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Feldon and a couple of Kobolds.", "writing": "Feldon Comic\n\nStarring:\nFeldon--Orange-furred squirrel mage/telepath, wearing no clothing.\nEr-Rawr--Aggressive Red skinned Kobold thief, wearing a loincloth. \nNibbly--Shy Blue skinned Kobold thief, bottomless with a shirt.\n\nsee Erol Otus classic D&D depiction of a kobold.\n\nSetting: \nFantasy, a wizard's chamber--a simple wooden bed, blankets, pillows. Walls are adorned with shelves which contain tomes, skulls, candles, bottles and scrolls.\n\nPanel 1\nTwo kobolds pop up from beneath the floorboards, looking to steal valuable objects.\n\nPanel 2\nTheir eyes land upon a magic, jewel encrusted wand (that should look suspiciously phallic, two large pink rubies at the base, a large heart-shaped amethyst at the top.)\n\nPanel 3\nEr-Rawr goes to reach out for the wand, but before he can grasp it, he is hauled out of frame.\n\nPanel 4\nFeldon, sitting naked on his bed, is now holding the struggling kobold, a paw is now down the kobold's loincloth.\n\nFeldon: \"Ooo... what have we here?\"\nEr-Rawr: \"Gerroff! Leggo!\"\nNibbly: \"We are kobold warriors.\"\n\nPanel 5\nFeldon lets the kobold go, leans back sensuously on the bed. His eyes are green and spirally as he hypnotizes Er-Rawr.\n\nFeldon: \"You're after my ass aren't you?\"\n\nPanel 6\nShows a pot or bottle marked 'Oil of Slipperiness'\n\nFeldon (off frame): \"Well whatever you do, don't use that Oil to make pounding my ass easier and fun!\"\n\nPanel 7\nFlopping on the bed, Feldon is hugging a pillow tight, rear up, tail raised. Er-Rawr meanwhile is grinning evilly and applying the oil to himself. Nibbly is watching all of this blushing, shuffling his feet.\n\nFeldon: \"You brutes!\"\nPanel 8\nEr-Rawr mounts Feldon, we see Feldon's reaction as a mix of wincing and enjoyment. Feldon should have a drop of pre coming off of his member.\nAfter a couple of panels of Er-Rawr having sex with Feldon we find that Nibbly wants in on the action. \n\nNibbly (bashfully): \"C-can I has turn?\"\nEr-Rawr (angrily): \"No! This is Er-Rawr's ass!\"\n\nThree Panel sequence\nClose up of Nibbly's sad face.\n\nNibbly: \"...\"\n\nNibbly holds up the phallic wand. Considering.\nNibbly making a face as if he's stuffing the wand up his own ass (though we don't see it). Lot's of blushing, upturned lip, perhaps a sweat drip.\n\nPanel 9\nEr-Rawr finishes up with Feldon. We see cum coming out of Feldon's ass; just a single thick dollop (I don't like seeing cum smeared all over a fur's ass).\n\nPanel 10\nEr-Rawr snatching the jewelled wand from Nibbly, laughing maniacally and heading toward the open floorboard. Feldon is now sitting up on the bed, looking amused at the kobold's antics, lighting up a long-stem smoking pipe. Nibbly looks taken aback as the wand is snatched from his paws.\n\nEr-Rawr: \"C'ya losers!\"\n\nPanel 11\nAfter Er-Rawr is gone, Feldon is left smoking his pipe and regarding the lone kobold Nibbly. \n\nFeldon: \"So. How about round two?\"\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Feldon Comic

Starring:
Feldon--Orange-furred squirrel mage/telepath, wearing no clothing.
Er-Rawr--Aggressive Red skinned Kobold thief, wearing a loincloth.  
Nibbly--Shy Blue skinned Kobold thief, bottomless with a shirt.

see Erol Otus classic D&D depiction of a kobold.

Setting:  
Fantasy, a wizard's chamber--a simple wooden bed, blankets, pillows.  Walls are adorned with shelves which contain tomes, skulls, candles, bottles and scrolls.

Panel 1
Two kobolds pop up from beneath the floorboards, looking to steal valuable objects.

Panel 2
Their eyes land upon a magic, jewel encrusted wand (that should look suspiciously phallic, two large pink rubies at the base, a large heart-shaped amethyst at the top.)

Panel 3
Er-Rawr goes to reach out for the wand, but before he can grasp it, he is hauled out of frame.

Panel 4
Feldon, sitting naked on his bed, is now holding the struggling kobold, a paw is now down the kobold's loincloth.

Feldon:  "Ooo... what have we here?"
Er-Rawr:  "Gerroff! Leggo!"
Nibbly:  "We are kobold warriors."

Panel 5
Feldon lets the kobold go, leans back sensuously on the bed. His eyes are green and spirally as he hypnotizes Er-Rawr.

Feldon:  "You're after my ass aren't you?"

Panel 6
Shows a pot or bottle marked 'Oil of Slipperiness'

Feldon (off frame):  "Well whatever you do, don't use that Oil to make pounding my ass easier and fun!"

Panel 7
Flopping on the bed, Feldon is hugging a pillow tight, rear up, tail raised.  Er-Rawr meanwhile is grinning evilly and applying the oil to himself.  Nibbly is watching all of this blushing, shuffling his feet.

Feldon:  "You brutes!"
Panel 8
Er-Rawr mounts Feldon, we see Feldon's reaction as a mix of wincing and enjoyment.  Feldon should have a drop of pre coming off of his member.
After a couple of panels of Er-Rawr having sex with Feldon we find that Nibbly wants in on the action.

Nibbly (bashfully):  "C-can I has turn?"
Er-Rawr (angrily):  "No!  This is Er-Rawr's ass!"

Three Panel sequence
Close up of Nibbly's sad face.

Nibbly:  "..."

Nibbly holds up the phallic wand.  Considering.
Nibbly making a face as if he's stuffing the wand up his own ass (though we don't see it).  Lot's of blushing, upturned lip, perhaps a sweat drip.

Panel 9
Er-Rawr finishes up with Feldon.  We see cum coming out of Feldon's ass; just a single thick dollop (I don't like seeing cum smeared all over a fur's ass).

Panel 10
Er-Rawr snatching the jewelled wand from Nibbly, laughing maniacally and heading toward the open floorboard.  Feldon is now sitting up on the bed, looking amused at the kobold's antics, lighting up a long-stem smoking pipe.  Nibbly looks taken aback as the wand is snatched from his paws.

Er-Rawr:  "C'ya losers!"

Panel 11
After Er-Rawr is gone, Feldon is left smoking his pipe and regarding the lone kobold Nibbly.  

Feldon:  "So.  How about round two?"
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