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“Alfie” springer is a 15 year old boy in the 10th grade, who crushes on a girl named Debbie , a tomboy poodle who’s the same age. Alfie soon later learns that true love comes in many ways. Even when you’re dead and in death.\n\nReminder: I just write stories on top of my head, I just come up with whatever I think of. Any criticism is accepted as long if it isn’t stupid.\n\nPs, much love ploopys <3 \nCorny","description_bbcode_parsed":"Alfred “Alfie” springer is a 15 year old boy in the 10th grade, who crushes on a girl named Debbie , a tomboy poodle who’s the same age. Alfie soon later learns that true love comes in many ways. Even when you’re dead and in death.

Reminder: I just write stories on top of my head, I just come up with whatever I think of. Any criticism is accepted as long if it isn’t stupid.

Ps, much love ploopys <3
Corny","writing":"Part 1: a terrible fate \n\nA young brown and white English springer is running around in a field, he was aimlessly running around the field not knowing where he’s was going. That’s when he saw a poodle girl in a dress, lying on her side waiting for him. He started to run towards the girl, excited to see his true love. He stopped in awe in the girl’s beauty.\n\n“O-Oh h-hey”, the young boy said, stuttering over his words.\n\n“Hey”, the young girl responded back, she had a seductive look in her eyes and had a seductive tone of voice.\n\n“You’re very pretty”, the boy said, he was getting nervous just by looking at her.\n\n“Thank you, you’re quite the handsome one yourself~” she gave a slight giggle and started to get close to him.\n\n“Y-you r-r-really t-think so heh heh…” he nervously chuckled, his face was getting ever more bright red.\n\n“How about a kiss?~” the girl said, getting even closer.\n\n“A-A kiss?” He stuttered, as he could feel his his heart beating faster and faster to the point it could burst out of his chest.\n\n“Yes, kiss me~” she closes her eyes as she starts to put her lips close to his\n\n“Oh Debbie”\n\n“Oh Alfie” \n\n“Debbie…”\n\n“Alfie…”\n\n“Alfie!”\n\nAlfie became alert and straightened up at his desk, finding himself back in his usual class.\n\n“Wha? Huh? Uh… I-I’m awake!”\n\n“I know that Alfie, but you’ve been daydreaming in my class. again. His teacher said, who was slick greyhound, named mrs. Johnson, looked at him with concerned look while tapping her claw on his desk. “No daydreaming in my class, pay attention, I don’t want to write a letter home to your parents.”\n\n“Y-yes ma’am”\n\n“So, what was the year that the U.S. got its freedom?”\n\n“Uhhh… 1776?”\n\n“Good, at least you’re somewhat paying attention” she said, as she returned to the whiteboard, pointing at the pictures of George Washington. \n\n“Now as I was saying, the Declaration of Independence gave all men the rights and the freedom to-“\n\nArtie looked down at his notebook and saw the little sketches he drew of him and Debbie, he quickly scribbled over them without hesitation, as he flipped to the next page.\n\nAll of a sudden the bell rang, and another school day was finished, Alfie sat on the front steps with his backpack and looked down the road waiting for his dad to arrive. That’s when a wiener dog with glasses on walked up and sat beside him, it was Cody, one of Alfie’s closest friends since elementary. “Hey Alf, what’s going on?” He asked. \n\n“Oh… nothing…” Alfie said in a blank tone.\n\n“Is it about that Debbie girl again?” \n\n“What? No!” Alfie was desperately trying to hide the fact that he has a crush on the poodle girl, but Cody was catching on.\n\n“Alf.. if you like her that much, just ask her out, the worst she can say is no.”\n\n“I don’t know Cody.. what IF she says no?”\n\n“Well… Then that just means you tried, and there’s plenty of fish in the sea” Cody said in a upbeat tone, trying cheer up his dear friend\n\nThe sound of a car horn honking was heard as Alfie’s dad called out his name. “Alfie! Time to go!”.“Well… I’ll see you later” Alfie gave out a slight smile and then he and Cody did their signature handshake. Meanwhile at home, Alfie was having dinner with his parents, along with his two brothers and two sisters. “So Alfie? How was school today?” Dad asked. “Oh… today was okay I guess…” before Alfie could say anything else, until one of his sisters jokingly teased, “Alfie’s got a girlfriend!” She yelled out.\n\n“W-what!? No I don’t!” \n \n“Hey it’s okay son, if theres a girl you like, you tell us.” \n\n“Ugh… no dad!”\n\n“Your fathers right sweetie, we have crushes from time to time, after all, that is how I met your father~”\n\n“Oh you~”\n\nHaving enough of what’s happening, Alfie let out a slight scoff and started to go his room. \n\n“I’ll go talk to him…”\n\nAlfie closes the door and later on lands face first in his bed, that when his mom knocked on the door and let herself in, and sit beside him on his bed.\n\n“Alfie.. what’s wrong?” She gently rubs his back and was speaking to him in a soft tone.\n\n“Nothings wrong…” \n\n“Someone is wrong Alfie, if there’s something bothering you, just tell me”\n\nAlfie began to sit up, and leaned beside his mother \n\n“It’s not somethings wrong mom it’s… just that I’m scared to express my feelings...”\n\n“Oh sweetie, we all feel like that sometimes, it’s a part of life, and we just have to except that” \n\n“But what if I do express my feelings, and she ends up saying no? Or ends up with someone else?”\n\n“It’s all a part of life sweetheart, and Remember true love comes in many ways, even death.”\n\n“Yeah, you’re probably right… thanks mom”\n\n“No problem Alfie bear~” she gives him a goodnight kiss on the cheek, and got up and got ready to get the others ready for bed\n\n“Now get ready read for bed, you got school tomorrow” \n\n“Yes mom” Alfie started to get ready tucking himself in the covers and turning off his lamp.\n\nThe next morning came and Alfie was heading downstairs whole the others were getting ready for school and eating breakfast \n\n“Good morning sport! Come join us for breakfast!” \n\n“Good morning sweetie~, come eat some breakfast” \n\nAlfie went down to the table, and sat in his seat while his mother served him breakfast.\n\n“Don’t forget to brush your teeth before you guys leave ok!”\n\n“Yes mom!”\n\nAs the kids brushed their they got their backpacks and were all ready for school, along with Alfie\n\n“Remember Alfie, be careful and watch out for strangers ok”\n\n“Ok mom…”\n\nAlfie got his skateboard, and began to make his way to school. On the way he said hi to next door neighbors and kept making his way towards the schoolhouse. He was almost at the school until a weird stranger come along and stopped him. “Psst, hey kid” Alfie stopped in his tracks to look around to see who was talking to him, but he couldn’t see anybody. “Over here kid” the stranger said, Alfie looked to his left and saw the strange man in a dark alleyway. “Hello… is anyone there?”. “YEsss over HErrrre” Alfie started to get closer to the alleyway, then the strange man snatched him up. “Well well, what do we have here?” The man said, observing Alfie’s small posture. “W-who are you? What do you want from me?” Alfie was getting scared and untrustworthy of the man, Trying to get away. “Don’t be afraid, you can trust me”\n\nAlfie knew that the guy couldn’t be trusted, and guickly had to find a way to get away. Without hesitation, Alfie made a swift getaway. That’s when something Terrible happened..\n\nSkrrrt *CRASH!* \n\nOut of nowhere, Alfie gets hit by car moving at high speeds. Everything was black until a bright light shined upon him.\n\n“Wha? Where am I?” Alfie aimlessly looked around until he heard a soft spoken voice\n\n“You’re in heaven my child”\n\nAn angel like women with a beautiful curvy figure and busty rack could be seen gilding down towards him.\n\nUpon seeing her, he immediately blushed and was lost in awe of the beauty of the women, he shook his head to get him out of such thought and to bring him back to reality. “I see you met a terrible fate haven’t you?… my name Annabell”, “wha? … huh?”. Alfie was confused, what did she mean by terrible fate? “Oh.. I see you haven’t noticed that you died…”\n\n“Died?!” Alfie couldn’t believe it… he couldn’t be dead! Not on all days like this! “I’m d-dead… I cant be dead! I can’t be!” \n\n“Oh, but it is true, you sadly lost your life” annabell said, Alfie still couldn’t be believe it, first he’s too scared to talk to his crush, and now he’s dead? What next?\n\nPart 2: In death \n\n“Um… is there a way you can bring me back to life?” Alfie asked, Annabelle looked at him with concern. “You see… there’s this girl that I like at my school, and I was wondering that you can bring back me to earth?”\n\nAnnabelle thought for a moment, then gave him a slight answer. “Hmm, I’ll give you one whole week to confess to this girl that you like, do that and you’ll be back alive on earth, if you don’t however, you’ll be sent back here to heaven”. “One week… got it” Alfie nodded, accepting the deal.\n\n“Good” with the snap of her fingers, Alfie was being sent back to earth. “Remember Alfie! One week!”\n\nAlfie was back on earth at his school, and considering that the weekend already pasted and it was already Monday, he knew he was already running out of time. “How am I going do this in one week?” He thought to himself.\n\nWe cut to Alfie and his classmates in class, and it was few minutes before lunch, and all Alfie had to do was confess to his crush. “Cmon Alfie you can do this”. The lunch bell rings, and everyone started to head to lunch. Coby and was sitting with each other at lunch. “Hey alf… what’s wrong?” Cody asked, “oh nothing… you see… I’m dead..” Cody’s face was filled with shock. “YOU'RE DEAD!” He yelled out, the lunchroom went quiet as everyone Heard him and turned towards his direction. “Hey keep it down will ya?” Alfie responded, “well yeah I’m dead… well not dead dead…” Alfie tried to explain the best he could, “I only have one week to confess to Debbie, and if I confess ill be back alive on earth, if I don’t… well… I’ll be sent back to heaven…”\n\nCody had a determined and concerned look,eager to help his friend. “Okay, how about I’ll help you, and plus it’s Monday, which you have plenty of time… hopefully”. Alfie later responded, “thanks Coby… but it’s already Monday… which means I only have 4 days left..”. All of a sudden Alfie heard a voice that only he could hear, “ Alfie! Alfie!” Alfie looked around, wondering where the voice was coming from. “Down here!” Alfie looked down at his milk carton. It was Annabelle, and she was talking to him through the milk carton.\n\n“Alfie! You’re already running out time!” \n\n“You must confess to your love in 4 days, or you’ll back in heaven! You must hurry!”, “I know… but I don’t know If I have that much Time!” Alfie exclaimed back, “remember Alfie 4 days!” Annabelle started to disappear from the carton. “Who are talking to?” Coby asked, “oh… no one…” Alfie responded.\n\nPart 3: running out of time\n\nAnother day had passed, and Alfie was lying in bed, he knew if he didn’t confess to Debbie,he’ll be back in heaven and wouldn’t be able to see her again. Trying to get his mind off it, he closed his eyes as he got ready to get some sleep.\n\nIt was a new day, and he only had 3 days left. Either he will finally confess his feelings to Debbie, or he’ll be back In heaven and will never be able to see her again. Alfie was on his way to class until she came. “Hey Alfie” she called out, “o-oh hey Debbie…” Alfie began to blush, as his face was turning red as a tomato. “So, what you wanna do after school today?” Debbie asked, “o-oh um…” he was getting nervous and was turning even more red. “W-we can go over to the local arcade.. I-I-if that’s okay with you…”, “sure see ya there!~” she gave him a kiss on the cheek, and began walking to her class. \n\n“See ya after school~” she said, Alfie was as red as a beet and was frozen in shock like a deer in headlights. “Alf! Alf!” Coby brought Alfie back to reality and got his attention, “cmon let’s get to class!” Coby exclaimed, “o-oh yeah right”.\n\nMeanwhile, alfie was in class, until that’s when Annabelle was talking to him as a pencil sketch in his notebook. “Alfie! You only have 3 days left! You don’t have much time! You have to hurry!”. “Alfie, is everything alright?” Mrs.johnson asked, “o-oh everything’s okay mrs.johnson” alfie replied back. Mrs. Johnson turned her attention back to the whiteboard and went back to teaching.\n\nThe school bell rang, and once again another day was completed. We cut to Alfie and Debbie at the arcade playing all the games they could play, after that, they were eating pizza and drinking soft drinks. “Hey Alfie, is there anything that you always wanted to tell me?” Debbie asked, Alfie knew this was now or never, either that he confess right now, or he’ll blow it entirely. “D-Debbie I-I” before he could say anything both. Debbie and Alfie’s dad came to pick them up. Not to mention it started to rain \n\n“Debbie! Let’s go!”\n\n“Cmon sport! Time to go!”\n\n“Well… guess I’ll see you later” she said, “yeah… see ya…” Annabelle was in a puddle, shaking her head in disappointment. \n\nPart 4: love on the line! Time is almost out!\n\nAlfie only had 2 days left, and knew that his time was almost up, if Alfie doesn’t confess his ove within two days, he’ll be back in heaven like Annabelle said. “I’m running out of time, i need to confess to her fast!” Alfie thought to himself. We cut to to Alfie and the other students walking in the hallway, and it was a few minutes before class started, that when Debbie walked up to him. “Hey Alife, we had great time at the arcade yesterday, was what were you about to tell me yesterday!”. “O-oh u-um” Alfie began to studder over his words, and was sweating nervously, it was now or never! He’ll either tell her right now, or he’ll slip up and fail. “W-w-well y-y-y-you see Debbie…. Um I-i l-lo-“. The school bell rang, and it was time for class.\n\n“Psst Artie!” Annabelle can be heard from Alfie’s backpack. “Wha? Annabelle?” Annabelle was talking to Artie, as one of pencil sketches in his notebook. “You’re only have two days left Artie! You must confess your love to the girl, or else it’ll be too late! You until tomorrow by sundown!”. “Tomorrow, sundown! Got it!” Alfie exclaimed. Hours past and another day of school was done, and all Alfie had was tomorrow by sundown”\n\nAlfie’s final day began, it was now or never. Even if he fails, and ends up back in heaven, all it is to say is that at least he tried. All he had was until sundown and it was now or never.\n\n“Alfie, today if your final day, you have until sundown this is your final chance”\n\nHe prepared for this moment, as he sat in the classroom waiting for the bell to ring. Hours passed, and the bell rung as another school day was over and that its was Alfie’s chance. The sun was going down, and this was his make or break or break moment.\n\n‘Debbie! Debbie!”\n\n“Huh? Alfie? What is it”\n\n“I-I um… have something to tell you”\n\nDebbie looked at Alfie in concern, wondering what he’s about to say.\n\n“Y-You see… I’m actually dead…”\n\n“Dead!? What do you mean?”\n\n“ I-I mean…”\n\nAnnabelle talked to him in a telepathic way\n\n“Hurry Alfie! You don’t have much time!”\n\n“W-what I meant to say is… that even though I’m dead… I-I love you”\n\nThe poodle girl lit up in awe as she heard the boys word\n\n“Oh Alfie, I love you too~”\n\nAs the sun went down, the two kissed as a glimmer of light came down to Alfie, he was back on earth, but was going back to heaven.\n\nIn the end he finally managed to confess his love, and the story goes, true love com3s in many ways even in death.\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n","writing_bbcode_parsed":"Part 1: a terrible fate

A young brown and white English springer is running around in a field, he was aimlessly running around the field not knowing where he’s was going. That’s when he saw a poodle girl in a dress, lying on her side waiting for him. He started to run towards the girl, excited to see his true love. He stopped in awe in the girl’s beauty.

“O-Oh h-hey”, the young boy said, stuttering over his words.

“Hey”, the young girl responded back, she had a seductive look in her eyes and had a seductive tone of voice.

“You’re very pretty”, the boy said, he was getting nervous just by looking at her.

“Thank you, you’re quite the handsome one yourself~” she gave a slight giggle and started to get close to him.

“Y-you r-r-really t-think so heh heh…” he nervously chuckled, his face was getting ever more bright red.

“How about a kiss?~” the girl said, getting even closer.

“A-A kiss?” He stuttered, as he could feel his his heart beating faster and faster to the point it could burst out of his chest.

“Yes, kiss me~” she closes her eyes as she starts to put her lips close to his

“Oh Debbie”

“Oh Alfie”

“Debbie…”

“Alfie…”

“Alfie!”

Alfie became alert and straightened up at his desk, finding himself back in his usual class.

“Wha? Huh? Uh… I-I’m awake!”

“I know that Alfie, but you’ve been daydreaming in my class. again. His teacher said, who was slick greyhound, named mrs. Johnson, looked at him with concerned look while tapping her claw on his desk. “No daydreaming in my class, pay attention, I don’t want to write a letter home to your parents.”

“Y-yes ma’am”

“So, what was the year that the U.S. got its freedom?”

“Uhhh… 1776?”

“Good, at least you’re somewhat paying attention” she said, as she returned to the whiteboard, pointing at the pictures of George Washington.

“Now as I was saying, the Declaration of Independence gave all men the rights and the freedom to-“

Artie looked down at his notebook and saw the little sketches he drew of him and Debbie, he quickly scribbled over them without hesitation, as he flipped to the next page.

All of a sudden the bell rang, and another school day was finished, Alfie sat on the front steps with his backpack and looked down the road waiting for his dad to arrive. That’s when a wiener dog with glasses on walked up and sat beside him, it was Cody, one of Alfie’s closest friends since elementary. “Hey Alf, what’s going on?” He asked.

“Oh… nothing…” Alfie said in a blank tone.

“Is it about that Debbie girl again?”

“What? No!” Alfie was desperately trying to hide the fact that he has a crush on the poodle girl, but Cody was catching on.

“Alf.. if you like her that much, just ask her out, the worst she can say is no.”

“I don’t know Cody.. what IF she says no?”

“Well… Then that just means you tried, and there’s plenty of fish in the sea” Cody said in a upbeat tone, trying cheer up his dear friend

The sound of a car horn honking was heard as Alfie’s dad called out his name. “Alfie! Time to go!”.“Well… I’ll see you later” Alfie gave out a slight smile and then he and Cody did their signature handshake. Meanwhile at home, Alfie was having dinner with his parents, along with his two brothers and two sisters. “So Alfie? How was school today?” Dad asked. “Oh… today was okay I guess…” before Alfie could say anything else, until one of his sisters jokingly teased, “Alfie’s got a girlfriend!” She yelled out.

“W-what!? No I don’t!”
  
“Hey it’s okay son, if theres a girl you like, you tell us.”

“Ugh… no dad!”

“Your fathers right sweetie, we have crushes from time to time, after all, that is how I met your father~”

“Oh you~”

Having enough of what’s happening, Alfie let out a slight scoff and started to go his room.

“I’ll go talk to him…”

Alfie closes the door and later on lands face first in his bed, that when his mom knocked on the door and let herself in, and sit beside him on his bed.

“Alfie.. what’s wrong?” She gently rubs his back and was speaking to him in a soft tone.

“Nothings wrong…”

“Someone is wrong Alfie, if there’s something bothering you, just tell me”

Alfie began to sit up, and leaned beside his mother

“It’s not somethings wrong mom it’s… just that I’m scared to express my feelings...”

“Oh sweetie, we all feel like that sometimes, it’s a part of life, and we just have to except that”

“But what if I do express my feelings, and she ends up saying no? Or ends up with someone else?”

“It’s all a part of life sweetheart, and Remember true love comes in many ways, even death.”

“Yeah, you’re probably right… thanks mom”

“No problem Alfie bear~” she gives him a goodnight kiss on the cheek, and got up and got ready to get the others ready for bed

“Now get ready read for bed, you got school tomorrow”

“Yes mom” Alfie started to get ready tucking himself in the covers and turning off his lamp.

The next morning came and Alfie was heading downstairs whole the others were getting ready for school and eating breakfast

“Good morning sport! Come join us for breakfast!”

“Good morning sweetie~, come eat some breakfast”

Alfie went down to the table, and sat in his seat while his mother served him breakfast.

“Don’t forget to brush your teeth before you guys leave ok!”

“Yes mom!”

As the kids brushed their they got their backpacks and were all ready for school, along with Alfie

“Remember Alfie, be careful and watch out for strangers ok”

“Ok mom…”

Alfie got his skateboard, and began to make his way to school. On the way he said hi to next door neighbors and kept making his way towards the schoolhouse. He was almost at the school until a weird stranger come along and stopped him. “Psst, hey kid” Alfie stopped in his tracks to look around to see who was talking to him, but he couldn’t see anybody. “Over here kid” the stranger said, Alfie looked to his left and saw the strange man in a dark alleyway. “Hello… is anyone there?”. “YEsss over HErrrre” Alfie started to get closer to the alleyway, then the strange man snatched him up. “Well well, what do we have here?” The man said, observing Alfie’s small posture. “W-who are you? What do you want from me?” Alfie was getting scared and untrustworthy of the man, Trying to get away. “Don’t be afraid, you can trust me”

Alfie knew that the guy couldn’t be trusted, and guickly had to find a way to get away. Without hesitation, Alfie made a swift getaway. That’s when something Terrible happened..

Skrrrt *CRASH!*

Out of nowhere, Alfie gets hit by car moving at high speeds. Everything was black until a bright light shined upon him.

“Wha? Where am I?” Alfie aimlessly looked around until he heard a soft spoken voice

“You’re in heaven my child”

An angel like women with a beautiful curvy figure and busty rack could be seen gilding down towards him.

Upon seeing her, he immediately blushed and was lost in awe of the beauty of the women, he shook his head to get him out of such thought and to bring him back to reality. “I see you met a terrible fate haven’t you?… my name Annabell”, “wha? … huh?”. Alfie was confused, what did she mean by terrible fate? “Oh.. I see you haven’t noticed that you died…”

“Died?!” Alfie couldn’t believe it… he couldn’t be dead! Not on all days like this! “I’m d-dead… I cant be dead! I can’t be!”

“Oh, but it is true, you sadly lost your life” annabell said, Alfie still couldn’t be believe it, first he’s too scared to talk to his crush, and now he’s dead? What next?

Part 2: In death

“Um… is there a way you can bring me back to life?” Alfie asked, Annabelle looked at him with concern. “You see… there’s this girl that I like at my school, and I was wondering that you can bring back me to earth?”

Annabelle thought for a moment, then gave him a slight answer. “Hmm, I’ll give you one whole week to confess to this girl that you like, do that and you’ll be back alive on earth, if you don’t however, you’ll be sent back here to heaven”. “One week… got it” Alfie nodded, accepting the deal.

“Good”  with the snap of her fingers, Alfie was being sent back to earth. “Remember Alfie! One week!”

Alfie was back on earth at his school, and considering that the weekend already pasted and it was already Monday, he knew he was already running out of time. “How am I going do this in one week?” He thought to himself.

We cut to Alfie and his classmates in class, and it was few minutes before lunch, and all Alfie had to do was confess to his crush. “Cmon Alfie you can do this”. The lunch bell rings, and everyone started to head to lunch. Coby and was sitting with each other at lunch. “Hey alf… what’s wrong?” Cody asked, “oh nothing… you see… I’m dead..” Cody’s face was filled with shock. “YOU'RE DEAD!” He yelled out, the lunchroom went quiet as everyone Heard him and turned towards his direction. “Hey keep it down will ya?” Alfie responded, “well yeah I’m dead… well not dead dead…” Alfie tried to explain the best he could, “I only have one week to confess to Debbie, and if I confess ill be back alive on earth, if I don’t… well… I’ll be sent back to heaven…”

Cody had a determined and concerned look,eager to help his friend. “Okay, how about I’ll help you, and plus it’s Monday, which you have plenty of time… hopefully”. Alfie later responded, “thanks Coby… but it’s already Monday… which means I only have 4 days left..”. All of a sudden Alfie heard a voice that only he could hear, “ Alfie! Alfie!” Alfie looked around, wondering where the voice was coming from. “Down here!” Alfie looked down at his milk carton. It was Annabelle, and she was talking to him through the milk carton.

“Alfie! You’re already running out time!”

“You must confess to your love in 4 days, or you’ll back in heaven! You must hurry!”, “I know… but I don’t know If I have that much Time!” Alfie exclaimed back, “remember Alfie 4 days!” Annabelle started to disappear from the carton. “Who are talking to?” Coby asked, “oh… no one…” Alfie responded.

Part 3: running out of time

Another day had passed, and Alfie was lying in bed, he knew if he didn’t confess to Debbie,he’ll be back in heaven and wouldn’t be able to see her again. Trying to get his mind off it, he closed his eyes as he got ready to get some sleep.

It was a new day, and he only had 3 days left. Either he will finally confess his feelings to Debbie, or he’ll be back In heaven and will never be able to see her again. Alfie was on his way to class until she came. “Hey Alfie” she called out, “o-oh hey Debbie…” Alfie began to blush, as his face was turning red as a tomato. “So, what you wanna do after school today?” Debbie asked, “o-oh um…” he was getting nervous and was turning even more red. “W-we can go over to the local arcade.. I-I-if that’s okay with you…”, “sure see ya there!~” she gave him a kiss on the cheek, and began walking to her class.

“See ya after school~” she said, Alfie was as red as a beet and was frozen in shock like a deer in headlights. “Alf! Alf!” Coby brought Alfie back to reality and got his attention, “cmon let’s get to class!” Coby exclaimed, “o-oh yeah right”.

Meanwhile, alfie was in class, until that’s when Annabelle was talking to him as a pencil sketch in his notebook. “Alfie! You only have 3 days left! You don’t have much time! You have to hurry!”. “Alfie, is everything alright?” Mrs.johnson asked, “o-oh everything’s okay mrs.johnson” alfie replied back. Mrs. Johnson turned her attention back to the whiteboard and went back to teaching.

The school bell rang, and once again another day was completed. We cut to Alfie and Debbie at the arcade playing all the games they could play, after that, they were eating pizza and drinking soft drinks. “Hey Alfie, is there anything that you always wanted to tell me?” Debbie asked, Alfie knew this was now or never, either that he confess right now, or he’ll blow it entirely. “D-Debbie I-I” before he could say anything both. Debbie and Alfie’s dad came to pick them up. Not to mention it started to rain

“Debbie! Let’s go!”

“Cmon sport! Time to go!”

“Well… guess I’ll see you later” she said, “yeah… see ya…” Annabelle was in a puddle, shaking her head in disappointment.

Part 4: love on the line! Time is almost out!

Alfie only had 2 days left, and knew that his time was almost up, if Alfie doesn’t confess his ove within two days, he’ll be back in heaven like Annabelle said. “I’m running out of time, i need to confess to her fast!” Alfie thought to himself. We cut to to Alfie and the other students walking in the hallway, and it was a few minutes before class started, that when Debbie walked up to him. “Hey Alife, we had great time at the arcade yesterday, was what were you about to tell me yesterday!”. “O-oh u-um” Alfie began to studder over his words, and was sweating nervously, it was now or never! He’ll either tell her right now, or he’ll slip up and fail. “W-w-well y-y-y-you see Debbie…. Um I-i l-lo-“. The school bell rang, and it was time for class.

“Psst Artie!” Annabelle can be heard from Alfie’s backpack. “Wha? Annabelle?” Annabelle was talking to Artie, as one of pencil sketches in his notebook. “You’re only have two days left Artie! You must confess your love to the girl, or else it’ll be too late! You until tomorrow by sundown!”. “Tomorrow, sundown! Got it!” Alfie exclaimed. Hours past and another day of school was done, and all Alfie had was tomorrow by sundown”

Alfie’s final day began, it was now or never. Even if he fails, and ends up back in heaven, all it is to say is that at least he tried. All he had was until sundown and it was now or never.

“Alfie, today if your final day, you have until sundown this is your final chance”

He prepared for this moment, as he sat in the classroom waiting for the bell to ring. Hours passed, and the bell rung as another school day was over and that its was Alfie’s chance. The sun was going down, and this was his make or break or break moment.

‘Debbie! Debbie!”

“Huh? Alfie? What is it”

“I-I um… have something to tell you”

Debbie looked at Alfie in concern, wondering what he’s about to say.

“Y-You see… I’m actually dead…”

“Dead!? What do you mean?”

“ I-I mean…”

Annabelle talked to him in a telepathic way

“Hurry Alfie! You don’t have much time!”

“W-what I meant to say is… that even though I’m dead… I-I love you”

The poodle girl lit up in awe as she heard the boys word

“Oh Alfie, I love you too~”

As the sun went down, the two kissed as a glimmer of light came down to Alfie, he was back on earth, but was going back to heaven.

In the end he finally managed to confess his love, and the story goes, true love com3s in many ways even in death.















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