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  "writing": "Chapter 18b: Mary’s End.\n\n[Rewind: June 28th; Last Day of School.]\n\nFernando wakes up to get to school early, earlier than most for his time will be spent on finalizing his transfer to St. Lovejoy , and be rid of this hell hole once and for all. He arrive at the school's from gate at 7:00am.\n\nUntil 9:00, Fernando spends sitting in the waiting area of the General Office as one of the office workers there tends to his needs, gathering his records and other papers to be signed or otherwise finalized. Fernando just hopes Jorge fairs better than he does with the transfer.\n\nThe 9:00 Homeroom bell rings, while all other students to their homerooms, Fernando gather the last of his paperwork before he leave. Needing to sign various papers before he goes, Fernando can only patiently wait for all this to end. This being the last day of school, there are no classes, just a 1/2 day- all Homeroom period for students to gather their report cards and finalize their class transfers and grades.\n\nFernando walks out of the office at a quarter to ten, putting a large envelope of a copy of his school records for his transfer into his book bag. Fernando makes his way tapping his cane through the halls until he gets to the rear exits where one of the school guards, Big Man, stays on guard. Fernando knows he's staring at him as he approaches him. Fernando finally stop by the door next to Big Man.\n\n\"You know you can't leave through here.\", Big Man states to him.\n\n\"Well, I'm no longer a student here...\", Fernando starts to tells him.\n\n\"You and 8000 others will be in less than two hours.\", Big Man interrupts him.\n\n\"Actually- No. I just transferred out of here. I'm going to St. Lovejoy !\", Fernando tells him.\n\n\"Well, Damn. You'll be missed.\", Big Man says.\n\n\"Not to worry. The others will still be here.\", Fernando say to him.\n\n\"It wont be the same without you tapping that cane down the hall.\", Big man asks.\n\n\"Well, since you're not longer a student here, that means that you're trespassing. And since you're trespassing, that means that I  have to throw you out... so GET OUT!\", Big Man says, trying to be theatrical about it.\n\n\"Alright, I'm out...\" Fernando tells him, as he pushes the locking bar on the door to open it. He then step out onto the rear steps of the school, where it faces the school yard. The Summer Sun shines upon his face and feels its warmth against it. To him it feels like its burning.\n\nFernando walks out and down the steps to the school yard, taking a turn to the right and hope that the 64th street school yard entrance is open. Fortunately for him it is, as he go through it, finding the gate already wide opened. The sounds of several students classmates cutting class is heard as they play basketball in one of the yard's courts. Fernando continues past them and towards the small children's play ground and picnic area. He choose the table closest to the school yard as to be seen by the others as he waits for them.\n\nFernando was lucky to find shade at this first table, for he had to wait 90 minutes for them to arrive. If he were to be out in the sun too long without sun block, he would have been burnt. But he leans against the picnic table, with his legs crossed and his cane at his feet; his book bag behind him on the table as he silently waits for them. He has a feeling that in the distance across the school yard, Big Man has his door open and keeps an eye on him. \n\nFernando did not hear him approaching or his steps against the concrete floor, but rather the pressing of cold steel against his temple gets his attention that someone had gotten past his senses. But he stands there alone.\n\n\"You're like a fucking roach that is impossible to kill, but I got you where I want you and you will die.\", he tells him as if he has achieved something. He being a black squirrel named Alfonzo Munez, Mary's ex or current boyfriend, depending on who and how is looking at it.\n\n\"Look Alfonzo- You don't have to deal with me anymore- I transferred out to a better place.\", Fernando tells him.\n\n\"I really don't care where you transferred to, you're not getting there at all. You're not going home, you're just going to fucking rot here after I blow your brains out.\", Alfonzo tells him, as he draws closer to Fernando, pressing his gun harder against the side of Fernando's head, making him tilt it.\n\n\"Can I ask why you're going to kill me? At least give me that much...\", Fernando tells him.\n\n\"You're such a motherfucker- you should have died with the rest of the Baby Kings years ago- but you didn't. You went after my girl, you caused problems for us and the gang. She follows you around like some lost puppy dog, and yet you manage to survive the fall from the gym, and when the lab blew up. She went to visit you in the hospital when she should have been with me. You have her studying- believing that she can make something of herself- when she is suppose to be my woman and I don't want her to be a brainiac like you... That bitch is my piece of pussy, and you have no claim to it, or to where we live... In all and in everything, here and now is where you are going to pay... with your life.\", Alfonzo states, pulling back on the hammer with his last three words in a loud 'CLACK!'\n\nWith lightning fast reflexes, Fernando turns, raising his arm to the side of his head, knocking the gun out of range and grabbing the Alfonzo by his wrist hard to smash against the concrete table. The sound of the gun skittering across the table is only silenced by Alfonzo's arm breaking in several places, his shoulder dislocating and his screams of pain. But that does not stop him from trying to grab the gun with his other free hand and point it to the direction of Fernando's chest. The fist from Fernando's other hand meets with the side of Alfonzo's face as more bones can be heard breaking. Fernando lifts him up and Judo throws him away from the table. Alfonzo quickly gets up and aims the gun at Fernando.\n\n\"HAVEN'T YOU AND RICKY FUCKING LEARNED ANYTHING?!!\", Fernando yells at him as he wails a fury of kicks and punches at Alfonso, bones can be heard cracking with every impact Fernando gives him. In his desperation, he tries to hit him with the gun like some monkey with a rock in his paw. Fernando dodges out of the way, and give him a hard side kick to the side of his knees- a crippling blow that would tear most of the ligaments that support him when he stands. He crumples to the floor, yet manages to roll away and onto his back and looks back at Fernando.\n\nAs he lays there, he pants out his last words, \"You're... Not... Getting... Away...\", as he draws the gun towards Fernando. \n\n\"GO AHEAD- PULL THE FUCKING TRIGGER! KILL ME ALREADY!!!\", Fernando yells at him as Fernando steps up to him. Fernando stands next to him, looking down at him as his hand shakes while he tries to aim, Fernando knows he is still dangerous as long as he has that gun pointed towards him. But the damaged Fernando have inflicted upon him, he was surprised that Alfonso was still conscious: ribs, left side of jaw, cheek bone and lower eye socket, lower right arm and wrist- all broken. Ligaments in both knees- torn. Shoulder – dislocated. Alfonzo looks like something that fell out of a car wreck, waiting to die by the side of the road. But him holding that gun belies his condition. \"SHOOT ME- WILL YOU?!!\", Fernando yells at him one more time.\n\nHe fights the urge of giving up as he raises the gun to a steeper angle to shoot Fernando with. But as he aims, Fernando stomp down onto his hip- shattering his pelvis and hip bones. His arm swing out of control and slams unto the floor as he howls in pain. No sooner as the arm slams against the floor Fernando's other foot meets up with it, crushing the lower forearm and wrist.\n\nFernando steps away from his handiwork as several large individuals grab him from behind. Fernando struggles hard against them, but he recognize their scent as the school guards. Two of them pull his back away from Alfonzo, and Big Man steps in front of Fernando, \"Let him go.\"\n\n\"Fucking shit, What The Fuck You Did To Him?\", one of the other guards say as he checks out Alfonzo.\n\n\"Give me his gun.\", another says. A third is calling for an ambulance on his walkie-talkie. Most of them attend to Alfonzo and give what little first aide training they could provide.\n\n\"Fernando, I don't know to whether arrest you or to let you go...\", Big Man tells me, \"Fortunately for you, we saw that you acted in self defense- but this is beyond what was called for!\"\n\nFernando refuses to say a word, and hearing more voices behind his getting louder as they approached fast. The stammering of feet says that they were running at their full speed to get here, and need to stop when they closed in.\n\n\"What happened?\", a young loud female voice yells out. It belongs to the black squirrel named Mary.\n\n\"What the fuck...\", a grey bat named Denis says as he and the others look unto Alfonzo's broken body laying on the floor.\n\n\"Oh his god... he's dead- isn't he?\", a white bunny Leslie states. Others seem to take on her lead in the believing in what are seeing is something that is very deceiving.\n\nThe police and ambulance take their time to arrive, even though their respective local headquarters being less than a block away; in fact, New York Hospital was just across the street.\n\nFernando was left alone, the security had witnessed this altercation, and deemed it self defense on his part. The gun however disappeared from view, probably into one of the security guard's pocket. Fernando starts to walk away from the scene, but was immediately surrounded by the others.\n\n\"Where do you think you are going, Fernando!\", Mary yells at him. \n\nFernando try not o answer her, but try to slip his cane between her and a flying squirrel like him named Solmaria, and takes a step forward. Instead, Mary reaches out to him and pushes him by the shoulder, forcing him to take a step back.\n\n\"You killed him- didn't you!\", Mary shouts out at him. \n\n\"Believe what you want to believe- and then think why is it that I'm not handcuffed or at least detained by security or the police?\", Fernando tells her in an angered tone.\n\n\"Then what happened?\", Solmaria asks.\n\n\"You would not believe me even if I told you... you already have it in your minds that I am wrong... and for that, I want to be left alone. Now get out of my way.\", Fernando states as he tries to take another step forward.\n\n\"Try us...\", Leslie states.\n\n\"I don't have to prove nothing to any of you...\", Fernando states as he refrains from adding curse words into the sentence.\n\n\"So Alfonzo tried to attack you and you got the upper hand?\", Leslie states, \"Yeah right...\"\n\n\"Don't put it past him... I've seen him do more against higher odds.\", Denis states.\n\n\"He had a gun...\", Fernando starts to say.\n\n\"There was no gun...\", Mary refutes.\n\n\"Maybe the cops have it, but he had a gun that he was about to use on me...\", Fernando tells her.\n\n\"Why are you fucking lying?\", Mary tells his out loud.\n\n\"Believe what you want to believe- but if I did not beat him, you all would be looking at my dead body right now wondering who did it. But he failed, and now you know who it is...\", Fernando tells her.\n\n\"I don't fucking believe you...\", Mary states.\n\n\"Then answer this- Alfonzo states that you and he were going out... that you're his girlfriend, giving him ass and pussy when ever he wanted it*...\", Fernando starts to say before being met with a cold slap to the face.\n\nSilence stood there between them- nobody wanting to make a remark as to what just happened. Fernando slowly straightens up, rubbing his face where she had slapped him. \n\n\"Out of my way.\", Fernando tells everybody.\n\nNo one complies, leaving his no option but to walk through everyone. But before he take his first step, Mary speaks.\n\n\"You are so stupid to think that I would go out with him when I'm going out with you?!!\", Mary states.\n\n\"You have, and you are...\", Fernando tells her.\n\n\"How can you think like that?!!\", Mary yells out at him. \n\n\"How is not that hard; you have been part of the Black Spades Gang Little Hoe Club since they have joined the gang, and I know as being in a gang myself that you giving sex to its members is part of the rituals of being in a gang! And furthering his point, you cant be part of a gang or be their friends with it unless you have to give something up- and according to both Ricky and Alfonzo- in your case- giving up some ass and pussy to them.\", Fernando explains to her.\n\nMary tries hard not to show any emotion to his explanation. \"Yet you dare say that you love me, but have only given me grief, sorrow and pain when all I ever wanted was some peace, quiet and companionship. I gave everything up for you, Mary! I gave up my grades by dumbing them down so that you would get the valedictorianship when we graduated elementary school! I gave up scholarships for you back in elementary school, so that you had something for your future, and yet- what have I received from you? Excuses? Bull Crap Advise? Words of little meaning when you tell me that things would be alright? Because of you, I’m having these headaches; because of you I may have lost my eye-sight forever... Yet during this time, you have told me many times to go fuck myself, in times in which I was right- so how does it feel to have the same words thrown back at you? You don't like it- do you?!! Go fuck yourself bitch, and may I never see you again!\", he yells at her, blood slowly trickling from his nose.\n\nThen Fernando pushes who ever was in his way, and kept walking while everyone looks at Mary for the moment. Not even the grey bunny named Patricia was aware as to how bad it was between them. Eventually, Mary slowly breaks down and cries. But instead of getting comfort from her friends, they each turn toward Fernando's direction, and individually separate from the group, running towards him.  The first, Denis, catches up to his in the middle of the school yard. He tries to get in front of Fernando, letting the tapping cane slap him along the side of his leg, forcing him to stop.\n\n\"What is it?\", Fernando asks, facing forwards and not at him.\n\n\"Did you mean everything you says?\", Denis asks.\n\n\"Meant it? Don't you remember the history? Because of her, I dumbed down my grades in elementary so that she had a spot in the A-1 super class while I got stuck in the A-3 idiot's class. And when the race for grades for graduation then, it was a 4 way tie, so I deliberately failed a math test so I could be taken out so that she had a better chance... Me Fail In Math?!! And Now That We're In Jr. High School, nothing's changed, and this time it has cost me more than just grades or scholarships- it almost cost me my life, Denis!\", Fernando explains to him.\n\n\"So, what are you trying to say?\" Patricia asks as she joins into the group.\n\n\"Cant you tell? He's going to take what is rightfully his and surpass everyone in grades and work in becoming a super-student...\", Solmaria states as she and the others join in.\n\n\"I'm going to better than that...\", Fernando says, taking another couple of steps, forcing them to follow him. \n\n\"How?\", Patricia asks, stepping in front of his to stop him.  Fernando bumps right into her, then take a step back, looking straight at her.\n\n\"I transferred to another school. One which can better address my educational needs than this damned dump.\", Fernando tells her.\n\n\"And where would that be?\", Patricia asks.\n\n\"St. Lovejoy .\", Fernando tells them. They all stand silenced in awe at his comment before he continues, \"Yeah- I found out that Mrs. Gambini fucked with my paper work to have me transfer to this shit hole of a school. Because of the shit that is going on here, my family is moving to Pouncefield and I choose St. Lovejoy School- guaranteeing so that none of you would follow me there.\", Fernando continues.\n\n\"But, you can't...\", Patricia states.\n\n\"Watch me.  In fact- I don't ever want to see any of you ever again. Understand where I'm coming from?\", Fernando tells her.\n\n\"You cant be serious...\", Solmaria states.\n\n\"Like I said- watch me. \", Fernando tells her.\n\n\"But... Fernando...\", Denis starts to say.\n\n\"But nothing. I know what you were about to say- that we been together since the first grade, of the little projects we worked on, the fun we had over the years... face it Denis, if I stay here, I'm a dead man walking as long as Alfonzo and Ricky still come here, as long as Mary still comes here. So its better for me to leave now while I still can, and consider this place a loss. I seriously hope to never see any of you again.\", Fernando tells him before taking another step. He continues onward, going through the memorized map of the school, passing by the open gate of the school yard where white Asian mouse nervously stood there holding on to her books. She wanted to tell him something but instead she watches him as he somehow manages to make it onto 68th street, turning right to head towards First Avenue after witnessing everything that has transpired. The others still remain at the school yard, following him with their eyes.\n\nFernando raises his hand to hail a cab, and is quickly greeted by one. He gives the driver directions to drop his off at 86th street. The driver complies, and Fernando get out of the cab, giving the driver a couple of bucks for the ride. Seeing his handicap as he taps the cane to feel the curb before getting on the sidewalk, the driver does not complain, though the amount Fernando gave was 1/2 of the actual fare. From here, Fernando walks home where he locks himself in his room and remain to himself for the rest of the day.\n\n- End of: Mary’s End. -",
  "writing_bbcode_parsed": "<span style='word-wrap: break-word;'>Chapter 18b: Mary&rsquo;s End.<br /><br />[Rewind: June 28th; Last Day of School.]<br /><br />Fernando wakes up to get to school early, earlier than most for his time will be spent on finalizing his transfer to St. Lovejoy , and be rid of this hell hole once and for all. He arrive at the school&#039;s from gate at 7:00am.<br /><br />Until 9:00, Fernando spends sitting in the waiting area of the General Office as one of the office workers there tends to his needs, gathering his records and other papers to be signed or otherwise finalized. Fernando just hopes Jorge fairs better than he does with the transfer.<br /><br />The 9:00 Homeroom bell rings, while all other students to their homerooms, Fernando gather the last of his paperwork before he leave. Needing to sign various papers before he goes, Fernando can only patiently wait for all this to end. This being the last day of school, there are no classes, just a 1/2 day- all Homeroom period for students to gather their report cards and finalize their class transfers and grades.<br /><br />Fernando walks out of the office at a quarter to ten, putting a large envelope of a copy of his school records for his transfer into his book bag. Fernando makes his way tapping his cane through the halls until he gets to the rear exits where one of the school guards, Big Man, stays on guard. Fernando knows he&#039;s staring at him as he approaches him. Fernando finally stop by the door next to Big Man.<br /><br />&quot;You know you can&#039;t leave through here.&quot;, Big Man states to him.<br /><br />&quot;Well, I&#039;m no longer a student here...&quot;, Fernando starts to tells him.<br /><br />&quot;You and 8000 others will be in less than two hours.&quot;, Big Man interrupts him.<br /><br />&quot;Actually- No. I just transferred out of here. I&#039;m going to St. Lovejoy !&quot;, Fernando tells him.<br /><br />&quot;Well, Damn. You&#039;ll be missed.&quot;, Big Man says.<br /><br />&quot;Not to worry. The others will still be here.&quot;, Fernando say to him.<br /><br />&quot;It wont be the same without you tapping that cane down the hall.&quot;, Big man asks.<br /><br />&quot;Well, since you&#039;re not longer a student here, that means that you&#039;re trespassing. And since you&#039;re trespassing, that means that I&nbsp;&nbsp;have to throw you out... so GET OUT!&quot;, Big Man says, trying to be theatrical about it.<br /><br />&quot;Alright, I&#039;m out...&quot; Fernando tells him, as he pushes the locking bar on the door to open it. He then step out onto the rear steps of the school, where it faces the school yard. The Summer Sun shines upon his face and feels its warmth against it. To him it feels like its burning.<br /><br />Fernando walks out and down the steps to the school yard, taking a turn to the right and hope that the 64th street school yard entrance is open. Fortunately for him it is, as he go through it, finding the gate already wide opened. The sounds of several students classmates cutting class is heard as they play basketball in one of the yard&#039;s courts. Fernando continues past them and towards the small children&#039;s play ground and picnic area. He choose the table closest to the school yard as to be seen by the others as he waits for them.<br /><br />Fernando was lucky to find shade at this first table, for he had to wait 90 minutes for them to arrive. If he were to be out in the sun too long without sun block, he would have been burnt. But he leans against the picnic table, with his legs crossed and his cane at his feet; his book bag behind him on the table as he silently waits for them. He has a feeling that in the distance across the school yard, Big Man has his door open and keeps an eye on him. <br /><br />Fernando did not hear him approaching or his steps against the concrete floor, but rather the pressing of cold steel against his temple gets his attention that someone had gotten past his senses. But he stands there alone.<br /><br />&quot;You&#039;re like a fucking roach that is impossible to kill, but I got you where I want you and you will die.&quot;, he tells him as if he has achieved something. He being a black squirrel named Alfonzo Munez, Mary&#039;s ex or current boyfriend, depending on who and how is looking at it.<br /><br />&quot;Look Alfonzo- You don&#039;t have to deal with me anymore- I transferred out to a better place.&quot;, Fernando tells him.<br /><br />&quot;I really don&#039;t care where you transferred to, you&#039;re not getting there at all. You&#039;re not going home, you&#039;re just going to fucking rot here after I blow your brains out.&quot;, Alfonzo tells him, as he draws closer to Fernando, pressing his gun harder against the side of Fernando&#039;s head, making him tilt it.<br /><br />&quot;Can I ask why you&#039;re going to kill me? At least give me that much...&quot;, Fernando tells him.<br /><br />&quot;You&#039;re such a motherfucker- you should have died with the rest of the Baby Kings years ago- but you didn&#039;t. You went after my girl, you caused problems for us and the gang. She follows you around like some lost puppy dog, and yet you manage to survive the fall from the gym, and when the lab blew up. She went to visit you in the hospital when she should have been with me. You have her studying- believing that she can make something of herself- when she is suppose to be my woman and I don&#039;t want her to be a brainiac like you... That bitch is my piece of pussy, and you have no claim to it, or to where we live... In all and in everything, here and now is where you are going to pay... with your life.&quot;, Alfonzo states, pulling back on the hammer with his last three words in a loud &#039;CLACK!&#039;<br /><br />With lightning fast reflexes, Fernando turns, raising his arm to the side of his head, knocking the gun out of range and grabbing the Alfonzo by his wrist hard to smash against the concrete table. The sound of the gun skittering across the table is only silenced by Alfonzo&#039;s arm breaking in several places, his shoulder dislocating and his screams of pain. But that does not stop him from trying to grab the gun with his other free hand and point it to the direction of Fernando&#039;s chest. The fist from Fernando&#039;s other hand meets with the side of Alfonzo&#039;s face as more bones can be heard breaking. Fernando lifts him up and Judo throws him away from the table. Alfonzo quickly gets up and aims the gun at Fernando.<br /><br />&quot;HAVEN&#039;T YOU AND RICKY FUCKING LEARNED ANYTHING?!!&quot;, Fernando yells at him as he wails a fury of kicks and punches at Alfonso, bones can be heard cracking with every impact Fernando gives him. In his desperation, he tries to hit him with the gun like some monkey with a rock in his paw. Fernando dodges out of the way, and give him a hard side kick to the side of his knees- a crippling blow that would tear most of the ligaments that support him when he stands. He crumples to the floor, yet manages to roll away and onto his back and looks back at Fernando.<br /><br />As he lays there, he pants out his last words, &quot;You&#039;re... Not... Getting... Away...&quot;, as he draws the gun towards Fernando. <br /><br />&quot;GO AHEAD- PULL THE FUCKING TRIGGER! KILL ME ALREADY!!!&quot;, Fernando yells at him as Fernando steps up to him. Fernando stands next to him, looking down at him as his hand shakes while he tries to aim, Fernando knows he is still dangerous as long as he has that gun pointed towards him. But the damaged Fernando have inflicted upon him, he was surprised that Alfonso was still conscious: ribs, left side of jaw, cheek bone and lower eye socket, lower right arm and wrist- all broken. Ligaments in both knees- torn. Shoulder &ndash; dislocated. Alfonzo looks like something that fell out of a car wreck, waiting to die by the side of the road. But him holding that gun belies his condition. &quot;SHOOT ME- WILL YOU?!!&quot;, Fernando yells at him one more time.<br /><br />He fights the urge of giving up as he raises the gun to a steeper angle to shoot Fernando with. But as he aims, Fernando stomp down onto his hip- shattering his pelvis and hip bones. His arm swing out of control and slams unto the floor as he howls in pain. No sooner as the arm slams against the floor Fernando&#039;s other foot meets up with it, crushing the lower forearm and wrist.<br /><br />Fernando steps away from his handiwork as several large individuals grab him from behind. Fernando struggles hard against them, but he recognize their scent as the school guards. Two of them pull his back away from Alfonzo, and Big Man steps in front of Fernando, &quot;Let him go.&quot;<br /><br />&quot;Fucking shit, What The Fuck You Did To Him?&quot;, one of the other guards say as he checks out Alfonzo.<br /><br />&quot;Give me his gun.&quot;, another says. A third is calling for an ambulance on his walkie-talkie. Most of them attend to Alfonzo and give what little first aide training they could provide.<br /><br />&quot;Fernando, I don&#039;t know to whether arrest you or to let you go...&quot;, Big Man tells me, &quot;Fortunately for you, we saw that you acted in self defense- but this is beyond what was called for!&quot;<br /><br />Fernando refuses to say a word, and hearing more voices behind his getting louder as they approached fast. The stammering of feet says that they were running at their full speed to get here, and need to stop when they closed in.<br /><br />&quot;What happened?&quot;, a young loud female voice yells out. It belongs to the black squirrel named Mary.<br /><br />&quot;What the fuck...&quot;, a grey bat named Denis says as he and the others look unto Alfonzo&#039;s broken body laying on the floor.<br /><br />&quot;Oh his god... he&#039;s dead- isn&#039;t he?&quot;, a white bunny Leslie states. Others seem to take on her lead in the believing in what are seeing is something that is very deceiving.<br /><br />The police and ambulance take their time to arrive, even though their respective local headquarters being less than a block away; in fact, New York Hospital was just across the street.<br /><br />Fernando was left alone, the security had witnessed this altercation, and deemed it self defense on his part. The gun however disappeared from view, probably into one of the security guard&#039;s pocket. Fernando starts to walk away from the scene, but was immediately surrounded by the others.<br /><br />&quot;Where do you think you are going, Fernando!&quot;, Mary yells at him. <br /><br />Fernando try not o answer her, but try to slip his cane between her and a flying squirrel like him named Solmaria, and takes a step forward. Instead, Mary reaches out to him and pushes him by the shoulder, forcing him to take a step back.<br /><br />&quot;You killed him- didn&#039;t you!&quot;, Mary shouts out at him. <br /><br />&quot;Believe what you want to believe- and then think why is it that I&#039;m not handcuffed or at least detained by security or the police?&quot;, Fernando tells her in an angered tone.<br /><br />&quot;Then what happened?&quot;, Solmaria asks.<br /><br />&quot;You would not believe me even if I told you... you already have it in your minds that I am wrong... and for that, I want to be left alone. Now get out of my way.&quot;, Fernando states as he tries to take another step forward.<br /><br />&quot;Try us...&quot;, Leslie states.<br /><br />&quot;I don&#039;t have to prove nothing to any of you...&quot;, Fernando states as he refrains from adding curse words into the sentence.<br /><br />&quot;So Alfonzo tried to attack you and you got the upper hand?&quot;, Leslie states, &quot;Yeah right...&quot;<br /><br />&quot;Don&#039;t put it past him... I&#039;ve seen him do more against higher odds.&quot;, Denis states.<br /><br />&quot;He had a gun...&quot;, Fernando starts to say.<br /><br />&quot;There was no gun...&quot;, Mary refutes.<br /><br />&quot;Maybe the cops have it, but he had a gun that he was about to use on me...&quot;, Fernando tells her.<br /><br />&quot;Why are you fucking lying?&quot;, Mary tells his out loud.<br /><br />&quot;Believe what you want to believe- but if I did not beat him, you all would be looking at my dead body right now wondering who did it. But he failed, and now you know who it is...&quot;, Fernando tells her.<br /><br />&quot;I don&#039;t fucking believe you...&quot;, Mary states.<br /><br />&quot;Then answer this- Alfonzo states that you and he were going out... that you&#039;re his girlfriend, giving him ass and pussy when ever he wanted it*...&quot;, Fernando starts to say before being met with a cold slap to the face.<br /><br />Silence stood there between them- nobody wanting to make a remark as to what just happened. Fernando slowly straightens up, rubbing his face where she had slapped him. <br /><br />&quot;Out of my way.&quot;, Fernando tells everybody.<br /><br />No one complies, leaving his no option but to walk through everyone. But before he take his first step, Mary speaks.<br /><br />&quot;You are so stupid to think that I would go out with him when I&#039;m going out with you?!!&quot;, Mary states.<br /><br />&quot;You have, and you are...&quot;, Fernando tells her.<br /><br />&quot;How can you think like that?!!&quot;, Mary yells out at him. <br /><br />&quot;How is not that hard; you have been part of the Black Spades Gang Little Hoe Club since they have joined the gang, and I know as being in a gang myself that you giving sex to its members is part of the rituals of being in a gang! And furthering his point, you cant be part of a gang or be their friends with it unless you have to give something up- and according to both Ricky and Alfonzo- in your case- giving up some ass and pussy to them.&quot;, Fernando explains to her.<br /><br />Mary tries hard not to show any emotion to his explanation. &quot;Yet you dare say that you love me, but have only given me grief, sorrow and pain when all I ever wanted was some peace, quiet and companionship. I gave everything up for you, Mary! I gave up my grades by dumbing them down so that you would get the valedictorianship when we graduated elementary school! I gave up scholarships for you back in elementary school, so that you had something for your future, and yet- what have I received from you? Excuses? Bull Crap Advise? Words of little meaning when you tell me that things would be alright? Because of you, I&rsquo;m having these headaches; because of you I may have lost my eye-sight forever... Yet during this time, you have told me many times to go fuck myself, in times in which I was right- so how does it feel to have the same words thrown back at you? You don&#039;t like it- do you?!! Go fuck yourself bitch, and may I never see you again!&quot;, he yells at her, blood slowly trickling from his nose.<br /><br />Then Fernando pushes who ever was in his way, and kept walking while everyone looks at Mary for the moment. Not even the grey bunny named Patricia was aware as to how bad it was between them. Eventually, Mary slowly breaks down and cries. But instead of getting comfort from her friends, they each turn toward Fernando&#039;s direction, and individually separate from the group, running towards him.&nbsp;&nbsp;The first, Denis, catches up to his in the middle of the school yard. He tries to get in front of Fernando, letting the tapping cane slap him along the side of his leg, forcing him to stop.<br /><br />&quot;What is it?&quot;, Fernando asks, facing forwards and not at him.<br /><br />&quot;Did you mean everything you says?&quot;, Denis asks.<br /><br />&quot;Meant it? Don&#039;t you remember the history? Because of her, I dumbed down my grades in elementary so that she had a spot in the A-1 super class while I got stuck in the A-3 idiot&#039;s class. And when the race for grades for graduation then, it was a 4 way tie, so I deliberately failed a math test so I could be taken out so that she had a better chance... Me Fail In Math?!! And Now That We&#039;re In Jr. High School, nothing&#039;s changed, and this time it has cost me more than just grades or scholarships- it almost cost me my life, Denis!&quot;, Fernando explains to him.<br /><br />&quot;So, what are you trying to say?&quot; Patricia asks as she joins into the group.<br /><br />&quot;Cant you tell? He&#039;s going to take what is rightfully his and surpass everyone in grades and work in becoming a super-student...&quot;, Solmaria states as she and the others join in.<br /><br />&quot;I&#039;m going to better than that...&quot;, Fernando says, taking another couple of steps, forcing them to follow him. <br /><br />&quot;How?&quot;, Patricia asks, stepping in front of his to stop him.&nbsp;&nbsp;Fernando bumps right into her, then take a step back, looking straight at her.<br /><br />&quot;I transferred to another school. One which can better address my educational needs than this damned dump.&quot;, Fernando tells her.<br /><br />&quot;And where would that be?&quot;, Patricia asks.<br /><br />&quot;St. Lovejoy .&quot;, Fernando tells them. They all stand silenced in awe at his comment before he continues, &quot;Yeah- I found out that Mrs. Gambini fucked with my paper work to have me transfer to this shit hole of a school. Because of the shit that is going on here, my family is moving to Pouncefield and I choose St. Lovejoy School- guaranteeing so that none of you would follow me there.&quot;, Fernando continues.<br /><br />&quot;But, you can&#039;t...&quot;, Patricia states.<br /><br />&quot;Watch me.&nbsp;&nbsp;In fact- I don&#039;t ever want to see any of you ever again. Understand where I&#039;m coming from?&quot;, Fernando tells her.<br /><br />&quot;You cant be serious...&quot;, Solmaria states.<br /><br />&quot;Like I said- watch me. &quot;, Fernando tells her.<br /><br />&quot;But... Fernando...&quot;, Denis starts to say.<br /><br />&quot;But nothing. I know what you were about to say- that we been together since the first grade, of the little projects we worked on, the fun we had over the years... face it Denis, if I stay here, I&#039;m a dead man walking as long as Alfonzo and Ricky still come here, as long as Mary still comes here. So its better for me to leave now while I still can, and consider this place a loss. I seriously hope to never see any of you again.&quot;, Fernando tells him before taking another step. He continues onward, going through the memorized map of the school, passing by the open gate of the school yard where white Asian mouse nervously stood there holding on to her books. She wanted to tell him something but instead she watches him as he somehow manages to make it onto 68th street, turning right to head towards First Avenue after witnessing everything that has transpired. The others still remain at the school yard, following him with their eyes.<br /><br />Fernando raises his hand to hail a cab, and is quickly greeted by one. He gives the driver directions to drop his off at 86th street. The driver complies, and Fernando get out of the cab, giving the driver a couple of bucks for the ride. Seeing his handicap as he taps the cane to feel the curb before getting on the sidewalk, the driver does not complain, though the amount Fernando gave was 1/2 of the actual fare. From here, Fernando walks home where he locks himself in his room and remain to himself for the rest of the day.<br /><br />- End of: Mary&rsquo;s End. -</span>",
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