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This was my entry, with my characters Hans and Heidi Bernerholdt going out on a double date with Edward and Edna Foxx, from the comic. Hans and Heidi, who already have an incestuous relationship themselves, have decided to give Edna a little help in trapping her big brother.\n\n===\n\nI didn't win, but I did draw this one-panel comic to illustrate the end of the story:\n\nhttps://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=45257", "description_bbcode_parsed": "In December 2010, the Palcomix web forums had a contest, to script a 2-page web comic, featuring characters from Krezz Karavan's "School Days" comic, and any of our own original characters.

For those unfamiliar with School Days, Edna has a crush on her big brother, and wants to have sex with him, Edward has, so far, fled from her advances. This was my entry, with my characters Hans and Heidi Bernerholdt going out on a double date with Edward and Edna Foxx, from the comic. Hans and Heidi, who already have an incestuous relationship themselves, have decided to give Edna a little help in trapping her big brother.

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I didn't win, but I did draw this one-panel comic to illustrate the end of the story:

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PAGE 1

panel 1: Hans Bernerholdt and Edward Foxx are walking on a sidewalk, past several Christmas display store windows. Edward has a winter coat on, but Hans is just wearing a short sleeved shirt, despite the snow around them.

Hans: "Have you got your sister's Christmas gift yet?"

Edward: "No, I'm stuck on what to get her. How about you?"


panel 2: Hans and Edward, stopped in front of the store window.

Hans: "Well, I have an idea for Heidi, and one for Edna, too. But I'll need your help."

Edward (looks dubious) : "Ummm, what sort of an idea?"


panel 3:

Hans (smiling): "Well, Heidi likes you, and I like Edna. We could take them on a double date!"

Edward (frowns): "I dunno... Heidi's fun, but I don't like to watch Edna making out."


panel 4: Starting to walk again, with Hans taking Edward by the upper arm.

Hans: "I've got that covered. Trust, me, you'll love it!"

Edward (looks doubtful): "Well, okay... I guess."


PAGE 2

panel 1: Hans and Edna are walking arm in arm, with Edward and Heidi following, as they leave a restaurant. All are smiling, and the girls are leaning lovingly against their guys. Several trees along the sidewalk are decorated for Christmas.

Edna: That was a great dinner, Hans! What's next?"

Hans (smiling): We go to my place for some fun time."

Edward: "Uh oh..."


panel 2: In Hans bedroom, beside a large bed. All but Edward are naked.

Edward: "Hans? I told you..."

Heidi (handing Edward a blindfold): "Here Edward! Put this on, get undressed, and lay on the bed.".

Hans: "See? You won't have to watch Edna and myself. Heidi wants to give you a BJ, while you're blindfolded."


panel 3: Edward has undressed. Hans and Edna are standing and cuddling beside the bed, as Heidi finishes tying Edward to the bed, on his back and spread-eagled, while wearing the blindfold. Edward looks worried.

Hans: "Just relax and enjoy the ride, Ed. It's really exciting when you can't see or touch your partner."

Edward: "Oh, all right, if it makes Heidi happy."


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Hans: "Well? How are you enjoying Heidi's 'BJ Surprise', Ed?"

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