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This story was once on the Palcomix Forum on the School Days Thread. Since the PalComix Forum is no more, I'm putting it here.", "writing": "Chapter 29: One More Saturday… pt2: Jorge, The Girls and The Mall\n\nFrom the train station it was a long way to the park and later the mall across the street from it. Furthermore Jorge was not familiar with this end of the park though the map at the entrance said this was the place. He just kept looking at the ‘mountain’, knowing the that lake would on the other side.\n\n“Its around this way.”, Jorge says. They don’t argue as they follow him. Some ten minutes later they can see the lake as they finally pass around the mountain. Another few minutes and they end up at the opposite side of the shore of the lake from where he was used too. But there he can do something he is supposed to do, though this meant letting go of Francis’ hand. With a kiss and an explanation, she allows him to let her go.\n\nHe walks over to the edge. Putting his hand into his pocket, he removes the spare magazine. Unloading each and every bullet, 7 in total, he throws the bullets into the water, followed by the magazine. He does this again with the magazine inside the gun, and the one bullet loaded in the chamber. Undoing the Safety catch, pulling back on the hammer, he holds onto slide and frame, giving it a good pull until the gun goes to pieces in his hand. Each large piece of the weapon goes into a different direction of the each other, and the smaller pieces into the lake. Mary sheds a tear as if she lost a friend. He turns to face her and steps to her direction.\n\n“Any gun you bring to Pouncefield will be treated the same way.”, he tells her. He walks away and takes Francis’ hand and walks back to the others. “I don’t know why Fernando trusts you, but I don’t. This black squirrel against all the other squirrels gang war ends. And if I find out that any of your friends were responsible for the Mendez Boy’s killing, I will gather those of us who remain and we will start taking out families, starting with yours first.”\n\n“You would not dare.”, Mary tells him. Jorge takes his gun from his hidden holster and places it to her temple.\n\n“Poucefield is not like New York. Here I can carry legally and not worry about arrest. Everybody here carries, so calling the cops and say I got a gun, and they will laugh at you. But you better understand this much; Where Fernando is smart and intelligent, I’m down right crazy. Unlike he has to think before taking action and caring about others like you about getting hurt, I don’t give a fuck. So try me. Your friends killed too many of my friends to not care anymore.”, he explains. Then the gun goes CLACK!\n\n“Damn it. The safety is still on.”, Jorge says to himself as he looks at his gun. He does not care that Mary has fainted while the other girls still holding her up. He then looks at her and them. “Just put that bitch on the floor.”\n\n“How are we going to wake her up?”, Rachel asks as they put her down. The park breeze occasionally blows by, lifting Mary’s skirt to show the light blue panties she is wearing.\n\n“Maybe I’ll piss on her face or something…”, Jorge says, putting his hands on his zipper.\n\n“JORGE!!!”, they all yell at him, especially Francis who’s hand was pressed up against his groin.\n\n“Alright, just smack her one good, she’ll wake up.”, he tells them.\n\n“I’m not going to smack her.”, Grace says.\n\n“I’m not going to smack her either.”, Rachel adds.\n\nFrancis shakes her head.\n\n“Alright. Lets pull down her panties and rough up her clothing and leave her behind the bushes so I can have my way with her to teach her a lesson.”, Jorge tells them.\n\n“Hell No!!!”, they all say together.\n\n“She’s been with 8 gang bangers in the last 2 weeks… who knows what the fuck infection she maybe carrying right now.”, Rachel tells him.\n\n“I don’t care if you’re teaching her sex ed. You touch her, you aint touching me!”, Francis tells him.\n\n“Aren’t I allowed a squirrel girl harem?”, Jorge tries to ask innocently.\n\n“She aint going to be part of that!”, Francis tells him.\n\n“Besides, isn’t Fernando the Alpha of the family? That limits you to 2, maybe 3 girls at the most to his 10 or more until you become 16 years old.”, Rachel tells him.\n\n“He don’t have that many girlfriends… besides, you girls need to talk to him about some gang bitch he’s chasing by the name of Lucy. She’s nothing but trouble.”, he explains.\n\nThey all gasp at what he said. “Wait a minute. Isn’t Cathy taking care of him like I told her to so?”, Rachel says and asks.\n\n“Take care? Rachel is taking care of him. He and Cathy fight all the time. And now she brought in her twin sister.”, Jorge answers.\n\n“Twin sister?”, Rachel and Grace asks together.\n\n“Yes, she has a twin sister. And she’s a bigger stuck up bitch than Cathy ever was.”, he explains. “But enough of them. We got lunch, a movie and a mall to hit and sleeping ugly aint helping matters.”\n\n“Alright, I’ll smack her.”, Rachel says as she kneels down next to her.\n\nJorge stands right at her feet, aiming his gun at her. Rachel gives her a hard slap that makes Mary move her head about on her neck. Mary wakes up angry.\n\n“Who the fuc-*!”, Mary begins to say but is interrupted.\n\n“It was either that or I pissed on your face.”, Jorge tells her. “Now get up. And don’t think I did something to you, they would not let me and Fernando would not approve. So thank them later on.”\n\n“Hmph…”, Mary says to herself as she got up. Rachel got up right behind her.\n\n“Now, what do you girls want to eat?”, Jorge asks.\n\n“I’m not hungry.”, Mary blurts out.\n\n“Look, Mary. I don’t care if I have pin you down to a table and shove a burger down your throat, you are eating.”, Jorge tells her.\n\n“What is there to eat?”, Jeanie asks.\n\n“Fast Foods, Cheap Asian, Meat on a Stick, stuff like that at the mall or sit down place like Gracies on 86th street back in New York- a place called Sonia & Bart’s but they are further down the road. They have not moved to the Mall yet.”, Jorge answers.\n\n“How much of a walk?”, Rachel asks.\n\n“Other end of the park and another block after that.”, Jorge answers.\n\n“I can walk.”, Grace says.\n\n“Then a Movie after that?”, Francis throws in.\n\n“Maybe, yeah. Depends on how much money I got left.”, Jorge answers.\n\n“Don’t worry about that. We got money too.”, Grace says.\n\n“I have no money.”, Mary says to herself.\n\nThe girls look at her. “Figures…”, Jorge says almost to himself. They give him a quick glance before returning to Mary.\n\n“Don’t worry about.”, Grace tells her.\n\n“But…”, Mary started to say.\n\n“Look. We will help you if you are willing to end the gang war.”, Rachel says.\n\n“I have no control over that.”, Mary says.\n\n“You joined it. You became part of that. You have some say in what happens.”, Jorge tells her.\n\n“No I don’t.”, Mary tells him. “Orders comes from higher up. Who gets killed, who gets to kill. What drugs are sold where, which old lady gets robbed and hurt, who gets to have sex from me and when. I have no choice but to do.”, Mary explains, trying not to break down to prove she was harder than that.\n\n“You have a choice.”, Jorge tells her. “You could have left that a long time ago.”\n\nMary gives him a long hard stare.\n\n“What? Just because my fur color is different from yours that I don’t know any better? That I am so different from you that I don’t know? We are all in gangs because of this, to protect ourselves from the likes of you. Now Listen- Fernando is a flying squirrel, very different from everything all of us here are. But yet you want him? He would know less of your world than I ever would. He’s not black, white, grey or red, he’s beige. So he don’t even fit into the color thing. So what the fuck Mary! You’re a gang hoe, what do you want with my bro?”, Jorge tells her.\n\n“You would not understand.”, Mary tells him.\n\n“I live with Fernando. I had to UNDERSTAND things because I have no other choice. So try me.”, Jorge throws back at her.\n\n“Alright. It started in Preschool, in Ms Carmen’s class. When Fernando came in for the first day, I shared my crayons with him and then that grey squirrel bitch took my crayons and took him to the other side of the room!”, Mary explains.\n\n“All this crap for that?!!”, Jorge roars at her. “Rosita’s been dead for almost 5 years now!”\n\n“I Fell in Love With Your Brother On That Day! And That Bitch Took Him Away From Me!”, Mary yells back at him.\n\n“And I Like Said, She’s Been Dead For Five Years ! You Could Have Taken Him Then!”, Jorge yells back at her.\n\n“I would not allow it.”, Grace says, breaking the flow between them.\n\n“Neither would I.”, Rachel adds.\n\n“And Why Not?!!”, Jorge throws at them.\n\n“Because Mary was already in the gang by then, and she was starting shit with us girls before it spread to you boys.”, Rachel explains.\n\n“What have you stupid bitches done?!!”, Jorge yells at them.\n\n“I aint no stupid bitch…”, Rachel confronts him.\n\n“Don’t You See? Damn Yous! Damn Yous All!”, Jorge says out loud.\n\n“See what?”, Jeanie asks.\n\n“You wont see it because you’re a mouse, but really. When girls fight, they don’t try to kill each other, boys do. In moving the gang war from the girls to the boys, started this boy-killing gang shit… Don’t You see it- You Bitches Started All This!”, Jorge explains out loud.\n\nThey look at each other for a moment. Only Jeanie speaks out, “Thank god I’m not a squirrel.”\n\n“You think that is going to stop from getting your kind from getting hurt? Don’t you see the Tungs, the Triads, and the White Dragons moving into position to protect their own? You might be an outsider, Jeanie, but you are in it as deep as they all are!”, Jorge tells him. He pauses for a moment. “Damn it, I swear.” He pauses again. “Lets go.”\n\nHe walks around the lake, the girls following him. Another 10 minutes to walk around the lake, they make it out of the park with Sonia & Bart’s Restaurant within view a little more than a block and half away as they pass by the pool. He holds the door for them when they get there. The girls take a booth by the windows on the right side as they entered. They study the menus the find on the table.\n\nThe girls order a super-sized order of fries to share. Most have ordered a burger of some kind along with a soda to drink, except for Jeanie who orders a cheese club sandwich. Jorge gets a burger and a coke with no fries. They talk about the place and Pouncefield in general as they ate. Jorge complains on how quiet the Pouncefield is, with this restaurant being the biggest center of activity and it closes around midnight. He also talks about the general lack of excitement of the community, with little to do. At least in New York, one can go anywhere at anytime. Nonetheless the girls would not mind moving here to be with them, and for one to leave the craziness of New York and its gang war. For Mary it would mean a reprieve from such the lifestyle she has been in. Even though there were six more empty yet very affordable houses that were just built on the block they live on, most adults fear the lack of jobs or the long commute to New York to work but such beliefs are not warranted as there many available jobs in Pouncefield and there is a special commuter express that runs from 6 – 8AM and 5:30-7:30PM to and from New York. \n\nFor dessert, the girls had ice cream, except for Jeanie who had a slice of cheese cake. It was strange that the girls have been treating Mary as if she was part of the group since the beginning, even though she was, she always been a detriment to the group. But now it seems as if amends have been made by both sides. Fernando as a subject was not touched during their conversations, only the stuff that has been happening in New York and despite the skewed make to female squirrel birthrates, the killing of the few males that are there is making the difference even larger. Despite how integrated an species rich a school might be in New York, if there was at least 1 male squirrel in the school yard during recess, all the female squirrels would flock to him. In their school there was at least 15 male squirrels. With the removal of Fernando and Jorge by their grandmother, and the murder of the Mendez boys, this one school has to deal with a lowered male population and every squirrel girl attending will be taking to those who remain. The girls who snuck out to Pouncefield want no part of that. Even Mary, one of the several female members of the Black Spades of Harlem gang, knows that for her to retain her position and power in the gang will have to drop her panties more often. With Fernando in Pouncefield, this option for her has now become a moot point.\n\nWith the bill paid, Jorge and the girls leave for the mall. Getting there only took a couple of minutes of walking along the park until they arrive at the mall area. The outside is not too impressive, with a similar appearance of the Co-Op City all, a large block of concrete with large windows on the first couple of floors. On the inside, they find the place like the Mid-Manhattan mall, with four sets escalators on the middle of a large promenade area. Between them two sets of dual elevators. Around them are various stores and restaurants. Jorge continues up the nearest escalators. Some four escalators later, they end up on the theater level.\n\n“They just opened up so, what do you want to see?”, Jorge tells them. “Eight theaters and screens, with six different movies. Which one?”\n\nNext hour and a 1/2, they spend their time watching ‘The Last Airbender’ in theater #3, managing to catch it on time. While Mary was forced to sit between Grace and Rachel, Jeanie was getting a bit uncomfortable as she sat by Jorge and Francis, who were too busy feeling each other up and making out for much of the movie.\n\nEven the lights turned on at the end of the credits, Jorge had one hand up Francis’ skirt and the other inside her t-shirt, feeling her up as he smothered her with kisses, as she had his dick out and was pumping it vigorously as if she owned it. A smack goes across the backs of their heads from behind, waking them up out of their limited love-fest.\n\n“I knew I should have sat between you two.”, Rachel scowls at them from above.\n\n“We were doing nothing!”, Jorge says, as he always does when he is caught doing something.\n\n“Sure you didn’t. Now get your grubby hands out of my sister’s clothes. And you Francis, what were you going to do, do him right then and there?”, Rachel says, pointing to her sister’s hand and what was inside.\n\n“You never let me have any fun! I swear!”, Francis complains, slowly letting go of Jorge’s member.\n\n“You want to have fun? Not when I’m around. And later on you can tell mom that Jorge got you preggo too because you two did not use birth control.”, Rachel scolds her.\n\n“Let them learn, Rachel.”, Grace tells her.\n\n“Simple for you to say, she’s not your sister.”, Rachel throws back at her. “Not only do I have to watch out for my own pussy, I have to watch her too cause she aint watching it herself like she’s supposed too!”\n\n“Doesn’t matter. Its her pussy…” Mary says to herself, but a bit too loudly to be heard. Rachel just turns to face her, almost wanting to growl at her.\n\n“Alright lets go. Its getting late for you girls to get home anyways.”, Jorge says as he fixes his pants.\n\n“Its that late already?”, Grace asks.\n\n“Its about 3o’clock. By the time we get to the train station and you get on the train, you should be getting home at around 7.”, Jorge says.\n\n“That is if we take the local. The express takes 2 hours.”, Mary answers.\n\n“How you know that?”, Grace asks.\n\n“My father works for Am-Track.”, Mary answers.\n\n“Yeah, but we have local train tickets.”, Jeanie says.\n\n“Don’t worry about that. If we were adults, they would get on our case. But as squirrel puppies, we can get away with local tickets on the express train.”, Mary explains.\n\nAnother 5 minutes of discussing trains and schedules, the movie theater crew throws them out to clean up the mess from the audience before. Another light snack from the concession stands and they walk their way back to the train station, making it at 3:47PM. The train arrives early at 3:50PM, Francis needed to be pulled off Jorge for them to get on. It was held another twelve minutes before it leaves the station. Jorge takes that long lone walk home.\n\n- End of: One More Saturday… pt2: Jorge, The Girls and The Mall -", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Chapter 29: One More Saturday… pt2: Jorge, The Girls and The Mall

From the train station it was a long way to the park and later the mall across the street from it. Furthermore Jorge was not familiar with this end of the park though the map at the entrance said this was the place. He just kept looking at the ‘mountain’, knowing the that lake would on the other side.

“Its around this way.”, Jorge says. They don’t argue as they follow him. Some ten minutes later they can see the lake as they finally pass around the mountain. Another few minutes and they end up at the opposite side of the shore of the lake from where he was used too. But there he can do something he is supposed to do, though this meant letting go of Francis’ hand. With a kiss and an explanation, she allows him to let her go.

He walks over to the edge. Putting his hand into his pocket, he removes the spare magazine.  Unloading each and every bullet, 7 in total, he throws the bullets into the water, followed by the magazine. He does this again with the magazine inside the gun, and the one bullet loaded in the chamber. Undoing the Safety catch, pulling back on the hammer, he holds onto slide and frame, giving it a good pull until the gun goes to pieces in his hand. Each large piece of the weapon goes into a different direction of the each other, and the smaller pieces into the lake. Mary sheds a tear as if she lost a friend. He turns to face her and steps to her direction.

“Any gun you bring to Pouncefield will be treated the same way.”, he tells her. He walks away and takes Francis’ hand and walks back to the others. “I don’t know why Fernando trusts you, but I don’t. This black squirrel against all the other squirrels gang war ends. And if I find out that any of your friends were responsible for the Mendez Boy’s killing, I will gather those of us who remain and we will start taking out families, starting with yours first.”

“You would not dare.”, Mary tells him. Jorge takes his gun from his hidden holster and places it to her temple.

“Poucefield is not like New York. Here I can carry legally and not worry about arrest. Everybody here carries, so calling the cops and say I got a gun, and they will laugh at you. But you better understand this much; Where Fernando is smart and intelligent, I’m down right crazy. Unlike he has to think before taking action and caring about others like you about getting hurt, I don’t give a fuck. So try me. Your friends killed too many of my friends to not care anymore.”, he explains. Then the gun goes CLACK!

“Damn it. The safety is still on.”, Jorge says to himself as he looks at his gun. He does not care that Mary has fainted while the other girls still holding her up. He then looks at her and them. “Just put that bitch on the floor.”

“How are we going to wake her up?”, Rachel asks as they put her down. The park breeze occasionally blows by, lifting Mary’s skirt to show the light blue panties she is wearing.

“Maybe I’ll piss on her face or something…”, Jorge says, putting his hands on his zipper.

“JORGE!!!”, they all yell at him, especially Francis who’s hand was pressed up against his groin.

“Alright, just smack her one good, she’ll wake up.”, he tells them.

“I’m not going to smack her.”, Grace says.

“I’m not going to smack her either.”, Rachel adds.

Francis shakes her head.

“Alright. Lets pull down her panties and rough up her clothing and leave her behind the bushes so I can have my way with her to teach her a lesson.”, Jorge tells them.

“Hell No!!!”, they all say together.

“She’s been with 8 gang bangers in the last 2 weeks… who knows what the fuck infection she maybe carrying right now.”, Rachel tells him.

“I don’t care if you’re teaching her sex ed. You touch her, you aint touching me!”, Francis tells him.

“Aren’t I allowed a squirrel girl harem?”, Jorge tries to ask innocently.

“She aint going to be part of that!”, Francis tells him.

“Besides, isn’t Fernando the Alpha of the family? That limits you to 2, maybe 3 girls at the most to his 10 or more until you become 16 years old.”, Rachel tells him.

“He don’t have that many girlfriends… besides, you girls need to talk to him about some gang bitch he’s chasing by the name of Lucy. She’s nothing but trouble.”, he explains.

They all gasp at what he said. “Wait a minute. Isn’t Cathy taking care of him like I told her to so?”, Rachel says and asks.

“Take care? Rachel is taking care of him. He and Cathy fight all the time. And now she brought in her twin sister.”, Jorge answers.

“Twin sister?”, Rachel and Grace asks together.

“Yes, she has a twin sister. And she’s a bigger stuck up bitch than Cathy ever was.”, he explains. “But enough of them. We got lunch, a movie and a mall to hit and sleeping ugly aint helping matters.”

“Alright, I’ll smack her.”, Rachel says as she kneels down next to her.

Jorge stands right at her feet, aiming his gun at her. Rachel gives her a hard slap that makes Mary move her head about on her neck. Mary wakes up angry.

“Who the fuc-*!”, Mary begins to say but is interrupted.

“It was either that or I pissed on your face.”, Jorge tells her. “Now get up. And don’t think I did something to you, they would not let me and Fernando would not approve. So thank them later on.”

“Hmph…”, Mary says to herself as she got up. Rachel got up right behind her.

“Now, what do you girls want to eat?”, Jorge asks.

“I’m not hungry.”, Mary blurts out.

“Look, Mary. I don’t care if I have pin you down to a table and shove a burger down your throat, you are eating.”, Jorge tells her.

“What is there to eat?”, Jeanie asks.

“Fast Foods, Cheap Asian, Meat on a Stick, stuff like that at the mall or sit down place like Gracies on 86th street back in New York- a place called Sonia & Bart’s but they are further down the road. They have not moved to the Mall yet.”, Jorge answers.

“How much of a walk?”, Rachel asks.

“Other end of the park and another block after that.”, Jorge answers.

“I can walk.”, Grace says.

“Then a Movie after that?”, Francis throws in.

“Maybe, yeah. Depends on how much money I got left.”, Jorge answers.

“Don’t worry about that. We got money too.”, Grace says.

“I have no money.”, Mary says to herself.

The girls look at her. “Figures…”, Jorge says almost to himself. They give him a quick glance before returning to Mary.

“Don’t worry about.”, Grace tells her.

“But…”, Mary started to say.

“Look. We will help you if you are willing to end the gang war.”, Rachel says.

“I have no control over that.”, Mary says.

“You joined it. You became part of that. You have some say in what happens.”, Jorge tells her.

“No I don’t.”, Mary tells him. “Orders comes from higher up. Who gets killed, who gets to kill. What drugs are sold where, which old lady gets robbed and hurt, who gets to have sex from me and when. I have no choice but to do.”, Mary explains, trying not to break down to prove she was harder than that.

“You have a choice.”, Jorge tells her. “You could have left that a long time ago.”

Mary gives him a long hard stare.

“What? Just because my fur color is different from yours that I don’t know any better? That I am so different from you that I don’t know? We are all in gangs because of this, to protect ourselves from the likes of you. Now Listen- Fernando is a flying squirrel, very different from everything all of us here are. But yet you want him? He would know less of your world than I ever would.  He’s not black, white, grey or red, he’s beige. So he don’t even fit into the color thing. So what the fuck Mary! You’re a gang hoe, what do you want with my bro?”, Jorge tells her.

“You would not understand.”, Mary tells him.

“I live with Fernando. I had to UNDERSTAND things because I have no other choice. So try me.”, Jorge throws back at her.

“Alright. It started in Preschool, in Ms Carmen’s class. When Fernando came in for the first day, I shared my crayons with him and then that grey squirrel bitch took my crayons and took him to the other side of the room!”, Mary explains.

“All this crap for that?!!”, Jorge roars at her. “Rosita’s been dead for almost 5 years now!”

“I Fell in Love With Your Brother On That Day! And That Bitch Took Him Away From Me!”, Mary yells back at him.

“And I Like Said, She’s Been Dead For Five Years ! You Could Have Taken Him Then!”, Jorge yells back at her.

“I would not allow it.”, Grace says, breaking the flow between  them.

“Neither would I.”, Rachel adds.

“And Why Not?!!”, Jorge throws at them.

“Because Mary was already in the gang by then, and she was starting shit with us girls  before it spread to you boys.”, Rachel explains.

“What have you stupid bitches done?!!”, Jorge yells at them.

“I aint no stupid bitch…”, Rachel confronts him.

“Don’t You See? Damn Yous! Damn Yous All!”, Jorge says out loud.

“See what?”, Jeanie asks.

“You wont see it because you’re a mouse, but really. When girls fight, they don’t try to kill each other, boys do. In moving the gang war from the girls to the boys, started this boy-killing gang shit… Don’t You see it- You Bitches Started All This!”, Jorge explains out loud.

They look at each other for a moment. Only Jeanie speaks out, “Thank god I’m not a squirrel.”

“You think that is going to stop from getting your kind from getting hurt? Don’t you see the Tungs, the Triads, and the White Dragons moving into position to protect their own? You might be an outsider, Jeanie, but you are in it as deep as they all are!”, Jorge tells him. He pauses for a moment. “Damn it, I swear.” He pauses again. “Lets go.”

He walks around the lake, the girls following him. Another 10 minutes to walk around the lake, they make it out of the park with Sonia & Bart’s Restaurant within view  a little more than a block and half away as they pass by the pool. He holds the door for them when they get there. The girls take a booth by the windows on the right side as they entered. They study the menus the find on the table.

The girls order a super-sized order of fries to share. Most have ordered a burger of some kind along with a soda to drink, except for Jeanie who orders a cheese club sandwich. Jorge gets a burger and a coke with no fries. They talk about the place and Pouncefield in general as they ate. Jorge complains on how quiet the Pouncefield is, with this restaurant being the biggest center of activity and it closes around midnight. He also talks about the general lack of excitement of the community, with little to do. At least in New York,  one can go anywhere at anytime. Nonetheless the girls would not mind moving here to be with them, and for one to leave the craziness of New York and its gang war. For Mary it would mean a reprieve from such the lifestyle she has been in. Even though there were six more empty yet very affordable houses that were just built on the block they live on, most adults fear the lack of jobs or the long commute to New York to work but such beliefs are not warranted as there many available jobs in Pouncefield and there is a special commuter express that runs from 6 – 8AM and 5:30-7:30PM to and from New York.

For dessert, the girls had ice cream, except for Jeanie who had a slice of cheese cake. It was strange that the girls have been treating Mary as if she was part of the group since the beginning, even though she was, she always been a detriment to the group. But now it seems as if amends have been made by both sides. Fernando as a subject was not touched during their conversations, only the stuff that has been happening in New York and despite the skewed make to female squirrel birthrates, the killing of the few males that are there is making the difference even larger. Despite how integrated an species rich a school might be in New York, if there was at least 1 male squirrel in the school yard during recess, all the female squirrels would flock to him. In their school there was at least 15 male squirrels. With the removal of Fernando and Jorge by their grandmother, and the murder of the Mendez boys, this one school has to deal with a lowered male population and every squirrel girl attending will be taking to those who remain. The girls who snuck out to Pouncefield want no part of that. Even Mary, one of the several female members of the Black Spades of Harlem gang, knows that for her to retain her position and power in the gang will have to drop her panties more often. With Fernando in Pouncefield, this option for her has now become a moot point.

With the bill paid, Jorge and the girls leave for the mall. Getting there only took a couple of minutes of walking along the park until they arrive at the mall area. The outside is not too impressive, with a similar appearance of the Co-Op City all, a large block of concrete with large windows on the first couple of floors. On the inside, they find the place like the Mid-Manhattan mall, with four sets escalators on the middle of a large promenade area. Between them two sets of dual elevators.  Around them are various stores and restaurants. Jorge continues up the nearest escalators. Some four escalators later,  they end up on the theater level.

“They just opened up so, what do you want to see?”, Jorge tells them.  “Eight theaters and screens, with six different movies. Which one?”

Next hour and a 1/2, they spend their time watching ‘The Last Airbender’ in theater #3, managing to catch it on time. While Mary was forced to sit between Grace and Rachel, Jeanie was getting a bit uncomfortable as she sat by Jorge and Francis, who were too busy feeling each other up and making out for much of the movie.

Even the lights turned on at the end of the credits, Jorge had one hand up Francis’ skirt and the other inside her t-shirt, feeling her up as he smothered her with kisses, as she had his dick out and was pumping it vigorously as if she owned it. A smack goes across the backs of their heads from behind, waking them up out of their limited love-fest.

“I knew I should have sat between you two.”, Rachel scowls at them from above.

“We were doing nothing!”, Jorge says, as he always does when he is caught doing something.

“Sure you didn’t. Now get your grubby hands out of my sister’s clothes. And you Francis, what were you going to do, do him right then and there?”, Rachel says, pointing to her sister’s hand and what was inside.

“You never let me have any fun! I swear!”, Francis complains, slowly letting go of Jorge’s member.

“You want to have fun? Not when I’m around. And later on you can tell mom that Jorge got you preggo too because you two did not use birth control.”, Rachel scolds her.

“Let them learn, Rachel.”, Grace tells her.

“Simple for you to say, she’s not your sister.”, Rachel throws back at her. “Not only do I have to watch out for my own pussy, I have to watch her too cause she aint watching it herself like she’s supposed too!”

“Doesn’t matter. Its her pussy…” Mary says to herself, but a bit too loudly to be heard. Rachel just turns to face her, almost wanting to growl at her.

“Alright lets go. Its getting late for you girls to get home anyways.”, Jorge says as he fixes his pants.

“Its that late already?”, Grace asks.

“Its about 3o’clock. By the time we get to the train station and you get on the train, you should be getting home at around 7.”, Jorge says.

“That is if we take the local. The express takes 2 hours.”, Mary answers.

“How you know that?”, Grace asks.

“My father works for Am-Track.”, Mary answers.

“Yeah, but we have local train tickets.”, Jeanie says.

“Don’t worry about that. If we were adults, they would get on our case. But as squirrel puppies, we can get away with local tickets on the express train.”, Mary explains.

Another 5 minutes of discussing trains and schedules, the movie theater crew throws them out to clean up the mess from the audience before. Another light snack from the concession stands and they walk their way back to the train station, making it at 3:47PM. The train arrives early at 3:50PM, Francis needed to be pulled off Jorge for them to get on. It was held another twelve minutes before it leaves the station. Jorge takes that long lone walk home.

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