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hope you enjoy :D", "writing": "Night falls and I am tired and weary of the days work. I had been down in the square helping rebuild a home for a rescue team. Of course the task was merely amplified by the fact we had to fashion it to an Axews head. Me, a Timburr, worked with a group of the same lead by Gurdurr.\n\nBecause of the huge task I have had no time to socialise, only time to eat, drink and rest for a meagre 5 minutes to catch my breath, as the heat of the day was unforgiving to us all. Progress remained slow because of this, and is the reason only half of that damned dragon face stuck out of the ground.\n\nAfter being dismissed I immediately pick up my large wooden log, swing it over my shoulder. Place some tools into my belt pockets around my waist, and head home. It appeared as though the night was being kind to me as a soft, calm breeze blows over my sweaty body as I walked under the purple sky. Luckily the walk home was long and in the open, my house being right at the end of street. Where me and my other half live\n.\nWhilst enjoying the cool breeze, I can't help but think about him, my other half I mean. A rather handsome Mienfoo. He recently got recruited for one of those rescue teams. The same one as the damned house I am building. But I do not complain about this. It brings money to the house, so I cannot complain. It even pays out better that my work. I still find it annoying how often he is out though, it has only been 2 weeks since his recruitment, and I have only seen him come in at night 3 times. I think about how I probably wont see him again tonight. I will only wake up to him passed out on the sofa not being able to make it to the bed. As usual.\n\nSuddenly the cool air becomes cold and bitter as the moon makes its full appearance in the now bluey black sky. My pace becomes a slow jog. The weight of the log now making my shoulder ache. When I reach for the handle to my door, it is locked. An indication of an empty house. I sigh and reach for one of my belt pockets to retrieve the key and unlock the door. I call for a second check, But still no answer. I began to feel anger boil up inside me. What possible things is that Axew putting his team through that takes so long? I slam my log down near the door uncaring for where it fell. I sling off my belt onto the dining table and headed straight for the bathroom, where a long awaited shower is there for me. The warm water that falls is soothing on my now cold skin. It is strange to think that only moments ago I would have invited the cold. I quickly scrub off the days work and freshened myself up for the night, perhaps hoping he would return. But instead I find myself eating alone and watching the usual crap on the TV. \n \nSuddenly it is 10:30pm. I finally realise that I am actually really tired. I stumble from the sofa to my bedroom. I step into my bed and pull the sheet over me and roll to my side. I do not sleep though. I am unsettled. For some reason the emptiness of the bed makes me uncomfortable. It has been about a week since I last shared the bed with him. I miss his warm embrace. His touch. I know I should be sleeping because I know I am exhausted, but know my mind is wandering. Back to the the last time I felt his touch. How he lay me down and treated me with such compassion and love.\nMy mind stayed in this memory and I found my hand begin to wander under the sheets. I stroke softly at my hardening shaft. I lay flat on my back holding my fully erect cock, my strokes becoming faster. I close my eyes try to relive that night. It was not our first, but it was something special. It was the night he got promoted to vice captain of the group. So we celebrated in our own way. I let slip some deliberate moans to intensify the moment, my other hand is gripped to the bed. \nI kicked away my sheets to the end of my bed to relieve the heat of the sheets, continuing to jerk myself off. * click *\nI stop at the sudden noise. But I couldn't help but grin. What perfect timing, I think to myself. Feeling suddenly a whole lot better now. He quietly shuts the door and comes to the bedroom door. Too full of lust I do not think to hide my raging erection from him as he enters. In fact it appears to have propped up abit more upon sight of him. “You're home early” I say, with a grinning hard. He is shocked and lost for words, but he is not complaining. I can tell from a small tent rising underneath his fur and the pink blush spread across his face. “Timburr. I er...” I pat the empty space next to me, inviting him. How could he refuse? With no words he lies next to me and greet me with how mouth to mine. They immediately open for each other allowing full entrance. This is what I missed. Intimacy.\n \nMienfoo was the first to act and took hold of my cock with his soft paws and rolled his forefinger on my tip. The smoothness of his fur feels so unbearably good that I break the kiss, gasping from from the sudden treatment. I reach for his aswell which was pitching a now rather large tent under his loose fur. I lifted the fur to reveal a 6 inch member from hiding.I didn't have the same length as Mienfoo I lacked an inch off him, but I give back in girth, I guess you could say am compensating a little , what with carrying around that log everywhere.\n I immediately go for timing my strokes to his on mine. We kiss again wrapping our tongues together in deep lust. I break the kiss again when I notice he has stopped his hand movement. I look down at his hand when he removes his thumb and a strand of pre-cum follows. \n“You're close already? We've just started.” he says.\n “Well I got a head start hun” I reply cockily. He rubs my tip again with his thumb to reveal more pre leaking out. “Wanna taste?” I ask him.\n He nods with enthusiasm removing my hand, moving to my front. He keeps hold of my cock and strokes it slowly as he massages my balls with his other. He moves his head further down my body until he meets with my throbbing cock. He frees both his hands, and places them at the base of my cock. And lightly kisses the head..He looks up at me with a devious smile and places his mouth over my tip and sucks lightly, using his tongue to circle it like he did his forefinger. I shiver from the pleasuring I am receiving and I am gripping the bed hard.\n Mienfoo then went down more on my cock and began a bobbing motion, now using one hand to pump it aswell. God this felt good. I looked down at him treasuring every moment of this. Treating it as if he would never be able to suck me off again. \nBut I know he will. \nI am moaning now as I come close to a climax. His smooth tongue massaging my length with every bob of his head. It was too much. I reach out for his head. But before I can he stops, his breathing heavier. “you close Timburr??” I nod biting my lip. Unable to think straight I reach out and push his head down onto my full length. He is taken by suprise of this but I know he can take it. Mienfoo proves me to be right by sucking quite hard on me. This is it. I can't hold out much longer. I grab his head and begin to buck into his mouth releasing hot strings of cum down his throat. He pulls off gasping for air and swallows hard. A few final laps of my tip, And he comes crawling up to meet me again. I kiss him on the forehead in appreciation.\n\nHe snuggles in closer to me and draws attention to his throbbing member now. But I do nothing. I put my arms around him and settle to sleep. I hear him being shocked and frustrated at me. But I know I have my reasons. I am just making him suffer. He made me wait.\n\nSo I am going to make him wait just that little but longer", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Night falls and I am tired and weary of the days work. I had been down in the square helping rebuild a home for a rescue team. Of course the task was merely amplified by the fact we had to fashion it to an Axews head. Me, a Timburr, worked with a group of the same lead by Gurdurr.

Because of the huge task I have had no time to socialise, only time to eat, drink and rest for a meagre 5 minutes to catch my breath, as the heat of the day was unforgiving to us all. Progress remained slow because of this, and is the reason only half of that damned dragon face stuck out of the ground.

After being dismissed I immediately pick up my large wooden log, swing it over my shoulder. Place some tools into my belt pockets around my waist, and head home. It appeared as though the night was being kind to me as a soft, calm breeze blows over my sweaty body as I walked under the purple sky. Luckily the walk home was long and in the open, my house being right at the end of street. Where me and my other half live
.
Whilst enjoying the cool breeze, I can't help but think about him, my other half I mean. A rather handsome Mienfoo. He recently got recruited for one of those rescue teams. The same one as the damned house I am building. But I do not complain about this. It brings money to the house, so I cannot complain. It even pays out better that my work. I still find it annoying how often he is out though, it has only been 2 weeks since his recruitment, and I have only seen him come in at night 3 times. I think about how I probably wont see him again tonight. I will only wake up to him passed out on the sofa not being able to make it to the bed. As usual.

Suddenly the cool air becomes cold and bitter as the moon makes its full appearance in the now bluey black sky. My pace becomes a slow jog. The weight of the log now making my shoulder ache. When I reach for the handle to my door, it is locked. An indication of an empty house. I sigh and reach for one of my belt pockets to retrieve the key and unlock the door. I call for a second check, But still no answer. I began to feel anger boil  up inside me. What possible things is that Axew putting his team through that takes so long? I slam my log down near the door uncaring for where it fell. I sling off my belt onto the dining table and headed straight for the bathroom, where a long awaited shower is there for me. The warm water that falls is soothing on my now cold skin. It  is strange to think that only moments ago I would have invited the cold. I quickly scrub off the days work and freshened myself up for the night, perhaps hoping he would return. But instead I find myself eating alone and watching the usual crap on the TV.
 
Suddenly it is 10:30pm. I finally realise that I am actually really tired. I stumble from the sofa to my bedroom. I step into my bed and pull the sheet over me and roll to my side. I do not sleep though. I am unsettled. For some reason the emptiness of the bed makes me uncomfortable. It has been about a week since I last shared the bed with him. I miss his warm embrace. His touch. I know I should be sleeping because I know I am exhausted, but know my mind is wandering. Back to the the last time I felt his touch. How he lay me down and treated me with such compassion and love.
My mind stayed in this memory and I found my hand begin to wander under the sheets. I stroke softly at my hardening shaft. I lay flat on my back holding my fully erect cock, my strokes becoming faster. I close my eyes try to relive that night. It was not our first, but it was something special. It was the night he got promoted to vice captain of the group. So we celebrated in our own way. I let slip some deliberate moans to intensify the moment, my other hand is gripped to the bed.
I kicked away my sheets to the end of my bed to relieve the heat of the sheets, continuing to jerk myself off. * click *
I stop at the sudden noise. But I couldn't help but grin. What perfect timing,  I think to myself. Feeling suddenly a whole lot better now. He quietly shuts the door and comes to the bedroom door. Too full of lust I do not think to hide my raging erection from him as he enters. In fact it appears to have propped up abit more upon sight of him. “You're home early” I say, with a grinning hard. He is shocked and lost for words, but he is not complaining. I can tell from a small tent rising underneath his fur and the pink blush spread across his face. “Timburr. I er...”  I pat the empty space next to me, inviting him. How could he refuse? With no words he lies next to me and greet me with how mouth to mine. They immediately open for each other allowing full entrance. This is what I missed. Intimacy.
 
Mienfoo was the first to act and took hold of my cock with his soft paws and rolled his forefinger on my tip. The smoothness of his fur feels so unbearably good that I break the kiss, gasping from from the sudden treatment. I reach for his aswell which was pitching a now rather large tent under his loose fur. I lifted the fur to reveal a 6 inch member from hiding.I didn't have the same length as Mienfoo I lacked an  inch off him, but I give back in girth, I guess you could say am compensating a little , what with carrying around that log everywhere.
 I immediately go for timing my strokes to his on mine. We kiss again wrapping our tongues together in deep lust. I break the kiss again when I notice he has stopped his hand movement. I look down at his hand when he removes his thumb and a strand of pre-cum follows.
“You're close already? We've just started.” he says.
 “Well I got a head start hun” I reply cockily. He rubs my tip again with his thumb to reveal more pre leaking out. “Wanna taste?” I ask him.
 He nods with enthusiasm removing my hand, moving to my front. He keeps hold of my cock and strokes it slowly as he massages my balls with his other. He moves his head further down my body until he meets with my throbbing cock. He frees both his hands, and places them at the base of my cock. And lightly kisses the head..He looks up at me with a devious smile and places his mouth over my tip and sucks lightly, using his tongue to circle it like he did his forefinger. I shiver from the pleasuring I am receiving and I am gripping the bed hard.
 Mienfoo then went down more on my cock and began a bobbing motion, now using one hand to pump it aswell. God this felt good.  I looked down at him treasuring every moment of this. Treating it as if he would never be able to suck me off again.
But I know he will.
I am moaning now as I come close to a climax. His smooth tongue massaging my length with every bob of his head. It was too much. I reach out for his head. But before I can he stops, his breathing heavier. “you close Timburr??” I nod biting my lip. Unable to think straight I reach out and push his head down onto my full length. He is taken by suprise of this but I know he can take it. Mienfoo proves me to be right by sucking quite hard on me. This is it. I can't hold out much longer. I grab his head and begin to buck into his mouth releasing hot strings of cum down his throat. He pulls off gasping for air and swallows hard. A few final laps of my tip, And he comes crawling up to meet me again. I kiss him on the forehead in appreciation.

He snuggles in closer to me and draws attention to his throbbing member now. But I do nothing. I put my arms around him and settle to sleep. I hear him being shocked and frustrated at me. But I know I have my reasons. I am just making him suffer. He made me wait.

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