror. But as Kurumi looks back at the doors about to break down as he tries to get in the gym. \nKaguya and Yuzuru reach the classroom, but their path is blocked by two members of the army. Out of energy, Yuzuru looks to turn back, but Kaguya, knowing that she is not letting her get hurt, charges at them, pinning them against a wall, urging Yuzuru to keep going. She reaches the doors, but looks back in horror and sadness as the army members begin capturing Kaguya. \nDustin, Origami, and Shido reach the fire alarms, where they find a student— still alive and waiting to attack them, revealing that he lured the army here and caused the attack. As him and Dustin struggle, Origami then activates her AST armor and picks up her gun. The two men stop fighting and Origami aims her weapon at Dustin. The student urges her to shoot Dustin, but Origami changes her mind, and decides to shoot the student in the head instead, returning the pistol back to her side. Dustin powers down the fire alarms. \nIn the gym, Kurumi grows fearful to what he would do to her and Dustins child as Westcott continues to try to get in the gym. She realizes she will not survive the battle. Kurumi: \"I'm not losing my baby,\" she tells Tohka. \"You've got to get Kurumine out of here.\" Kurumi tearfully says goodbye to Kurumine, telling her that she is smart and strong, and that she has what it takes to survive this world with her father. \"Don't let the world hurt you,\" Kurumi says. \"You're the best thing I ever did.\" After kissing her daughters head she pushes Kurumine and Tohka out of the gym as Westcott breaks in. Kurumi starts to fight back but she eventually falls in combat with Westcott killing her. Tohka starts to leave with Kurumine when she stops her. Kurumine: \"We can't just leave her here....,\" Kurumine says. \"She's not gone....!\" Kurumine insists on that her mother can't be dead. Tohka pulls Kurumine into a hug as she tears up. Kurimine is walked out by Tohka as the two was crying. \nMeanwhile as Westscott retreats after killing Kurumi, the others Dustin, Shido, and Origami move through the school, taking out the last of Westcott's army, and discovering the struggle that the twins had. Shido then finds Yuzuru's scarf, and the three of them move outside, where they reunite with Kotori and Yoshino. As Dustin plans to go back and search for the rest of there friends, the cries of his daughter ring out. Tohka and Kurumine emerge with his daughter still crying over her mothers death. Dustin starts walking over to them, seeing his daughters tears made him know then something was wrong as he now tears up seeing that Kurumi is not with them. Dustin: \"W-Where is....where is she....?\" Tohka then tries to stop him as he started to walk to the gym. Tohka: \"N-No..Dustin....Dustin no.....\" She said in tears as she stopped him. Dustin then starts to cry, as his daughter was still doing over there loss. Dustin now starts crying out \"no\" as the death of his love hits him hard. Shido then walks to the crying girls as Tohka and Kurimine cry on Shido's shoulders. As Dustin continues to cry out over Kurumi's death he collapses in grief and sorrow as he sobs over the loss of his love and the mother of there daughter and the others look on in shock and sadness as he sobs over her death. \n\nEnd of Killer Within: A Tragic Loss",
"writing_bbcode_parsed": "Sir Isaac Ray Pelham Westcott brings in a radio and his DEM army to the location at the school. Westscott then calls to Dustin, Tohka, Shido and the others to obtain their attention.
The gang are discussing plans to clear out the army that's been going after them when Kotori and Shido approach, begging for Dustin to help their group. Finally, Dustin insists that they stick to their together, and they must stay in cell contact.
Dustin instructs Shido and Korori to patrol the south end of the school to prevent them from being ambushed. Tohka tries to ingratiate herself with Dustin by offering to watch over his girlfriend Kurumi and there daughter Kurumine, Dustin agrees and thanks her. Meanwhile, Kurumi and Kurumine leave the safety of the classroom.
As Dustin and the others clear the yard of the army, Kurumi, Kurumine, and Tohka walk outside. The group notices as they are victorious at there job of clearing out the army, and Dustin and Kurumi share warm looks from a distance, causing Kurumi to blush a bit. However, the warm moment is interrupted as a group of Westscott's army suddenly flood the school with Westscott himself leading it. Violence erupts as Dustin, Shido, and Origami race to join the fight. Kotori and Yoshino lock themselves in the janitors closet while Tohka, Kurumi, and Kurumine flee into the classrooms. While resealing the army Kaguya and Yuzuru is attacked before they escaped and managed to flee to safety inside the school.
In the school yard, Shido reports that someone had let them in. When Ai Yamabuki, Mai Hazakura and Mii Fujibakama approach, Dustin accuses them. Just then, the school's fire alarm sounds, attracting the remaining army groups to there location. the three girls explains the alarms must be powering it — proving that someone else is messing with things from inside the school — and they all follow Dustin inside to disable them.
Wandering the school hallways, Kaguya and Yuzuru offers to "do whatever's necessary" to help to help the others, but they insists on guiding her back to the classroom before they are caught. Kurumi, Kurumine, and Tohka are also wandering when the stress of the situation causes Kurumi to get into a fight with Westscott. Kurumine tries to lead them into the gym.
Back at the center of the school, Dustin, Origami, Shido, Ai, Mai and Mii separate into teams to look for the others and shut down the fire alarms. In the gym, Tohka assists Kurumi to leaving him alone and not to fight so she can come back to her love. Kurumine stares at them in confusion and horror. But as Kurumi looks back at the doors about to break down as he tries to get in the gym.
Kaguya and Yuzuru reach the classroom, but their path is blocked by two members of the army. Out of energy, Yuzuru looks to turn back, but Kaguya, knowing that she is not letting her get hurt, charges at them, pinning them against a wall, urging Yuzuru to keep going. She reaches the doors, but looks back in horror and sadness as the army members begin capturing Kaguya.
Dustin, Origami, and Shido reach the fire alarms, where they find a student— still alive and waiting to attack them, revealing that he lured the army here and caused the attack. As him and Dustin struggle, Origami then activates her AST armor and picks up her gun. The two men stop fighting and Origami aims her weapon at Dustin. The student urges her to shoot Dustin, but Origami changes her mind, and decides to shoot the student in the head instead, returning the pistol back to her side. Dustin powers down the fire alarms.
In the gym, Kurumi grows fearful to what he would do to her and Dustins child as Westcott continues to try to get in the gym. She realizes she will not survive the battle. Kurumi: "I'm not losing my baby," she tells Tohka. "You've got to get Kurumine out of here." Kurumi tearfully says goodbye to Kurumine, telling her that she is smart and strong, and that she has what it takes to survive this world with her father. "Don't let the world hurt you," Kurumi says. "You're the best thing I ever did." After kissing her daughters head she pushes Kurumine and Tohka out of the gym as Westcott breaks in. Kurumi starts to fight back but she eventually falls in combat with Westcott killing her. Tohka starts to leave with Kurumine when she stops her. Kurumine: "We can't just leave her here....," Kurumine says. "She's not gone....!" Kurumine insists on that her mother can't be dead. Tohka pulls Kurumine into a hug as she tears up. Kurimine is walked out by Tohka as the two was crying.
Meanwhile as Westscott retreats after killing Kurumi, the others Dustin, Shido, and Origami move through the school, taking out the last of Westcott's army, and discovering the struggle that the twins had. Shido then finds Yuzuru's scarf, and the three of them move outside, where they reunite with Kotori and Yoshino. As Dustin plans to go back and search for the rest of there friends, the cries of his daughter ring out. Tohka and Kurumine emerge with his daughter still crying over her mothers death. Dustin starts walking over to them, seeing his daughters tears made him know then something was wrong as he now tears up seeing that Kurumi is not with them. Dustin: "W-Where is....where is she....?" Tohka then tries to stop him as he started to walk to the gym. Tohka: "N-No..Dustin....Dustin no....." She said in tears as she stopped him. Dustin then starts to cry, as his daughter was still doing over there loss. Dustin now starts crying out "no" as the death of his love hits him hard. Shido then walks to the crying girls as Tohka and Kurimine cry on Shido's shoulders. As Dustin continues to cry out over Kurumi's death he collapses in grief and sorrow as he sobs over the loss of his love and the mother of there daughter and the others look on in shock and sadness as he sobs over her death.
End of Killer Within: A Tragic Loss",
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