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Events are Semi-fictional", "writing": "It is something some teen girls do, not all of them but some. And it is something not done due to sexual tension or emotional attraction of the other but it is something they do with someone they are close to and can wholly trust. And it is just a simple act. So what is it that girls do? Practice kissing with each other so that they can be very proficient when they are with their significant others. There is nothing wrong with it, but it is something boys do not do but yet girls do. \n\nMaria and Tonya have been best of friends for several years. Compared to the other girls, they are Tomboys willing to take on any boy in any sport played at the school yard. The most popular sports in the school yard are handball, racketball, basketball (played on a lowered court where the basket is 6ft from the ground instead of 8ft), kickball and softball. They also play the girls' games of jump rope/Double Dutch, hopscotch and other games. But they were barely friends with the other girls as they were too nosey and demanding on who goes out with who, who is fucking who and daring each other to have sex with the boys on the block to see how well they perform and compare notes. Basically, except for a few girls that stayed at home all day, the girls who were outside were more like young sluts and hoes. One of the worst of them being Sabrina, Tonya's younger cousin, who would have sex with anyone and her depravation have became more and more increased over the years.\n\nJr.H.S. 45 is the local Junior High School of the neighborhood, serving 7th and 8th grades; aka. \"45\". The next local Junior High School is Jr.H.S. 99 at 99th street and First Avenue, almost a mile away. The standard school uniform for \"45\" is a Royal Blue skirt with a Sky Blue Polo Shirt for girls, along with a White T-Shirt with the school's logo on it, or a White Wool Turtle Neck Sweater as other options. Boys had the option of a White Polo Shirt or a White Long Sleeve Shirt with a Black or Navy Blue tie. The location of \"45\" is about a block away from the East River, which often sends a river cooled breeze towards the school area. Many of the older and more developed girls wore the Wool Turtle Neck Sweater well into the June because it kept them warm from the river's cooled breeze in the area and it hides that their nipples are erect from said cool breeze hitting them. Thus Maria and Tonya wore their sweaters almost to the end of school.\n\nBecause of her terrible home life, Tonya often goes home with Maria to her home to study and do their homework. On request Fernando drops by to give them some tutoring when needed. Both he and Alex are a grade above them, and Alex does not to help them, using the excuse that he has to go to work at the downtown supermarket as to not help him. Fernando works during the summer as a community pool life guard, making more money during the summer than Alex does working for the supermarket all year long. Thus Fernando is able to help the girls out when he can. But sometimes Alex takes a day or two off from work, causing problems for Tonya and Maria.\n\nThe year before Alex dated Tonya because he heard that she was an easy lay, only to be disappointed when she repeatedly denied him, telling him what he is doing is no way to treat a girl - any girl. In trying to force the issue with her (he tried to rape her), she left him with a bloody nose. He then began his prejudice tirade, professing how he \"a quote/unquote racially superior blonde haired blue eyed Aryan White Person\" would never go out with anyone lesser than himself, and that in dating Tonya he was only \"trying to infuse his White DNA into her\" and \"dating that ghetto bitch out of pity.\" Thus when they broke up, it was a very messy affair from his part and actions. Tonya only wanted to be left alone from the whole ordeal.\n\nThough both Maria and Tonya were fighters, the two girls were abused and raped by their brothers; with Alex doing such things to Maria. This in their abuse, they had a common thread that brought them closer together. It is for this reason, both Maria and Tonya can fight the other boys on the block but unable to fight their abusing brothers, who seem to attack them randomly without notice.\n\nDuring their study sessions, when he was home, Alex would interrupt them from doing their homework. But on most days when Alex was at work, and Fernando was not able to drop by to help them, they had a couple of hours of peaceful and private time to study in before Maria's parents would come in from work at around 5:30PM. Besides their studies in peace without Alex to bother them, they also have moments of Girl-Talk about boys. Though they have been sexually active with Fernando, their talk leads them to how to be romantic in the relationship they share with him.\n\n\"I know that you like him (Fernando) as much as I do, because, you know, we do it with him when we can... but what about, you know, kissing...?\" Maria begins their conversation.\n\n\"But we do kiss...\" Tonya tries to answer.\n\n\"Yes we do but there is more to it, right? There is more to kissing to just pressing lips together...\" Maria asks.\n\n\"Well, yeah.\" Tonya replies.\n\nMaria goes in between the mattresses of her bed and pulls out a porn magazine, turning through the pages until she finds a picture of a couple in an exaggerated tongue kiss where they lips were slightly separated and their tongues visibly tangled together. She points to the picture, saying \"That...\"\n\n\"Oh... that...\" Tonya replies, looking through the pages of the magazine even further, and even reading some of the passages for more details before giving the magazine back to Maria. \"I heard the girls in gym class talk about that.\"\n\n\"Well?\" Maria asks before putting the porn magazine back between the mattresses of her bed where she has it hiding.\n\n\"Well, I'm not saying that we can or should in that way but we could practice.\" Tonya replies.\n\n\"Practice?\" Maria asks.\n\n\"You know - we kiss each other like that. Not that I like you in that way, and we're not Lesbians, but like I heard some other girls in gym class say they do - to practice how to do it so when they do it with a guy, they know what to do.\" Tonya explains.\n\n\"I don't know...\" Maria says shyly.\n\nTonya steps up to her, putting her hand behind Maria and pulling her closer. With their noses within millimeters from each other, they stare into each other's eyes for a moment.\n\nTonya asks her, \"We're best friends, right?\"\n\n\"Yeah, we are.\" Maria replies.\n\n\"No one needs to know other maybe Fernando, right?\" Tonya asks.\n\n\"It's just us two...\" Maria replies.\n\n\"Then like in that magazine, I'm going to close my eyes, then put my lips on yours, open my mouth slightly and push my tongue forward into your mouth and you do the same and our tongues will twirl around each other between our lips while we breathe through our noses...\" Tonya explains.\n\nMaria nods.\n\nTonya pulls Maria closer to her before tilting her head to the side slightly, and leaning in to put her lips against hers. Maria tenses up for a moment in trying to reciprocate. But try she does, opening her lips slightly along with Tonya's and both their tongues reach other and touch each other. They both tense up for a second and force themselves to relax. As they relax their tongues begin twirling about each other.\n\nAt best it was a nervous first tongue kiss between them, but it was not as bad as one would think. Feelings between them well up from deep inside on how they feel about each other increasing on levels of trust and respect. Their level of friendship goes up another notch but it was very hard and tall notch to climb. It lasts for a couple of minutes between them before they separate from each other.\n\nThey stare into each other's eyes while trying to catch their breath. They both softly say \"Wow...\"\n\n\"Too much...?\" Tonya asks first.\n\n\"Yeah. You too?\" Maria replies and asks.\n\n\"I was... expecting it to be... a lot. But that... was more than... I expected.\" Tonya replies as she catches her breath.\n\n\"Then... what now?\" Maria asks.\n\n\"Nothing.\" Tonya replies.\n\nMaria lets out a pent up sigh.\n\nTonya then asks, \"What about we keep practicing on kissing?\"\n\n\"Yeah, we can...\" Maria replies, \"But not today. I have to get used to what we did.\"\n\n\"Yeah, me too.\" Tonya throws in.", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "It is something some teen girls do, not all of them but some. And it is something not done due to sexual tension or emotional attraction of the other but it is something they do with someone they are close to and can wholly trust. And it is just a simple act. So what is it that girls do? Practice kissing with each other so that they can be very proficient when they are with their significant others. There is nothing wrong with it, but it is something boys do not do but yet girls do.

Maria and Tonya have been best of friends for several years. Compared to the other girls, they are Tomboys willing to take on any boy in any sport played at the school yard. The most popular sports in the school yard are handball, racketball, basketball (played on a lowered court where the basket is 6ft from the ground instead of 8ft), kickball and softball. They also play the girls' games of jump rope/Double Dutch, hopscotch and other games. But they were barely friends with the other girls as they were too nosey and demanding on who goes out with who, who is fucking who and daring each other to have sex with the boys on the block to see how well they perform and compare notes. Basically, except for a few girls that stayed at home all day, the girls who were outside were more like young sluts and hoes. One of the worst of them being Sabrina, Tonya's younger cousin, who would have sex with anyone and her depravation have became more and more increased over the years.

Jr.H.S. 45 is the local Junior High School of the neighborhood, serving 7th and 8th grades; aka. "45". The next local Junior High School is Jr.H.S. 99 at 99th street and First Avenue, almost a mile away. The standard school uniform for "45" is a Royal Blue skirt with a Sky Blue Polo Shirt for girls, along with a White T-Shirt with the school's logo on it, or a White Wool Turtle Neck Sweater as other options. Boys had the option of a White Polo Shirt or a White Long Sleeve Shirt with a Black or Navy Blue tie. The location of "45" is about a block away from the East River, which often sends a river cooled breeze towards the school area. Many of the older and more developed girls wore the Wool Turtle Neck Sweater well into the June because it kept them warm from the river's cooled breeze in the area and it hides that their nipples are erect from said cool breeze hitting them. Thus Maria and Tonya wore their sweaters almost to the end of school.

Because of her terrible home life, Tonya often goes home with Maria to her home to study and do their homework. On request Fernando drops by to give them some tutoring when needed. Both he and Alex are a grade above them, and Alex does not to help them, using the excuse that he has to go to work at the downtown supermarket as to not help him. Fernando works during the summer as a community pool life guard, making more money during the summer than Alex does working for the supermarket all year long. Thus Fernando is able to help the girls out when he can. But sometimes Alex takes a day or two off from work, causing problems for Tonya and Maria.

The year before Alex dated Tonya because he heard that she was an easy lay, only to be disappointed when she repeatedly denied him, telling him what he is doing is no way to treat a girl - any girl. In trying to force the issue with her (he tried to rape her), she left him with a bloody nose. He then began his prejudice tirade, professing how he "a quote/unquote racially superior blonde haired blue eyed Aryan White Person" would never go out with anyone lesser than himself, and that in dating Tonya he was only "trying to infuse his White DNA into her" and "dating that ghetto bitch out of pity." Thus when they broke up, it was a very messy affair from his part and actions. Tonya only wanted to be left alone from the whole ordeal.

Though both Maria and Tonya were fighters, the two girls were abused and raped by their brothers; with Alex doing such things to Maria. This in their abuse, they had a common thread that brought them closer together. It is for this reason, both Maria and Tonya can fight the other boys on the block but unable to fight their abusing brothers, who seem to attack them randomly without notice.

During their study sessions, when he was home, Alex would interrupt them from doing their homework. But on most days when Alex was at work, and Fernando was not able to drop by to help them, they had a couple of hours of peaceful and private time to study in before Maria's parents would come in from work at around 5:30PM. Besides their studies in peace without Alex to bother them, they also have moments of Girl-Talk about boys. Though they have been sexually active with Fernando, their talk leads them to how to be romantic in the relationship they share with him.

"I know that you like him (Fernando) as much as I do, because, you know, we do it with him when we can... but what about, you know, kissing...?" Maria begins their conversation.

"But we do kiss..." Tonya tries to answer.

"Yes we do but there is more to it, right? There is more to kissing to just pressing lips together..." Maria asks.

"Well, yeah." Tonya replies.

Maria goes in between the mattresses of her bed and pulls out a porn magazine, turning through the pages until she finds a picture of a couple in an exaggerated tongue kiss where they lips were slightly separated and their tongues visibly tangled together. She points to the picture, saying "That..."

"Oh... that..." Tonya replies, looking through the pages of the magazine even further, and even reading some of the passages for more details before giving the magazine back to Maria. "I heard the girls in gym class talk about that."

"Well?" Maria asks before putting the porn magazine back between the mattresses of her bed where she has it hiding.

"Well, I'm not saying that we can or should in that way but we could practice." Tonya replies.

"Practice?" Maria asks.

"You know - we kiss each other like that. Not that I like you in that way, and we're not Lesbians, but like I heard some other girls in gym class say they do - to practice how to do it so when they do it with a guy, they know what to do." Tonya explains.

"I don't know..." Maria says shyly.

Tonya steps up to her, putting her hand behind Maria and pulling her closer. With their noses within millimeters from each other, they stare into each other's eyes for a moment.

Tonya asks her, "We're best friends, right?"

"Yeah, we are." Maria replies.

"No one needs to know other maybe Fernando, right?" Tonya asks.

"It's just us two..." Maria replies.

"Then like in that magazine, I'm going to close my eyes, then put my lips on yours, open my mouth slightly and push my tongue forward into your mouth and you do the same and our tongues will twirl around each other between our lips while we breathe through our noses..." Tonya explains.

Maria nods.

Tonya pulls Maria closer to her before tilting her head to the side slightly, and leaning in to put her lips against hers. Maria tenses up for a moment in trying to reciprocate. But try she does, opening her lips slightly along with Tonya's and both their tongues reach other and touch each other. They both tense up for a second and force themselves to relax. As they relax their tongues begin twirling about each other.

At best it was a nervous first tongue kiss between them, but it was not as bad as one would think. Feelings between them well up from deep inside on how they feel about each other increasing on levels of trust and respect. Their level of friendship goes up another notch but it was very hard and tall notch to climb. It lasts for a couple of minutes between them before they separate from each other.

They stare into each other's eyes while trying to catch their breath. They both softly say "Wow..."

"Too much...?" Tonya asks first.

"Yeah. You too?" Maria replies and asks.

"I was... expecting it to be... a lot. But that... was more than... I expected." Tonya replies as she catches her breath.

"Then... what now?" Maria asks.

"Nothing." Tonya replies.

Maria lets out a pent up sigh.

Tonya then asks, "What about we keep practicing on kissing?"

"Yeah, we can..." Maria replies, "But not today. I have to get used to what we did."

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